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Original Paper 

Humanity in the Light of Revolution—A Study of Evan King’s 

English Translation of National Patriotic Writer Xiao Jun’s 

Village in August 
Xinyu Liu1 & Dan Cui2* 

1 Graduate student of the School of Advanced Translation, Jilin International Studies University, 

Changchun, Jilin, China 
2 Postdoc of Literature of School of English, Beijing Foreign Studies University, Beijing, China; Doc of 

Literature, Professor, Dean of Institute of International Language and Culture, Leader of Comparative 

Literature and Cross-culture Discipline, Jilin International Studies University, Changchun, Jilin, China; 

Doc supervisor of Yanbian University, Yanji, Jilin, China 
* Dan Cui, Correspondence author, E-mail: summerelephant@126.com 

 

Received: July 20, 2022         Accepted: July 31, 2022        Online Published: August 10, 2022 

doi:10.22158/csm.v5n2p20                      URL: http://dx.doi.org/10.22158/csm.v5n2p20 

 

Abstract 

As one of the pivot figures of “Northeastern Writers”, Xiao Jun’s Village in August is of great importance 

in the history of modern Chinese literature, highlighting the local characteristics of Northeastern China, 

the revolutionary “banditry”, and the romantic personal heroism, attracting the attention of Chinese and 

Western critics. The translation by American sinology researcher Evan King shows attention to Chinese 

stories and makes a unique contribution to the cultural exchange between China and the West. His 

translation is noteworthy, but given the differences in cultural contexts between the two countries and the 

subjectivity of the translator, it is inevitably full of adaptation and mistranslation. Therefore, it is 

necessary to make a comprehensive examination of the literary style of the original work, and then 

propose handy translation strategies and principles for the new era: under the translation principle of 

truthfulness and accuracy, when translating Chinese culture, it is better to integrate both the 

foreignisation and domestication; when it comes to local culture, it is appropriate to apply various means 

to compensate for the cultural default given the specific situation and keep fidelity to the original text in 

the translation of the novel’s literary characteristics. 

Keywords 

Xiao Jun, Village in August, Evan King, a study of the English translated version 



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1. Introduction 

Xiao Jun (1907-1988), the pseudonym of Liu Honglin, was born in Linghai City, Liaoning Province. He 

began to write poetry after joining the cavalry in 1925. After the Mukden Incident in 1931, he formally 

became a writer and completed Village in August in 1934, which was published by Shanghai Rongguang 

Book Company in 1935. Like Razgrom written by Soviet writer Alexander Fadeyev, Xiao’s book was 

also inspired by a team of guerrillas and describes battles among the squads of the Northeast Army of 

Volunteers and various enemies. 

The English version of Village in August was translated by Robert Spencer Ward under the pen name of 

Evan King, an American diplomat then in China. It was published in 1942, prefaced and recommended 

by the famous reporter Edgar Snow. In the preface to the translated book, Snow described it as “a success 

from the moment it first appeared” and praised the translation as faithful and “sacrifices virtually 

nothing”. As the first modern Chinese novel translated into English that received an enthusiastic response 

in America (Lv, 2011, p. 80), Village in August is noticed in both domestic and international scholarship. 

An examination of the widely-indexed database illustrates that so far 21 journal essays, 7 journal reviews, 

and 55 dissertations on Xiao Jun’s works (Wang & Wu, 2021, p. 188) have been published until recently. 

These researches focus on book reviews and literary studies. Understanding China through Books by 

Alison B. Alessios asserts “it recounts the lives of the Chinese in Manchuria during invasion” (1944), and 

Retrieving the Working Body in Modern Chinese Fiction: The Question of the Ethical in Representation 

by Jian Xu comments “Village in August exemplifies nationalist literature precisely” (2004), as well as 

historical and cultural studies (e.g., Political Allegory in the 1980s: Xiao Jun and Bai Hua by Paul A. 

Cohen states Xiao Jun’s writing life (2008) and Demons in Paradise: The Chinese Images of Russia by T. 

A. Hsia points out that this book has spoken for both patriotism and international communism (1963). 

But almost none of these articles specifically deal with the translation of Xiao Jun or his works, but rather 

take them as examples. Translation studies on Xiao Jun are also exceedingly rare. 

