communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 1 communication across borders: translation & interpreting www.jhkpress.com volume 01, issue 01, issn: 2766-791x identity and cultural resistance: a case study of fansubbing from a cross-cultural communication perspective xiaowei zou1 wuhan, china xiaowei2639@126.com abstract: in this study, a chinese fansub group qaf was selected as the research object, and the online observation method was adopted to establish a long-term trusting relationship with the fansub group members. the researcher observed the activities of members in the group, and conducted in-depth interviews with group members to study how they construct their own identity in a virtual community, and how the textual reproduction behavior in fan culture context reflects the characteristics of “affective play”. the research shows that the concept of “affective play” is embodied in the textual reproduction process of the members of the fansub group, and the emotional factor is an important factor that affects the textual reproduction behavior of the members. keywords: fansub group, affective play, identity 1. introduction a fansub group is a community group that adds subtitles in their native language to audio-visual works and publishes them on file-sharing websites free of charge. as a new phenomenon of the subculture, the fansub group provides its members with a lifestyle different from the dominant culture and orthodox culture. as an intellectual group, the fansub group reconstructs its understanding and criticism of the world through deconstructing the video clip. they try to reconcile the contradictions between social life and media environment through their strength. their appearance has become an opportunity for the audience to reject the strong discourse symbols of mainstream media and establish self-identity to some extent. the fansub group embodies the most fundamental characteristics of the internet, bearing the selfless and volunteering mentality, promoting a spirit of freedom, openness and sharing, and bringing a new style of sub-culture. this research explores the concepts of identity and affective play through a case study of the chinese gay fansub group qaf. 1the author’s contact information in chinese(作者): 邹晓威 http://www.jhkpress.com/ communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 2 2. an interview with the group leader “queer as folk fansub group” (qaf) is a chinese fansub group specializing in gaythemed film and television translation. in recent years, the group has translated nearly 1,000 gay films and tv series. in 2011, danlan.org, a famous gay website, interviewed xiao p, one of the leaders of the group and the interview transcription was published on qaf’s website (danlan, 2011). this research analyzed the transcription and the relevant data about the group. the group qaf is named after the american tv show queer as folk. the original intention of the group was to provide a communication and video exchange platform for chinese fans of the show. after the tv show ended, the group’s enthusiasm about the show did not decrease. the group hoped to gain access to additional similar shows, so they started to collect and subtitle film and television works, either gaythemed or containing a gay sub-plot. due to censorship in china, no gay film and television works have been officially introduced. with the official channels being blocked, the qaf group acts as a bridge: qaf selects a batch of excellent foreign gay movies and tv shows, translates them, adds relevant background annotations, and then presents them to the gay communities in china through the internet. though it is now china’s largest gay film and television production and publishing website, qaf did not intend to become so. qaf still hopes the chinese radio and television censorship system can be more lenient and tolerant, and can provide an official channel for the import of gay-themed audio-visual works. from september 2004 when the group was established to 2011, the qaf fansub group has established a library with more than 400 films and television programs. currently, they translate 2 ~ 3 new films or videos every week. the weekly workload was set, in consideration of group members’ internet bandwidth, energy, time, as well as the fansub quality. from planning a subtitling project to the final product, the subtitling processes include the first translation draft, proofreading, second proofreading, timing check and quick double-check, then finally video-subtitles merging. by regulating the weekly work quota, qaf can make good use of time and fully guarantee the production quality, which is a key factor in qaf’s success of becoming a large film and television fansub group in china. around 2011, qaf started translating and transmitting chinese gay films online. according to xiao p, some chinese directors entrusted qaf to translate their films for export. qaf stated they would implement any decisions made by the film director. moreover, qaf hopes to refine and retranslate the rushed translations of the classic old films they completed so fans could add the works to their collection. qaf started its operation translating queer as folk, one of the many popular american dramas available for chinese online audiences. nevertheless, according to xiao p, qaf will not blindly follow or translate every popular drama. rather, they plan to concentrate on gay-themed tv shows and films. according to qaf’s observation, mainstream american tv channels control and reduce the gay elements in their shows to ensure drama ratings. also, cable tv channels lack financial support, which makes it difficult for them to guarantee the quality of gay-themed dramas, so some qaf members turn to dramas containing gay sub-plots. many popular american dramas with gay sub-plots, communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 3 such as glee and modern family, are not “pure” gay dramas in their eyes. qaf believes that a fansub production team’s energy and time are always limited, and complementary division of labor improves efficiency. they think that there is no need to re-translate completed works since many other fansub groups have already subtitled popular american drama, so qaf tends to devote their energy to the production of pure gay or gay-themed dramas. 3. meaning-giving text reconstruction and cultural communication fans of popular culture generally only stay on the level of appreciating and commenting on texts, while these fanatical cultural fans are active, enthusiastic and participatory in their input to texts. they reconstruct the text, delve deep into the meaning behind the text, and then disseminate to larger audiences. the internet provides a broad platform for the general public to obtain information and share resources, and the class attribute of the general public became blurred in the virtual internet community. people’s participation in the cultural industry and their choice of cultural products are mostly determined by their cultural interests, spiritual satisfaction and the need to realize self-worth, rather than by their regarding the cultural products as unique cultural resources of a particular class (gauntlett, 2000). that contributes to the borderless nature of cultural communication in the online world. abandoning class essentialism, the participants of mass culture, especially the fanatical fans, will devote more time and energy to text reconstruction and cultural communication, which is a process that transcends the dualistic opposition of suppression and resistance, elitism and populism simplification. most members of the online fansub group have received higher education. take the qaf fansub group as an example. this fansub group, with a history of nearly 20 years, is mainly engaged in the translation of gay film and television dramas. at present, it has more than 100 members, covering people born between the 1960s and 1980s, including chinese students from high schools and universities inside and outside china, white-collar workers, and overseas chinese. they have plenty of time for computer use, and their foreign language proficiency is very high. such a group, with different social identities and backgrounds, has an idealistic spirit of sharing and dedication, which can be regarded as the spiritual satisfaction and self-worth realization of the fan group. 4. affective play embodied in the textual reproduction chinese internet users joined the group out of their interests and work voluntarily under high pressure. these fansub group members do subtitle translation as their part-time work, but they gained self-identity in that online internet space. the audience’s recognition of fansub groups is an affirmation of their values or beliefs. there is competition among different fansub groups, and subtitles updated earlier can get more downloads. the return of voluntary labor has nothing to do with the profits, but it can strengthen the self-identity of fansub group members. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 4 the fansub group members are first the audience of film and television dramas, but the chinese and english subtitles they produce are products viewed by chinese audiences. therefore, when they watch film and television dramas as audience members, they begin to develop narcissism and regard themselves as performers. their process of multiple decoding and encoding, recoding and decoding of subtitles, shows the attitude of the fansub group as the audience interpreting the text. the interaction of dual identities has helped fansub groups transmit information effectively in small groups. through the observation of activities of fans in the gay fansub group, and in-depth interviews with the group members, the study discovered that the fansub members constructed their own identity in the virtual community, and their textual reproduction behavior in fan culture context reflects the characteristics of “affective play”. the notion of affective play, according to hills (2002), is that space where the fan fiction writers can experience, feel and live playfully within the texts that are the subjects of their fandom. this research shows that the concept of “affective play” is embodied in the textual reproduction process of the members of the gay fansub group, and the emotional factor is important because it affects the textual reproduction behavior of the members. it is because of the emotional attachment of gay fansub group volunteers who joined the fansub group to reproduce the text. in the reproduction process, the original meaning expression of the tv or film text was eliminated, and a new set of texts with emotional identity were created by attaching to the original text with imaginative means. besides, members of the gay fansub group construct their own identity through the role-playing of “foreground” and “background”. “role-playing” mainly refers to identity construction through the roles of “manager”, “chief translator” and “opinion leader” in the virtual internet community. meanwhile, in the context of fan culture, fans of the gay fansub group also gain “identity” through “affective play”. affect plays a vital role in distinguishing groups with multiple boundaries, because it constantly constructs the possibility of differences and constructs a way to highlight specific differences. the gay fansub group skillfully integrates their own cultures with foreign cultures to achieve localization through text and cultural reproduction, especially within the environment of new media technology, showing great initiative and creativity. as communicators, the gay fansub group effectively controls the second wave of transmitting gay culture in chinese-speaking areas in the process of secondary coding and implanted some localized elements and chinese culture, which promoted the new trend of cultural exchange to some extent. 5. constructing an identity through media use behavior from two aspects of self-identity and group identity, this paper examines how the gay fansub group constructs identity through media use behavior. identity is accomplished by self-examination and exploration of one’s relationship with others. first, although each fan is an individual, his or her self-identity construction cannot be separated from selfreflection and interaction with others. the author divides the study of self-identity into two parts. on the one hand, from the stage when the individual’s ideal self appears, the fan realizes the unity of “real self” and “ideal self” through a series of self-reflective communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 5 activities. on the other hand, from the perspective of the relationship between individuals and others, without the reference function of others, the self is meaningless, and the evaluation and affirmation of others play a vital role in the construction of individual identity. in this paper, through the classification of fan types, the author discovered that these fansub group members received the affirmation, praise and recognition of others through their media use by playing different roles, such as group managers, opinion leaders and fansub group members, and building their identity from the specific media use behavior. self-identity is to solve the problem of “who am i”, and the development of individuals can never be separated from the nourishment of the group. so, “who are we?” is the new question if we broaden the research scope from a gay fan to the gay fansub group. these questions involve group identity. the development of new media, especially the flourishing of the internet, is the motive of identity construction of the gay fansub group. meanwhile, the fansub group’s media use behavior can promote the establishment of identity labels. in the 1980s, scholars including fiske demonstrated the initiative and creativity of mass culture. instead of adopting ideological analysis methods, they argued that the masses were not just passively controlled objects; there is a kind of active and independent power hidden in mass culture (fiske, 2010). the audience’s subjectivity in popular cultures such as film and television dramas is particularly obvious. as a member of popular culture, the members of the fansub group are, in a sense, acts of text reconstruction in the translation of texts, which is the outward release and embodiment of the receiver’s subjectivity. this culture of online downloading is also a kind of acquiescence to piracy. that makes this group appear marginalized. subsequently, the interpretation of the causes, behaviors and participating groups of the fansub group entails the complexity of the cultural game. fan culture is a participatory culture, and the interpretation of existing texts may lead to new texts, new cultures and new communities. 6. fansubbers’ social identity in modern society gofman’s dramaturgical sociology holds that life is a performance, society is a stage, and the process of interpersonal communication is the process of people performing “self”, but this “self” is not the real self, but the “self” disguised by symbols (goffman, 1978). fansub groups have their own identities and roles in real life. these “selves” are often carefully decorated and play a regular role in front of others. the fixity and standardization in daily life, as well as the standardized living space, cause fan social self-alienation. fans are more likely to regard the online community as a platform for self-presentation and extension so that they can more actively show themselves and vent their emotions in fan activities such as text reconstruction. almost all online fansub groups volunteer to translate american tv drama resources without pay and regard subtitle translation as intervention and participation in modern life, as recognition and realization of self-worth. meanwhile, the incompleteness and fragmentation of modern society also breeds the incomplete and fragmented self. for these online fansub groups active behind the scenes, the identity of fans is, in a sense, a psychological compensation for this atomized and communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 6 isolated modern life (giddens, 1991). fans can prove the value of individual existence by participating in the dissemination or reconstruction of their favorite cultural and industrial products. the seemingly mysterious communication between fans can be seen as experiencing an illusory sense of community. in this virtual environment, fan imagination and creativity are stimulated, and they also incorporate more self-emotion and creativity in the process of text reconstruction, thus forming a new consumption of cultural industrial products. corresponding to the official culture, the fan culture of the online fansub group belongs to folk culture in a sense, which has a unique set of cultural paradigm and power, sometimes showing amazing creativity in reconstruction and cultural communication, but sometimes also restricted and constrained by ideology. the fansub group, wandering on the edge of social norms in the traditional sense, is controversial and complex. the government intends to filter the cultural resources people receive, by controlling popular cultural products, but this stimulates piracy. the prosperity of internet downloading, though decreasing dvd piracy, has become another type of piracy. in the virtual community, the members of the fansub group have the cultural rights and channels that are difficult to obtain in real life. therefore, this is a kind of self-awakening and recovery of cultural cognition and ideology brought about by life in the information age. the mainstream cultural concept can easily regard the fansub group as a marginal group. they are regarded as being easily incited and sometimes blind. however, fans have formed another society that is contrary to mainstream society and formed a relatively open space where there is a confrontation between democracy and freedom. in reality, the members of the fansub group may not get such a channel to realize self-culture, and it is difficult to communicate with others due to ideological differences. in the online fansub community, it is easier to realize cultural rights and resonate with others’ thoughts, which adds a romantic color to the interpretation and reconstruction of the text. 7. conclusion within a fansub group, fansub members build their identity from the specific media use behavior. in the context of fan culture, fans in the gay fansub group also gain “identity” through “affective play”. affect plays a vital role in distinguishing from groups with multiple boundaries, because it constantly constructs the possibility of differences and constructs the way to highlight specific differences. 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(2002). fan cultures: psychology press. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 1 communication across borders: translation & interpreting www.jhkpress.com volume 01, issue 01, 2021, issn: 2766-791x the translation’s role in chinese film entering the western market zhimei zhu1 wuxi canal experimental middle school, jiangsu, china 11694503@qq.com abstract: based on data retrieved from different databases and interviews with chinese film translators, this research reviews the translation’s role in chinese films entering the western markets, especially the american market. to increase the understanding of chinese film translation involved in the film industry, the translation economics theory was applied in this paper. it is recommended that film translators bear in mind nida’s functional equivalence standard to produce a translation conducive to film profitability. keywords: chinese films, american market, film translation 1. chinese film export since 1980 in its broad sense, the 1980s was an era of the rise of chinese language movies. waves of movies from hong kong, then taiwan and china, were brought to overseas chinese communities in southeast asia and other regions, becoming a new force in the international film industry. among the films produced in china, the works produced by the “fifth generation” directors (i.e. graduates from the beijing film academy in the 1980s) and animation movies produced by shanghai animation film studio were first imported by european cinemas and tv stations. however, even in this unprecedented golden age, few commercial films produced in hong kong were able to enter the submarket of europe and america in the mode of “trade circulation”, while chinese movies were only “exotic” artworks appreciated by the western intellectual class. they were not parts of the mainstream consumer culture like hollywood movies in the united states or animation and video games in japan. previously, the state-owned china film import & export corporation had exclusive export privileges. when private studios gained the rights to export chinese movies, china film import & export corporation’s export 1 author’s contact information in chinese (作者): 朱志梅, 江苏无锡运河实验中学 http://www.jhkpress.com/ communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 2 business shrank much. most of the overseas distribution of work by the “fifth generation” was undertaken by hong kong, taiwan and japanese investors. in recent years, a new generation of chinese film directors and producers have shown their strength and international insight. high-quality films that have grossed over hundreds of millions of dollars at the chinese box office have been distributed in european and american markets, bringing increasingly great profits. among them, crouching tiger, hidden dragon grossed us$ 128 million in the usa, 60% of the worldwide total, topping the chart of chinese films released overseas (box office mojo, 2000). nevertheless, crouching tiger, hidden dragon is a rare case generating high profits in america. most chinese movies yielded less than one million dollars in the usa, with a few grossing several million. due to the huge cultural differences between china and the west, chinese films are not well recognized or appreciated by audiences in europe and america. for example, the chinese epic war film red cliff was only distributed in asian markets. the cultural references in red cliff are very exotic to american audiences so it is difficult for them to understand. the total box office of red cliff (parts 1 & 2, 2018) worldwide was 250 million us dollars, while its american version grossed only $627,047 in 2019, less than 0.5% of the international total (box office mojo, 2019). these box office receipts mainly come from china and asian markets. this paper intends to answer the following research questions: when will chinese films have the opportunity to win coveted oscars? when will chinese movies join the overseas ten-million-dollar box office club? when can chinese movies take on the responsibility of cultural communication between china and the world? to answer those questions, this research examines the mechanism for the chinese film translation industry, identifies its shortcomings and proposes solutions. 2. film translation cost the film transmits information through languages of picture and sound. the importance of translation cannot be overstressed for a chinese film to be understood in englishspeaking countries, but translation has not been valued highly by the chinese film industry. to better understand the film translation industry in china, a professional film translator’s online journal (j. dong, 2020) was analyzed and relevant movie data analyzed. the translator, dong jing, is the founder of beijing erdongxuan translation studio. the studio has participated in the translation of famous film and television programs such as wandering earth (2019), crazy alien (2019) and sheep without a shepherd (2019). through the analysis, it is found that translators of chinese films have not been given full credit. for example, in 2019, dong jing, the translator mentioned above, checked three films translated by his team and discovered that only in one movie, his name and his studio’s logo were included. from 2010 to 2020, dong jing has been involved in the communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 3 translation of dozens of films, and eight out of the ten clients considered his prices for translation were too high. dong jing described how his translation studio gave quotes. a complete movie script usually has 30,000-50,000 words, and the subtitles are about 9,000-15,000 words. the translation price quoted is less than 100,000 yuan (15, 313 usd) for the translation of both the script and subtitles by native english speakers. most customers considered that price too high. in sharp contrast, these film production companies are usually willing to invest more than 200,000 yuan on the production of one second of special effects. the market outlook for tv programs translators is not strong either. for example, for the translation of a tv series, with about 8,000 words in one episode, the customer budget maybe only 1000 yuan, and needs to be completed within one day. according to dong jing, his company’s experienced chinese translators with more than 10 years' experience usually can only complete 2,000 3,000 words of translation from chinese to english per day, and even translators who are bilingual in english and chinese can only translate up to 5,000 words a day. the price 150 yuan (23 usd) for the english translation of one thousand chinese characters to be completed within one day is extremely low. to cut the cost and complete such a project within the expected time, a translator can use machine translation (e.g. google), then post-edit it. though the deadline may be met, the translation quality is low. as michael sinterniklaas, an american dubbing actor and founder of nyav post recording studio suggested, chinese film companies should invest no less money in translation than the cost of filming and promoting movies, to ensure the movie’s success in the western market. currently, to release a chinese film in overseas markets, the first step is to send the english version of the script outline to overseas partners and publishers; the second step is to ensure that the reviewers from different countries in each film festival can understand and like the script; the third step is for the foreign audience to read the subtitles (usually disappearing quickly on the screen) and understand the story and feelings of the characters. in each step, the corresponding script outline (including story brief and biographies), script and subtitles all contribute to the audience's perception of the whole movie. a chinese movie may create more than 2 billion yuan (306 million usd) of profit in the chinese market but only less than 1 million dollars at the overseas box office. the cultural barrier may be the main contributing factor of the low profit overseas, but the ineffective translation produced by chinese translators (non-native english speakers) can be another major factor. as native english speakers are a portion of the expected audience, it is suggested that professional native english speaker translators produce and evaluate the translation. the english spoken by native english speakers is the most dominant language among all the languages used by different audience groups, so their use of the language is the most acceptable and practical in film translation. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 4 3. film translation quality control influenced by the “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” (aka xindaya) theory prevalent in china, many producers believe that chinese-english translation must also embody faithfulness and elegance. however, the translation standard “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” is inapplicable in the film translation. as translation clients or patrons, the film production company may misuse the standards choosing translation service providers. the standards applied by these translation amateurs to evaluate translation professionals are unreliable. as dong revealed, rather than hiring native english speakers to translate a film or evaluate a film translation, chinese film producers often ask a chinese staff member proficient in english to check the translation quality using the translation standard “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance”. even if the original script is not literary (or “elegant”), these translation gatekeepers (quality control) still expect the translation to be “high-class and elegant” and “beautifully written”. however, these chinese translators hired are non-native english speakers and may produce “elegant” translation that contains grammar and word usage errors. the film production crew members judging the translation are usually not qualified in this matter, as their english level is often not sufficient. furthermore, these translation gatekeepers may have only been exposed to the “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” standard, unaware of other translation theories. the “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” standard, proposed by the famous translator yan fu, is not a systemic theory (huang, 2003). it remains to be well expounded and improved. compared with the “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” standard, eugene nida's “functional equivalence” theory is more applicable for the translation of commercial films which stress profitability. in translation academia, nida's “functional equivalence” theory has received wide and attention. according to nida, “translating consists in reproducing in the receptor language the closest natural equivalent of the source language message, first in terms of meaning and secondly in terms of style” (nida, 1969:12), and “there should be a high degree of equivalence of response, or the translation will have failed to accomplish its purpose” (nida, 1969:24). by nida’s “functional equivalence” standard, the meaning is the most important, followed by linguistic form. in other words, it is necessary to avoid mechanical translation in the process of switching between two languages and achieve functional equivalence in the transfer of meaning between the two languages. it can be seen that translation is the reproduction of the form and meaning of the source language in the target language, and the form may hinder the reader's understanding of the meaning. the purpose of film translation is to help the target language audience receive the amount of entertainment similar to that of the source language audience. therefore, without an understanding of the meaning conveyed in the film, the audience will not be able to enjoy the film fully, and the film production company or distributor will suffer a loss of revenue. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 5 by using the “functional equivalence” translation standard, film translation is expected to be the most functional one that is often (though not always) colloquial and easy to understand. as zhou tiedong, a famous translation reviewer of china film group corporation argued in the interview, from the perspective of producers, screenwriters and directors, the chinese films for export should overcome the tendency of one-way personal expression; movies are a product, so they should be audience-oriented and the market should be considered (k. dong, 2011). in that sense, chinese film translation should tell a chinese story in a way that foreign audience can understand. 4. balancing between time and quality the expectations of film and television translation customers are always that the translation should be both “fast” and “good”, but they create a dilemma for the translator as they usually need adequate time to produce a high-quality translation. many film and television producers have not recognized that translating scripts is, just like writing scripts, art that requires time. a high-quality translation requires close cooperation between film producers and translators. for example, in the summer of 2016, film translator dong jing and his team translated the script of wandering earth from chinese into english. the producer of wandering earth gave them a very detailed glossary at the beginning, which was very helpful in increasing work efficiency. at that time, dong jing led two translators and translated more than 20,000 words in seven days. with the original english script for reference, dong jing clarified the basic elements of script translation, such as format, tense and style. to complete the translation in a short time, the producer of wandering earth found more than one translation team, and dong jing’s team only did part of the translation project. another example illustrating the importance of cooperation between the translators and the film production company is translating crazy alien (2019). in the early stage of crazy alien, dong jing’s team was the only translation team outside of the film production crew, and they raced against the clock to ensure the quality. however, the crew still hoped that the translation team could complete the translation within one week or update the script within two or three days. crazy alien had numerous versions of the script. while they were translating between chinese and english, the chinese and american screenwriters were also revising the scripts. it took the translation team around four months to complete the work. errors occurring in english subtitles of chinese movies are mostly because the film production company does not provide translators with the actual film. for the sake of confidentiality, the company only provides some lines or subtitles. when a scene changes greatly, it is often difficult for translators to understand the connections between two scenarios so they can only guess what happened. another difficulty translators often encounter in film and television translation is the frequent changes in the original text. after finishing the first edition of chinese and communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 6 english subtitles, movies are often edited and modified more than once, which means that the translation and subtitle timing should be changed too. if the changes are not communicated to the translator in time, then mistranslation or misplacement of subtitles will occur. the advantage of teamwork is that the project can be completed quickly, and the disadvantage is that it is difficult and time-consuming to unify different team members’ translation styles and quality. the ideal method to translate a film or a television program is to use only one translator to translate a script from beginning to end, which is most conducive to maintaining a consistent terminology and style. if it is chinese-english translation, it is recommended to have native english translators involved in translation or proofreading. in china, film translation for export is often completed by chinese translators who are not native english speakers. that is mostly due to the high cost of using native english speaker translators. film translation customers are often skeptical about native english speaker translators’ chinese proficiency as in their impression, very few native english speakers can speak chinese. however, as dong jing stated, american translators that they have cooperated with for a long time have not only high proficiency in chinese but also more than ten years’ experience in translating literary works and publishing translated books. nevertheless, the price of native english speakers is considered high for most customers. so it is important to caution them that the lack of native english speaker translators may lead to the failure of the english translation. 5. dubbing, an expensive but effective translation mode due to its high labor cost and longtime requirement, dubbing is an expensive translation option for a small-budget film distribution company. nevertheless, it may be an investment risk that is worth taking. for example, after ne zha grossed over 700 million us dollars in china, ranking no. 2 on the box office chart for all films screened on the chinese mainland in 2019, the film entered overseas markets, equipped with the english dubbing aiming to eliminate the cultural barrier. in august 2019, ne zha (english dubbed version) was screened in north american cinemas. the english subtitles and dubbing were produced professionally in the united states and helped the film yield over 3 million dollars in the american market. chinese films are usually subtitled and rarely dubbed in the usa. in comparison, most hollywood films entering the chinese market are dubbed in chinese. compared with subtitling, dubbing is more time consuming and the cost is more than ten times higher. so the film distribution company has a difficult decision to make in terms of producing a dubbed version for the film. when a chinese film’s overseas box office is expected to be $500,000, the $100,000 budget for the subtitle translation may be too high. however, if the box office is expected to be $10 million, it will be a cost-effective option to spend $2 million on english dubbing. although it costs more than subtitling, the dubbing produced by native english speakers and voice actors allows the audience to understand the communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 7 dialogue without relying on subtitles. compared with english subtitles, english dubbing is an easier way for english-speaking audiences of all ages and different cultural levels to appreciate chinese movies. 6. conclusion to further promote the “going out” of chinese films and television programs, more private enterprises should be encouraged to participate in the distribution overseas as the overseas distribution monopoly by china film group has been broken. to promote chinese culture overseas, it is suggested that film translation, along with the artistry and technicality of films, should be improved to win over the audience. for a chinese film to be exported is a product for profit, film translation should be conducted and judged by the “functional equivalence” rather than the “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” standard. if the budget allows, native english speaker translators should be employed for the film translation work; and dubbing (rather than subtitling) should be used to maximize the profit. references box office mojo. 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which the interpretation transforms itself into a true profession of the highest integrity and competence. for almost 30 years, medical interpretation has experienced all aspects of the professionalization process in the united states, and the industry has been growing quickly. china's economic prosperity in recent years and the influx of foreign populations have created a huge demand for medical interpretation. this paper reviews the professionalization of medical interpretation in the usa and assesses the prospect of professionalization in china. keywords: medical interpretation; professionalization; usa; china 1. introduction the history of medical interpretation can be traced to the beginning of human migration. in the early days, immigrants who could speak two languages often acted as “intermediaries” to assist in communication. nowadays, this kind of “natural interpretation” by bilingual users who have not received strict professional training can still be seen everywhere. when foreigners in china or chinese with limited english proficiency in america go to hospitals or clinics for medical treatment, they need a professional translator. the patient feels that each word spoken by the doctor is important, so they will feel uneasy if they miss any words or sentences the doctor speaks due to their limited language proficiency. compared with conference interpretation and liaison and escort interpretation, the research on medical interpretation in china is still rare and limited. the author used the keyword “医疗口译” (medical interpretation) to search for papers concerning medical interpretation, in cnki, the largest chinese journals database in the world. subsequently, only two related papers were found. in contrast, in recent years, the research on medical interpretation in the united states has been increasing. this paper explores the rise and development of medical interpretation in the united states and assesses the prospect of the professionalization of medical interpretation in china. http://www.jhkpress.com/ communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 2 2. characteristics of medical interpretation the interpreter builds a bridge of language and culture between doctors and patients and serves those in need with their accurate translation and professional knowledge. specialized training is an important aspect of professionalization. as a profession, either full-time or part-time, interpreters must have special skills required by the profession. bilingual ability is not equal to interpreting ability. the following can only be acquired through professional training: the interpreter’s knowledge of their own identity, familiarity with professional standards, and skills needed for professional interpretation, such as recognizing doctors’ handwriting, understanding euphemisms, and dialects when patients describe their illness, and mastering a large number of medical terms. compared with general interpretation, medical interpretation is more challenging. patients suffering from illness, psychological anxiety, infectious diseases, will inevitably affect the interpreter, causing the interpreter’s failure in completing the task. therefore, medical interpreters must have psychological endurance more than ordinary people. the practice has proved that necessary pre-translation preparation and basic medical knowledge are still necessary. one of the difficulties in medical interpretation is that the interpreter may encounter ethics-challenging matters, such as a patient asking the interpreter how their illness can be cured. if the interpreter does not handle it well, they may violate the professional ethics of medical interpreters and may receive warnings from the translation association or the employer. interpreters may encounter disturbing situations such as a patient dying during the interpretation process, or patients are in severe pain in the icu unit. these occasions can test the interpreter’s psychological ability. after experiencing such occasions, interpreters are recommended to receive psychological counseling from social workers. medical interpretation is the bridge of communication between doctors and patients. for patients whose mother tongue is not english, the medical interpreter translates what the medical staff said to the patient, and then translates the patient’s words to the medical staff. if there are cultural differences, the medical interpreter explains these cultural differences to both doctors and patients, so that they can fully understand and communicate with each other. however, the medical interpreter is only responsible for translation, and cannot answer patients’ questions or make any decisions for the patients. medical interpretation is in great demand in two countries with many immigrants, the united states and canada. more and more foreigners and new immigrants are seeking medical treatment, which promotes the increasing demand for medical translation in america, especially chinese translation. for example, the provincial language services (pls) in british columbia, and non-profit organizations such as mosaic and success recruit interpreters of various languages every year. after signing contracts with the interpreters, these organizations allocate jobs to them as contract workers. pls is regarded as one of the largest interpretation service providers, and mandarin and cantonese are the two languages with the largest number of demand and recruits. telephone interpretation and video interpretation in the united states have developed rapidly. telephone interpretation companies recruit interpreters all over the world, and their clients call to have a three-way telephone or video call, and the interpreters provide interpretation for both parties on the phone or video. with flexible working hours, communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 3 medical translation has gradually become the new favorite career choice for some chinese. as a large immigrant country, more than 25 million residents in the united states have limited english proficiency and are regarded as lep people (zong & jeanne, 2015). according to medical providers, 80% of hospitals in the usa often encounter lep patients, 81% of physicians often receive lep patients, and 84% of federally certified health centers provide outpatient services for lep patients every day (nachc, 2008). however, data shows that the adverse medical events encountered by lep patients due to language barriers are twice as many as those under normal conditions (jacobs, shepard, suaya, & stone, 2004). for a long time, the main translation service for lep patients still was the “natural interpretation” by bilingual speakers, including bilingual medical staff, family members and friends of patients, and even minor children. mistakes made by untrained “natural interpreters” are hidden dangers leading to various medical accidents, even loss of life. eliminating the language barrier is the necessary way for lep clients to enjoy medical services equally. 3. professionalization of medical interpretation in america title vi of the civil rights act of 1964 stipulates that discrimination against lep clients by federal-funded institutions or projects is prohibited. in august 2000, executive order no.413166 of the united states further declared that lep patients enjoy the services provided by various institutions equally. in the same year, the department of health of human services of the united states stipulated that lep people must be provided with federal financial assistance for language translation services. patients whose mother tongue is not english have the right to apply to hospitals for medical translation services when visiting a doctor in the united states, and this service is free in some states (such as california). in 2003, the employment rules of interpreters and standards for qualified interpreters were put forward. since then, occupational medical interpretation in the field of health care has been gradually rising in the united states. besides being able to speak both chinese and english, medical interpreters need professional training. medical interpretation involves cultural differences, specific etiquette, and specialized skills, so “natural interpretation” is not adequate. professional interpreters should have professional quality, abide by professional norms, and master professional skills. medical english has a large amount of specialized vocabulary. even native english speakers are not familiar with all the items in the medical vocabulary. medical interpretation practitioners who have obtained the qualification certificate are more favored in the market than those who have not, and their income is higher. however, due to the shortage of medical translation talents, the current translation threshold is not high. currently, the requirements for entering the medical translation field are generally just fluency in chinese and english, quick response, and shorthand ability. there are many translation companies of different sizes in the market, and the larger ones are languageline and cyracom. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 4 3.1 professional standards in the field of medical interpretation professional medical interpretation denotes interpreters have received professional training, strictly follow professional ethics, master complex medical terms, and can accurately and completely converse between two languages. they aim to help medical practitioners and patients with limited english proficiency communicate effectively and improve the quality of medical services. until now, although the united states has made great progress in providing language services for lep patients, the shortage of qualified medical interpreters is still an important reason why those people cannot get effective health care services. to provide medical interpreters with a code of ethics to follow, the american department of health and human services, california healthcare interpreters association (chia), national council on interpreting in health care (ncihc), and international medical interpreters association (imia) have respectively formulated and gradually improved their professional standards. specific standards were given, concerning how interpreters should deal with the issues of language, culture, ethics, morality, and belief when they perform their tasks, and how they should help achieve the ultimate goal of medical interpretation, which is to promote smooth communication between doctors and patients and ensure the effect of diagnosis and treatment. the introduction of the guidelines also guides vocational training, interpreter recruitment, and quality supervision. there are specified professional ethics standards for medical interpreters in the usa. in addition to the two most basic requirements of “accuracy and completeness”, there are many other requirements, such as keeping the patient’s privacy confidential and not doing anything other than interpretation. before the official translation begins, the medical interpreter first indicates to both doctors and patients that the content of the interpretation will be kept confidential to everyone except the medical team. many interpreters may feel that with their years of experience in interpreting and the knowledge they have learned, they can give some medical advice to patients in private. this is not allowed. interpreters are not doctors and the line is not to be crossed. however, due to legal or ethical needs, if the patient has the intention to murder, mistreat children and the elderly, or other domestic violence, the interpreter is obliged to inform the doctor. the interpreter is expected to guide and encourage direct communication between doctors and patients. interpreters shall not make suggestions, show partiality, discriminate, or make negative body gestures such as shrugging and rolling eyes. meanwhile, they should not conceal their relationship with the patient and avoid occasions where the patient is the interpreter’s family member or friends. if the relationship with the patient may cause embarrassment and discomfort to the interpreter or the patient, which may lead to unsmooth communication, the interpreter should request for withdrawal from the scene. however, if there is no substitute interpreter, the interpreter must overcome psychological discomfort and complete the interpretation task. the relationship between the interpreter, doctors, and patients is equal. this relationship does not change due to differences in gender, race, religion, belief, culture, social status, and political views. if tension between doctors and patients has developed, interpreters should help defuse it. interpreters do not try to influence patients’ decisions and choices with their judgment, respecting patients’ space, and visual privacy needs. the key role of communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 5 medical interpretation is to help lep patients communicate with doctors for timely diagnosis and treatment. although the interpreter has no obligation to be the “spokesperson” of the patient, from an ethical point of view, if the interpreter perceives that the doctor is discriminating against the patient, they should intervene in time. in an ideal interpreting situation, an interpreter is an invisible person and a mouthpiece. however, the scene context is complex and changeable. to achieve smooth communication, interpreters must assume their multiple identities, and ensure that patients receive effective medical services before, during, and after translation. interpreters are expected to be honest, reject bribery, and refuse to accept tasks for which they are not competent. they should be proficient in bilingual conversion and interpreting skills, receive continuous training, and improve professional standards. 3.2 qualification certification in october 2009, the national board of certification for medical interpreters (nbcmi) conducted a pilot test and started the formal test on april 28, 2010. in june, it produced the first batch of certified medical interpreters in history. on october 18, 2010, the first medical interpretation certification test sponsored by certification commission for healthcare interpreters (cchi) was also launched nationwide. although nbcmi and cchi are relatively independent certification bodies, their designs for the tests are very similar, and they delimit the boundaries and scope in terms of candidates’ registration qualifications and examination contents. currently, to become certified, one can opt for either nbcmi or cchi’s test. the two tests, similar in their difficulty, are both computer-based. they require that the test taker has fluency in both chinese and english and a good command of professional medical vocabulary. the focus of the two exams is slightly different. cchi’s exam includes consecutive interpretation, simultaneous interpretation, and visual translation, while nbcmi’s exam does not have simultaneous interpretation, focusing on visual translation and consecutive interpretation. before taking the medical interpretation qualification examination, test takers must have received 40 hours of medical interpretation training or practical experience including the time spent attending academic seminars related to interpretation or engaging in other fields such as law and community translation. cchi, the american association of medical interpreters certification, has two certification examinations: core chi (core certification healthcare interpreter) and chi (certified healthcare interpreter), namely subject 1 & subject 2. candidates can only apply for the second one after passing the first. subject one, corechi, is a computer test, knowledge test, two hours, 100 multiple-choice questions, all in english. subject 2 chi is also a computer test, oral test, one hour, you have to choose a specific language. chimandarin is the choice for chinese interpreters. both certification exam full scores are out of 600, and a score of 450 means passing the exam. before registering for the exam, candidates should first complete 40 hours of training. cchi's official website provided a list of training institutions. there are on-site lectures and online courses. the training price is generally around $600. for example, there are two training institutions: alta language services and medical interpreting training school (mits). no study/work background in the medical industry is required to register for the exam and there is no communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 6 need for translation/interpretation experience. candidates are required to provide proof of proficiency in a second language. it can be a transcript of a language exam or a certificate of obtaining a degree in a relevant country, for example, china or taiwan. subject 1 corechi exam (computer-based, knowledge test, two hours, 100 multiplechoice questions, all english questions) includes: professional responsibility and interpreter ethics (22%); manage the interpreting encounter (22%); healthcare terminology (22%); u. s. healthcare system (15%); cultural responsiveness (19%); subject 2 chi exam (computer-based, one hour, seven different scenarios, spoken chinese and english) includes: consecutive interpreting (75%); simultaneous interpret (14%); sight translation (9%); translate healthcare documents (2%)。 one a person obtains the medical interpreter certificate, it means they are qualified to provide the related services. nevertheless, a medical interpreter needs not only certain training before the exam but also long-term training after entering the workplace. even the best and most experienced interpreters cannot guarantee to finish every task well. new interpreters need to continue their education, ask experts to supervise and guide them, and listen to the feedback from doctors and patients, to improve their professional quality day by day. trade associations are non-profit and self-disciplined organizations voluntarily organized by enterprises in the same industry, which mainly balance and coordinate the interests of the members within the organization, communicate information, maintain order, and conduct self-discipline management. the main function of medical interpretation association is to formulate professional standards, ethics, and training standards; hold regular seminars and publish periodical newsletters to convey the voice of translators; develop and improve the professional status of medical interpreters, and ensure good working conditions and salary of interpreters; establish an interpreter database to help clients obtain effective medical services. almost every state in the united states has its medical interpretation associations. some of these associations are organized by interpreters themselves, while others are affiliated with universities, community hospitals, or clinics. the influential ones include national imia and ncihc and chia in california. there are also special sign language translation associations in america, such as the registry of interpreters for the deaf. like other industries, the knowledge in the field of medical interpretation, especially medical vocabulary, is constantly updated. under the guidance of an effective and credible qualification examination, interpreters should adhere to “lifelong learning” for the well-being of patients and the improvement of their professional accomplishment. nbcmi stipulates that after certification, the certificate holder should receive at least three continuing education units (equivalent to 30 hours) every five years, and relevant seminars and training courses will be attended to expand terminology reserves and enhance memory. otherwise, the certificate will be revoked and the certificate holder will have to take the exam again. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 7 4. the development of medical interpretation in china china is not a traditional immigrant country. however, in the past 30 years, with the rapid development of the economy and the expanding contacts with the world, more and more foreigners have come to china for short-term and long-term residence due to work, study, or travel. according to the official document of the chinese finance department (2019), in 2018, 30.54 million foreigners entered china. in 2016, more than 900,000 foreigners came to work in the chinese mainland (xu & zhou, 2017). peking union medical college hospital, established as early as 1921, provided medical services in english without using interpreters. instead, english-speaking medical staff communicated directly with foreign patients. this situation still exists today. seeing a doctor has become a source of anxiety for many foreign guests because of the language barrier. it is undeniable that the research on medical interpretation in china has just started. especially, as a profession, medical interpretation has only attracted the attention of a very small number of individual researchers in the field of interpretation. when a chinese hospital has a demand for interpreters, it finds a staff member who can speak some english and does not ensure the interpretation quality. even if some large hospitals in china have reception rooms for foreign guests, they only use a limited number of english-speaking medical staff members, and the medical service may not be satisfactory. the development of medical interpretation in the united states fully shows that in consideration of china’s situation today, it is necessary and urgent to train specialized medical interpreters and conduct scientific research. the specialization process of medical interpretation in the usa can give china a good reference. medical interpretation has a high market demand in china and has attracted the attention of translation experts and scholars. the author searched for “medical interpretation” with the search engine baidu, and the search results include the recruitment of medical interpretation talents by translation companies, medical interpretation training programs provided by training institutions, and “medical interpretation vocabulary” of interpretation learning websites. the results show that medical interpretation has begun to have a market in china. professionalization of interpretation includes the professionalization of interpreters. it should be emphasized that it is a trend that englishspeaking experts and scholars engaged in humanities, science, and engineering fields join the interpreting team. interpretation training should be aimed at a wider range of people, which is the guarantee for comprehensively improving the quality of the interpreting team. accordingly, the voice of establishing professional interpretation qualification certification is getting louder. 5. implications for china china’s current medical interpretation is like a virgin land waiting to be reclaimed, and the market demand determines the development prospect of this industry. based on the history of the professionalization of medical interpretation in the united states, medical interpretation in china is predicted to go through several stages: forming trade associations, formulating ethics codes, perfecting qualification certification, and providing professional training. imia, the earliest professional association of medical interpretation in the united states, was founded in 1986. by june 2010, it finally completed the first national medical interpretation qualification certification in history, communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 8 more than 20 years since its foundation. according to the specific market, china should formulate professional standards and certification evaluation systems in line with china’s national conditions. this will be a long-term process that requires the joint efforts of a large number of “like-minded people”. the author hopes that more and more people will join this team, conduct theoretical and empirical research, establish a scientific training system, and train qualified medical interpreters. the development of medical interpretation in china is inseparable from the research on the training of medical interpreters, while the training system of medical interpreters is rarely discussed in depth in china. because of this, the author puts forward the following thoughts, hoping to give some inspiration to the academic circles. (1) the establishment of medical interpretation courses. in the curriculum of american medical interpretation training institutions, medical terminology appears most frequently. there are two main reasons: first, it is determined by the basic characteristics of medical interpretation. secondly, the most obvious problem in medical interpretation and translation lies in the use of technical terms. therefore, it is necessary to set up medical terminology courses systematically, and learn from the professional standards of foreign qualification certification institutions, the role of interpreters, the basic skills of interpretation, cultural and ethical issues, and communicative skills. (2) the training of medical interpreters. medical interpreters should have a solid bilingual foundation and interpreting ability, basic medical knowledge, mastery of medical terms, the ability to deal with language, culture, ethics, morality, beliefs, and other problems in diagnosis and treatment. furthermore, they should know how to promote smooth communication between doctors and patients and ensure the effect of diagnosis and treatment. in 2009, china’s ministry of education issued document no.1 to comprehensively promote the master’s degree training program and train advanced applied talents, including the pathways of translation and interpretation (moe, 2009). it is recommended medical colleges and foreign language colleges cooperate to offer translation masters’ programs. translation master’s programs have high-quality teachers and strong scientific research support, which can strengthen interpreters’ bilingual language ability and carry out relevant scientific research to ensure the scientific training of interpreters. medical colleges have abundant medical resources and can provide a teaching platform for medical interpreters’ medical expertise and medical terminology teaching. meanwhile, their affiliated hospitals can also provide medical interpreters with internships and even practice venues. (3) the professionalization of medical interpreting. the social recognition degree of medical interpretation in china is lower than that of conference interpretation. the lack of social cognition is one factor. the main reason is that the professionalization process of medical interpretation lags behind other specialized interpretations. currently, there are no unified professional standards, and the market is in disorderly competition. the development of medical interpretation in the united states has gone through a process from non-standardization to standardization, from disorder to order. some scholars suggest that the professionalization of medical interpretation in china should draw lessons from the professional system of medical interpretation in the united states. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 9 meanwhile, combined with the specific market, china should work out the professional standards and certification evaluation system in line with its national conditions. 6. conclusion with the rapid development of china’s economy and the increasing status in the international arena, the exchanges between domestic and foreign personnel will be continuously strengthened, and medical interpretation will have more and more market and training needs. at present, developing the discipline of medical interpretation and its personnel training can expand the scope of china’s interpretation research, improve the level of interpretation research, and enrich the connotation of interpretation research. it is hoped that academic research on medical interpretation will attract enough attention and more “people of insight” to join further research on medical interpretation. references finance department. 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borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 1 communication across borders: translation & interpreting www.jhkpress.com volume 01, issue 01, 2021, issn: 2766-791x the english translation and cultural dissemination of chinese web novels lin zhao1 shiyuan college of nanning normal university, guangxi, china 63370688@qq.com abstract: in the digital age, chinese web novels, distinguished from the traditional paper-based novels, have become an important genre of chinese literature. the paper reviews the history of chinese web novels, and their spread to the world through amateur and professional translation and online publication. from the perspective of cultural dominance and communication, this research examines the translation and proposes different translation strategies for different translation purposes. it concludes that chinese web novels have a niche market in the west, and domestication is the norm of translation of these web novels targeting the dominating english culture. keywords: chinese web novels, english translation, culture 1. development and overseas promotion of chinese web novels chinese web novels, started at the end of the 20th century and the beginning of the 21st century, keeping pace with the first wave of internet development in china. especially, one type of chinese web novels, xianxia or xuanhuan novel, based on chinese traditional mythology and martial arts literature (y. wang, 2017), has just become popular in recent years after they had been long ignored by the mainstream for a long time due the conservative attitude of the mainstream literature in china. web novel creators, unfamiliar with the mainstream literary norms, discovered that the internet is their ideal kingdom. they do not have to follow the old path of newcomers in traditional literature, that is, being forced to accept the rules of the system, genre and ideological trend. in 2003, qidian.com, china’s web novel base camp, established a vip charging system in which readers are required to pay for access to the updates of certain popular novels (qidian, 2020). from then on, authors could gain financial rewards within that website, and did not have to go to traditional publishers to sell their creations. these 1 the author’s contact information in chinese (作者): 赵琳 南宁师范大学师园学院 http://www.jhkpress.com/ communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 2 writers, mostly born in the 1980s or 1990s, gained their writing inspirations from chinese classical literature and acg (animation, comic, game) culture in europe, america, japan, and south korea (rong, 2017). in recent years, chinese electronic literature (or web novel) has been translated and published online for the world to read, so its scale and influence have been further expanded outside of china. according to the white paper on the development of electronic literature going overseas in 2020, the overseas market scale of chinese electronic literature reached 460 million yuan in 2019, and the number of chinese electronic literature users outside china reached 31.935 million; by 2019, china exported more than 10,000 online works overseas, covering more than 40 countries and regions (shanghai observer, 2020). as early as the beginning of 2015, chinese web novels spread fast in north america. in 2016, there were about 20 active chinese-to-english web novel translation groups including wuxiaworld and volaretranslations. most of the members were “overseas chinese” or chinese language learners from all over the world, especially north america and southeast asia (mo & chen, 2016). most translation groups had their own websites to publish their translations. the largest group wuxiaworld, established in december 2014, has chinese web novels translated by electronic literature fans. wuxiaworld’s works are mostly translated from qidian.com’s originals — amateurs translate the novels in exchange for fan donations (l. wang, 2016). wuxiaworld.com has a large readership, receiving numerous visits every day. according to the alexa website ranking, on 1 november, 2020, wuxiaworld ranked 2,473 in global internet traffic and engagement over the past 90 days. in the global comprehensive ranking, it even surpassed qidian. wuxiaworld’s readers come from more than 100 countries and regions around the world, and the top five countries with the number of readers are the united states, the philippines, canada, indonesia and the united kingdom. according to wuxiaworld’s “about” page, the website now has 46 translators in 2020. the mechanism of wuxiaworld’s content output is that the group first finds suitable translators, and then translators choose works for translation. in the process of translation, translators usually form a team with two editors (wuxiaworld, 2020). in 2017, wuxiaworld signed a 10-year cooperation agreement on translation and electronic publishing with webnovel.com (aka qidian international). webnovel.com, an overseas portal of china literature (yuewen), is one of the important sources of electronic literature for export, and has expanded its footprint all over the world (xu, 2019). wuxiaworld’s previous translations have always been in the gray area in the copyrights laws. the founder rwx (aka jingping lai) negotiated with qidian for several months, and finally gave the latter the authorization for publishing the english translation of 20 web novels. webnovel.com now owns more than 400 english translations of chinese electronic literature, and more than 44,000 original english works created by over 30,000 overseas writers, with nearly 40 million visitors (xu, 2019). chinese electronic literature has experienced many stages: (1) works were authorized for publication; (2) the overseas portal website webnovel.com owned by china literature group was established; (3) chinese electronic literature was translated and exported on a large scale, and finally, (4) authors outside china were encouraged to create original communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 3 works. thus, the operation mode of chinese electronic literature has been brought overseas, and more overseas local high-quality authors have been discovered. the legalization of electronic literature translation means that it has entered the commercial mechanism, and thus has been formally incorporated into china’s official grand plan of cultural export. it is reported that china literature group will also continue to increase investment and promotion efforts in overseas markets, including arranging overseas exchange trips of well-known authors and the export of film and television dramas, games, and animation. 2. overseas readers’ acceptance of chinese web novels chinese web novels have been discovered by english-speaking readers, mainly due to the active translation and dissemination by young chinese readers. rwx, the founder of wuxiaworld, revealed that their fans of chinese web novels originally came from an english language forum website spcent, where internet users discussed and translated chinese martial arts movies and novels. most of these people are overseas chinese from america and southeast asia who are very interested in chinese culture. according to rwx, for overseas readers, the most important thing at present is a novelty. these martial arts fantasy novels in china are quite new to foreign readers, the concept of becoming immortals through cultivation does not exist in the west. the translation works by rwx and wuxiaworld gradually received acceptance by certain groups of overseas readers, just like the acceptance of japanese culture by americans, which started from subcultures such as comics and games. the recognition of chinese web novels by foreign readers comes from the universal reading “pleasure” of human beings. the pleasure brought by reading electronic literature can be “produced”. for example, xianxia, a typical web novel genre, utilizes a set of writing rules and story development patterns according to humans’ desire mode, thinking mode and reading mode. the storyline is usually predictable: at a certain point, the hero and heroine inevitably “encounter”; then, the two have misunderstandings; at a certain point, the enemy is bound to make trouble. this writing, also called “patterned literature”, has the “iron law” like that of hollywood commercial films, which ensures the arousal of readers’ emotions. when readers’ pleasure in reading is mobilized by the mature narrative structure, it is very common for them to become addicted. so, even if a web novel contains layers of routines and nothing interesting to read, its fans will still not abandon it, and will wait anxiously for anything new to be produced. compared with classic chinese martial arts novels such as the magic blade (tiānyá míngyuè dā), chinese web novels are better received by western readers, as they are not so “chinese”. according to translator rwx, the reason behind that is the fact that there is a bigger cultural gap between traditional chinese martial arts novels and western readers. there are numerous chinese historical allusions in traditional chinese martial arts novels, much more than those in chinese web novels. novels with fewer chinese historical allusions tend to be more popular in the western market. nowadays, many chinese fantasy novels have incorporated western cultural elements, especially those of game culture, which are familiar to younger people. for example, the popular web novel communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 4 coiling dragon’s character names and story settings are all western. in comparison, another web novel i shall seal the heavens (wǒ yù fēng tiān) is not as western, so new foreign readers are recommended to read coiling dragon first, then progress into i shall seal the heavens which is considered as an upgraded version from the first one in terms of cultural familiarity. 3. translation of chinese web novels translators have played an important role in promoting web novel. since 2015, overseas fan communities have spontaneously read and translated chinese electronic literature. the translation of chinese web novels includes both manual translation and so-called artificial intelligence (ai) machine translation. in 2019, webnovel.com started to use ai technology to translate some web content, so translation efficiency has been greatly improved (mei, 2019). readers can edit and correct the ai translation during their reading, and the revisions will help the translation model to continuously optimize the effect. the reader-participation translation mode is revolutionary in the translation industry, and its influence is yet to be reviewed in future studies. for translators of chinese fantasy novels, it is also a big challenge to accurately and properly translate the terms and proper nouns with chinese cultural characteristics. according to web novel translators, two things need to be dealt with carefully to produce high-quality readable translation: (1) linguistic form transformation between different languages, and (2) cross-cultural communication. it is always a great challenge for translators to find a balance between conveying the original meaning of chinese and making translation easy for readers to understand. at present, the translation level of overseas electronic literature is uneven. some translation contains problems such as missing meanings, inaccurate translation, and even using machine translation without post-editing. most online translators are in the primary stage, that is, they translate word by word without adapting their translation to the target language context. that kind of translation is not going to meet readers’ higher requirements for translation aesthetics as these readers are evolving. 3.1 translators and their elevated status hundreds of translators have been translating chinese web novels into different languages, mostly english. taking webnovel.com as an example, there are currently more than 200 translators and translator groups distributed around the world, especially in north america and southeast asia, and more than 200 english translation works have been launched, with a cumulative number of words exceeding 200 million (liu, 2018). these translators are mainly foreigners (non-chinese citizens) and often have three characteristics: they are familiar with the culture of english-speaking countries, chinese tradition and contemporary culture, and electronic literature. one famous translator on webnovel.com is cktalon (aka hongwen wen), a singaporean research engineer who graduated as a physics major in an american university. cktalon has been translating chinese web novels in his spare time since 2015. as a star translator of webnovel.com, cktalon translated a large number of electronic literature works in his spare time, totaling communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 5 more than four million words. his representative translations include path of soaring sword (fēi jiàn wèn dào) and true martial world (zhēnwǔ shìjiè). when he was a child, hongwen wen learned chinese from his mother. in november, 2015, hongwen wen started the chinese-english translation of the chinese fantasy work true martial world. since then, he translated works in different genres, such as the second dimension, the city, and xianxia (literally, immortal heroes). the translation reward system adopted by webnovel.com and wuxiaworld is actually quite controversial: the money given by the reader goes to the translator, not the author. according to wuxiaworld’s website, most of the translations had actually received translation authorization from the author, so it appears reasonable that the translator receives financial enumeration since the translator has worked. nevertheless, the biggest controversy in this matter is that copyright holders (authors) do not get any financial benefits from their foreign readers. wuxiaworld even puts the name of the translator at the top of the introduction of the works. what’s more, even many foreign readers have become fans of translators. therefore, the translator has gained a higher status than before, and the original author has become invisible in this case. 3.2 innovations in translating words with chinese cultural references to help readers understand words with chinese cultural references, translators add annotations to the words. with the online platform, annotations are hidden but can be easily accessed with a click of the mouse. according to the translator hongwen wen, the aim of translation, is to assist in smooth cultural communication and exchange, so it is necessary to ensure the translation’s readability and fluency when transcoding electronic literature (liu, 2018). one of the major difficulties of translation lies in the accurate translation of “oriental words” such as jīn dān, yuán shén, and shénxiān. wen remembered that when he first started translating true martial world, he spent nearly two hours on the translation of each chapter, much longer than he expected. he stated he did not know how to handle those idioms and sayings. then he discovered the twopronged approach: translation + annotation. he reviewed a large number of documents, selecting the word with the highest accuracy and acceptance, and then explained it in his translation to help readers understand the story and cultural meanings behind the word. the website allows the translator to annotate a word or sentence on their back end platform, and when it is displayed on the front end, a small gray mark will appear on the right side of the word, and the reader can click it to see the complete explanation. that does not affect the reading experience. rather, it helps the reader access the annotations. in addition to textual annotation, many translators also use illustrations or videos to make reading more interesting. for example, next to the word “tàijí quán”, a video of an old man practicing tai chi is accessible for readers. the multimedia usage in translation text is unconventional compared with the traditional book printing. besides conveying the original meanings, translators also attempt to transfer the “aesthetic feeling and artistic conception of words” (liu, 2018). to achieve that, translators may use words containing greek or latin prefixes, suffixes, and roots to translate certain chinese or buddhist concepts. for example, for the buddhist term communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 6 sānqiān dà shìjiè, translator wen decided not to use the colloquial version “3000 great worlds” preferred by many other translators. rather, wen translated it as ‘trichiliocosm’, a combination of tri+ chilia+ ancient greek κόσμος ("world"). for another example, concerning the english transliteration of chinese words hòutiān and xiāntiān, wen argued that on the one hand those translations are difficult for english readers to understand, and on the other hand, they lack the concepts of ‘before birth’ and ‘after birth’. so wen used ‘postnatal’ and ‘connate’, formal words containing prefix “post” and “con” and the latin root “nat” meaning “born”. the translation of electronic literature, different from traditional publishing, requires a suitable content production mechanism to improve its production efficiency. in order to effectively avoid the confusion of translation, after some exploration, qidian international set up a full-platform vocabulary database and sorted out more than 700 specialized terms. by content, the terminology can be divided into three categories: oriental fantasy, xianxia, and city; by type, it can be divided into common words, proverbs, and idioms. in order to standardize and optimize the translation of electronic literature, hongwen wen and his translator team established a bilingual glossary for the translation of fantasy works. that is especially necessary, as a web novel is usually very long, containing around 1,000 chapters. a term base will help translators keep their term use and the translation of character names consistent. meanwhile, on the online forum, there is a special section to introduce the basic concepts of taoism, for both readers and translators. 3.3 cultural differences certain social values embodied in the chinese web novels may be considered offensive if they are translated directly without alteration. to ensure the survival of translation, translators may be required to omit or blur those cultural references. for example, derogatory remarks against japan and south korea pejorative terms such as “bàngzi” for korean people and “xiǎo rìběn” for japanese were found in the novels. due to the historical conflicts between china and its neighboring countries, chinese writers may often use those terms in their novels, nevertheless, they are considered racist in the west. in addition, in the novels, there are main characters who are male chauvinists discriminating against women. that also violates the moral values of western readers. in 2020, as the racial tension and class conflicts became more intense in the us, chinesestyle web novels have gradually been resisted by more american readers who perceived sexism and racism in the web novels. the translator may need to alter or edit those parts, so as to keep the new texts in line with the target language readers’ values. according to etvolare, the founder of volaretranslations (wu, 2020), many translators she knew were forced to resign from their original companies because the chinese web novels they were translating aroused strong opposition from western readers, and many platforms and translation groups are under considerable pressure (wu, 2020). to get a foothold in the western market, some adjustments and changes in writing or translation may be required. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 7 4. conclusion compared to chinese classics like journey to the west and dream of the red chamber, chinese electronic literature has a better chance to reach foreign audiences. though studied much in academia by asian studies scholars, those classics have a little market or commercial values in the united states (l. wang, 2016). chinese electronic literature has a small market share in the us, that is, it is a niche market, rather than mainstream. for instance, in 2016, translator rwx gained his fame in china, and was interviewed by chinese media every week for half a year, but he was never interviewed by the american media. apart from the fans of chinese martial arts novels, quite a percentage of western fans did not discover chinese web novels directly; rather, these readers interested in asian culture first read japanese light novels, then they turned to chinese web novels. currently, these electronic literary translation works are discovered through word of mouth. hoping to gain recognition of mainstream american readership, rwx planned to use advertising to expand the influence of wuxiaworld to the west. in an interview with mo and chen (2016), rwx stated that people unfamiliar with oriental culture are not interested in chinese electronic literature; after all, they have abundant locally published readings available to them. china's electronic literature has not reached the influence and dissemination level like that of japanese animation, american hollywood blockbusters, and korean idol dramas. as the earliest cultural product exported from asia, japanese animation has accumulated a considerable number of fans in europe and america. comparatively speaking, chinese electronic literature is a new player, trying to attract a larger audience. it is believed by translator hongwen wen that it is necessary to localize translations of chinese web novels. that is, for readers from different regions and countries, chinese web novels can be adapted so that they can be better understood. translation works that have value resonance and cultural resonance for the target language readers may become more popular than those that do not. namely, a translation that is target-culture-oriented survives and prospers better. the translation and spread of chinese electronic literature may provide a reference for the dissemination of other types of cultural works. when the chinese web novels are translated into another language and spread overseas for the “mass culture industry”, some elements are discounted in cross-cultural communication. that is to say, “chinese cultural elements” are lost to a large extent and whatever remains in the translation is absorbed by readers selectively. the “chinese culture’s going abroad” is not as much as what most chinese people expected. currently, the translation strategy domestication is recommended and preferred in the translation of chinese web novels targeted at english speaking countries. it has become a norm of chinese 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(in chinese) [比起简单的作 品落地,“网文出海”如何升级圈粉?], wenhui. retrieved from https://wenhui.whb.cn/third/yidian/201910/22/296070.html this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. http://www.wuxiaworld.com/page/about communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 1 communication across borders: translation & interpreting www.jhkpress.com volume 01, issue 01, 2021, issn: 2766-791x reviewing the translation of the chinese animation film ne zha: birth of the demon child in north america from the perspective of eco-translatology maren mcdonald tampa, florida, usa marenmcd76@aol.com abstract: the chinese film ne zha: birth of the demon child entered the north american market, with english subtitles and dubbing versions. this paper compares the two, analyzes the differences from the perspective of eco-translatology, and discusses the possibility of enriching the concept of communicative dimension of eco-translatology with translation economics and nida's functional equivalence theory. through comparison of the two versions, this paper finds that the dubbing version of the film has greater deviation from the chinese subtitles, and is generally closer to the three dimensions of the target language (english): linguistic, cultural and communicative. in terms of swear word translation in the cultural and communicative dimensions, the subtitle version used literal translation, while the dubbing removed all the swear words. in terms of readability, the dubbed english version is more colloquial and idiomatic, which makes the language easier to understand and suitable for children. the dubbing version fully demonstrates the translator’s consideration of the audience demographics; meanwhile, its low-cost dubbing production also reflects the distributor's consideration of market and economic benefits. keywords: ne zha; cultural symbols; readability; viewing experience 1. eco-translatology perspective/theory discussion eco-translatology utilizes darwin's theory of evolution, and integrates ecology into translation studies. eco-translatology examines the whole translation ecology. from the perspective of translation ecological environment, it explains the translation process, describes the relationship between the translator as the subject and the translation ecological environment, and discusses the survival and development of translators and translation products. the translation ecological environment in eco-translatology is a world in which the original text, source language and target language are combined, and an interactive whole is composed of interrelated languages, cultures and society, as well http://www.jhkpress.com/ communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 2 as the original author, translator, client and readers (audience). translation ecological environment is a collection of factors that restrict translators' optimal adaptations and choices (hu, 2008). translation is an activity that needs to adapt to not only the ecological environment of the source language, but also the ecological environment of the target language, in order to survive and take effect (hu, 2004). to achieve this goal, translators need to transform in the following three dimensions to make selective adaptation and adaptive choices: linguistic dimension, cultural dimension and communicative dimension (hu, 2013:114). the success of a translation is determined by the translator's degree of transformation in these three dimensions. the higher the degree of “three-dimensional transformation”, that is, the higher the degree of holistic adaptation and selection, the better the quality of the translation (hu, 2013:114). specifically, in the process of translation, translators are expected to respect the language expression habits of the target language, balance the cultural output of the source language and the audience's acceptance of the target language, and strive to make the communicative function of the source language reappear in the target language. in the transformation of linguistic dimension, the translator should consider the influence of the source language form and style on the target language. if the target language’s form is too close to that of the source language, it may affect the understanding of the reader, and the text is not suitable for survival in the target language ecological environment. in the cultural dimension, there are cultural differences between the source language and the target language. when working on the transformation, the translator should consider the audience's acceptance of the target language and deal with it properly to avoid the overload of foreign cultures, which may lead to misunderstanding or incomprehension of the audience. in terms of communicative dimension, attention should be paid to ensuring that the target language achieves the communicative purpose similar to that in the original language. in the case of the translation of commercial films, translators need to produce their translation for the communicative purpose of entertainment. translation, like any other actions, always has an aim (vermeer hans, 1989:221). ne zha: birth of the demon child (hereinafter referred to as ne zha) is a commercial animation film. different from art films and documentary films, it aims at maximizing box office revenue and caters to mass entertainment. the overseas market expansion of ne zha not only creates economic income for the production company and distributors but also plays the role of overseas publicity for china. ne zha draws on chinese mythology and was not produced by the mainstream western film industry. according to the statistics of box office mojo, a website tracking box office revenue, the box office in china is $720 million, while the box office in north america is relatively small, with $3.7 million (box office mojo, 2020). it is a niche film in north america, and its audience characteristics are different from mainstream audiences. subtitle translation and dubbing were produced for the film’s distribution abroad. subtitles and dubbing in movie translation are subject to different media transmission conditions and expected audiences, so there may be differences in the text content of the communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 3 two translation versions. foreign language subtitles mainly transform the auditory content of the source language into the text visual symbols of the target language, while dubbing transforms the auditory content of the source language into the speech auditory symbols of the target language. these two types of signs and symbols need to be synchronized with the image content (such as the beginning and end of the actor's speech and the mouth movements) to achieve the best viewing effect. subtitles and dubbing have their advantages and disadvantages. foreign language subtitles convert the speech of the source language into the text of the target language and present it to the audience. when watching it, the audience has a visual burden, which means they have to look at the pictures and read the subtitles. during that process, they often miss the important pictures, especially the facial expressions of the characters. while dubbing does not increase the visual burden of the audience and allow them to concentrate on the picture and plot, it lacks the touch (e.g. intonation) of the original voice. from the perspective of the three-dimensional transformation of eco-translatology, the key duty of subtitle and dubbing translation is to transform the source language of movies into the target language ecology in three dimensions: linguistic dimension, culture dimension and communicative dimension, to conform to the source language ecology as much as possible. in the process of transforming from the chinese context to english context, due to the influence of different factors such as translator, commercial operation and economic cost, the film content and emotion conveyed by subtitles and dubbing will be different. film is not only a cultural carrier, but also a commodity, and film translation can help the commodity create value in overseas markets. the difference between commercial film translation and other translations, such as science and technology translation, lies in its different functions, which have both active cultural transmission and entertainment functions. two different small translation ecosystems are derived from different audiences. for example, subtitle translation audience of ne zha is mainly fans who love chinese culture, while the small ecological participants of english dubbing translation are those who emphasize entertainment. these two small ecological audiences may also overlap. in terms of the communicative dimension, they all aim to achieve communication effect and commercial value, but the translation processes and forms are different. in different translation ecological environments, translators use different degrees of transformation from the source language to target language to adapt to the different translation ecological environments. 2. the film the distribution channels of the movie ne zha in north america include cinemas, dvd and the streaming media netflix. the american netflix version of ne zha is covered by the tv content rating system, and its tv-14 rating implies the program contains content that parents or adult guardians think is not suitable for children under 14 years old. there are two translation versions of the movie provided by netflix in america: a subtitle and dubbing version. the film was distributed in north america by the company “well go usa”. according to its official website, the company focuses on introducing movies from all over the world to north america and other places for distribution. in an communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 4 interview with xinhua news agency, annie walker, the chairman of the company, stated: “ne zha is an attractive animation film. we bring the english dub to north america because we hope to share the film with not only overseas chinese but also audiences from other ethnic groups. it's certainly a chance for a mainstream audience in north america to know more about chinese film and chinese culture.” it can be seen from that interview that the purpose of adding dubbing to movies is to cater to the mainstream, not just the minority fans of asian culture. this research randomly selected 30 english language films (released between 2000 and 2020) and compared their chinese subtitles and dubbing versions. it is found that there are few differences between those two versions. the few differences lie in certain words and phrases. the main reason for the differences is that dubbing is expected to match the mouth movement of the characters. the echoes what xiuyan jia, a famous film translator in china, said in an interview conducted by zhang (2020): “in cinema blockbusters, subtitles are expected to be the same as the dialogues, while dubbing texts should match the mouth movements. the textual differences between subtitles and dubbing arise because dubbing is supposed to match the mouth movements of characters.” after examining five other chinese films released overseas between 2015 and 2020, it is found that there is very little difference between the dubbed and subtitled versions. in comparison, there is a big difference between the subtitled and dubbed version of ne zha. the following is a detailed analysis of the differences between the subtitled version and the dubbing version of ne zha in three dimensions: linguistic dimension, culture dimension and communicative dimension. although this paper lists three dimensions for discussion, sometimes the two versions are converted in two or three dimensions at the same time, so the analysis of these dimensions is not strictly separated during the discussion. 3. three-dimensional analysis 3.1 the linguistic dimension by comparison, it is found that the text conciseness of subtitle and dubbing versions is very similar. first of all, the author uses antconc corpus software and microsoft word software to count the number of words and finds that the dubbing version contain slightly more words. the english spelling of the subtitle version is ne zha with a space in the middle, while the dubbing version uses “nezha”, with no space. to reflect the actual number of words more truly, the researcher changed all the english spellings of “ne zha” in the two versions into nezha and compared the number of words. after this processing, it is found that the number of types and tokens in the dubbing version is 2.7% more than that in the subtitle version, with the difference being small. according to the calculation made by microsoft word, the number of words in the dubbing version is 1.7% more than that in the subtitle version. antconc treats words with apostrophes such as “won't” as two separate words, so the number of figures counted is more than that counted by word. by comparing the word frequency lists, it is found that the top ten words in the list are almost equivalent in the two versions, which shows that the basic vocabulary usage of the two communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 5 versions is similar. when the list was examined further down, it is found that the dubbing version contains 71 “huh?”, but the subtitle version does not have this word. this shows the difference between the subtitles and dubbing, that is, dubbing can express questions or rhetorical questions through voice intonation, to achieve the purpose of conveying information. table 1: comparison between the subtitled version and the dubbing version types (antconc) tokens (antconc) words (ms) the top ten words on the frequency list subtitle 1418 7687 7385 you, the, i, to, ’t, a, it, is, of, and, dubbing 1456 7894 7505 you, i, the, ’s, to, it, and, ’t, a, that after carefully comparing the two versions sentence by sentence, great differences were found in the textual content of the two versions. the dubbing version is more colloquial, while the subtitling version is larger and more difficult. the definition of big and difficult words means that these words appear less frequently in english. the following is an example showing the difference of vocabulary use between the subtitle and dubbing versions. example 1 chinese: shīfu pài wǒ hé shīdì qián qù shōufú (02:03:62) subtitles: my master sent me and a fellow discipline to subordinate it. dubbing: so my master, the supreme lord of heaven, sent my brother and i to put a stop to the chaos. in the above example, for the translation of the original chinese word “shōufú”, the subtitle version uses the formal word subdue, while the dubbing version uses “put a stop”, an informal colloquial phrase. also, the dubbing version adds explanatory information “the supreme lord of heaven”, to the translation of “master”, so that the audience can better understand the master's status and why the master can send them to complete tasks. in the cultural dimension, this information is added to the translation to adapt to the cultural environment of the target language. the author invited a native english speaker (british, adult, male, numbered: nativee) and a near-native english speaker (chinese, adult, male, numbered: nearn) to compare the predicate verbs of the corresponding sentences in the two versions one by one, and calculated the number of large words and small words in the two versions. the list is as follows. the chi-square test of these 87 samples with spss shows that the corresponding significance p-value is 0.000 (close to 0)<0.05, which indicates that the frequency of using large and small words in these two versions is different and statistically significant. in the linguistic dimension, the dubbing language is colloquial and easy to understand. from the perspective of communication, dubbing emphasizes communication, namely, communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 6 entertainment, focusing on helping the audience understand the dialogues and making them laugh. table 2: use of large vocabulary in two translated versions from the above data analysis, it can be seen that the big-word style in subtitle translation is more in line with the linguistic dimension of the original chinese, while the dubbed small word style is more suitable for the linguistic dimension of the english target language targeting the children audience. the subtitle translation of ne zha retains the language style of chinese as much as possible and adapts to the language style of the target language to a limited extent. this shows that translators made adaptive choices of the language forms in the process of translation. that is to say, in subtitle translation, the language features of chinese are fully transferred in english subtitles; however, dubbing translation is more suitable for the ecological environment of the target language, and it is more flexible in the linguistic dimension. 3.2 the cultural dimension the translation of movie dialogues is a communicative action across cultural differences. as a part of the film, film dialogues are also the carrier of culture. due to cultural differences, if the translation works do not effectively transmit cultural meanings, the works will not adapt to the cultural system of the target language translation ecological environment, which may lead to a communication failure. in the translation of swear words, the subtitle version uses literal translation, while the dubbing version tones down or omits those words. for example, in the mandarin version of the movie, there are such rude words as “niǎo mìng”,”qù sǐ ba”,”bài gè pì”, and”gǒupì”, and in the english subtitle version, they were translated as similar swear words: “screw you”, “go to hell with that” and “bull shit”. in the dubbing version, all these rude words are omitted, while the feelings or opinions expressed in the rude words are translated in non-taboo language. for example (see below), “screw you” in the subtitle version is a very impolite phrase in english, which expresses the attitude of “not accepting fate”, while the dubbing version directly expresses this attitude of “not accepting fate” without swearing. example 2: chinese: qù nǐ gè niǎo mìng subtitle: screw you! dubbing: 'cause it is not the boss of me. version large voc. frequency small voc. frequency total number nativee nearn nativee nearn subtitles 81 80 6 7 87 dubbing 6 7 81 80 87 communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 7 the core concept discussed in the film is to fight against fate, not fearing other people's judgment. this film is told from the perspective of china and chinese culture. the film’s transmission overseas can help more people understand chinese people and chinese culture. although the animation’s visual effect is on a par with that of the west, the film contains cultures unfamiliar to american audiences. if the audience does not know much about chinese people or mythology, they will not be able to understand cultural-specific jokes and stories. there are many references or lines similar to stephen chow's films in the story, such as “bù zhīdào wǒ néng bùnéng káng dé zhù”,”fàng kāi nàgè nǚhái” and so on. when dealing with these lines, the dubbing version uses free translation, and the meanings are quite different from the original chinese text. the following example illustrates how the line “tāmen jūrán néng káng dào xiànzài,” similar to that in one of stephen chow's movie, was translated. example 3: chinese: tāmen jūrán néng káng dào xiànzài. bù xiǎodé jiā shàng wǒ, dǐng bù dǐng dé zhù. subtitles: i can't believe they're still holding on. if i jump in, i wonder if they'll survive. dubbing: how dare they not invite me to join in... i love a good party. stay strong, you two. in the above example, the subtitle version’s meaning is close to that of the original. in comparison, the dubbing version is more idiomatic and colloquial, conforming to english language habits. its meaning far from the original, but the communicative purpose is similar to that of the chinese original, namely, entertainment. the dubbed version focuses on helping the audience understand the dialogues and making them laugh. from the linguistic dimension, the language is colloquial and easy to understand. 3.3 communicative dimension besides the transformation of linguistic dimension and cultural dimension, ecotranslation also includes the adaptive selection transformation of communicative dimension, that is, adaptive selection and transformation of communicative intention between the source language and target language is needed. in the communicative dimension, the ecological environment of film translation focuses on factors such as the communication effect and commercial value of the source language and the target language. this adaptive choice transformation of communicative dimension requires the translator to “focus the adaptive selection on the communicative level and ensure the communicative intention in the source text is reflected in the target text” in addition to the transformation of linguistic information and the transmission of cultural connotation. (hu, 2013:237).” the communicative function of language in commercial movies can be understood as the function of arousing people's reaction, that is, entertainment function. if these different translation methods can be tailored to serve different target audiences, and achieve a communication effect similar to that of the original film, the maximum commercial value can be achieved, that is, the maximum communication function. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 8 to analyze the feedback and viewing needs of the audience, the author collected the comments the audience posted on the website of internet movie database (imdb, 2019). the viewers leaving their comments on imdb.com include both movie theater viewers and netflix viewers. in addition, the author interviewed three american netflix viewers whose native language is english. according to the analysis, it is discovered that the audience of american cinemas is mainly overseas chinese, as well as a minority of english-speaking audience who cannot speak chinese. the dubbed version is more suitable for non-chinese speakers looking for entertainment. the subtitle version is suitable for chinese culture fans, or chinese language learners who can listen to the mandarin audio and read the english subtitles to absorb the contents of the original film as much as possible. for example, a viewer named david m comments: the story is wonderful and the animation is excellent. if you watch it on netflix, even people like me who can't speak mandarin should watch the version with mandarin audio track and english subtitles. english dubbing [quality] is not worthy of such a good film, and it is far from subtitles. according to various comments on imdb, for those who want to learn chinese culture, they generally expect the subtitle version to convey chinese culture as completely as possible. however, the english subtitles of ne zha are fast, and reading those subtitles requires a high level of fast reading. for example, some viewers commented: “the subtitles can pass by very fast and/or get lost against the background, so get ready to read fast.” another viewer commented: “the freaking subtitle will blow your brains out, it's like decoding the entire story from start to finish! feels like your starting to learn english while still in your mom's tummy.” it can be seen that subtitles are not easy to read for every audience member. however, dubbing requires lip-synching, which requires more work for dubbing actors and translators. for example, a viewer commented: “i started watching dubbing, but i hated that the audio track didn't match the character's lips, so i immediately switched to the subtitle version.” it can be seen that the synchronization of audio track and lips is very important for some viewers to watch the dubbing version. therefore, high-quality dubbing production is also very important for film communication. although the dubbing production of the film is flawed in terms of lipsyncing, it was generally praised by the audience. for example, a viewer named westsideschl said: “english voicing, often shaky in asian films, was quite modern western & culturally appropriate.” one netflix viewer interviewed by the author said: “apart from some chinese names such as taiyi zhenren, the dubbed english is very idiomatic. the dubbing can score 9 points out of 10.” in this research, foreignization and literal translation used in the subtitled version, and free translation and communicative translation methods used in the dubbing version, are explained from the perspective of eco-translatology. the translators of the subtitle version chose to work within the constraints of the original text, while the dubbing version overturns its constraints. it can be seen that the translator has made different choices and adopted different translation strategies to adapt to the two small ecological environments. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 9 4. refining eco-translatology the purpose of the english translation of ne zha is to create income, publicize chinese culture and promote the development of the animation industry. based on the analysis, the subtitle and dubbing translations of the movie ne zha have well realized the transformation of linguistic dimension, cultural dimension and communicative dimension, and the translated texts have well adapted to the translation ecological environment. the translation of the film assists in the transmission of the film, thus achieving the functions of entertainment and china's “international communication”, and increasing the audience's positive impression of china. interpreting the differences between english subtitles and dubbing from the perspective of “three-dimensional transformation” in eco-translatology can help us better understand the translation process and results of the film, and provide a great reference for similar cultural communication in the future. according to the eco-translatology viewpoint, translation success is determined by the translator's degree of transformation in these three dimensions. the higher the degree of “three-dimensional transformation”, that is, the higher the degree of “degree of holistic adaptation and selection”, the better the quality of the translation (hu, 2004:214). in the dubbing translation of commercial films, the adaptive choice transformation in the communicative dimension is the key point in three-dimensional transformation. it is especially necessary to ensure that the communicative intention of the original film (that is, entertainment and creating commercial value) is reflected in the translation to create economic benefits. hu gengshen believes that translation should not only minimize the ecological damage of the original text but also best maintain the ecology of the translated text (hu, 2013:240). due to the film rating system in america, the dubbing of ne zha eliminates swearing words, adapts the culture in the source language, and makes a large number of dialogues colloquial, which damages the ecology in the original text to a great extent, but the translation achieves a better effect in the target language context. therefore, to evaluate whether the dubbing translation of ne zha is the best, we should not only look at whether it keeps the original ecology, but more importantly, whether it adapts to the translation ecology. as for the communicative function, hu gengshen did not define it in detail in his book eco-translatology, while nida's exposition discussed it more deeply. hu gengshen translated his term “jiāojì wéi” as “communicative dimension” in glossary, the main terms of eco-translatology in appendix 2 of his book. communication here is the activity or process of expressing ideas and feelings or of giving people information. and what is communication in commercial movies? what does a film production company want to communicate with the audience? the definition of communication needs to be broadened for the research of film communication. in its broad sense, it is emotional communication through visual and auditory stimulation, arousing audience resonance and entertaining audience. nida maintains that “translation is a kind of communication” and “the meaning and intention of the original text must be clearly reflected” (nida, 1969). nida made a comprehensive analysis of his “functional equivalence” theory from all aspects, and put forward that “translation is communication”. nida included the reader communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 10 response theory, and fully considered the receptive ability of target readers. the author believes that nida's functional equivalence theory can better explain the communicative dimension transformation of english subtitles and dubbing in ne zha. given the commercial nature of the movie ne zha, using the concept of translation economics for reference will help increase the understanding of the translation of ne zha. from the perspective of translation economics, the subtitle and dubbing translation of ne zha is “both an investment and a commodity (xu, 2014:35)”. the cost of dubbing was relatively low because no tv or movie celebrities were invited to do the dubbing. the distributor was cautious and did not allow much additional expense, hoping to get a certain amount of profits with limited investment. in terms of the economic benefits of film translation in north america, the subtitle translation product is more suitable for the cultural needs of the niche market (chinese cultural fans), while the goal of dubbing translation is to meet the needs of the public. ne zha’s box office in the us exceeded three million dollars, while other chinese animations brought to america such as journey to the west: return of the great sage, and white snake: origin, grossed less than one million dollars. so in comparison, ne zha has made great progress in economic profits. although the success of a chinese film in north america is closely related to the quality of the film itself, the role of translation cannot be underestimated. the success of chinese film culture export largely depends on subtitles and dubbing. references box office mojo. 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(2020, 2020-08-29 ). a dialogue with the film translator jia xiuyan (in chinese) [与电影字幕翻译贾秀琰对谈], the paper ((澎湃新闻)). retrieved from https://www.thepaper.cn/newsdetail_forward_8913150 this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. http://www.thepaper.cn/newsdetail_forward_8913150 01.v02issue01.05.2022.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 1 chinese-to-english metaphor translation in ecological discourse from the perspective of relevance theory haihong xie1 1 college of foreign language studies, guilin university of technology, guilin, guangxi, china, e-mail: 853931433@qq.com abstract metaphors in chinese ecological discourses convey the ecological concept, culture, and philosophy with chinese characteristics. this study attempts to explore metaphor english translation strategy and method in terms of the subtitles of an ecological documentary song of life (shēng mìng zhī gē) under the guidance of the relevance theory. it is found that 1) both direct and indirect translation strategies were adopted along with four different metaphor translation methods: metaphor vehicle retention ranking first (most frequently used), followed by metaphor vehicle omission, conversion, and addition in a descending order; 2) these four translation methods in their own context ensure that an optimal relevance between the chinese metaphor and its english translation is achieved in the ostensive-inferential process to help the audience understand the chinese ecological ideas. finally, two suggestions of metaphor english translation are put forward for translators who involve themselves in chinese ecological discourse translations. keywords: relevance theory, optimal relevance, song of life, metaphor translation 1. introduction with the continuous progress of china’s ecological civilization construction, chinese ecological discourse works are bountiful in multi-modal forms. song of life ( / shēng mìng zhī gē ) is a large-scale ecological documentary jointly produced by china central television and yunnan province to welcome the 15th conference of the parties to the united nations convention on biological diversity on november 30, 2021. china’s unique ecological wisdom, the documentary intends to send a message that while china is promoting modernization in the new era, it also pays attention to the construction of ecological civilization. it is worth noting that, as an international documentary film for overseas, its subtitles are full of metaphorical arts. (note 1) subtitle translation is a way of pragmatic communication and cultural transmission; and the english translation of the chinese subtitles aims to transmit chinese culture abroad through pragmatic communication. this documentary produced by china cctv is a crystal of chinese wisdom, showcasing rich and flexible translation strategies and methods of ecological discourse with chinese characteristics, which demonstrates the continuous progress in the translation and dissemination of chinese ecological discourse. by selecting the subtitles of our homeland ( / wǒ mēn dē jiā yuán) in song of life as the research corpus, this paper intends to analyze the strategies and methods of the english translation of subtitle metaphors from the perspective of pragmatic relevance theory. 2. theoretical bases 2.1 relevance theory and translation the most important theoretical research of studying translation from the perspective of pragmatics is relevance theory (xu & liu, 2021). relevance theory was first proposed by sperber &wilson (1995) in relevance: communication and cognition, first developed from the relevance principle in the grice’s cooperative principle, which treats the communicative behavior of language as an “ostensive-inferential” process. this process includes two aspects (speaker and hearer )of communication, involving information processing by the speaker and the hearer. the speaker provides the hearer with certain information through ostensive communication behavior. from the perspective of speaker, communication is an unmistakable signaling process; from the perspective of the hearer, it is an inferential process; that is, the hearer infers the speaker’s communicative intention through the information explicitly provided by him (huang & sun, 2011). the earliest application of relevance theory to translation studies was wilson’s student gutt. he emphasized that the most important principle to grasp in the communicative behavior of translation is to find the optimal relevance (gutt, 2004). relevant translation theory regards translation as a cognitive reasoning act and a communicative behavior involving brain mechanisms. this communicative act consists of two explicit-reasoning processes: (1) the author of the original text communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 2 expresses their communicative intention to the translator, and the translator, as a reader, cognitively obtains the best connection based on the information, logic and encyclopedic knowledge in their own mind; (2) the translator, as a communicator, conveys the author’s explicit and communicative intention to the reader of the translation, while the reader of the translation has to reason according to the information, logic and encyclopedic knowledge in the brain provided by the translation, in order to obtain the best association with minimal reasoning effort (bo & sun, 2007). as for the second ostensive-inferential process, the translator plays the role of expressing rather than inferring, that is, in order to reduce the target reader’s reasoning effort and match his expectations, the translator should make the original translation clear enough (huang & sun, 2011). gutt (2004) also pointed out that the extent of the association is affected by the cognitive reasoning effort and the contextual effect. under the same conditions, a stronger association comes up with better contextual effect and less reasoning effort, and vice versa (xu & liu, 2021). in other words, relevance is proportional to the contextual effect and inversely proportional to the cognitive reasoning effort expended. therefore, what the translator needs to do is to “seek the best correlation from the communicative behaviors expressed by the original communicator, and then pass this correlation to the receptor; that is to say, the translator transmits his own understanding to the receptor” (zhao, 1999). 2.2 metaphor and translation metaphor was first regarded as a rhetorical device; then the publication of the book metaphors we live by by lakoff & johnson in 1980s changed that. metaphor study was then ushered into a newly cognitive field. lakoff & johnson (1980) believe that metaphor is a way of cognition and conceptualization, a dual-domain mapping from the source domain to the target domain, and metaphors are everywhere in people’s life. metaphors not only reflect but also construct reality. furthermore, they influence and construct our perception and understanding of things, and prompt us to act (chen, 2014). metaphor translation has always been the focus of academic circles. gutt (2004) mentioned two main strategies in translation and relevance: cognition and context, direct translation strategy and indirect translation strategy. direct translation depends on the similarity between two languages, keeping both the content and the style of the two languages similar as much as possible; indirect translation is more suitable for a situation that there are a large number of gaps between the source language and the target language. therefore, in the case of retaining the basic literal meaning of the source language, the translator translates appropriately with expressions in the source language. metaphor translation is a crucial part of translation, which tests the translator’s skill of finding the optimal relevance with the author’s ostensive behavior of the source language, and of employing various translation strategies to convey the relevance to the audience. in this process, the translator becomes the subject of ostensive behavior, and the audience the subject of reasoning. the method of metaphor translation has always been under the spotlight of plenty of scholars around the world. for example, newmark (2001) proposed several methods for metaphor translation such as recurrence of metaphorical images, replacement of metaphorical images, conversion of metaphors into similes, omission of metaphors and etc. huang & sun (2011) summed up five metaphor translation methods from the perspective of relevance theory: 1) metaphor -> simile with metaphor ground (wang, 2007); 2) metaphor -> metaphor; 3) metaphor -> metaphor ground; 4) translation with footnotes; 5) non-metaphorical -> metaphorical. lu & chen (2020) explored the translation strategies and methods of chinese political discourse metaphors from keywords to understanding china (china international publishing group & china academy of translation, 2016), and summarized four english translation methods of metaphors: metaphor retention, replacement, omission, and addition in translation. the methods of metaphor translation that used by the scholars mentioned above have been list in table 1, from which it can be sorted out that four kinds of methods of metaphor translation are image (metaphor vehicle) retention, conversion, omission, and addition. (note 2) table 1 methods of metaphor translation used by different researchers lu & chen (2020) huang & sun (2011) newmark (2001) metaphor retention metaphor -> simile with metaphor ground; metaphor -> metaphor (with shared metaphorical culture); translation with footnotes conversion of metaphors into similes; recurrence of metaphorical images metaphor conversion metaphor -> metaphor (without shared metaphorical culture) replacement of metaphorical images; metaphor omission metaphor -> metaphor ground omission of metaphors metaphor addition non-metaphorical -> metaphorical communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 3 metaphor retention of lu & chen is a method that the metaphor vehicle of the source text is saved in translation to help readers’ direct understanding of the source text. the three methods that huang and sun summarized and two methods that newmark summed function the same in essence as metaphor retention to keep the metaphor vehicle staying put. metaphor conversion means replacing the metaphor vehicle in the source text with a familiar one in the target text. it is what huang and sun concluded that the metaphor is converted into another metaphor with a different vehicle. metaphor omission is to discard the metaphor vehicle to explicitly convey the essential meaning of the metaphor expression in case that there is no such metaphor vehicle suitable in the current context. and finally metaphor addition means adding a metaphor vehicle to better explicate the connotation of the original text. such four kinds of methods of metaphor translation are adopted by the translator to maximize the relevance of the reader to the original text, then to minimize the reader’s efforts to associate with the meaning of the original metaphor expression, and finally to help the reader get an utmost accurate understanding of the connotation that the author of the source text wants to express. metaphors exist in all discourses; however, few ecological metaphor discourses have been studied till now. texts or discourses mainly aim for pragmatic communication, which endows ecological metaphor discourse a responsibility of crosscultural communication. therefore, this study, taking an ecological discourse (a documentary) – song of life – as a corpus, attempts to explore what metaphor-translating strategies and methods this documentary deploys and whether those translation methods help build an optimal relevance between the source and target discourses for cultural communication. and finally to better the dissemination of the chinese culture some suggestions for metaphor english translation are provided for an optimal relevance. 3. exemplification of english translation strategies of metaphors in our homeland from the perspective of relevance theory 3.1 statistics on metaphor translation strategies and methods according to gutt (2004), there are two metaphor translation strategies: direct translation and indirect translation, namely literal translation and free translation. and according to the previous studies, metaphor (vehicle) retention, omission, conversion, and addition are the main four metaphor translation methods to achieve the optimal relevance from the perspective of cognitive metaphor as it is mentioned in section 2.2. for the brevity of naming, this study refers to the naming that lu & chen (2020) give to the four metaphor translation methods. with a series of metaphor identification and annotation, the metaphor translation methods used in our homeland were identified, and the results are shown in table 2. after this, a detailed explanation for each category of the four metaphorical translation methods will be exemplified. table 2 statistical table of metaphorical translation strategies and methods in our homeland translation strategy translation method example cases (percentage %) literal translation metaphor retention (lǜ shǔi qīng shān jiù shì jīn shān yín shān): green water and green mountains are golden and silver mountains (bèi yù wéi zhí wù dē nuò yà fāng zhōu) referred to as the noah’s ark of plants 27(61) free translation metaphor omission (rèn shí tā de lú shān zhēn miàn mù) know who they are 14(32) metaphor conversion (chūn tiān dē yǔ lǜ cuī cù zhē chá shù fā chū xīn yá) the dew in spring is an impetus for the tea trees sprout. 2(5) metaphor addition (fǎng fú yǒng héng yì bān dē xún huán wǎng fù) like an eternal cycle 1(2) total 44(100) 3.2 exemplification of english translation strategies of metaphors in the documentary the literal translation of metaphor guarantees the content and form of the source language metaphor consistent, though it is not a word-for-word translation. minor adjustments and revisions can be made to achieve the optimal relevance between the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 4 target audience and the source language author with the minimal effort. the main translation method in metaphor direct translation is metaphor retention. free translation of metaphor is a translation strategy adopted when the source language is metaphorically expressed in the target language culture while the literal translation cannot help convey the metaphorical meaning of the source language or will increase the reader’s reasoning effort. three methods mainly used of the free translation for metaphor include metaphor omission, metaphor conversion, and metaphor addition. 1.2.1 metaphor retention metaphor retention is used firstly when the metaphor is shared by both two cultures; that is, tenor and vehicle in a metaphor can be directly mapped from one domain to the other, and secondly when some certain purpose like underlining the culture difference is needed. it can be seen from table 2 that metaphor retention is the one used most frequently among the four english translation methods for the subtitle metaphor in our homeland. e.g., (note 3) translation example 1. source text: source text romanized: rú jīn bǎi huā lǐng rén cái zhēn zhèng tǐ huì dào lē lǜ shǔi qīng shān jiù shì jīn shān yín shān target text: at present, people who live in baihualing find the true meaning of “the deep meaning of green water and green mountains are golden and silver mountains”. translation example 2. source text: 7.9 source text romanized: zhè lǐ shì zhōng guó xī nán yě shēng shēng wù zhǒng zhì zī yuán kù, 7.9 wàn fèn zhí wù zhǒng zī bèi fēng cún zài zhè lǐ, bèi yù wéi zhí wù dē nuò yà fāng zhōu target text: 79000 plant seeds are sealed here. it is referred to as the noah’s ark of plants. (note 4) the conceptual metaphor in the first example is green water and green mountain is golden and silver mountain. the tenor in the metaphor is “green water and green mountain”, which is likened to the vehicle of “golden and silver mountain”. this metaphor, meaning that protecting nature brings people continuous benefits, comes from the important concept first proposed by the general secretary of the chinese communist party xi jinping when he was the secretary of the zhejiang provincial party committee during his investigation in yucun, anji county, zhejiang province. although this metaphor is an expression with chinese characteristics, the concept words “landscape, gold and silver” shared by chinese and western cultures make their metaphorical meaning easy to understand. translating the chinese metaphor vehicle “ (jīn shān yín shān)” as “golden and silver mountains” directly builds a bridge of connotation with an optimal relevance between the target audience and the original author, and also conveys the cultural characteristics of the source language. moreover, a direct translation of such kind of metaphor conceals an aim of spreading the foreignness of the chinese culture abroad. in the second example, the conceptual metaphor is germplasm bank is noah’s ark. the metaphor vehicle “noah’s ark”, however, is different from that kind of example 1, since the vehicle of noah’s ark originally belongs to western culture. as a symbol of sanctuary, noah’s ark derives from the bible which tells that god assigned noah to build a ship that protects people from flood. in this sentence, the author intends to express that the germplasm bank of wild species in southern china is a hub with abundant plant seeds, which can prevent the extinction of plant species in the world. therefore, this bank is similar to the function of noah’s ark in the bible. since the vehicle of the metaphor in the source language is “noah’s ark”, culturally consistent with the target language, the audience hardly needs any reasoning to understand the source text. so, it is the best choice to save the metaphor vehicle the noah’s ark in the target text to achieve the optimal relevance between the target audience’s reasoning and the source author’s explicit results and to facilitate the readers’ highly-efficient understanding of the chinese metaphor. 1.2.2 metaphor omission metaphor omission is also frequently adopted in the c-e translation of metaphors in the section. this method is mainly used in the case where the metaphor vehicle of the source language culture misses in the target language one, and at the same time there is no synonymous vehicles to replace the source one. or it is deployed purposely to disseminate the metaphorical meaning straightforward. e.g., translation example 3. source text: (note 5) source text romanized: ràng wǒ mēn kàn yī kàn, rèn shí tā de lú shān zhēn miàn mù communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 5 target text: we can have a look at them and know who they are. this metaphor originates from a yunnan villager when he was interviewed after seeing that the asian elephants from afar had eaten his crops. the conceptual metaphor in this example can be inferred as asian elephant is mount lu. "the real face of mount lu ( /lú shān zhēn miàn mù)" is an ancient chinese verse, from su shi’s poem “i don’t know the real look of mount lu because i am over there”( , /bù shí lú shān zhēn miàn mù, zhǐ yuán shēn zài cǐ shān zhōng), which is featured with the unique chinese culture. “true look of mount lu” means the original appearance of something. given a lack of the culture of the metaphor vehicle “lushan” in western culture, it is difficult to find a suitable metaphorical expression corresponding to western culture. besides, this metaphor came from a character’s oral language, so for the purpose of brevity, the metaphor is omitted in the target line to achieve an optimal relevance between the target audience and source author through free translation. 1.2.3 metaphor conversion metaphor conversion refers to the method of conversing a metaphor in the source language into a new metaphor in the target language. this translation method is rarely used in the corpus examined in this study because it has plentiful restrictions when applied. whether the two cultures partially overlap in terms of metaphorical expression is still a question, and even if there is such an overlap, it is not reasonable and appropriate to do metaphor-replacing since the number of metaphors that can be fully consistent across cultures is limited (huang & sun, 2011). there are only two sentences in the documentary taking this translation method, and here is one of them. translation example 4. source text: source text romanized: chūn tiān dē yǔ lǜ cuī cù zhē chá shù fā chū xīn yá target text: the dew in spring is an impetus for the tea trees sprout. at the first glance, it is hard to find out the metaphor vehicle directly in the source text of this example because the vehicle is replaced by the other expression with the quality of the covert metaphor vehicle. however, after inferring, the vehicle can be identified as “people”, and the conceptual metaphor of the original text of this example is dews in spring are people in hurry, which means that all lives in nature are full of vitality in spring. here, the source domain “people” is replaced by the target one “impetus”, which preliminarily is a physical term referring to the driving force. since english culture has the metaphorical expression of "a is an impetus for b", while chinese culture does not, in order to make the meaning stay put, the metaphor in the source language is converted into another metaphorical expression that is familiar to the people who live in the target language culture, so as to shorten the gap for readers to understand and to achieve the optimal relevance with the source language author and understand the source language metaphorical meaning. 1.2.4 metaphor addition finally, metaphor translation can also adopt a reverse translation strategy, that is, adding metaphors in the target language which are missing in the source language. this target-text-oriented strategy is an extension of the source text, helping achieve greater relevance and better contextual effects, and considers more about the target language reader (huang & sun, 2011). however, this method of the english translation is the least used in this corpus, and there is only one case listed as below: translation example 5. source text: source text romanized: shān lù mián mián bù jué, tā fǎng fú yǒng héng yì bān dē xún huán wǎng fù target text: the mountain road is endless, like an eternal cycle. in this example, the conceptual metaphor the mountain road is an eternal cycle hides in this source text. in order to pass the non-metaphorical meaning of “reciprocity” to the target language audience, the translator adds a vivid and explicit new metaphorical vehicle “an eternal cycle” in the target language, helping the audience directly get the idea of what the source text means, which is more acceptable for the target language readers. adding such an explicit metaphor vehicle facilitates the readers to understand the source text quickly and accurately, cutting much effort for the target audience’s reasoning. 4. two implications for the translation of chinese ecological discourse the metaphorical english translation of our homeland provides the following two implications for the translation of chinese ecological discourse: communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 6 first of all, the principle of faithfulness needs to be followed in the english translation of chinese ecological discourse metaphors. it is actually why metaphor omission is applied so frequently that it ranks second among the four translation methods. yan fu, a well-known chinese translation master put forward three standards of translation “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” (wu & jiang, 2021), among which faithfulness as the basic principle requires translation text “faithful” to the connotation and the expression of the source one. connotation faithfulness means that the english translation of metaphors must, first of all, ensure an unchanged meaning of the metaphor. however, the metaphor itself carries much more meaning than its form presents, so that translation of metaphor drains time and energy. to achieve a better effect of the translation, the form of that metaphor will be omitted usually only to save the basic meaning of the metaphor, especially in such case that there is no such expression of the original metaphor. besides, subtitles of the documentary fleets so fast that too many metaphor expressions saved will leave the translation space insufficient. and finally the target-text readers need to put into much more efforts for an optimal relevance from the ostensive behavior of the source language author. so, on such normal occasions, omitting the missing metaphorical expression in the target language makes an optimal relevance between the source text and the target text. second, foreignness has to be guaranteed in english translation of metaphor when metaphor connotation between the source text and the target one gains optimal relevance. song of life, produced to transmit chinese ecological concepts, is an ecological documentary with chinese ecological philosophy,. in this documentary all language expressions including these metaphors carry a different culture from that of countries abroad, aiming for chinese culture transmission. therefore, among these four methods, metaphor retention was deployed most frequently. bhabha (1994) reckoned that the “foreign” element reveals the interstitial…that has to be engaged in creating the conditions through which “newness comes into the world”. the “newness” or “foreignness” of the source language emphasizes its cultural difference from the target one yearning for a cultural realm of the country who speaks that language. to complete the mission of spreading chinese culture internationally, the translator needs the foreignization strategy as a guide during the translation work. this translation strategy is well-advocated by venuti (1995), who considers it to be “an ethnodeviant pressure on [targetlanguage cultural] values to register the linguistic and cultural difference of the foreign text, sending the reader abroad”. that is to say, the translated text under the guidance of foreignization is responsible for attracting foreign readers’ attention to chinese culture. with both retentions of internal meaning and external form of the metaphor in this documentary, the audience of the english subtitles can link their inference maximally to what the author of the chinese ones; meanwhile, typical chinese ecological concepts underlying in these chinese metaphor expressions can be understood and transmitted to another culture. 5. conclusion the construction of ecological civilization has been highlighted unprecedentedly in state governance and administration since the 18th national congress of the communist party of china (li, 2020). metaphor is not only a cognitive model but also a complex linguistic and cultural phenomenon (huang & sun, 2011). metaphors in chinese ecological discourse reflect unique chinese culture and philosophy. china’s ecological discourse competitiveness in today’s international community needs help foreign translation of discourse. however, metaphorical discourses cannot be simply translated literally to realize sending chinese culture abroad; on the contrary, specific translation strategies and methods should be seriously considered. this study examines the metaphor translation strategies and methods of our homeland in the chinese ecological documentary song of life and explores how these different methods of translating chinese metaphors facilitate an optimal relevance between the target readers and the author of the source subtitles from the perspective of cognitive translation studies. it is found that among the translation methods, metaphor retention is most frequently applied, then metaphor omission, followed by metaphor conversion and addition. this result shows that chinese ecological discourse mainly deploys the translation strategy of foreignization for cultural output. superficially, there is some attenuation of the relevance between the source text and the target one because of the cultural gap. but due to the universality of the ecological expressions to some extent and the similarity of the form of the metaphor, the audience of this documentary can obtain an optimal relevance during their own referential processing. also, despite that translators have achieved the optimal relevance between the target audience and the original author by adopting the different translation methods mentioned above when translating different metaphors, it should be pointed out that these methods cannot be adopted without any conditions. before choosing translation strategies and methods, translators are suggested to first identify necessary factors such as translation purposes, target audiences, text types, and styles; 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(1999). the explanatory power of relevance theory for translation( ). modern foreign languages( ), (03), 276-295. notes note 1: the website link of song of life is https://tv.cctv.com/2021/10/22/vide7k8agfejxafwaa6zyf3x211022.shtml. note 2: metaphor ground means the essential same quality between the tenor and the vehicle of a metaphor. note 3: the tenor is the thing being described and the vehicle is the figurative language you use to describe it. note 4: “it” here refers to “the germplasm bank of wild species in southern china”. note 5: “ (tā)” in the source text refers to the asian elephants seen by the villager. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/ microsoft word 02issue2021 22 communication across borders: translation & interpreting issn 2766-791x vol. 1 no. 2; 2021 www.jhkpress.com “functional equivalence” cases in e-c translation of long sentences in est text and their implications to translation teaching hu cheng (程虎) school of foreign languages, binzhou university, china e-mail: chenghucn@163.com the research is financed by 1. science and technological development project of binzhou city(滨州市社会科学规划课 题 no.2015zc0118); 2. the art and science project of shandong culture department (山东省艺术科学重点课题 no. zx2015091); 3. key project of social science planning in binzhou (no.16-skzc-7); abstract english for science and technology (est) translation plays an increasingly significant role in the scientific field. compared with the general non-technical english, est is characterized by its extensive use of long sentences containing enormous amounts of information and complex structures. there are great differences in sentence patterns of est and of chinese for science and technology. through case studies, this paper explores the emerging “functional equivalence” cases in chinese translation of long sentences in est by analyzing the text hypotaxis-prominent english sentences, which are compact in structure. in contrast, parataxis-prominent chinese sentences are loose in structure. the paper induces that as the effect of est (one of the information typed texts) on the reader is more univocal than other texts because it aims to convey information to the reader and requires high accuracy. the paper argues that functional equivalence theory can guide the teaching of est translation due to the fact that it emphasizes the target reader’s response. keywords: functional equivalence theory; est long sentence; translation 1. introduction with the reform and opening-up of china, many western translation theories and standards have been introduced into the country. for example, peter newmark, one of the communicative school representatives, has made great contribution, arguing that communicative translation attempts to produce an effect as close as possible to that obtained on the readers of the original. in nida (1986) ’s view, translating activity consists in reproducing in the receptor language the closest natural equivalent of the source-language message, first in terms of meaning and secondly in terms of style (hu, 1996). there are complex structures and varied modifiers in est long sentences, so it is more difficult for readers to grasp the meaning of est long sentences. nida put forward functional equivalence theory and held that translation means reproducing resource message by most natural equivalent language from semantics to concept to get a more comprehensive understanding. this theory could act as a standard applied in the translation of est long sentences (he, 1998). in translation activity, it is necessary for translators to learn the function of the texts and understand the differences in expression between the source language and target language to achieve functional equivalence and ensure accuracy and objectivity of translation (gu, 2017). researches abroad and home are mostly based on functional equivalence theory or est long sentences separately and few combines them both. according to huang (2017), when translating est long sentences under the guidance of functional equivalence, these four strategies can be taken into consideration: reference, substitution, omission, and lexical articulation to achieve articulation and coherence in the translation. this paper makes a general description of est and its characteristics from the syntactical level of the long sentence. it represents the application of functional equivalence in the translation of est long sentences and suggests translation methods on the rhetoric level under the guidance of nida’s functional equivalence. 2. functional equivalence theory in the 20th century, translation began to be studied scientifically and systematically. different schools of western translation theories have their own perspectives toward translation. as one of the most well-known translation theorists and linguists, eugene a. nida puts an emphasis on the outcome of what the reader has received. the emphasis on the outcome is more suitable for translating materials requiring higher accuracy. 23 2.1 definition of functional equivalence theory according to nida, in translation “functional equivalence” should be achieved between two languages rather than the rigid correspondence of words. this theory states that translating is a communicating process, and what the reader has received is emphasized. “translating consists in reproducing in the receptor language the closest natural equivalent of the sourcelanguage message, firstly in terms of meaning and secondly in terms of style.”(nida and taber 1969:12) that is to say, nida believes that the meaning of translation is more important than the form. 2.2 the development of functional equivalence theory the development process of functional equivalence theory can be generalized into three phases (fang, 1989). in the first phase is from 1959-1964, translators emphasized the connection between “dynamic equivalence” and “formal equivalence.” in 1964, his book toward a science of translating first put forward the idea of “dynamic equivalence”, in which one should aim at establishing a dynamic relationship between receptor and message. in other words, dynamic equivalence gives priority to the receptor’s response with less consideration on the form. differently, formal equivalence pays much attention to the form of text. the second phase is from 1969 to 1984. in his book language, culture, and translation, nida (1969) clearly considers “dynamic equivalence” as “the degree to which the receptors of the message in the receptor language respond to it in substantially the same manner as the receptors in the source language.” the concept “formal equivalence” was also replaced by the concept of “formal correspondence,” which is opposed to “dynamic equivalence.” the third phase is from 1984 to the present time. in 1986, “dynamic equivalence” was replaced by “functional equivalence” in nida and de waard’s co-authored book from one language to another. he pointed out that what makes “functional equivalence” unique is that it prioritizes the receptor’s response instead of the verbal consistency between the original and the receptor’s language. according to nida’s theory, “the focus of translation should not be the way of displaying, but to be the response of reader to the translated version” (tan, 1999), which should be contrasted with the possible response made by readers to the original text. 2.3 key points of functional equivalence theory there are three aspects in nida’s functional equivalence theory. the first one is lexical equivalence, the second one is syntactical equivalence, and the third one is discourse equivalence. nida (1978) suggests that meaning is the most important, and form comes the second among these three aspects. if the change of form is still not adequate for expressing the semantics and culture of the original text, the translation technique of reinvention can be used to solve the translation issues derived from cultural differences. 3. an introduction of english for science and technology 3.1 the classification of english for science and technology est (english for science and technology) covers a large scope. in english varieties and translation (文体与翻译), liu (1998) briefly described his opinion on est, arguing that est is generally written or spoken english regarding science and technology. he also attempted to classify est into five categories for a better analysis of their characteristics: 1. scientific and technological books, scientific research papers, scientific and technological reports, experimental reports and schemes; 2. all kinds of scientific and technological information and written materials; 3. manuals describing the structure and operation procedures of machines, instruments, meters, machinery, etc.; 4. terminology can be used in talks, meetings and conversations concerning science and technology; 5. oral commentary or written captions are used in scientific and technological films and videos. 3.2 previous research on translation of est it is believed that est first came into being in the 1950s, along with the development of science and technology. during the 1980s, studies on est translation and theory were comprehensively conducted. a large number of papers about est translation study were published in china’s highly influential journal chinese translators (中国翻译), founded in 1979) in order to explore translation theory and to find efficient translating skills. the journal discusses extensively the translation of pragmatic styles. another journal on translation is the chinese science and technology translators journal (中国科技翻 译) founded in 1988. as a leading journal for est, the journal aims to encourage the study of theory and practice of translation, facilitate the study on est translation. est translation study advanced enormously in1980s thanks to the abovementioned journals as a platform. li (2009) believed that the terms, logic, formulas, tables and numbers in est texts should be understood and translated accurately; est translators should express concisely and smoothly and conform to the international standards when rendering style, terms, abbreviations, symbols, formulas and measurements, etc. from a stylistic perspective, fang (1989) 24 pointed out that literal style and technical style are interpenetrated due to translators’ emotional expressions in certain types of est translation. therefore, est translation can be persuasive rather than uncreative and unimaginative. 3.3 syntactic characteristics and long sentences of est compared with literary language, est has remarkable linguistic features, mainly in two aspects: lexical and syntactic. many technical terms can be found in the lexical aspect, which requires translators to consult the relevant professional books to a great extent. words are the basic units of sentences, according to statistical material. in est articles, on average, the number of words in an est sentence is from 20 to 30. est is more academic, containing more words and compound sentences than other types of articles. 3.3.1 the differences between english and chinese long sentences english is hypotaxis-prominent, while chinese is parataxis-prominent. english sentences are well structured, while chinese ones are loosely structured. english is used to putting the main point in the sentence-initial subject, then adding additional elements into it, while chinese is used to stating first and commenting then. a long sentence refers to a simple sentence that contains pretty phrases attributive and adverbial or refers to the subordinate clause that contains various clauses. est long sentence is more flexible in connection mode. nida points out that the accuracy of content should not be judged primarily in terms of “being true” to the author but is not causing misunderstanding of the message by those for whom the translation is intended. therefore, when translating an est long sentence into chinese, one should reorganize the sentence according to chinese means of expression so as to ensure natural translation. 3.3.2 syntactic characteristics of est generally speaking, est sentences are expressed in a well-organized and original structure to achieve a scientific style, objectivity, conciseness and formality. in some cases, one paragraph is even made up of one single sentence. in nida’s theory, functional equivalence translation is defined as “the closest natural equivalent to the source-language message.” in order to accurately understand the meaning of words, context must be taken into consideration. based on the study of est texts, there are several syntactic characteristics of est long sentences, including the wide use of nominalization structure, passive voice and non-finite verbs. 3.3.2.1 nominalization nominalization generally refers to the conversion from a verb or an adjective into a noun or noun phrase grammatically, which essentially conveys an equivalent meaning with its correspondent verb or adjective. considering the priority given to the receptor’s response, the content implied by the nominalization words should be preserved and efficiently communicated by making necessary formal changes that may even depart from the english text. therefore, converting noun phrases into other forms of the phrase will make the translation easier to understand for chinese receptors (see the following examples collected from the practical context). example 1 source text: harmonization of the definition of “producer,” “distributor,” “placing on the market” in all two directives would solve this problem. translation:一旦将两项法规中“生产者”和“分销商”,“投放市场”和“上市”的概念进行统一,这些问题将迎刃而 解。(yīdàn jiāng liǎng xiàng fǎguī zhōng “shēngchǎn zhě” hé “fēnxiāo shāng”, “tóufàng shìchǎng” hé “shàngshì” de gàiniàn jìnxíng tǒngyī, zhèxiē wèntí jiāng yíngrèn'érjiě.) -translation by the author cheng hu, same as below unless specified here in the english version, the nominalization of the verb “harmonize” is to lay stress on the action, thus making it the subject of the original sentence. due to the difference between the linguistic patterns of the two languages, however, english language conveys the same meaning in a way different than chinese. in order to avoid translationese, the translation converted the noun “harmonization” into its verb form “harmonize” and, most importantly, adopted an “if” adverbial clause. although the new sentence structure totally departs from the original text, it effectively reproduces the meaning of the message and is quite acceptable for chinese receptors. 3.3.2.2 passive voice passive voice is extensively used in est to emphasize objective facts and stress the most important information in the sentence. in est texts, most sentences are impersonal ones, because it usually makes a concise and objective description on the object, not emphasizing the behavior conductor. at least one-third of verbs in est texts use passive voice. in this way, the sentences seldom start with “i,” you,” or “the operator to show the subjective attitude of the source language (see the following example). 25 example 2 source text: when the exploration has been completed, all test holes and pits should be carefully filled to prevent human and stock injury and compacted to prevent leaks. translation: 勘察完成后,应仔细填实所有试验孔和实验坑,以防止人员和牲畜受伤,同时应将其压实以防 止泄露。(kān chá wán chéng hòu ,yīng zǐ xì tián shí suǒ yǒu shì yàn kǒng hé shí yàn kēng, yǐ fáng zhǐ rén yuán hé shēng chù shòu shāng , tóng shí yìng jiàng jī yà shí yǐ fáng zhǐ xiè lòu.) in this sentence, “has been completed” is translated as “完成后” (wán chéng hòu) instead of the directly translated version as “被完成,” because est texts focus on objectivity and authenticity of the expression, the translation ought to pay more emphasis on the meaning of the source text instead of linguistic structure. therefore, according to nida’s translation theory, this sentence should be translated using an active voice in chinese and keeping the original subject. 3.3.2.3 non-finite verbs est requires explicit and concise description, so the use of non-finite verbs is more frequent than daily english. infinitive verbs, participle and gerund, are usually adopted to replace the function of the clause (see the following example). example 3 source text: by the time of the montevideo meeting, ninety-eight countries had ratified the pop treaty, committing themselves to remove the “dirty dozen” chemicals from international commerce. translation: 在蒙得维的亚会议上,九十八个国家批准了《持久性有机污染物公约》,致力于将“十二金刚”这 些化学物质驱逐出国际贸易。(zài méng de wéi de yà huì yì shàng, jiǔ shí bā gè guó jiā pī zhǔn le chí jiǔ xìng yǒu jī wū rǎn wù gōng yuē , zhì lì yú jiàng “ shí èr jīn ɡānɡ ” zhè xiē huà xué wù zhì qū zhú chū ɡuó jì mào yì). in this sentence, “committing” is a present participial phrase that served as an adverbial modifier, complementing those ninety-eight countries’ efforts for the treaty. 4. application of functional equivalence theory in the teaching of est long sentence translation each language has its own special features; est is also no exception and has its own terminology, sentence order and patterns, unique discourse structures, etc. in the teaching of translation practice, many translation methods and skills are adopted so as to establish a relationship between the translated text (chinese) and its chinese receptor, which is expected to be substantially the same as the relationship between the original message (in english) and the english receptor. 4.1 the way of testing nida’s theory in est translation in nida’s functional equivalence theory, the translation of est is divided into two steps under the guidance of functional equivalence; that is, the lexical equivalence and the syntactic equivalence. in addition, the discourse equivalence is also highlighted in translation. at the lexical level, for the translator, the beginning of the translation process involves understanding the meaning of the words. scientific articles mainly deal with the science and technology arguments or illustrate some natural laws, scientific principles and phenomena. in order to make the translation more conforming to these professional words in a specialized field, the translator is required to devote more energy to accumulating and understanding more background knowledge. then syntactically, extensive use of passive voice is the most distinctive feature of est. generally speaking, the passive voice always puts more emphasis upon the subject to highlight the important science issues so as to accurately convey the scientific information in all-around aspects as far as possible to make the readers grasp the core points of the texts easily to achieve equivalence in syntactical level. the long and complex english sentence structure is featured with the use of a variety of modifiers, phrases, coordinate components and subordinate clauses; on the contrary, chinese prefer to use short sentences, relying on the inner meaning to express the logical relationship in the sentence. therefore, when translating long and difficult sentences, the translators should first read the whole sentence to grasp the core part of the sentence. that is to say, analyzing and finding out the subject, the predicate and object is the crucial premise to understand the whole sentence. what’s more, much consideration is needed to give the tense, voice and tone of the sentence. finally, appropriate, cohesive words should be selected to translate these difficult sentences. discourse is a specimen of linguistic material displaying structural and semantic coherence, unity and completeness (nida, 1964). as nida put forward, the discourse as a whole plays a role of conveying a message, which is also called the text. the discourse is the essence of grasping the whole text. the equivalence at the textual level is mainly manifested by cohesion and coherence. in order to achieve correspondence in meaning and equivalence in function between source and target texts, it is essential for the translator to attach great importance to the expression of logical relation as well as the reasonable organization of content. 26 on the strength of previous research findings, this paper concludes four methods as follows to apply functional equivalence theory in the teaching of translating est long sentences. 4.2 following the original order when the thought and meaning of est are consistent with those in chinese in the matter of logical thought, sentence structure and spatial-temporal order, it is necessary to follow the original order, which acts as the preferred method when translating est long sentences. syntactically, it is the method to achieve functional equivalence easily because it can reproduce original information both in semantic and style (see example 4). example 4 source text: in this study, we took advantage of the exogenous administration of recombinant rankl as a means of synchronously inducing m-cell differentiation throughout the small intestinal epithelium to identify genes induced during the process of m-cell differentiation (yan, 2000) translation: 在本研究中,我们利用外源添加重组 ranel 作为手段在整个小肠上皮中同步 m 细胞分化,从 而去认定在 m 细胞分化过程中被诱导的基因。(zài běn yán jiū zhòng , wǒ men lì yòng wài yuán tiān jiā chóng zǔ ranelzuò wéi shǒu duàn zài zhěng gè xiǎo cháng shàng pí zhòng tóng bù m xì bāo fēn huà , cóng ér qù rèn dìnɡ zài m xì bāo fēn huà guò chéng zhòng bèi yòu dǎo de jī yīn ). the above example adopts the sequential method. its expression and logic structure are basically the same as chinese. the main part of the sentence is “we took advantage of...to identify...”, so it ought to put the main part first and then add an object, adverbial clause of purpose, the adverbial clause of manner and temporal adverbial into the sentence. 4.3 inverting the original order even though the translator could follow the original order when translating est long sentences that have similar word order and logic, quite a few est long sentences differ from chinese sentences in time sequence and logic sequence. in this case, translators should invest the original order, ensuring translation is more readable for chinese readers to achieve functional equivalence (see the following example). example 5 source text: it is fully as important that a machine element is made of a material that has properties suitable for the conditions of service as it is for the load and stresses to be accurately determined. translation: 荷载和压力应该计算正确,机器零件应该用性能符合工作条件的材料制造。这两者都是十分重 要的。(hèzǎi hé yālì yīnggāi jìsuàn zhèngquè, jīqì língjiàn yīnggāi yòng xìngnéng fúhé gōngzuò tiáojiàn de cáiliào zhìzào. zhè liǎng zhě dōu shì shí fèn zhòngyào de.) there are three clauses in this sentence; the first one is a subject clause lead by “that,” this subject clause including an attributive clause “that has properties,” the third one is the adverbial clause “as it is for the load.” analyzing the sentence structure clearly and comprehending relation and sequence among sentences would make translation easier to achieve equivalence between original readers and target readers’ responses. 4.4 division method in functional equivalence theory, when form and content run into conflict, content equivalence has priority over form equivalence. in some est long sentences, some phrases or clauses don’t have a really compact connection, and some structures are too complex to be translated as one chinese sentence. under these circumstances, the translator can consider the division method, dividing the source sentence into several independent chinese clauses to make sure translation is more acceptable for chinese readers (see example 6). example 6 source text: ms. jensen found herself in an awkward position: she was u.s. liaison to an agreement her government hadn’t ratified and overseer of a trove of information about chemicals over whose international fate she had no control. translation: 詹森女士发现自己处境尴尬:她虽然担任了此协议的美方联络员,但是她的政府并没有认可此 协议;她虽然监管着这些化学物质的重要信息,但是无法控制这些物质的国际命运。(zhān sēn nǚ shì fà xiàn zì jǐ chǔ jìng gān gà: tā suī rán dān rèn le cǐ xié yì de měi fāng lián luò yuán , dàn shì tā de zhènɡ fǔ bìng méi yǒu rèn kě cǐ xié yì ; tā suī rán jiān guǎn zháo zhè xiē huà xué wù zhì de zhòng yào xìn xī , dàn shì mó fǎ kòng zhì zhè xiē wù zhì de ɡuó jì mìng yùn). in this sentence, the main clause is “ms. jensen found herself in an awkward position,” the content after the colon is the explanation for the awkward position, and “and” connects two conjunction components. as for “she was u.s. liaison to an agreement”, “her government hadn’t ratified” follows “agreement,” “overseer of a trove of information about chemicals” is 27 also a conjunction component, and “whose” leads the following attributive clause. this long sentence including several meanings; therefore, it can be divided into several short clauses. if the translator translates this long sentence according to the original order and form, the translation would be a rigmarole, and response correspondence can’t be attained. in the process of translation, adding some conjunction words is also an effective method to ensure expression is more fluent. 4.5 combination method when dealing with some est long sentences, using the above methods only may result in difficulty; as nida once said, “sometimes it is not only reasonable but also extremely advisable to reorganize the formal structure of the original text.” example 7 source text: rocket research has confirmed a strange fact which had already been suspected there is a “hightemperature belt” in the atmosphere, with its center roughly thirty miles above the ground. translation: 人们早就怀疑,大气层中有一个“高温带”,其中心在距离地面约三十英里的高空,利用火箭进行 研究后,这一奇异的事实已得到证实。(rén men zǎo jiù huái yí, dà qì céng zhōng yǒu yí ɡè “ gāo wēn dài ”,jī zhōng xīn zài jù lí dì miàn yāo sān shí yīng lǐ de gāo kōng, lì yòng huǒ jiàn jìn xíng yán jiū hòu, zhè yī qí yì de shì shí yǐ dé dào zhèng shí). this sentence can be divided into four parts. “rocket...fact” is the main part of the sentence, “which” introduces an attributive clause, “there is” leads an appositive clause, “with...” acts as s decorative component for “high-temperature belt.” after considering these four parts, the translator can translate the main part solely and combine the rest. based on the above discussion of four est translation methods, no matter whether literal translation or literal translation is employed, those four methods should be considered. one must not translate the message by matching the words or grammatical structure between chinese and english because a translator should strive for equivalence rather than identity. 5. conclusion as a kind of information type text, english for science and technology (est) is characterized by frequent use of nominalization, passive voice and non-finite verb at the syntactic level, and there is no uniform standard to guide the translation 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(1986). from one language to another. nashville: thomas nelson publishers. tan, z. /谭载喜 (1999). 新编奈达论翻译(in chinese) a new edition of nida on translation. beijing: beijing foreign translation press. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. 7-29-pb(revised)1.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 1 on the linguistic functions of foregrounding language in lawyer's defense statement: a case of wang chengzhong’s defense shuanghua peng1 1guangzhou huashang college, guangzhou, china, email: chaojilecam@foxmail.com funded project: research on the linguistic strategy of understatement in facts construction during trials from the perspective of multimodal narrative (2018wqncx313) abstract: a lawyer’s defense statement (hereinafter referred to as “defense”) is a typical persuasive discourse. this article takes the defense of second instance for the case of wang chengzhong which aroused heated discussions in 2019 as the research subject. the foregrounding language and its linguistic functions will be analyzed to find out how the lawyer tries to persuade others through the defense. it is found that the foregrounding language in the lawyer’s defense is primarily embodied by quantitative and qualitative deviations of language convention, and the latter is more than the former; typically, it realizes three metafunctions proposed by halliday, namely ideational metafunction, interpersonal metafunction, and textual metafunction. key words: lawyer’s defense, foregrounding language, linguistic function 1. introduction as a special kind of institutional discourse, lawyers’ defense is mainly used to persuade others, which include judicial personnel (such as judges and adjudicators) and the public participating in court trials. its ultimate goal is to maximize the interests of the parties concerned by reasoning and presenting facts. therefore, how to achieve a dynamic balance between effective reasoning and reclamation is a major challenge for lawyers in the process of writing a defense. foregrounding is one of the main concepts in the functional stylistic theory proposed by halliday. influenced by the views of mokarovsky, a famous linguist and literary critic of the prague school, halliday regards style as foregrounding, which however he pinpoints as “motivated prominence” and emphasizes that “a salient feature can only be foregrounding if it is related to the meaning of the text as a whole”. the so-called “prominence” refers to the deviation from the conventional language form, which can be either qualitatively prominent or quantitatively prominent, such as morpheme repetition, word repetition, or structural repetition (halliday, 1971; zhang, 1999) . halliday also believes that we should not distinguish between stylistic and non-stylistic features in the meaning domain of a text, and there is no linguistic area where style does not exist. he believes that linguistic function is the medium connecting linguistic form and situational context (halliday, 1971) . in its systemic functional grammar, the overall functions of language are grouped into three categories: ideational metafunction, interpersonal metafunction, and textual metafunction. ideational metafunction refers to the use of language to describe human experience, which can be further divided into experiential and logical functions; interpersonal metafunction refers to the use of language to construct relationships with others or society, reflecting the individuality and interaction of language at the same time; textual metafunction implies that language is used to establish and organize discourse sequence and information flow, as well as cohesion and continuity in the process of discourse development (halliday & christian, 2014) . over the past years, most of the research about foregrounding languages has focused on literature and translation (feng & dang, 2019; ma, 2017; wang, 2015; wu, 2016; zhang & liu, 2015) , or had discussions on the theoretical level of stylistics (deng, 1999; ma, 2008; wu, 2004, 2011; xu, 2011; zhang, 1994) , or given a comprehensive analysis of language deviation (gong, 2001) , there is very little analysis of foregrounding language and its functions in applied discourse (zhao & ji, 2009) . for this reason, this article takes the defense of wang chengzhong in the trial of second instance as the object of study, to discuss the foregrounding language and its linguistic functions in the defense of lawyers. 