In China, an examination of the popular index database CNKI (Chinese National Knowledge 

Infrastructure) illustrates the domestic studies of Xiao Jun are mainly related to Xiao Hong (another 

famous Northeastern writer and Xiao Jun’s former wife) and “Northeastern Writers”. Studies are 

concentrating on the resistance of his works (Yang, 2016), biographical studies (Ge, 2012), and literary 

criticism studies (Zhang, 2016). However, fewer studies in the translation field have been conducted, 

with only two studies on translation published in 2021: Wang Yan and Wu Liping’s Media-translatology 

Study on the Situation of Xiao Jun's Works in the United States and Jiang Lei, Li Biyu, and Liu Di’s The 

Translation and Spread Situations of the Literary Works of the “Northeastern Writers” in the 

English-speaking World, respectively examine the status of the collection, research status, and general 

interest in English translations of Xiao Jun’s works in the United States, as well as the translation and 

spread of the works of the “Northeastern Writers” in the English-speaking countries. 



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The studies on translations of Village in August also focus on media-translatology, respectively from the 

perspectives of the translation strategy of the English translation (Lv, 2011)) and the circulation in the 

United States (Zheng, 2019). So far, rare papers have been published to examine the quality of Evan 

king’s translation from the perspective of culture and translation and make suggestions for improvement, 

especially regarding cultural differences and translator subjectivity.  

This paper reexamines the version of Evan King’s English translation given culture and the unique 

literary features of Xiao Jun’s work, and then proposes solutions for reaching the translation goals in the 

new era, namely to emphasize both foreignisation and domestication with slightly stressing the strategy 

of domestication in translating Chinese culture, to use various means of compensation in translating local 

features, and to be faithful to the original text in translating the unique literary characteristics of the novel. 

Finally, it also shares some insights about translation teaching. 

 

2. The Unique Literariness of Village in August 

Xiao Jun’s Village in August has distinctive local characteristics, highlighting northeastern regionalism 

and folklore, bandit-like individual heroism, romantic revolutionary character and humanitarianism, 

self-construction from the onlooker’s angle of view, etc. While translating a literary work, translators are 

supposed to convey the creative style and characteristics of the author to the target language readers as 

much as possible. 

2.1 Northeastern Regionalism and Folklore 

The characteristics of Xiao Jun and his works are closely related to the regionalism of Northeast China 

and the folklore of his hometown. Northeastern Mandarin and local customs are commonly found in his 

writing, such as “kang” (“炕”, as the heatable brick bed in Northeast China that can keep people warm in 

winter) and “laoge da” (“老疙瘩”, designating the youngest child of the family) etc. Besides, the custom 

of widow re-marriage in Northeast China is depicted through the representation of the union of Li Qi’s 

Widow and Tang Laogeda, which has been well-accepted by the public even though they were not 

formally married. Also, the prevalent “hu zi” (“胡子”, referring to a bandit in Northeastern Mandarin) 

culture in northeastern China before the liberation is common in Xiao Jun’s works. In Village in August, 

both Big Liu and Captain Eagle had been bandits, and Liu mentioned: “liu zi” (“绺子”) and “guazhu” 

(“挂注”) (Xiao, 2005, p. 20), respectively designating “bandit” and “join the gang” in argot. 

2.2 “Banditry” and Individual Heroism 

Xiao Jun was born in Xianianpangou Village, Shenjiatai Town, Linghai City of Liaoning Province, 

where the people were tough and admired force, and thus there was a distinct culture of being bandits. 

Banditry in common sense is negative, generally referring to the gangster mentality, rogue spirit, and 

consumerism of bandits (Lan, 1993, p. 66), but the “banditry” depicted in Village in August is charged 

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Jun’s individual heroism. First, the so-called “bandits” here are not real bandits, but a 

Resistance-Japanese volunteer force constituted by several former members of the Northeast Army and 

the people, whose composition can be roughly categorized as the regular army and police brigades, 

former military officers, integrated brigands, secret societies of peasants, intellectuals and young 

students. This huge force of up to 300,000 people was not acknowledged by the official government of 

that time, and thus its existence highlights the characteristics of the traditional form of banditry. With 

poor military discipline among the officers and soldiers as well as the ruggedness and simplicity of the 

peasants, this force is disorganized. Xiao captures the rustic qualities of this army and portrays a vivid 

image of “bandits”. 