2. forms of foregrounding language in lawyers’ defense on september 3, 2017, judge wang chengzhong of the intermediate people’s court of liaoyuan city, jilin province was under criminal detention on suspicion of civil bending of law in an appeal case concerning a dispute over a forest land transfer agreement. the focus of the case was the transfer price of forest land. in the first instance, the plaintiff believed that it was 6 million yuan, and the defendant argued that it was 600,000 yuan. the first instance supported the plaintiff’s claim, and the defendant lost the case. wang chengzhong’s decision in the second instance remained the same, and the collegial panel agreed to his opinion, thus the second instance upheld the first instance’s verdict. on february 9, 2018, the xi’an district people’s this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 2 court sentenced wang chengzhong to three years in prison for the crime of perverting the law. wang chengzhong refused to accept and appealed. on november 22, 2018, the higher people’s court of jilin province decided to designate wang chengzhong and zhang daqing’s suspected civil law-bending case to be tried by the tonghua intermediate people’s court following the criminal second-instance procedure. (souhu, 2019) wang chengzhong’s defense lawyer xu xin delivered a statement of defense titled “the judge is the lord of the legal empire” during the trial, emphasizing that wang chengzhong as an excellent and just judge, would not bend the law and should not be subject to the penalty of three-year imprisonment. the following paragraphs will analyze how the lawyer’s defense intends to persuade the judicial officers and present audiences through foregrounding language based on quantitative and qualitative deviations from the language conventions. 2.1 quantitative deviation repetition is a typical prominence that quantitatively deviates from the conventions of language. in this defense, there are multiple repetitions of the same words, for example, 1) the 600,000 yuan agreement, although it was filed in the forestry station, the price was too low, which violated social consensus, violated the common sense of rational people, and violated the rule of thumb. (source: http: //www.defenselawyer.cn/article/lawnews/201905/23168.html, translated by the author) this is a typically spaced repetition. in response to the low-priced 600,000 yuan forestry agreement, the lawyer repeatedly used the verb “violate” thrice, indicating that wang chengzhong had no reason to accept the agreement. this not only strengthens the momentum but also highlights that the low-priced forest land transfer agreement is contrary to common sense. another example, 2) wang chengzhong, neither did he bend the law nor did he have any fault; instead, he was an outstanding judge, the first batch of outstanding judges in jilin province and the first outstanding judge in liaoyuan city. “outstanding judge” is also a spaced repetition, which appeared three times in a row, and the sentence structure was progressive. it transcended the conventional language background and formed a prominence, thus attracting the attention of the audience (xu, 2005) . 2.2 qualitative deviation rhetoric is the speaker’s (author’s) deliberate deviation from the language convention, which can form a prominent “foregrounding” language (ding, 2017) . in the defense of wang chengzhong’s case, the author found that the lawyer frequently used rhetorical questions, metaphors, irony, and analogy, which was impressive. 2.2.1 rhetorical question when the speaker breaks the normal thinking pattern and uses different grammatical structures, for example, expressing negation in a positive form, or expressing affirmation in a negative form will highlight the meaning to be expressed. statistically, 23 rhetorical questions were used in the second-instance defense in the wang chengzhong case. a rhetorical question is a figure of speech in the form of a question. it is a question that is asked to make a point: it does not need a reply. it will lead the hearer to understand the opposite content of the proposition, and negate the assertion in the affirmative yes/no question (express negation in the positive form), for example, 3) without receiving a penny from the party concerned or being treated to a meal, why did wang chengzhong take the risk of being held accountable for life to bend the law, and “learning from lei feng (doing a good deed) ” just to help li xiaoyan, a stranger, to seek huge profits? 4) looking at the whole case, there is no motive for judge wang chengzhong to deliberately bend the law. can you imagine a perverted judge who doesn't charge a penny? as its definition states, the rhetorical question is used to produce a dramatic effect or to make a point rather than to obtain an answer to the question (oxford, 2022) , the power of discourse is enhanced by this “foregrounding” means of expression, drawing the attention of the audience (or reader) to the point (deng, 1999) wang chengzhong is innocent. 2.2.2 metaphors the metaphor refers to comparing the object of thought with something else. it’s an obvious departure from the norm of language, a typical deviation in quality. 5) even if li xiaoyan defrauded, the facts of the fraud must be finally determined after investigation, review and prosecution, and trials of first instance and second instance, how can one expect that a civil judge is an investigator? the results of post-mortem investigation cannot be used to accuse judges who have previously tried civil cases of constituting crimes, otherwise “no snowflake will be spared”. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 3 “no snowflake is innocent in an avalanche” comes from the famous french thinker voltaire, indicating that when there is an avalanche, no snowflake wants to admit that he is the culprit of the avalanche, but if there is no snowflake, how come the avalanche? the lawyer quotes here to compare every judge as a “snowflake” including wang chengzhong and the judge present. the “distance” and heterogeneity between the signified and the signifier radiate and expand the meaning of the words infinitely; the sliding between the signified and the signifier also forms an unexpected sense of the picture, which is intriguing. 6) such cases and the vague judicial accountability system have become the “sword of damocles” hanging over the judges’ heads, which to a certain extent prompted the resignation of judges and prosecutors. the “sword of damocles” comes from a legend, expressing the danger that exists at all times, and implying caution in the face of serious consequences that may be brought at any time (baidu, 2020) . the lawyer uses this as a metaphor for the “fuzzy judicial accountability system”, which takes the advantage of concrete things to describe the abstract system, highlighting disapproval of china’s current judicial accountability system. 7) the court is the palace of the legal empire, the judge is the lord of the legal empire, and the judges are supposed to enjoy a high status and prestige. in ancient china, when the parties concerned visited the judge, the great master, they often had to kneel. the law as an abstract code of conduct is metaphorically referred to as an empire, the court as its palace, and the judge as its lord. the implied meaning of this is quite obvious, namely, the law is a sacred system, and the judges are the representatives of the implementation of this system with a high status; based upon this, they should be respected and even admired. in reality, wang chengzhong was reduced to a prisoner under the premise of no evidence. through metaphors, the lawyer foregrounds the meaning, alerting and even deafening the listeners. 8) the live broadcast of the trial made the case “a lively open class on the rule of law shared by the people across the country”. in this case, the court trial was open to the public at the strong request of wang chengzhong. the lawyer likened the live broadcast of the trial to an “open class on the rule of law”. the contextual gap between the signified and the signifier allows the combination of them to produce rich residual meaning and intermediate meaning. imperceptibly, the significance of this trial has been raised to the level of public demonstration, and it has created a great psychological constraint on the judge so that the judge has to be cautious of the judgment of this case. it is clear that, in the lawyer’s defense that focuses on facts, the appropriate use of metaphors to implicitly and restrainedly express what is meant will not only avoid direct verbal conflict but also highlight its implicature exceptionally. do what should be done and stop where one should stop. 2.2.3 irony irony refers to a word or sentence in which there is a conflict between the referent (actual meaning) and the signifying meaning (literal meaning) of speech (xing & xu, 2015) . it can be divided into exaggerated narratives, expressing contrary to what one thinks, and so on. 9) in the case being prosecuted today, if zhang chengzhong and li chengzhong were replaced, according to the provisions of the civil law and civil procedure law, they would still judge in this way, and if i were to judge again, i would still keep judging in the same way. according to such accountability, all judges in this district will be pushed to the dock (become defendants) within three years. the trial procedures of the civil cases that wang chengzhong is responsible for are in full compliance with the provisions of the civil law and civil procedure law, and any other person will enter the same judgment. the lawyer used an exaggerated statement, “according to such accountability, all judges will be pushed to the dock within three years”. this is questioning and ironic about the accountability procedures and case handling capabilities of the public prosecutors. although there is a certain risk in this expression, the reinforcement of the lawyer’s point of view cannot be denied. 10) retrieving judicial statistics, there are more than 30,000 retrial cases per year, and 37,598 cases in 2017. according to liaoyuan’s logic of allegation of crimes and conviction based on only one trial, as soon as the case is in a retrial, two levels of presiding judges will be arrested, whereas the number of judges nationwide is less than 120,000, all of them will be arrested in less than a year this way. absurd! similar to example (9), this is another questioning of judicial personnel’s professional logic. to highlight the necessity of procedural justice, the lawyer once again makes use of exaggerated narrative in irony to emphasize it, which is difficult to refute and will perhaps urge judicial personnel to make judgments more cautiously. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 4 2.2.4 analogy analogy refers to the similarity or comparison between two things that have some identical characteristics by which novel or complex situations and problems can be understood in terms of familiar ones. like the above rhetorical devices, it also belongs to the prominence that deviates from the conventional language in quality. 11) as guo changxing said, to help guo yonggui sell forest land on his behalf, there is no need to go through the transfer registration, which is not in line with the general situation of selling on behalf of others. the prosecutor asked me to help sell her house on her behalf. does she have to transfer the house to me first? in this analogy, rhetorical questions are also used to emphasize the non-necessity of helping to sell forest land after transfer registration. 12) do not think that when someone comes to the judge, the judge will bend the law to make a judgment. for example, i visited president zhang taifan and asked him to take care of wang chengzhong, the court finally made a fair judgment. can it be concluded that president zhang accepted xu xin's request? in this example, the people and things in front of the lawyer are used as an analogy to show the irrationality of the prosecutors’ logic of case handling. 3. foregrounding language and its linguistic functions in lawyers’ defense prominent features of stylistic value must be related to the context in which the text is produced. therefore, when discussing the functions of the above foregrounding language, we cannot detach from the discourse itself. according to halliday’s views on contexts of situations, any situation type can be characterized in terms of field, tenor, and mode (halliday & christian, 2014) , in other words, these are the three major contextual elements that form language characteristics. field refers to what’s going on in the situation (the ‘subject matter’ or ‘topic’); tenor refers to who are participants and the relationship among them in the situation; while mode refers to what role is being played by language and other semiotic systems in the situation, whether in written or oral, whether it is an explanation, comment or persuasion (the means of communication) (halliday & christian, 2014) . the subject matter of a lawyer’s defense normally is the crime and punishment of the parties concerned in the court trial; the participants of the trial include lawyers, judicial personnel, and bystanders in a court; and the defense is orally presented, but usually in prepared oral language. as halliday (1978) suggested, field values resonate with ideational meanings, tenor values resonate with interpersonal meanings, and mode values resonate with textual meanings (halliday & christian, 2014) . 3.1 ideational metafunction the representational meaning or ideational meaning of clauses is expressed by transitivity structures: what the clause is about, which is typically some process, with associated participants and circumstances (halliday & christian, 2014) . throughout the defense, more than half of the clauses use a material process, such as (1), (3), (10), and so on. this does not seem difficult to explain, since the subject of the defense is to judge the actions or behaviors of the parties concerned. second is the relational process, mainly intensive relation (x is a) (halliday, 1994) , such as (2), (6), (7). in example (2), wang chengzhong was identified as an excellent judge, and the lawyer tried to amplify this meaning through the language form of repetition, thereby generating another meaning: how does a good judge bend the law? different from (2), (6) and (7) show that it is unreasonable to charge wang chengzhong for perverting the law because of the accountability system and judges’ status. example (6) compares the “fuzzy judicial accountability system” to the “sword of damocles”, by which the lawyer intends to arouse the deep thinking of judicial personnel. (7) is the sublimation of the theme of the defense. judge is the lord of a legal empire, therefore, the judgment of wang chengzhong (a judge) is of great importance. all these are relational clauses of identity (a is the identity of x), as the lawyer tries to assign more value to the party concerned wang chengzhong, the court (judge), and the vague judicial accountability system to draw more attention of the judicial workers. 3.2 interpersonal metafunction as mentioned earlier, tenor values resonate with interpersonal meanings (halliday & christian, 2014) . the interpersonal meanings are expressed by the intonation contour; by the ‘mood’ element, which may be repeated as a tag at the end; and by expressions of modality that may recur throughout the clause (halliday & christian, 2014) . lexicogrammatically, there are mainly three types of moods realizing interpersonal meaning, including declarative mood, imperative mood, and interrogative mood. statistically, more than two-thirds of the foregrounding language in this defense adopts an interrogative tone, as shown in examples (3), (4), (11), (12), and the following. 13) if even the respectable judges are not safe, no one can feel safe, how to talk about the rule of law in china? communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 5 in the courtroom, lawyers read out their defenses to judicial officers. in addition to clearly stating the facts of the case, they are more eager to arouse the emotions of the judicial officers, and communicate with them efficiently through powerful dialogues, especially in rhetorical questions, which can stimulate emotions and highlight the nature of this dialogue (xu, 2011) . 3.3 textual metafunction mode values resonate with textual meanings. the textual meaning of the clause is expressed by what is put first (the theme); by what is phonologically prominent (and tends to be put last – the new, signaled by information focus); and by conjunctions and relatives which if present must occur in initial position (halliday & christian, 2014) . to better demonstrate how the above-mentioned foregrounding language realizes this function, the sixth subsection1 of the defense is excerpted for analysis: to protect and fight for the rights of judges from the cases of mo zhaojun, liu deshan, ma ruizhi and li jian to the case of jilin wang chengzhong and zhang daqing, the urgent need to protect the rights of judges has been put forward, especially the need to establish a system of immunity for judges’ acts of duty. for example, in the wang chengzhong case, it is inappropriate for the discipline inspection commission and the procuratorial organs to hold the judge responsible for the wrongful conviction before the result of the retrial of the civil case. on september 1, it was ruled for a retrial. the judge was arrested on the same day, and the longshan district procuratorate was designated to have jurisdiction. it is terrible to arrest the judge in such a hurry. retrieving judicial statistics, there are more than 30,000 retrial cases per year, and 37,598 cases in 2017; according to liaoyuan’s logic of allegation of crimes and conviction in the first instance, as soon as the case is in a retrial, two levels of presiding judges will be arrested, whereas the number of judges nationwide is less than 120,000, all of them will be arrested in less than a year this way. absurd! in the future, the judge's disciplinary committee should conclude on judges being suspected of a crime under the law before the judge is handed over to the judicial organ for handling. such cases and the vague judicial accountability system have become the “sword of damocles” hanging over the judges’ heads, which to a certain extent prompted the resignation of judges and prosecutors. it is necessary to resolutely investigate the responsibility of judges for breaking the law, and more than that, to have sound and powerful judicial guarantees, including job guarantees, economic guarantees, and especially security guarantees. the live broadcast of the trial of this case must have exceeded 10 million views, and it will become the most concerning case among chinese people, especially judges and prosecutors. the judgment must be made with caution. “the court is the palace of the legal empire, the judge is the lord of the legal empire”, and the judges are supposed to enjoy a high status and prestige. in ancient china, when the parties concerned visited the judge, the great master, they often had to kneel. however, in china, judicial authority is insufficient. judges, like lawyers, face various occupational risks. some incidents violate the occupational safety of judges, and there is also the phenomenon of arbitrarily holding judges accountable. wang chengzhong’s case is a typical one. if even the respectable judges are not safe, no one can feel safe, how to talk about the rule of law in china? the crime of perverting the law in civil judgment requires judicial personnel to deliberately violate the facts and the law to pervert the law. wang chengzhong handled the civil case, based on the rules of evidence, in the light of the facts that could be ascertained, and made a judgment according to law. the result of judgment was correct, the trial procedure was fair, and there was no fault at all, let alone criminal intent, let alone serious circumstances. on the contrary, wang chengzhong is a good judge. the jilin wang chengzhong case has aroused social concern, especially the concern of the judges, with the bizarre way in which the chief judge of the criminal court tried the chief judge of the civil court. it promoted the concept of procedural justice, prompted the popularization of the live broadcast of court trials, and may become the basis for establishing the immunity system of judges’ acts of duty. the wang chengzhong case will surely become a classic precedent for creating the boundaries of judges’ behavior, and a landmark case for safeguarding the professional rights of judges. jilin high people’s court and president xu jiaxin attached great importance to this case. the live broadcast of the trial made this case “a lively open class on the rule of law shared by the people across the country”. 1 for the convenience of analysis, the underlined examples that appear in this passage are renumbered as , which respectively corresponds to the above examples as (10) ( ), (6) ( ), (7) ( ), (8) ( ), (2) ( ), (13) ( ). communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 6 i believe the supreme people’s court is also paying close attention to it. i wrote three letters to president zhou qiang. wang chengzhong wrote two blood letters. if the personal rights of the judges cannot be protected under the law in this case, the enthusiasm of the judges may be undermined. dear judge, there is also a judge sitting in the dock. wang chengzhong, neither did he bend the law, nor did he have any fault; instead, he is an outstanding judge, the first batch of outstanding judges in jilin province, and the first outstanding judge in liaoyuan city. the commission for discipline inspection and the procuratorate did not find any problems in the strict investigation. wang chengzhong handled thousands of civil cases, and none of them were appealed for retrial. he has not been removed from office. he is still a judge and the head of a civil court. i should respectfully address him as judge wang chengzhong. however, he has been detained for 606 days so far, and he does not even know that his mother died. it is moving that he is still mentioning his mother during the court debate. i urge you three respected judges to protect the freedom and dignity of fellow judge wang chengzhong by the law and make a fair judgment that can stand the evaluation of hundreds of thousands of judges across the country and the test of history. the opening clause is the explicit starting point of the whole paragraph with a marked theme, namely, an adverbial modifier “from the cases of mo zhaojun... to the case of jilin wang chengzhong and wang daqing”, which provides the context for the whole passage, indicating the non-uniqueness of the case of wang chengzhong; while the focus of the whole sentence is on the rheme “the urgent need to…has been forward, especially the need to…”. this sentence has laid the foundation for the development of the following passage. the first clause makes use of irony, with a marked theme “according to liaoyuan’s logic of allegation of crimes and conviction in the first instance”. as the theme is not the subject of the entire statement, the irony is further intensified. after all, the lawyer could express in a normal statement that “two levels of presiding judges will be arrested as soon as the case is in a retrial, according to liaoyuan’s logic of allegation of crimes and conviction in the first instance …”, which is also a sarcastic questioning of judicial personnel’s professionality. however, in the former way, the whole sentence not only echoes powerfully with the call for the establishment of a system of immunity for judges’ acts of duty at the beginning but also coherently answers the previous “question” why “it is terrible to arrest the judge in such a hurry”. the second clause starts with “such cases and the vague judicial accountability system”, which serves as the subject and the theme, so the theme is unmarked; in the rheme, a metaphor “sword of damocles” is introduced as new information to highlight the implication of the ever-present danger, rather than the other way around. as a result, the risk of a “vague accountability system” is concretized and stressed through the prominent metaphor. furthermore, the metaphor, on the one hand, makes the depiction of the judicial workers’ resignation more natural, on the other hand, creates coherence between “sword of damocles” and the urgency of the establishment of a more sound and powerful judicial safeguard. the third narration contains two clauses, involving three interlocked metaphors (law-empire, court-palace, judge-king). the themes of the two clauses are “the court”, and “the judge” respectively, which are unmarked. in a way similar to the climax, the focal point of the whole narration is “the judge”, who is compared to “the lord”. based on this foregrounding metaphor, there was a contrast in the judges’ status between ancient china and current china. the status of judges has dropped dramatically, so the lawyer raised a rhetorical question naturally and reasonably at last, “how to talk about rule of law in china?” (clause ). as the subject is omitted, “how to” becomes a marked theme. this is not surprising, since the speaker wanted to give more force to the meaning of his words, namely, the judges should have had a sufficient sense of security, so a system of immunity for their duties is badly needed. it is seen that clauses and are combined coherently and cohesively to emphasize that judges are the backbone of the process of china's rule of law, with different foregrounding languages. similar to the structure of clause , clause has an unmarked theme, the live broadcast of the trial. likewise, the rheme introduces new information, “a lively open class on the rule of law shared by the people across the country”. this metaphor emphasizes the high degree of concern and modeling effect in wang chengzhong’s case. discursively speaking, the metaphor in the rheme foregrounded the significance of the trial of wang chengzhong’s case, as it will affect the future trials of similar cases, as it said, it may also corrode “the enthusiasm of the judges”. therefore, one cannot help but think about the necessity of establishing an immunity system for judges’ acts of duty. at last, clause starts with the subject “wang chengzhong”, an unmarked theme. repetitively, the theme is stressed as an “outstanding judge” three times. through the repetition, the lawyer seemed to foreground the excellence of the defendant judge, despite all the above reasoning, to further arouse the present judicial workers’ positive feelings towards wang chengzhong. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 7 from the beginning to the end, the above six clauses, no matter with a marked or unmarked theme, always centers on “the urgency of protecting judges’ rights, namely, establishing a system of immunity for judges’ acts of duty”. the elaboration is done from a variety of perspectives, including the logic of case handling, the harm of the fuzzy judicial accountability system, the status of chinese judges, and the professionality of wang chengzhong as a judge. with the adoption of different foregrounding languages, the lawyer highlighted his viewpoints in a top-down approach with different themes (the logic of allegation of crimes and conviction at the first instance, vague judicial accountability system, the court, the judge, wang chengzhong, etc.); and those languages are echoing with each other, making a cohesive discourse with prominent focus. 4. conclusion foregrounding means “motivated prominence”, and only when prominence has a certain function in the process of communication can it have the features of foregrounding language. through this concept of functional stylistics proposed by halliday, this article has discussed the specific forms of foregrounding language in lawyers’ defense, i.e. the quantitative and qualitative deviations from the language convention, and analyzed its ideational, interpersonal, and textual functions. specifically, more than half of the clauses in the analyzed defense use a material process, followed by a relational process. the reasons behind this are two-fold, one, the subject of the defense is to judge the actions or behaviors of the parties concerned; 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(2009). foregrounding of tv advertising language (in chinese, ). modern communication-journal of communication university of china ( ) (02), 68-69. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. v02issue01.05.2022.02.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 35 an evolution of lion dance in hong kong from the perspective of cultural symbols julin xu1, zhengqin liu2, kaiju chen3 1 school of english for international business, institute of hermeneutics, guangdong university of foreign studies, china, e-mail:20210320002@gdufs.edu.cn 2 faculty of english language and culture, guangdong university of foreign studies, china, e-mail: 20190100181@gdufs.edu.cn 3center of business culture and philosophy of culture, institute of hermeneutics, guangdong university of foreign studies, china; institute of advanced studies, university of chinese academy of social sciences, china corresponding author: kaiju chen, e-mail: 200010931@oamail.gdufs.edu.cn abstract the lion dance is a popular folk custom or living culture in hong kong. it is often performed during major festivals and celebrations. from three dimensions, this article illustrates the change in hong kong people’s attitude toward traditional chinese culture reflected by the lion dance as a set of cultural symbols in the social and historical context of hong kong since the late qing dynasty. specifically, in terms of cultural guarding, before the 1950s, the lion dance deeply reflected traditional chinese culture, that is, warding off evil spirits, guarding, and auspiciousness; in terms of diaspora and subjectivity, from the 1950s to the 1970s, lion dancers strongly exhibited the ideology of resistance and self-awareness as the chinese diaspora in hong kong; in terms of cultural hybridity and innovations, since the early 1980s, with the return of hong kong in 1997 and under the background of globalization and multi-culture, the lion dance is still a set of typical cultural symbols in hong kong, has been constantly innovated in terms of form, performance, communication, and the rest, and integrated into the global lion dance cultural community. keywords: lion dance, cultural guarding, diaspora, cultural hybridity, cultural innovations 1. introduction the lion dance is one of the traditional folk sports in china, with a long history and profound cultural implicature. nowadays lion dance is still a necessary program among the ethnic chinese all over the world on such special days as the chinese spring festival and various opening ceremonies. lions belong to a large powerful animal of the cat family introduced into china from west asia via the silk road (huang, 1936). in ancient times, what lions looked like was based on the gossip the ordinary people heard, except the emperors and families of power and influence had a chance to see these exotic beasts. in addition, due to no struggle for survival between ancient chinese and lions, a good imagination about lions became popular among the people. in comparison with lions, tigers as a native often had conflicts with the chinese people although they are also large powerful animals, thus, the painful experiences such as injuries even death haunted the people. in traditional chinese culture, tigers have either a good image or a bad image, but they are implied more derogatorily, for instance, to be nicknamed “the strong bullying the weak”, to be used to criticize the cruel government, “tyranny is fiercer than a tiger” (see the snake catcher by zongyuan liu, a poet in the tang dynasty), the four-chinese-character idiom “fang hu gui shan”, which means letting the tiger return to the mountain, i.e. to cause calamity for the future. by contrast, ancient chinese have shaped a positive or good image of a lion. after textual research, it is found that in the current academic circle, the origin of the lion dance often comes in various versions. for example, xue and wang (2021) argue that: 1) the lion dance was inspired by the dance of lion tamers from the western regions in the han dynasty. in general, a few lions maybe still alive after a long and arduous journey, and real lions only performed at the royal palace, so folk artists performed lion dances for the ordinary people by employing a papier-mâché lion. 2) in the wei kingdom of the three kingdoms period, the buddha parade was led by the masked people in hides acting as lions on april 4 day of the chinese lunar calendar, the manjushri’s birthday. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 36 3) the prototype of the lion dance was developed in the northern wei dynasty. the notes of buddhist temples in luoyang by yang xuanzhi talked about “lions lead the way to ward off the evil force” to describe the buddha parade in changqiu temple in luoyang. 4) lion dance was closely related to a mythical beast “nian”, who helped people out of plague; or to monster “nian”, who hurt ordinary people and destroyed crops. to sum up, on the one hand, the lion dance emerged and developed with the introduction of buddhism into ancient china, because of the lion as manjushri’s mount; on the other hand, it dated back to the magic rites or myths. since its formation, the lion dance was widely spread across ancient china. furthermore, due to a big difference between the south of china and the north of china in terms of culture, two styles of lion dance were gradually established with their characteristics, i.e., southern-style lion dance and northern-style lion dance. and lion dance in hong kong belongs to the southern style. 2. literature review academic research on the chinese lion dance dated back to the first half of the 20th century, and the early scholars counted the chinese lion dance as a living culture and carried on relevant research from the point of view of the “cultural identity” of the chinese nation (jian, 2021). research perspectives have varied greatly along with time vicissitude. the inheritance and modern development of the lion dance as a folk sport have been explored by different scholars. for instance, q. lei and j. lei (2017) analyzed the internal and external factors of the lion dance’s development in china, including its strengths, weaknesses, opportunities, and threats, found the existing problems, and put forward the countermeasures for its sustainable development strategy in an attempt to solve them; from the perspective of regional culture, i.e. lingnan culture (referring to the culture of guangdong and guangxi) and qilu culture (referring to the culture of shandong), zheng & zhang, et al. (2020) made an analysis and comparison of the content and characteristics of the lion dance as a folk sport. fan and yuan (2021), on the existing problems of the intangible cultural heritage of lion dance in china, such as lack of protection awareness and young inheritors, some countermeasures are put forward, including developing the platform and brand, expanding financing channels, continuously cultivating inheritors, adapting to the development of sports industry and tourism. in addition, relevant studies from the angle of sociology, communication, and dance have also been carried out, and the most commonly-used approach is to combine field investigation with the folk literature method. for instance, dong and zhu (2020) seek to construct the principles of chinese ethnic aesthetic culture through analyzing local performance techniques and body language of the dance drama “lion awakening”. furthermore, studies concerning lion dance from the perspective of culture are particularly flourishing, and scholars have discussed lion dance at all levels of culture. avaunt (2021), from the feminine point of view, has challenged stereotypes of traditional asian women through interviewing female lion players in boston’s chinatown in the u.s.a. and has argued the physical and mental functions of lion dancing for a rebuilding of the body against racialized and sexualized notions of bodily permeability. ying and chiat (2016) have looked into the concept of 1 malaysia from the angle of ethnic identity and cultural hybridity through analyzing the evolution (survival and change) of the diasporic chinese lion dance in malaysia, involving changes in the musical instruments, melody, and choreography. zhang (2021) attempts to construct ethical norms for the development of the asean dragon and lion dance to realize the goal of establishing an asean cultural community (zhang, 2021). xue and wang (2021) have found the cultural characteristics of guangxi malays, i.e. balanced co-existence between chinese ethnic culture and other ethnic cultures of malaysia, and their cultural identity, through surveying the lion dance troupe of selangor kuala lumpur guangxi association and their rituals, analyzing the political, religious and economic impacts from the anthropological perspective (xue &wang, 2021). to conclude, the previous studies of lion dance have been carried out from various aspects of culture, but scholars seldom systematically look into the evolution of its cultural symbols and explore the social and historical reasons behind it, although they have deemed “lion awakening” as a cultural symbol. hong kong, as a commercial port, gradually became a british colony after the first opium war (1840-1842). after the second world war, hong kong started accelerating its economy and was named one of the “four asian tigers” as the financial, service, and shipping center in asia. from 1842 to 1997, hong kong was playing a unique role in modern chinese history. this article, therefore, will focus on the lion dance in hong kong, and explore the evolution from the perspective of cultural symbols. 3. an evolution of lion dance in hong kong 3.1 guarding chinese traditional culture communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 37 in comparison with a relatively realistic image of the northern-style lion, the southern-style lion in china has a delicate animated image with a horn on its head. the northern-style lion dance in china shows a more fiercely lion and has integrated the movements of acrobatics and martial arts. comparatively speaking, southern-style lion dance is characterized by storytelling and symbolic meanings. according to the collection of chinese ethnic and folk dance (guangdong volume) (1996), during the ming and qing dynasties, the southern-style lion dance particularly prevailed in foshan town as one of four famous towns in ancient china. during the performance of the southern-style lion dance, caiqing is the most important and interesting part. lion dancers perform a series of moves to fetch bunches of lucky greens hung above. all the greens have auspicious meanings when calling their name in cantonese. lettuce, for example, represents “fortune”, celery, “diligence” and chinese spring onions “intelligence”. as the performance draws to a close, lion dancers will receive “lai see” packets, the red envelopes containing money commonly exchanged for bringing good luck and all the good things the greens symbolize. the lion dance inherited and guarded the traditional chinese culture. as above mentioned, the lion dance originated from magic rites or myths, the performers act like a lion by imitating such actions as jumping, scratching, and sniffing. in ancient china, through lion dance dancing, the performers were endowed with the magic or power and were involved in mythical imagination, which implies an action of a belief that ill-willed spirits will be exorcised, an abundant harvest of all crops will arrive in the next year and people will have good luck. it is through such symbolic actions that the lion dancers express their feelings and emotions. according to cassirer’s view, “without symbolism the life of man would be like that of the prisoners in the cave of plato’s famous simile, man’s life would be confined within the limits of his biological needs and his practical interests; it makes man find an access to the “ideal world” which is opened to him from different sides” (cassirer, 1944, p. 62). the prototype of the lion dance was deeply rooted in the agricultural civilization of ancient china, mirroring the feudal society where the emperor dreamed that a powerful lion can make the dream of his empire flourishing and invigorating come true. as barthes notes, “if one wishes to connect a mythical schema to a general history, to explain how it corresponds to the interests of a definite society—in short, to pass from semiology to ideology” (barthes, 1973, p. 138). all cultural symbols as a whole are integrated into the lion dance and the performers themselves. in other words, lion dancing, in some sense, is a folk art image full of the significance of symbol value. during the late qing dynasty, people from all corners of the country gathered in guangdong in order to make a living. far away from their hometown, they had to strive for wider living space and inevitably had conflicts with each other. resorting to violence became one of the most important ways to “solve problems”, so the martial spirit was encouraged here. naturally, only folk performances following martial spirit can survive and become popular, so did the southern-style lion dance. on the other hand, the chinese nation underwent a dramatic transformation at that time, but they still resisted bravely while persistently seeking a way to great rejuvenation. and the chinese nation was counted as a sleeping lion. these codes and signs are not universally given but are historically and socially specific to the particular interests and purposes which lie behind them (strinati, 2005, p.100). that means that symbols could be changed if the surroundings required it. the lion dance as a set of cultural symbols, therefore, had another meaning, attempting to shape a positive image that the chinese were vigorously striving forward instead of a negative image that the chinese looked like the sick and weak man. here cultural meanings of lion dance referred not only to such traditional meanings as guarding, exorcism, and auspiciousness but also to national salvation because no signs or symbols can be divorced from the social conditions where they are to be found. in the national crisis, the chinese national identity was constructed and the lion dance was consequentially deemed as a unique medium of the spirit of those days. undoubtedly, wong fei-hung is a witness to this historical period. wong fei-hung himself is an embodiment of or a cultural symbol of the chinese national spirit. in those days, lion dancing was considered as a necessary stunt for each martial club in guangdong. as the top 1 lion dancer in guangdong, wong feihung made great contributions to the development of southern-style lion dance. facing with gradual loss of independence and autonomy, the chinese people fought back. it was in the historical context that wong fei-hung successfully combined kongfu with the southern-style lion dance (zhang, 2013). here lion dancing was to build up the chinese people’s bodies from the outside and was to reflect the chinese people’s determination to transform the tragic reality from the inside. it can, therefore, be said that lion dance is not only a folk sport but also a symbol of arousing the chinese national consciousness. as seen in the series of wong fei-hung directed by hark tsui, as a master of nan quan (southern-style fist), wong feihung was concerned about his country, the chinese people, and the national future, and was shaped into a national hero, and his lion dancing was the high point of movies. in brief, from its opening as a commercial port in 1841 to around the year of victory of china’s resistance war against japanese aggression, hong kong was gradually developed into a crowded wharf where people generally worked as passers-by from a small fishing village, a barbaric area. at that time, canton, hong kong, and macao were blended into a communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 38 large region. hong kong people shared the same cultural identity with canton, the old name of guangzhou as the provincial capital. since hong kong was strongly affiliated with guangdong, there was no difference between the lion dance in hong kong and in guangdong. during this period, the lion dance in hong kong, to some extent, was still an integral part of southern-style lion dance, advancing with the times while ensuring traditional cultural inheritance. 3.2 diaspora &subjectivity as of the 1950s, a large number of chinese people from all over the country flooded in hong kong to take refuge. after that, the chinese people settling down in hong kong and their descendants have survived ups and downs. as the first generation of chinese immigrants spoke different dialects and had different folk cultures, what the concept of “hometown” or “cultural root” meant was quite peculiar for them. before the return of hong kong to the motherland, besides the chinese, there were the british governing hong kong, the indians from the former british colonies, the pakistanis and the ceylonese (now sri lanka), and those people from europe, the u.s.a., japan and the singapore doing business in hong kong; meanwhile, the chinese people accounted for a large proportion of hong kong’s population, but their influence was far less than the foreign personnel’s (zhou, 2019, chapter 1). in light of the diaspora which is the most distinctive feature of hong kong culture, the first generation of chinese immigrants far from their hometown urgently sought their roots, things relating to their ancestors, and attempted to find a sense of belonging. hence, they recollected and repeated their past experiences, which became a sort of symbolic memory. however, as imagination is an essential factor of true recollection, the meaning of those ancient symbols, in fact, is reconstructed on the ground of hong kong. since ancient times, lion dancing is still one of the most popular, typical, and traditional chinese folk performances, lion dance as a set of cultural symbols necessarily becomes one of the most important identity symbols of the chinese nation in hong kong. at that time, the first generation of chinese immigrants brought their common cultural memory back and found themselves through performing and watching lion dance. as most chinese immigrants came from guangdong, they naturally identify the cantonese culture as their cultural root. in the old days, in the 60s or 70s, there were street gangs and ordinary hong kong often suffered from bullying, so they felt compelled to learn chinese martial arts. because lion dancing itself integrates lots of martial arts, many lion dance troupes were established and various competitions were held among different martial clubs. meanwhile, fierce competition occurred between two styles of lion dance in hong kong, but the southern-style lion dance has prevailed. lion dancers in hong kong, in some sense, were imbued with “an ideology of rebellion” during this period. in the process of seeking the cultural root, the first generation of chinese immigrants and their descendants developed their self-consciousness or subjectivity and changed their identity from refugees to hong kong citizens and chinese citizens step by step (zhou, 2019, chapter 1). hong kong people have created their own local culture, namely, unique popular culture, while reinterpreting chinese cultural staples, which were greatly influenced by the diaspora and post-colonialism. it can be said that hong kong is keeping its chinese core alive, demonstrating chinese cultural traditions with fashion and elegance. as we know, a genuine cultural symbol is not inflexible, uniform but variable and mobile. as a classic cultural symbol, the lion dance in hong kong has developed its unique style. on the one hand, the lion dance firmly sticks to symbolic meanings of traditional chinese culture, for instance, warding off ill-willed spirits, good luck, and good fortune; on the other hand, the lion dance in hong kong creates a more carnival-like atmosphere, so entertaining feature and commercial values are highlighted, which very well reflects hong kong’s unique popular culture. as dancer-choreographer daniel yeung explained in chinadaily.com.cn dated october 19, 2018 (hong kong edition), “the lion dance symbolizes local cultural heritage for me. it is timeless: no matter how much hong kong society has changed, the dance is always there to represent us. 3.3 cultural hybridity& cultural innovations as hong kong is characterized by mass immigration and interracial communications, cultural hybridity becomes salient in hong kong. in the 21st century, hong kong people have changed their criteria of value judgment from hierarchy in social status in the past to freedom and equality at present (zhou, 2019, preface). hong kong gradually formed its own unique local culture, mixing with different cultures from different regions and countries. and lion dance witnesses the historical vicissitude of hong kong and perfectly demonstrates its hybridity--unique popular culture. it is only when we understand that all cultural statements and systems are constructed in this contradictory and ambivalent space of enunciation, that we begin to understand why hierarchical claims to the inherent originality or ‘purity’ of cultures are untenable, even before we resort to empirical historical instances that demonstrate their hybridity (bhabha, 1994, p. 55). as above mentioned, lions are non-indigenous species and were introduced in ancient china via silk road, and most of the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 39 ancient chinese people never saw them with their own eyes but relied on hearsay. after knowing a little bit about lions as a symbol of heterogeneous culture, ancient chinese people poured their own imagination into the symbol of lions, reconstructed the image of lions, created such chinese folk tales as a mythical beast or monster “nian”, and gradually developed different styles of lion dances in the light of regional cultural characteristics. it can be said, therefore, that the origin of lion dance presented the cultural hybridity from the outset. moreover, it is inadvisable to describe lion dance as the symbol of pure chinese culture, although people all over the world have reached a consensus on lion dance as a chinese tradition. in hong kong, lion dance is closely associated with hong kong people’s everyday life, integrating different cultural factors while inheriting traditional chinese culture. one of the most common ways to keep this cultural symbol alive is to participate in the lion dance competitions throughout the world, especially in southeast asian countries, as an international cultural exchange. in a lion dance competition, choreography, acrobatics, dangerous stunts, and intense rhythmic accompaniment become the elements of judging (ying & chiat, 2016). in this way, lion dance troupes from hong kong have learned from other troupes from other regions and countries and bring forth new ideas in all aspects of lion dance, keeping pace with the times. for instance, lion practitioners were all male, because, traditionally, on the one hand, the lion dance demonstrated masculinity, on the other hand, deeply influenced by traditional chinese ethics and the patriarchal clan system, women had no chance to learn lion dance in ancient times. with the improvement of social status and selfawareness, more and more women join lion dance troupes. in terms of management of the lion dance troupe, modern enterprise management system and modern marketing have been introduced, which is a big leap for any traditional lion dance troupe. according to chinanews.com.cn dated february 13, 2016, xiuming ouyang first set out to change the image of the lion dance troupe by means of staff regulations and rules because martial clubs in hong kong were closely related to the gangsterdom before the 1970s, then have studied the programs of business administration. she said, “in the past, the lion troupes thought everything would be all right if lion dancers performed, but now customers pay more attention to casting and service.” in addition, lion practitioners constantly explore a way to innovate lion dance. at the ninth edition of the new vision arts festival (nvaf) on chinadaily.com.cn dated october 19, 2018 (hong kong edition), choreographer and artistic director daniel yeung told a story of a mythical figure from the three kingdoms (220-280 b.c.) period named guan yu’s ride of 1,000 miles, by re-working traditional lion dances and merging with cantonese kung fu, visual and audio creations. he said, “the stories of guan yu led to the poetry in the performance from the purely solid physical works of dance and martial arts to the creative visual and audio multimedia theater.” it was reported on chinanews.com.cn (dated february 19, 2022) that fluorescent fabrics were made into lion costumes, the lion dance “handwork” was developed, and even “hip hop” music and dance were applied to give a new interpretation of lion dance. in the era of information, the transmission mode of lion dance in hong kong as a set of cultural symbols is no longer confined to live performance, and new media has become an indispensable mode. besides, new teaching methods are also adopted to attract young people to learn lion dancing. 4. conclusion nowadays, lion dance is still one of the most popular, characteristic, and traditional performances in hong kong. it has been an integral part of hong kong’s complicated history, witnessing its adversities and also its glories. on the one hand, as a set of cultural symbols, the lion dance has no substantial being. still, it perfectly displays its functional value, namely, representing different meanings at different times, for instance, exorcism, driving out evil spirits, auspiciousness, good fortune, protecting against harmful beings, etc. nevertheless, with the development of lion dance in hong kong, on the other hand, it has played double roles, namely, keeping traditional chinese culture and developing with the times, in order that young people are willing to inherit this cultural tradition and continuously carry it forward. references avaunt, c. 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[lion dancers under the lion rock]. : [chinanews: hong kong and macao news]. http://www.chinanews.com.cn/ga/2022/02-19/9680463.shtml this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. v02issue01.05.2022.02.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 26 domestication and foreignization in english versions of huawei’s new year messages from 2017 to 2022 huiying zhang1, zhanghong xu2, 1 school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, china, e-mail: 20200310048@gdufs.edu.cn 2 (corresponding author) school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, china, e-mail: 200311121@oamail.gdufs.edu.cn abstract new year message, an important source for understanding cultural differences, is understudied at present, in particular in the field of translation. based on xiong (2014)’s classification of translation strategies and translation methods, this paper investigates the english versions of huawei’s new year messages delivered from 2017 to 2022 from the perspective of domestication and foreignization. results suggest that (1) three translation methods are employed, namely literal translation, liberal translation, and imitation; (2) literal translation as a foreignization-oriented method fails to communicate the message of the source text in many circumstances and makes it difficult for the target readers to understand the target text since it retains the expressions that are unique in the source language; and (3) liberal translation and imitation as domesticationoriented methods help facilitate target readers’ understanding of the source text. the current study is believed to shed light on further studies on new year messages. keywords: new year message; domestication; foreignization; translation method 1. introduction delivering a new year message at the end of the year or at the very beginning of the next year is now a common practice in china (dong & xiong, 2012; zhu, 2015). new year message (hereinafter referred to briefly as nym), also called new year speech, new year greeting, or new year congratulation, is highly valued, for it shows not only how the speaker reflects on the past year but also how he/she upbeats about the future (zhang et al., 2016; zhang & zhang, 2017; zhu, 2015), thereby helpful in constructing one’s image (zhang, 2015). nym as a text that reflects contemporary thoughts and social change is worthy of being investigated (li & wang, 2014). indeed, since nym is delivered in certain cultural and historical contexts, it should be deemed as an important resource for understanding a specific culture. the nyms of southern weekly, for instance, embody the traditional beliefs in chinese society, namely righteousness, conscience, rationality, and humanity, in the summaries of what happened over the past years (dong & xiong, 2012). traditionally, nym is delivered by national leaders to their people (see e.g., arcimaviciene & jonaitiene, 2015; jiang & yang, 2019; čech, 2014) and publications and journals to their readers (see e.g., li & wang, 2014; peng, 2009; zeng, 2021). recent years, however, have witnessed an increasing number of nyms extended by companies, especially the companies that are influential industrially, nationally, or even internationally. huawei technologies co., ltd (hereinafter referred to as huawei), which operates in over 170 countries and regions and serves more than 3 billion people worldwide, is a case in point. as a leading global provider of information and communications technology infrastructure and smart devices, huawei has attracted the attention of scholars specializing in translation (see e.g., guo, 2020; ouyang, 2021; sun & sheng, 2017). however, relevant studies on the nyms delivered by huawei are in a way scarce although some scholars have studied huawei’s brand name (y. guo, 2020), product instructions (wang & gao, 2019), company profile (li, 2020), chairman’s message in the annual report (ouyang, 2021), and advertisements (sun & sheng, 2017). considering that the nyms of huawei are inevitably characterized by chinese culture in general and the organizational culture of huawei in particular, the current study takes the english versions of huawei’s nyms from 2017 to 2022 as a sample to discuss the translation strategies and methods used. the current study is structured as follows. after introducing the importance of nym, section 2 reviews the notion of domestication and foreignization, as well as relevant studies on nym. section 3 analyzes the domesticating and communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 27 foreignizing strategies in english versions of huawei’s new year messages from 2017 to 2022, followed by concluding remarks in section 4. 2. literature review this section provides an overview of domestication and foreignization, after which relevant studies on nym are summarized. 2.1 overview of domestication and foreignization the notion of domestication and foreignization was proposed by lawrence venuti, a famous american translation theorist, in his book the translator’s invisibility: a history of translation published in 1995. nevertheless, what should be noted is that it was friedrich schleiermacher, a german philosopher and theologian, who first introduced domestication and foreignization as contrasting methods (which were conceptualized as “entfremdung” and “verfremdung” by schleiermacher respectively). schleiermacher believed that translators using entfremdung “leaves the reader in peace, as much as possible, and moves the author towards him” while the translators employing verfremdung “leaves the author in peace as much as possible and moves the reader towards him” (qtd. venuti, 2008: 28). venuti further developed schleiermacher’s ideas of translation methods. venuti took schleiermacher’s entfremdung as a domesticating strategy (or domestication) and verfremdung as a foreignizing strategy (or foreignization). domestication, as venuti (2008) clarified, involves rewriting the source language and requires the translator to replace the cultural background of the source language with that of the target language. readers of the target text, therefore, should be prioritized and expressions commonly used in the target language should be employed. as a macro-level strategy, domestication narrows the distance between the target readers and the author both linguistically and emotionally. foreignization, on the other hand, places great emphasis on preserving the source language and the national characters presented therein because cultural differences are highlighted. the translator is expected to take the customs and linguistic characteristics into consideration, use the expressions derived from the source language, and convey the ideas of the author as accurately as possible. since foreignization is advocated to demonstrate the distinctive features of a specific culture, understanding the target text will be challenging to the readers. although domestication was popular at that time, venuti himself was inclined to adopt foreignization at the very beginning. venuti counted foreignization as a means for restraining the ethnocentric violence in translation, and for opposing the hegemony of english-speaking countries and their unequal cultural exchanges with other countries as he claimed that “foreignizing translation in english can be a form of resistance against ethnocentrism and racism, cultural narcissism and imperialism, in the interests of democratic geopolitical relations” (venuti, 2008: 16). the translator’s invisibility is a weird self-annihilation, a way of conceiving and practicing translation that undoubtedly reinforces its marginal status because it is partly determined by the individualistic conception of authorship that continues to prevail in angloamerican culture (venuti, 2008). hence, venuti advocated a non-fluent translation with a view to emphasizing the foreign identity of the source text and eliminating the invisibility of translators. although heated debate has been sparked about the use of domestication and foreignization since the notion of the two translation strategies was introduced into china (cf. sun, 2002; cai, 2002), more and more scholars have realized that domestication and foreignization are compatible with each other rather than mutually exclusive (see e.g., guo, 2008; xiong, 2014; yuan, 2010). yuan (2010), for example, advocated a combination of domestication and foreignization based on translation practice in reality. xiong (2014) further discussed such concepts as translation strategies, translation methods, and translation techniques, with a belief that domestication and foreignization merely demonstrated the tendency of the translator. venuti himself also explained in an interview that domestication and foreignization are not necessarily incompatible (guo, 2008; yuan, 2010). 2.2 previous studies on new year message nym, as a text that reflects contemporary thoughts and social change, is worthy of being investigated (li & wang, 2014). studies on nym did not flourish until the recent decades, whereas most of them are focused on the nyms extended by media and national leaders from the perspective of media communication, linguistics, and narratives. scholars specializing in media communication are one of the first that realize the importance of nym, given that nym is naturally connected with media communication. zhang et al. (2016), for example, have explored the topics of the nyms extended by southern weekly from 1997 to 2016 and how the collective memory of it varied with those topics. results suggested that over the past two decades, the role of southern weekly has evolved to be a “mixed” one from enlightener, communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 28 recorder/monitor, and interpreter, and that collective memory of the “golden age” of southern weekly has ever been constructed on social media. zhang and zhang (2017) conducted discursive research on how media established authority in media convergence based on the nyms delivered by 48 news outlets in 2016. it was found that the news outlets controlled by the communist party of china (cpc) established their authority by stressing the ruling legitimization of the cpc while market-oriented ones established their authority by emphasizing their performance, morality, and history. some scholars have discussed how national leaders use nyms to deliver their ideas of ruling. wang & zhang (2019) and tian & chen (2017) investigated the ideology and art of ruling presented in the nyms sent by xi jinping, concluding that xi jinping succeeded in helping enhance the dominant ideology in china (cf. li, 2015; li & ju, 2018; zheng et al., 2014). tong et al. (2018) analyzed the nyms extended by xi jinping from 2014 to 2018 based on coding theory and discourse analysis. findings indicated that the content of nyms collected and channels through which they were communicated were characterized with media convergence by being structurally stable, combing ideology with content, using natural and endearing words, being spread to the world via multimedia, etc. linguistic studies on nyms are relatively sparse with much attention paid to the nyms sent by national leaders (see e.g., alikberova et al., 2015; jiang & yang, 2019; wang, 2022; huang & zhu, 2018). arcimaviciene and jonaitiene (2015) evaluated the use of metaphor in the presidential new year greetings of twelve political leaders, using the analytical framework of critical metaphor analysis and procedurally employing pragglejaz group’s metaphor identification procedure. the evaluation of the 409 metaphoric clusters identified showed that hard and soft power skills within the ethical dimension were evoked by different political leaders. specifically, hard power leadership was more varied at the pragmatic, intermediary, and transactional levels of semantic representation, while female leaders were more democratic in their conceptualization and linguistic preferences than their male counterparts. the interpersonal function analysis of li (2018) on the nym for 2018 delivered by xi jinping demonstrated that using indicative mood helped narrow the distance between the speaker and the audience, thus making it easier for the audience to accept the information conveyed by the speaker. employing modal verbs, similarly, helped reveal the leader’s determination and commitment while using the first-person pronoun frequently implied that the leader stayed together with his people. čech (2014) conducted a thematic analysis of the new year speeches given by czechoslovak and czech presidents and proved that there were differences between the thematic concentrations in the speeches of presidents from the totalitarian period and the period of democracy although the relationship was not simple and direct. few studies have explored nyms from the perspective of narratives. dong and xiong (2012) discussed the characteristics of the narrative in 13 nyms of southern weekly, including highly political and representative events, a combination of macro and micro perspectives, praise and criticism, history and the present, as well as showing the beliefs of southern weekly. shi (2012) probed the nyms of southern weekly from its identity, topics, and outcome. in terms of the identity of southern weekly, the author believed that attention was turned to “us” from “the underprivileged”, “individuals”, and “citizens”. the topics, on the other hand, changed to “harmony” from “revolution”, “democracy” and “rights” while at the same time the nyms had become a national narrative rather than an individual narrative. zeng (2021) analyzed the nyms of people’s daily from 1979 to 2020 utilizing corpus linguistics and critical discourse analysis. the study concluded that three types of narratives were intertwined, in which the identity constructed by the collective-oriented narrative laid a solid foundation for the socialist-oriented and reform-oriented narratives while the latter two helped strengthen the identity by highlighting the remarkable achievements of the chinese people. despite the above-mentioned discussions on nym, few, if not any, scholars have explored nym from the perspective of translation. nym, which is naturally and closely linked to the cultural environment in which it is extended, is an important resource for discovering and handling cultural differences. given that translation is, likewise, a practice that deals with cultural differences, the current study aims to investigate how translators of huawei’s nyms address the culture-related problems from the perspective of domestication and foreignization. 3. domestication and foreignization in the english versions of huawei’s new year messages the current study adopts xiong (2014)’s classification of translation strategies and translation methods (as shown in table 1) as a framework for analyzing the english versions of huawei’s nyms from 2017 to 2022. a total of five nyms were collected since huawei did not extend an nym for 2021. three translation methods are identified in the current study, namely literal translation, liberal translation, and imitation, each with different translation techniques. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 29 table 1. xiong (2014)’s classification of translation strategies and translation methods translation strategy translation method foreignization zero translation transliteration word-for-word translation literal translation domestication liberal translation (paraphrase, idiomatic translation) imitation (addition, omission) variation translation recreation 3.1 literal translation literal translation requires the translator to follow the structure of the source text (st) and translate st without adding or omitting any information. by so doing, both the content and form of st can be retained, in particular the metaphors, imagery, and ethnic and local characteristics. translators using literal translation do not replace the words and rhetoric (e.g., metaphor) of st with the equivalent or similar ones in the target language, whereas they are allowed to change the lexicalsyntactic structure of st so that the target text (tt) will be comprehensible (xiong, 2014). literal translation is generally considered foreignization-oriented (xiong, 2014). readers usually find tt translated through literal translation hard to understand because the meaning of some expressions is not fully communicated as demonstrated in examples 1 and 2. example 1 st: 2022 st in pinyin: shǒu zài “wén zǐ lóng juǎn fēng” guó dù mǎ lā wéi de yī xiàn tuán duì, bāng zhù kè hù jiě jué jīng yíng kùn nán, huò dé gāo dù rèn kě. tt: in malawi, the field team earned recognition for helping our customers overcome operational difficulties in the middle of mosquito tornadoes. (nym for 2022) example 2 st: 2017 st in pinyin: yī qiè gōng zuò yào wéi rào zhòng liáng shi, dǎ liáng shi, tí shēng tǔ rǎng féi lì. tt: all managers must focus on creating value for customers, and work to “grow our crops, harvest the gains, and fertilize the soil for future business growth”. (nym for 2017) the tt of “ /wén zi lóng juǎn fēng” in example 1 and “ /zhòng liáng shi, dǎ liáng shi, tí shēng tǔ rǎng féi lì” in example 2 are confusing if the readers have little knowledge about chinese. “ /wén zi lóng juǎn fēng” in example 1 functions as an adjective for describing malawi across which a massive number of mosquitoes spread. if translated as “mosquito tornadoes”, however, it will be counted as “tornadoes composed of mosquitoes” literally, resulting in misunderstandings. “ /zhòng liáng shi, dǎ liáng shi, tí shēng tǔ rǎng féi lì” in example 2 was a slogan commonly chanted in china between the 1950s and 1970s when crop production was prioritized. ren zhengfei, president of huawei, who grew up in the sixties and founded huawei years later, used the slogan figuratively to encourage employees to enhance performance and improve management on many occasions, as a result of which the slogan has become part of the organizational culture of huawei. the tt of example 2 fails to convey the meaning of st considering that the metaphors of “ /liáng shi” and “ /tǔ rǎng féi lì” are not explained. foreignization-oriented as it is, literal translation may not cause trouble for the readers when the syntactic structure of st is adapted to that of the target language. example 3 st: 2022 st in pinyin: dào zǔ qiě cháng, xíng zé jiāng zhì, xíng ér bú chuò wèi lái kě qī. tt: the road ahead is long and hard. as long as we press ahead, we will reach our destination. (nym for 2022) communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 30 “ /dào zǔ qiě cháng” in example 3 is an expression from who is she?, a song created in the eastern zhou dynasty and collected in the book of songs, meaning that there is a long and difficult road ahead. “ /xíng zé jiāng zhì” is derived from an article titled cultivate yourself written by xunzi, a famous philosopher in ancient china, meaning that we will eventually reach our destination as long as we keep going. the tt of example 3 is appreciated because it expresses the meaning of st not only faithfully but also fluently. may it be not neatly and nicely structured as the st, it is comprehensible and serves the purpose of communication and cultural exchange despite the differences in ways of thinking in chinese and english. 3.2 liberal translation unlike literal translation, liberal translation believes that tt should communicate the message of st to readers naturally and fluently without much emphasis on form. as a domestication-oriented method, liberal translation centers more on the deeper meaning and cultural connotation of certain words rather than the grammar of the source language. two types of liberal translation are widely employed, i.e., paraphrase and idiomatic translation (xiong, 2014). 3.2.1 paraphrase translators using paraphrase interpret the st while not replacing the expressions of the st with the idioms of the target language. paraphrase is more likely used to translate the expressions related to ancient texts, poems, or historical figures in the source language because the meaning of these expressions will not be communicated accurately if translated literally. examples 6 and 7 demonstrate how paraphrase is used. example 6 st: 2020 st in pinyin: xiá lù xiāng féng yǒng zhě shèng. tt: fortune favors the bold. (nym for 2020) example 7 st: 2019 st in pinyin: tōng guò kǎo shì kǎo hé lái táo tài “nán guō xiān shēng” …… tt: we must use our examination and appraisal systems to weed out the experts who are no longer qualified. (nym for 2019) “ /xiá lù xiāng féng yǒng zhě shèng” in example 6 is a famous saying from the art of war, which originally means that only the brave will win in the battlefield. “ /nán guō xiān shēng” in example 7 is a name in chinese for those people who are unqualified but assume important positions. although chinese readers are familiar with these expressions, readers who know little about chinese culture may find them too obscure to be understood if no explanations are offered. apart from the information related to ancient texts, poems, or historical figures, paraphrase is also employed in translating elliptical sentences which are common in chinese. example 8 shows how paraphrase helps explain the elliptical sentences. example 8 st: 2020 st in pinyin: yào shí xiàn cháng tài huà de “néng shàng néng xià” …… tt: promotion and demotion is a fact of life for managers. this needs to be codified and incorporated into day-to-day operations. (nym for 2020) elliptical sentences are common in language use. the reasons can be both subjective as in expressing ideas as economically as possible and objective as in making expressions brief and concise with the help of various contextual factors (chen, 2005). nevertheless, chinese readers immersed in a high-context society depend more on contextual factors than english readers who belong to a low-context culture, as a result of which chinese readers are more likely to understand such expressions as “ /néng shàng néng xià” and paraphrase is necessary for english readers. 3.2.2 idiomatic translation idiomatic translation, unlike paraphrase, refers to borrowing similar expressions from the target language. as a domestication-oriented method, idiomatic translation not only makes the tt native but also serves the purpose of communication by borrowing equivalent or similar expressions from the target language. idiomatic translation is one of the most effective ways to translate idioms as illustrated in example 9. example 9 communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 31 st: 2017 st in pinyin: kēng qiāng mó lì yǒng liàng jiàn, xióng xīn zhuàng zhì zài xiàng qián. tt: moving forward, we need to hone our skills, step up to the plate, and aim for the stars. (nym for 2017) two english idioms are used to help english readers better understand “ /xióng xīn zhuàng zhì zài xiàng qián”. the idiom “step up to the plate” originally means that “(for a batter in baseball) to move near home plate in preparation for striking the ball when it is pitched” and is figuratively used as “to move into a position where one is ready to do a task” while the other idiom “aim for the stars” means “aspire to something” or “set one’s goals high”. the meaning of the two english idioms used is consistent with the st “ /xióng xīn zhuàng zhì zài xiàng qián” both literally and figuratively. 3.3 imitation imitation means that the translator “assumes the liberty, not only to vary from the words and sense, but to forsake them both as he sees occasion; and taking only some general hints from the original, to run division on the groundwork” (dyrden, 2006: 172). translators using imitation either add more information to the target text or omit unimportant information and only translate the key information (xiong, 2014). 3.3.1 addition people from different cultures express the same ideas differently due to differences in terms of wording, grammar, and syntactic rules. in order to make tt fluent and communicative, translators need to enrich the content of the st by finding out the underlying meaning of certain words and adding extra information to the tt. examples 10 and 11 are two cases of addition. example 10 st: 2022 st in pinyin: guǎn lǐ zhě hé zhuān jiā yào zhǔ dòng hé xīn yuán gōng duō hē kā fēi, bāng zhù tā men kāi kuò yǎn jiè. tt: managers and experts should sit down more often with new employees have some coffee, chat, and broaden their horizons. (nym for 2022) people in china, a high-context society, tend to express their ideas implicitly. since many aspects of cultural behavior are not made explicit in chinese society, chinese people are very sensitive to implicit messages and have learned how to interpret implicit messages accurately from an early age. for instance, chinese readers can quickly understand the implied meaning of “ /duō hē kā fēi” (have some coffee) in example 10, i.e., “chat and communicate with each other”. english readers from a low-context culture, however, will not understand the connection between “have some coffee” and “broaden their horizons” unless the implicit message “chat and communicate with each other” is added to the target text. example 11 st: 2020 st in pinyin: tè bié gǎn xiè nà xiē fèn zhàn zài bǔ dòng yī xiàn de yuán gōng jí jiā shǔ! tt: and in particular, my special thanks to our employees in the front lines who have been working day and night to patch up the holes in this embattled aircraft of ours, and to their families who have stood by their side. (nym for 2020) the translation of “ /bǔ dòng yī xiàn” in example 11 fully expresses the figurative meaning of the st. “ /bǔ dòng yī xiàn” is used to describe that employees of huawei, not feeling discouraged, worked together to weather the difficult times when huawei was included in the entity list by the united states in 2019 and many parts of its business were affected. “ /dòng” (hole) is therefore a metaphor for the ongoing or potential problems or difficulties huawei encounters since 2019. adding “in this embattled aircraft of ours” in the tt enables the english readers to deduce the implied meaning of “ /bǔ dòng yī xiàn” even though the metaphor “ /dòng” is translated literally. 3.3.2 omission omission refers to deleting some expressions that do not comply with the mental and linguistic traditions of the target language. the purposes of deleting some expressions are principally to keep the tt concise and intuitive, to highlight the facts and key information, and to conform to the cultural values of the source language and the linguistic structure of the target language, etc. (lu, 2013). omission is used in example 12. example 12 st: 2019 2020 communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 32 st in pinyin: bú jīng yī fān hán chè gǔ, zěn dé méi huā pū bí xiāng. 2019 nián, duì huá wéi lái shuō shì jí qí bú píng fán de yī nián …… tt: 2019 was an extraordinary year for huawei. (nym for 2020) in chinese culture, poems are often used by leaders as the opening lines of their speeches because it is believed that poems reflect the social and spiritual life of human beings. “ /méi huā” (plum blossoms), regarded as a symbol of chinese national spirit because it stands proudly against the snow and frost and flowers in bitterly cold winter (yang, 2005), have long been admired and praised by poets. the difficult times starting from may 2019 is virtually a “bitterly cold winter” for huawei when they are forbidden to use the gms services of google, advanced risc machine, american chips, related technologies, etc. in the chinese nym for 2020, xu zhijun, huawei’s rotating chairman, used the plum blossoms to encourage huawei’s employees to overcome difficulties and aspire to something great. however, the poems concerning plum blossoms have been deleted from the english version considering that no special symbolic meaning has been imparted on plum blossoms in english culture and that poems are rarely used as opening lines in english culture. differences in rhetoric use is another reason for using omission. consider the following example: example 13 st: 2020 st in pinyin: gè jí gàn bù yào yǐ gōng sī dà jú wéi zhòng, shàng huǒ xiàn, xià zhàn háo, dào yè wù zuì xū yào de dì fāng, dào jiān kǔ qū yù zuò zhàn. tt: managers at all levels need to put company interests above personal gain and go where they are needed most, including hardship regions. (nym for 2020) as a type of human speech, nym has an illocutionary force that exerts an impact on the audience. the speaker delivering the speech will manage to influence the audience’s emotions in order to persuade them to accept his/her opinion. in the chinese context, the speaker will emphasize the common ground, such as values mutually accepted, emotions experienced commonly and so on, between himself/herself through using exaggeration to help establish or enhance mutual trust. “ , /shàng huǒ xiàn, xià zhàn háo” (“head to the front and fight in trenches” literally) in example 13, like “ , /shàng dāo shān, xià huǒ hǎi” (“head to the mountain of knives and jump into the sea of fire” literally), is a frequently used expression in chinese to show how determined a person is. in the english context, however, omission is used properly in example 13 considering that what the st means has been communicated and that the purpose of narrowing the distance with the audience by emphasizing common ground has been served. 4. concluding remarks the current study investigates the translation strategies and translation methods used in huawei’s new year messages sent from 2017 to 2022 from the perspective of domestication and foreignization under the framework of xiong (2014)’s classification. results suggest that three translation methods are employed, namely literal translation, liberal translation, and imitation. literal translation, as discussed in the current study, is foreignization-oriented and makes it difficult for target readers to understand the target texts since it retains the expressions that are unique in the source language. liberal translation and imitation are domestication-oriented and therefore facilitate readers’ understanding of the source text. what should be noted is that neither domestication nor foreignization can be labeled as “good” or “bad” in its nature. deciding which one to be adopted and advocated depends on the specific conditions and the purpose of the translation. translators are expected to employ various methods and techniques flexibly in order to better serve the purpose of the translation. in a word, domestication and foreignization are compatible with each other rather than mutually exclusive. there are some limitations in the current study. the first limitation is that the texts used in the study are relatively insufficient, resulting in somewhat subjective and incomprehensive analysis. second, the important role of readers and their perceptions are left understudied in the current study. nevertheless, the current study is believed to shed light on future studies on nym. references alikberova, a. r., vukadinovich, s. i., & nurmieva, r. r. 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(2015). the communication dynamics of new year message (in chinese, ). youth journalist ( ), 3, 103. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. 7-29-pb(revised)1.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 29 the translation study of chinese and american pharmaceutical profiles from the perspective of recontextualization – regarding gphl and merck xuan shen1, xiaohai wang2 1school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, baiyun avenue north, guangzhou, china, e-mail: 20200310030@gdufs.edu.cn 2corresponding author: same as above, e-mail: 228208418@qq.com abstract pharmaceutical companies play an important role in defending us against the pandemic. as chinese pharmaceutical companies enter overseas markets, making contributions to the world, their company profiles need to be adapted to different contexts, such as the american context. under this circumstance, company profiles with different contexts can provide insight into the discursive relationship between text and context in the study of website translation. in view of this, this study firstly contrasts the english profile of chinese company guangzhou pharmaceutical holdings limited (gphl) with that of american company merck by genre analysis, then studies the application of (wodak & fairclough, 2010)’s “recontextualization” concept to the translation of the company profile—finally, generalizing the translation strategies and recontextualizing mechanism that is suitable for chinese pharmaceutical companies. it is hoped that this study can deepen the application of recontextualization and thereby give some advice to those chinese pharmaceutical companies in translating pharmaceutical company profiles. keywords: recontextualization, company profile, pharmaceutical companies, translation, genre analysis 1. introduction to improve the competitiveness of chinese pharmaceutical companies in the foreign market, especially during the pandemic, the external communication of corporate culture is particularly critical, and language is an important carrier for intercultural communication. under this circumstance, many chinese enterprises, including long-established enterprises, have set up english versions for their corporate profiles. as part of the corporate website, they are the window for corporate outreach, which involves more than retranslation (wu& li, 2017). elements are the linguistic features or resources that company profiles have. wodak & fairclough (2010) suggested that elements include explanations, evaluations, and legitimations that can be added to the new context. when elements are translated from one language to another, it’s necessary to free them from the original context and accept the new context. the disintegration and recombination of the context are known as recontextualization. recontextualization has been used for website translation studies over the past few years (lin, 2021; zhang & zhao, 2020; wu & li, 2017), but not many have focused on pharmaceutical companies' profile translation. moreover, those articles tend to pay more attention to the content than structure. therefore, this paper aims to apply the recontextualization to the translation study of the chinese pharmaceutical company profile compared with the american pharmaceutical company profile and combine the genre analysis to find the differences between chinese pharmaceutical company (gphl) and american pharmaceutical company (merck) in constructing corporate profiles and then point out the translating issues about the profile of gphl. from recontextualization, translation strategies and mechanisms can be explored for the chinese pharmaceutical companies to improve the translating quality of company profiles. theoretically, this paper partially fills the gap in profile translation study by combining genre analysis and recontextualization. practically, it is expected that this study can give some suggestions for the translation of pharmaceutical company profiles from chinese to english. 2. literature review context is vital for intercultural communication studies. recontextualization requires communicators to extract elements and information from the source context and reconstruct them in the new context for communicative purposes (fairclough, 2010). for translation studies, recontextualization is defined as selecting important information from the source language and reorganizing and rewriting them in the context of the targeted language. 2.1 recontextualization this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/ communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 30 recontextualization is a notion first put forward by bernstein in his research on pedagogy. it regulates the transformation of discourse within discourse production into the field of its reproduction. it’s a process in which texts, signs, or meanings are selected from one social practice and introduced into another (wu et al., 2016). linell (1998) believed that recontextualization is a dynamic process, and it means the transfer-transformation of elements from one context to another. he classified it into three parts-intratextual, intertextual, and interdiscursive recontextualization. recontextualization is not just confined to pedagogy. fairclough (2003) expanded this concept into discourse and social practices. he believed that recontextualization is the representation of social events and the perspectivation of discourse. a particular type of social event can be represented through different genres and networks of social practices. meanwhile, communicators’ cognition and notions can impact and transform discourse. the relationship between language and social practice is mediated through recontextualization (altahmazi, 2020). besides, recontextualization functions as assigning values to tokens in a particular context adapted to the constraints and requirements of a different context, thus re-evaluating and assigning a different value (fetzer, 2017). recontextualization is widely and deeply discussed in many fields, such as social reform and media. wodak & fairclough (2010) studied the higher education policies of the european union and found that the same policy could have different understandings in the various political, cultural, and historical contexts. they brought recontextualization into discourse analysis and explained the disciplinary relationship between this notion and social reform. wu (2016) applied recontextualization and transformation to the media discourse based on the first-instance judgment of the peng yu case. this article explains why a text is interpreted differently in different contexts-media context, judgment context, and reader interpretation context by creating the theoretical framework of the discourse-historical-contextual approach. media discourse is also analyzed in other methods. anbin (2021) delineated constructive journalism's conceptual common ground from comparative journalism and intercultural communication. by comparing public opinion surveillance (pos) between western and chinese journalism, he discovered that pos had been recontextualized as both western and chinese journalism has the same goal of serving the people. still, they hold various news concepts and media eco-system. still, his research lays the theoretical foundation for recontextualizing constructive journalism in the chinese social and cultural context. 2.2 recontextualization and translation recontextualization is also developed in the study of translation. moreover, many researchers utilize recontextualization in the translation study of corporate publicity. wodak 1999) argued that recontextualizing a text or discourse would bring the transformation of meanings through which the new context reflects elements being endowed with different dynamic contextual meanings. based on the previous categorization and transformation views (fairclough, 2003; wodak, 1999), wu (2016) proposed the following categorization of transformations in the recontextualization process: addition, deletion, abstraction, and rearrangement to analyze the media discourse, which paves the way for his analysis of website translation. wu & li (2017) further took website translations of fortune global 500 companies as examples to reveal the application of recontextualization and transformation in terms of the categorization of transformations: addition, deletion, rearrangement, and replacement, which enlightens more researchers to use this categorization and has the referential value for the study of website translation strategies. they also believed that the study of website translation should be from the perspective of publicity translation. other than comparing chinese company websites with american companies’, zhang & zhao (2020) utilized the chinese and english company profiles of the world’s top 500 chinese companies and explored the application of recontextualization, which is beneficial to the external publicity translation of chinese companies. wu & dong (2020) concentrated on the transmission of chinese culture. they elicited the website translation of confucius institute and concluded the new principles of recontextualization for this type of website translation: dynamic state, detailed demonstration, immediate feedback, and complete message. altahmazi (2020) showed the multimodal and cross-lingual recontextualization in the online news site. he found that recontextualization existed in a different ideological narrative. wang (2021) shed light on the website translation of china general nuclear power corporation and the translation issues of the typical chinese state company. she also pointed out the importance of recontextualization in corporate culture transmission and in entering foreign markets. according to the literature review, it can be concluded that many scholars are beginning to putting recontextualization into the study of website translation, especially company profile translation. still, a few of them notice the website translation of pharmaceutical companies, though they make significant contributions to preventing the pandemic, and their publicity translations closely connect with overseas business. on top of that, previous literature did not set clear boundaries between structure and content dimension under recontextualization. therefore, it’s expected that studying the translation of pharmaceutical companies can help chinese pharmaceutical companies enter the foreign markets and benefit people with made-in-china medicines. 3. method communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 31 this paper selects two typical english company profiles from a chinese pharmaceutical company-gphl and an american company merck for a case analysis to partially fill the gap. it integrates two approaches: genre analysis and recontextualization for the structural and content dimensions. genre analysis contrasts the linguistic moves between gphl and merck in the structural dimension. through this approach, structural differences can be found. based on the linguistic moves, content differences can be further examined by categorizing transformations in the recontextualization (wu et al., 2016; wu & li, 2017). recontextualization takes place within the same field, the pharmaceutical industry, and within the same genre, company profiles. it’s aimed to improve the profile translation of gphl by those two approaches. 3.1 genre analysis traditionally, the genre is classified into literature and rhetoric. however, following a deeper understanding of discourse analysis, linguists broaden the concept of genre, and they suggest that genre involves all the linguistic events of social practices and communication activities. in general, there are two schools of genre analysis. australian school is stand by martin. the swalesian school, represented by swale and bhatia, takes linguistic moves and steps analysis as the starting point for the discourse analysis. linguistic moves are defined as “a discoursal or rhetorical unit that performs a coherent communicative function in a written or spoken discourse (swales, 2004). a move can be realized by one clause, one or more sentences, a paragraph, or longer (cotos et al., 2017). move analysis is mainly used to study academic articles. tseng (2018) studied research articles in nine linguistic journals and found three moves: providing a theoretical background, establishing a theoretical framework, and sharpening the significance of one’s study. bhatia (1993) displayed seven moves of promotional letters in the business field, including establishing credentials, introducing the offer, offering incentives, enclosing documents, soliciting a response, using pressure tactics, and ending politely. he also believed that communicative purposes need to be figured out before analyzing the linguistic moves. in our paper, the move is seen as a stretch of linguistic resources that serve the particular communicative purposes of publicity. translation strategies can be realized through move analysis. many investigators have been concerned about business documents employing genre analysis in recent years. for example, liu (2012) conducted the quantitative and qualitative approaches to study chinese and american pharmaceutical companies' profiles. she found that realization is quite different, although they have similar linguistic moves. deng (2013) started with the angle of intercultural communication under genre analysis. it is found that chinese and english company profiles own different linguistic moves, and they have their unique linguistic features. li & zhu (2020) researched ceo statements in english from chinese and western annual reports. through the corpus linguistic approach and move-step analysis, they discovered that although both of them have the same communicative purposes, the realizations of linguistic moves are quite different. the linguistic moves of western annual reports are more flexible than those of chinese annual reports. from the literature review, it can be found that genre analysis has been widely used in business documents and contrastive analysis. however, not many combine genre analysis and recontextualization with studying the business documents, not to mention the website translation. moreover, this paper attempts to explain why translate in this way concerning the translation of corporate publicity materials. 3.2 move analysis gphl is a traditional chinese pharmaceutical company that works on chinese patent medicine, herbal medicine, chemicalpharmaceutical raw material, healthcare products, etc. this company plays a part in the transmission of traditional chinese medicine culture, and it owns the overseas business. merck is an american pharmaceutical company and ranks one of the global 500. its business mainly covers western medicine for treating covid-19, cardio-metabolic disorders, animal health, etc. on the one hand, they have similar points, such as the rank on the global 500 and the same industry. on the other hand, differences cannot be ignored either. they have various cultural and social backgrounds, lines of business, and enterprise property. if gphl wants to accommodate the western market. in that case, it requires modifying its profile translation referring to that of merck so that western customers can better understand chinese medicine and chinese pharmaceutical companies. as mentioned previously, communicative purposes need to be given priority and can be concluded as follows: attract the potential customers; show the features and advantages; establish the initial relationship with stakeholders. for the pharmaceutical companies, due to their strong specialty, high-quality company profiles enable stakeholders to understand the lines of business as well. linguistic moves can be summarized based on the analysis of communicative purposes. besides, move structure is a configuration of stretches of all the constituent moves of a text that accomplish coherent communicative goals and development ideas (tseng, 2018). it can be seen that figure 1 is the structural description of moves of gphl, and figure 2 is the move structure of merck. table 1. move structure of gphl communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 32 move structural description percentage of the total number m1 s1 s2 s3 s4 general introduction nature product and service capability achievement 14.15% m2 the work of party building 19.51% m3 social responsibility 15.83% m4 s1 s2 s3 s4 achievement and capability subsidiaries intangible cultural heritages trademarks patents 44.83% m5 development target 5.68% table 2. move structure of merck move structural description percentage of the total number m1 s1 s2 general introduction history product and service 13.31% m2 achievement 1.99% m3 mission statement 3.11% m4 leadership 3.61% m5 s1 s2 s3 capability employees research and development social responsibility 2.61% m6 corporate culture and value 36.69% m7 history 4.48% m8 product and service 27.74% m9 partner 3.73% m10 policies 2.73% from figures 1 and 2 it can be seen that the move structure of gphl and merck is different as a whole. it can be further discussed based on similarities and differences in move structure. the same move structure is a general introduction, accounting for 14.15% and 13.31%, respectively. concerning the differences, the work of party building takes up a more significant proportion of the move structure of gphl, while merck’s company profile does not. corporate culture and value are the move structure that gphl’s company profile does not possess. apart from that, the move structure of achievement and capability occupies the most significant proportion of 44.83% for gphl. at the same time, merck talks about corporate culture and value altogether with product and service, which accounts for 36.69% and 27.74%. 3.3 translation strategies according to transformations of recontextualization, there are four translation strategies: addition, deletion, rearrangement, and abstraction (wu et al., 2016). however, wu & dong (2020) brought another concept of substitution for their study of website translation. as required, there are five translation strategies suitable for the case analysis: addition, substitution, rearrangement, abstraction, and deletion. the move analysis impacts the process of addition, deletion, and rearrangement. profile translation of gphl can be improved according to the company profile of merck through this process. the five translation strategies are explained as follows: 3.3.1 addition fairclough (2003) suggested that elements such as explanations, evaluations, and legitimations may be added according to the new context. when it comes to the profile translation, additions complement some illustrations of characteristics and historical or cultural background. it also implies adding some statistics or figures. adding the move structure and explaining medical terms are significant for the two specific cases. as linguistic moves have been compared, it can be found that communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 33 information about corporate culture and value can be added. leadership can also be complemented if necessary. aside from that, gphl mentions its goal of development as follows: gphl develop its core business grand southern tcm, grand health, grand commerce, and grand medical treatment. source link: www.gpc.com.cn/ its profile translation contains medical strategies characterized by vogue meaning. western customers would like to receive more objective and specific information. therefore, they would like to know more about the particular content of grand southern tcm, grand health, grand commerce, and grand medical treatment. the added information should cater to the benefits of western customers as well. for example, merck writes its strategies and policies with functions: we support public policies that advance the interests of patients, improve public health and promote access to medicines and innovation. (source link: www.msd.at/en/msd-worldwide) the principle of “customer first” needs profiles to be attractive. they should know what customers want to know, such as the functions of products and services. on the contrary, when it comes to the introduction of products and services, gphl states as follows: it also boasts six state-level intangible cultural heritages: xingqun xiasangju granules, bys dashen kouyangqing granules, wanglaoji herbal tea, and chenliji traditional chinese medical culture, pangaoshou traditional medical culture, and the preparation process of zhongyi baoying compound. (source link: www.gpc.com.cn/) the names of chinese-type medicine are endowed with chinese characteristics. from this paragraph, transliteration is adopted to translate medical terms. this translation strategy is not concerned with cultural differences and readability. it’s suggested that add the efficiency and ingredients of medicines so that western customers can learn more about chinese medicine and chinese medicine culture. for instance, when talking about moving the structure of products and services, merck introduces them as listed: cardio-metabolic disorders we are determined to find solutions for the most serious chronic health challenges, such as cardiovascular disease and diabetes. (source link: www.msd.at/en/msd-worldwide) cardio-metabolic disorders are also the medical term and can make reading difficult. but it explains the most serious chronic health challenges” with the sentence. customers can guess that this term is related to chronic diseases. that’s why gphl can correlate its medical terms with its efficiency. 3.3.2 substitution wu & dong (2020) regarded replacement as replacing the representation of a social event with another social event. the premise is that both of them hold similar features. for the profile translation, substitution was more likely to be realized by referential strategy, in which the name of the company should be replaced by the personal pronoun “we.” gphl prefers to use its company name to show its authority, which widens the distance between the company and western customers, while merck would instead use “we” to narrow down the space. the following two examples belong to the same move of general introduction. gphl is a well-established enterprise with over 400 years of history. (source link: www.gpc.com.cn) and merck states as follows: for 130 years, we’ve focused on the next quarter and the next century. (source link: www.msd.at/en/msd-worldwide) 3.3.3 deletion wodak (2001) argues that when writers represent a social event, they have to choose what to reserve and what to delete. back to the profile translation of gphl, it can be seen that there are many phrases with chinese characteristics, especially the move structure of the work of party building. this move does not exist in the source of merck. moreover, gphl repeatedly tells its patriot spirits as its company spirits. still, western customers cannot connect patriot spirits with a pharmaceutical company because we do not share the same historical and political background. for instance, when it comes to the linguistic moves of historical knowledge, it talks below: it has produced a galaxy of revolutionaries, such as yang yi, a leader of cpc in early days, advocate and organizer of communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 34 guangzhou uprising and member of the standing committee of the political bureau of the cpc central committee (source link: www.gpc.com.cn) when it talks about the move structure of party building, it states some proper nouns related to chinese histories, such as “guangzhou uprising” “cpc central committee” “yang yi”, which is difficult for westerners to understand and is not suitable for the communicative purpose. hence, it’s better to delete the information or represent information in the form of a video so that readers can choose whether to read it or not. another piece of information that needed to be deleted in the move structure of the party building is praise and achievement with chinese characteristics. gphl demonstrates that: the cpc committee of guangzhou wanglaoji pharmaceutical co., ltd. has been listed as the “excellent grass-root party branch of guangzhou”. (source link: www.gpc.com.cn) because westerners do not recognize those achievements and value the facts, such as statistics and figures, it would be better not to show this type of achievement. all in all, the move structure of party building should be deleted following the cultural differences. 3.3.4 rearrangement rearrangement refers to the change of orders when representing a social event (fairclough, 2003). according to the analysis of the move, it can be concluded that gphl writes its achievement in different steps and occupies a more significant proportion than that of merck. therefore, it’s helpful to list figures, statistics, and other factual information together, just as merck does in its move structure of achievement to make the company profile concise and conspicuous. below is the achievement on merck’s website. our company by the numbers 74k employees $13.6 b research and development investment in 2020 $3.1 b total philanthropy in 2019 (source link: www.msd.at/en/msd-worldwide) figures and statistics can deepen the company’s impression, which favors cooperation and investment. on the contrary, gphl proposes its information about figures and statistics in the move structure of achievement below: it possesses ten well-known chinese trademarks, namely gphl, baiyunshan, wanglaoji, chenliji, zhongyi, kangzhiba, pangaoshou, tianxin, hejigong, and qixing. the brand value of wanglaoji reaches 108 billion rmb, the no.1 beverage brand in china. in comparison, the brand value of baiyunshan is estimated to be 28.3 billion rmb, ranking the first among medical brands in china. “ten,” “108 billion rmb,” and “28.3 billion rmb” are the statistics that need to be shown in the apparent position to present the company’s capability and convince benefit communities. rearrangement can also be used in the move structure of social responsibility of gphl. here are two examples: in meizhou, gphl also constructed wanglaoji’s first ingredient extraction center and the caizhilin chinese medicine industrialization service center, creating at least 800 jobs for local people and helping boost the local economy. the wanglaoji charity fund of rmb 182.8 million set up by wanglaoji health has taken an industry-leading stance, donating money and supplies to bring relief to disaster-stricken areas such as ya’an, lydian, wenchuan, yushu, and yiliang, and preventing and controlling h7n9, bird flu, and another disease. total donations have exceeded 1 billion rmb. (source link: www.gpc.com.cn) 800 jobs”, “182.8 million”, and “1 billion” are factual information that needs to be rearranged following the form of merck. besides, merck has the move structure of product and service, which customers are concerned about, while gphl does not have this structure and talks about it in the move structure of achievement. it is suggested that the part of the product and service should be rearranged and listed as one move other than one step. 3.3.5 abstraction fairclough (2003) indicated that abstraction is the degree of generalization. wu (2016) thought writers could report a social event specifically or straightforwardly. this notion is suitable for the profile translation as well. merck begins with a communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 35 conclusion before introducing structural descriptions in detail, while gphl does not abstract its descriptions. the moving structure of products and services is an excellent example of merck: we focus on scientific innovation to deliver medicines and vaccines that may help millions of people around the world. (source link: www.msd.at/en/msd-worldwide) this conclusion implies two meanings. firstly, the scope of business is “medicines and vaccines.” then, the benefits brought to customers are “help millions of people around the world.” here is another example of merck: oncology our mission is to deliver innovations that extend and improve the lives of people with cancer vaccines vaccines are one of the greatest public health success stones-and we’ve been discovering, developing, and delivering vaccines to help prevent disease for over 100 years (source link: www.msd.at/en/msd-worldwide) inversely, gphl introduces its product and service without a conclusion: gphl is dedicated to researching and developing chinese patent medicine, chinese herbal medicine, chemicalpharmaceutical raw materials and preparations, biological medicine and healthcare products, and pharmaceutical logistics and distribution and healthcare service. (source link: www.gpc.com.cn) gphl uses the parallel to show its products and service but lacks a conclusion. “chinese patent medicine” and “chinese herbal medicine” are all chinese medicine, so that they can be categorized into chinese medicine. the scope of business can be summarized as working on the research and development of chinese medicine, and those medicines can benefit customers. recontextualization has been discussed based on structure and content dimension. therefore, the recontextualizing principle of company profile translation can be further analyzed at the macro and cognitive levels. 4.1 recontextualizing principle of company profile translation as wu & dong (2020) put forward the recontextualizing framework of website translation for company cultural transmission, the direction of company profile translation can be concluded based on this and the case study of gphl and merck. our framework explores how to revise the pharmaceutical company profile translation and then figure out the recontextualization process and mechanism to realize companies' publicity from the macro, micro, and cognitive dimensions. this mechanism is conducive to understanding the application of recontextualization in the translation study of company profiles. it may be applicable in other types of website translation. the pattern is shown in figure 1. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 36 figure 1: recontextualization process of company profile translation in the macro dimension, corporate and language culture have a combined effect on cultural context and the process of decontextualization due to cultural differences. at the micro-level, genre analysis and recontextualization can be carried out to recontextualize the text concerning the effects of language and culture. finally, recontextualizing translation should coincide with the cognition and arouse readers’ attention; external publicity can be realized through the whole process. 4.2 translation of corporate publicity the translated text of gphl is not applicable to two principles of the three principles of “closeness”(huang, 2004): closeness to westerners’ needs for information about china and proximity to their thinking and language habits. translation of corporate publicity is regarded as publicity for foreign customers. it functions by letting them know about the company efficiently and directly, promoting commodities and company image, making them accept and buy products, services, and notions, and receiving interests. however, by comparing the english profile between gphl and merck, it can be seen that the structure and content of gphl do not meet the expectations of foreign customers, and their cultural differences and information needs are underestimated. that means the cognitive level has not finished, so the external publicity cannot be realized. furthermore, the whole text lacks focus, so the publicity goals are not achieved. 4.3 high and low context culture works as the mental strategy for human beings and functions as forming their way of thinking, feeling, and acting (hofstede, 2001). there are several cultural factors influencing how people see the world. different patterns of english translations between gphl and merck reflect the differences in context. hall (1976) came up with high and low context, mainly used in intercultural communication. the characteristic of high context is that much information is coded faintly rather than distinctly because people are more dependent on context. it can be explained that the focal points of profile translation of gphl are not prominent. in contrast, low context is featured by the low amount of information and is not rely so much on communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 37 context. the meaning of info-3rmation can be expressed clearly, so there is no need to guess based on context. to summarize, when the chinese pharmaceutical company, which is in a high-context country, enters a low-context country, it has to change its information from implicit to explicit. 5. conclusion this paper first adopts genre analysis and recontextualization to compare the english company profile between the chinese pharmaceutical company gphl and the american company merck. through this process, translation issues and strategies can be discovered for gphl. the research identifies the following five strategies serving publicity and cross-cultural communication were identified: addition, deletion, rearrangement, substitution, and abstraction. and then, it explores the recontextualization mechanism in the external promotion and cross-cultural communication and digs out the reasons for differences in cultural contexts and the three principles of closeness. it is suggested that this paper can provide a new perspective for company profile translation and help construct a discourse system for chinese pharmaceutical companies. however, limitations should not be ignored either. firstly, the data is limited, and future studies can select more pharmaceutical company profiles or among a large group of companies from different industries, countries, or cultures. secondly, statistical analysis and corpus analysis can be applied to increase the objectivity and preciseness of the results. acknowledgments as the paper is finally completed, i would like to show my great thanks to my advisor, professor wang for his long-term guidance and valuable suggestions. references altahmazi, t. h. m. 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(2020). an anlysis of the translation of the fortune 500 chinese company profiles from the perspective of recontextualization. journal of hulunbuir university, 72(2), 278–283 (in chinese: this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. microsoft word 02issue2021 4 communication across borders: translation & interpreting issn 2766-791x vol. 1 no. 2; 2021 www.jhkpress.com experiential metafunctional analysis of “shan xing” and its english versions huaming cheng1 st. paul university philippines; guangzhou college of commerce, china e-mail: kylechm@126.com this paper is the phased achievement of a school project of guangzhou college of commerce (no.: 2019xjyb008). abstract this paper attempts to analyze and compare transitivity processes of “shan xing” and its 11 english versions from the perspective of experiential metafunction of halliday’s functional linguistics and makes a comment on the similarities and differences between them. this study can give clues to the study of poems and their translations of the transitivity processes, by exploring the differences of participants and circumstantial elements with the theoretical framework of functional linguistics which can provide a necessary theoretical basis for the study of poetry translation. keywords: functional linguistics; experiential metafunction; “shan xing”; english versions of “shan xing” about the author: cheng huaming, a doctoral candidate of st. paul university philippines, an associate professor at guangzhou college of commerce, is mainly engaged in comparative linguistics and translation research. 1. introduction “shan xing (chinese: 山行)” is a seven-character quatrain of the tang dynasty by the poet du mu (chinese: 杜牧), which describes the author’s mountain climbing, and highly praises the beauty of the mountain in the late autumn. this poem shows a colorful picture of the autumn mountain, where there are stone path, white clouds, homes, maple groves, frosted leaves, which constitute a touching autumn color. in this poem, du mu uses emotions to control the scene, quickly and accurately capture the image of natural beauty, and integrate his own emotion into it, so that emotional beauty and natural beauty are blended one scene. the first sentence of the whole poem “yuan shang han shan shi jing xie (chinese: 远上寒山石径斜)”, depicts a winding mountain road to the hills. “yuan (chinese: 远)” describes the length of the mountain road; “han (chinese: 寒)” indicates the late autumn. these two words “xie (chinese: 斜)” and “shang (chinese: 上)” take concerted action, which express the mountain is high but the slope is slow. the second sentence “bai yun sheng chu you ren jia (chinese: 白云生处有人家)” is the description of what the poet sees, where the white clouds float is “you ren jia (有人家)”. these three characters make people feel that the mountains are full of life. it correlates with “shi jing (chinese: 石径)” in the first sentence. this is the passageway for the mountain dwellers. the third sentence is “ting che zuo ai feng lin wan (chinese: 停车坐爱枫林晚)”, in which the word “wan (晚)” is exquisitely used and it contains many meanings. firstly, it shows that the scenes of the first two sentences are seen during the day, and those of the last two sentences are evening scenes. secondly, because in the evening there are sunset, gorgeous sunset glow and red maple leaves which reflect each other, while maple grove is particularly beautiful. thirdly, the poet lingered, and in the evening he was reluctant to leave in the car, and he loved the red leaves. finally, because parking for a long time, observing into the micro, he realized the truth of the fourth sentence “shuang ye hong yu er yue hua (chinese: 霜叶红于二月花)”, which sentence is such an interesting epigram. the fourth sentence is the center of the whole poem. it is the poet’s strong colorful writing, condensed out of the pen. huo (1995: 351) thinks that the poem contains new ideas, exquisite layout. in the bleak autumn wind it intakes gorgeous autumn color, and compares the spring wind, is pleasing to the eye. recently, the main research on this poem includes: gong (1985) explained new meaning of “er yue (chinese: 二月)”. zhong (2010) analyzed three english translations of the poem from empathy perspective. li & xu (2012) illustrated the poem from the perspective of cognitive stylistics. zhao (2013) reinterpreted the text. besides, there are several articles of teaching design of the poem. from the point of view of the research content, the results of the comparative translation study of “shan xing” are rare. this article analyzes experiential metafunction of “shan xing” and its 11 english versions from the perspective of experiential metafunction of halliday’s (halliday, 1994) so as to provide a better method for poetry translation study. 2. experiential metafunctional analysis of the poem experiential metafunction is an important part of systemic-functional grammar by halliday. experiential metafunction consists of multiple semantic systems, the most important of which is transitivity system. its role is to use the experience of the real world and the inner world in a number of processes to express it, and identify the participants involved in the process and circumstantial elements (wang, 2002: 1). transitivity includes six processes: material process, mental process, relational process, verbal process, behavioral process and existential process (hu, 2003: 71). from the perspective of transitivity of experiential function, there are four processes in “shan xing”, i.e.: (1) material process / relational process: “yuan shang han shan shi jing xie (chinese: 远上寒山石径斜)”; (2) material process / existential process: “bai yun sheng chu you ren jia (chinese: 白云生处有人家)”; (3) material process / mental process: “ting che zuo ai feng lin wan (chinese: 停车坐爱枫林晚)”; (4) relational process: “shuang ye hong yu er yue hua (chinese: 霜叶红于二月花)”. in terms of functional discourse analysis, during transitivity analysis, it is necessary to indicate the related elements, such participants and circumstantials after the type of process is determined. in sentence (1) of material process, “shang (chinese: 上)” is the process, and the actor is the poet himself, which is omitted. “yuan (chinese: 远)” represents the circumstantial of space, and “han shan (chinese: 寒山)” is the range. “shi jing xie (chinese: 石径 斜)” shows the relational process: “shi jing (chinese: 石径)” is the carrier, and “xie (chinese: 斜)” is an attribute; in sentence (2) of the existential process, “you (chinese: 有)” is a process, “bai yun sheng chu (chinese: 白云生处)” represents the circumstantial of space, which includes a material process, “ren jia (chinese: 人家)” is an existent; in sentence (3) of the material process, “ting (chinese: 停)” is a process, “che (chinese: 车)” is the goal, “zuo ai feng lin wan (chinese: 坐爱枫林晚)” represents the circumstantial of cause, which also includes a mental process; in sentence (4) of the relational process, “shuang ye (chinese: 霜叶)” is the carrier, “hong (chinese: 红)” is an attribute, “yu er yue hua (chinese: 于二月花)” is the circumstantial of comparison. 2 table 1 “shan xing” and analysis of transitivity processes poem transitivity process (1) yuan shang han shan shi jing xie (chinese: 远上寒山石径斜) material process / relational process (2) bai yun sheng chu you ren jia (chinese: 白云生处有人家) material process / existential process (3) ting che zuo ai feng lin wan (chinese: 停车坐爱枫林晚) material process / mental process (4) shuang ye hong yu er yue hua (chinese: 霜叶红于二月花) relational process 3. experiential metafunction analysis of its translations on english translations of the poem “shan xing”, these 11 versions have been collected (see appendix). for convenience, the following versions are arranged by the order of time: weng (weng, 1985: 57), wang (wang & knoepfle, 1989: 49), xu2 (xu, 1990: 328-329), kotewell (guo, 1994: 227), zhuo (zhuo, 1996: 181), sun (sun, 1997: 431), xu3 (xu, 2001: 531), yang (yang, 2001: 274), seaton (seaton, 2006: 123), tang (tang, 2010: 7), liu (liu, 2015: 182), which represent 11 translations. for comparison, a sentence-by-sentence analysis is given below. 3.1 “yuan shang han shan shi jing xie (chinese: 远上寒山石径斜)” table 2 english versions of “yuan shang han shan shi jing xie” translated by process participant circumstantial weng material process: runs actor: a narrow stone path place: off the main road manner: winding, climbing, vanishing wang material process: winds actor: the narrow stone trail place: far up into the mountains xu2 relational process: are carrier: the stony paths attribute: aslant place: far up on the cold mountain kotewell material process: climb actor: i range: the chill mountain’s steep stone paths zhuo material process: ’s meandering actor: a stony path place: high up the chilly mount sun material process: wound actor: the stone trail place: far up the mountainside xu3 material process: leads actor: a slanting stony path place: far to the cold hill yang material process: winds actor: a flag-stone path place: up into the chilly hills seaton material process: turns actor: rocky path place: far climbing cold mountain tang material process: sloped actor: the rocky path place: far up the chilly mountains liu material process: is winding actor: an askew stone-paved path place: up the chilly mountain far away the first sentence “yuan shang han shan shi jing xie (chinese: 远上寒山石径斜)” is discussed below. the 11 english translations in terms of the type of process, participants and circumstantials are analyzed in the table 2 above. according to the process type, only one of all the translations is used the relational process. the process translated by xu2 is “are”. the carrier is “the stony paths”, and the attribute is “aslant”. “far up on the cold mountain” represents the circumstantial element of the place. all the other translations belong to the material process, most of the actors are “path”. weng translates it as “a narrow stone path”; zhuo as “a stony path”, xu3 as “a slanting stony path”, yang as “a flag-stone path”, seaton as “rocky path”, tang as “the rocky path”, liu as “an askew stone-paved path”. weng adds more information of “narrow”, while xu2 and liu respectively translate the meaning of “slanting” and “askew” to indicate the meaning of the original poem “xie (chinese: 斜)”. kotewell also uses the material process, which translates the omitted actor “i”. the process is “climb”, and the range is “the chill mountain’s steep stone paths”. in “the narrow stone trail” translated by wang and “the stone trail” by sun, all use “stone trail” to translate “shi jing (chinese: 石径)”. the processes translated by wang, sun, yang and liu, which are translated as “wind” or others, contain the meaning of the rugged mountain road in the original poem. in addition, the other material processes are “runs” by weng, “climb” by kotewell, “’s meandering” by zhuo, “turns” by seaton, “sloped” by tang. then the circumstantial to represent place “han shan (chinese: 寒山)” is discussed. most of them are translated as “cold/chilly mountain(s)/hill(s)”, such as “far up on the cold mountain” translated by xu2, “high up the chilly mount” by zhuo, “far to the cold hill” by xu3, “up into the chilly hills” by yang, “far climbing cold mountain” by seaton, “far up the chilly mountains” by tang, “up the chilly mountain far away” by liu. in the first sentence “han (chinese: 3 寒)” is used to evoke the fourth sentence “shuang ye (chinese: 霜叶)” (huo, 1995: 351). among the translations “off the main road” by weng, “far up into the mountains” by wang, “far up the mountainside” by sun do not appear the coldness of “han shan (chinese: 寒山)”. in the circumstantial, weng has added “winding, climbing, vanishing” to illustrate the rugged mountain path. generally speaking, the first sentence can follow the process of material and be translated as “a stony path winds up to the chilly mountain far away”. 3.2 “bai yun sheng chu you ren jia (chinese: 白云生处有人家)” table 3 english versions of “bai yun sheng chu you ren jia” translated by process participant circumstantial weng existential process: perch existent: a few tiny cottages place: into the cloudy heights where wang relational process: is relational process: are carrier: this attribute: a cloudy place carrier: the cabins attribute: almost invisible xu2 material process: plant actor: people goal: their dwellings place: where white clouds are made and formed, there kotewell existential process: are existent: homes of men place: deep in the white clouds zhuo are silhouetted goal: homes place: ’gainst the white clouds’ very fount sun existential process: stood existent: some abodes place: where the clouds were thick, there xu3 existential process: appear material process: are existent: cots and bowers place: where fleecy clouds are born, there yang relational process: are carrier: houses attribute: just discernible place: amid the thick white cloud seaton existential process: existent: some man’s home place: where clouds grow tang existential process: stood existent: some cottages place: where white clouds had risen liu existential process: is existent: a cottage which is hidden in the white clouds depth the 11 translations of the second sentence “bai yun sheng chu you ren jia (chinese: 白云生处有人家)” are displayed above. from table 3, there are seven versions using the existential process, while the process of translation does not appear in seaton, six of the other transitive processes of the translations are “perch” (translated by weng), “are” (by kotewell), “stood” (by sun), “appear” (by xu), “stood” (by tang), “is” (by liu). among them, sun presents a better translation, which shows the “hidden” homes in the mountains. the translations of the existent are “a few tiny cottages” by weng, “homes of men” by kotewell, “some abodes” by sun, “cots and bowers” by xu3, “some man’s home” by seaton, “some cottages” by tang, “a cottage which is hidden in the white clouds depth” by liu. for the existent “ren jia (chinese: 人家)”, kotewell, zhuo and seaton translate it as: “homes of men”, “homes” and “some man’s home”. here “home” is a place where people live. the poet thought that the mountains and forests were uninhabited, but he vaguely saw other people. there is a kind of warm feeling, in line with the meaning of the original poem. when weng translates it as “a few tiny cottages”, tang as “some cottages”, liu as “a cottage”, “cottage” here refers to “villa”. people in the mountains cannot form cottages because they are scattered. xu3 translates it as “cots and bowers”: “cot” refers to “shed, small house”; “bower” refers to “pavilion”. there are errors in the understanding meaning of the original poem. there are other translations “the cabins” by wang, “their dwellings” by xu2, “houses” by yang. wang and yang translate it as the relational process. there are two relational processes: “is” and “are” in the translation by wang. the carriers are “this” and “the cabins” respectively; the attributes are “a cloudy place” and “almost invisible”. the relational process of translation by yang is “are”. the carrier is “houses”, and the attribute is “just discernible”. xu and zhuo translate it as the material process. the process translated by xu is “plant”. the actor is “people”, and the goal is “their dwellings”. the process translated by zhou is “are silhouetted”, and the goal is “homes”. zhuo’s “silhouette” reflects a kind of outline, which is a certain background of the outline, more in line with the original poetic conception, because there are white clouds in the mountains, and the house cannot be clearly seen the full picture. finally, the circumstantial elements of the place to translate “bai yun sheng chu (chinese: 白云生处)” are discussed. 4 there are two versions: “sheng (chinese: 生)” and “shen (chinese: 深)”. “sheng (chinese: 生)” can be understood as in the formation of white clouds, “shen (chinese: 深)” means in the depths of the mist. weng translates it as “into the cloudy heights where”, kotewell as “deep in the white clouds”, zhuo as “’gainst the white clouds’ very fount”, sun as “where the clouds were thick, there”, yang as “amid the thick white cloud”. zhuo’s “fount” refers to “(literary or humorous) the place where sth important comes from” (wehmeier, 2004: 692), it explains the origin of white clouds, that is, where white clouds come from. the second sentence describes “bai yun (chinese: 白云)” in order to contrast the fourth sentence with a strong contrast of color. “frosted leaves” are extremely “red”, which gives a feeling of being redder than early spring flowers (huo, 1995: 351). both translations of kotewell and zhou embody “bai yun (chinese: 白云)”, and zhuo also shows the formation of white clouds. other translations “where white clouds are made and formed, there” by xu2, “where fleecy clouds are born, there” by xu3, “where clouds grow” by seaton, “where white clouds had risen” by tang embody the formation of white clouds. taken all the analysis into consideration, this sentence can use the existential process to be translated as “there are a few homes of men where the thick white clouds stay”. 3.3 “ting che zuo ai feng lin wan (chinese: 停车坐爱枫林晚)” table 4 english versions of “ting che zuo ai feng lin wan” translated by process participant circumstantial weng material process: pull up; entranced actor: i goal: my carriage place: here wang mental process: love material process: pause senser: i phenomenon: seeing the maples time: at sunset place: in my cart purpose: to watch them xu2 material process: stop actor: i goal: my cart cause: only cause i love the beautiful sight—of a maple grove, all red time: before the approach of night kotewell material process: stop actor: i goal: my carriage cause: because i admire the maple grove at nightfall zhuo material process: bring actor: i goal: my carriage to a halt cause: attracted by th’ maples sun material process: stopt actor: i goal: my cart purpose: to watch the maple forest late xu3 material process: stop actor: i goal: my cab place: at maple woods purpose: to gaze my fill yang material process: stop actor: i goal: my carriage cause: for i love the maple trees time: in the twilight seaton material process: halt behavior process: sit actor: i goal: my carriage manner: adoring, evening, maple grove tang material process: stopped actor: i goal: my cart manner: sitting therein to enjoy, looking at the lovely maple trees at dusk liu material process: stop actor: i cause: due to loving maple trees in late autumn purpose: to go sightseeing the third sentence is “ting che zuo ai feng lin wan (chinese: 停车坐爱枫林晚)”. it means to stop the cart because of the beauty of the evening maple forest. the original verse uses the material process, while wang uses the mental process “love” and material processes “pause”. the senser is “i”; the phenomenon is “seeing the maples”. the behavioral process of translation by seaton is “sit”, which should be a misunderstanding. this is similar with the original english translation “and i sit to admire” by kotewell. guo (1994: 227) revises it. the revised circumstantial element “because i admire the maple grove at nightfall” expresses the concept of cause, and accords with the meaning of the original poem. because of loving the late maple forest, he stops to watch the view (huo, 1995: 350). here “zuo (chinese: 坐)” does not mean “sit down”. selected notes of all tang poetry by sun & yan (2002: 3712) and selected tang poems by the institute of literature of the chinese academy of social sciences (2003: 580) explain “zuo (chinese: 坐)” means “because” rather than “sit”, so these two foreign translators mistranslated it. other translations are material processes. the process of the original poem is “ting (chinese: 停)”. weng translates it as “pull up”, yang as a phrase “bring…to a halt”, seaton as “halt”, while the other translations are “stop” or its different forms to indicate 5 the action of stopping. all the actors are “i”; the goals are “my carriage”, “my cart” or “my cab”. the circumstantial elements indicating cause include “only cause i love the beautiful sight—of a maple grove, all red” by xu2, “because i admire the maple grove at nightfall” by kotewell, “attracted by th’ maples” by zhuo, “for i love the maple trees” by yang, “due to loving maple trees in late autumn” by liu. other circumstantial elements of purpose are “to watch them” by xu2, “to watch the maple forest late” by sun, “to gaze my fill” by xu3, “to go sightseeing” by liu. based on the above analysis, this sentence includes the material process and mental process and can be translated as “i stop my cart because i love the maple grove in late autumn”. 3.4 “shuang ye hong yu er yue hua (chinese: 霜叶红于二月花)” table 5 english versions of “shuang ye hong yu er yue hua” translated by process participant circumstantial weng relational process: is carrier: the twilight mountainside attribute: ablaze cause: with crimson maples more vivid than spring flowers wang relational process: are carrier: the leaves attribute: as red as prairies time: in the flowering spring xu2 relational process: are carrier: maple leaves after a frost attribute: more beautiful in tone comparison: than flowers in february accompaniment: with their colors better known kotewell relational process: are carrier: whose frozen leaves attribute: redder comparison: than the flowers of early spring zhuo relational process: are carrier: th’ frost-redden’d leaves at dusk attribute: brighter comparison: than the bloom of spring sun cause: with frost-bitten leaves more crimson than spring blooms xu3 relational process: look carrier: frost-bitten leaves attribute: redder comparison: than early spring flowers yang relational process: are carrier: the leaves after early frost attribute: as crimson as spring flowers seaton relational process: carrier: frosted leaves attribute: far redder place: there comparison: than march bloom tang relational process: was carrier: the red colour of the maple leaves with frost attribute: deeper comparison: than that of “second moon flower” liu relational process: are carrier: whose leaves attribute: much redder comparison: than the flowers in february of spring below is the analysis of the last line of poem “shuang ye hong yu er yue hua (chinese: 霜叶红于二月花)”. sun translates it as a circumstantial element of cause “with frost-bitten leaves more crimson than spring blooms”, but all the other translations belong to the relational process, which is the same with the original poem. the carrier of translation by weng is “the twilight mountainside”, and the carriers of the other 9 translations are “the leaves” by 6 wang, “maple leaves after a frost ” by xu2, “whose frozen leaves” by kotewell, “th’ frost-redden’d leaves” by zhuo, “frost-bitten leaves” by xu3, “the leaves after early frost” by yang, “frosted leaves” by seaton, “the red colour of the maple leaves with frost” by tang, “whose leaves” by liu. all the carriers are consistent in the original poem “shuang ye (chinese: 霜叶)”, and most of the attributes are translated as “redder” or “red”. the translation by xu “more beautiful in tone” is not clear in the meaning. the attribute is translated by zhuo “brighter” (the color of the frosted leaves has been translated in the carrier “frost-redden’d”). the translation by yang is “as crimson as spring flowers”, and the translation by tang is “deeper” (the color of the maple leaf has been translated in the carrier “the red colour”). colour”). but “redder” indicates a more reddish meaning. most of the circumstantial elements are translated as the concept of comparison. weng’s “with crimson maples more vivid than spring flowers” expresses the circumstantial element of cause, and wang’s “in the flowering spring” indicates the circumstantial element of time. other circumstantial elements, such as “than flowers in february” by xu2, “than the flowers of early spring” by kotewell, “than the bloom of spring” by zhuo, “than early spring flowers” by xu3, “than march bloom” by seaton, “than that of ‘second moon flower’” by tang, “than the flowers in february of spring” by liu, show the circumstantial element of comparison, in accordance with the original poem. besides, zhuo’s translation also adds the circumstantial element of time “at dusk”. on the translation of “er yue (chinese: 二月)”, if it is translated as the second month, which is unclear. the translation of the second month of the lunar year is cumbersome and boring. “february” is incompatible with the whole meaning of the original poem (wen, 1989: 176). the chinese “february” is a spring blossom. it’s different from english “february”, which is still in the winter. guo (1994: 227-228) considered that the version of “early spring” to translate “february” is an exact version. to keep the same process of relational, the full sentence can be put into “the frosted leaves are much redder than the flowers in early spring”. 4. conclusion on the theoretical basis of the experiential function of halliday’s systemic functional linguistics, this article analyzes and compares these 11 versions. through the analysis of functional linguistics, the language of translations is discussed, and it can help us study some translation problems from a new perspective. the analytical framework of functional linguistics can be applied to describe poetry and its translation. this paper is not intended to judge the translation of famous men. it is hoped that this paper discusses the translation of ancient poetry into english from the perspective of systemic functional linguistics. to maintain the process in the english translation equivalent to that in the original chinese poem, the whole poem may be translated as: a stony path winds up to the chilly mountain far away; there are a few homes of men where the thick white clouds stay. i stop my cart because i love the maple grove in late autumn; the frosted leaves are much redder than the flowers in early spring. in consideration of rhyme, coherence and cohesion as well, some adjustments are made on the above initial version offered. the rhyme of the whole poem presents as “aabb”, with 15 syllables in each sentence. finally, a better revised version is displayed as follows: a mountain trip du mu a stony path winds up to the chilly mountain far away, where are a few homes of men amid which the thick white clouds stay. i stop my cart ’cause the maple grove in late fall i favor: the frosted leaves are much redder than the early spring flower. appendix: eleven english translations of “shan xing” weng: // autumn glory // / du mu / off the main road runs a narrow stone path, winding, climbing, vanishing into the cloudy heights where perch a few tiny cottages. / here i pull up my carriage, entranced. for the twilight mountainside is ablaze with crimson maples more vivid than spring flowers (weng, 1985: 57). wang: // trip to the mountains // / — du mu / the narrow stone trail / winds far up into the mountains / this is a cloudy place / the cabins are almost invisible / i love seeing the maples at sunset / and pause in my cart to watch them / the leaves are as red as prairies in the flowering spring (wang, 1989: 49). xu2: // a mountain tour // / far up on the cold mountain, / the stony paths are aslant. / where white clouds are made and formed, / there people their dwellings plant. / i stop my cart, only cause / i love the beautiful sight — / of a maple grove, all red, / before the approach of night. / maple leaves after a frost — / are more beautiful in tone — / than flowers in february — / with their colors better known (xu, 1990: 328-329). 7 kotewell: // traveling in the mountains // / by du mu / after i climb the chill mountain’s steep stone paths, / deep in the white clouds there are homes of men. / i stop my carriage, because i admire (original translation: and i sit to admire) the maple grove at nightfall, / whose frozen leaves are redder than the flowers of early spring (guo, 1994: 227). zhuo: // a mountain scene // / du mu / a stony path’s meandering high up the chilly mount, / where homes are silhouetted ’gainst the white clouds’ very fount. / attracted by th’ maples my carriage to a halt i bring: / th’ frostredden’d leaves at dusk are brighter than the bloom of spring (zhuo, 1996: 181). sun: // mountain trip / du mu // / (tang, 803-853) / far up the mountainside the stone trail wound, / where the clouds were thick, there stood some abodes. / i stopt my cart to watch the maple forest late / with frost-bitten leaves more crimson than spring blooms (sun, 1997: 431). xu3: // going up the hill // / a slanting stony path leads far to the cold hill; / where fleecy clouds are born, there appear cots and bowers. / i stop my cab at maple woods to gaze my fill; / frost-bitten leaves look redder than early spring flowers (xu, 2001: 531). yang: // travelling in the mountains // / du mu / a flag-stone path winds up into the chilly hills, / where houses are just discernible amid the thick white cloud. / i stop my carriage for i love the maple trees in the twilight, / the leaves after early frost are as crimson as spring flowers (yang, 2001: 274). seaton: // traveling among mountains // / far climbing cold mountain, rocky path turns. / there, where clouds grow, some man’s home. / i halt the carriage, sit adoring, evening, maple grove; / there frosted leaves: far redder than march bloom (seaton, 2006: 123). tang: // melody on autumn mountains // / by du mu / the rocky path sloped far up the chilly mountains. / there stood some cottages / where white clouds had risen. / i stopped my 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(1996). the chinese sentiments—as expressed in 128 oft-quoted poems (1100bc-ad1910) (in chinese, 华夏情怀——历代名诗英译及探微). sun yat-sen university press (中山大学出版社). this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. microsoft word 02issue2021 29 communication across borders: translation & interpreting issn 2766-791x vol. 1 no. 2; 2021 www.jhkpress.com the co-effect of law and morality: on the legitimacy of china’s quarantine measures against covid-19 yuzhe hong school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, china kaiju chen (corresponding author) center of business culture and philosophy of culture, institute of hermeneutics, guangdong university of foreign studies, china; institute of advanced studies, university of chinese academy of social sciences, china abstract over the past few decades, the world has seen the dispute between the modern rule of law and traditional rule of morality, and the conflict of these two models of social governance sharpens during covid-19. the rule of both morality and law in china, which has been criticized by the western world, was proved to be efficient during the campaign against covid-19. china’s quarantine measures constitute an important part of china’s anti-pandemic combat. at present, such countries like the usa, the uk, and france, which have failed to respond adequately to the pandemic, are trying to condemn china by doubting the legitimacy of china’s quarantine measures to transfer the domestic public sight and cover up their failure. this paper first presents the legal basis of china’s quarantine measures in established laws. it is found that quarantine measures in china have a valid basis in the chinese legal system. employing the theory of five regulations of using public power, the author then analyses the legitimacy of the operation of china’s quarantine measures. based on confucian theories of sacrificial structure and governance, the author finally reviews and evaluates both the practice and the effect of the rule by morality in china’s public administration. keywords: quarantine measures, law, morality, china 1. introduction china was the first country in the world to suffer a serious covid-19 outbreak and in the face of it, china has taken active and effective responses like imposing quarantine measures to prevent the spread of the pandemic. wuhan was the first city to be locked down, and then many of the badly hit cities also issued city closure. in these cities, people were strictly limited from going out and public places were closed to prevent close contact. by fully exerting the advantages of china’s social governance system of rule of both morality and law, which emphasizes the concepts of “people first”, “life first”, china has achieved prevention and control of covid-19 at the early stage of the pandemic. in the u.s., where a single rule of law model of social governance is implemented with a complete legal system, state governments have been busy debating the legitimacy of anti-pandemic measures and asking for financial support from the central government. as gavin (2020) stated, “for at least six weeks after the first cases of covid-19 arrived in the u.s., the federal government—and most state governments—did not attempt to put in place measures like stay-at-home orders, aggressive testing, isolation, contact tracing, or quarantine. financial barriers to isolation and care remain. this sluggish response gave the virus weeks to spread unfettered and virtually undetected”. the governance system of the u.s. is facing a great challenge. the patchwork of varying state policies and often-contradictory messaging about safety measures, including face masks and social distancing, may well amplify the harms to human health and the economy resulting from a much-delayed initial response (yamey,2020). in coordination with local or state public health departments and the federal centers for disease control and prevention (cdc), states in the u.s. grappled with difficult public health responses to the pandemic in the face of great uncertainty (neal & joanna, 2020). xia (2020) claimed that when public health emergencies occur, all aspects of society are affected by a special situation that is very different from normal times. under this circumstance, society changes its operation mode. this abnormal state will bring a severe test to the government and the public, and it is undoubtedly a test of a country’s governance system. otherwise, under the circumstance of covid-19 spreading globally as an international public health event, most countries are in the struggle combating against the virus. however, some countries (i.e., the usa) that did not effectively combat the epidemic are attempting to criticize china that its quarantine measures violated morality and law. it suggests that rather than ignoring this prejudice of the west, china should defend itself to gain a positive international image and more importantly, to disseminate the experience of fighting against covid-19 to the people of other countries who are still suffering from the epidemic. 30 2. analysis from the perspective of law isolation of confirmed or suspected patients and their close contacts is currently the most direct and effective prevention and control measure adopted by all countries in the emergencies of infectious diseases. in the process of prevention and control of covid-19, the quarantine measures taken by the chinese government have played a critical role in curbing the spread of the epidemic, and have also been supported by the domestic society and the public. in the process of building a country and a government under the rule of law, the isolation measures of china must follow relevant laws and regulations, and be operated under due procedures and legal principles. however, during severe acute respiratory syndrome (sars) in 2003 and covid-19 in 2019, the epidemic prevention measures, especially quarantine measures, are partly excessively enforced by law enforcement departments, which makes it hard for citizens’ freedom rights to be effectively guaranteed during this period. though it is of great necessity to appropriately restrict individuals’ freedom of going out during the epidemic, the legitimacy of the quarantine measures should be proved under the requirements of rule of law. in this section, the author will demonstrate the validity of china’s quarantine measures utilizing providing established law terms about quarantine measures and analyzing these measures from the perspective of the theory of five regulations of using public power. 2.1 established laws the outbreak of sars was the turning point of china’s legislation to focus on public health emergencies (liu et al., 2020). during the sars epidemic, the anti-sars measures, which involved restriction of personal freedom, had some defects in terms of validity. according to articles 8 and 9 of the law on legislation of the people’s republic of china (2000), the personal freedom of citizens, which relates to quarantine measures, is an absolute reservation of the law. the personal freedom of citizens can be restricted only if there is a legal basis. however, because of the deficiency of established laws, the quarantine measures during the sars were mainly based on the “emergency regulations for public health emergencies” formulated by the state council at that time. it was not until the revision of the law of the people’s republic of china on prevention and control of infectious diseases (2004) in 2004, which provided the legal basis to the quarantine measures on the restriction of personal freedom of citizens. after that, china formulated the law of the people’s republic of china on emergency response (2007). and revised the law of the people’s republic of china on frontier health and quarantine (2007) several times (chen, 2020). these laws provide a legal basis for the various quarantine measures in response to public health incidents and infectious diseases. in the current laws and regulations, the basis for the implementation of quarantine measures mainly includes articles 39, 40, and 41 of law of the people’s republic of china on prevention and control of infectious diseases (2004), which respectively stipulate the rules of quarantine measures taken by medical institutions, disease prevention and control institutions and governments [6]. among them, the medical institutions are responsible for medical treatment in the period of quarantine and the designated places for the medical observation of patients, suspected patients, and close contacts. the disease prevention and control institutions are responsible for taking medical treatment for close contacts at the designated place. the governments can quarantine the personnel in the places where the cases of infectious diseases occur. furthermore, article 12 of the law of the people’s republic of china on prevention and control of infectious diseases (2004) stipulates that all individuals in china should accept these anti-epidemic measures. in other words, to prevent the further spread of the epidemic, the individuals who need to be quarantined must cooperate with the related institutions. however, during the period of covid-19, more strict measures were adopted throughout the country like locking down roads and blocking management of all residential areas. it put forward challenges and called for reformations to the present system of laws. in the following sections, the author will give a more detailed description of this situation and attempt to give some suggestions. 2.2 analysis from the perspective of the theory of five regulations of using public power xia (2020) argued that the key to the rule of law is to control the operation of public power. in the operation of state’s public power, whether it is decision-making, implementation of the resolution of social contradictions and disputes, five requirements must be applied based on the ideology of rule of law, namely the theory of five regulations of using public power and the administrators must constantly examine in the whole process of decision-making, implementation and dispute resolution, whether the operation of public power meets these requirements: lawful purpose, lawful authority, lawful content, lawful means, and lawful procedure. the legitimacy of the quarantine measures taken by the chinese government will be analyzed from the perspective of these five rules of using public power. (1) lawful purpose when using public power to make certain decisions and behaviors, the administrators must conform to the purpose of laws and the spirit of rule of law. the purpose of the chinese government to take quarantine measures was to prevent, control, 31 and eliminate the prevalence of the epidemic and to protect public health. as stated by wendy & michael (2020), in the theory of public health, quarantines and travel bans are often the first response against new infectious diseases and the most effective means to eliminate and curb the prevalence after the occurrence of infectious diseases. to minimize the loss of the epidemic and quicken the restoration of social order, the chinese government was wise to take quarantine measures whose purpose is consistent with that of the law of the people’s republic of china on prevention and control of infectious diseases (2004). (2) lawful authority the use of public power should be carried out within the scope of legal authority. laws endow power to public power organs and define the corresponding limits of the operation of public power. after the outbreak of the epidemic, the chinese government transformed the social governance system from normal to abnormal. compared with the normal time, the public power in the abnormal time is more concentrated. law of the people’s republic of china on prevention and control of infectious diseases (2004) stipulates that the local government and medical institutions are the main units with the right to implement quarantine measures, and the police departments can assist in the compulsory quarantine of those who refuse to cooperate. (3) lawful content when the administrators use public power to make decisions, some legal norms and current effective legal provisions must be abided by specifically. in addition, the administrators must also abide by the general legal principles, including the principles of faith, equality, and administrative self-control. the purpose of taking the general legal principles as the standard to guide the operation of public power is to regulate administrative behavior. in the process of taking quarantine measures, abiding by general legal principles, the chinese government respected and protected every citizen and regulated related laws. in epidemic prevention and control, the administrators implement the principle of equality to balance the interests of the individual and the society and treat the legitimate rights of local and foreign citizens equally. (4) lawful means lawful means require that the ways and operations of using public power complying with the provisions of laws and regulations. any behavior of the administrators can violate the individuals’ and public interests. therefore, corresponding to the lawful purpose, the ways and measures to use public power must also be carried out within the framework of the law. if there is no restriction on the power of public administration to pursue its purpose by any means, this will cause the abuse of public power and violate the requirements of rule of law. in the emergency process, we should pay much more attention to the importance of lawful means. in the process of taking quarantine measures, we saw that during the process of covid19, china’s social media repeatedly stated several viewpoints, such as “controlling the degree”, “isolating the virus, not isolating love” and “comprehensively considering the legal and emotional principles”. these viewpoints also served as the working norms of the chinese government when implementing quarantine measures (han & wang, 2020). (5) lawful procedure the decision and implementation of quarantine measures should comply with the requirements of due procedure. although the principle of the due procedure will be limited in the state of emergency, the government should follow clear legal procedures when using public power, which has been accepted by the legislative organs of most countries under the rule of law. the initiation of china’s emergency mechanism is in line with the lawful procedures and the formulation of the prevention and control emergency plan has democratic participation and scientific demonstration, which have been agreed by the chinese national council. after the outbreak of sars, china’s legislation began to focus on public health emergencies. in this circumstance, several laws were established or revised, such as the law of the people’s republic of china on prevention and control of infectious diseases (2004) and the law of the people’s republic of china on emergency response (2007). these laws give medical institutions, disease control and prevention institutions, and local governments the right to carry out necessary quarantine measures in public health emergencies. these laws also stipulate the lawful procedure in the operation of quarantine measures and designate different work to different departments as stated in section 2.1. 2.3 new challenges of laws and suggestions during covid-19, some extreme measures such as locking down roads, blocking management of all residential areas were adopted throughout the country to curb the spread of the virus. with the continuous increase of emergency measures and liberty limiting measures of local governments, the formulated measures gradually changed from requiring residents to reduce going out to requiring residents to stay at home. the purpose of these locked measures was to restrict the residents’ going out as much as possible to limit the flow of residents. the quarantined objects of such lockdown measures had expanded from a small range of people to all residents. measures of this kind had few legal bases which can be found in article 49 of law of the people’s republic of china on emergency response (2007) and article 42 of law of the people’s republic of china on prevention and control of infectious diseases (2004) on place closure. 32 for the sake of protecting public health when public health emergencies occur, chinese governments are allowed to take temporary freedom-restricting measures according to the law. however, in some public health events that cannot be covered by established laws, the government’s extreme measures to control the disease triggered the contradiction between the necessity of disease prevention and control and the protection of individual’s legal rights. if we ignore this dilemma, it will inevitably lead to the loss of the lawful boundary of various prevention and control measures and as long as there is a public health event happens thereafter, various measures to cut off the contact will be arbitrarily used, which make it more possible of the violation of individual’s legal rights. montesquieu (1961) said that people who have power will use it unless there are boundaries of the law. to make the administrators play their due roles in using public power, there must be a restriction of them. to prevent the abuse of public power caused by the excessive administrative power of the government in the implementation of various quarantine measures, we must follow the requirements of legal ideologies to supervise the legitimacy of relevant public power decisions and behaviors, thus promoting the coordinated development of power and rights. furthermore, the various quarantine measures adopted by the government should be reasonable and equal. xia (2020) said that the principle of equality requires substantive consideration. when formulating and implementing norms, we should rationally consider all kinds of social factors, emphasize the standard of equality in all situations, and prevent arbitrary administration. to sum up, after the dust settles, the government should work on improving the relevant legislation of anti-epidemic measures and building a systematic, scientific, standardized, and effective legal system of epidemic prevention and control. to make a response to the problems exposed in quarantined objects, implementation procedure, and protection of citizens’ legal rights, the chinese government should appropriately revise the established laws, optimize the procedural rules in time, thus promoting the development of the public health legal system and ensuring that the response measures of epidemic prevention and control have a legal basis. the supervision of the implementation process of quarantine measures should also be strengthened to protect the citizen's legal rights and maintain social order. 3. analysis from the perspective of morality 3.1 confucian ethics of sacrifice chen (2008) thought there is a “sacrificial construction” within the boundary of all living things. the creatures and the environment are related to each other. however, some living individuals must sacrifice other living individuals to some extent to maintain their existence. this is the interpretation of the story of “the ox and the sheep” in mencius, and the story is as follow: the king was sitting in the hall. a man passed by with cattle. when the king saw him, he asked, “where are you going to take the cattle?” the man answered, “use it to worship the bell.” the king said, “set it free! i can’t bear to see it tremble with fear and be killed without any guilt.” the man asked, “then should we cancel worshiping the bell?” the king said, “how should we? replace it with sheep!” mencius said, “one is capable to unify the world with such a heart! (worshiping the bell with sheep instead of cattle) people may think that the king is mean. i knew that the king took pity on the cattle.” king xuan said, “yes, there are people who talk like this. although the state of qi is small, how can i spare cattle? it’s because i can’t bear to see it tremble and be killed, so i replace it with sheep.” king xuan defended himself that there was no real difference between using cattle and sheep to worship the bell. the reason why he decided to use sheep to worship the bell was that he saw the cattle trembling before the bell, and he took pity on it. ignoring the authenticity of xuan’s explanation, the problem is that if he saw the sheep shivering at that time, he might also ask for “changing cattle for sheep”. in other words, there was no entanglement in how to choose between sheep and cattle as they have different values. the story shows that in any case when a choice has to be made, no perfect option will be achieved, as we have to sacrifice the other objects when one is chosen. chen (2008) said that every choice involves the loss of value or some kind of sacrifice. this loss can be tolerated, not because someone has an absolute and innate judgment on the value of a thing, but because the painful judgment caused by this emergency is unavoidable. from the perspective of benevolence, every creature should be respected and cared for, but when it is necessary to choose between the two, this choice has to be made with deep regret. to sum up, it is obvious that “sacrificial structure” has a rich connotation. it has an in-depth discussion of the problem. it states that if the king does not see cattle (or sheep) to worship the bell, then there is no essential difference between cattle and sheep, but one choice has to be made under the circumstance of some sacrifice. it also reveals that although people are compassionate, they are aware of it only when they see the misfortune of other things or people. under the premise of “all things in one” of confucianism, when the big thing is being threatened and impeded from development, some parts of it have to be sacrificed. 3.2 confucian thought of the rule of morality 33 traditionally, china has always been a society with agricultural civilization. the economic foundation and the division of labor structure jointly determined the specific historical logic of china: the natural economy and the acquaintance society constituted an ethical society with the close relationship of family and country, which is the same set of principles that implemented in governing the family, country and even the world. chen (2019) stated that when dealing with family or national problems, people are accustomed to taking morality as the first choice rather than law. only when moral education is not enough to deter the ruled class, can the ruling class use strict laws. confucius believed that the governance of a country depends not only on severe legal sanctions but more importantly on tolerant moral education. confucius said that to govern the people with decrees and to rectify them with criminal law, the common people only want to dispense the crime and punishment, but they have no sense of shame; to guide the people with morality and assimilate them with etiquette, the people will not only have a sense of shame but also have a sense of submission (the analects of confucius for politics). confucian ethics itself constructs social order by the social relationship based on kinship and interpersonal relationship. historically, benevolent governance and the rule of morality are the core ideologies of ancient chinese social governance. the two ideologies can be traced back to the governance values of the zhou dynasty. “cultivating morality throughout one’s life” was mainly reflected in the administrator’s understanding of the importance of morality and the initiative of moral behavior; “respecting morality and protecting the people” means that the governors must implement the moral policy that protects and benefits the people, and the governors should be cautious in punishment, so as not to disturb, hurt or harm the people. the “morality cultivation” and “morality respect” advocated by the people of the zhou dynasty are not only the requirements of the governors but also the requirements of institutional arrangements, which had a far-reaching impact on the later confucianism. according to confucius, benevolent governance means to govern with morality, that is, the institutional arrangement and implementation of the state and society must conform to the people’s will, and convince people with mortality (ning & wang, 2019). confucian benevolence refers to not only regulating oneself but also loving others. from a negative point of view, benevolence is “don’t do to others what you don’t want to do to yourself” (the analects of confucius ꞏ yanyuan). mencius, the representative of confucianism, further systematized the confucian theory of governance value. he opposed hegemonism and believed that convincing people with virtue is the necessary choice of benevolent governance. at the same time, he further expounded that the core of the thought of benevolent governance is the people-oriented thought, emphasizing that “the people are the most important, the country is the second, and the monarch is the least”. he advocated that “the ancient wise king liked benevolence but ignored power” and “those who are benevolent should be in a high position; those in a high position who is not benevolent would expose their evilness to the public”. meanwhile, it also required the administrators to “respect the wise people and use their abilities, and if a wise man is in power, all the people in the world will be happy”. from the above chinese traditional confucian classics, we can see that confucius and mencius’ thought of the rule of morality advocated improving individual’s moral level by improving that of the governing class, implementing peopleoriented benevolent governance, and then achieving the goal of the rule of morality. these thoughts focus on improving the moral level of the governing class and establish the value orientation of confucian governance, which is people-oriented, serving people with morality and combining morality and punishment. for a long period, the thought of the rule of morality was the dominant ideology of china’s national governance whose core is people-oriented. the thought of the rule of morality not only advocated the moral restraint of individuals but also advocated that the ruling class should be moral in governing. under the circumstance of public health emergencies such as covid-19, which can threaten people’s life safety, some necessary measures are urgently needed to protect people under the people-oriented requirements of the rule of morality. 3.3 moral analysis human rights are inviolable. however, every viewpoint exists with its presupposition and its supporting ideas. cao (2020) stated that human beings are living in a society with others and no one can live alone. therefore, it makes no sense to talk about human rights without considering others in society. furthermore, when we consider human rights, we cannot ignore the necessity of the continuation of life because if one’s living and healthy rights are not guaranteed, other rights are meaningless. chen (2008) said that throughout one’s life since he was born as a baby, he survives and grows up because of the care of his parents and even more other people. what supports the continuation of our life are not natural will, but the benevolence and moral responsibility of others, especially parents. safety, one of the human rights, is different from other general rights. it is not given by a specific social system but is natural. a society that denies the guarantee of life safety is a society without morality. only on this premise can other rights exist. a government that follows the rule of morality will take all necessary measures to protect people’s life safety. the continuation of human life is not an individual issue, it is about the continuation of society. therefore, human rights should be considered at the scope of the whole society. meanwhile, the individual’s appeal, whether it is from the insiders or outsiders, cannot be used as a criterion to judge the legitimacy and righteousness of a collective measure or behavior. everyone lives together and relates to each other closely. it is improper to blindly emphasize individual rights when the responsibility to others in common life is neglected. 34 during the epidemic, quarantine measures are made in the consideration of collective life safety. in a certain sense, as far as the measures of quarantine are concerned, on the one hand, it is self-evident that quarantine is effective in reducing infection and its starting point and motivation are to protect the personal safety of all quarantined people with some sacrifice on their freedom for going out. it is a protection of the most basic human right: life safety; on the other hand, no matter who, if his claim of going out during the city closure is satisfied, the possibility of the spread of the virus will increase and will bring out an evil impact on the society and other people. that is the situation in which human rights are truly violated. in any case, as long as an individual lives in society, he has a social responsibility, which requires him to behave in adherence to social rules of modality. in other words, the freedom of any individual is not abstract freedom beyond social responsibility. from the analysis of the above two aspects, the debate about the ranges of quarantined people and whether the individuals would be satisfied or not is more like the struggle between the two opposing parties of interests, rather than the discussion about the way to solve the problem between individuals in the community of interests. this kind of struggle ignores the fact that people coexist with each other and it causes the division of the group while making a little contribution in solving the problem. in the opinion of traditional confucianism, the root of this split lies in the absence of benevolence and morality. the kindness to other people and creatures that embodied in king xuan’s statement “not bearing seeing the death of cattle” should be regarded as a basic principle to solve the problem in the community of people. to sum up, from the perspective of the ethical principles contained in the confucian “sacrificial structure”, the significance of china’s quarantine measures during the covid-19 mainly has two aspects. first, the choice of lockdown is not the result of different parties’ struggle but is the choice under the consideration of social morality, which contains the protection of people’s lives and health and shows the government’s respect and kindness to people. second, the birth and continuation of individual life are based on the premise of group co-existence, so it is inappropriate to talk about individual rights or responsibilities abstractly with the ignorance of group living. 