Compared with the regular Red Army, the Northeastern volunteer force is rough, and even though 

lacking in unified ideology and professional military discipline as guidance, their simple sense of 

resistance to invasion and oppression is invaluable. These “bandits” also have some advanced thinking, 

understanding the principle of “soldiers kill no soldiers, but officials”, and never robbing civilians; they 

use vulgar language and fight bravely against the enemy with a strong sense of resistance and simple 

armaments. Although this army is short-lived, its historical achievements cannot be neglected (Jiao, 2015, 

p. 37). As Xiao Jun (2005, p. 115) gave a positive comment: “We are the vanguard. We are the vanguard 

of the oppressed brethren. If we do not sacrifice, who will?” Although they seem to be bandit groups, 

they are essentially full of will to resist and revolutionary spirit. 

The “banditry” of Xiao Jun is also connected to the “revolutionary” nature, and they are mutually 

dependent and inseparable. Born into a family lacking maternal love, into a hometown with a traditional 

coarse spirit, and troubled times in general, Xiao Jun’s brave personality was inevitably cultivated 

(Cheng, 2010, p. 118). With his mother’s premature death, his childhood hardships, and his ill-fated life, 

Xiao Jun possesses a strong motivation to become a “brigand”, and he considers “rebellion” as the only 

way for the grass-rooted to fight against their unjust life. Such a longing makes Xiao Jun’s words often 

demonstrate the style of “banditry”, which profoundly delivers his stubborn and unyielding heroism and 

the rugged, impassioned, heroic tone of his works (Xiao, 2011, p. 274). The bandits at his heart illustrate 

the glory of heroes like Robin Hood, the British national folk hero, with the heroic spirit of doing 

righteousness and justice. 

2.3 Romantic Revolutionary Character and Humanitarianism 

The word “revolution” is repeated more than a hundred times in the source text, indicating its importance. 

In this case, “revolutionary character” refers to the spirit of resistance of the people of Northeast China 

against the landowners, Manchukuo, and the Japanese imperialist aggression. In the source text, Xiao Jun 

(2005, p. 151)narrates in the tone of Sun Er, a peasant, and describes his plain understanding of 

revolution as “to kill all those stinkers who have been bullying us since the times of our ancestors; to 

drive away all the Japanese soldiers now in the three Northeastern provinces, and to workfields for 



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ourselves. We will no longer grow food and pay rent to feed those stinkers who take all the benefits for 

granted, got it?” Such patriotism and strong resistance showed in the revolutionary writing of Xiao Jun’s 

literary composition (Chen, 2011, p. 33), arousing the local people’s consciousness to combat the 

aggressive ambition of Japanese imperialism, inspiring the national people to resist Japan’s ruthless 

invasion and aggression, and exposing the Japanese conspiracy to falsify public opinion and establish a 

puppet regime of Manchukuo. Such spirit deserves praise because Xiao Jun is just like British romantic 

poets Byron and Shelley who call on the English suppressed populace to fight against the dictatorship of 

the English central government. If explored deeply into the essential quality and significance of such 

writing, it again illustrates the guiding power of literature. Even John Keats is both concerned about 

national politics by revealing the suppressive capitalism manipulated by the ruling and upper classes 

(Shen & Cui, 2022, pp. 1-14) and the national unity by depicting the geographical features (Zhang & 

Cui, 2022),even in his dream weaving narration (Peng & Cui, 2021, pp. 15-26). 

However, due to the lack of systematic guiding thoughts and leadership, this revolutionary character has 

its limitations. The Northeast Army of Volunteers has difficulty understanding the deep philosophy of the 

Chinese revolution, and lacks professional military training, thus leading to its fundamental failure. 

These problems are also evident in the cases like undisciplined performances of Big Liu, the lack of 

combating competence of the elderly Cui Changsheng and the child Liang Xing, and the incomplete 

understanding of the land revolution by Xiao Ming and the peasants. Besides, Xiao Jun’s revolutionary 

spirit is also romantic. He avoids directly writing the violent and bloody scenes by depicting those fights 

in a way that preserves the space for imagination. “The evening wind blew coolly, a beautiful twilight. 

With a roar, an almost brutal roar, the long, limp snake was cast aside long ago in the scream of the 

mouthpiece. Each wheel of the machine, still turning, was the end of destiny” (Xiao, 2005, p. 36). Such 

sentences depict the whole process of a battle from its outbreak to its end. 