4. the co-effect of law and morality during covid-19 chinese traditional confucian thought of the rule of morality provides value-oriented support for chinese contemporary social governance from two dimensions. first, it provides the basis of value judgment for the existing legal rules. the goal of rule of law of china is to realize “good law and benevolent governance”. aristotle (1996) linked the concept of good law with moral value. he believed that one of the standards of good law is to reflect the moral value that people cherish. the individual is the principal part of social life, and the value orientation of institutional ethics should reflect the moral value of the people in the society it serves. then, the formulation of law in the rule of law needs to be based on the social characteristics and contemporary development trends. second, it provides guidance of value for the combination of the rule of morality and rule of law in social governance. the modern rule of morality emphasizes the moral cultivation, moral sentiment and moral education of politicians should be under the regulations of law framework that the law restricts the public power and everyone is equal in the law. the value orientation of the confucian thought of the rule of morality is people-oriented and emphasizing persuading people by morality and it is of positive significance to establish human dignity and maintain interpersonal relations and provides the basis for the combination of rule of morality and rule of law in social governance. max weber (2004) thought that the social life organized by small communities in ancient china is contrary to the modernity of the west. contemporary china’s social governance draws lessons from western economics and western rule of law thought, takes the assumption of “economic man” as the premise of governance and regulation, and makes a series of institutional arrangements with the help of public power, like the formulation of laws, through the promulgation of taboos and its punishment measures. however, although this kind of institutional arrangement can meet the minimum regulation of social behavior, it cannot achieve a society of high moral standards. economists argue that the performer of benevolent governance is not necessarily the government and what decides the rational allocation of social resources between people is not necessarily the compulsive force of a state but can be a moral habit or force. the moral force of chinese society was fully manifested in the face of covid-19. the chinese government provided free medical treatment for patients with new crown pneumonia. after wuhan was locked down, to give treatment to all covid19 patients, the chinese government invested huge amounts of money and built the huoshenshan hospital and leishenshan hospital in about ten days. 86 new designated hospitals were reconstructed or built, and 3000 beds per day on average were added in 16 square hospitals, and more than 60 thousand beds were added to meet the needs of the increasing patients. if the scale of 1000 beds is used to calculate a hospital, it means that 60 new hospitals with 1000 beds in each hospital were built in wuhan within one month. in response to the rapid increase in the supply of hospital beds, more than 40000 medical staff across the country volunteered to rush to wuhan to participate in the treatment of covid-19 patients. 19 provinces supported the covid-19 patients in 16 cities outside wuhan in hubei province. while rescuing hubei, other areas of china rapidly initiate the first-level response to an emergency public health emergency, forming a system for rapid diagnosis and treatment of new corona pneumonia and a system of prevention and control of covid-19 with universal participation. across the country, countless volunteers worked hard to help those who were quarantined at home. they guarded in the community, sent grain, vegetables, meat, and other life necessities to the quarantined people, and solved various problems of the quarantined people. 35 as discussed above, there are connections and contradictions between the principles of the rule of morality and the principles of rule of law. even in normal times, we need to be cautious to apply and differentiate them in specific events. in the special case of a major epidemic outbreak, the demand for such a demarcation is even more urgent. both rules of morality and rule of law have their value evaluation systems and to achieve the balance of the two during the epidemic, we need a meta value that can integrate the two. from the above analysis, we can find that only the people can be served as the meta value. only the people have the power to achieve the integration of the state and the society in the broadest sense. only with the people as the principal part of the society, will it be possible to solve the contradiction between the rule of morality and rule of law. people are the most fundamental value starting point of every act and policy of the government. 5. conclusion based on an analysis of china’s quarantine measures against covid-19 from the perspectives of law and morality, this study examines the legitimacy of these measures by employing confucian sacrificial structure, confucian thought of the rule of morality, and the theory of five regulations of using public power and looking for the legal basis of these measures in china’s established laws. by analyzing the moral connotation of the story of cattle and sheep in mencius, the author makes discussion on the confucian sacrificial structure and adopts it as a tool to analyze the moral manifestations embodying in china’s controversial quarantine measures against covid-19. with confucian thought of the rule of morality, this paper demonstrates the people-oriented idea contained in china’s 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(2020). legal analysis and improvement of quarantine measures in covid-19 epidemic prevention and control (in chinese, 新冠肺炎疫情防控中隔离措施的法律分析与完善). journal of kunming university (昆明学院报), 42(4), 35-40. doi: 10.14091/j.cnki.kmxyxb.2020.0 this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. 01.v02issue01.05.2022.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 8 imbalance between schema and dynamic equivalence: an analysis of the c-e translation of profile of air china yali cheng1 1school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, guangzhou, china, e-mail: 20200310011@gdufs.edu.cn abstract schema is a concept from cognitive poetics, a complete information system composed of correlative knowledge. dynamic equivalence theory proposed by eugene a. nida is a precise translation theory centered on reader’s reception. this paper synthesizes schema theory with theories in dynamic equivalence, based on which the author constructs a framework for analyzing the translation process of the profile of air china (ca), revealing some existing problems and appealing for the specific strategies for the translation of ca’s profile. this paper concludes that in the c-e translation of ca, there exist imbalances between the schemata and dynamic equivalences, namely from the perspectives of language, content and culture. it is hoped that some constructive attention and promising improvement are generated for ca’s english profile or even for other enterprises’ profiles. keywords: schema theory, dynamic equivalence theory, c-e translation of chinese airline profiles, air china (ca) 1. introduction for an airways, in addition to providing products1 and services, it also needs to publicize itself through proper channels in order to raise its international popularity and prestige in markets at home and abroad. in addition, as the universal language, english exerts a crucial impact on international communication and commercial intercourse. under this circumstance, the c-e translation of chinese airline profiles, usually acts as an information window, the highly condensed content of the company, often presenting the most valuable information to the target audience (li, 2021). airline profiles to some extent decide the very first impression of an enterprise to foreigners. however, many chinese airlines are devoid of attention to the english translation of their corporate profiles, ignoring crucial factors that should be delicately handled. as such, decent ce translations of chinese airline profiles are necessary and insightful, which is conductive to the enhancement of airline’s images, and in turn, in regard to the airline profile, it involves a wide scope with high value of translation. the c-e translation of chinese airline profiles in this study is under the guidance of schema theory and dynamic equivalence theory. firstly, schema is a concept from cognitive poetics, represents the presentation form of knowledge which systematically associates the new information with the given information for the purpose of information storage and processing; it is a complete information system composed of correlative knowledge (liu & zhao, 2014). secondly, dynamic equivalence theory proposed by eugene a. nida (1986) is a precise translation theory centered on reader’s reception (du, 2019). nida’s dynamic equivalence theory is universally acknowledged as the commonly applied translation theory to achieve the linguistic, content and cultural equivalence between the source text (st) and the target text (tt) due to its focus on accurate transformation of st’s cultural connotations instead of the rigid superficial translation, which has been highly valued and influenced china’s translation practice. this paper will synthesize schema theory in cognitive poetics with theories in dynamic equivalence, based on which the author attempts to construct a framework for analyzing the translation process of ca’s profile (st), try to propose some existing problems of profile’s translation (tt) and explore the specific strategies for them, hoping that some constructive suggestions could be provided for the references of ca’s profile or even for other enterprises’ profiles. 2. literature review this part is an overview of previous studies on translation of company profile from the angles of schema theory and from dynamic equivalence theory as well as from other perspectives. 2.1 studies on translation of company profiles from the angle of schema theory 1 the product of civil aviation is space transfer (displacement) of passengers and goods. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 9 milton (1999) regards corporate profile as an effective tool to win potential customers’ trust and to make a good impression on them by giving a brief introduction of who you are and what you do. generally speaking, a corporate profile seems as a bridge between a company and its customers or potential customers, and it is clear that the function on a whole is to inform, to promote and finally to persuade favorable responses from the target readers (jiang, 2014). therefore, how to translate their profiles as the st (chinese) to meet the stylistic requirements of the tt (english) and achieve the promotional objective become a common concern for companies and business translators (liu, 2012). the word “schema” (plural: schemata) is from the greek vocabulary2 and is firstly put forward by the german philosopher immanuel kant in 1781 in his famous work critique of pure reason. according to kant, new concept could become meaningful only when it has been connected with one’s existing knowledge (cui, 2002: 53). according to bartlett, the term “schema” refers to an active organization of past reactions, or of past experience, which must always be supposed to be operating in any well-adapted organic response” (bartlett, 1932: 201). since this paper is mainly about the translation of airline profiles from the angle of schema theory, contents as follow will conduct a more detailed literature review about it. li (2014) explores the application of schema theory in the progress of business translation and discusses the relation between business translation and the four forms of schema theory, namely, linguistic schema, content schema, structural schema and cultural schema. however, the study is too general to reveal the relevance to specific company issues, such as the translation of company profile, translation of company contracts, etc. fortunately, there are still some valuable studies concerning company profiles under the guidance of schema theory. for example, qiao (2014) conducts a comparative study on schemata of corporate profiles about the chinese companies and the british and american ones, which discovers that they have both similarities and differences of schemata in their corporate profiles at three levels: language schemata, cultural schemata and formal schemata (qiao, 2014). although qiao’s study, to some extent, will help chinese companies create corporate profiles which can be comprehended and recalled more easily by the foreign readers, her analysis is only limited to analyzing the schema similarities and differences between chinese, british and american company profiles. as such, detailed suggestions on improving the translation and writing of corporate profiles ought to be proposed on the basis of the study. besides, it will be better if the study is carried out with more data. four years later, li (2018) interprets english profiles of chinese and american telecommunication companies based on schema theory. li analyzes 60 corporate english profiles in china and the u.s. from the aspects of linguistic schema, formal schema, content schema and schema activation so as to find out the similarities and differences between the two and to interpret the differences from the cognitive and social-cultural perspectives. this paper can shed some light on the study of applying schema theory to corporate profiles and provide some implications for chinese telecommunication companies. however, it is devoid of discussion of detailed translation methods and strategies for chinese companies to create highquality english profiles. as what yan (2019) reveals in her review of cultural schemata theory in china from 2000 to 2018, most of these studies are repetitive, and the proposed translation methods are based on the translation strategies and methods proposed by previous scholars, lacking innovation; in terms of research methods, many authors only cite relevant examples, lacking in-depth discussions and explanations, which should be avoided in future studies (yan, 2019). in short, schema theory has been extensively applied in various domains in domestic studies, but at present, those studies which apply schema theory mainly concentrates on conventional methods, frameworks or strategies, which are devoid of innovation. in addition, papers analyzing the company abound, but few of which specifically focus on company profiles, not mention to airline profiles. besides, some current research on c-e translation of company profiles is disconnected from prevalent guiding theories, remaining only in the level of theoretical introduction rather than concrete application of theory and practice. there are apparent research gap in study of translation of company profiles by combining schema theory with other theories like dynamic equivalence theory. therefore, it is of great necessity and significance to fill the research gap of corporate profile translation by finding new theoretical guidance. 2.2 studies on translation of company profiles based on dynamic equivalence theory 2 greek skhéma meant ‘form, figure’. latin took it over as schēma and used it as the equivalent of figure in a range of applications, such as ‘figure of speech’ and ‘diagram’, many of which were originally taken over by english. source: https://www.quword.com/etym/s/scheme [accessed on november 28th , 2021] communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 10 in this part, studies on dynamic equivalence theory are first introduced and then previous studies on company profile from the perspective of dynamic equivalence theory and other perspectives will be reviewed. the definition of dynamic equivalence is firstly given by nida in his book toward a science of the translation. in this book, based on the experience in biblical translation, nida put forward two translation approaches: dynamic equivalence and formal equivalence. dynamic equivalence advocates that “the relationship between receptor and language should be substantially the same as that which existed between the original receptors and the message” (nida, 1964: 159). while formal equivalence pays attention to translating the meanings of words and phrases in a more literal way so as to keep literal fidelity. nida also emphasizes the priority of dynamic equivalence over formal equivalence. dynamic equivalence is the quality of a translation in which “the receptors of the message in the receptor language respond to it in substantially the same manner as the receptors in the source language” (nida, 1969: 24). it is wildly spread and gradually gains wide acceptance. furthermore, dynamic equivalence not only applies the research results of linguistics to the practice of translation but also provides a linguistic theory of translation for researchers and is of referential significance to translators (zhu, 2020). this paper prefers nida’s dynamic equivalence, because the essence of this theory is found to correspond with the characteristics of translation in c-e translation of chinese airline profiles. the detailed analysis will be presented in the following parts. because dynamic equivalence theory (also functional equivalence theory) originates the guidance of translation, research on translation based on it is abundant especially in china. however, the author finds that prevalent studies on chinese airline profiles are scarce. next, some crucial studies on company profiles under the guidance of dynamic equivalence will be reviewed. liu et al. (2014) analyzes the differences between chinese and foreign profiles of some well-known large companies, trying to use the strategy of discourse reconstruction to solve these differences based on nida’s dynamic theory. they argue that it is necessary to reconstruct the discourse in the progress of translation according to the readers’ requirements, so that the functional equivalence can be achieved and the final purpose of the company profile can be realized. zheng (2021) takes the c-e translation of export-oriented company profiles in liaoning province as an example to analyze the problems encountered in the c-e translation of company profiles and the strategies used in translation. he draws conclusions that the current translation quality is uneven, and there are problems in the c-e translation of company profiles such as improper translation, logical confusion, which affect the image and publicity effect of the company. additionally, due to differences in culture, thinking styles, expression habits, writing styles, there are many differences in content, words, syntax, and culture in chinese and english company profiles. in the process of achieving functional equivalence, methods such as restructuring, shifting, and omission methods can be used to make the translation more suitable for the target language reader’s habits (zheng, 2021). zheng collects profiles of some export-oriented companies in liaoning province from their official website. as what he acknowledges in the end of the paper, the authenticity of these corpora is beyond doubt. thus, this paper still needs to be improved and further research needs to be done on this subject. apart from export-oriented company profiles, studies on other companies’ profiles are also in full swing. fu et al. (2021) compare the differences between the english profiles of british and american e-commerce companies (walmart, asda, onbuy, etc.) and chinese e-commerce companies (alibaba, qidian, jingdong, etc.), discussing the translation problems of chinese e-commerce companies’ profiles and proposing the causes and corresponding solutions. according to their findings, the translation of e-commerce company profiles on the basis of functional equivalence is not only the conversion between forms and contents, but also the communication between cultures (fu, et al., 2021). therefore, when translating company profiles, the translator should pay attention to the reading response of the target readers, deeply understand the culture of the st, and adopt the method of translation, change the person, increase the content and adjust the structure to meet the reading habits of the target readers, so that the english company profile can be translated smoothly. 2.3 studies on translation of company profile from other perspectives after searching for studies on company profiles, the author gains two results: firstly, these studies almost use only one theory to conduct the research. despite the fact that those studies have somewhat refined the previous studies, they still lack multifaceted analyses and interdisciplinary perspectives. secondly, studies on company profiles is increasingly popular, but those focusing on airline profiles are insufficient. for example, xu (2020) explores the problems in the english translation of tea company profiles under the guidance of newmark’s communicative translation theory (1981: 22). it is proposed that tea company profile translation ought to give priority to the acceptance level of english readers and fully consider the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 11 differences in chinese and english language and thinking styles. also, tan (2021) makes a report on c-e translation of profile of zhengzhou yutong bus co., ltd in the light of communicative translation theory. based on german functionalist translation theory, gao (2019) compares and analyzes two groups of pharmaceutical company profile in china and abroad. the results show that there are significant differences between the two groups in terms of length, information distribution, high-frequency vocabulary and genre characteristics. therefore, translators need to adjust the structure of the english translation of the profiles according to the information needs and reading habits of western audiences (gao, & ma, 2019). form the perspectives of aristotle’s “three appeals theory”, perelman and olbrechts’ audience theory and presence theory, li (2020) takes huawei company profile as an example to explore the positive role of rhetorical persuasion in the selection of translation strategies and construction of translated texts in enterprise’s international publicity, aiming to help enterprises realize effective persuasion and increase their influence. besides, there are scholars absorbed in other theories to analyze company profiles, such as verschueren’s adaption theory3 (wu, 2009 & jin, 2011), geert hofstede’s cultural dimensions theory4 (li, 2013). also, shi chunrang conducts a corpusbased study on the translation of chinese enterprise profiles (shi, et al., 2012). such examples abound. however, the author deems that whatever theories are used to study company profiles, most of the subjects studied in these results are too general. that is, if the research subject is expanded to company profiles, then the reference value is not sufficiently targeted when facing companies with different types and nature. this paper focuses on a detailed subject, airlines in china, to study the dynamic equivalence problems in the c-e translation based on schema theory, striving to enhance the innovation and relevance values of company profile research. 3. theoretical framework this part contains a general introduction of the relevant concepts in schema theory and dynamic equivalence, on the basis of which a synthetic framework of analysis will be constructed and further explained. 3.1 the categories of schema theory 3.1.1 linguistic schema carrell (1983: 79) puts forward that “linguistic schemata include knowledge of letters and their corresponding sounds, grammar, vocabulary, idioms, word attack skills, and distinctions between spoken and written forms of the language”. that’s to say, knowledge of contexts or language can activate schemata stored in people’s mind when they encounter a new discourse. translation is a process of decoding (understanding) and coding (expression). as a translator, he or she is first and foremost a reader (yan, 2016: 26). good translation can only be generated when the translator masters both the st and the tt, thus it could be possible to decode the st and construct comparative schema to encode the tt in a proper way. 3.1.2 content schema content schema refers to one’s background knowledge of the content area of the text and it contains both specific and general information in the given topic (carrel & eisterhold, 1983: 79), which exerts a crucial influence on translators to understand the st. kern makes a more detailed explanation for content schema: it is related to the cultural concept, the topical knowledge and the extent of readers’ understanding about the world (kern, 2000). linguistic schema is the first step to comprehend the st, while content schema makes compensation for the inadequacy of previous understandings, helping translators well master the st and generate more perfect tt. 3.1.3 cultural schema numerous scholars around the world have defined cultural schema. according to garro (2010), cultural schema is related to the cultural knowledge beyond the text, the generalized collection of customs, tradition, folklore etc., which is a cultural knowledge structure in people’s mind concerning the past experience. george yule states that cultural schema refers to previous knowledge structures based on experience in a particular culture (sun, 2015: 14). specializing in the research on 3 a linguistic theory created by jef verschueren, a leading belgian linguist and secretary general of the international pragmatics society. 4 hofstede's cultural dimension theory is a framework proposed by geert hofstede, a dutch psychologist, to measure cultural differences among different countries. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 12 the application of schemata to translation, liu (2003) maintains that cultural schema is the knowledge structural chunk about culture existing in people’s brain, or it is an organizational model of the knowledge of culture based on previous experience, which can be mobilized to perceive and understand various cultural phenomena in the world. in a word, besides the translation process, cultural schemata can be used in diverse areas and they are dynamic with many differences, but there are also commonalities which can be learned through efforts. thus, cultural schemata can be compensated in one way or another. 3.2 dynamic equivalence in translation nida (1969) once said that the purpose of translation is to achieve the closest equivalence between the st and the tt, which is also important in the process of c-e translation of airline profiles. furthermore, the surface structure of the st needs to be divided into the basic elements of the deep structure 5 ; these are “transferred” in the translation process and then “restructured” semantically and stylistically into the surface structure of the tt (see the figure 3.2). figure 3.2: nida’s three-stage system of translation (from nida and taber, 1969: 33) next, for the sake of better guidance for the c-e translation of chinese airlines, the author carries out a detailed analysis of equivalence from the perspectives of language, content and culture, aiming to make an instructive connection to the three corresponding schemata mentioned in the section 3.1 (linguistic, content and cultural). 3.2.1 linguistic equivalence according to the author, both the semantic and stylistic concepts belong to the category of language, so semantic equivalence and stylistic equivalence mentioned above are collectively referred to as linguistic equivalence. semantic equivalence is the most fundamental and important principle in translation, which requires the translator to pay attention to the grammatical and semantic relationships between words, phrases and sentences. in other words, in order to achieve semantic equivalence, translators are expected to pay attention to the lexical levels as well as syntactical ones; as for stylistic equivalence, it is defined as functional equivalence among the source text and translated text, aiming at achieving consistent expression by the use of invariant with the same meaning (nida, 1969). usually, parallel clauses are used in chinese airline profiles, and they are antithetical and neat, which may cause translation challenges for both translators and target readers. to achieve stylistic equivalence, translators can adopt literal translation method under the guidance of dynamic equivalence theory. 3.2.2 content equivalence nida (1969) believes that translation ought to firstly adhere to the content equivalence and then form equivalence. content equivalence is not strictly word-to-word or word-to-sentence equivalence. therefore, in the process of translation, the translator should focus on the meaning and spirit of the original text, instead of sticking to the linguistic structure of the original text, that is, not sticking to formal correspondence. when translating the chinese airline profiles, the translator cannot only analyze the language itself but put the language into a specific context to analyze its meaning and function. as 5 some of nida’s systematic approaches borrow theoretical concepts and terminology both form semantics and pragmatics and from noam chomsky’s work on syntactic structure which formed the theory of a universal generative-transformation grammar. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 13 such, nida proposes a number of tweaks, such as adding notes or footnotes. in order to make the readers of the target text can react similarly to the readers of the original text, the translator should fully consider the needs of the target readers for understanding and appreciation, and select annotations suitable for the specific context. 3.2.3 cultural equivalence language is an essential and important part of a given culture and that the impact of culture upon a given language is something intrinsic and indispensable. when it is used in contexts of communications, it is bound up with culture in multiple and complex ways. as is known, the relationship between language and culture exerts great impact on translation, in which case, translation is the replacement of textual material in one language by equivalent textual material in another language, so the process of translation at least gets involved two different cultures. in terms of the cultural difference in translation, the equivalence between chinese and english can be categorized into total equivalence, near equivalence, little equivalence and non-equivalence (wang, 2016). 3.3 analytical framework for the present study since this paper is based on schema theory and dynamic equivalence theory, the figure 3.4 synthesizes both of them to illustrate the analytical process. the detailed processes and illustrations are as follow. figure 3.3: analytical model of translation process based on schema theory and dynamic equivalence theory for present study firstly, the schemata starts from the writer of the st who can transfer his/her schemata in the mind into the texts, otherwise the st and the later tt (translation) will not be generated. secondly, the translator ought to make a contrastive analysis of the schemata embodied in the st and tt from the angles of language, content and culture, thus activating the corresponding st schemata and encoding them into the texts of tt (translation). meanwhile, the transformation of dynamic equivalence between the st and tt need finishing. thirdly, based on the tt, translators should regard themselves as the target readers or find some real ones, trying to encode the tt in the most appropriate way to construct tt schemata which can achieve the highest degree of schemata transformation from st to tt. 4. discussion and results communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 14 in the light of the figure 3.3, the author will go through the following three steps to interpret the translation process. firstly, decoding the st and activating the st schemata from language, content and culture; secondly, comparing the st and tt and actively constructing the schemata of the tt; thirdly, verifying the accomplishment of dynamic equivalences between the schemata of st and tt and polishing the tt again. next, some specific examples from the profile of ca6 will be analyzed based on these three steps. table 4.1: five examples cited from the profile of ca example 1 st tt ca the design also features the calligraphic version of ca’s chinese name, a reproduction of the handwriting by late chinese leader deng xiaoping, the architect of china’s drastic social and economic transformation who laid the foundation for the country’s economic power. example 2 the corporate logo of ca depicts phoenix, a legendary bird worshiped by the nation since ancient times as a symbol of luck and happiness. example 3 with imagination stretched a bit, the way the logo is laid out recalls the english word “vip”. the deep red color is used since it’s associated with anything happy and lucky in chinese culture. example 4 chinese ancient literature contains constant references to the bird which “flies from the eastern happy land over mountains and seas and bestows luck and happiness upon all parts of the world”. example 5 our vision is to become “a leading carrier in the world”. our mission stresses “ operational safety, customer orientation, steady growth, people development and fulfillment of responsibilities”. our brand positioning is to be “a professional, trusted, internationally respected chinese brand closely associated with china ”. step 1: decoding and activating the st schemata. as is shown, from the angles of language, these four examples are full of long, compound sentences and four-word structure words, making information detailed and understandable, such as example 1 ( ) and example 5 ( ). a series of four-character structures also make the st symmetric, vivid, full of vigor and rhythmic beauty. however, the contents are connected to chinese history and legend, and the time span of context is large, from ancient legend to modern society such as example 4 ( ) and example 5 ( ), so the understandings and schemata of the st become harder to decode. furthermore, from the angle of culture, there are a large amount of research value in the st. step 2: comparing the st and tt and constructing the schemata of the tt. table 4.2: analyzing translated texts three angles comparative schemata 6 sources: http://www.airchina.com.cn/cn/about_us/company.shtml & http://www.airchina.com.cn/en/about_us/company.shtml communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 15 st (chinese) tt (english) linguistic (1) chinese emphasizes the implicit coherence of sentences without fixed grammar or syntactic format. (2) the text is sometimes compact but sometimes scattered. (3) in the st, the modern vernacular and ancient chinese can be switched flexibly. (1) english pays attention to syntactic structures and their explicit cohesion. (2) the text is scattered. (3) in the tt, modern english is universally used. content (1) contents cited from classical quotes make meaning more difficult to be decoded. (2) the time span of context in the st is large, from ancient legend to modern society. (1) in the tt, the content schemata of chinese classical quotes are elusive. (2) the time span of context in the tt is disordered, from ancient legend to modern society and then to the past century. cultural expressions related to distinctive chinese history, myths and legends have frequently occurred. the tt is devoid of expressions or explanations about chinese history, myths and legends. from the aspect of linguistic equivalence, the sentences in the st usually have no obvious conjunctions and the content structure is fragmented; while sentences in the tt have complete subject-verb-object with compact and complete structure. in example 3, although the st lacks a detailed subject, it is understandable that the logo of airline, or the phoenix is illustrated with reference to the context, which emphasizes the implicit coherence of sentences without fixed grammar or syntactic format. in the tt, however, sentences must have complete subject-verb-object with compact and complete structure to make the meaning clear and readable. from the perspective of content equivalence, the tt fails to achieve the correspondence of meaning with the st. foe instance, in example 3, “ ” is translated as “with imagination stretched a bit”. the concept of “imagination stretched a bit” is extremely vague and the translation is somewhat arbitrary, breaking the content equivalence. also, “ ” in the st cannot find the translated meaning in the tt. from the angle of cultural equivalence, there exist cultural defaults by comparing the st and tt because the translation version cannot provide reasonable and readable connotations of the st. for example, in example 4, “ ” has neither a counterpart nor an interpretation in the tt; “ ” is translated as “eastern happy land”, but how “ ” can be connected to “happy land”? it contains a cultural default here. also, “ ” in chinese refers to selecting the essence, but there is no corresponding expression in the tt. such cultural defaults abound in the c-e translation of the profile of ca. step 3: verifying the accomplishment of dynamic equivalences between the schemata of st and tt and polishing the tt again. based on the linguistic equivalence, the author deems that the schemata of st and tt fail to accomplish linguistic equivalence in the fields of the word-selection, syntax, text order and style. for instance, “ in example 1 is translated as “the architect of china’s drastic social and economic transformation”, breaking the semantic equivalence and leading target readers to the domain of architecture or a social revolution, which is far from the original definition. in fact, there is a proper noun to express “ in english, that’s “china’s reform and opening-up”. thus, personally speaking, the tt of can be better translated as “the chief architect of china's reform and opening up”. similarly, the schemata of st and tt exist content equivalence problems in terms of meaning, spirit, as well as context, and the cultural equivalence is little accomplished. for instance, example 2, the st is translated as “a legendary bird worshiped by the nation since ancient times as a symbol of luck and happiness”, which breaks the content and cultural equivalences. because on the one hand, the word “ lacks equivalent translation, and it is not specified which country this is. on the other hand, the translation of is inaccurate, missing the cultural connotations. in chinese, refers to “something auspicious”, a sign of good fortune. it is considered by communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 01 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 16 confucianism to be a natural phenomenon that expresses the will of heaven and is beneficial to human beings. thus, contains the connotation of oneness of heaven and humans and it cannot simply translated as “a symbol of luck and happiness” what’s worse, is devoid of corresponding translation in the tt. in summary, from the perspective of authors, example 2 can be better translated as “phoenix, the king of birds, is the auspicious bird in the ancient legend of the chinese nation”. by and large, the company profile of ca suffers from a series of translation problems, concentrating on the imbalance among the schemata of st, the schemata of tt, and dynamic equivalences. thus, some translation strategies is necessary for ca. according to the contents above, strategies for solving the problems in the c-e translation of a's profiles can be provided from the perspectives of language, content and culture. firstly, from the linguistic angle, translators are expected to have a good command of linguistic features and differences of the source language and the target language, trying to activate the schemata based on the corresponding linguistic habits, such as the text, grammar, syntax and style. secondly, in addition to the language abilities, translators ought to possess abundant knowledge as well as excellent competence of sorting and interpreting information, because rich knowledge accumulation and sufficient practice are conductive to the process of schemata adjustment. thirdly, on the level of culture, it is necessary for translators to strengthen and deepen the understanding of different culture and customs, avoiding cultural prejudices and ambiguities, adding footnotes for opaque and elusive contents and omitting redundant contents. 5. conclusion under modern circumstance, c-e translation is an indispensable bridge for communication and understanding between china and the world. hence, scholars and translators are expected to find translation problems and spare no efforts to present more better and smooth translations. the paper provides an innovative analytical framework that allows more translation problems to be studied in the future. what’s more, this framework synthesizes schema theory and a series of dynamic equivalence rather than under a single theory. therefore, for the future researches on c-e translation of company profiles or on other translation problems of company issues, it is hopefully applicable and feasible. references bartlett, c. 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[master’s paper in jiangxi university of finance and economics]. 17 this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 v02issue02.06.2022.0613.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 33 the chinese schema and power direction of the dissemination of korean tv dramas yong lu1 1school of art, guangdong university of foreign studies, no. 2 north baiyun avenue, guangzhou, china, e-mail: ly3519@126.com abstract the dissemination of korean drama narrative art--the exotic art form in chinese context-is not only a typical form of cultural output in the current social context but also the product of self-adjustment of the artistic style of korean dramas under the foreign context. the tendency of visual aestheticism, the aesthetic text writing of daily life and the emotional appeal of universal meaning held by the korean dramas have become the influential factors for this artistic style to enter the chinese context and disseminate. the rising consumption consciousness in contemporary society has become the external inducement of the dissemination of korean drama culture in china, which lays the internal driving force for spreading of this culture in china from the two dimensions of production and acceptance. korean dramas--as a foreign cultural style of chinese communication--not only present a unique visual landscape and mirror image of life for the development of chinese film and television art but also provide a more diverse and more affluent world picture for chinese film and television art atlas. but the dissemination of korean dramas in the chinese context also forms a specific power relationship with the aesthetic elements that stimulate audio-visual pleasure in the images or the derivative goods and fashion demands formed by korean dramas. while laying the groundwork for their narrative style in the chinese foreign context, korean dramas also set up a practical strategy of intertwining art and power. the dramas aim to construct the intention of cultural identity but also provide a sample for the culture colonization. an analysis of the chinese communication schema of this artistic style is undoubted of positive, enlightening significance to constructing the aesthetic orientation of the cultural subjectivity of a specific nation. keywords: korean tv drama, visual communication, chinese context, power, cultural identity 1. introduction as an exotic art style, korean drama is undoubtedly the cultural form that disseminates the local culture deeply and has the most extensive influence on the local cultural structure and aesthetic consciousness of the society after the spread of western learning to the east in the 20th century. the oriental art form, which is very different from the western cultural pedigree, has changed the structural atlas of the current chinese culture, cutting into the growing realm of modern chinese mass culture with its unique narrative representation and expression. the art form evolved into colorful and dazzling aesthetic symbols, constructed the unique exotic landscape in the local cultural family, and triggered a pretty general convergence effect and cultural identity. admittedly, the dissemination of korean dramas coincides with the multi-dimensional representation of the "visual turn" in modern society. as a model of modern visual art, korean dramas’ narrative style and visual language signs not only contain the essential connotation and practical significance of modern visual texts but also extend the external schema and internal genealogy of popular culture in a sense, providing a more diversified paradigm for the modern evolution of popular culture. here, korean drama, a dominant art style in modern society, is focused on the aesthetic mirror of popular culture. the discussion of the dramas’ unique narrative form, visual landscape, as well as the extended power structure and practical significance undoubtedly has essential reference value for the pluralistic isomorphism and meaning integration of current culture. at the same time, it will also provide practical aesthetic thinking for the narrative paradigm of modern visual text. 2. the mass carnival in the image world: the visual representation and aesthetic orientation of the narration in korean dramas as a model representative of modern visual art, the dissemination of korean dramas benefits from the rise of popular culture and the promotion of social consumption consciousness. the popular culture creates a suitable context for korean dramas to spread in china. as a cultural form of modern society, the context of popular culture's derivation and growth accords with the pluralistic characteristics of modern society, and consumer-oriented social transformation is an essential driving force for the continuous extension of popular culture. a consumption-oriented society is not only a society with rich materials but also a society in which consumption dominates production and demand. " there is all around us today a kind of fantastic communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 34 conspicuousness of consumption and abundance, constituted by the multiplication of objects, services, and material goods, and this represents something of a fundamental mutation in the ecology of the human species" (baudrillard,1998). the concept of consumption constitutes a kind of ideology in the current society and has become the foundation of modern daily life. meanwhile, consumption also changes the aesthetic consciousness of the social subject and promotes the aesthetic consciousness of the subject to understand different cultural forms actively. south korean drama is a model cultural representative of subject aesthetic consciousness in the context of consumption. it is no accident that korean dramas landed on chinese mainland. if the eastward spread of western culture at the beginning of the 20th century is a way for chinese people to dispel the dimension of reality with the help of western learning, korean tv dramas at the end of the 20th century, as a form of asian culture, represent a tributary in the wave of multiculturalism in modern society, and are the free choice of consumer society to cope with the multicultural needs of society. the cross-context communication is more imbued with cultural and even economic implications and lacks political motivation marked by the introduction of western learning to the east. in other words, it is the consumption-oriented social context that gives birth to korean tv dramas as a foreign culture. korean tv dramas, like hong kong, taiwan and hollywood movies, did not set off an upsurge when they landed on chinese mainland at the early beginning, however, with the continuous integration of the narrative representation of this artistic style based on foreign context, with the technical support of modern media, and with its unique narrative techniques and aesthetic connotation, korean tv dramas have constructed a specific "field" for the local extension of foreign culture in china, delineating and constantly expanding the admiration and worship of their followers, thus forming a different landscape and different elegant demeanor in the current chinese cultural territory. first of all, adhering to visual aesthetics is the formal tone of the mirror narration of most south korean dramas. in the eyes of aesthetics, the primary mission of art is to provide the sensory pleasure to the aesthetic subject, following the direction of aestheticism. “arts have only one highest law, which is the law of form or harmony” (xu ,1988). the form can create everything, and without form participation, there will be no artist's creative feelings, and it will be impossible to create beautiful art. therefore, south korean tv dramas are the best samples of aestheticism. superficially actors with excellent images are usually selected to act as plot roles, coupled with beautiful and appropriate costumes and character activity environment, but this is only one aspect of the plastic visual aesthetic tendency of south korean dramas; however, the aesthetic landscape created by south korean dramas is more reflected in a harmonious configuration of visual mirrors. the character image, language or activity environment, the visual level of picture composition, color allocation, or dynamic setting all follow a much stricter principle of identity. hence most south korean dramas present warm, coordinated, fresh, and tranquil visual images, which create a comfortable and leisurely acceptance effect. however, compared with pure aestheticism, korean tv dramas do not fully uphold aestheticism. because aestheticism, in order to mark the uniqueness and eternity of art, usually separates the close relationship between art and life. “life always destroys the artistic theme with its reality. life is a reflection, while art is real” (wilde, 2020). in the theory of aestheticism, art and life are out of touch and out of tune. korean tv dramas strictly distinguish the relationship between content and form, which is characterized by marked aestheticism in form, while the narrative theme is based on real life. they effectively integrate the beauty in form and the reality in theme into the modern mirror image. then they organically unifies beauty with life, which is an effective correction and realistic promotion of the aesthetic concept of traditional aestheticism. secondly, the aesthetics of daily life is the inherent logic of the narration of most korean dramas. the daily life is the most basic living state of human beings. it has always been regarded as a non-essential secondary field. the chinese and western philosophy before the 20th century were generally stranded in a metaphysical tradition, paying attention to the abstract world outside daily life. the “turn of daily life” at the philosophical level opened in the 20th century catalyzed the change in the field of aesthetics. nowadays, the aesthetic of daily life is the mainstream of the evolution of modern society, which means the aesthetic in the modern sense has moved from the dimension of traditional art to the dimension of daily life. according to jameson “the culture of the 19th century is also understood as elegant music, painting or opera, and culture is still a way to escape from reality. in the theory of post-modernism, culture has become completely popular, and the distance between elegant culture and popular culture, pure literature, and popular literature is disappearing. the post-modernist culture has expanded from the specific ‘cultural circle’ in the past into people's daily life and become consumer goods ”(jameson, 1986). korean tv dramas adhere to the narrative logic of the aesthetic of daily life. its presentation style includes two aspects: first, the internal narrative style of korean tv dramas follows the mainstream characteristics of the aesthetic of daily life. the narrative theme, character shaping or plot setting of south korean tv dramas follow the objective laws of real life. exploring the true meaning of beauty from daily life has become the basic melody of most south korean dramas. korean tv dramas usually carry themes taken from the trivialities of daily life, rejecting bizarre plot descriptions and thrilling visual stimulation. advocating the most precious spiritual value of human nature in the ordinary details of daily life, the dramas refocus the details of ordinary life and its human brilliance that are gradually forgotten because of the rapid speed and rhythm communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 35 of life in the real world in front of the audience, awakening audiences' gradually forgotten tenderness of life. then the audiences truly realize the rich multiple aesthetic values in real life. second, as a universal art style, south korean tv dramas have entered into real life as a model symbol of the aesthetics of daily life. according to featherstone, the british sociologist, one of the meanings contained in the aesthetics of daily life is the rapid flow of symbols and images that permeate the daily life of contemporary society. at this level, korean tv dramas can become the most exemplary aesthetic representative of daily life in real life of chinese society. the identity effect and extended economic driving force in modern chinese society have become a cultural event with far-reaching influence. it has added strong korean amorous feelings and a elegant cultural demeanor to modern social life. thirdly, the value demand for the supremacy of emotion and the tragic artistic structure is the mainstream thread of the narrative art of korean tv dramas. so far as the prevalent themes of korean tv dramas are concerned, the mature and customized joint creation and the motif pattern of emotion supremacy have become the established narrative framework of korean drama art. even though the themes of south korean dramas are quite extensive and related to all aspects of social life, the cores of the dramas by the diversified plot framework often shared a standard color--the deep thinking of people's emotional world and the value of existence. either the personal life experience or the philosophy of trivial daily life in south korean tv dramas contains actual emotional demands which achieve a high degree of emotional sublimation in the seemingly ordinary and even aesthetic plot designation to meet the emotional expectations of modern people who are increasingly squeezed and gradually lost in modern society. if the pursuit of emotional life experience is the eternal topic of korean drama narration, the tragic plot settings and tragic artistic rendering have become the unique framework of korean drama narration. the rendering and worship of tragic art in south korean dramas are different from the emotional tone worshipped by the local culture, which make the art form more attractive and changes the established “sense of joy” foundation of the local traditional culture. compared with western culture, the local culture belongs to the category of “sense of joy,” but western culture is more “guilty”. although the essence of “guilt” permeates with the feelings of “tragedy,” the respect for tragedy has not become the mainstream of western culture. the narrative style of korean tv dramas has undoubtedly broken the inherent atlas of chinese and western cultures and added new seasoning to the cultural feast of the domestic audience. wang guowei, a modern sinology master said: “the spirit of our people represented by operas and novels does not go without this happy day color--begins with sadness, finally joyful; begins with the separation, finally reunion; begins with the poor, and finally enjoyment” (wang, 2021). the people who are accustomed to the "sense of joy" no longer adhere to the existing taste of traditional culture and art. those people are eager to experience the sad feelings of exotic style in the pluralistic and open art map and then expand the aesthetic field of vision and artistic sentiment. it is worthwhile mentioning that the sad feelings rendered by south korean dramas are pretty different from the tragedies of western culture. most tragedies in the west should be character tragedies, such as hamlet and macbeth. the tragic plots designed by south korean tv dramas are no longer based on character tragedies. to some extent, it is no longer the characters’ character but the plots themselves that causes the tragic plots and endings in south korean dramas. both the enrichment and even perfection of the characters leading to tragic plots and endings are more in line with the aesthetic demands of the chinese people. therefore, it is natural to gain recognition and resonance. 3. homogenization of receptive context: the realistic dimension of aesthetic identity of narrative art in korean tv dramas the internal reason that why korean dramas can gain a local cultural identity as a foreign art form lie in the unique artistic representation of the dramas’ narration, while the external reason that why korean dramas are highly sought after and admired in the chinese context is the agreement between the receptive context of chinese culture and the internal value and aesthetic orientation of korean dramas. to some extent, the compelling motivation for promoting the cross-context spread of this art form is that the value system implied in korean tv dramas is accepted, recognized, and even infatuated in the context of chinese culture, resulting in a certain aesthetic and value. admittedly, the success of korean dramas in the chinese cultural context benefits from the horizon and even emotional fusion produced by the cultural vision held by the creative subject of korean drama narration and the common vision of the aesthetic subject in the cross-cultural context. the internal mechanism of constructing the horizon fusion is the cultural homogeneity of korean context and chinese context, because the two cultures share the foundation based on confucian culture. in the history, the spread of confucian culture in china and south korea is a source and flow relationship. in the early period of koguryo, confucian culture has formed a comprehensive coverage and in-depth influence on this nation. the rulers of this nation practiced promoting the absorption of confucian culture from the perspective of official administration. therefore, confucian culture which is a foreign culture and ideological system has also built a solid ideological foundation in traditional korean society. although the confucian trend of thought have been created and changed by korean ancestors, their inherent communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 36 ideological tone is consistent, which is the potential premise that cannot be ignored in the cross-context communication of modern korean dramas. unlike the gradual decline of confucian cultural influence in china, even in today's mainstream korean society, adhering to and inheriting confucian culture is still the national principle that modern korean society has always believed in. the national concept of “loyalty to the king,” “making friends with faith,” and “filial piety” in interpersonal relations, “persuading good and punishing evil,” and “suppressing evil and promoting good” in literature and art have always been fundamental basic norms in today's korean society. in china, although the source and mainstream of the local culture have been continuous in the context of confucianism, the same wind and cloud surge in history as questioning and abandonment, and this doubt and even deviation reached the peak in most of the 20th century. after the reform and opening up, the mainstream consciousness began to re-discover the historic value of confucian culture and gradually restore the current status of this traditional culture; however, the artificial historical fracture cannot be bridged in a short period. the development of modern society witnesses the improvement of material life which promotes the social subject to have a sense of “seeking roots.” but the fracture of the cultural foundation caused by the times has made the chinese people deaf to the cultural identity, communication style and value. the western civilization introduced by reform and opening up cannot fill the gap in the spiritual level of the chinese people because it is heterogeneous. cultural identity crisis has become a common social phenomenon in modern society. when south korean dramas landed in mainland china with the most authentic and straightforward source culture, chinese people found a good medicine to heal their identity crisis from the inner spiritual system implied in korean dramas. the ethical norms and lifestyle of confucianism inherited by korean dramas have formed a reasonable concept of self-identity in the interaction between themselves and others, which promotes the realization of each individual's selfidentity. confucianism carried by korean dramas activates the cultural memory of chinese people and awakens their pursuits for life experience and value. they gradually capture the long-forgotten spiritual relics in this art form. what korean tv dramas bring is the form of “back-feeding” rather than the simple cultural entertainment and audio-visual pleasure. the dramas reawaken chinese people's re-cognition of traditional culture and arouses chinese people's search for roots. they bridge the cultural rupture of chinese people's self-spirit in the transition between traditional and modern times and provide an ideological treasure house to awaken memory and emotion for the cultural continuation of modern chinese people. nowadays, as a style of strong popular culture, korean tv dramas bear the mission of structuring and transmitting the social values whose core is the cultural thought of confucianism. the interpretation and admiration of confucianism carried out by korean dramas prompted the theory to be deeply rooted in the foreign context and continued to expand. the ethical morality, family concept and personality pursuit advocated by confucianism have laid the foundation for the basic principles of modern korean national culture. the scope and depth of the practice of morality advocated in confucian culture in south korea even far exceed the state of its mother culture. it is korea's pursuit and worship of confucian culture that makes the artistic form become the foundation of modern korean culture. based on this culture, korean dramas convince chinese people so that some scholars assert: “korea today is a living fossil of ancient china” (zhan, 2007). the confucian culture in south korean dramas stimulates the sense of acceptance of china's local context. it lowers the threshold for this foreign cultural and artistic form to settle in a foreign context. it promotes the recognition and acceptance of this artistic style in the chinese context. it is undeniable that as far as the receptive groups in the chinese context are concerned, the receptive groups familiar with the confucian cultural ideas promoted by south korean dramas are not unfamiliar with the confucian cultural ideas promoted by south korean dramas. when chinese people find that their mother culture has taken root in a foreign country, they can derive a sense of cultural existence and cultural pride. this sense aims to promote the interaction and integration of the two national cultural contexts, which become the psychological normal for chines audiences to accept korean dramas and their cultural thoughts. from the perspective of communication, communication as a two-way behavior has never been wishful thinking. facing the "invasion" of a foreign culture, the audiences dominate and defend in a state of stimulation. their understanding and meaning construction of foreign cultural texts are usually obtained through “negotiation” with the text in a given cultural context, during which the audience's ability of cultural reflection and cultural criticism should not be underestimated. their mother culture and the values determine what kind of label they put on foreign culture and how to judge it. the cultural exchanges between china and south korea are the convergence and collision of heterogeneous cultures. the entering of korean dramas should be regarded as a kind of communication in cross-cultural context. the degree of influence of a foreign culture in the cross-cultural communication depends on the degree of differences in the two cultural contexts. if there are more similarities between the two cultures, the result of decoding the foreign culture tends to be more consistent with the connotation given by the original information coding. “the more people have in common, the less serious setbacks or cultural misinterpretations they encounter in communication. when the cultural differences among members of different cultural groups increase, the possibility of misunderstanding is undoubtedly greater” (guan, 1995). confucian culture carried by korean dramas has communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 37 bridged the gap between chinese and korean cultures. due to the rendering of confucianism, the values, lifestyle and even spiritual pursuits advocated by korean dramas are not difficult to be understood and accepted in the eyes of chinese audiences. the cultural identity and acceptance channels are connected and giving rise to a robust cultural convergence effect and cultural intimacy. “perception is an important aspect of socio-cultural factors, and the similarity of perception makes it possible to share meaning within the same culture” (samovar, 1988). it is the original homogeneity between chinese and korean cultures that has led to the popularity of korean dramas in china. in spite of gaps and ridges, the dissemination of korean culture is much smoother than that of western culture in china. 4. the power structure behind the light and shadow: the power writing of the narrative art of korean tv dramas as a foreign art style, the popularity of korean dramas in the chinese context undoubtedly meets the internal needs of many social elements, thus building a grand landscape of cross-context communication. the dissemination of korean dramas behind "watching" is a process of exerting power. korean dramas also transfer and inculcate power to the audience by conveying happiness. the dramas achieve the operation of power by following the development of happy elements in the text and stimulating the happy emotions of the audience. as far as south korean tv dramas are concerned, the pursuit and production of audio-visual pleasure is an inexhaustible driving force for the popularity of korean tv dramas. pleasure production in korean tv dramas is realized under a certain degree of power, or it can be said that power as the core force of visual art is also the core of south korean tv dramas. in order to exert power over the audience and control the majority of the audience, the pleasure element of the korean drama itself is critical. korean dramas capture the audience and stimulate the audience's interest only by showing pleasure. under the temptation and cooperation of pleasure, the korean drama text controls the text power and realizes its cultural influence. so far as the receiver is concerned, the recipient's understanding of the korean drama text is no longer flat or even subversive but internalized into the life experience of the performance picture, plot details, and character modality in the text to achieve a sufficient perception of the happiness of the text. power has been internalized into the viewer’s heart. it creates the viewing subjects who need the joy of the text. korean dramas undoubtedly can produce pleasure, whose inexhaustible source is provided by the detailed description of the plot, the careful design of the aestheticism picture, and the comprehensive presentation of life details. those unique text features shorten the distance between the text and the audience and let the audience feel the happiness created by the text in the process of watching. particularly, the famous theme of real life, especially the life of ordinary people in south korean tv dramas, bridges the gap between the inner perception of the audience in the real world and the artistic text. the production of happy meaning has become common in the process of korean dramas dissemination. in the discourse power field dominated by elite discourse, although the film and television texts describing elite discourse may also arouse the audience’s happiness, the realistic gap between elite discourse and ordinary audience exists objectively. however, the degree of its influence is limited, at least in such text dissemination, the audience's direct understanding is difficult to occur, so visual legitimacy is often questioned. the majority of viewers often drift away from this influence, so the scope and extent of which text-dominated happiness is being accepted are significantly reduced. south korean drama texts, through creating happy elements, stimulate the audience's interest in watching and form a temptation mechanism through which obtains the ultimate operation of power. like other visual texts, the korean drama texts give full play to the charm of temptation in expression and transform the temptation of the text into an lasting performance of the desire. the temptation of desire does not lie in what it can express but in the continuous expression of desire itself. this continuous expression delays the goal of desire indefinitely, abstracts desire and becomes a form of desire that represents characters. the power to realize temptation in south korean tv dramas is quite hidden, which can still bring audience groups into their symbolic violence. this is a symbolic law which is, moreover, not a law but an unavoidable rule. we adhere to it without grounds, as something arbitrary yet obvious, and not in accord with some transcendent principle (baudrillard,1990). the symbolic rule of this temptation is not the logic and rules of life followed in real life, and it belongs to the rules of symbolic temptation itself. the audience controlled by this set of rules in watching becomes the slave of the temptation phenomenon gradually. under the disguise of this temptation rule the korean drama texts have a profound influence on the audience, and the korean tv drama texts have become the object worshiped by the viewers so that the viewers lose themselves in front of the symbol of temptation and give up their dominance. admittedly, behind the popularity of any cultural text style, there is a deep ideological drive. as frederick jameson said, “at the most basic level, every text is a political fantasy”(jameson, 2004). an interactive relationship exists between the film and television script, which is also the carrier of media information and ideology, that is power. in the process of dissemination, media information not only reflects the pattern of benefit distribution formed by the media information itself and the firmly established power but also “is organized in a way to fundamentally represent a unique view of world construction. this information is usually processed in dominant or consultative codes. furthermore, it is shared by most people as a form of communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 38 common sense” (baldwin et al., 2007). power usually manipulates visual discourse in micro form to achieve the purpose of controlling the audience in korean dramas narration. the micro form can be interpreted in the following aspects, such as the operation of the lens, the editing of the visual pictures, the technical processing of the plays, and the choice of the narrative mode of the play. employing the microcosmic operation, power is digested into every detail of korean drama narration: lens, editor, color, language, action and scene. the characteristic portray of the details in korean dramas lays the foundation for the unique representation of korean drama. the portray also exerts the implied power weight to the extreme. according to bourdieu, power usually works in a power field. the possession of these powers also means the control of the special profits of this field(bourdieu, 1997). power constructs a workplace with the help of artistic texts. power permeates the micro details of artistic texts and drives the audience's aesthetic taste, life habits, emotional representation, and even the reconstruction of the audience's self-identity. the popularity of korean tv dramas has undoubtedly built a solid cultural field, which also has a built-in mechanism of power operation. influence by this power, the aesthetic taste of the audience gradually converges, their life habits are gradually assimilated by the plot, and their evaluation criteria of visual discourse and lifestyle that are commonly used in the field are circulated. the visual discourse and the life mode often break through the barriers between the artistic world and real life. the visual discourse gradually evolves into a fashion in the real world. power is a way to prevent people from having the slightest grievance by shaping people's ideas, perceptions, and preferences and making them accept their place in the existing order (baldwin et al., 2007). through the unified allocation of style, interest, and sentiment, korean dramas have built a tremendous visual landscape and interest order, which is gradually presented in a fashionable style. the social individuals are classified by the fashion in the form of field whose external embodiment is unique language styles, dress styles, or behavioral characteristics. those unfamiliar with and do not accept this fashion form are often excluded from the established field. fashion shows a special charm in the restriction, which has the charm of the beginning and the end simultaneously, novelty and instant charm (simmel, 2001). almost every polar korean drama has set off a fashion trend in the chinese context, from beer and fried chicken to popular clothing and even korean-flavored famous words, without exception, triggered a wave of convergence of the pursuit effect. definitely, as a foreign art form, the hidden power operation of korean tv series directly promotes its inheritance and acceptance in the foreign context and constantly expands its acceptance field. superficially, what it presents is only a foreign spread of cultural and artistic style, which is nothing more than a successful case without suspicion in the modern society with increasingly close globalization. but the role of this power cannot be underestimated in terms of its influence. culture promotion is often based on the premise of occupying, weakening, and even destroying the existing field of other cultures. the continuous dissemination of korean dramas brings not only the exotic amorous feelings of the visual senses but also a collision and intersection of the two cultural forms. a culture carries the values and world outlook of a nation. one foreign cultural form encroaching on the existing field of the local culture will undoubtedly tamper with the national identity and value orientation behind the established culture. the result is that the original local cultural map is weakened, forgotten, or even questioned, and the national character of the cultural foundation is challenged, let alone the material fields such as the economic level behind the culture. those economic benefits produced by the korean dramas are the direct testaments. each successful korean drama is the extraordinary driver of economic effects. 5. aesthetic disenchantment after carnival: cultural enlightenment and rational reflection on the narrative art of korean dramas as a flashing exotic symbol in the cultural field in modern transformation of chinese society, the occupation of the chinese market by korean drama art and the capture of the audience in the context of chinese communication are successful. the extended cultural influence, the resulting economic, and even political forces cannot be ignored. those who benefited from the dissemination of western learning to the east in the 20th century may not take the wave of korean dramas in china for granted, and the dominant events located in the pure cultural boundary seem to be challenging to explain the impact of this cultural phenomenon. the right way to treat the surging of korean drama art in a foreign context and even the charismatic performance of this art form is not to echo and imitate others. what we should do is to make a calm and objective analysis and judgment, putting aside the layers of fog scattered by the art of korean dramas. we can see the real mirror image constructed by this art form through this enchanting figure. as an outstanding feature of the period in social transformation, the binary opposition trend at the cultural level is becoming increasingly evident. the increasing resolution of traditional ideas and the continuous emergence of cultural thoughts of the times are intertwined. it seems that deconstruction has become the most fashionable subject word in social development. the re-establishment of the new value system and the choice of the traditional deconstructed ideas coexist with deconstruction. a mutual connection and relay of the two value systems often lead to the swing and loss of the cultural acceptance groups, which provides a space for the “other” to enter the culture. especially those who lack the basic cognition and scale of discriminating communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 39 and screening cultural codes are easier to become the trend of foreign cultures. an in-depth acceptance and spiritual infatuation of foreign culture are usually based on forgetting the mother culture, especially when the old and new cultures are at the barrier of transformation, which constitutes the evaluation symbol of social fashion. they are likely to lead to the absolute negative consciousness of the mother culture and the values it carries. we can assert that any nation that ignores, forgets, or even abandons its cultural traditions and values is terrible. if the forgetfulness and abandonment become a collective unconsciousness of the society, the hidden crisis is even more self-evident. korean drama is a foreign cultural form whose opportunity to enter the chinese context is that china is at the joint orifice of its social transformation, including cultural transformation. the traditional cultural concept has been questioned, and the new cultural form has not been established yet, which provides a port for korean tv dramas to cut in. the chinese complex held by korean tv dramas themselves has undoubtedly paved a broad road for this cultural form to go straight forward. in china, however, the values carried by korean dramas are, after all different from the local culture, and their molded social life is also very different from the chinese life. if the chinese audiences are infatuated with the life patterns and values in the mirror for a long time, there may be social problems and even mental confusion in real daily life probably. definitely, as a scientific attitude, we do not need to label the local popularity of south korean tv dramas as cultural imperialism or cultural colonization, nor do we need to be too anxious about the tide of "ha-han" caused by south korean dramas. unlike economic and political exchanges and interaction, a majority of cultural exchanges are mental activities. the essential elements of their inherent cultural concept and artistic representation are the reason why the art of korean dramas has been popular in foreign contexts for a long time. compared with south korean tv dramas, the domestic film and television production, and even cultural creation in recent years are lack of high-quality works but with higher expansion of profit-oriented consciousness. the production concept of "short and fast" affects the subjectivity of the producers. the criticism for domestic film and television production, and even the cultural field is the lack of in-depth excavation of traditional cultural ideas, ignoring the aesthetic of daily life and details under the guidance of quick success and quick profit. the leading factor of film and television art cannot be separated from entertainment, but "while attaching importance to the function of entertainment, we cannot ignore the educational function of mass culture" (zeng, 2007). the practical strategies to deal with the exotic culture occupying its own living space should be endowing culture with profound connotation, promoting the educational attribute of culture and art, overcoming the superficial, planarization carnival, and demagogic representation of modern culture, and genuinely improving the connotation construction of culture itself. as a result, the art of korean dramas caused a wave of visual "shock" in the chinese context under its glamorous shadows and costumes. they smashed the memory bunkers of chinese people and constructed a mythological palace of commodity fetishism, thus creating a virtual world in an intoxicating real space. korean dramas plasticize the subject consciousness of foreign space, guide the aesthetic subject to realize the generation of subject consciousness by glancing back, and present it in the form of a "perfect landscape" in an atmosphere 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achievements of innovative projects of colleges and universities under the department of education of guangdong province (project no. 2019wtscx024) and is supported by institute of hermeneutics of guangdong university of foreign studies (fund no. csy-2021-ya-04). abstract: culture-loaded words (hereinafter referred to briefly as clws), as their names imply, are expressions that mostly present the uniqueness of culture. the translation of clws has always been one of the core issues in translation, and the dilemma of translation adequacy and readers’ acceptability has also bothered translators for centuries. thick translation theory, stressing that translation is not so much a literal work than a process of cultural transmission, attaches great importance to cultural differences. under such theory, this study takes clws in nienhauser’s translation of shih chi: po-chi as a study object, attempting to find out how thick translation can be realized concerning translating clws. generally speaking, literal translation, sense-for-sense translation, a combination of different strategies, translation with the footnote, and transliteration are widely adopted in nienhauser’s translation. when it comes to specific kinds of clws, even a certain kind of translation strategy is likely to be realized by many different methods. this variation can be explained by three elements: the translator’s subjectivity, the degree of cultural difference, and the degree of contextual default. the translator’s subjectivity is the dominant factor for it determines translation purpose, while the other two factors affect the “thickness” of an individual word’s translation. key words: thick translation, culture-loaded words, shi ji, translation strategies 1. introduction culture-loaded words are words, phrases, and idioms that signify things specific to a culture, reflecting the unique ways of doing things that a certain group of people has gradually accumulated over the course of history and that set them apart from other people (liao, 2000). shih chi, as one of the most monumental historic records, reveals almost every facet of ancient society, and thus contains nearly every kinds of words manifesting chinese history and culture, i.e. culture-loaded words. amidst all the translation of shih chi, the grand scribes records places most attention on the academic value and the transmission of source-language cultural information (li, 2015). being loyal to the original text earns nienhauser’s translation a great deal of credits, and thus widely recognized as an ideal object for studying chinese history. therefore, this study will take nienhauser’s translation as an example to examine how thick translation can be realized. according to thick translation, the interpretation of culture rather than the transformation of literal meaning becomes the foremost question in the translation, which makes thick translation a valuable perspective to study translation. even though many scholars have taken initiative and adopted this theory to study the translation of chinese classics in recent years, few researchers have studied the translation of shih chi from this account. in addition, despite much theoretical work on thick translation, there is no determined guidance when it comes to the practice of translation, notably the translation of historical records like shih chi. therefore, this study will take culture-loaded words—hereinafter referred to briefly as clws—in nienhauser’s the grand scribes records: basic annals of pre-han china as an example to examine how nienhauser and his team realize thick translation. owing to the limitation of time and space, not terms in all chapters in nienhauser’s translation are examined, instead of which clws in the five emperors, basic annals one, the chou, basic annals four, the ch'in, basic annals five, and hsiang yii, basic annals seven these four symbolic chapters are selected as the research sample. 2. previous studies on thick translation 38 in 1993, kwame anthony appiah borrowed the term “thick description” from an anthropologist called geertz and proposed a mode of “academic translation”, a translation that contains numerous notes, commentaries, or prefaces where a rich “cultural and linguistic” context is embedded (appiah, 1993: 817). inspired by appiah, theo hermans (2003) made further discussions on this matter in his work: thick translation is a “line worth pursuing” when it comes to the translation across culture and language. despite all the theoretical strides of thick translation, neither appiah nor hermans gave any specific guidance on how thick translation should be realized or to what degree a translation can be dismissed as thick translation. martha p.y. cheung illustrated that thick translation should “identify itself as a problematics of cultural representation” (cheung, 2007: 32). researches on thick translation have shown a rapid upward trend in china over the years. when thick translation was newly introduced into china, scholars mainly focused on the evaluation of this translation theory and many of them also appreciated its significance (duan, 2006; sun, 2010; xia, 2008; song, 2014). amongst all these researches, wang (2020) had systematically summarized three values brought by the thick translation—highlight on translators’ subjectivity, providing cultural representation and readers options, giving many credits to this translation theory. however, they didn’t explain how translators—as they said— “accept or refuse the cultural information” and when in translation practice. thus, this study will go into detail to see what exactly influences the translators’ decision in translation based on a highly praised translation version of shih chi. this question somehow resonances with another unsettled problem: when numerous extratextual notes should be added into translation as appiah suggests? many scholars have discussed the influence of translators’ subjectivity and how the translators “filter” cultural information, via doing comparative studies between different translations or in-depth observation on single translation (zhong, 2017; zhao, 2010). zhou and qiang (2016), for example, successfully divided the “thickness” of translation into six levels and discussed the relationship between the subjectivity of translators and thick translation in detail. despite all of their contributions, influencing factors other than translators’ subjectivity appear to be less discussed, so this study will continue to explore this question based on the grand scribes records. chinese scholars also put forward different views on the practice of thick translation. based on the theory of annotation and subtext, wang and yang (2012), taking the anthology of english translation of chinese translated discourse as an example, classified explanatory notes on the basis of their functions into six major types. their findings provide a valuable window on how translators make translation thick in the explanatory notes, so this study also borrows this classification when analyzing the notes in nienhauser’s translation. in addition, in a comparative study of three chinese versions of on rumours, cao exposed the drawbacks brought by numerous annotations included in the translation and appealed for adopting implicit thick translation strategy, which refers to adding explanatory words in the translation text without changing its original meaning (cao, 2013: 3). following his work, wan and hu (2020) proposed that translation strategy can be divided into explicit translation and implicit translation these two types of translation. for all the progress made in the previous studies, the translation strategies identified appears to be not enough to cover all kinds of clws in historical records like shih chi, while the application scope of some similar translation strategies also show a clear distinction. take the intext-bracketing mentioned in wan and hu’s article as an example, pietro adopted this kind of translation method when approaching the names of the famous historical figure, while nienhauer used a similar method to deal with the words without equivalent expression in english. shih chi, other than classic novels such as a dream of red mansions or a floating life, covers more ancient political events, warfare in particular, and thus could be harder for scholars to understand. therefore, focusing on clws, this study attempts to find out the translation strategies used in nienhauser’s english translation, hopefully making some contributions to the application of thick translation. 3. translation strategies of clws based on thick translation to analyze translation strategies more carefully, this paper adopts chen xiaodan’s classification of clws and is ambitious to find out the translation strategies applied in the translation of each kind. chen (2010) furthered deng yanchang’s (1989) classification, sorting them into two categories: absolute sense-vacant clws and semi sense-vacant clws. semi-sense-vacant clws refer to the expressions that have partially equivalent concepts in the culture of another language. it is the nonequivalent part that causes the vacuum of sense. in general, these kinds of words can be further divided into three categories: clws with multiple meanings, clws with cultural connotations, and pragmatic-sense nonequivalent clws. within clws with multiple meanings, the content specified may have only one expression in the source language, while several expressions are representing a similar content in the target language. for example, the word “cousin” is used to describe all children of aunts or uncles, while chinese usually use “表弟 biǎo dì” “堂妹 táng mèi” to distinguish the sex and blood relationship. in addition, clws with cultural connotation refers to terms which contain different implicit meanings in the sphere of different cultural background. for instance, the term “龙 lóng” symbolizes majesty and omens in chinese culture, while it could be regarded as the representation of evilness in english culture. furthermore, some expressions have their pragmatic meaning in one certain language, but few corresponding expression in another language function the same way. for instance, while terms like “贵 guì” “您 nín” can be used to call the opposite side in conversation politely, only the term “you” shares the same meaning. such kind of clws is defined as pragmatic-sense nonequivalent clws. in the grand scribes records, there have generally identified five kinds of translation strategies: transliteration, literal 39 translation, sense-for-sense translation, translation with footnote and a combination of different strategies. when it comes to a certain kind of translation strategy, it may involve more precise translation methods in practice. what’s more, some of those translation methods have been be applied to all kinds of clws, while the others tend to have certain application scope. 3.1 transliteration transliteration generally refers to transmission from the source language to the target language with a similar pronunciation. according to nienhauser (1994), a simplified version of wade-giles’ romanization is adopted in the grand scribes records. this translation strategy is found to be used to approach absolute sense-vacant clws only. however, the cultural information can hardly be transferred to the target language context using this kind of translation strategy. for this reason, transliteration is normally supplemented with other extratextual notes such as footnotes or supplementary materials. by providing cultural information in the paratext, the readers are able to have a systematic understanding of the clws. however, on the negative side, this translation strategy brings more obstacles in reading. example 1 sl (source language):项籍者,下相人也,字羽。(《史记笺证:贰, 本纪·项羽本纪》,第 559 页) sl in pinyin: xiàng jí zhě, xià xiàng rén yě, zì yǔ. tl(target language): hsiang chi 項籍 was a native of hsia-hsiang 下相 3 (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 179) . footnote: 3 located just west of modern su-ch'ien 宿遷 in kiangsu (t'an ch'i-hsiang, 2:8). it was also only a few miles east of the confluence of the ssui(四)and sui(唯)rivers. as will be seen below, much of the early activity in this chapter takes place along the ssu river north and west of hsiang yu‘s hometown. for one account of the origin of the name hsia hsiang see "so-yin",but this place it over 50 miles north west of these events and is therefore probably in error (by nienhauser, hsiang yii: basic annals seven: 179). as example 1 indicates, the translator transliterates the terms “下相 xià xiàng” based on the wade-giles romanization with its original chinese characters attached. may the quotations of original text slow down the reading speed of target readers in comparison to traditional translation, yet it is a direct reflection of chinese culture, bringing the readers a visual impression (li, 2015). here, the translators exquisitely interpret the meaning of the term “下相 xià xiàng”: first of all, the translator indicates the modern location of hsia-hsiang; then by relating this place to other frequently mentioned places, the translator actually explains a warfare situation happened in the historical event to the readers so that they are able to create a more comprehensive picture in their minds when learning those events in the translated text. at last, the translator also introduces a different account of interpretation as reference and make critical comments on this interpretation. 3.2 literal translation literal translation can not only reflect the aesthetic value of the author to a large extent but can also convey the information that sense-for-sense translation may not be possible to achieve (chen, 1998). here, literal translation, including several translation methods, should be understood as a translation strategy from a broad sense. generally, literal translation as a strategy of translation refers to translation containing some “tracks” of the original text, which places great attention to the equivalence in form between the source language and target language (huang, 2009). 3.2.1 literal translation: literal correspondence literal translation is an effective way to represent the source-language culture as much as possible, so this translation method has been widely adopted to approach all kinds of clws. when using this translation method, the translator translates the original text based on its literal meaning. chinese word, as one kind of ideograph, carries meaning in every single character, for which the advantages of literal correspondence could be maximized. still, literal correspondence without footnotes there might be some missing cultural default becoming invisible to the readers, while the readers find these terms easy to the reader and easy to understand. here, a case will be analyzed to explain how this translation strategy works practically. example 2 sl: 项王按剑而跽曰:“客何为者?” (《史记笺证:贰, 本纪·项羽本纪》,第 587 页) sl in pinyin: xiàng wáng àn jiàn ér jì yuē: “kè hé wéi zhě?” tl: king hsiang rested his hand on his sword, raised himself to his knees, and said: "who is this guest (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 192)?” in example 2, one’s understanding of the culture-loaded term “跽 jì” is built based on the knowledge that ancient chinese sat on their calves in the daily life. when they removed their hips from their calves and kept their upper bodies straight, this act was called “跽 jì”. in this context, this act suggested that king hsiang was alerted when he saw fan kuai was trying to break in (han, 2004). however, the emphasis of this sentence should fall on the act “按剑 àn jiàn”, i.e. “rested his hand on his sword” in english translation, which shows that king hsiang was ready to defend himself anytime. the act “跽 jì” just makes his act more complete to the readers and highlights this attitude. as a result, the translator’s simply translating it to “raised himself to his knees” doesn’t cause much trouble for the readers to understand this situation. likewise, words such as “社稷 shè jì” “司马门 sī mǎ mén” “白璧 bái bì” “玉斗 yù dòu” “黄屋车 huáng wū chē” “衰絰 shuāi dié” “素服 sù fú” adopted the same 40 translation strategy. despite all the advantages of this, it also makes the readers less possible to understand clws thoroughly as they do with the help of annotation. furthermore, literal correspondence is also used to translate clws with cultural connotations. however, in those situations, literal correspondence plays the role of presenting a word’s basic sense while neglecting its hidden cultural information. given this fact, literal correspondence is also called omission, when it comes to words with cultural connotation. 3.2.2 literal translation: chinese word-building imitation according to the theory of realia2, there are generally five kinds of translation strategies: calque, approximate translation, transcription, descriptive translation, contextual translation (mark & moira, 2004). among these translation strategies, “calque” means translating the clws based on the source language’s grammatical rule. chinese word-building imitation follows a similar logic to the calque strategy—the translators recreate a similar expression in the target language based on the word structure of the source language. this translation strategy is found to be used to approach clws with cultural connotation only, notably official titles. example 3 sl: 闻陈王败走,秦兵又且至,乃渡江矫陈王命,拜梁为楚王上柱国。(《史记笺证:贰, 本纪·项羽本纪》,第 562 页) sl in pinyin: wén chén wáng bài zǒu, qín bīng yòu qiě zhì, nǎi dù jiāng jiǎo chén wáng mìng, bài liáng wéi chǔ wáng shàng zhù guó. tl: when he heard that the king of ch'en had been routed28 and that ch'in's troops were about to arrive, he crossed the chiang, forged an order from the king of ch'en appointing hsiang liang as the king of ch’u’s supreme pillar of state,29 and said: "the land east of the chiang has already been pacified (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 181). footnote: 29 shang chu-kuo 上柱國;"chi-chieh" notes this was equivalent to the post of minister of state (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 181). in example 3, “上柱国 shàng zhù guó” is an official title in ch’u during the warring states period, the status of which is approximate to a prime minister in ancient china; but after the warring states period, this position is normally designed as an honorific title instead of a formal job title with power (han, 2004). in nienhauser’s translation, the expression “supreme pillar of state” is adopted, which is reproduced in correspondence with the word structure of “上柱国 shàng zhù guó”: “supreme” means “most important, or most powerful” according to the macmillan english dictionary, similar to the meaning of “上”; parallel to the term “上柱国 shàng zhù guó”, “pillar of state” means someone powerful and respected within the country. besides, in the footnote, the translators explain the duties or status of this position with the reference source attached. unlike literal correspondence, this translation presents the basic sense of this word in a more implicit way like what this position is supposed to do. however, this translation method can remind the readers of the fact that this position is designed in another culture, avoiding them falling into the fallacy of “easy tolerance” brought by masking the cultural differences (appiah, 1993: 818). 3.2.3 literal translation with intertextual notes or addition this kind of translation can not only preserve cultural information but can also complement the cultural vacuum of sense without sacrificing the textual fluency (wang, 1997). however, owing to the limitation of textual space, the complemented information that can be added into the translation text is also rather limited. this translation strategy is found to be used to approach absolute sense-vacant clws and interchangeable words of pragmatic-sense nonequivalent clws. example 4 sl: 遂见东方君长,合时月正日,同律度量衡,脩五礼五玉三帛二生一死为挚,如五器,卒乃复。(《史记笺 证:壹, 本纪·五帝本纪》,第 16 页) sl in pinyin: suí jiàn dōng fāng jūn zhǎng, hé shí yuè zhèng rì, tóng lǜ dù liàng héng, yǒu wǔ lǐ wǔ yù sān bó èr shēng yī sǐwéi zhì, rú wǔ qì, zú nǎi fù. tl: he used five pieces of jade, three kinds of silk, and two live animals and one dead animal as presents. [this was done] in correspondence with [the rank symbolized by] the five kinds of tokens (by nienhauser, the five emperors, basic annals one: 9). in example 4, the term “五玉三帛二生一死 wǔ yù sān bó èr shēng yī sǐ” refers to several etiquette requirements that differ from level to level of the federal lords, according to han (2004). in chou, an era that relied on the system of rites and music to maintain the hierarchy, different ranks of federal lords were required to follow different standards of etiquette on various occasions. in nienhauser’s translation, literal translation can be recognized in the first sentence, but in the second sentence, intertextual note “the rank symbolized by” is added to the text, interacting with the word “the five kinds of tokens”. since the 2 realia (latin, the real things ). in translation, realia (plural noun) are words and expressions for culture-specific material elements. 41 etiquette requirements mentioned earlier are subject to the same rank requirement of “the five kinds of tokens” as the text indicates, this addition to the text completes the meaning of “五玉三帛二生一死 wǔ yù sān bó èr shēng yī sǐ” in translation. with intertextual notes, the readers have access to the literal meaning of this term and learn more about the core issue it embraces—the political and cultural systems in chou as well as the social norms that shaped people’s minds and behaviors at that time. 3.3 sense-for-sense translation sense-for-sense translation pays more attention to recreating the images of clws in target-language culture, which can help the readers establish the fluency and incoherence of translation texts in a short time. similar to literal translation mentioned above, sense-for-sense translation should also be understood as a strategy of translation, which focuses on transferring the meaning of the original text and places less attention on the equivalence in form (huang, 2009). however, in some cases, the aesthetic value of expressing implicitly in the original text can be destroyed by this transparent translation. and most importantly, this translation strategy is possible to render an “easy tolerance” of the foreign culture and weakens its impact in turn (appiah, 1993: 818). 3.3.1 sense-for-sense translation: alternative term when alternative terms of clws can be found in the target language culture, it is possible to achieve sense-for-sense translation by adopting these terms. due to the advantages, this translation strategy is widely applied in translating all kinds of clws. even though the content referred to by absolute sense-vacant clws is totally missing in the target-language culture, expressions similar to their literal meaning may still be found. however different these terms are, the practice of translation basically follows the same rule—define the words, then find an alternative term in the target language. example 5 sl: 吾令人望其气,皆为龙虎,成五采,此天子气也。(《史记笺证:贰, 本纪·项羽本纪》,第 585 页) sl in pinyin: wú lìng rén wàng qí qì, jiē wéi lóng hǔ, chéng wǔ cǎi, cǐtiān zi qì yě. tl: i have had a man observe his aeromantic signs, and they are always in the form of dragons or tigers appearing in all five colors (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 190). in example 5, the culturally unique term “气 qì” , literally referring to energy or gas, origins from religion or superstition in the warring states period, ch’in and han dynasties. at that time, people believed that the shape and sign of cloud revealed the fate of the individual, and the omen given by those shapes of cloud was dismissed as “气 qì” (han, 2004). in nienhauser’s translation, “气 qì” is translated as “aeronautic signs”. truly that there is no concept resembling the term “气 qì” in english, but the translator adopts its basic sense and uses the alternative term “sign” to describe it. in correspondence to the position of “气 qì”, the term “aeronautic” is added to the front of “sign”, preserving the cultural information in the source-language text. though this kind of translation makes clws easier to understand for the readers, other hidden cultural information might inevitably become invisible during the reconstruction of the images from the source language to the target language. let’s return to example 5, without the cultural background that observing the form of cloud and inferring the prophesy it implies is a religious practice in ancient china, some western readers might be confused why the aeronautic space of one person has a sign. 3.3.2 sense-for-sense translation: generalization sense-for-sense translation can also be realized by generalizing the basic sense of clws, when the cultural background of these terms is not required by the context. the advantages of this translation strategy are obvious—it makes these terms easier for the readers to understand. however, this translation strategy may render the readers less possible to learn about the thick cultural background of the terms. this translation method is found to be used to approach absolute sense-vacant clws. example 6 sl: 项羽乃悉引兵渡河,皆沉船,破釜甑,烧庐舍,持三日粮,以示士卒必死,无一还心。(《史记笺证:贰, 本纪·项羽本纪》,第 566 页) sl in pinyin: xiàng yǔ nǎi xī yǐn bīng dù hé, jiē chén chuán, pò fǔ zèng, shāo lú shè, chí sān rì liáng, yǐ shì shì zú bì sǐ, wú yì hái xīn. tl: hsiang yii led all his troops across the river; he then sank all his boats, smashed his cooking utensils, burned his cantonment, and took with him only three-days' rations, showing that his officers and soldiers would fight to death, that not even one man hoped to return (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 187). in example 6, the word “釜甑 fǔ zèng” refers to two unique cooking utensils in ancient china, similar to pot and jug in the modern world. in the context, mentioning the term “釜甑 fǔ zèng” is just to show hsiang yii’s determination to beat his enemies, so here “釜甑 fǔ zèng” more tends to be an expression and symbolizes all the cooking tools that hsiang yii’s army have access to. in short, it is what “釜甑 fǔ zèng” stands for instead of its literal meaning matters so the translators translate “釜甑 fǔ zèng” to “cooking utensils” rather than the literal translation like “ancient pot and jug”. 3.3.3 sense-for-sense translation: contextualization 42 contextualization is generally applied to those clws which may have different meanings in different situations. the meaning of words could change along with the development of history, notably the conversion of connotations, the expansion and reduction of extensive sense etc. (gao, 2000). in these cases, the translation mainly varies from context to context and thus has no fixed pattern. for instance, in example 14 and 15, “….公 gōng” contains different meanings in different conditions, it can be an official title or an honorific title. this translation method is found to be used to approach clws with multiple meanings. example 7 sl: 沛公 (《史记笺证:贰, 本纪·项羽本纪》,第 585 页) sl in pinyin: pèi gōng tl: magistrate of p'ei (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 185) example 8 sl: 缪公 (《史记笺证:壹, 本纪·秦本纪》,第 317 页) sl in pinyin: miù gōng tl: duke mu (by nienhauser, the ch'in, basic annals six: 92) as the examples listed above indicates, different translations are adopted in correspondence with different contexts. in chinese context, one character is possible to function differently, so variances can be seen in nienhauser’s translation in order to satisfy the requirement of each context. let’s explain this in the case study. in example 7, unlike another term, the term “沛公 pèi gōng” seems more to be a pragmatic custom rather than a formal title. it is a custom in ancient china that you call someone with their position. people used “沛公 pèi gōng” to call liu bang because he had been the magistrate of p’ei county. in this way, “沛公 pèi gōng” is translated as “magistrate of p'ei” instead of “lord of p’ei”. in example 8, “公” is an honorary title, one of the five ranks of noble class which is illustrated in the footnote in chapter 1. thus, “缪公 miù gōng” is translated into “duke mu”. 3.3.4 sense-for-sense translation: connotative overtness sense-for-sense translation can be realized by translating the implicit meanings of the clws. this kind of translation strategy can not only contribute to uncovering cultural information in a more direct way, but also make the translation easier to understand for the readers without adding numerous annotations. for this reason, cao (2014) defines it as an implicit thick translation. this translation method is found to be used to approach clws with cultural connotations. example 9 sl: 每吴中有大徭役及丧,项梁常为主办,阴以兵法部勒宾客及子弟,以是知其能。(《史记笺证:贰, 本 纪·项羽本纪》,第 559 页) sl in pinyin: měi wú zhōng yǒu dà yáo yì jí sang, xiàng liáng cháng wéi zhǔ bàn, yīn yǐ bīng fǎ bù lè bīn kè jí zǐ dì, yǐ shì zhī qí néng. tl: secretly he organized and trained his guests, retainers and other young men in the arts of war, and in this way he came to know their abilities (by nienhauser, hsiang yii, basic annals seven: 179). in this case, the term “宾客 bīn kè” should not be simply understood as guests in english; actually, this term refers to those poor or powerless talents who are voluntarily fed by a rich and powerful family and serve them as consultants or guards in exchange (li, 2001). and that’s why hsiang liang trained the young men to test their abilities. in nienhauser’ translation, the expression “guests, retainers” are used. according to the macmillan english dictionary, the word “retainer” means “a servant, especially one who has worked for someone from a high social class for a long time”, which is very close to the original meaning of “宾客 bīn kè” in the context. instead of simply translating the literal meaning, the translators follow the implicit meaning of this term in this context directly so that the readers could have a logical understanding of the behaviors of the historical figure and even the whole historical event. in addition to this term, phrases such as “秋毫 qiū háo” “常车 cháng chē” “士伍 shì wǔ” also adopt the same translation. 3.4 footnote footnote refers to the added explanatory at the end of each page, which is usually adopted when the culture-loaded terms embrace great differences between the source language culture and the target language culture, or when the context requires so. this translation strategy is seldom used alone, the translator usually combines with other translation methods. through this translation strategy, the translator is able to preserve the exotic charms of clws to a large extent, even though the readers may feel a bit inconvenient to search for cultural information of the terms. this translation strategy is found to be used to approach all kinds of clws. example 10 sl: 三年,王冠。(《史记笺证:壹, 本纪·秦本纪》,第 360 页) sl in pinyin: sān nián, wáng guàn. tl: in the third year (335 b.c.), the king [hui-wen] was capped248 (by nienhauser, the ch'in, basic annals five: 110). 43 footnote: 248 this was a ceremony, performed when a young noble reached twenty, which symbolized his coming of age (by nienhauser, the ch'in, basic annals five: 110). footnote plus other translation strategy is suitable for clws with huge intercultural gap. in example 10, the term “冠 guàn” is translated as “cap” according to its literal meaning, which reveals that the coming-of-age ceremony in ch’in dynasty is symbolized by cap. beyond that, the translators further deepen the interpretation of this term in the annotation by explaining its cultural background. the intertextual relationship between the text and annotation provides the readers with a rich cultural interpretation where source-language culture is effectively represented. in addition, phrases such as “初伏 chū fú” “三户 sān hù” “金鼓 jīn gǔ” “阡陌 qiān mò” also use the same translation strategy. 3.5 combination of different strategies this translation strategy does not have a regular pattern of practice, and it is found to be used to approach all kinds of clws. the translation usually depends on the requirement of the terms themselves or the context. for example, the term in the grand scribes records “土德 tǔ dé” is closely related to the theory of wu xing and the theory of five virtues, and origins from some legendary stories associated with the earth that occurred at the time of huang-ti as lu-shih ch’un-ch’iu records (han, 2004). for this reason, people recognized huang-ti as a king that was blessed by the earth. in the book, the translator uses the expression “an auspicious omen” to describe the term “德 dé” according to its core sense, and the expression “related to earth’s power” to describe the term “土 tǔ” according to its literal meaning. meanwhile, the translators quote the explanation of lu-shih ch’un-ch’iu as intertextual reference and put it into note, enriching the cultural background of the term “土德 tǔ dé”. to put it in nutshell, thick translation follows no pattern. in fact, the definition of thick translation remains controversial till today. according to appiah's definition, only translations with annotations or extratextual texts can be defined as thick translation, but many scholars have shown in their research that there should be various categories of thick translation strategies (cheung, 2007; cao, 2016; wen & wang, 2016). at the same time, some scholars have pointed out that the theory of thick translation is lacking in guarantees from methodology to results (wu & zhu, 2019). therefore, this study should clarify that the so-called “thick translation strategy” here should be considered as a translation strategy that helps translators to achieve deep translation with the premise of not obscuring source-language culture. as for the definition of translation text with thickness, it should be judged from the degree of cultural interpretation that the whole book presents. generally, considering the loyalty to source-language culture, literal translation, transliteration or other translation with notes should be the first concern in translation. 4. influencing factors of translation strategies so far, the translation strategies used by nienhauser and other translators have been explained in detail via case studies. with so many translation strategies, how the translators decide to adopt one translation strategy for these words and another one for other words? in this part, three potential influencing factors are identified based on the context theory: the translators’ subjectivity, the degree of cultural differences and the degree of cultural default. 4.1 the translators’ subjectivity regardless of all the different opinions on thick translation, there is one thing that many scholars agree about thick translation: translation is always related to the translator’ s research purpose. according to translation background and translation purpose illustrated in the paratext in the grand scribes records, translation project of the entire shih chi started from 1970s to 1980s, when there still were thirty chapters of shih chi without thorough english translation and the most complete translation then was the translation of burton watson (nienhauser et al, 1994; nienhauser, 1996). burton watson’s translation is generally recognized as a reader-friendly book with great aesthetic value, but he still sacrifices the scientific rigor of translation by simplifying academic terms, chinese personal names or titles (klein, 2010; nylan, 1996; bodde, 1995). in this case, to provide an “academic translation” has become a historical task. for this reason, nienhauser sets “a faithfully, carefully annotated translation which is as literate and consistent as possible” as their purpose of translation (nienhauser et al, 1994: xvii). during the interview with wei hong in 2018, he restated that accuracy was the priority of their translation, and their translation is for scholars and specialists instead of regular readers. therefore, in his translation, foreignizing translation is mainly adopted: extensive annotations are added in the book and literal translation works as the main translation strategy. 4.2 the degree of cultural difference the degree of cultural difference also plays an important role in the translation. here the degree of cultural difference should be understood vertically and horizontally, that is, both the wideness and depth of cultural difference should be taken into consideration. the depth of cultural difference largely impacts the difficulty of understanding words originated in an alien culture. according to the context theory, the translators normally start from the literal meaning of exclusive terms representing different human civilizations, and find out the general meaning based on the context; after that, the meaning of words should be reaffirmed in the social-cultural context; next, the meaning of words should be recreated in the target44 language culture based on the cultural information of both source-language culture and target-language culture; at last, the meaning of words will be expressed in the target language (chen, 1998; liu, 2001). in this process, the cultural differences between target-language and source-language function as the key element for understanding. if the cultural void is large, meaning that alternative concepts are hard to be found in another culture, then understanding such words could take more effort for the targeted readers. such shared and implicit knowledge in two different cultures, defined as situational default, is normally expected to build the foundation of conversation (wang, 1997). thus, for absolute culture-vacant clws, one kind of term which cannot find any alternative term in another culture, foreignizing translation strategies such as transliteration, annotation or combination could be adopted more frequently. the depth of cultural differences decides the difficulty of representing an image of words in another culture. if words naturally embrace rich cultural information, with or without alternative terms in another culture, to represent such expression is bound to take more effort as well. 4.3 the degree of contextual default as the context theory indicates above, the context of the original text is the key factor during the translation. according to ge (2001), context is supposed to complement an expression’s cultural connotation. likewise, the translation of clws should also relate to the cultural void of context. as wang (1997) indicates, shared background knowledge or pragmatic presupposition is required in conservation in order to reach an expected communication purpose. therefore, when to reproduce the image of one word from source-language culture to the target-language culture, the cultural connotations embedded in the source-language should also be represented in the target-language culture; otherwise, the targeted readers could hardly understand the text even if the literal meaning of culturally unique terms is perfectly translated. however, when the extended meanings could be easily inferred from the context, an additional explanation is also not necessary. in conclusion, the translation of clws is subject to the need of context, which means that the translation strategies rely on how many efforts the intended readers would take to understand the whole context originated in the source language culture. 5. conclusion this study has observed how the translators approach each kind of clws and conclude five kinds of translation strategies applied in the grand scribes records and their application scope: transliteration, literal translation, sense-for-sense translation, the combination of both and translation with footnote. furthermore, this study has identified three factors that may influence the choice of translation strategies: translators’ subjectivity, the degree of cultural difference and the degree of contextual default. given all these findings, this study has many limitations. firstly, this study only focuses on clws in selected chapters in the grand scribes records: basic 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(2016). “厚译”究竟有多厚?——西方翻译理论批评与反思之一[how thick is the “thick translation”: one of the criticism and reflection on western translation theory]. foreign languages and their teaching, 6: 103-112. doi: doi:10.13458/j.cnki.flatt.004316. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. v02issue02.06.2022.0613.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 10 on translating introductions of shameen attractions based on textual information types from the perspective of communication xuanying lu1, jie lyu2 1school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, guangzhou, china, e-mail: 849587009@qq.com 2corresponding author: same as above, e-mail: 1833904290@qq.com fund: the study is one of the achievements of innovative projects of colleges and universities under the department of education of guangdong province (project no. 2019wtscx024) and is supported by the institute of hermeneutics of guangdong university of foreign studies (fund no. csy-2021-ya-04). abstract communication researches how people communicate social information by signals. since tourism translation is of significance for foreign-oriented publicity, it is reasonable to conduct research on tourism translation from the perspective of communication. generally, when translating introductions of tourist attractions, to better meet foreign tourists’ expectations of different textual information types that are in line with the theme-oriented information-highlighting principle, it is suggested that translators not only remove redundancy from the source text by strategies like omission and condensation, but also reduce its noise combining amplification, omission, conversion, restructuring and so forth on account of differences between reading habits as well as the context of chinese and western culture; and particularly, strategies like literal translation, transliteration, free translation, and note, should be applied to translating cultural information according to foreign tourists’ expected feedback. keywords: tourism translation, textual information types (tit), communication, shameen 1. introduction tourism translation plays an influential role in foreign-oriented publicity and even international communication. however, the english translations of some tourist introductions in guangzhou are of discouraging quality due to various mistakes, and need to be studied in that many of them fail to precisely convey the original chinese texts or have received unsatisfactory response from foreign tourists. and to make tourism translation better function as a way of foreign-oriented publicity, it is reasonable to research it by applying communication theory. this paper intends to examine the english-translated introductions of tourist attractions from the perspective of communication theory based on the case analysis of shameen, a tourist attraction in guangzhou. merits and problems of the translated introduction of shameen have been explored based on textual information types in line with theme-oriented information-highlighting principle. finally, an attempt has been made to summarize the translation strategies applicable to different purposes of information processing as well as to different tits. 2. applicability of communication theory to tourism translation of shameen if foreign tourists want to get the english introductions of shameen attractions, they need to scan the qr code at the bottom of the sign of the attraction to enter the official website but not open to comments. as such, the translated texts serve as a static, one-way communication process, and matches the shannon-weaver's model of communication as shown in fig. 1. in this model, shannon and weaver unprecedentedly bought forward the idea of “noise”, which appertains to anything that clings to communication contents but is undesired by the sender in the process of conversion or acceptance of information. there are two kinds of noise: one generates from inside the information source, and the other one comes from outside the source (hu, 2017, p.40). for shameen, “noises” embody one that is generated from the attraction itself, for example, a load of architecture vocabulary in the text, which might make the introductions elusive. and the other one comes from external factors, such as foreigners’ stereotypes of china. these noises could easily fuzz communication contents and hinder the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 11 communication process. the receiver may not receive all the messages quite precisely – the expected communication effect will be weakened; even worse, the receivers’ misconstruction could be caused (n.d.). redundancy conduces to reducing noise and by definition, is the repeated part of information. it doesn’t threaten the integrity of information, but helps eliminate the uncertainty of and correct the information, benefiting audiences’ percepting information (hu, 2017, p.41-42). as for shameen, for instance, introductions of many attractions in there list quite detailed historical events of the destination, trying to impress tourists with the historical significance of each attraction. descriptions of historical events in these introductions take nearly two thirds of all the contents, while much information seems trivial in the eyes of visitors as in the case of making a long name list of every u.s. consul general to guangzhou, china. such redundancy decreases the information amount that the introduction is capable to carry, and weakens the economical delivery of information, turning out to distance tourists from enjoying their visits. figure 1. shannon-weaver’s model of communication (n.d.) generally speaking, in the process of communication, to ensure the communication effect, the translator is expected to navigate through noise, redundancy, and information amount. it is advisable that the translator reduces as much noise as possible with the least redundancy, and tries his best to accurately transfer messages through the limited amount of information. certain criteria help manage the relationship. in the first place, response of the “audience” is a crucial element for evaluating the communication effect. in real life, the flow of information is not one-way. it is unwise for the sender to bombard their target audiences with contents merely on their behalf like what the silver bullet theory suggests. communication emphasizes more on the connotation of “together”, “both sides” and “exchanging” (hu, 2017, p.20). translating introductions of attractions, if regarded as a communication process, should not be analyzed completely in accord with the original shannonweaver’s model. the destination of communication contents is the audience, and the final purpose for communication is the identification or much further, the support from the audience. the audience’s reaction is rightly a key element for evaluating the communication effect. “audience” is the collective name of all kinds of information receivers. they select the information that meets their cognition of reality consciously, manifesting obvious bias in their actions. during the process of communication, the audience would react to information sent by the sender, which is exactly “feedback”. the translator, sending the information of the translated introductions, should likewise take readers’ demands and reactions into account and take actions to direct their choices of information to a favorable one (hu, 2017, p.43+226-228). a perfection of shannon-weaver’s model is like: two considerations are applicable to analyzing feedback. first is the value of information. there is a universal dislike for tedious, repeated, and intricate content among visitors from different cultures. the introduction of attractions, as a channel for information flow, is of limited capacity of information – the physical space for carrying information is limited. to maximize the efficiency and effectiveness of communication, the translator must analyze the value of each tit and decide on how to process those (lyv & pan, 2020). to this end, zeng once proposed the economical conciseness principle for foreignoriented publicity translation: firstly, the translator conveys as much information as possible with as few words as possible; secondly, the audience be able to get the clearest and most fluent (as opposed to lengthy and cumbersome) information at the lowest cost (the time and effort made to process information) (2005b). the second is the audience’s cultural background. the audience’s bias for selecting information, or “selective behavior”, is closely connected with their rebelliousness. for tourism translation, western audiences may ignore or refute information that threatens their cognition, or even derogate the source of the information (hu, 2017, p. 235). tourism translation serve as a window for foreign audiences to understand china in the truest way. therefore, when translating, it is suggested that the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 12 translator endeavor to clear up misunderstandings caused by different cultures and ways of thinking, to increase the readability and acceptability of the translation, and to achieve the foreign-oriented publicity goal as well as the expected communication effect (yang, 2010). figure 2. shannon-weaver’s model of communication (n.d.) it is worth noticing that, when processing information, the translator needs to not only “remove redundancy” from the text, but also “reduce noise” of the text – but both of which are not necessarily deleting information; due to the differences between chinese and western cultures, and the knowledge gap between chinese people and foreign tourists, sometimes the translator may have to add information that the original text had failed to deliver. at the same time, such awareness of audience’s rebelliousness never amounts to blindly wooing the audience. both chinese cultural influence and foreigners’ interests in chinese culture continue to grow, discerning the “noise” and “redundancy” poses a much bigger challenge to the translator. the international status of the country should be taken into account, so as to meet the demands for international cultural communication of a country. 3. on translating introductions of attractions in shameen, guangzhou based on tits at present, the only theory that exactly for tourism translation is the theme-oriented information-highlighting principle proposed by professor zeng lisha. there is not a specialized system for tourism translation theory. in line with this principle, tit qualitatively summarizes the nature, function, characteristics, and value of different theme-bound tourist information, categories including factual information, descriptive information, evaluative and appraisal information, cultural information, vocative information, aesthetic information, stylistic information, and information of tips (2005a). shameen is a distinctive architectural complex that embodies european style and reflects chinese modern history about the concession. all the introductions of attractions in shameencome in 5 tits: factual information type, descriptive information type, evaluative and appraisal information type, cultural information type, and stylistic information type. each will be analyzed with examples. 3.1 factual information type factual information makes up the largest part of most tourism profiles and provides readers with basic knowledge of the tourist attraction (luo, 2009, p.32). this tit is the most objective among all nine textual information types of the theory and carries the largest amount of information. nevertheless, although factual information is objective, a smart translator should still cautiously discern the redundant information from all the objective facts to maximize the efficiency of communication. how to remove redundancy as well as reduce the noise of these two kinds of information depends on both the target audience’s cognitive habit and, things like national condition, nation history, and cultural characteristics of a country where the attractions are in. generally, there are two subtypes of factual information: one about the present and the other about the past. factual information about the present mainly introduces the current situation of the destination; common examples include a description of address, area, and other basic information about the destination (zeng, 2005a). the detailed address of the destination is included in all of the introductions. here is an example; parts to be analyzed are highlighted in bold and underlined (similarly hereinafter): translation example 1 communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 13 source text: 16 18 20 source text romanized: shāmiàn dàjiē yìndù rén zhùzhái jiùzhǐ, wéi guǎngzhōu shāmiàn jiànzhù qǘn de zǔchéng bùfèn, wèiyǘ guǎngzhōu shì lìwān qǖ shāmiàn jiē cuìzhōu shèqǖ shāmiàn dàjiē 16, 18, 20 hào (shāmiàn dàjiē yǚ shāmiàn yījiē jiāojiè de xīběi zhuǎnjiǎo chù). target text: the site of indian residence is a part of guangzhou shamian architectural complex. it is located at no. 16, 18 and 20 shamian avenue, liwan district, guangzhou. (excerpted from the introduction of the site of the residence of india nationals, no. 16, 18, 20 shameen street) the only way for foreign tourists to read the english introductions of shameen attractions is by heading for shameen in person, and then scan the qr code at the bottom of the sign of each attraction for access to the corresponding website. that is, the tourists must be in shameen, guangzhou if they have scanned the qr code and seen the website. therefore, the fact that site of the residence of indian nationals “is a part of guangzhou shamian architectural complex” is redundant and leads to inefficient delivery of information. information value can be evaluated by referring to parallel text in the target language (lyv & pan, 2020). as china covers vast stretches of land, to better reign over the whole country, rulers in the ancient time divide the country into many districts with several levels, and the way of administration division established in the yuan dynasty is still in use today. a complete description of address in china usually includes information of province, city, district, community, road, and number, while that of western countries often presents name of city, road, and number only. for example, the british address is written in forms like “2 drury way, north circular road, london nw10 0th”, or for american one it goes like “490 2nd street, suite 300, san francisco, california 94107”. western people do not use “district” to describe address; they might even be perplexed by the word “district” since it means “an area of a town or country, especially one that has particular features2.” it would be better to omit the description of “liwan district”. and, the original translator already removed the redundant “ ”. moreover, the original author might have a strong willingness to make tourists learn thoroughly about the specific location of the site, thus expressly annotated that the site locates at “ ” in brackets. but actually, foreign tourists are not scholars who specialize in shameen architectural complex, or residents who settle in shameen. it is of no use for them to know such detailed address information. it is laudable that the redundant parts of “ ” have already been deleted in the original translation. apart from that, the diction for describing the address here also needs attention. although there is no such convention in the united kingdom, people in the united states use “avenue” for roads that run north-south and “street” for east-west ones. since “ ” runs east-west, it would be better to use “street” instead of “avenue” here in case of potential noise. to summarize, an optimized translation should be like this: translation example 1 (revised version) target text: the site of the indian residence is located at no. 16, 18, and 20 shameen street, guangzhou. (excerpted from the introduction of the site of the residence of india nationals, no. 16, 18, 20 shameen street) in addition, caused by different thinking modes of language, when translating a description of an area, redundancy can easily be created. an example is: translation example 2 source text: 0.39 source text romanized: miànjī yüē wéi 0.39 píngfāng gōnglǐ, céng shì zhūjiāng “xī shí gōnglǐ” de qǐdiǎn, lǎo guǎngzhōu chéng de shāngyè wénhuà zhōngxīn. target text: covering an area of about 0.39 square kilometers, it used to be the starting point of the “west 10 kilometers” of the pearl river landscape belt as well as the commercial and cultural center of the old guangzhou city. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) 2 oxford university press. (2014). district. in oxford english dictionary (8th ed., p.594). communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 14 chinese expression is far different from that of english, and this can easily lead to redundancy and noise in translation. influenced by the thinking mode of the mother tongue, it is uneasy for the translator to recognize that (pinkham, 2000). hence translators have to pay much effort to learn and get used to the expression of the target language. laudably, the translator converted “ ” into “covering an area of” to meet the reading habit of foreign tourists. still, this translation embodies a typical chinese thinking mode. the word “cover” means “to spread over the area mentioned3.” that is, “area” is the default object of “cover”; the word “cover” involves the meaning of “area” already. it would be better to omit the redundant “an area of”. translation example 2 (revised version) target text: covering about 0.39 square kilometers, it used to be the starting point of the “west ten kilometers” of the 30-kilometer pearl river landscape belt as well as the commercial and cultural center of old guangzhou. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) factual information about the past is for historical events related to the destination as well as the influence of these events (zeng, 2005a). examples include the history of the attraction, stories of celebrities who are in connection with the destination, or some other historical events that are indirectly related to the destination. often, the original author will introduce some experiences of celebrities related to the attraction, aiming at tourists to obtain a deeper understanding of the destination. still, if not handled properly, the noise would easily generate, or the passage might be sprinkled with redundant information that does not have a strong connection with the destination, like the following example: translation example 3 source text: 1847 1854 source text romanized: 1847 nián, fǎguó chuánjiàoshì mù ruòsè wéifǎn qīng zhèngfǔ guānyǘ xīfāng chuánjiàoshì bùdào de guīdìng, qiánrù shānxī. 1854 nián, fǎguó chuánjiàoshì mèng zhènshēng qiánrù zhílì, dōu bèi dāngdì guānfǔ cháhuò, jiěsòng guǎngzhōu fǎguó lǐngshìguǎn. target text: in 1847, the french missionary, joseph pastor, broke into shanxi province in violation of the qing government’s provisions on the preaching of western missionaries. in 1854, the french missionary meng zhensheng sneaked into zhili and was seized by the local government and sent to the french consulate in guangzhou. (excerpted from the introduction of the site of the french missionary building, no. 42 south shameen street) at the first glance, it seems that the names of the french missionaries have some connection to “the french missionary building”, while it does not make sense. there is no information about whether these two persons were once worked in this french missionary building or they were finally sent here after being arrested, and the lack of information generates noise – tourists might have no idea what the connection between the two missionaries and the building is after reading these two sentences. the translator should omit the two sentences, or search and add relevant information for clarifying the connection to reduce the noise. last but not least, shameen had been the british-french concession for nearly 90 years and more than ten countries used to set their consulates here. shameen is, therefore, of significance in reflecting chinese modern history about concession, and it would be laudable that relevant content is emphasized instead of being deleted as redundancy in translation. 3.2 descriptive information type descriptive information describes attributes or qualities with descriptive expressions to help readers better understand the characteristics of the factual information. this tit combines both subjectivity and objectivity, because of which there might be some exaggeration in the source text. the translator should discriminate the textual information that has been exaggerated from the source text (luo, 2009, p.32). exclusively, chinese features four-character idioms. using four-character idioms can make the text much tidier in rhythm and more flowery in language. it also strengthens the power and infectiousness of the text. as it is unique to chinese, if being fully translated, problems including poor logic and excessive exaggeration could be caused, both of which create redundancy and generate noises, thus reducing the readability of the text. 3 oxford university press. (2014). cover. in oxford english dictionary (8th ed., p.470). communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 15 for introductions of shameen attractions, descriptive information is mostly seen in the depiction of building characteristics. for example: translation example 4 source text: source text romanized: zhèng lìmiàn liǎng céng jǖn wéi zhùláng shì, zhùláng xiànjiǎo jiǎnjié míngkuài, zhěngtǐ jiànzhù wàiguān pǔsù qīngyǎ, yǚ jiànzhù zhōubiān de lǜshù, xiǎo huāyán jiéhé, gěirén yīzhǒng níngjìng dànyǎ zhī gǎn. target text: the front elevation is a corridor with pillars on both floors, and the corridor line foot is concise. the overall appearance of the building is simple and elegant, combined with the green trees and small gardens around the building, giving people a sense of quiet and elegant. (excerpted from the introduction of the czech consulate, no. 1 north shameen street) “elegant” means being well-designed, pleasing, and graceful in appearance or style when referring to a person or things45. it is obvious that this conflicts with the meaning of “simple”. putting the two words together as coordination might lead to noise and bewilder foreign tourists. the diction here must be noticed: the conjunction “and” should be replaced for logical purpose. besides, “elegant” is not equivalent to the chinese word “ ”, and it is also not the only meaning for “ ”. reusing the same word “elegant” in one paragraph also creates redundancy. in the last phrase of the source text, the meaning of “ ” in “ ” is similar to that of the previous “ ” in “ ” in chinese, and it would be better using another appropriate word to replace the repeated “elegant” in this paragraph when translating. the character “ ” has several aspects of meaning in chinese; the original translator just misunderstood and failed to choose the correct one here. however it may be, there is one core connotation of “ ” – not being ordinary. as for how to extend it, the translator may refer to the context. in the last phrase, the source text emphasized the quiet and peaceful environment of places surrounding the building with the word “ ”, intended to highlight the not being ordinary in such beauty. therefore, the noun forms of adjectives likes “peaceful” can be used as a substitute for that of “elegant”. additionally, in chinese, many words are symmetrical in structure for the passage being more energetic and infectious. but these words are often repetitive in meaning, like “ ”. “green tree” is not a popular expression in english-speaking countries. in a metropolis, most trees of the greenbelt are green; it is of no use to emphasize their color redundantly. together with free translation, amplification, conversion, and restructuring, the optimization should be like: translation example 4 (revised version) target text: the façade of the first and second floors is designed in prostyle concisely. the overall appearance of the building is simple but elegant. the atmosphere of peace and quiet is made stand out by trees and small gardens around the building. (excerpted from the introduction of the czech consulate, no. 1 north shameen street) 3.3 evaluative and appraisal information type this tit evaluates the factual information and its features. it is usually suggestive and inductive. translators should properly deal with those overloaded expressions with the original author’s strong comments attached to the factual information to avoid being influenced by the subjective ideas of the original authors (luo, 2009, p.32-33). chinese culture is a high-context one. in a high-context culture, communication tends to be imprecise; people assume a relatively high level of shared knowledge with the individual they are communicating with. to better understand the meaning, people need to pay more attention to their physical surroundings (mitchell, 2009, p.20-21). that is, in whatever written materials or face-to-face conversation, messages are less literally and less directly conveyed. people have to look for more information from the context of a message, action, or event. it is the same for c-e translators when translating. translation example 5 4 collins press. (january, 2022). elegant. in collins cobuild advanced learner's english dictionary (5th ed.). https://www.collinsdictionary.com/zh/dictionary/english/elegant 5 oxford university press. (2014). elegant. in oxford english dictionary (8th ed., p.661). communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 16 source text: source text romanized: shāmiàn jiànzhèng le guǎngzhōu jìndàishǐ de biànqiān, liúxià le sūn zhōngshān xiānsheng, zhōu ēnlái zǒnglǐ děng wěirén de zújì, qīnlì le xǚduō zhòngdà lìshǐ shìjiàn, chéngwéi wǒguó jìndài shǐ yǚ zūjiè shǐ de suōyǐng. target text: shāmiàn witnessed the changes of modern history of guangzhou, left the footprints of mr. sun yat-sen, prime minister zhou enlai and other great men, and experienced many major historical events, thus becoming the epitome of china’s modern history and the history of concession. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) first, exaggerations are usually used when chinese people make comments. the reality might not be completely consistent with the literal meaning of those comments. it is not suggested that translate such comments word for word and sentence for sentence, but try to figure out the original author’s idea and restructure the sentences so that unnecessary noise could be reduced. both the first and the last sentences overstate the significance of the shameen complex. the first sentence “ ” exalts that the shameen complex witnessed the entire modern history of guangzhou, and the last one “ ” even likens it to the epitome of modern history (including the history of concession) of the whole country. both sentences are biased towards the destination; diction here must be carefully treated when translating. second, problems of lacking logic appeared frequently in this example. actually, “changes of history” cannot be witnessed; a place can only witness things like events, phenomena, and so forth. also, “shameen” is unable to walk or leave footprints, or experience things like human beings; human beings leave footprints in this architectural complex instead. moreover, for the fourth sentence, a place cannot become an example of history in terms of logic and it is better to describe a period of history or a historical event as the “epitome of history”. translators must pay special attention to these kinds of expressions, and try not to be influenced by the thinking mode of the mother tongue. for the problems above, diction, omission, and conversion are feasible approaches to reduce noise. third, as the original author wanted to stress the historical importance of the shameen complex here, what giants did when they stayed here had better be clarified either – giants had been to many places and where they used to stay does not mean anything in most cases – if things giants did are of historical significance. but after investigation, few events about both mr. sun yat-sen and shameen are found. considering that “ ” covers those small events, omitting these redundant descriptions would be better, like: translation example 5 (revised version) target text: having witnessed many historical events in the modern times of guangzhou, the shameen complex is of historical importance for modern china. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) since “ ” and “ ” are similar in meaning, condensation and restructuring are also used in the above optimization. additionally, it is common that chinese texts would like to make conclusions that can make the theme of the passage more sublime and magnificent. these conclusions are often empty and excessively exaggerated. here is a typical chinese conclusion of passage: translation example 6 source text: source text romanized: shāmiàn, bùjǐn shì guǎngzhōu de shāmiàn, gèng shì zhōngguó de shāmiàn, shìjiè de shāmiàn. target text: shamian belongs not only to guangzhou, but also to china and the whole world. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) although it cannot be denied that shameen is of significance for the history of architecture, it is still exaggerated to describe shameen as being of the significant meaning to the whole world, especially when compared with well-known tourist attractions like the leaning tower of pisa or the forbidden city. descriptions should be downgraded when being translated to be moderate in the lower context of english and to avoid misunderstanding. also, the expression of the source text typically embodies the phraseology of chinese. the original author could have tried to highlight the value of shameen in specific aspects. but limited to the thinking mode of chinese, he made the conclusion communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 17 sublime using the chinese rhetoric of parallel structure, sacrificing details. the original translator was then regrettably misled by such means of expression and could do nothing but translate the source text word by word, failing to understand what the original author means. to reduce the noise of this example, translators should try to figure out what the original author wanted to express actually, and then restructure the information by a large amount. from chinese thinking mode, the meaning of shameen to guangzhou, china, and even the whole world could be connected with its being architectural complex, or covering a wider range, being cultural heritage. clarification should be extended with conversion if necessary then; the reason why shameen is meaningful can also be added and amplified as a transition. to summarize, an optimized translation can be: translation example 6 (revised version) target text: considering its distinct architectural characteristics and historical meaning, shameen is a valuable cultural heritage for not only guangzhou, but also china, and even the whole world. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) 3.4 cultural information type cultural information introduces unique chinese culture to help readers better understand china. this tit can easily overload information, and the translator should carefully analyze foreign tourists’ demand for learning about chinese culture (zeng, 2005a). when translating, it should be taken into consideration the exact meaning or reference of those culture-loaded words. to translate things unique to china, the translator can combine literal translation or transliteration and explanation, to better publicize chinese culture (lyv & pan, 2020). usually, when translating tourism profiles, there is “non-equivalence at culture level” proposed by christiane nord, as cited by he & tao (2010). the non-equivalence is more obvious in translating culture-loaded words. to overcome that, zheng (2016) offered six strategies: transliteration, transliteration with notes, literal translation, literal translation with notes, the combination of transliteration and literal translation, and free translation. in the following of 3.4 cultural information type, transliteration with notes and literal translation with notes will be mainly adopted for chinese architectural terms. translation example 7 source text: 5 4 source text romanized: shǒucéng dàtīng kuān 5 jiān, shēn 4 jiān, yǒu hòu wài láng. dì èr, sān céng yánjiē chú lóutī jiān dōu shè wài láng, yě yǒu hòu láng. zhōngjiān kāi tiānjǐng bìng zhítōng tiān miàn. lóutī shè zài dōngxī rùkǒu, dōng tī zhǐ shàng èr, sān céng, bùnéng shàng wūdǐng; xī tī bùnéng jìn shǒucéng, dàn kě shàng èr, sān céng hé wūdǐng. target text: the first-floor hall is 5 wide and 4 deep. there are second floors and third floors along the street, except for staircases, with external corridors and back corridors. the stair case is located at the entrance to the east and west. the east staircase only goes up to the second and third floors. it cannot go up to the roof. the west staircase cannot go into the first floor, but it can go up to the second, third and roof. (excerpted from the introduction of the former administration bureau of broadcasting of the nationalist government, no. 73 north shameen street) “ ” and “ ” are two concepts unique to chinese traditional architecture. in a room, “ ” is the width of the side parallel to the door, and “ ” refers to the length of the side perpendicular to the door. according to the weights and measures of the qing dynasty, for “ ”, or, the main room of a building, one jian equals 6 meters, while those for “ ” and “ ”, or room next to and room furthest away from the main one are shorter. there is no such corresponding architectural term in english, and translators commonly metricate this kind of measurement unit unique to chinese culture, or foreign tourists would fail to understand them. still, apart from converting the first sentence into “the first-floor hall is about 30 meters wide and 24 meters long,” the translator may also transliterate and annotate the two “ ” as zheng suggested, but the text can be much longer. to reduce noise, since shameen is an architecture complex, and, more decisively, since “ ” is a concept of chinese traditional architecture, applying transliteration to “ ” with a note helps highlight the characteristics of eclecticism of this building, contributing to foreign tourists learning about chinese traditional architecture. as for the note, it would be better to use both an annotation as well as a footnote, which can make the main body of the target text tidier and more concise. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 18 similarly, “ ” and “ ”, not having been translated in the original translation though, well emphasize the characteristic of eclecticism that it successfully blends chinese and western architectural styles, hence are recommended to be translated. and to translate the latter one, the translator has to first deal with the culture-loaded word “ ” – similarly to “ ”, transliteration with notes (footnote here also) may suit. as courtyard means “an open space that is partly or completely surrounded by buildings and is usually part of a castle, a large house, etc.,” “ ” can be a small courtyard within a house that is surrounded by rooms, or rooms and wall sometimes. in addition, as tianjing itself has never had a roof, translation for “ ” can be omitted in the target text, and “ ” could be amplified to provide audiences with a clearer image. in addition, as tourists are not allowed to go into the building, foreign tourists do not have to learn about such full details as to where the east staircase and west staircase respectively go up. the last three sentences do not help stress the eclecticism but create redundancy and are better to be deleted, like: translation example 7 (revised version) target text: the hall on the first floor is about 5 jian (30 meters) in width and 4 jian (24 meters) in length with corridors outside. there are also external corridors along the street on both the second and the third floors, except for the side the staircase is on. surrounded by the corridors and rooms, there is a tianjing* on the second floor. the staircases are located near the entrance to the east and the one to the west. *note: jian: a unit of length unique to chinese ancient architecture; one jian equals six meters referring to the weights and measures of the qing dynasty. tianjing: a small courtyard within a house that is surrounded by rooms, or rooms and walls sometimes; one house may contain one or more tianjings. (excerpted from the introduction of the former administration bureau of broadcasting of the nationalist government, no. 73 north shameen street) in addition to chinese architectural terms, fengshui terms also characterize introductions of attractions in shameen. first of all, fengshui itself, a large proportion of whose ideas are at variance with materialism and marxism, is inconsistent with chinese social ideology. when dealing with issues – including translation ones – relevant to that, we have to differentiate the idealistic ideas and remove relevant descriptions from the text. to carry forward the positive part of such a culture, notes can be added to explain the reason why some ideas make sense or work. for shameen, fengshui terms appeared in almost every piece of the introduction, for instance: translation example 8 source text: source text romanized: lóu gāo sì céng, zuò běi cháo nán, píng dǐng. target text: the building is four stories high, sitting in the north and facing the south, with a flat roof. (excerpted from the introduction of the former administration bureau of broadcasting of the nationalist government, no. 73 north shameen street) “ ”, or facing south, is a principle of house building following chinese fengshui. this is because most buildings in ancient china are low in height, few of which being with big trees, tall buildings, or high mountains surrounding. and, much of chinese territory, especially in ancient times, is on the north of the tropic of cancer (23°26’ n) – that is, for those regions, sunshine goes into houses from the south side. consequently, a majority of house buildings in ancient china face the south to obtain better lighting, and at the same time, to take shelter from the north wind and keep the house warm. fengshui terms like “ ” “ ” can usually be seen in introductions to traditional house buildings in china. really, in most cases, the “ ” can make domestic tourists understand the good location of a building, especially residential ones. considering that foreign tourists are not familiar with chinese fengshui, when translating “ ”, the translator may add notes or annotations to explain its origin, meaning, and effect. translation example 8 (revised version) target text: facing south*, the four-storied building has a flat roof. *note: “facing south” is a chinese fengshui principle of house building, aiming at good lighting and keeping warm since much land of china locates on the north of 23°26’ n; although shameen locates at 23°10’ n, “facing south” is still helpful for lighting in most seasons; and being in the subtropics, shameen possesses a warm climate already. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 19 (excerpted from the introduction of the former administration bureau of broadcasting of the nationalist government, no. 73 north shameen street) except for “ ”, the rest of this kind of description is better to be omitted, since locations like “ ”, “ ” and “ ” are true of no use to lighting or keeping warm or other else but cause noise. the imperial era name originates from ancient china and can be also seen in ancient north korea, ancient vietnam, ancient mongolia, and modern japan. since the revolution of 1911, or the xinhai revolution, the monarchy being overthrown, imperial era name had been abolished in china. however, being a special and unique way of numbering years, it would be better not to omit the main part of the chinese imperial era name, for reducing noise so that foreign tourists can learn more about chinese culture. for example: translation example 9 source text: 1865 1920 source text romanized: ... jiàn yǘ qīng tóngzhì sì nián (1865), chóngjiàn yǘ 1920 nián. target text: the building was first built in 1865 and rebuilt in 1920. (excerpted from the introduction of the site of hsbc, no. 54 shameen street) to optimize, the literal translation and annotation should be like: translation example 9 (revised version) target text: the building was first built in the 4th year of emperor tongzhi’s reign in the qing dynasty (1865) and rebuilt in 1920. (excerpted from the introduction of the site of hsbc, no. 54 shameen street) there is not a commonly used pattern for translating era name yet. still, literal translation, relatively less information being missed, might be more suitable. or, for descriptions like this example: translation example 10 source text: 1924 source text romanized: ... jiàn yǘ zhōnghuá mínguó shísān nián (1924), ... target text: built in 1924, ... (excerpted from the introduction of the dodwell & co. ltd.(british), no. 61 shameen street) optimization could be like this: translation example 10 (revised version) target text: built in the 13th year of the era of the republic of china (1924), ... (excerpted from the introduction of the dodwell & co. ltd.(british), no. 61 shameen street) it is worth attention that, the feudal system had been overthrown before the republic of china establishing. therefore, the translator should be careful not to use the word “reign”, or additional noise may be created. the last problem with translating cultural information is that, because of cultural non-equivalence, there is no corresponding word or expression for many appellations like ancient toponyms or government positions in ancient times. for instance, “ ” is the governor who is in charge of the military and political affairs of commonly two provinces. in english, the only word whose meaning is similar to it is “general” – a high-ranking officer in the armed forces, usually in the army6. these two words are not equivalent in meaning. if the translator wants to accurately express the meaning of “ ”, he must use phrases or sentences to explain the responsibility as well as the jurisdiction of this position in the form of notes. the following is also representative of non-equivalence: translation example 11 6 collins press. (march, 2022). general. in collins cobuild advanced learner's english dictionary (5th ed.). https://www.collinsdictionary.com/zh/dictionary/english/general communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 20 source text: source text romanized: míngdài zài cǐ shè “huá jié tíng”, guǎnlǐ wàishāng huòwù jìnchū; qīngdài zhōngyè zài cǐ jiàn xī gù pàotái, gǒngwèi guǎngzhōu chéngchí. target text: huajie pavilion was set up here to manage the foreign trades; in the mid qing dynasty, xigu fort was built to defend the city of guangzhou. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) the “ ” of “ ” is not an ornamental building in a garden or park7, and should not be translated as “pavilion”. for “ ”, there are 3 ways of interpretations that involve border or military affairs: military post set near the border for reconnoitering hostile forces; inn, courier station for resting and staying the night; or kiosk, usually sells articles of daily use. referring to the context, the first interpretation is more suitable. the adaptation of translation having reduced noise can be: translation example 11 (revised version) target text: in the ming dynasty, huajie post was set up here for administrating foreign trades; in the mid-qing dynasty, xigu casemate was built in defense of guangzhou. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) 3.5 stylistic information type stylistic information refers to linguistic features conveyed through the style of the writer who uses effective devices to organize the text so that the text may be attractive to the audience. this tit can influence the acceptability of the introduction. its transferability is relatively weak; proper adjustments should be made in the process of translating (luo, 2009, p.33-34). in chinese tourism profiles, stylistic information is distinguished by rhetoric in most cases, parallelism and antithesis in especial; some authors who excel at writing may even compose several lines of poetry. for this reason, stylistic information is usually flowery in language but inefficient in conveying messages. the information amount of it can be low if it were completely translated. foreign tourists are probably unable to make out what the author is driving at after reading floods of ink either. the following one can be a typical example: translation example 12 source text: source text romanized: wénwù huányüán, xiū jiù rú jiù, lùchū zhēnróng; cuìzhōu gǔlóu, qiānmǐ huājiē, gǔshù chènyìng; wánshàn gōnggòng shèshī, zhìlì mínshēng shíshì; chuàngshè fánghóng huā dī, shuǐhuàn jiàn gào yüǎnlí; héxié sānwéi shìjiǎo, sùzào wénhuà zhǔtí, yíngdé gèjiè hǎopíng. target text: cultural relics have been well restored to show their original charm; ancient trees, flowery streets and historic buildings benefit by associating together; public facilities have been improved to upgrade people’s livelihood; flowery dike has been renovated to protect shameen from flooding. all these measures shape the cultural theme of shameen, winning it praise from society. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) at first sight, the translation is like a jumble of ideas: cultural relics, trees, streets, buildings, public facilities, dike, and cultural theme, totally of seven subjects are mentioned with poor coherence and cohesion, making it hard for audiences to understand the connection among each subject. the heavy use of parallelism and antithesis does not help to communicate information clearly at all. a translation would be acceptable provided that it conveyed the necessary message of the source text and brought the effect that conforms to the cultural context of the target language to readers successfully, even though there might be some differences between language styles or contents of the two texts (li, 2012). to translate the above stylistic introduction, the translator needs to remove redundancy by recapitulating and condensing key messages, and reduce the noise by toning down 7 collins press. (march, 2022). pavilion. in collins cobuild advanced learner's english dictionary (5th ed.). https://www.collinsdictionary.com/zh/dictionary/english/pavilion communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 21 the stylistic expressions of the original author as well as restructuring key messages, also improve coherence and cohesion by conversion, to make the text more logical and more readable, like: translation example 12 (revised version) target text: the government well restored the cultural relics, improved public facilities, and beautified the environment of shameen, all of which helped show the cultural charm of shameen and make it enjoy great popularity. (excerpted from the overall introduction of shameen) 4. summary of translation strategies in this paper on translating the introduction of shameen attractions based on tit from the perspective of communication, translation strategies including literal translation with notes, transliteration with notes, free translation, amplification, omission, condensation, diction, conversion, restructuring, and extension are involved. generally speaking, chinese tourism profiles focus more on flowery language, abundant rhetorical devices, emotional expressions, etc., which are hard for foreign tourists to comprehend and bring about redundancy and noise. it can be seen in the previous analyses of the nineteen examples that, probably, though not necessarily, redundancy is of a stronger connection with contents like human geographical characteristics and social identity of the destination, which chinese, the source language features; while noise is more closely related to language style or in-text logic influenced by the thinking mode of mother tongue. according to li, when composing tourism profiles, english writers prefer to objectively describe concrete objects with fewer rhetorical devices, emphasizing more on providing audiences with a specific image of the scenery of the destination. while, chinese writers often pay more attention to the social identity (e.g. social significance, stage of development) and human geographical characteristics of the destination, depictions excerpted from histories or literature accounting for a large proportion of the whole introduction in especial; all these might make the destination seemed more appealing to domestic tourists, still, for foreign audiences with a different cultural background, such contents can be redundant or hardly understood (2012). for removing redundancy, there are mainly two strategies: omission and condensation. both of them are not only used for removing content that contributes nothing to audiences’ learning about things like geography and infrastructures of the destination, or their understanding of chinese culture, but also for improving wording that looks powerful and infectious in chinese but is repeated in meaning in english sometimes. still, when composing tourism profiles, chinese writers are accustomed to reinforcing a personal perception of the beauty of the destination, then making the scenery attractive and alive in tourists’ imagination and resonating with audiences through description and rhetorics like exaggeration and metaphor. hence chinese tourism profiles are usually filled with flowery language and useless content, causing noise in the process of communication (li, 2012). to reduce noise, more strategies, including literal translation with notes, transliteration with notes, amplification, omission, condensation, diction, conversion, restructuring, and extension, are involved. if there were more corpora, not limited to shameen in other words, free translation, and even all the above translation strategies, might be also involved in the translation of the five or even all tits. and, different translation strategies need to be flexibly combined and applied when translating, to remove redundancy as well as to reduce noise, especially the latter one, helping achieve a better communication effect. grouping the strategies by tit, there are also interesting discoveries: there are connections between the selection of translation strategies and the information amount carried by the tit. strategies of free translation, amplification, omission, conversion, and restructuring, are applied to the translation of almost every tit. particularly, diction should be paid more attention to when translating tits that are with a relatively large amount of information, factual information, descriptive information, and cultural information often included. while extension and condensation are more frequently used in the translation of tits carrying a relatively small amount of information, including descriptive information, evaluative and appraisal information, and stylistic information in terms of this paper. table 1. translation strategies for tits based on goals of processing information tit information amount carried translation strategies removing redundancy reducing noise factual information large omission free translation, amplification, omission, diction, conversion, restructuring, communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 22 descriptive information relatively large omission free translation, amplification, omission, diction, conversion, restructuring, extension evaluative and appraisal information relatively small omission, condensation free translation, amplification, omission, condensation, conversion, restructuring, extension cultural information large omission literal translation with notes, transliteration with notes, amplification, omission, diction, conversion, restructuring stylistic information small omission, condensation free translation, amplification, omission, condensation, conversion, restructuring 5. conclusion there are differences between the languages and aesthetics of chinese and western cultures, chinese and english tourism profiles being good embodiments. to overcome problems caused by the differences and to achieve a better communication effect, the translator needs not only to “remove redundancy” from the text, but also to “reduce noise” of the text – both of which are not necessarily deleting information. due to the differences between chinese and western cultures, the translator may add information or explanation sometimes, or even make changes to the original contents, to fill the gaps in knowledge about chinese culture of western tourists that the original author did not take into account. at the same time, the translator should not only beware of the rebelliousness of the audience but also avoid simply catering to the audience’s preferences – as chinese cultural influence continues to grow, what should be defined as “noise” or “redundancy” should be considered carefully. in reality, according to melvin l. defleur, noises exist in every part of the communication process, and all these noises might affect the receiving of information and could have an influence on the communication effect (hu, 2017, p.104, 106-107). in contrast, shannon and weaver considered elements and relationships among them in the communication process unchanged; 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(02), 53-56. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 1 communication across borders: translation & interpreting volume 01, issue 01, 2021, issn: 2766-791x a study on chinese single-player video game title translation from the perspective of skopos theory zhixiang li; zhaofeng jiang nanning normal university, guangxi, china abstract: as video games gain popularity worldwide and become one of the most common entertainment forms in the digital era, the game’s title is given both commercial value and entertainment value. in the process of translation, in order to achieve these two values, the correct translation theory and strategy need to be adopted. translating chinese game titles accurately and effectively into english is challenging for chinese translators. the idea “the end justifies the means” from skopos theory indicates that the translation effects decide translation strategies. based on skopos theory, this paper explores the translation of chinese game titles, and provides suggestions about translation methods for chinese game translators to facilitate chinese game developers’ goal of going global. keywords: localization; game text translation; chinese-to-english translation; skopos theory 1. single-player video games a single-player video game is an electronic game that involves interaction with an input device to generate visual feedback for a player, whereby only one player is expected throughout the course of the gaming session. according to a report issued by gamma data (2019), the actual sales revenue of china’s single-player game upped to rmb 640 million in 2019, an increase of 341.4%, reflecting the flourishing development of chinese single-player games. another chinese single-player games bestselling list for 2020 shows that two single-player video games, gunfire reburn and pascal’s wager, had sold over one million copies, owing to the development of chinese games in video games digital communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 2 distribution services platforms like steam and wegame (gamelook, 2021). in 2020, china audio-video and digital publishing association (cadpa, 2020) issued a report showing that the actual marketing revenue of china’s independently developed games in overseas markets was us$15.450 billion, an increase of us$3.855 billion over the previous year, maintaining high growth momentum. in terms of regional distribution, the us, japan, and korea are still the main markets for china’s self-developed games, with combined revenue of 60.27% of the total overseas revenue, manifesting that overseas markets are significant for china’s game development. 