In addition, the humanitarianism conveyed in Village in August gives a hallmark of Xiao Jun’s writing. It 

is reflected in Xiao Jun’s portrayal of the helplessness of several characters while facing fate, as seen in 

plots like people’s nostalgia for their hometown and peace and the series of miserable depictions of Li 

Qi’s Widow after being raped. When Xiao Jun wrote about the revolution, he also questioned its violence. 

This ambivalence is especially evident after the overthrow of the landowner on the issue proposed by 

himself in the title of Chapter Seven: “Is it necessary to shoot them?” On one hand, this reflects Xiao 

Jun’s humanitarian spirit—his valuing and cherishing of human life and his affirmation of human values; 

on the other hand, given that Xiao Jun himself, as an intellectual and writer, has always possessed a sense 

of detachment from the Chinese revolution, it is not unreasonable for him to lack profound 

comprehension of its necessity. As Liu Dong (2021, p. 165) points out, Xiao Jun wrote about the land 

reform in isolation from the political position of the revolutionary army. All in all, it is quite remarkable 

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2.4 Self-construction from the Onlooker’s Angle of View 

Village in August does not adopt an omniscient narrative to describe the whole revolution but adopts a 

limited narrative perspective (Liu, 2021, p. 167) to reveal the psychological activities of each figure in a 

way more intimate and specific. In addition to switching the perspectives of the narrative protagonists 

several times, this novel also shifts the narrative stand of the nation by inserting two important characters 

from other countries—Taro Matsubara, a Japanese soldier, and Anna, a Korean girl—to view the War of 

Resistance Against Japan respectively in view of the aggressor and people whose motherland has already 

been occupied. 

What we can read are the psychological activities of the new soldier, Matsubara Taro, especially his 

questioning of the meaning of war and the sovereignty of the Japanese emperor—“What is the emperor 

after all?” (Xiao, 2005, p. 75) his gradual abandonment of morality and rationality as a nameless soldier 

deeply involved in a meaningless war, his wife’s sympathy for the innocent Chinese and Japanese people 

(“Don’t hurt Chinese women there! It’s already tragic enough!” (Xiao, 2005, p. 72)), and the constant 

inner conflicts between her revolutionary mission on behalf of his father and the love affairs deserve our 

attention. Xiao Jun differentiates Japanese civilians from Japanese militarism, and he sympathizes with 

all the struggling of the suppressed people. His extensive empathy for almost every character, his 

depiction of the dilemma that women and children are involved in this tragic defense for their primary 

survival, and his emphasis on the principle of “soldiers kill no soldiers, but officials” all bring his 

humanistic concern for the realm of international humanitarianism. 

 

3. The Merits and Limitations of Evan King’s Translation of Village in August 

Village in August translated by Evan King was published in 1942. As one of the earliest translations that 

aid to spread the truth of China to the western world, its pioneering significance is highly commendable. 

The translation version was well spread in the United States and was published four times, being housed 

by a total of 215 libraries from 47 states (Zheng, 2019, p. 62).King’s translation is easy to read, and good 

at creating vivid images. His language is natural and authentic, sometimes even better than the author’s 

artistry, for “the Chinese landscapes and characters portrayed by King are even more vivid than the 

original” (Lv, 2011, p. 82). 

However, it is notable that King’s translation does not closely follow up with fidelity. Wang Shuhuai 

(2020, p. 930) proposes the concept of the “Cultural Refraction Index (CRI)” to examine the cultural 

fidelity of the Target Text (TT) to the Source Text (ST), which is calculated by this formula: the total 

cultural value of the ST divided by the total cultural value of the TT equates CRI. This essay extracts 33 

Chinese characteristic expressions from Village in August, including culture-loaded words, Northeastern 

Mandarin, vulgar language, etc. The CRI of Evan King’s translation is calculated to be about 2.06, which 

illustrates the existence of cultural distortion in his translation. 