2. game localization for a good localization can promote a game in different regions and lead to a spike in game sales, localization is the top priority before promoting the game globally. game localization refers to the preparation of video games before they are released in new regions or countries, including modifying the game process, changes to the game content, new physical packaging, manuals, recording new audio, and modifying good content according to the censorship requirements, and most importantly, the translation of the game text. game translation not just means to translate the text literally but to translate the culture of the source language into the target language. chris crawford (1982), a game designer, defined the game as “a rudimentary cultural form”. in the backdrop of globalization, the game has become a new cultural form with the capacity to spread culture abroad. for some game players, it is japanese games like dynasty warriors and romance of the three kingdoms that introduce them to the historical figures of the three kingdoms of china (220–280). despite china’s long history and rich culture, these cultures have rarely been spread abroad successfully through chinese games. with the increase of china’s international influence, cultural communication, and media innovation, western gamers are attracted to oriental myths increasingly. it is not uncommon in some chinese game discussion groups to see english-speaking gamers petitioning chinese game developers to release the english versions. therefore, as a game translator, one should be clear about the localization translation methods and strategies to translate culture. 3. game titles translation and skopos theory game translation involves the translation of ui (user interface), game dialogue text, plot subtitles, and so on. this paper mainly discusses the translation of chinese single-player video game titles. the importance of the game title is mirrored in its entertainment value and commercial value. the former (the entertainment value) is to please the target players communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 3 and show them the features and the culture of the game. the latter is to stimulate their desire to buy and gain commercial profits. it is both crucial and challenging to translate the game title well, as a proper translation boosts game selling, while a bad translation may discourage the game players from buying it. minako o’hagan (2013:150), the associate professor at the school of cultures languages and linguistics, suggests that the skopos theory should be the guiding theory of game translation because game translation is “primarily driven by its purpose (skopos), which is ultimately to entertain the end-user of the translated product”. skopos, a greek word defined as “aim or purpose”, was introduced into translation theory and developed by hans j. vermeer in the late 1970s. the idea was then extended by some skopos theorists, most notably, christiane nord. according to nord (2018:12), in the framework of skopos theory, the communicative needs and the culture-specific world knowledge of the intended receiver are important factors that determine the purpose of a translation. when choosing a game, gamers expect to choose a game with a catchy title that captures their interest. a good game translation should have both entertainment value and commercial value to meet players’ needs. after identifying the goals of the gamers, the question is how to apply the right translation strategy to guide the game title translation practice. according to reiss and vermeer (1984:90), the paramount rule for any translation should be the skopos rule which means “the end justifies the means”. it is expected to solve the existing dilemmas of domestication and foreignization. nord (2018:28) claims that “the skopos of a particular translation task may require a ‘free’ or a ‘faithful translation’, or anything between these two extremes, depending on the purpose for which translation is needed”. in other words, domestication and foreignization are suitable for translation strategies under skopos theory, and they can be applied in game translation. 4. domestication and foreignization 4.1 domestication domestication is based and centered on the target language. it adopts target language expressions that the target language readers can understand, striving to enter the target language readers’ world, attempting to convey the information intended by the source language text and make the translation vivid. the advantage is that it can make the target language readers understand the source language text without obstacles. domestication is frequently used in the translation of game titles. communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 4 the examples thereinafter are chinese single-player video games released on the steam platform. it is noted that the translations of these games have been officially used on the steam platform, which means all of them are officially authorized translations. example 1 original version english version (official translation) xī yóu jì zhī dà shèng ɡuī lái (西游记之大圣归来) monkey king: hero is back zhǐ rén (纸人) paper dolls xiān jiàn qí xiá zhuàn (仙剑奇侠传) chinese paladin: sword and fairy liǎo bù qǐ de xiū xiān mó nǐ qì (了不起的修仙模拟器) the amazing cultivation simulator yù jiàn (御剑) flying sword regarding the translation of game titles, minako o’hagan (2013:176) suggests using the strategy of substitution, where the original title is replaced with a reference analogous in the target culture, to achieve a similar effect on the target user. in example 1, the official translator replaced the concepts in original versions with the corresponding ones in the target language and tried to achieve an equivalence effect on the target player. it is worth noting that only some of the english versions mentioned above are acceptable because the strategy of substitution was used correctly. “zhǐ rén (纸人)”, for example, literally means paper man in chinese concerning different expressions for the same concept in different languages. chinese people call this kind of paper man-shape toy paper man based on its material and appearance, while english speakers call it paper doll based on its material and usage. besides, the image of paper man is a common element in chinese horror movies and novels while foreign horror movies often use the doll as a creepy element. the translation of monkey king: hero is back also uses substitution. the translator replaced the original title “dà shèng (大圣)” in chinese with “monkey king” which is a more familiar title to the western players. nevertheless, the translation of “xī yóu jì zhī dà shèng ɡuī lái (西游记之大圣归来)” is still debatable. monkey king has other titles like sun wukong, which is more welcome in the western players because some popular games have characters named after it. apart from it, the translation’s subtitle, “hero is back”, is clearly missing an article in front of it, making the sentence less coherent. errors such as misunderstandings or misuses of words also occurred in the official translation versions. as an slg game (simulation game) of chinese fantasy influenced by chinese mythology, the translation of “liǎo bù qǐ de xiū xiān mó nǐ qì (了不起的 communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 5 修仙模拟器)” may be mistaken for a farming game because the word “cultivation” can not fully explain the meaning of “xiū xiān(修仙)” which means a mortal becomes a celestial being through supernatural training or practice in chinese mythology. even though some foreign players have accepted the word “cultivation” as the translation of “xiū xiān(修仙)”, the word “cultivation” usually refers to farming games in english games, which will give the wrong information to the target information player. similar errors also can be found in “xiān jiàn qí xiá zhuán (仙剑奇侠传)” which mistakes the word “paladin” for the equivalence of “xiá (侠)”. the translation of “yù jiàn (御剑)” is acceptable because even though it changes the part of speech in the original word, it still conveys the correct message to the target players. example 2 original version english version (official translation) guǐ gǔ bā huāng (鬼谷八荒) tale of immortal zǐ sài qiū fēng (紫塞秋风) the wind road shén wǔ huàn xiǎng (神舞幻想) faith of danschant pà sī kǎ qì yuē (帕斯卡契约) pascal’s wager the famous american translation theorist eugene naida (2001), who advocates domestication, suggests that the reader of “a translated text should be able to comprehend it to the point that they can conceive of how the original readers of the text must have understood and appreciated it”. domestication gives the reader a smooth reading experience as if reading a work in the native language. for the purpose of making the target player conceive the ideas of the original text, some images or concepts should be reformed in the target text. therefore, it is acceptable to omit, add, or even create some concepts for the sake of coherence and expressiveness. the word “shén wǔ (神舞)”, for example, is translated as “danschant” which is a compound word created by the translator. since the game’s genre is related to ritual dance, the innovative translation may bring a new perspective to the players. 4.2 foreignization domestication and foreignization are not the same as literal translation and free translation, in that domestication and foreignization extend the concepts of literal translation and free translation and elevate language to an aesthetic level. lawrence venuti (2004:20), a famous american translation theorist, introduced the pair of translation terms of domestication and foreignization and described the foreignization communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 6 method as “an ethnodeviant pressure on those values to register the linguistic and cultural difference of the foreign text, sending the reader abroad”. foreignization requires the translator to take the original text as the center so that the target language readers can experience the language characteristics, culture, exoticism, etc., of the source language. simultaneously, the translation requires the target language readers to accept the unique features of the source language. today’s game industry is centered on the united states and japan, which has drawn criticism from some scholars (dongwon jo, 2020). the long-term game culture domination of the united states and japan has been drawing global gamers’ attention to these two countries, while the game culture in other countries are ignored due to their underdeveloped game industry. consequently, most game players in china are more familiar with western game culture than westerns being familiar with chinese game culture. venuti (2004) argues that, “foreignization entails choosing a foreign text and developing a translation method along lines that are excluded by dominant cultural values in the target language”. his remarks further illustrate that the use of foreignization is feasible in game translation for chinese culture is excluded by the dominant game culture in the target language. example 3 original version english version (official translation) gǔ jiàn qí tán (古剑奇谭) gujian xuān yuán jiàn (轩辕剑) xuan yuan sword tài wú huì juàn (太吾绘卷) the scroll of taiwu xiá zhī dào (侠之道) path of wuxia dà yǎn jiāng hú (大衍江湖) evolution of jianghu jiàn pò (剑魄) jianpo the examples of foreignization are also divided into two parts. in this part, the original versions all contain culture loaded words with oriental culture, such as “xiá (侠)” “pò (魄)” and “jiāng hú (江湖)”, which have no exact equivalences in the target language. in their english versions, they are all translated through pinyin transliteration. the advantage of this translation method is that it can lead the target language players to chinese culture. as early as 2010, oxford english dictionary included the phrase “wuxia” and defined the phrase as a genre of chinese fiction or cinema featuring itinerant warriors of ancient china, often depicted as capable of superhuman feats of martial arts. besides, chinese phrases like “guanxi” and “add oil” have been included communication across borders: translation & interpreting 01(01) 2021 7 in the dictionary. as chinese phrases make it into oxford english dictionary, it reflects the increasing acceptance of chinese culture in the english-speaking world. however, as mentioned above, chinese game culture is not the dominant culture yet. some phrases like “gǔ jiàn (古剑)”, “tài wú (太吾)” or “jiàn pò (剑魄)” are not included in the western dictionaries. if the target language players do not know chinese culture well enough or only pay cursory attention to the related themes, they cannot get any information from it. therefore, using transliteration to translate a game’s title may confuse the player and discourage them from buying it. on top of that, some englishspeaking players may have a hard time remembering the title of the game. example 4 original version english version (official translation) huī jìn zhī guān (灰烬之棺) coffin of ashes bō xī yà shí ɡuānɡ (波西亚时光) my time at portia qiāng huǒ chóng sheng (枪火重生) gunfire reborn apart from video games based on chinese mythology, many games made in china are of world-contents or settings related to western culture. in this case, it is easy to find the corresponding concepts or words in english. by adopting foreignization as the translation method, the english version is smooth and readable. it conveys the information in the original language and keeps its form of the original sentence. 5. conclusion in conclusion, the chinese game industry enjoys strong growth momentum. in order to maintain rapid development, chinese game developers should concentrate on the overseas markets and the localization translation of games. a game title is the first impression of the game. because of cultural differences and different 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(2004). the translator’s invisibility. shanghai foreign language education press, shanghai. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. http://www.cgigc.com.cn/gamedata/22132.html v02issue02.06.2022.0613.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 24 the characteristics and translation strategies of fuzzy language in diplomatic communiqués yuqi huang1, jian li2 1school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies e-mail: hyque216@126.com 2corresponding author, school of english for international business, guandong university of foreign studies, email:200411210@oamail.gdufs.edu.cn abstract fuzzy language mainly refers to the vagueness of words, phrases, and fuzzy meanings. in the official documents of the ministry of foreign affairs of china, the appropriate use of vague language can make the language more polite and show the position and attitude of the issue. after collecting the information of the ministry of foreign affairs’ communiqués of china from 2019 to 2021, this paper uses the software of antconc to build a corpus and sort out the data about the use of fuzzy language in the documents. under the guidance of the politeness principle, this paper summarizes the frequency and characteristics of the four fuzzy hedges in diplomatic communiqués. in addition, the skopos theory is further employed to explain and analyze the characteristics of relevant translation strategies. keywords: fuzzy language, translation strategy, diplomatic communiqués 1. introduction under the background of the new era, the voice of the chinese government can be heard further, and china now is more influential worldwide than before. the accurate and convincing articles symbolize the position and actions of the chinese government that must eliminate any tiny mistakes. this paper discusses the functions of different types of fuzzy expressions in language, covering the implied meaning behind the sentences and analyzing their structure via the software antconc. by analyzing the various semantic roles of different types of fuzzy words, their function to refine the corresponding and practical strategies behind the sentence can be determined. this research will use the corpus analysis method and detailed text analysis to advance the research on translation. compared with the mainstream studies mainly focusing on the research of the colloquial content like speeches and talks, this research pays attention to the official communiqués of the ministry of foreign affairs in the writing perspective and practical application. this paper mainly studies the official english communiqués issued by the ministry of foreign affairs from 2019 to 2021. under the guidance of the politeness principle and the skopos theory, it uses the corpus method to analyze the characteristics of fuzzy language and then summarize the translation strategies. feasible strategies could be put forward based on china’s unique conditions to help solve the difficulties in the translation of ambiguous language. this paper mainly answers these questions: (1) what are the main types of fuzzy language and their frequency of usage? (2) what are the fuzzy language’s main characteristics in the politeness principle framework and the skopos theory? (3) how can the characteristics contribute to the translation practices in the context of foreign affairs? 2. literature review professor zadeh (1965) of the university of california published a paper on fuzzy sets, which first mentioned the concept of fuzzy language or hedge. as soon as the concept came into being, it attracted significant attention and was widely used in various natural and social sciences disciplines. later on, georgy lakoff (1972), a famous generative semantic linguist in the united states, clarified hedges as “words whose job is to make things fuzzier or less fuzzy.” then, brown and levison (1987) explained hedges as a particle word or phrase that modifies the degree of membership or a noun phrase in a set. zadeh (1972) divided hedges into four categories based on grammar, which contained adjectives and adverbs, adverbial and expressions, affixes, and some politeness structures. according to prince et al. (1982), there are two types of hedges: approximators and shields. approximators are the fuzzy words that limit the degree of variation. it enables the listener to hear from the speaker new concepts related to, but different from, the original topic. shields are fuzzy words that limit variable communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 25 norms. this kind of variable hedge is often used in measuring things. there is no need to pay attention to how close the actual situation is to the topic because specific numbers are often provided. he (1985) followed the classification of prince and made the further investigation. then he subdivided approximators into rounders and adaptors. adaptors indicate a change in some degree, like sort of and a little bit, are a way of saying something close to being accurate, but not exactly true, closer to the actual situation and avoiding being too dogmatic. the use of rounders in verbal communication gives the listener the range of the subject and enables him to understand things within that scope. he also divided shields into two types: plausibility and attribution. the reason for using variable language is that the speaker does not want to exaggerate the figures to deviate from the facts or because he cannot give an exact figure at once. in addition, hyland (1998) also carried out different categories from a semantic perspective: lexical hedges and strategic hedges. moxey et al. (1993) explored the problem of fuzzy quantifiers from pragmatic and psychological perspectives, and their research objective was how people understand and use quantifiers in natural language. in 1973, lakoff analyzed examples from semantics and summarized the functions of the hedge. using these fuzzy languages, he found his words became more objective and gained authority, and the speaker’s tone softened. joanna channell (1994) outlined the various forms of fuzzy words under the pragmatic principles. she emphasized that interpreters cannot separate interpretations of fuzzy language from specific contexts and inferences. she also found that “semantics + pragmatics = meaning,” which means the fuzziness of language should be analyzed not only from the semantic level but also from the pragmatic sense. she concluded ten fuzzy language functions by analyzing several examples, including self-protect, politeness, and persuasion. in short, hedges are those expressions that make things fuzzier or less fuzzy, displaying a speaker's commitment. from the various explanations above, it can be inferred that the primary function of fuzzy language is to avoid being dogmatic and to be polite. to better explain the characteristics, this thesis follows the prince’s and he’s categories of hedges because of its clear classification standard and widespread usage. after the fuzzy concepts’ first appearance, many scholars conducted further investigations in this topic, and until now, the fuzzy language is still appealing to scholars and attracting them to take efforts on it. 3 theoretical framework 3.1 politeness principle english famous linguist scholar leech g.n. (1983) combined the previous studies like brown and levinson’s and then put forward the politeness principle. this principle has six maxims: the approbation maxim, agreement maxim, tact maxim, generosity maxim, modesty maxim, and sympathy maxim. accordingly, two sub-maxims are divided under each maxim. among these maxims, the tact maxim is of great importance because it is used for avoiding conflicts in communications. furthermore, people inherently attribute to the invisible rule under explicit configuration (goffman, 1986). some euphemisms can make the original statements pleasant, decent, and elegant, thus reducing the purpose of insulting others in the expression. that action is the embodiment of the tact maxim. the maxim of agreement mainly refers to reducing the expression of their differences with others, minimizing the differences with others, and increasing the agreement with others as much as possible. the translator should appropriately choose euphemisms and use polite wording to make the translation clear and indirect. furthermore, this thesis mainly discusses fuzzy language in the two maxims. 3.2 skopos theory skopos comes from the greek word skopos, meaning aim. in the book a framework for a general theory of translation, published in 1978, vermeer first elaborated the skopos theory’s basic principles, claiming that translation belongs to intercultural interaction. moreover, translation is a type of social activity. the writer defines the intention, while function refers to the introducing context. the intention of the original author may differ from the translator. translation can have multiple purposes, which can be further divided into three categories: 1. the general purpose of the translator (such as making a living) 2. the communicative purpose of the translation (like enlightening or instructing the reader) 3. special needs acquired by the context (such as literal translation to explain the particular aspects of the grammatical structure of a language) in most cases, “purpose” refers to the communicative purpose of the target text. it also means “the communicative function of the translation to the target readers in the social and cultural context” (vermeer, 1989). in the skopos theory, translation means to produce a text in the target context for the target recipient in the target language. in contrast, the source text is communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 26 subordinate (nord, 2001). in other words, the source text is not at the center of authority but an open entity with infinite possibilities. the primary principle of the skopos theory in all translation processes is to understand the “principle of purpose,” which means translation should be able to function not only in the context and culture of the target language but also in the expectation of targeted readers. the whole translation process is determined by the goal to be achieved; that is, the result handles the method. therefore, the translator should clarify his specific purpose in the given translation context and decide which translation method to adopt according to this purpose. 4 results and analysis 4.1 data collection corpus is a crucial tool used for collecting statistics and analyzing. without its help, efficiency and accuracy could not be guaranteed. this research chooses to use the software antconc (version 3.5.9) because of its easy accessibility and economy. antconc was developed by a japanese professor laurence anthony at waseda university, and it is famous for its neat interface and simple operation. antconc can generate a list of the total occurrence of the targeted word from all texts provided and locate it in the passage. then the frequency is calculated and stated within a second. diplomatic communiqués in recent three years (2019-2021) have been collected from the official website, and there are a total of 70 articles and about 150 thousand words. according to prince’s and he’s classification, the hedges can be categorized into two main types: shields and approximators. of the two types, each includes two subtypes. shields include plausibility and attribution, while approximators contain adaptors and rounders. based on this category, each type of hedge’s overall frequency and distribution are calculated. here is the detailed statistic. table 1. frequency and distribution of hedges category number percentage shields 5.21% plausibility 19 3.00% attribution 14 2.21% approximators 94.79% adaptors 312 49.29% rounders 288 45.50% total 633 100% from this table, it can be found that the most frequently used hedges are approximators, which account for 94.79% of all the hedges. as for the shields, only 33 words are used and take the percentage of 5.21%. it’s obvious that the fuzzy expressions used in communiqués are mainly approximators. it can be inferred that shields are not very welcomed in diplomatic communiqués because shields are often used to strengthen the speaker’s politeness and avoid a sharp tone accompanied by a personal style. 4.2 frequency distribution table 2. frequency and distribution of all types of hedges hedge type word frequency percentage shields plausibility we believe 19 3.00% attribution according to 13 2.05% is reported 1 0.16% approximators adaptors more 220 34.76% some 21 3.32% only 20 3.16% even 19 3.00% large 13 2.05% many 9 1.42% almost 7 1.11% communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 27 kind of 2 0.32% little 1 0.16% rounders over 108 17.06% more than 56 8.85% about 38 6.00% recent 25 3.95% most 24 3.79% around 21 3.32% nearly 12 1.90% less than 3 0.47% roughly 1 0.16% total 633 100% here are the details. from this table, the shields are used less than approximators in these diplomatic communiqués. among the shields, “we believe” and “according to” contribute significantly. the phrase “we believe,” which contains hope and implies calling on for something, displays writer’s position and can often be seen at the article’s end. also, the “according to” expresses the source of the content, making readers convinced that the articles are reliable and genuinely subjective. adaptors are words that supplement and modify the original meaning of utterances to some extent, serving writers with more accurate expressions (he, 1985). the word “more” appears most frequent, holding 34.76% of total hedges. in further investigation, it is found that most “more” is used to modify nouns and adjectives. compared to other adaptors, “more” ranks top frequency, conveying information that the ministry of foreign affairs picks up formal and more concrete expressions and makes the passages exact and convincing. among all the articles, all the adaptors only account for 0.2%. he (1985) also mentioned that a rounder is a word or phrase that limits the range of movement. if all the rounders and compare them with all research materials, it can be seen that only 0.19% of the whole words are rounders. among all the rounders, “over” accounts for 17.06% and is used 108 times. after a deeper check, it is obvious that “over” is also used in modifying nouns, especially on the time and numbers. these fuzzy words are tools to make figures less absolute and ideally convince readers. now, after collecting enough data about the categories and frequency of the fuzzy words, the core principle of the usage can be refined. in the table, “more” and “over” stand for maximum frequency among all the hedges. some examples are listed to help elaborate better on the characteristics. 4.3 content analysis this part makes an explanation on the reasons and effects based on the politeness principle and the skopos theory. the tact maxim and empathy maxim are fundamental in diplomatic translation, which should be paid more attention to. 4.3.1 plausibility analysis on behalf of the chinese position, the communiqués should show their readers not only polite but also friendly words. plausibility plays a vital role in making proposition less assertive and absolute, thus building a comfortable reading experience. the most frequently used plausibility, “we believe,” is analyzed below. translation example 1: source text: “ ” (2019.4) target text: “considering connectivity as a means of bringing countries, peoples and societies closer together, we believe the belt and road cooperation promotes exchanges, mutual learning and dialogue among different peoples, cultures and civilizations.” here, “we believe” shows a wish that china wants to build up belt and road cooperation to strengthen development and calls on other countries to join our cooperation instead of demanding and ordering other countries. moreover, if “we believe” is deleted, the meaning of the content becomes a little bit arrogant. without the plausibility, the sentence’s tone would be aloof communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 28 and stiff, as if ordering other countries to cooperate. shields used to avoid too direct and absolute saying. in this regard, the tact maxim is extensively represented, making the tone persuasive and polite. this communiqué aims at enlightening other countries to join the belt and road, so advantages are put forward to persuade. 4.3.2 attribution analysis attribution is a symbol of the quotation from authorities, and it can indirectly show the attitude of china in communiqués. translation example 2: source text: ( ) (2021.8) target text: “we call upon all countries, in cooperation with the relevant stakeholders, to increase national, regional and global capacities, carry out vaccine research and development as well as production in line with strict standards according to the world health organization (who) regulations, and provide safe, effective and high-quality covid-19 vaccines.” here “according to” contains many functions, including quoting authoritative documents from who, expressing wishes to other countries, and implying our vaccines are high-quality and up to standards. this attribution intends to display authority and calls on other countries to provide vaccines that reach standards. according to the skopos theory, this context is persuasive, and the attribution can help the translator achieve this intention. 4.3.3 adaptors analysis about adaptors, they are used to modify a change to some degree. they are a way of saying something closely true but not exactly true. the most frequently used adaptor is “more” in these communiqués, appearing 220 times. here are the details. table 3. frequency of “more” function determiner adverb pronoun frequency 148 67 5 translation example 3-1 source text: “ ” (02/2020) target text: “both sides would encourage more projects to be enlisted under this initiative as the reflection of the close and warm partnership and mutual trust between malaysia and china.” translation example 3-2 source text: (12/2019) target text: “the interests and future of all countries are more intertwined than ever before.” translation example 3-3 source text: (11/2021) target text: “in its cooperation with africa, china applies the principles of giving more and taking less, giving before taking, and giving without asking for something in return.” more” mainly serves as a determiner to adjust the range of targeted objects, showing a fuzzy description of the number. in example 3-1, “more” is a determiner to modify the projects to show the strong desire of both two countries to enlist projects; it obeys the tact maxim. adaptors are used widely to modify the progress and benefits in the countries’ relationships, expressing the future rewards of the cooperation plan and convincing readers that this cooperation is helpful and beneficial. in example 3-2, “more” functions as an adverb to picture the intertwined situation, implying all countries share a common future reasonably. “more” also emphasizes that the relationships among all countries would be even more critical in the future. it shows persuading and seeking deeper cooperation. this adaptor obeys tact maxim and agreement maxim and expresses the intention clearly. in example 3-3, “more” serves as a pronoun, hiding the detailed information of benefits but serving china’s communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 29 selfless and polite image. based on the skopos theory, a translation should serve the intention, and the “more” here perfectly fulfills its mission of clarifying the chinese position. 4.3.4 rounders analysis rounders are words that limit the range of the utterance, often accompanied by numbers. sometimes it is hard to get the precise number, or the exact number is not so acquired to understand. then it is time for rounders to make efforts. the use of rounders in communication gives the listener a scope of the subject and enables him to understand things within that scope. below are the most frequently used rounders “over.” example 4: source text: 4000 170 60 (9/2019) target text: “meanwhile, china has provided over 400 billion rmb yuan in foreign aid and sent over 600,000 aid workers to nearly 170 countries and international organizations.” like “over” or “nearly,” rounders always appear near the numbers, showing a slight vagueness in the sentences. in example 4, “over” modifies the number of money and aid workers. the numbers here are fuzzy, but the figures are still reliable and straightforward due to the large base of the nouns. the translator takes a method of ellipsis in which the total number is not written entirely. if translators just put all the exact numbers here, the sentence would be messy, and readers may be distracted by the complex information. avoiding exact numbers releases readers’ reading pressure and helps them receive information quickly. by doing this, the readers’ attention will be focused on the chinese contribution. the usage of rounders does not affect the intention of conveying information, so it is acceptable based on the skopos theory. the fuzziness of official documents is mainly reflected in the following aspects: 1. the ambiguity brought by the indeterminacy of the thing itself. for instance, “more.” more time can be a few days, a month, even years. these similar words contain ambiguity itself and are also widely used. 2. the vagueness caused by the variability of things. for example, teenagers. 3. the uncertainty of the meaning of words. among the words that describe the nature, degree, and scope of things, the specific boundaries of some words are difficult to define, and there are always fuzzy intersecting areas, for example, “a bit” and “a little.” they both show a small degree, and it is not easy to distinguish them just by understanding the degree. the function of these fuzzy expressions is mainly reflected in three aspects: firstly, they are used to show some words that are nearly but not entirely correct in degree or quantity to avoid being too arbitrary. secondly, they can be used to modify or restrict the expression of some content that is not necessary or cannot be precise. third, implying some messages and making articles look clear and polite. as a content text, the communiqué clarifies china’s position on many areas and issues, provides guidelines for work, and veritable authoritative information. the specific function of these official articles is to let readers home and abroad know about china’s national conditions and government work. it represents the official thoughts and actions of the chinese government. 5 translation strategies 5.1 criteria as a practical language communication and social practice, translation is always full of infinite possibilities. the criterion of the skopos theory to evaluate the quality of translation is adequacy rather than equivalence (duan, 2000). adequacy refers to the translation text being suitable to the requirements of the translation purpose. that is to say, and the translated text should fulfill its communicative function in the target language context and culture. compared to other translation content, the diplomatic translation needs more accurate and proper expressions, which is a high demand for translators. diplomatic content always includes national issues, international affairs, bilateral cooperation, and official announcements with solid political characteristics and significance. therefore, the translators should use standardized strategies and faithfully convey the information. according to pan (2010), the skopos theory advocates that translation is a kind of behavior with a specific purpose like any other action. the most crucial role of the skopos theory is to guide the selection of translation strategies. purpose or intention is the most direct and fundamental factor in determining strategy. purpose determines every process and detail of translation. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 30 the fundamental criterion of translation works under the guidance and demand of the author (duan, 2000). it means that no matter how hard the translator tries to catch the author’s thoughts and feelings, the translation is not a pure reproduction of the author’s actual psychological process but a re-creation of the text, which is also guided by the translator’s understanding of the text. any tiny misunderstanding may cause considerable trouble, especially in the diplomatic translation. therefore, during the translation process, the translator should concentrate on the purpose of translation and get the work done accordingly. 5.2 tactics based on the politeness principle and the skopos theory, to conclude the characteristics and usage of these types of hedges is now available. whether oral or written, the chinese often use fuzzy expressions or rhetoric to share ideas, while other people from western countries are likely to use logical and direct ways. therefore, some adjustments are needed to help foreigners better understand what the author wants to convey. below are some suggestions for translators based on what is discovered from the statistics elicited from the corpus. 5.2.1 from precision to fuzziness the precise translation is the norm, but sometimes ambiguity is a better choice. for example, it is ubiquitous to translate figures and data into official documents. not all figures need to be placed directly in the communiqués. to ease the reader’s pressure, translators often omit some data details, leaving only the central part. that is where the hedges come in. adaptors play an essential role in modifying the degree, while rounders do well in adjusting ranges. regardless of the specific data or the scope of something, approximators can help translators better convey the original meaning without causing difficulties for readers. at the same time, adding shields can make the article read less aggressive, which also shows the connotation of the politeness principle. plausibility makes the translation subjective and highlights the official position, while attribution attaches importance to quotation authority and convinces people. the use of these fuzzy words often makes the translation more palatable to readers, ensuring the intention of conveying information and giving people a polite impression, which is also conducive to the official agreement of readers. 5.2.2 from fuzziness to precision fuzzy messages in diplomatic primitives are retained in translation in some cases. most semantically fuzzy words can be translated directly by using fuzzy words corresponding to the literal meaning and political standpoint. due to the historical differences of each country, the social and cultural development is also various. if the information in the original language is not explained, the translation cannot be equivalent to the targeted ones, which confuses readers. therefore, the background and needs of readers must be fully taken into consideration in translation, and the original language should be supplemented so that readers can understand it better. for the cultural ambiguity caused by metaphor, quoting idioms, common sayings, and ancient poems, it would be better to adopt similar sayings in english on the basis of a correct grasp of the literal meaning and political connotation. combining with the diplomatic and overall context, the expression of chinese characteristics certainly helps spread chinese culture. fuzzy language itself has excellent uncertainty and selectivity, resulting in many implicated meanings. in addition, some fuzzy information should be deleted considering the whole content and its core meaning. based on the analysis of specific diplomatic context, some fuzzy expressions with similar meanings that are not politically strong or repeated frequently can be discarded, and the translation workload can be reduced. 5.2.3 from fuzziness to fuzziness although humans use different languages, the core structures that determine their organization is very similar, making the two languages equivalent in meaning. some words with equivalent meanings can be found in the target language in translation. therefore, it is an excellent method to match these equivalent meaning words accordingly and appropriately. when fuzzy information only affects a part and is reflected in a particular word, literal translation can be used for word-to-word translation so that fuzzy information can be perfectly preserved. based on the skopos theory, the purpose of translation determines the process of translation. in order to show our politeness and avoid conflicts, translators should avoid sensitive topics and issues. besides, sometimes it is unsuitable to tell the details or concrete plot to the other. ellipsis and fuzzy language are the most common methods of dealing with these problems. in addition, the logic between sentences is often reflected in mood and semantics. there are many long sentences in english, and the sentence structure is very complex and rigorous. a large number of connectives reflect the logic between sentences. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 31 the translation needs to be flexible and avoid unnecessary and redundant words so that the translation conforms to the target expression habits. in diplomatic translation, translators must clarify their position and get rid of the troublesome dilemma. there are implied meanings behind the sentences; how to deal with them makes a significant difference in many cases. sometimes the author wishes to preserve preliminary information, so the translator should try to preserve the characteristics of fuzzy language as faithfully as possible. otherwise, if fuzzy information is translated clearly, it does not truly reflect the author’s will but brings unnecessary trouble to communication. 6 conclusions and limitations in this paper, the software corpus antconc is used to calculate the distribution of four types of hedges used in the communiqués and carry out the theory. in the translation of the official communiqués, the translators should consider the entire content and background and then leave some room to adjust and explain. the official document generally requires plain and direct. nevertheless, in some cases, considering different readers and sometimes it is difficult to speak frankly, the utterance needs to be euphemistic and implicit. the need for confidentiality or etiquette also factors matters. in official documents, the situation analyzed, the questions raised, the experience summed up, and the appeal is all universal and complex to a certain extent. suppose there is a lack of accurate generalization. in that case, the article is bound to be protracted, and vague language has a high degree of generalization, making up for the lack of precise words in generalization. the use of these words makes the text concise and believable. the contents reflected in the official document must be objective, and no one can express his subjective color and feelings in the official document. therefore, fuzzy words should be used appropriately when writing articles. despite the hard work of this research, the study still has some limitations that further study could improve. this paper mainly focuses on the guidance of the politeness principle and the skopos theory. due to the limited practice experience and translation knowledge, there is a large room that can be improved on the analysis of the cases. it takes a lot of effort and time to do further research. in the translation study, only the translator’s strategy is studied from the perspective of the reader’s acceptance level and language level, and other 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(2005). 当代国外有关模糊语言学的主要研究 this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. 简评. 当代语言学, 7(3), 9.] 7-29-pb(revised)1.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 21 research into the subtitling of song of the phoenix from the perspective of manipulation theory ying wei1 1school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, e-mail:1482083452@qq.com abstract andré lefevere’s theory of manipulation emphasizes the close relationship between translation and social culture, arguing that translation is rewriting and rewriting is manipulation. rewriting treats translations as created or projected images of the original source texts, representing a far more dynamic implementation of translation theory. as one of the most frequent manifestations of global communication today, audiovisual translation (avt) is able to overcome language barriers when spreading culture around the world. of the several modes available to translate audiovisual programs, subtitling, grown in visibility and significance, has evolved into a prominent and prolific field of study, with many more scholars devoting to the analysis of audiovisual programs in recent years. this paper takes the subtitle translation of song of the phoenix, a cinema with strong chinese characteristics, as an example to explore the embodiment of lefevere’s three elements of manipulation in cinema subtitling. it is found that, under the manipulation of such extra-textual factors as ideology, poetics, and patronage, translators will flexibly adopt certain rewriting devices in subtitle translation to transcend ideological and poetic differences and cater to the patronage’s requirements so as to achieve the translation purpose. key words: audiovisual translation, subtitling, song of the phoenix, manipulation theory, rewriting 1. introduction against the backdrop of the booming social networks as well as streaming platforms, audiovisual works have become a prominent representative of communication in the digital world. audiovisual productions have become carriers of cultures and languages worldwide due to their ease of dissemination, which in turn has propelled audiovisual translation (avt) to one of the most predominant translation practices of the 21st century. movies, like literature and other creative arts, can bring different cultures closer or alienate them. with the potential to reach a wider audience, cinema has a more significant cultural effect than other artistic practices. (kuo, 2018). and yet, in the existing literature, little attention has been paid to the possible role of translation in the internationalization of chinese audiovisual productions, with most attention focused on such broader issues as the whole film and tv industry (keane, 2015), the successes in the box office of chinese works abroad, and the socio-cultural and political implications of such cross-border exchanges. (su, 2016; keane, 2019; rosen, 2020). song of the phoenix, a literary film directed by tianming wu and starring zeru tao and wei zheng, was released in 2016 in mainland china. the film, adapted from jianghong xiao’s novella of the same name, tells the story of the decline of suona, a traditional chinese folk-art form, in the context of western culture’s impact and china’s changing times. in the film, suona represents not only the skills but also the rules and beliefs upheld by generations. the film shows the perseverance of two generations of suona craftsmen, master jiao and tianming you, who endeavor to find a way for folk culture and make every effort to preserve the excellent traditional chinese culture. the film won the special jury prize and several nominations for the 29th golden rooster award, the best feature film award at the 1st silk road international film festival, and the audience favorite film award at the tours film festival in france. beyond that, the film became the official screening film of some international film festivals and received rave reviews everywhere it has been screened. yimou zhang, ke xu and other famous directors in china have voiced their support. martin ssecko, director of the academy award, praised tianming wu as a true giant in the film industry. with the deepening of cultural exchanges between china and the west, foreign films are constantly pouring into china while domestic films are further going to the international market. in this context, the translation of film subtitles means a lot. for an excellent movie to reach the global market, it must ensure that the recipients of the target language can accurately understand the film’s language through english subtitles as well as the images. as a film with strong chinese characteristics and local flavor, song of the phoenix contributes significantly to the inheritance and transmission of chinese culture. a proper translation can effectively promote the dissemination and development of traditional chinese culture. according to lefevere, translation is the rewriting of the source text, rewriting is manipulation, and all translations are the result of manipulation. ideology, poetics, and patronage are the three primary factors that manipulate translation, and any translation is inevitably influenced by these factors. the translation of the subtitles of song of the phoenix is no exception. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/ communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 22 due to the influence of these three factors, the translator has to adopt appropriate translation strategies to achieve the translation goals successfully. 2. literature review 2.1 previous research on audiovisual translation in the context of the rising popularity of audiovisual communication in all spheres of public and private life, it is an indisputable fact that recent decades have witnessed a surge in quantity, both in the production of avt and in the research into this field. the late 1950s and early 1960s saw a sluggish start of research on avt. luckily, the late 20th century witnessed an unprecedented and significant growth of research in this field, sparked by the digital revolution of the 1990s and translation as an establishment for academic and research subjects at the university level. the work of fodor (1976), a pioneer in avt studies, opened the door to research in this area. a few years later, mayoral, kelly, and gallardo (1988), with their detailed contributions, helped lay the foundation for the exploration of audiovisual translation. encouragingly, interest in this field has grown significantly today. within the broader discipline of translation studies (ts), avt has emerged as a promising area of academic research, which owes a good deal to the fertile ground provided by the prolific audiovisual industry of internet, dvd, film, television, 3d, etc. audiovisual modes from subtitling, dubbing, voiceover, audio description for the blind and the partially sighted to subtitling for the deaf and the hard-of-hearing have captured the interest of academics, allowing avt to rise to positions of importance and one of the most exciting areas in ts today. of the existing modes of translation activities in audiovisual programs, subtitling is arguably the most widespread owing to its cheap and fast characteristics. its popularity has also been boosted by the availability of free subtitling and video-editing programs online. in addition to its development as a professional activity, subtitling, grown in visibility and significance, has evolved into a prominent and prolific field of study since many more scholars are devoting to the analysis of audiovisual programs in recent years. examples are the frequently organized international conferences, the publication of collective volumes and monographs on the subject, and the completion of many dissertations. notable among these are studies on interlingual subtitling (schröter, 2005; mattsson, 2009) and on subtitling for the deaf and hard-of-hearing (sahlin, 2001; neves, 2005). as with any other field of translation, translators must make language their primary concern, which explains why many scholars choose case study as the ideal approach, often choosing a specific film or sitcom and analyzing the linguistic areas that pose a challenge. examples range from the translation of humor (schröter, 2005), compliments (bruti, 2009), idioms (gottlieb, 1997), swearing, or taboo language (chapman, 2004; mattsson, 2006) to cultural references (pedersen, 2007). notably, some scholars focused solely on the language level, ignoring the semiotic complexity of audiovisual productions and the necessary technical factors. in contrast, the idea of using multimodal transcription as a research method for the analysis and subtitling of audiovisual texts was put forward by some scholars (taylor, 2003; desilla, 2009). influenced by the cultural turn, the scope of research on subtitling has expanded with its socio-cultural embeddedness emphasized. words are powerful, and the manipulation in the original text and in the translated version comes easily to them. as well as reflecting reality, films distort it by constructing certain images and reinforcing certain stereotypes, thus shaping the audience’s perception of the world. it is worth noting that translation activity is not neutral. translation has turned out not just to be a bridge between cultures, and it can also amplify differences and reinforce false stereotypes, thus blowing up those bridges it was supposed to build. fortunately, the fact has also alarmed translation scholars who now realize that mass media are a powerful force both in the original context and translation. nevertheless, censorship forces, power, ideology, as well as manipulation remain a heavily unexplored topic in subtitling. 2.2 a review of the manipulation theory in translation studies the manipulation concept was put forward by theo hermans (1985) and his colleagues in the collected essays the manipulation of literature: studies in literary translation, which marked the formation of the embryonic form of manipulation theory. later, the translation theorist andré lefevere introduced the concept of cultural turn and manipulation, which greatly enriched this theory. as well as highlighting the fact that translated texts exist exactly within the framework of cultural or power relations, the cultural turn revealed how a text could be exploited and manipulated by a series of external factors in the process of transformation from source to target environment. lefevere directly presented challenges to the widely-accepted conventions of descriptive translation studies (dts). his basic idea is to shift the focus of translation studies from the linguistic structure and linguistic form correspondence, which are the concerns of the linguistic school, to the significance and function of target texts and source texts in their respective cultural systems. lefevere concerned the interaction between translation and culture, especially the ways in which culture affects and restricts translation, and “the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 23 larger issues of context, history and convention” (1990: 4). he regarded translation as a rewriting and therefore manipulation of the original text with the idea that the text is translated within an imposed ideological framework to ensure that it plays its proper role in a given society (hermans, 1999; ndlovu & sibanda, 2014). lefevere has put it that a translation cannot truly reflect the original work mainly because it is always manipulated by ideology, poetics, and patron power. he argued that these specific factors systematically govern the acceptance and rejection of literary texts. for lefevere, “the most important consideration is the ideological one” (munday, 2010). in this case, it refers to the ideology of the translator or the ideology imposed upon the translator by the patron. the poetological consideration refers to “the dominant poetics in the tl culture”. ideology and poetics jointly determine the translation strategy and the solution to specific problems. translators are no longer perceived as passive transmitters of information, but as active agents involved in shaping the ideological discourse of their culture since they may consciously or unconsciously embrace their value system and contribute to its transmission or subversion. manipulation theory puts translation activities in the context of culture, and provides a new perspective for literary translation by thoroughly examining factors other than language. lefevere’s more systematic discussion of the manipulative view of translation has had a tremendous impact on every branch of the discipline, although it is more obvious in literary translation than in that of specialized translation or avt, for instance, where scholars have adopted it more slowly (diaz-cintas, 2012). even though there are some works on avt following the principles of the cultural turn, they are still in infancy. 3. the embodiment of manipulation in the subtitle translation 3.1 ideological manipulation lefevere borrowed the idea of frederic jameson and added that ideology should be the “grillwork of form, convention, and concepts which can influence people’s actions” (2004: 125-126). at last, lefevere’s definition of ideology is not limited to politics, which he argued is the concept grid of attitudes and opinions acceptable in a given society at a given time, through which readers and translators engage with the text (2004). according to lefevere, ideology is composed of social ideology and the ideology of the translator. social ideology usually refers to some beliefs held by a group or society, including religion, politics, ethics and aesthetic tastes, etc., which will change with the development of human beings. the translator’s ideology that comes from his or her life and educational experiences is an essential factor influencing the choice of translation strategy and is susceptible to the social ideology. considering the different ideologies, the translator will inevitably make corresponding manipulations to the original text to achieve the stated purpose and make the translation conform to the mainstream ideology. the manipulation and rewriting of ideology in the subtitle translation of song of the phoenix are mainly reflected in the culture-loaded words in the movie. culture-loaded words are words, phrases, and idioms that indicate things specific to a culture, reflecting the unique ways of behavior gradually accumulated by a certain group over the course of history, which distinguishes them from other people (liao, 2000). culture-loaded words are susceptible to the exoticism and diversity of cultural factors. due to the vast differences between chinese and western cultures and ideologies, it’s hard to find equivalents for some culture-loaded words in the translation process. therefore, translators need to take the differences between chinese and western ideologies into full consideration and adopt the translation strategy of domestication for reasonable rewriting. as an excellent chinese film, song of the phoenix presents traditional folk music culture and large amounts of culture-load words with strong chinese characteristics related to social customs. here are some specific examples. translation example 1. st(source text): st in pinyin: shī niánɡ, nǐ mén jiā jiù nǐ hé shī fù liǎnɡ ɡè rén mɑ? tt(target text): auntie, is it just you and the master here? translation example 2. st: : : st in pinyin: tiān mínɡ: bà, zhè shì wǒ shī dì lán yù, shī fù yě ɡěi tā fànɡ jià le. lán yù: dà shū, shī fù ɡěi wǒ mén liǎ fànɡ jià le. tt: tianming: dad, this is my fellow student, lanyu. master gave him a vacation, too! communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 24 lan yu: uncle, our master gave us a break, so i came to see my senior classmate. there are a series of complex appellations unique to chinese culture in the movie, such as (shī fù), (shī niánɡ), (shī xiōnɡ), (shī dì) and so on. the translator adopts the strategy of domestication to rewrite the source text so as to conform to the western mode of thinking. in traditional chinese culture, people used to call their master’s wife or teacher’s wife as (shī niánɡ) or (shī mǔ); call the one who studied from the same teacher earlier than themselves as (shī xiōnɡ); call the one who studied from the same teacher after themselves as the (shī dì). these appellations are a reflection of the characteristics of chinese kinship terms, which pay special attention to the position in the family hierarchy. in contrast, western kinship terms are far less complex than ours. in addition to showing the relationship of generation, their appellations can only be inferred from the context, which requires translators to look at the different ideological characteristics of the appellations and carry out a reasonable and appropriate conversion. the word (shī niánɡ) is also a unique chinese term, and in english, there is only an explanation of the meaning “the wife of a master” but no specific corresponding one. therefore, in the english translation, the term “auntie” is selected as a broad and ambiguous term used by westerners, and the terms (shī xiōnɡ) and (shī dì) are translated as the broad terms “senior classmate” and “fellow student” respectively, regardless of gender. such translations take into account the two different ideological characteristics and respond to the westerners’ emphasis on individuality and independence, as well as the ambiguous kinship system. translation example 3. st: st in pinyin: cónɡ jīn wǎnɡ hòu, wú shuānɡ zhèn jiù méi yǒu jiāo jiā bān le. cónɡ jīn wǎnɡ hòu, wú shuānɡ zhèn zhǐ yǒu yóu jiā bān. tt: from today, there is no more “jiao dynasty” in the wushuang villages. from now, it’s the “you” (tianming’s surname) dynasty the you suona ensemble. in traditional chinese culture, the word (bān) in (jiāo jiā bān) and (yóu jiā bān) refers to an organization organized according to position or for certain needs, and also refers to the old term for a theater troupe, such as the (xì bān), (wén bān), (wǔ bān). however, there is no equivalent of (bān) in western culture, so the translator chooses the broad word “dynasty” to express this approximate meaning, cleverly borrowing from the change of dynasties to express that the era of the “jiao dynasty” led by master jiao has become a thing of the past. at the same time, the translator successfully avoids the confusion between the pronunciation (yóu) and the english personal pronoun “you” by using a phonetic transliteration with a note when the term (yóu jiā bān) first appeared. translation example 4. st: ss in pinyin: nǐ hé bì yì tiáo dào pǎo dào hēi ne? tt: why should you trap yourself sticking to one path? tianming chooses suona and goes forward on the road of inheritance, and his determination is fully reflected in the translation. the use of the word “trap” vividly conveys the spirit of the character and creates emotional resonance for the audience, making it easier for the target language audience to interpret tianming’s character. the word “trap” is more emotionally charged than “run” with accurate wording and strong language acceptability. in consideration of the social differences, the translator does not translate the word (hēi) in the source text as “black”, but adopts a strategy of reduction, so as to enable the target language audience to accurately understand the emotions of the character, at the same time, the cultural factor of the difference in urban construction design is neglected. because in ancient china, the lifang unit system was implemented and the alleys were closed, so if people kept walking along a road, there would be no way out. translation example 5. st: st in pinyin: yo, nà nǐ mén yóu jiā bān zǔ fén shànɡ ɡāi mào qīnɡ yān le. tt: wow, there must be holy smoke clouds pouring forth from your ancestors’ tombs. the traditional chinese patriarchal ideology and others’ teasing of tianming’s father contained in the culture-loaded words (zǔ fén mào qīnɡ yān) are difficult for the target audience to interpret, because it does not fit the mindset and language expression habits of the target audience in this context. (zǔ fén mào qīnɡ yān) belongs to chinese geomantic culture, and in the eyes of ancient chinese, the color “cyan” represents auspiciousness and sacredness. however, communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 25 the style of “tombs” in china and the west is very different, and the phenomenon of (zǔ fén mào qīnɡ yān) does not usually occur in foreign countries, and “tomb” is also taboo in most countries, so the translator has chosen appropriate modifiers to indicate the positive aspects of this sentence. therefore, the selection of the word “holy” is consistent with the cultural color of the source language. translation example 6. st: st in pinyin: suǒ yǐ yɑ, zài zán men de zhè kuài dì pán shànɡ suǒ nɑ bù nénɡ duàn le zhǒnɡ. tt: thus, we can’t let the sound of suona be absent from this area. the transliteration of “suona” is in line with the perception of the target language audience, because suona was introduced to china from persia during the jin and yuan dynasties, and most countries also have a concept of it, so the transliteration does not cause ambiguity and achieves the purpose of material culture dissemination. after a long period of development, suona has become one of the most important folk instruments in china, and it has continued to integrate with many traditional cultures in china, spreading widely in all areas of china (zhou, 2018). because chinese suona has its own material and cultural characteristics, chinese weddings and funerals, festivals, operas and literature are all closely related to it, and it often appears in film and television productions, the transliteration of “suona” preserves the chinese cultural heritage and is conducive to the understanding of our chinese culture by the target language audience. in addition, ideological differences are also presented in the translation of the film title song of the phoenix. as a piece of traditional chinese folk music, (bǎi niǎo cháo fènɡ) is not unfamiliar to many chinese people, and about its name, there are several different translations in existence, typical of which are: a hundred birds worshiping the phoenix; birds paying homage to the phoenix. however, when translating the title of the film, the translator does not directly choose the original translation, which is determined by the linguistic characteristics of film and television translation on the one hand, and the ideological differences on the other. the connotation of “phoenix” in chinese and western cultures varies in certain degree. phoenix is the king of all birds in ancient chinese legends, and is considered the most honored of all birds, with the saying “hundreds birds paying homage to the phoenix”. in chinese ideology, “phoenix” has been the most auspicious bird in the legend since ancient times, and is a symbol of good luck and harmony, so chinese people hold a reverential attitude towards phoenix. therefore, the name of the song (bǎi niǎo cháo fènɡ) is translated as hundreds birds worshiping the phoenix or birds paying homage to the phoenix. the selection of “worship” and “pay homage to” respectively expresses the nobility of the phoenix and convey the chinese people’s reverence for it, and such a translation will not cause chinese readers any trouble in understanding. however, if the title of the film is translated into english in the same way, the audience may be misled. although there is a myth legend of “phoenix nirvana” in the west, the phoenix is not the one in the traditional chinese sense, but an immortal firebird in western mythology. “phoenix nirvana” is often used as a metaphor for an indomitable spirit and a strong will. the degree of sacredness and reverence of phoenix in the ideology of chinese and westerners is different. from this aspect, the choice of “worship” and “pay homage to” may cause misunderstanding or even confusion to western audience. therefore, when translating the title of the film, the translator does not directly choose the original translation for ideological differences but subtly retranslates it as song of the phoenix. on the one hand, it avoids the possible misunderstanding of the audience due to the difference in the connotation of “phoenix” caused by the difference of chinese and western ideologies, and at the same time cleverly retains its commonality. although there are some differences in the connotation of the phoenix, the myths and legends of “phoenix” in china and the west share the same feature, that is, the phoenix symbolizes vitality and beauty. from this point of view, it is understandable for the western audience to keep the “phoenix”. on the other hand, the translator chooses “song” as the central word of the title, which could help highlight the film’s subject. this makes it easier for the western audience to infer the general content and theme of the film based on the title, which is conducive to the formation of a certain expectation of the audience. 3.2 poetics manipulation lefevere (1992) has detailed that a poetics specifically consists of two components: one is a list of literary devices, motifs, prototypical characters and situations, genres, as well as symbols; the other is a concept of the role literature plays, or should play, in the overall social system. poetics is considered to be the yardstick against which current production is measured, and exerts a tremendous influence on the selection of themes and the acceptance of literary works by the social system. therefore, the translation should conform to the target dominant poetics. in a certain socio-cultural context, in order to ensure the successful implementation of translation activities, the translator will take the initiative to manipulate and rewrite the original communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 26 text to make the translation conform to the pursuit and claims of the mainstream poetics of the translated language. a comparative analysis reveals that this rewriting and manipulation in the english translation of the movie subtitles of song of the phoenix is mainly manifested through two types of poetics expressions, that is wording and syntax. english and chinese are formed under different historical backgrounds and social forms, reflecting the features of their respective national cultures. chinese belongs to the ideographic writing system, while english is the phonetic writing system. chinese attaches great importance to parataxis, and the sentences are linear and loosely structured, with each clause connected by meaning. english emphasizes hypotaxis, and clauses are connected by explicit grammatical means. therefore, in the translation process, considering the differences in english and chinese grammatical norms, translators must adapt the linguistic forms and styles of the two languages in order to conform to their expression habits and adapt to the mainstream poetic forms of the target language. translation example 7. st: st in pinyin: ɡǒu rì de, nǐ zhè shì làn ní fú bù shànɡ qiánɡ ɑ, nǐ zhè shì. tt: fuck. you worthless, dumbass kid! (ɡǒu rì de) is a vulgar word with regional characteristics. the cultural image of “dog” differs in different cultural environments, and the attitudes of chinese and western people toward “dog” are very different. the author’s use of corresponding translation fits the cultural values of western countries, and the derogatory attitude is accurately conveyed, which is in line with the cognition of the target language audience. in the film, tianming’s father mistakenly believes that his son has been driven home by the master, and the choice of the word “worthless” reflects the father’s reproach to his son, conveying the his anger and helplessness. the original sentence is a typical chinese one, with a loose structure and many repetitions. in the translation, the translator takes into account the expression habits of the target language and transforms it into an exclamatory sentence in english, using the strategy of free translation and reduction, which is strict and concise, and easy for the target audience to accept. translation example 8. st: st in pinyin: wǒ kuài yào chuī bù dònɡ le, kě zán zhè huánɡ hé àn shɑnɡ bù nénɡ méi yǒu suǒ nɑ. bié shuō hūn sànɡ jià qǔ nònɡ jǐ ɡǎn suǒ nɑ nào no, jiù shì pínɡ shí ɡàn huó lěi le, dà huǒ tīnɡ yí duàn yě nénɡ jiě jig fá. tt: soon, i won’t be able to play anymore, but the banks of the river can’t be without a suona player. we are not just for funerals and weddings, but we also play the suona music for people when they are exhausted from work. it helps everyone to relax. the sentence is likewise retranslated in terms of linguistic form and style. the very colloquial and loosely structured sentences of chinese are translated into the compact and logically related sentences of english, which conform to the poetic form and grammatical norms of the target language. 3.3 patronage’s manipulation translation is an orchestrated activity with many interested parties involved. as lefevere (1992) has put it, patronage means something like the power (people, institutions) that can facilitate or hinder literary reading, writing, and rewriting. the patronage can be an individual or a religious group, a social class, a political party, publishers, as well as the media including newspapers and magazines and major television companies. it can be seen that the scope of patronage is very extensive and has different expressions in different works. the influence of patronage on film subtitle translation is mainly reflected in film censorship, the content and standards of which in turn reflect certain aspects of the dominant ideology at a certain period of time. in the words of billiani (2007), censorship remains a pervasive phenomenon that operates in many ways with different forms presented, and... translation remains one of the most powerful tools we currently have for shaping intercultural interactions. in order for a film or tv production to successfully march into foreign markets and gain the expected ratings, translators must take measures to avoid ideological conflicts with sponsors when translating film subtitles. translators usually adopt such means as complete deletion, transformation and weakening when translating movie subtitles to avoid conflicts, successfully pass the examination and achieve the set translation purpose. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 27 as a film inheriting traditional chinese culture, song of the phoenix, if translated properly, would contribute to the globalization of chinese culture and promote foreign audiences’ awareness and understanding of traditional chinese culture. in the process of foreign translation of film and television works, influenced by various aspects of the patronage, translators should take the national image into full consideration and reduce or avoid conveying a negative national image. therefore, whether it is from the perspective of the national image or the patronage, translators should consciously adopt appropriate translation strategies when performing subtitle translation so as to successfully achieve their translation purposes. in the english translation of song of the phoenix, the translator mainly focused on the deletion and weakening of some vulgar and offensive words in the film, so as to purify the work and successfully pass the examination. translation example 9: st: st in pinyin: tiān mínɡ shuō, tiān mínɡ shuō... tā yóu jiā bān chū huó ɡēn wǒ pì xiānɡ ɡān ne? tt: tianming says, tianming says! his business is none of mine! i am retired! this dialogue takes place when the you dynasty first takes up a job, and tianming you asks si xi to invite master jiao to come, but the attentive master jiao considering not to affect tianming’s performance, firmly refuses si xi. in translating the reply of master jiao, the translator adopts a weakening translation strategy, using “none of my business” to deliberately distance the relationship between the two, while reducing the vulgarity of the text. translation example 10: st: st in pinyin: bié tā mā tài dānɡ huí shì le, suí biàn chuī bean jiù dé le. tt hey, no need to go crazy. just play something simple, whatever. this dialogue takes place when tianming’s best friend, changsheng, is getting married, and in accordance with the traditional custom, he invites you dynasty to perform. when the you dynasty is playing vigorously, changsheng comes over and tells tianming that he doesn’t need to play so hard. since tianming and changsheng are friends who grew up together, they have a very close relationship, so changsheng and tianming talk very casually. the simple, crude language in the original text successfully conveys the character traits. the translator removes the vulgar word (tā mā) from the translation. such treatment is necessary from the point of view of purifying the film subtitles and avoiding ideological conflicts with the patronage. 4. conclusion as well as unleashing great potential in promoting chinese culture to the world and strengthening the country’s soft power, audiovisual translation could be employed as a tool to promote foreign trade in creative industries and increase economic returns. based on andré lefevere’s manipulation theory, this paper probes into the manifestation of manipulative factors in the english translation of the subtitles of song of the phoenix as well as the translators’ flexible strategies of translation in response to these manipulative factors. through the analysis, it is found that the translator is also influenced and manipulated by ideology, poetics and patronage in the translation process. under the influence of these manipulative factors, translators will inevitably take the initiative to rewrite the original text properly in order to avoid ideological conflicts, to meet the mainstream poetics, and to uphold the will of the patronage, so as to achieve the desired translation goal smoothly. references billiani, f. 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[in chinese , 33(3), 4.] this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. 7-29-pb(revised)1.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 9 exploring the translations and translating of yueju (cantonese opera) haowen liang1 1school of foreign languages, guangzhou xinhua university, china,e-mail: 874664699@qq.com. this paper is an achievement of the visiting scholar program (no. f202102013) in south china university of technology abstract yueju ( /cantonese opera), one of the chinese operas being popular in the southern china and amongst the overseas chinese community, works as a vital element for disseminating chinese culture. however, the english translations for “yueju/ ” are dissatisfying for being unprecise, lack of motivation and failing to highlight the cultural elements of the cradleland. under the guidance of the post-colonialism theory, the present study will try to apply some translation strategies to work out the possible translations. keywords: cantonese opera, translation studies, post-colonialism, cross-cultural communication 1. introduction known as “the red bean in the south”, cantonese opera (“ ” yueju) is a delicate and unique type of performance in china. with the diaspora of cantonese-speaking chinese people, such an opera has been disseminated to the north america, australia and the southeastern asia amongst other places. besides, in recent years, thanks to its fascinating plot, splendid costume and unique voice, it has attracted non-cantonese speakers. up to 2012, hong kong finished the english translation of these texts: the brief introduction of more than 120 pieces of cantonese opera and the 18 excerpts of different plays. what’s more, activists in hong kong and singapore had already translated, rewrote the cantonese opera scripts in languages like english, malay so as to perform the operas in different languages and attract more audience. for instance, cha duk chang children’s cantonese opera association in hong kong has produced some cantonese operas in english like breaking the red lantern ( , zuidajinzhi). in addition, the association takes these works as a method to help the teenage members to study english language, chinese culture and cantonese opera itself. however, a big problem may hinder the further spread of cantonese opera because there are several different english names for the term “ ” (yueju). these english names are as follows: “cantonese opera”, “guangdong opera” and “yue opera”. even worse, the scholars argue and hold different opinions for these names. hence, there is a research gap for the present study to find a better term for “ ” (yueju) by analyzing its origin from relevant translation theory. 2. reasons for different translations of “yueju ( )” 2.1 an analysis of the term “guangdong opera” in most cases, the traditional chinese operas are named after the cradlelands or the dialects used in the performance. considering that “ ” (yueju) is popular amongst people in guangdong province and its cradleland also lies in guangdong, the opera is named as “guangdong opera” by some people. however, for the skeptics, guangdong province also has operas like teochew opera, han opera (hakka opera), leizhou opera and tea-picking opera among others. besides, “ ” (yueju) is also popular in guangxi, hong kong and macau. hence, it is too broad (or narrow) to name “ ” (yueju) as “guangdong opera”. 2.2 an analysis of the term “yue opera” some people rendered the term “ ” (yueju) as “yue opera”. for instance, “ ”, literally meaning “the cantonese opera theater of guangdong” is officially translated as “guangdong yue opera theater”. the proponents argue that “yue” is the transliteration of “ ” which means guangdong province or something related to cantonese people, their dialects and culture. hence, it is reasonable to name “ ” (yueju) “yue opera”, which shows its cultural connection with the cantonese people. nevertheless, the opponents challenge that yue opera may confuse the readers because the shaoxing opera in shanghai and zhejiang province is also named yue opera (“ ” pinyin also pronounce as “yueju”). 2.3 an analysis of the term “cantonese opera” taking the above mentioned conditions into consideration, pan (2000) argue that the term “cantonese opera” is advisable. the main reasons are the following: 1) the term is widely used in the english world; 2) the word “cantonese” refers to the dialect used by the cantonese people residing in both guangdong and guangxi. hence, it can precisely refer to the original audience of the very opera. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 10 3. how “yueju” was and could be translated a proper name for “yueju ( )” means the first step for a better dissemination of the cantonese opera. however, a good name is not only about terminology but also about the unequal power relationship between different cultures. it should be noticed that the term “cantonese opera” will not confuse the readers like other terms available and used; nevertheless, it clearly unveils a position of the weakness of chinese culture when it is going global. 3.1 the unequal power relationship behind the term “cantonese opera” michael foucault puts forward the power discourse theory, pointing out that power is closely related to discourse: the nature of power is the power of articulation, and discourse is not merely the tool for power but also the key point for mastering power (wei, 2015, p. 124). in the cultural transmission, power, especially the hegemony of discourse/culture, is ubiquitous. as a critical part of discourse generation, the influence of political and cultural power is omnipresent in the process of translation. the relationship between power and translation can be mainly summarized as follow: firstly, translation yields to power, for instance, the selection of source text and translation strategy often reveal the power discourse. after it failed in the opium war in the 1840s, china strong demanded for learning from the west. hence, for a long time, the directionality of translation in china was mainly from foreign languages to chinese while the purpose of translation lay in the introduction of western knowledge and values. in a word, the translation activities in china have always been under the western discourse hegemony. secondly, powers lie in translation. in other words, translation also boasts its value, function, and influence. therefore, china must make good use of the chinese-to-english translation to build up its cultural image on the international stage. meanwhile, different cultures or countries, by making use of translation, can make their voices heard and protect the world’s cultural diversity. in the following, i will analyze the term “cantonese opera” as the english translation of “ ” (yueju) from the relationship between translation and power. according to the existing opinions, “cantonese” refers to the “the dialect of chinese spoken in the vicinity of canton in southern china” or “of or relating to canton (guangzhou), its inhabitants, their dialect, or their cuisine” (see the new oxford english-chinese dictionary). hence, it is reasonable to translate “ ” (yueju), an opera popular in the cantonese-speaking areas, as “cantonese opera”. however, such a translation shows the hegemony of western culture. in most cases, the name of chinese opera is translated this way: “the pinyin name of the cradleland + opera”, for instance, yue opera (also known as “shaoxing opera” because it originates in shaoxing, zhejiang), sichuan opera. sometimes, some of the opera are translated in this way: “the local dialect name of the cradleland + opera”. for example, teochew opera (i.e., chaozhou ju in pinyin), is an opera famous in chaozhou (known as teochew in the local dialect). hence, most english terms for translating china’s operas boast the cultural connection with their origins. however, the term “cantonese opera” is another story. from the perspective of etymology, “cantonese” comes from “canton”, the english name for guangzhou. the word “canton” originates from french, meaning an administrative division of a country or the capital city of this division. nowadays, the term “canton” is used as a name for places or territorial subdivisions in france and several countries and regions with french influence like belgium, switzerland, lebanon and the quebec province of canada. in france, the term “canton” was once one of the administrative divisions above “commune” (analogous to a us civil township or city). in switzerland, canton is the name for the federated states of the swiss confederation. a swiss canton may consist of “communes” or “districts”. guangzhou, being the capital city of guangzhou prefecture ( in chinese) and guangdong province in the ming and qing dynasties, was the residence of the officials like prefect ( ) and “governor” ( ). besides, it was consisted of several townships and counties. besides, the city of guangzhou, as one of the important cities on the maritime silk road, was one of the coastal cities for communication between china and the world at large. in the qing dynasty, the famous “the thirteen factories” were located in guangzhou and merchants from western europe, and america came here for business. however, the westerners in the 18th and 19th centuries, who were unfamiliar with china’s administrative divisions, used the word “canton” to name this city. some opinions argue that “canton” was a transliteration of guangdong. however, the existing corpus has falsified such sayings. in canton guide (published in 1889) by john glasgow kerr, there were paragraphs including the translation of “ ” (guangzhou), “ ” (guangdong), and “ ” (guangzhou prefecture) as follows: “the city of canton is situated on pearl river, 90 miles from hongkong……. it is the capital of kwong-tung province, and contains about 1,000,000 inhabitants. it is the residence of the viceroy of the two kwong provinces, and of high military and civil officals of the province. it is also the seat of the officers of the kwong chau department...” (kerr, 1889, p. 1) in the selected text, guangzhou was called canton, guangdong province “kwong-tung province”, while the guangzhou communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 11 prefecture “kwong chau department”. it should be noted that “kwong-tung” and “kwong chau” are the transliteration of the pronunciation for “guangdong” and “guangzhou” in the cantonese dialect. in other words, for the westerners in the late 19th century, the english names for “guangdong” and “guangzhou (canton) ” were distinguished. therefore, the term “canton” does not originate from “guangdong” or “guangzhou”. therefore, we can conclude that using “canton” to name “guangzhou” reveals the inequality between different cultures in discourse power, namely, the strong cultures would name things of the weaker cultures the way as they like. above all, the term “cantonese opera” cannot present the characteristics of the chinese culture (especially the cantonese culture). therefore, a better english name is needed to eliminate the hegemony of the western culture and reshape the cultural identity of china. 