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Table 1.Typical Examples of CRI in Evan King’s Translation 

 Examples Translation 

Sample 

Cultural 

Value of 

Translation 

Proportion in Total 

Samples 

Culture-loaded 

Words 

织女星 

(Zhinvxing) 

Weaving 

Girl 

0 45% 

Northeastern 

Mandarin 

绺子 

(Liu zi) 

Bandit 0.5 36% 

Vulgar Language 王八蛋 

(Wang ba dan) 

Turtle eggs 0.5 18% 

 

The English translation version mainly adopts the domestication strategy that is common in western 

translators, with free translation and rewriting as the main techniques. Free translation refers to 

adaptation, amplification, and omission according to the text and targeted readers’ acceptance (Liu & 

Yang, 2018, p. 111). Rewriting was suggested by Andre Lefevere (1992, p. 2), referring to translators 

that are manipulated by various factors and therefore usually rewrite the text.  

Evan King primarily freely translates and rewrites by reducing the fidelity of the original text, deleting 

secondary information, adjusting the narrative order, modifying the diction, and adding personal 

understanding, which leads to a large amount of loss, distortion, and even error in the translation of ST’s 

culture and characteristics mentioned above. In terms of the northeastern regionalism and folklore, it is a 

pity that King made certain typical but general mistakes (usually appeared in the non-native speakers) in 

translating the northeastern mandarin, barely added annotations to culture-loaded words, and 

“westernized” the text to some extent. It also deserves our attention that in view of the bandit-like 

individual heroism, romantic revolutionary character and humanitarianism, King weakened the banditry 

and revolutionary nature while strengthened humanitarianism and he changed several expressions of the 

revolution featured with de-politicization. Given self-construction from the onlooker’s angle of view, 

there is still certainly room for idealizing King’s translation version. 

3.1 The Translation of the Culture of Northeastern China  

In King’s translation, a great number of Chinese cultural phenomena are mistranslated, omitted, or 

domesticated, especially the translation of the local culture featured northeastern characteristics. 

Xiao Jun’s works are based on the Northeastern Mandarin, among which the nicknames of characters are 

the most representative, and that is tricky for King to handle. For example, it is customary in Northeast 

China to address people according to their family ranking in the generation, like “Tang Laogeda” was 

mistranslated by King as “Boil Tang” for he mistook the meaning of “laogeda” as “pimple”, which is 

supposed to mean “the youngest child of Tang family”. Such translation does not conform to the 



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handsome appearance of the Tang Laogeda and also fails to indicate the in-depth culture. Still, “Li Qi’s 

Widow”, whose name is based on her husband—Li Qi—the 7th brother in the Li family, was 

mistranslated as “seventh married sister who was the widow Li”, resulting in a factual error. There are 

also several mistranslations, such as “wen mang” (“文盲”) which means “illiterate” but was 

mistranslated into “blind”, “guoqule” (“过去了”), euphemized expression for “passed away” was 

mistranslated as “cross beyond”, and other similar mistakes such as “cangying” (“苍鹰”) was translated 

to “fly”, which is supposed to be “eagle” etc. 

In addition to the mistranslation, the translation hardly adds annotations for the culture-loaded words, but 

just literally translated or paraphrased them, resulting in losing some cultural phenomena of Northeast 

China. For example, “hu zi” (“胡子”), the nickname for bandits in Northeastern Mandarin, was simply 

translated as “brigand” or “bandit”, and “kang” (“炕”) is translated as “brick bed”. Both translations are 

without any further notes from the translator, thus causing a “vacuum of sense” in the readers’ 

comprehension of the text and preventing them from connecting the information with the real experience. 

Hence, adding annotations properly is necessary for supplementing the context. 

Moreover, in Village in August, Xiao Jun is very discreet in writing about sexual issues given the cultural 

taboo and skates over them. However, the translator directly and creatively added a couple of sexual 

descriptions between Tang Laogeda and Li Qi’s Widow as well as Xiao Ming and Anna, catering to the 

cultural and reading habits of Westerners, which makes the text obviously “Westernized”. 

3.2 The Translation of Banditry and Individual Heroism 

In the first part of the analysis, we can see that the main literary characteristics of Village in August are 

banditry and revolutionary nature. The former is mostly reflected in the characters’ vulgar language, rude 

actions, and plain thoughts, while the latter is mainly reflected in the depiction of hatred toward the 

enemies, combat and revolutionary practices, and the critical development of ideas. Both aspects are 

weakened in Evan King’s translation. 