3.2 thought resource for eliminating the inequality of discourse power between different cultures with globalization, it is inevitable that the strong culture will permeate into other cultures, causing the culture of the weakness to face the risk of assimilation. hence, it is a new project in the research of cultural communication about maintaining cultural identity. as one of the significant methods of cultural communication, translation itself means the contest of the discourse powers of the two cultures. under the background of the peaceful rise of china, the chinese culture was and is presenting itself to the rest of the world and gaining the equal rights in cultural communication. the translation theory of post-colonialism, with the aim to unveil the hegemonical nature of imperialism in cultural communication, coincides with the goal of helping chinese culture win an equal status and increase the world’s cultural diversity. the post-colonialism school, moving away from the existing research paradigms, which mainly focused on the linguistic dimension of translation, considers the historical and cultural elements and points out that 1) translation is a way to get power; 2) translation is an arena of cultural colonialism and decolonization and 3) the process and result of translation reveal the discourse power of the cultures of the source and target languages. niranjana, one of the representative figures of post-colonialism, believes that the activity of translation is always political. the power relationship lying behind the translation is always where the (ex-) colonialist imposes the “symbolic control” over the culture of weakness or the people of their ex-colony. in other words, the relationship between different cultures is far from equal. hence, she calls on the people in colonies to “relocate translation and turn it into a place of resisting and transforming” (niranjana, 1992: 15). as a way of resisting, post-colonialism disagrees with the seemingly objective or neutral cultural opinions advocated by the (ex-) colonialists and the strong culture: these seemingly neutral opinions, by emphasizing the “sameness” of different cultures while neglecting the differences, imposes discourse violence against the weaker and marginalized culture and may cause cultural crisis. as for translation, post-colonialism school holds that post-colonialist translation should be a tool for the third world/the weaker culture to achieve these goals: 1) getting rid of the dominance of the strong culture; 2) moving away from the peripheral position and 3) making their voice heard when communicating with the strong culture. in the context of the postcolonialism, there are two major translation strategies: domestication and foreignization, which are not merely about textual style but also connected to political power (wei, 2015). the strategy of domestication usually adopts a fluent expression that is easy to be understood. the translators using this strategy are required to produce a translated text which reads like the nontranslation text in the source language. however, the strategy of domestication, to some extent, might underscore the uniqueness/specificity of the source culture. in a world with the unequal relationship between different cultures, this strategy helps the strong culture not merely in imposing their discourse power on other culture, but also in conducting cultural appropriation of the source text and its culture. for laurence venuti, one of the translators of post-colonialism, the strategy of foreignization is a way of resistant translation, i.e., when translating the text of the cultures of weakness, the translator purposely selects the unfamiliar, unaccustomed, and non-fluent expressions to preserve the exotic, unique elements of the source text (zhang, 2018). by preserving the cultural features of the original text, the original text could resist the assimilation of the strong cultures. being affected by post-colonialism, a certain number of chinese scholars point out that it is reasonable to use the foreignization strategy when helping chinese culture going global. for instance, xu (2014) affirms the positive effects of foreignization strategy when analyzing the problems in the translation and dissemination of the chinese classics, like the doctrine of the mean, the analects of confucius, and dream of the red chamber. however, the foreignization has its limitations in helping the chinese culture go outside. tan & zhang (2018) even criticize that “the post-colonialism theory over-emphasizes the cultural and political function of the foreignization strategy while ignoring the translation itself. hence, it has little guidance to the translation practice”. therefore, in the dissemination of the culture of weakness, the translator should adopt a flexible method and pay attention to the effect when selecting the strategy. if the translator misunderstands the foreignization strategy and blindly uses the word-for-word method, which seems to preserve the feature of the source culture, they would surprisingly find that their translation works are too obscure for the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 12 target audience to understand. in a word, the translator of the weaker cultures shall maintain the cultural identity and strike a balance between foreignization and domestication. 3.3 the possible solutions for translating “ ” (yueju) due to the dominance of the english language, when talking about the translating texts relevant to english, there are more texts translated from english than texts translated into english. in other words, even the audiences from non-english speaking countries need english materials to learn about cantonese opera. considering this situation, the present paper tries to make a compromise, using both the strategy of foreignization while adding notes. by doing so, the translation can highlight china’s cultural identity while making it possible for the audience to easily understand the meaning. in the following, some possible solutions are provided, and the most appropriate one would be selected through a corpus-based analysis. the first possible translation could be jyut opera (cantonese opera). guangdong (guangzhou) is home to cantonese opera. the chinese character “ ” (yue in pinyin) refers to the city or the province. however, the term “yue opera” in english has already been designated to “ ” (also known as shaoxing opera, a chinese opera in zhejiang province and shanghai. inspired by the case of “teochew opera”, with “teochew” in the local dialect meaning chaozhou city, “ ” (yueju) could be translated as “jyut opera” with “jyut” representing “ ” in the cantonese dialect. meanwhile, the linguistic society of hong kong, an academic group, has developed a romanization system of cantonese called jyutping, with the syllable of “jyut” for “ ”, meaning the cantonese dialect and “ping” for “ ”, meaning “phonetic alphabet”. such a system is widely accepted by the education system in hong kong to teach the pronunciation of cantonese dialects. hence, it is reasonable to adopt “jyut” for “ ” according to the jyutping alphabet. in order to help the foreign readers to understand, a note “cantonese opera” is added and the whole term comes to be “jyut opera (cantonese opera)”. another option would be guangfu opera (cantonese opera). the opera is an indispensable part of cantonese culture. cantonese people name themselves guangfu people in chinese. cantonese people reside in not merely guangdong province but also hongkong, macau and guangxi. meanwhile, there are also other operas like teochew opera and han opera (hakka opera) in guangdong province. therefore, to refer to the opera more accurately, the term “ ” (yueju) can be translated as “guangfu opera”. such a translation would be more accurate than the “guangdong opera” because it refers to the cultural factor rather than a narrow geographical factor. the last one could be guangzhou opera (cantonese opera). typically speaking, cantonese opera is said to originate from guangzhou city. hence, “ ” (yueju) is translated as “guangzhou opera”. it should be noted that the term “guangzhou” has been gradually known to the world thanks to that the city gain momentum economically and in terms of tourism. however, the term “canton” is more famous than “guangzhou”. by translating “ ” (yueju) as “guangzhou opera” with a note “cantonese opera” added, the new term can strengthen the connection between “guangzhou” and “canton”. what’s more, by impressing the audience that guangzhou is linked to the popular opera, the term may make guangzhou more famous and attract more tourists to visit it in the coming future. to find the most advisable translation version, the proper names in these proposals would be analyzed through corpora. hence, corpus as google books n-grams and wikipedia corpus are selected to find out the frequencies of terms proposed above in the historical texts and the academic texts. while the corpus of coca, british national corpus, news on the web (now), and global web-based english are chosen for checking the frequencies of the terms in the news or online texts. the results of searching the relevant terms are listed below in table 1. table 1. the frequencies of the translations in corpora corpus word google books n-grams (british english) google books n-grams (american english) wikipedia corpus coca bnc now glowbe total jyutping 0 0 366 0 0 59 17 442 jyut 0 0 6 0 0 0 0 6 guangzhou 14705 38280 9049 492 15 33896 4456 100893 guangfu 0 0 92/2 5/0 0 152/0 56/0 2 communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 03 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x; issn (print): 2770-6354 www.jhkpress.com 13 as for the proposal one, the term “jyutping” appears 442 times, with 336 times in wikipedia and 61 examples in the hong kong media. in other words, the term “jyutping” is only popular among hong kong readers and not so widely accepted by the western audience. as for the term “jyut”, there are only 6 searching results. all the results are mainly the jyutping spelling of some chinese words in the cantonese dialect. however, the samples are not enough to be widely disseminated among the foreign readers. hence, translating “ ” (yueju) as “jyut opera” may not be an optimal choice. as for the second proposal, there are 305 examples in corpus like wikipedia corpus, corpus for contemporary american english, news on the web, and global web-based english. however, most examples did not stand for the chinese “ ” but for other chinese characters. with such a low frequency, the word “guangfu” is not likely to help the audience better understand the translation. as for the final term, “guangzhou”, appears 100,893 times in different corpus. among different corpus, the term appears 33896 and 4456 times in the news on the web (now) and global web-based english (glowbe) respectively. obviously, the term “guangzhou” boasts more frequency than the term “jyut” or “guangfu”. in other words, “guangzhou” is more widely accepted by the foreign readers than the two other proposals. therefore, guangzhou opera (cantonese opera) is recommended for rendering “ ” (yueju) for both the width of usage and the representation of the cultural identity. 4. conclusion the different translations of a cultural term mean the contest for different motivation and even the wrestling of discourse powers. the present paper attempts to work as a pathway and to inspire more translation researches on these fields like the naming of the traditional chinese operas and other art forms in english, and the translation of terminology in the relevant fields. under the backdrop of globalization, in order to help more traditional chinese art going global, the translator is advised to strike a balance between two extremes of foreignization and domestication. on the one hand, they try to practice under the guidance of “resisting translation” according to the post-colonialism theory. 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(2014). translation of chinese classics: theory and practice (in chinese, : ). beijing university press ( ). a brief introduction of the author: liang haowen [ ], lecture, school of foreign languages, guangzhou xinhua university. researching interests: translation studies, cognitive linguistics, cross-cultural communication. this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/, which permits unrestricted use, distribution and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. v02issue02.06.2022.0613.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 41 a comparative analysis of chinese versions of on the road based on retranslation jing niu1 1school of foreign studies, hebei university, china, e-mail: lodestarn@139.com abstract translation practice is closely related to language development and social advances. the change in all aspects of society will promote translation activity. in addition, some translation texts need to be renewed especially in literary translation, due to social progress, and readers’ demands. therefore, many scholars around the world turn to retranslation and its hypothesis and give their definitions or express their views. the book, on the road, written by jack kerouac and published in 1957, is one of the representative works of america in the 1950s, primarily reflecting the condition of the beat generation. after its publication, three chinese versions of the early period in china emerged and the translators are: chu’an wen (wen’s version, 1998), yongnian wang (wang’s version, 2006), and yueqing tao and xiaoli he (1990 version). in 2020, the works of jack kerouac entered into the public domain. therefore, a couple of translation versions emerged, such as xianghui yao’s version, ang wu’s version and wei yang’s version. this paper analyzes the four chinese versions (respectively tao and he’s version, yao’s and wu’s and yang’s versions) from different dimensions in order to examine certain scholars’ opinions on the phenomenon of retranslation. keywords: translation activity, retranslation, comparative analysis, on the road, literary translation 1. introduction on the road was written by jack kerouac and published in 1957 by viking press. it was primarily autobiographical, originating from jack kerouac’s experience of traversing the continental united states. this book describes the two main protagonists’ behaviors on the road to mexico, showing their spirits of taking adventure and seeking freedom, also reflecting spiritual emptiness of american youngsters after world war ii. their lifestyle exerted considerable influence on american youngsters in 1960s. arguably, among jack kerouac’s books, on the road is the most representative work, which is recognized by les cent livres du siècle. it is regarded as a classic by hippie movement around 1960s, albeit this book enjoys mixed reviews after its publication. in addition to the different evaluations, this novel is not compact in structure and is partly characterized by a stream of consciousness. moreover, behind the social influence it brought and the recognition from the public, it went through an arduous process of publication. kong’s essay (2020) shows the turn of acceptance of mainstream culture at that time, which explains that on the road takes six years from its draft to final publication. kong expresses that this novel realizes the metamorphosis from folk literature to classic literature due to the active engagement of each party, involving academic study, and the press, among other things. with its growing influence, the first chinese version of cover-to-cover translation was published by lijiang publishing limited in 1990, with tao and he as its translators. and then, wen’s translated version was published in 1998. wang’s version, published in 2006 by shanghai translation publishing house, had dominated the whole market for more than ten years. however, the year 2020 witnessed many new translated versions. among those, jie chen’s version, published by hunan literature and art publishing house, received much attention. there are other versions: yao’s version published by phoenix publishing & media group, yingyi he’s version published by hunan literature and art publishing house, as well as wu’s version, yang’s version. the translated versions spring up like mushrooms, but here a research focus will place on just four versions. 2. retranslation 2.1 previous studies of retranslation outside china according to shuttleworth and cowie (2014), the term “retranslation” is another name for “indirect translation”, which means the translation process is conducted through intermediate translation relying on another language rather than the source language. in susam-sarajeva’s opinion (2006), there are some points about retranslation: not only the literary and canonical ones but also many other types of texts can be retranslated; the action of retranslation is not necessarily caused by the outdated translation versions or different times; retranslation will emerge when the current translations are flawed, assimilative, literal, or when the readers of target language shift their thoughts, or when a struggle for a local discourse that contains those this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 42 translation versions is conducted; retranslation consider more on the demands and views of the receiving system than the intrinsic characteristics of the source text. arguably, susam-sarajeva provides a fuller explanation for the retranslation phenomenon, introducing the retranslation of other texts into people’s horizons and bringing further consideration for its reasons. 2.2 previous studies of retranslation in china as for the studies in china, many scholars discuss the difficulty of retranslation and discuss the relationship between the first translated version and the subsequent versions, and explore a way for the new translated versions to reach a higher level based on the existing achievement earned by the first version or the old ones. the following scholars primarily explore retranslation from the theoretical perspective and generalize the important issues in this field. their conclusions provide the theoretical basis for the subsequent studies, including this paper. in contrast, this paper places emphasis on the research of specific cases and test some scholars’ studies to some degree. luo (1995) points out that retranslation is a phenomenon with the development of translation practice and is indispensable for promoting the translation field to some extent. luo thinks retranslation is inevitable, and the purpose is to seek better translation versions while respecting the old translations. luo (1991) refers to the first translation and the retranslated versions: the retranslated versions need to avoid repeated expressions of the first translation. otherwise, the retranslations will suffer the suspicion of plagiarizing. xu (1996) concludes that retranslation have two meanings: one is that someone retranslates the works he or she has already translated. another is that someone retranslates the works other scholars or translators has already translated. xu also thinks that literary translation, especially literary retranslation, should utilize the advantages of the target language and adopt the best expressions in receiving system. gu (2003) puts forward retranslation on filtered translational accumulation, which means that the translated versions should reasonably employ all the old translations, absorb the quintessence, and infuse new better expressions. in this way, a translation version that is the closest to the original text will be produced. above studies refer to the attitude to the first translated version or the past versions: respecting and absorbing their quintessence. some studies continue to refine the concept of retranslation, and others, like gu’s research, contribute to its theoretical innovation. 2.3 summarization the studies of retranslation outside china explore the definition of retranslation and the texts it involves as well as its reasons. in contrast, the studies in china focus more on the retranslation process and its outcomes—different translated versions. both of them contribute to flourishing retranslation. 3. relevant studies about on the road 3.1 previous studies of on the road outside china the following studies primarily analyze on the road from the perspectives of culture and literature. little attention is drawn to its translation or retranslation. under this circumstance, this paper intends to fill that gap. dougherty (2008) uses an ecological perspective to read this novel under the context of the increase of automobiles and more reliance on fuel in america and discusses the vision of driving on the road from the protagonist sal’s view. ireland (2009) studied the relationship between the works of road genre and american history and culture. on the road is one of the cases to be analyzed. salles et al. (2018) explore the existential curiosity in the face of unexpected events and scenes based on phenomenology. savio (2019) analyzes how the authors embody their experience of world war ii in their works and takes the two novels jack kerouac’s on the road and j. d. salinger’s the catcher in the rye as the examples and explores the determinant forming the novels. morrison (2020) explores the canterbury tales and on the road from the perspective of pilgrimage ecopoetics and points out that geoffrey chaucer’s tales exert influence on jack kerouac’s writing of this novel. to sum up, dougherty’ research is a unique perspective for the study of on the road, for this book itself has literary solid color. while savio and morrison explore this novel with another work employing one typical character or research perspective and understand the links between works or the works with american society. salles et al. notice the novel’s content, while ireland regards it as one subject together with other similar subjects to analyze his research topic. from the this is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the creative commons attribution licence (cc-by) 4.0 communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 43 analysis of savio and morrison, respectively, in 2019 and 2020, a research trend of on the road may combine it with another novel or other works to discuss common problems. 3.2 previous studies of on the road in china the following studies involve the literary perspective and the perspective of translation. however, they lack the analysis from the perspective of retranslation. furthermore, this paper provides two dimensions: synchronic analysis and diachronic analysis, and introduces new translated versions into study, which enriches the research of this novel. he (2003) explores the writing style of tropic of cancer and on the road and points out three characters: the first-person narrative approach to describe the life and ideas of “the lost generation” and “the beat generation”, the expression of antitraditional culture and the shape of anti-hero character, spontaneous motivation and creative method. jiang and yu (2010) discuss the impact of wars on american people, in particular their mental world, through the analysis of hemingway’s the sun also rises and jack kerouac’s on the road and find that there are something similar between “the lost generation” and “the beat generation”: traumatized by the wars and seeking for new values. jin (2012) analyzes the marginal people in on the road, rabbit run, and the catcher in the rye. it shows those people’s inability to integrate themselves into the society at that time and their rebellion. su 2013 discusses the significance of route 66 for american culture and people, combines the context of the novel on the road and further reflects the spirits of the westward process through route 66. li (2015) explores the translator’s subjectivity through wen’s version and wang’s version and discusses the nuances of the two versions caused by translators’ different opinions. han (2016) analyzes the different chinese versions from three phases: in 1980s and 1990s, at the turn of the century, in the early 21st century, and shows the main characters of various translated versions. han (2017) uses the two novels of jack kerouac to explore the betweenness of the author himself. he shows the contradictions between seeking freedom and stability in on the road, and between the breakthroughs and conservatism in the dharma bums. jin (2018), based on gadamer’s prejudices theory, analyzes the two translated versions of on the road, respectively yushi huang and xianrong shi’s 1962 version and wang’s 2006 version, from the perspective of language, cultural context, and economic climate. to sum up, many scholars in china make a comparison or find similar characters between this novel and other works, no matter what perspectives they explore. in addition, some analyze the translated versions of this novel, mainly two versions to compare. studies about this novel both at abroad and home may contain literary elements, such as highway culture, the characters’ analysis, value seeking, and dimension of translation, such as the comparison between two versions, and its translation and communication in china. furthermore, many studies utilize comparisons between translated versions or different works. through the review of this novel, the author finds there is no research on retranslation about this novel. moreover, less attention to the new translated versions after 2020 is paid. therefore, the author decides to study chinese versions from the perspective of retranslation and discusses the value of retranslation in this novel. 4. comparative analysis of the chinese versions 4.1 the comparison among three versions published in 2020 4.1.1 basic introduction of the three versions the author chooses wu’s version, yao’s version, and yang’s version, all of which were published in 2020. they are distributed by citic press group, jiangsu phoenix literature and art publishing house, yunnan people’s publishing house separately. 4.1.2 specific analysis in diction arguably, “diction” refers to an activity that when people want to express something or translate one language into another, people will choose an appropriate expression under corresponding context. the author extracts some examples from the translated versions. all of examples use various expression on words of the source text, showcasing translators’ consideration on diction. translation example 1. source text: i first met dean not long after my wife and i split up. i had just gotten over a serious illness that i won’t bother to talk about, except that it had something to do with the miserably weary split-up...... target text by yao: wǒ hé qī zǐ fēn shǒu bù jiǔ hòu, dì yī cì communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 44 jiàn dào le dí ēn. nà huì ér wǒ gāng cóng zhòng bìng zhōng huī fù guò lái, zhì yú shēng bìng wǒ lǎn de duō shuō shén me, zǒng zhī hé wǒ men lìng rén pí bèi de kě bēi de fēn shǒu yǒu guān...... target text by wu: wǒ tóu huí yù dào dí ān shì zài wǒ hé wǒ lǎo po sàn huǒ zhī hòu bù jiǔ, nà shí wǒ bìng le yī chǎng, dàn zhè chǎng bìng wǒ yě bù xiǎng zài tí jí le, shēng bìng què shí yǔ nà chǎng bēi cuī, lìng rén pí bèi de lí hūn yǒu guān...... target text by yang: (dì yī cì yù dào dí ēn, shì wǒ hé qī zǐ lí hūn hòu bù jiǔ. wǒ gāng jīng lì le yī chǎng dà bìng, jù tǐ qíng kuàng yě lǎn de duō shuō le, fǎn zhèng kěn ding gēn nà chǎng jiào rén xīn lì jiāo cuì de fēn shǒu hé wǒ de qíng xù tuō bù liǎo guān xì……) “split up” is translated as “fēn shǒu/ ”, which means “break up” in yao’s text, “lí hūn/ ” which means “get divorced” in yang’s text, “sàn huǒ/ ” which means “end a relationship” in wu’s text. however, when “split-up” appears for the second time, only yao handles it with the first expression “fēn shǒu”, while yang changes it from “lí hūn” to “fēn shǒu”, wu adjusts it from “sàn huǒ” to “lí hūn”. considering the original text, “i first met dean not long after my wife and i split up”, the word “wife” in chinese means a title for a woman who gets married, so for chinese readers, the words “split up” means that the marriage between “i” and “my wife” is dissolved. the three translations introduce three different words to express that situation. translation example 2. source text: one day i was hanging around the campus and chad and tim gray told me dean was staying in a coldwater pad in east harlem, the spanish harlem. target text by yao: yī tiān wǒ zài xiào yuan lǐ xián guàng, chá dé hé dì mǔ gé léi gào sù wǒ shuō dí ēn zhù jìn le dōng hā lái mǔ qū--yī tào zhǐ gōng yìng lěng shuǐ de lián jià gōng yù. target text by wu: (yǒu yī tiān, wǒ zhèng zài xiào yuan xián guàng, chá dé hé tí mǔ gé léi gēn wǒ shuō dí ān zhù zài dōng hā lái mǔ de yī suǒ dōng tiān bù dài nuǎn qì de pò gōng yù lǐ, xī bān yá yǔ qū de hā lái mǔ.) target text by yang: (yī tiān, wǒ zhèng zài xué xiào lǐ huàng you, chá dé hé dì mǔ gé léi gào sù wǒ, dí ēn jiù zài dōng hā lái mǔ qū, yě jiù shì suǒ wèi xī bān yá hā lái mǔ qū de yī piàn pín mín kū lǐ.) “cold-water pad” is translated as “lěng shuǐ gōng yù/ ”, indicating that “the pad only supplies cold water” in yao’s version, and as “dōng tiān bù dài nuǎn qì de pò gōng yù/ ”, meaning that “the pad lacks the heating facilities” in wu’s version. in comparison, yang renders it as the meaning of “slum”, in chinese “pín mín kū/ ”. yao’s version is arguably literal translation. throughout the context, it is unnecessary to emphasize the supply of water in the pad, and there are no relevant plots revolving around “cold water” or “hot water”. wu’s version mentioned above belongs to liberal translation to some degree. it strips the literal meaning off, changes the meaning into an acceptable expression and presents a pad with poor facilities. this will not cause distortion of the main idea of this novel. likewise, yang utilizes free translation. “cold-water pad” is translated into three versions. translation example 3. source text: and this was really the way that my whole road experience began, and the things that were to come are too fantastic not to tell. target text by yao: (wǒ de zhěng gè lù shang shēng yá yě què shí jiù shì zhè me kāi shǐ de, jí jiāng fā shēng de shì qing shén qí de nán yǐ miáo shù.) communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 45 target text by wu: (wǒ hòu lái zhěng gè ‘zài lù shàng’ de shēng yá jiù shì zhè me kāi shǐ de, zhī hòu fā shēng de yī qiè jiǎn zhí fěi yí suǒ sī.) target text by yang: (zhè tiáo lù hòu lái zhēn de chéng le wǒ zhěng gè ‘zài lù shàng’ lì chéng de kāi duān, zhī hòu fā shēng de shì qí miào dào bù kě sī yì, jiǎn zhí wú fǎ yán shuō.) “too fantastic not to tell” is translated by yao and yang through literal translation based on the english structure, with different chinese characters. wu deals with this situation by utilizing the chinese four-character words “fěi yí suǒ sī / ”, which means that “someone’s behaviors or something is too abnormal and weird to imagine by other ordinary people”. “too fantastic not to tell” in the source text is to describe the subsequent experiences of the protagonists. furthermore, the characters in the novel are on behalf of the beat generation. the attitudes of challenging traditional values, contempt for social orders, and seeking for absolute freedom fill their minds. under this circumstance, the three translations capture the original meaning and adopt various dictions to express the source text. above cases of study showcase various dictions regarding the original will be applied in diverse translations to avoid repetition. 4.1.3 specific analysis in comprehension “berthoud pass” emerges four times in the original text. through the verification of wikipedia, this word refers to mountains rather than a person. therefore, the explanation of yao’s version for “...reached clear to the top of berthoud pass...” is not appropriate because it is described as ferdinand berthoud, a french horologist. yao misunderstands the context here. as for yang and wu, both provide the proper meaning of “berthoud pass”. this shows that retranslations, even emerging at the same period, will correct or prevent misunderstanding of the source text and avoid flawed versions with the pursuit of adequate and better renderings. 4.2 yueqing tao and xiaoli he’s version and ang wu’s version 4.2.1 basic introduction of the two versions the publishing time of the selected two versions spans 30 years. tao and he’s version (hereinafter referred to as tao’s version), the first formal chinese version, was published in 1990. wu’s version with other new versions springs up in 2020. 4.2.2 analysis of the language from lexical terms this paper discusses the development of language from lexical terms. for example, regarding the appellation in the novel without particular signified, tao’s version almost deals with them totally by the word “huǒ jì/ ”, which refers to a term of endearment between males in some regions of northern china. through counting, “huǒ jì” appears 136 times in tao’s translated version, and 7 times in wu’s text. it proves that “huǒ jì” in china’s language development presents a declining tendency, though this word is not old-fashioned enough to be sifted out. instead, wu adopts “gē men ”, which enjoys a similar function as “huǒ jì”, totaling 153 times. and this word “gē men” is a daily expression nowadays, following the current language usage. 4.2.3 analysis on diction this part is related to discussion on exact wording. the word “blackie” in “hey, blackie” is translated as “zá zhǒng/ ” in tao’s version and into “lǎo hēi/ ” in wu’s version. in chinese, “zá zhǒng” is foul language when connected with people. nevertheless, the original text here includes no hostility, disparagement, or contempt, but a relaxed tone, a salutation. in this circumstance, “zá zhǒng” with its negative effect is unsuitable and may be misleading. based on the attitude to black people from the whole text, no expression about black people is accompanied by distain. therefore, wu tackles “blackie” in a simple manner to ensure a familiar oral expression in target language. 4.2.4 analysis of translation errors translation errors may include the following types: obvious mistakes such as wrong translation of common sense, mistakes caused by misunderstanding, mistakes made due to limited recognition. the following examples, to some extent, reflect the types of translation errors above. some basic mistakes can be corrected immediately, others can be revised with meticulous consideration of the context. and some mistakes caused by limited recognition will be corrected with the development of recognition and the passage of time. translation example 4 source text: missouri pacific communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 46 target text by tao: (mì sū lǐ de dà xī yáng) target text by wu: (mì sū lǐ tài píng yáng) tao’s version mixes up “pacific” and “atlantic” and changes the chinese expression of “pacific” as that of “atlantic”. in terms of this point, wu provides the proper translation. translation example 5. source text: “when you borrowed that nickel to make up the check for the chicken-fried steaks” “no, man, the chili! remember, the texas star?” target text by tao: (“dāng nǐ jiè shàng jǐ gè zi er qù mǎi yóu jiān jī pái.”) (“bù, lǎo xiōng, zhēn jiàn guǐ! nǐ hái jì de dé kè sà sī xīng bào ma?”) target text by wu: (“nà huí nǐ zhǎo wǒ jiè le 5 měi fēn, hǎo còu gòu mǎi zhà jī pái de qián.”) (“bù, gē men, shì là zǐ jī! nǐ jì de ma? zài dé kè sà sī zhī xīng.”) “texas star” is understood as a newspaper in yao’s text and as a restaurant in wu’s version during the translation process. according to the context, with “chicken-fried steaks” and “chili” as reference information, wu’s understanding is more accurate, while tao offers a not coherent version of those sentence expressions. there are some other examples like “columbus, so long”. tao’s version does not understand the meaning in the original text, thereby giving an irrelevant translated text. however, wu realizes a perfect link with the previous information: the two highschool boys who say “columbus, so long” are from columbus, ohio, and plan to hitch around the united states in the summer. above information fathoms out what the source wants to express: two boys have stayed columbus for a long time and say goodbye to this place to start their journey. under this circumstance, wu’s version presents a flawless one. “chevy” is another name for “chevrolet”. cars of the brand “chevrolet” were introduced into china’s market in 2005. due to the early publication in 1990, “chevy” may be a new word or a specific translation about it was not determined. tao’s version does not translate it as “xuě fú lán/ ” in chinese, while wu revises this point. in short, from the perspectives of language development, diction, errors correction, wu’s version provides better expressions than tao’s. 5. conclusion the comparison among the three versions shows that the translated versions published in a same period would choose various vocabularies and adopt different translation methods to accomplish the target text without many similarities while ensuring a relatively excellent translation. through the analysis, all translated versions show evident signs to avoid repetition. the comparison between the old version and the new version demonstrates that 30 years is not enough to witness significant differences in language, especially in literary expression and that the new translation truly makes strides and seeks a better translation. based on the discussion of the above cases, this paper proves that 1) retranslations indeed avoid repetition with existing translations, 2) the reason of retranslation include that the previous versions are flawed and there is a need to seek better ones. certainly, there exist some limits to this paper. five new translation versions were produced and published in 2020. due to limited time, the author only chooses three of them. some new examples or research perspectives may exist in other versions, which may be discussed in future papers. meanwhile, other scholars may explore the other texts from the comparative analysis or just a single one. references dougherty, s. 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(2020). on the road ( ). jiangsu: jiangsu phoenix literature and art publishing house. volume03issue01.0914.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 58 localization and cultural adaptation of museum websites: a case of the chinese website of the british museum jiaxing hu1 1college of foreign languages, nankai university, hjx_hs@foxmail.com abstract this paper examines the approach to localizing a high-level website through cultural adaptation, focusing on the six elements of cultural adaptation in web localization: spatial orientations, navigation modes, translation equivalence, country-specific symbols, icons, and color symbolism. using the 10 most-searched chinese museum websites as reference objects, the paper analyses the level of cultural adaptation in the chinese website of the british museum and provides suggestions to increase its localization level, including the use of sticky sidebars, icons plus textual descriptions, and bright colors. the paper highlights the importance of understanding cultural differences in website design and the potential impact on user experience. overall, the paper offers insights and practical recommendations for web localization practitioners to effectively adapt websites to different cultures. key words: localization, cultural adaptation, museum website, the british museum 1. introduction the museum has been an integral part of human civilization throughout history. it serves as an organizational entity and physical space that collects, conserves, and displays tangible and intangible evidence of human history and nature. in addition to preserving cultural heritage, museums have evolved into essential educational and touristic hubs. defining the concept of a museum has been a subject of debate among institutions and scholars, with the international council of museums (2022) providing an up-to-date and comprehensive definition: a museum is a not-for-profit, permanent institution in the service of society that researches, collects, conserves, interprets and exhibits tangible and intangible heritage. open to the public, accessible and inclusive, museums foster diversity and sustainability. they operate and communicate ethically, professionally and with the participation of communities, offering varied experiences for education, enjoyment, reflection and knowledge sharing. (p. 3) this definition emphasizes one mission of a museum: serving the public. a museum serves as a custodian of heritage, preserving and interpreting it for future generations, promoting cultural understanding and awareness, and contributing to the development of identity and memory. however, due to constraints of time and space, serving all audiences becomes an impossible mission for traditional museums. most traditional museums have been limited in their capacity to provide services. these limitations manifest in the form of geographical barriers, physical access constraints, and overcrowding. not all individuals can travel to a museum location, and the limited capacity to receive visitors may discourage attendance. these challenges pose significant obstacles to the mission of traditional brick-and-mortar museums as non-profit and public good institutions, which aim to serve the entire population. in recent years, museums have increasingly turned to alternative ways to reach wider audiences. online exhibits, virtual tours, and digital platforms have emerged as popular approaches, extending the accessibility of museums beyond physical space and time. while acknowledging that online museum visiting cannot substitute the experience of in-person visit, it extends the accessibility of a museum. as a result, the museum website has drawn significant academic attention, with researchers highlighting the positive impacts of museum websites on audience engagement and education (mateo, 2021; cook, 2007). furthermore, scholars have explored the effectiveness, usability, and design of museum websites (wu and liu, 2021; cristobal-fransi et al., 2021; kabassi, 2019). however, despite the growing number of multilingual museum websites, little research has focused on the localization of museum websites, which involves adapting website content and format to meet the linguistic, cultural, and functional requirements of different regions or target audiences. specifically, the principles of museum website localization and the standards for localized websites remain under-researched. in contrast to building a website from scratch, website localization entails “the adaptation of digital content on the web and through mobile applications or software applications to meet the cultural, linguistic, legal, and other requirements of a target market where it will be deployed” (benmamoun et al., 2021, p. 216). a localized website is based on an established website and, technically and culturally, adapts itself to the target community. localizing a website is not merely a matter of translating its content into another language. rather, a localized website must be customized to the unique needs and preferences of the communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 59 target audience, taking into account factors such as cultural norms, user preferences, and technical requirements. this may involve adjusting the content, format, and structure of the website to better suit the needs of the target audience. the aim of this paper is to investigate the cultural issues that arise in the localization of museum websites, with a specific focus on cultural adaptations to web content and format. using the chinese website of the british museum (referred to as tbm), this paper seeks to answer two key questions: 1) how is cultural adaptation manifested on localized museum websites? and 2) what strategies should be employed in the web localization of museum websites to achieve effective cultural adaptation? by addressing these questions, this research aims to contribute to the understanding of cultural considerations in the localization of museum websites and provide insights into effective strategies for achieving cultural adaptation. the findings of this study can inform museum professionals and website designers in their efforts to enhance the accessibility and engagement of diverse audiences in the digital realm. 2. methods this study adopts a comparative analysis method to examine the cultural adaptation of tbm’s chinese website. specifically, the chinese website of tbm is compared with other successful chinese museum websites and the english version of tbm. the top 10 most-searched chinese museum websites, as identified by the chinese museum trending searches (cmts), are used as the benchmark for successful cultural integration. table 1. top 10 most-searched chinese museum websites. names abbr. urls [the palace museum] tpm https://www.dpm.org.cn [national museum of china] nmc http://www.chnmuseum.cn [museum of wu] mw https://www.wuzhongmuseum.com [guangdong museum] gm https://www.gdmuseum.com [hunan museum] hm http://www.hnmuseum.com [henan museum] hnm http://www.chnmus.net [chengdu museum] cm https://www.cdmuseum.com [suzhou museum] sm https://www.szmuseum.com [zhejiang provincial museum] zpm https://www.zhejiangmuseum.com [luoyang museum] lm http://www.lymuseum.com/ the top 10 most-searched chinese museum websites can be considered culturally-customized websites that have achieved the highest level of localization within the chinese cultural context, despite not being explicitly localized. these websites successfully meet the expectations and preferences of chinese web users for museum websites. by conducting a comparative analysis between tbm's chinese website and these benchmark websites, this study aims to identify and evaluate the cultural adaptations present in the web content and format of tbm's chinese website. the findings will shed light on effective strategies for achieving cultural adaptation in the localization of museum websites, particularly within the chinese cultural context. 3. localization level and cultural adaptation 3.1 localization level communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 60 localization level describes the extent to which a website adapts itself to the target culture and users. in commercial contexts, the decision on the level of localization often depends on return on investment (roi) considerations. in essence, if the localized website is expected to generate greater benefits, more resources will be allocated by the localization commissioner to create a higher-level localized website (yunker, 2003; brooks, 2000). the categorization of localization levels varies widely depending on different criteria. based on the degree of cultural adaptation, singh and pereira (2005) propose five categories of web localization levels: 1. standardized websites: having the same web content for all users. there are no efforts made to create customized websites. 2. semi-localized websites: providing contact information about local branches. little else customized information is offered to address the needs of international users. 3. localized websites: offering country-specific web pages with translation, but the functions and structures are not customized. 4. highly localized websites: offering all content and site structure/functions fully adapted to the target users. 5. culturally customized websites: totally immersed in the target culture and society. (pp. 10-15) different localization levels require varying degrees of re-engineering and re-structuring. to achieve a high-level localized website, not only the textual and visual information, but also the underlying program and coding should be adjusted and even recreated to customize itself to the target users. however, singh and pereira (2005) point out that only a limited number of websites are fully customized to the highest level, primarily due to time and cost constraints as well as the finite capacity of localizers. thus, while high-level localization is desirable, practical considerations often limit the level of adaptation achievable in real-world localization projects. although singh and pereira’s categorization offers a valuable framework for understanding various levels of localization, it fails to encompass all potential cases. one such case involves organizations that selectively localize certain web pages, while leaving others unlocalized and linking the localized and unlocalized pages through hyperlinks. this phenomenon is frequently observed in non-commercial organizations due to limited localization resources (jiménez-crespo, 2013, p. 35). this form of localization may be categorized as a “hybrid level”, where a website comprises pages with varying localization levels. 3.2 cultural adaptation the role of culture and cultural adaptation in localization has been widely acknowledged by scholars in both the localization industry and translation studies (esselink, 2001; katan, 2009). the purpose of cultural adaptation in localization is not “to trick users into thinking your company is local, but to let users know that you understand their specific needs and wants” (yunker, 2003, p. 18). a well-localized website should fully immerse itself in the target culture to achieve this purpose. in general, a website with a higher localization level requires more cultural adaptations, which results in lower cognitive burden, more effective interaction, and greater acceptance from target users (jiménez-crespo, 2013, p. 32). these adaptations, as outlined by singh and pereira (2005), contribute to the establishment of perception, symbolism, and behavior among the target web users: 1. perception: the process by which individuals select, filter, organize, and interpret information to create a meaningful picture of the world; 2. symbolism: the system of representations and symbols carrying cultural information. 3. behavior: individual’s actions and aspirations guided by cultural values. in the context of web localization, the aforementioned three factors impact the website design and influence web users’ motivations and decisions. however, since this study focuses on the website itself rather than the web users, only the implications of perception and symbolism for localized websites will be discussed. implications of perception and symbolism for localized websites include: perception: 1. spatial orientation 2. navigation modes 3. translation equivalence symbolism: communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 61 1. country-specific symbols 2. icons 3. color symbols these six elements encompass both web content and format, reflecting user’s expectations of a website in a specific cultural context. by analyzing the characteristics of the top 10 most-searched websites with regards to the six elements outlined, a reference framework for the highest-level web localization can be developed. this framework will be used to evaluate the localization of tbm’s chinese website and identify areas where improvements could be made. 4. findings 4.1 perception 4.1.1 spatial orientation spatial orientation refers to the organization of content on a website, which directly influences the visual perception of web users (barber and badre, 1998). the location of the main content can impact the user’s perception of a website’s visual appeal, with english-speaking users often preferring a left-side emphasis layout due to the left-to right reading direction of english. additionally, web users familiar with symmetrical web structures may prefer to find information on the central part of the screen. website layouts can generally be categorized into three types: a) left emphasis layout, with the main content appearing on the left side; b) right emphasis layout, with the main content appearing on the right side; and c) symmetrical layout, in which both left and right sides are emphasized. these layouts can be applied in website design solely or together. table 2. the homepage layouts of the 10 sampled chinese museum websites. museum web layout tpm symmetrical nmc right emphasis; symmetrical mw symmetrical gm symmetrical hm right emphasis; symmetrical hnm left emphasis cm symmetrical sm symmetrical zpm symmetrical lm symmetrical it is noteworthy that the symmetrical layout stands out as the predominant choice of the homepage layout among the sampled chinese museum websites, accounting for 90 per cent of the cases. this layout type is, therefore, considered a visual convention for chinese web users, who have a preconceived notion of how a museum website’s homepage should be structured. nielsen and tahir (2001) posit that users arrive at a new web’s homepage with a considerable amount of mental baggage accumulated from prior visits to other homepages. as a result, users have formed a generic mental model of how a homepage should function. hence, when a chinese web user clicks on the chinese website of tbm, they expect to encounter a website resembling other museum websites in china, that is to say, a website with a symmetrical layout in terms of spatial orientation. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 62 the chinese website of tbm adheres to the visual convention of symmetrical layout, which is prevalent in the homepage designs of chinese museum websites. the comparison between the chinese and english versions of the tbm website (illustration 1 and 2) reveals that the spatial orientation of the homepage is unchanged in the chinese version. despite several adjustments in textual and visual content, the symmetrical structure of the homepage is retained, which is consistent with the expectations of chinese web users. 4.1.2 navigation modes navigation modes refer to the way in which web navigation is structured, including the placement, tags, and functions of navigation. in essence, web navigation acts as a road map for users. it is the table of contents of a website, which guides users throughout their exploration of the site. there are four different navigation approaches, as identified by websitebuilderexpert (wbe): 1. mega drop downs: large menu panels dropping down from the global menu header at the top of the website. 2. footer menus: appearing at the foot of the web page, offering additional content and links. 3. sidebars: appearing at the side of the web page and running horizontally alongside the content. 4. breadcrumbs: hierarchical links showing sub-categorized pages. 5. sticky navigation: staying fixed to the top of the page, not disappearing when a user scrolls down the page. illustration 2 english homepage of tbm illustration 1 chinese homepage of tbm communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 63 some approaches in the wbe classification have overlapping characteristics. for instance, sticky navigation can be found at the top, side, or bottom of a web page, and can be classified as mega drop downs, footer menus, or sidebars, respectively. in this regard, the position and the stickiness/non-stickiness of navigations will be investigated separately in this paper. table 3. navigation position and stickiness of 10 sampled chinese museum websites museum name navigation position navigation stickiness tpm top; side yes (side) nmc top; side yes (side) mw top; foot yes (top) gm top; foot no hm top; foot no hnm top no cm side; foot yes (side) sm top; side yes (top; side) zpm top; side; foot yes (side) lm top; foot no table 3 shows that 90 per cent of the sampled websites place their navigation at the top of the web page, while 60 per cent use sticky navigation. additionally, 80 per cent of them apply two types of navigation. notably, sticky navigation is often located on the side of the web page. the chinese version of tbm’s website exemplifies a straightforward navigation design located at the top of the web page, as depicted in illustration 3. in comparison to the english version’s navigation (illustration 4), the chinese version has simplified both its functions and items. for example, the “search” and “donate” buttons present in the english navigation are absent in the chinese version. while the “shop” button is left, its web is not localized. instead, the chinese website of tbm employs a third-party e-commerce platform to fulfill this function. clicking on the “the british museum shop” button in the chinese navigation redirects users to tmall, china’s largest e-commerce platform. according to wang and li (2022), the platform model of e-commerce is the dominant approach in chinese market, with a growing number of consumers preferring to make purchases on third-party platforms rather than self-operated business websites. as a result, outsourcing to a third-party shop rather than operating a localized business website aligns with chinese consumer habits and offers operational and logistical cost reductions. the existing navigation design on the chinese website of tbm is effective in serving its basic functions, despite being simplified. however, to achieve a higher level of localization and adaptation, it may be beneficial to incorporate a sticky sidebar that can offer additional information and features, such as contact details and search functionality. this could enhance the user experience by granting easy access to essential information and tools, while also aligning with the conventions of chinese web design. 4.1.3 translation equivalence illustration 2 chinese navigation of tbm illustration 1 english navigation of tbm communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 64 the translation of a website necessitates careful consideration to ensure the preservation of equivalence between two languages. website translation here refers to the transformation of linguistic codes, and as such, adaptations are required in word processing to ensure that the message conveyed in the source language is accurately reflected in the target language. in the case of the chinese-english language pair, for example, adjustments to the date format are often required for englishchinese translation due to the different writing habits of the two languages. the chinese date format is typically expressed as “year-month-day”, whereas the common order in english is “day-month-year” or “month-day-year”. to address this disparity, all dates on the chinese website of tbm are adapted to the chinese format. similarly, time, currency, and other measurement units on the chinese website adhere to the chinese writing system. these adaptations are implemented to ensure that chinese web users can easily comprehend the information presented on the website, thereby reducing their cognitive load in reading it. another notable difference between english and chinese lies in entropy, a statistical parameter that measures the amount of information generated on average for each letter of a text in a given language. in general, chinese characters carry more information and occupy less space than english words (chen et al., 2017). consequently, when translating all textual content on a website from english to chinese, the resulting chinese text occupies less space on the website, leading to a more scattered presentation of information on the website. to compensate for this, various approaches are commonly employed, including the addition of textual and image-based content. on tbm’s chinese website, this compensation strategy primarily involves the augmentation of textual content rather than images. for instance, the description of the collection “indian terrapin (kachuga dhongaka)” on the english website of tbm contains 307 words, while the corresponding description on the chinese website contains 816 characters. however, the chinese website only includes one picture of the collection, compared to 15 on the english version. by incorporating additional textual content, the chinese website seeks to mitigate the space disparity resulting from translation and provide chinese users with a comprehensive understanding of the exhibit. however, it is important to acknowledge that the divergent approaches to textual and visual presentation between the english and chinese versions may affect the overall user experience and perception of the website’s content. with a greater number of images depicting the exhibit on the english website, users of the english version have a more direct and visually-oriented experience. in contrast, chinese users gain access to more extensive background information about the exhibit due to the increased amount of textual content on the chinese website. the disparity in presentation between the two language versions implies that the user experience and the way in which information is conveyed may differ based on the users’ preferred habits in receiving information. english users may rely more heavily on visual elements to grasp the essence of the exhibit, while chinese users have access to a more detailed textual narrative that provides them with a deeper understanding of the exhibit's cultural and historical significance. consequently, the website’s design and content adaptation reflect the cultural and linguistic preferences of the respective target audiences, thereby catering to their specific information consumption habits. 4.2 symbolism 4.2.1 country-specific symbols country-specific symbols refer to elements that represents a way of life or embody specific cultural values. these symbols hold particular meanings or connotations within different countries or cultures. for example, in chinese culture, the huishaped pattern (resembling the chinese character “ ”) serves as a symbol associated with tradition, wealth, luck and endlessness, which is commonly employed in the design of furniture, buildings and clothing. in the context of web design, such countryand culturalspecific symbols are usually utilized as decorative elements. among the 10 sampled chinese museum websites, only two of them incorporate countryand culture-specific symbols. the website of nmc features the huishaped pattern and the website of tpm employs flower-shaped and fish-shaped symbols as decoration for web buttons. all of these symbols carry connotations of wealth and luck. conversely, the remaining eight sampled websites do not include country-specific symbols on their pages, suggesting that their presence may not be considered necessary. the chinese website of tbm, meanwhile, do not apply country-specific symbols as well. while country-specific symbols can add cultural significance and visual appeal to a website, their absence does not necessarily diminish a website’s effectiveness. in the case of chinese museum websites, the limited use of country-specific symbols suggests that they may not be deemed essential for the design of a museum website in china. however, the decision to include or exclude such symbols ultimately depends on the goals and target audience of the website. for example, if a museum website aims to attract tourists or visitors from specific countries, incorporating country-specific symbols may be more suitable and effective. similarly, if a website aims to showcase a particular facet of a country’s culture, the inclusion of relevant symbols may be beneficial. the consideration of country-specific symbols should align with the specific objectives and target audience of the website in question. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 65 4.2.2 icons icon serves as visual symbols that refers to links, options, or functions within a website. their role in web design is crucial as they facilitate easier and more efficient navigation for users. icons provide visual cues that can be readily recognized and understood, transcending language and cultural barriers. with the aid of icons, web users can obtain information speedily without language-related obstacles. it is therefore important to select icons that are culturally appropriate and easily understandable by the website’s target audience. when analyzing the icons of a website, it is crucial to determine whether they are understood within a specific culture. for example, if a website uses chinese characters as icons, they may be not understandable for british users. additionally, icons should be used in conjunction with clear textual descriptions to ensure users grasp their intended purpose. this approach creates a seamless user experience, reduces cognitive load and enhances user engagement. table 4. how icons are applied on the 10 sampled websites. museum name how icons applied tpm icons + textual description nmc icons + textual description mw icons gm icons + textual description hm icons + textual description hnm icons + textual description cm no icons sm icons + textual description zpm icons + textual description lm no icons table 4 demonstrates that the majority of websites employ a combination of icons and textual descriptions. this icon usage pattern enables users to quickly navigate to desired pages and functions, minimizing misunderstandings. however, no icons are present on the chinese website of tbm, even though its english version applies this pattern (illustration 5). therefore, to achieve a higher level localization, it is recommended that the chinese website of tbm also incorporate icons with textual descriptions to provide users with clearer guidance and enhance their overall experience. 4.2.3 color symbolism the selection of colors in web design can be influenced by cultural factors as colors carry different meanings and connotations across cultures. when localizing a website, careful consideration is needed in choosing a standard color, which refers to the main color used for the web logo, icons, navigation, and background, as it represents the website’s image. it is important to be culturally sensitive to ensure that the chosen color aligns with the target audience’s cultural understanding. table 5. standard colors of the 10 sampled websites. museum name standard colors tpm red nmc red mw black gm red hm white hnm red illustration 3 icons on the english website of tbm communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 03 no. 01 (2023) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 66 cm white sm white zpm white lm yellow the analysis of standard colors used on chinese museum websites reveals that white and red are the most commonly chosen options; similarly, the chinese website of tbm also adopts white as its standard color, deviating from the black used in the english version. however, it is worth mentioning that many chinese museum websites incorporate additional bright colors alongside their standard color. for example, the website of the hunan museum uses red and yellow, while the palace museum employs blue and yellow. these additional colors prevent the websites from appearing monotonous and enhance their visual appeal. in contrast, the chinese website of tbm predominantly utilizes white, which can make the website appear tedious and unchanging. therefore, to achieve a higher-level localization, it is suggested to incorporate other colors such as red and yellow, which are commonly seen on chinese museum websites, into the design of the chinese website of tbm. this would add vibrancy and align with the cultural preferences of chinese web users. 5. conclusion this paper has investigated the approach to localizing a high-level website through cultural adaptation, by analyzing six key elements of cultural adaptation in web localization, namely spatial orientations, navigation modes, translation equivalence, country-specific symbols, icons, and color symbolism. in line with this objective, the study has drawn upon the cmts and analyzed the top 10 most-searched chinese museum websites, which are considered as culturally customized for chinese users, to identify effective localization strategies. specifically, the paper argues that a successful high-level localized website should align with the expectations of target users and existing websites designed for the local audience should serve as a norm for localization efforts. through a comparative analysis of the chinese website of tbm with the 10 sampled websites, this paper finds that the former has adopted some cultural adaptations in web localization, such as a symmetrical layout, the use of the chinese writing system, and the application of white as the standard color. the paper also provides some recommendations for increasing the localization level of museum websites, including incorporating sticky sidebars, using icons with textual descriptions, and adding bright colors, all of which aim to enhance user engagement and satisfaction. these suggestions can be used as guidelines for web designers and developers seeking to create culturally customized websites that meet the needs and expectations for users in a specific cultural context. by considering the six key elements of cultural adaptation, museum web designers can create websites that effectively communicate with the target audience and provide an optimal user experience. 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(11),136-137.] v02issue02.06.2022.0613.pdf communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 1 on translating red tourist attractions in guangzhou based on the variational translation theory chuqi wu1, jingjing huang2 1school of english for international business, guangdong university of foreign studies, guangzhou, china, e-mail: 969017449@qq.com 2 corresponding author: same as above, e-mail: juliahjj@163.com fund: the study is one of the achievements of innovative projects of colleges and universities under the department of education of guangdong province (project no. 2019wtscx024) abstract due to the great historical significance of red tourist attractions, special attention needs to be paid to the translation of red tourist attractions. it will be beneficial for the sustainable development of red tourism and telling compelling chinese stories in a good way. based on the variational translation theory (vtt), the paper analyzes the translation of tourist texts of the red tourist attractions in guangzhou on the “list of 100 national cpc-related tourist attractions and scenic spots (2016)” with the seven translation techniques derived from vtt, which are adding, deleting, editing, narrating, condensing, integrating, and altering. according to the author’s research, most of the translations of red tourist attraction texts applied complete translation, though few adopted vtt. on the whole, the current situation of the translation of red tourist attractions is not optimistic, since only a few texts have english translated versions and many problems exist in current versions. the paper is supposed to inspire an increasing number of scholars who can show their interest in the translation of the tourist texts of the red tourist attractions, and thus spread chinese culture and convey chinese values in a good and correct way. keywords: variational translation theory (vtt)1, red tourist attractions, the translation of tourist texts 1. introduction red tourist attractions, usually known as revolution-themed tourist attractions, are important destinations of patriotism education in china: tourists learn about revolutionary history and legacy during the visit. the centenary of the founding of the communist party of china (cpc) in 2021 ignited a wave of studying the history of the cpc by paying in-person visits to the revolutionary sites, conducing to the thriving red tourism. translation of red tourist texts is more than cross-language and cross-cultural translating red tourist texts resonate with political leanings and patriotic mood. in addition to conveying the factual information in the red tourist text to the target reader, the translation aims at finding as much echo in the hearts of foreign visitors as in chinese visitors, therefore facilitating the cultural exchanges between china and the world. liu, zhang, and wang (2021) pointed out that “if we follow the original text too much, we cannot express the content perfectly” (p. 4), and suggested that variational translation theory—hereinafter referred to briefly as vtt—is viable to seeking the balance between the original text and the target text. unlike complete translation, the theme of variation translation is adaption, a way of compromise by taking the demands of the reader, the translator, the source text, and the target text into consideration. guangzhou, one of the most visited cities in china by foreigners undertakes the mission of carrying forward the spirit of the red revolution as well as introducing the revolutionary history of the motherland. therefore, this study selects six red tourist attractions in guangzhou from the "list of 100 national cpc-related tourist attractions and scenic spots (2016)" jointly issued by the general office of the cpc central committee and the general office of the state council, prc in 2016 as examples to explore the translation techniques applicable to translating red tourist attractions based on vtt. the six red torist attractions are the memorial museum of comrade mao zedong sponsoring the peasant movement institute, guangzhou 1 variational translation theory (vtt) is put forward by the chinese author professor huang zhonglian, and the official english translation of such theory is given in 2020 with the publishing of the book variational translation theory by springer. communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 2 uprising memorial hall, the martyr memorial park, sanyuanli people's anti-british struggle memorial hall, huang huagang mausoleum of 72 martyrs, site of huangpu army military academy, guangzhou. 2. introduction basis 2.1 the development of vtt variation translation has long been widely used and explored in translation practice at home and abroad, though it was in 1998 that professor huang zhonglian formally put forward the concept of variation translation and then vtt systematically four years later. tan zaixi took french translator de abrangur and german translator herder as examples in his book a short history of translation in the west published by the commercial press in 2004 to prove that the practice of variation translation has a long history in the west, especially in the unprecedented golden era of the translation theories from 17th century to the 19th century (as cited in du, 2021). for de arbangur, the most important thing about translation was to help readers understand the content of the source text rather than translate all the words. therefore, de arbangur would do some adding or deleting in the translation as long as it was helpful for target reader’s understanding, attending little to the form and content similarity between the source text and the translated one. to be more specific, herder added some expressions in his translation of the temple of shakespeare in the hope that the readers could better understand the source text with such a supplement. as for the exploration of variation translation and vtt in china, both yang (2018) and du (2021) suggested that the practices of variation translation could be traced back to the translation of the buddhist scriptures in china. then, the practices of translation saw a further development through the tang dynasty, the late ming dynasty, the early qing dynasty, and the may fourth movement in 1919. during this long period, incomplete translation took a great part of all the translation materials. china, however, witnessed the vernacular promotion movement thereafter. under the influence of lu xun and other scholars, the translation practice of western literature in china began to emphasize the complete translation without missing a word (huang & zhang, 2020, p. 2). according to huang (2002a), chinese scholars hoped to save the reform of chinese characters and the development of literature by borrowing western ideas and literature after the may 4th movement (p. 13). huang (2002a) also indicated that the liberal changes of content and form by the translator are blamed as betrayal at that time (p. 11). therefore, the concept of complete translation became prevailing to avoid losses in the learning process of western literature. in contrast, variation translation was dismissed as a worthless practice of translation and the exploration of vtt in china developed slowly at that time but still captured the attention of some scholars including zhang zhongyue and professor zhou zhaoxiang of the hong kong baptist convention. in the words of huang (2002b), he pointed out that variation translation takes the external context as the premise and the reader as the center to solve the cultural contradiction between the source text and the multi-level target language readers' needs. in the same year, based on the studies on yan fu’s translation works and the practices of translation, huang (2002c) put forward vtt systematically, pointing out the four key factors, seven adaptation techniques, eleven variational translation methods, and seventeen research directions of vtt. it was also in 2002 that huang zhonglian released his book variational translation theory published by china translation and publication corporation. guo (2003, as cited in yang, 2018) regarded the foundation of the vtt as a breakthrough in the process of translation in china. further deepening of and research on the theory was conducted. ten pairs of typologies were summarized by huang zhonglian in the paper research methods of translation variation theory in 2011. huang and li (2014) discussed the twelve translation methods about their similarities and differences by comparison and contrast to deepen the research of variation translation. in addition, numerous conferences related to the study of vtt have been held, such as the second high-level forum on "theoretical translation and translation methodology" with the theme of "criticism and reflection on translation change theory" at guangdong university of foreign studies in 2018. founded in china in the late 1990s, vtt has constructed from 1998 to 2008, developed from 2009 to 2017, and expanded from 2018 on (huang & yang, 2018). it was labeled as china’s first original translation theory. based on the chinese monograph variational translation theory which was published in 2002 by china translation and publication corporation, huang zhonglian integrated findings and insights from 2002 to publish the english version of variational translation theory by springer in 2020 (huang & zhang, 2020). with social and economic development and the advent of the information age, the application of the vtt has been diversified from traditional literary genres such as fiction, poetry, and drama to “other well established and clearly defined types of text for translation such as multimedia texts, tourism texts, and legal documents” (williams & chesterman, 2004, p. 9). communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 3 zhou (2005) suggested that the vtt will provide interpreters with a psychological buffer and a flexible platform to cope with challenges and open up a new field to some extent by analyzing the necessity, feasibility, and evaluation of the adaptation of interpreting such theory. hu (2004) said that the techniques of variation translation are efficient to meet the needs of advertisement translation as advertisements may be misunderstood because of different cultures if being translated word by word and sentence by sentence. the discussion on the application of variation translation in advertisements has been existing since the end of the 20th century. vtt’s application has been widely used in all walks of life with the further development of vtt. machine translation will also involve variation translation in the future as vtt will “significantly improve the efficiency of making full use of the foreign information” (huang & zhang, 2020). 2.2 variation translation vs. complete translation complete translation refers to the translation activity in which the translator converts the cultural information of the source language into the target language to achieve a similar even the same style. ji (2015) pointed out that complete translation pays attention to the integrity of information conversion, including the integrity of content, form, and style, and seeks to maximize the "similarity" between target text and source text. on the contrary, variation translation is a translation activity in which the translator uses adaptation techniques such as adding, deleting, editing, narrating, condensing, integrating, and altering to ingest the original text’s contents to meet the specific requests of specific target readers under specific conditions (huang & zhang, 2020, p. 7). huang and zhang (2020) suggested that what existed between complete translation and variation translation is creative writing added in the variation translation, and it is the variation translation that makes the concept of translation specialized and concrete. in the book variational translation theory, huang and zhang (2020) indicated that the amount of information in the complete translation (a) is different from the amount of information in the variation translation (b) because of adaptation (p. 91). then the seven variational translation techniques can be seen as adding(a>b), deleting(ab) the way of adding information to the original works is adding by means of explanation, commentary, writing and the like to assure target readers easier and more precise unscrambling of information. generally speaking, the adding part in the translation of tourism translation texts can be divided into two categories according to their functions. one type of adding is to achieve contextual coherence and fluency with the aim of enhancing the target readers' understanding of tourist attractions, and the other is to add explanations of culture-loaded words with chinese characteristics to ensure textual legibility among foreign tourists. 3.1.1 adding for cohesion adding for cohesion in vtt refers to writing in the technique of adding. writing means adding relative content of the source text to the target one. according to the position of the adding part, writing can be divided into three types: writing before translating which is used to explain the background foreshadowing for the post, writing after translating which is used to communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 4 supplement the previous, and writing while translating which is used to serve as a bridge to connect the whole article firmly (huang & zhang, 2020, pp. 93-94). translation example 1. source text: target text: the memorial museum of comrade mao zedong sponsoring the peasant movement institute, with the short title of nongjiangsuo museum, is a second-class national museum that is established on the base of the guangzhou site of the peasant movement institute, or the national key cultural relic protection unit. the former site of the canton panyu confucian school was founded in1370 (3rd year of hongwu period in the ming dynasty). the historical buildings, with yellow tiles and red walls, look solemn and magnificent. in the ming and qing dynasties, it was the main place to develop the confucianism talents and offer sacrifices to confucius. in 1926, mao zedong sponsored the sixth peasant movement institute here, with the in-depth study of chinese peasant problems, training a large number of peasant movement cadres, which made an important contribution to the chinese revolution. the historical buildings which are the site of peasant movement institute have become a historic revolutionary memorial from then on. selected from the travel brochure of the memorial museum of comrade mao zedong sponsoring the peasant movement institute the outstanding characteristics of writing while translating are connecting the preceding and the following and cleverly embedding supplementary content for the translation to make it more coherent and increase the amount of information (huang & zhang, 2020, p. 93). the underlined part of the selected paragraph is the added part of the english translation of the official tourism brochure of the memorial museum of comrade mao zedong sponsoring the peasant movement institute. at first glance, the two supplementary sentences seem unnecessary. after all, if the two supplementary sentences are chopped, the paragraph flows still smoothly, causing little impact on the understanding of the translation. however, if examined in the whole text, the two supplementary sentences make the text more coherent and structured, especially with the use of the two added phrases “the historical buildings”. the first supplementary sentence on the description of the architectural appearance is to highlight the solemnity of the place, which provides rationality for mao zedong's sponsorship of the sixth peasant movement here, and the place is rated as the key national cultural relic protection unit. the second supplementary sentence tells the time of this site being regarded as a historical memorial hall of the chinese revolution, echoing the last sentence of the first paragraph, which does great help to the tourists’ understanding of the historical significance of the memorial museum of comrade mao zedong sponsoring the peasant movement institute. 3.1.2 adding for comprehension when it refers to adding for comprehension in vtt, it is generally related to explanation in the technique of adding. explanation means explaining part of the content of the source text in the target one because target readers are not that familiar with those parts as it has profound meaning or it is terminology, including literary quotation, ancient sayings, words, and so on (huang & zhang, 2020, p. 92). translation example 2. source text: target text: canton panyu confusion school was one of the main educational institutes in guangzhou city in the ming and qing dynasties. the confucian scholar (corrected) studied confucian here and started from the title of xiucai as the first step into the imperial examination system. the imperial examination system was the (corrected) of talent communication across borders: translation & interpreting; vol. 02 no. 02 (2022) issn (online): 2766-791x issn (print): 2770-6354 5 and officer selection in ancient china. it was started in the sui dynasty, completely established in the tang dynasty, and reached its peak in the ming and qing dynasties. finally, it was abolished during the reform of the new educational system in the late qing dynasty. the imperial examination system lasting more than 1300 years in china, had played a significant role in the history of china and resulted in a wide range of influences. the chinese imperial examination culture is displayed in the guangji hall, which is behind the minglun hall. the exhibition is divided into three parts respectively: the history of the chinese imperial examination system, the process of the chinese imperial examination system, the number one scholar zhuangyuan in guangdong province. selected from the travel brochure of the memorial museum of comrade mao zedong sponsoring the peasant movement institute the explanation is usually added as part of the text rather than being a footnote. by doing so, the information content and the length of the text would increase (huang & zhang, 2020, p. 92). in this example, both phrases and sentences are added to the tourist text as supplementary parts for foreign tourists to better understand the background relevant to chinese culture. in example 2, the word “ ” is translated into “canton panyu confusion school”. “ ” is a typical culture-loaded word that appeared in the western zhou dynasty, which refers to the place of learning mainly open to the children of the nobility. “ ” now refers specifically to confucius temple usually set up by local governments in ancient china, and it is where ancient scholars studied traditional confucian culture. if “ ” is translated into “school”, its historical implication is dismissed. therefore, adding the word “confusion” precisely conveys the connotation of “ ”. another adding of the location word “canton” to modified “ ” avoids confusing tourists with other confusion schools. in addition, three complete sentences are added here in explanation of what the imperial examination was and how the imperial examination developed. meanwhile, they also serve as a supplement to the following sentence which says that the imperial examination had a history of more than 1300 years. the imperial examination, namely “ ” in china, was one of the most important talent selecting systems in the history of china. the system is well-known to the chinese but quite foreign to non-native tourists, thereby necessitating exhibiting the chinese imperial examination culture and the variational translation technique adding is used here. the application of vtt here has indeed been of great help for foreign tourists to break cultural barriers and understand chinese culture, thus enjoying a better tourist experience. another culture-loaded word “ ” is translated into “number one scholar zhuangyuan”. the translation explains the meaning by referring to the new english-chinese dictionary and keeps its chinese pronunciation zhuangyuan. 3.2 deleting (a