Example 1: 

The Original Text: “为日本帝国主义作走狗的满洲军阀” 

King’s Translation: “corrupt officials who are running dogs for the Japanese” 

Most of the characters in Village in August once were peasants or bandits and are rarely educated, so their 

expression styles and ideas are not featured with vulgarity and patriarchy (Liu, 2014, p. 225). Offensive 

words as their pet phrases are commonly adopted in the novel. In Chinese culture, it’s a convention to use 

the image of dogs to insult someone; while in western culture, such kind of connotation does not exist. 

Copying the images of animals in Chinese offensive words is likely to confuse readers. As a result, full 

charged emotion conveyed by this verse has been greatly limited given the information transmitting. 

Likely, there are expressions including “ta ma de” (“他妈的” for condemning and humiliating) is 

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(“尿种” for insulting the cowardness) as “seedofurine” etc. King translated these humiliating 

expressions without conforming to their exact meanings. The word-for-word translation seems to inherit 

the meaning of Chinese expressions, but in fact, they only make the readers of the translated language 

confused, weakening the emotional transmission and cultural connotation. 

In literature, sometimes curses expressed by the characters reflect their psychological activities and 

emotional changes, showing the figures’ personalities (Huang, 1998, p. 17). In this case, the meaning of 

the emotions carried by these words is far greater than retaining its original form of expression. The 

preferred communicative effect of the translated language is supposed to allow the target readers to 

understand the mood of the characters and immerse themselves in the story of the novel without barriers. 

Therefore, this paper argues that vulgar words are supposed to be replaced by similar and existing 

expressions in TT, which can convey the tone and alleviate the sense of exotic strangeness of the whole 

work. 

3.3 The Translation of the Revolutionary Nature and Humanitarian 

The translation adapted the revolutionary writing and added humanistic writing so that the revolutionary 

nature of Village in August is also weakened. 

Example 2: 

The Original Text: “你没听那位司令说吗？‘富人就是穷人身上的臭虫’，只有穷人，才是穷人的好

朋友！穷人才能帮助穷人！富人们总也没有好念头在穷人身上打算的。” 

King’s Translation: “It’s not a question of whether they’re rich or poor, or whether they follow the 

rules of etiquette! The question is they betraying their people into the hands of a foreign conqueror who 

will make slaves of their sons and grandsons, or have they the strength and the courage to try to resist?” 

In Example 2, Evan King completely changed the author’s argument over the distinction between the 

rich and the poor. He does not think landlords’ wealth is gained through the exploitation of peasants, and 

in his translation, King stresses Master Wang is only guilty of being a traitor instead of an exploiter. 

There are two issues with the landlord—oppression against tenant farmers and collusion with invaders, 

while King just realizes part of them. His deletion of the discussion on the contradiction between the rich 

and the poor tends to narrow Chinese suppressive people’s struggling resistance and rebelling revolution 

to subvert the “the three mountains” (as the metaphors for feudalism, imperialism, and bureaucrat 

capitalism)”, which thus to the certain point could not reveal the feudalism enough. The method of 

“de-politicization” was adopted in his translation to dilute the differences in ideologies (Zheng, 2019, p. 

64) and to blur the different national conditions between the TT and the ST. 

Besides, due to the cultural differences, Western values generally tend to focus more on individuality and 

humanity than on collectivism and discipline-obeying. So, it is natural for King to add several sexual 

descriptions, psychological descriptions, linguistic descriptions, etc. into the translation. For example, 

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the delayed retreat of the entire team, eventually resulting in the death of all three people. Chen Zhu’s 

speech in memory of the dead was intended to be a reminder of the importance of discipline considering 

this lesson. But the translator misses the point. He strengthened the sympathy and understanding for the 

dead by deleting critical words like “mistake” and even added appreciative words—“They have died 

bravely for our cause. Bury them bravely with no tears, no doubts.” (Evan, 1942, p. 206) It is 

emphatically different from the warning tone of Chen Zhu, leading to the blurring of the importance of 

military discipline, which on the one hand further fleshes out the characters and their feelings, while on 

the other hand distracts readers’ attention from the original theme of the novel—revolutionary resistance. 

The translator further stresses humanitarianism based on Xiao Jun, highlighting the charm of the 

characters while reducing the presence of the revolutionary writing. 

3.4 The Translation of the Onlooker’s Perspective and Foreign Culture 

Example 3: 

The Original Text: “在那本来还是少女爱娇的脸上，已经提早的便刻就了辛苦的纹痕！” 

King’s Translation: “That face had once been that of a loved and petted daughter of a comfortable 

bourgeoise family, but bitterness had cut deep scars into it!” 

In writing foreign issues, King also made certain changes that lead to mistranslations of some contents. 

In Example 3, he added the underlined phrase “a comfortable bourgeoisie family”, which is not yet 

evident in the original work. In the novel narrative, Anna as the daughter of the leader of the 

revolutionary party in Korea, came to China to propagate Marxism to bring about a proletarian revolution 

to save her fallen homeland. Evan King did not explain why he changed Anna’s identity from proletariat 

to bourgeoise, but it is clear from the translator’s subjectivity that such retranslation is in line with the 

cultural context of his country and brings the target readers—Western readers—closer to the text. 

Nevertheless, it is at the expense of textual accuracy, especially the ethical stance of the text, which is 

costly. Anna’s story is meant to represent a scenario of revolutionary parties all over the world helping 

each other, instead of cooperation among different classes. 

Similarly, the names of Japanese characters were mistranslated, including in Chapter 5 the Japanese 

soldier “Matsubara” was changed into “Sekimoto”, and his wife “Yoshiko” to “AkiHayama”. In addition 

to the lack of background knowledge, this is also a translation technique implemented by King: 

imaginatively deconstructing and reconstructing Eastern issues from a Western perspective to enhance 

readers’“sense of familiarity” (Ma & Li, 2021, p. 111). By replacing Japanese names that are more 

representative and suitable to the stereotypes, King stresses exoticism to meet the readers’ reading 

expectations. This same technique can also be observed in other typical cases: 

Example 4: 

The Original Text: “李七嫂的血正如一缸腾热的豆汁，唐老疙疸的每一句话，正是卤水，这

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King’s Translation: “Tang’s return to her, and the nearness of him, had made Seventh Sister’s blood 

as hot in her bosom as steaming congee in an earthen jar.” 

Here, soy milk and brine were replaced by “steaming congee in an earthen jar” in translation version. In 

the original text, Xiao Jun portrayed Li Qi’ s Widow as she felt her blood went solidified just like drops 

of brine that was added into a tank of boiling soy milk while making Tofu. However, such 

chemical-making process of Tofu may be alien to westerners; hence King applied other typical Chinese 

phenomena to convey similar meanings. However, the substitution reduces the sudden desperation of Li 

Qi’s Widow after hearing Tang’s words.  

After analyzing the translation, we found out that the translation has limitations of its time. Although it 

has the pioneering significance of translating Chinese novels and was well-received by English readers at 

that time, it sacrifices much of Chinese cultural connotations, even resulting in the deviation of the 

informative issue of ST. Because of the translator’s Western Identity, his translation aims mainly at 

sharing other peoples’ WWII stories rather than purposely promoting Chinese culture, and in his 

translation, he intentionally or unconsciously appropriates Western thinking and culture, and even 

sometimes makes mistakes that are not aligned with historical facts. According to Lefevere’s 

interpretation of rewriting, Since China’s international status, discourse power, and cultural output were 

all not strong enough then with a comparison with the peer western, it would inevitably result in such 

translations that were dominated by domestication strategy and diverged from the original work, thus 

leading to the loss of the textual truth and content truth. 

 

4. Principles of Translation for Chinese Works Spreading Abroad in the New Era 

Translators like Evan King have made great contribution to transmitting Chinese novels, as important 

pioneers, for which we extend our sincere gratitude. While this paper aims to encourage tospread true 

stories of China to the world through the reintroduction of Chinese literature and under such a pure and 

primary target, we are supposed to adhere to principle of faithfulness to the ST and historical facts and 

implement a combination of defamiliarization, foreignisation, and domestication to retain as much of the 

style of the works as possible while facilitating the understanding of the TT readers. 

4.1 The General Characteristics of Village in August and Translation of Chinese Culture 

Translation of Chinese works is supposed to organically integrate the two means of domestication and 

foreignisation. The former enables to achieve a fluent and natural translation, and the latter can preserve 

the exotic atmosphere. When readers read foreign literature, they look forward to the novelty and charm 

of exotic culture in the collision of Chinese and Western cultures. Therefore, the importance of good 

dissimilation is obvious, for it cannot only strengthen soft power but also enrich the reading experience of 

target language readers. Especially, now that the “Scheme of the Chinese Phonetic Alphabet” has been 

recognized by the international community, China gradually replaces the old Wade-Giles Romanization 



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with Pinyin, helping the Western society become more familiar with the Chinese. For instance, David 

Hawkes added a four-page description of the Pinyin scheme in his preface of the translation of 

Hongloumeng (《红楼梦》), which is worth learning. Besides, Chinese unique units should be retained, 

including monetary units (e. g., yuan), distance units (e. g., li), weight units (e. g., jin) etc.  

However, to achieve further effects and a wider range of communication, foreignizing blindly is not 

feasible and tends to necessarily deepen the gap. Only with the cooperation of the TT subjects can we 

help Chinese literature acclimatize to foreign environments with different institutions, cultures, and 

ideologies (Yin & Li, 2021, p. 81). From the perspective of communication studies, we should adopt a 

flexible communication strategy, for Chinese culture is still in a developing position, and a translation 

strategy that combines both foreignisation and domestication with a little emphasis on the latter is 

required to help Chinese culture spread abroad right now (Wang, 2015, p. 103). 

4.2 Northeastern Characteristics of Village in August and the Translation of Regional Culture 

There are a large number of Northeastern Mandarin and cultural phenomena in Village in August. Due to 

the existing cultural default between Chinese and English, translators are supposed to adopt various 

compensatory means while translating cultural expressions with Northeastern characteristics, including 

the methods of adding notes, increasing translation, domestication etc. (Su, 2008, p. 176). Especially 

defamiliarization can both keep the cultural connotation and the interest of readers (Li, 2016, p. 84). 

When it comes to curses, proverbs, and colloquialisms in dialect, it is appropriate to use the 

communicative translation method to find similar expressions in the TT to convey the same effect. Such 

as“chui hu zi dengyan” (“吹胡子瞪眼”, describing the face of rage) can be translated as “blowone’ s 

stop”, better than the translation of Evan King’s “chewing his mustaches and staring out of glass eyes”, 

though vividly conveyed the literary significance but sacrifice or even ignore the underneath meaning. 

Sometimes, the cultural division may lead to different interpretations of the same image, and a literal 

translation from one culture to another may cause misunderstanding among readers. For example, to 

avoid different understandings of “dragon” in different cultures, the word “zhen long tian zi” (“真龙天

子”, emphasizing the noble birth) can be just translated as “the emperor”. 

4.3 Other Unique Literary Features of Village in August and the Translation of Textual Characteristics 

Xiao Jun’s work has distinctive characteristics of himself. In addition to the regional and folkloric nature, 

it also has unique literary features such as banditry, personal heroism, romantic revolutionary character, 

humanitarian, and self-construction from the onlooker’s angle of view. Translators are supposed to 

consciously respect and preserve the writing style and literary characteristics of the original work. 

The banditry and revolutionary nature of Xiao Jun’s writing refer to the heroic spirit of resistance against 

the landowners, the Manchukuo regime, and Japanese imperialism. As critics evaluate, “it has a raw 

barrenness, as if it is unpolished, with rich intuition and sensibility” (Zhao, 1986, p. 152). This 

revolutionary character is intertwined with the humanitarian spirit, and the conflict between the two 



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sometimes reflects the unique confusion of that times. Either shifting the focus of the novel or blurring 

the historical facts can cause the loss of the original text’s character. As translators, we are supposed to 

respect the differences in history and positions in the translation, for the sake of truth and fact. The 

writing technique of self-construction from others’ perspectives in Village in August has a good effect on 

defamiliarization, so the translator should also adopt a creative method of defamiliarization to convey the 

literary character (Shao &Wu, 2022, p. 178), facilitating the readers to truly understand and study the 

author’s creative characteristics. Therefore, translators should use the literal translation method to be 

faithful to the original text and avoid adding too much personal understanding that leads to the “aphasia” 

of the author. 

4.4 The Enlightenment and Requirement for Translation Teaching and Faculty Team Construction 

through Study of Village in August 

While conducting the research on the translation of Village in August, it not only finally fulfills the 

prescribed aim of researching the methods and strategies in translating Village in August as the 

representative of Chinese contemporary literature with typical characteristics, but also offers us a new 

penetrative view into the instructing and studying such literary genre for translation teaching and 

translation teaching faculty construction. Given teaching, it is quite significant to arouse the attention of 

translation and English language major students to such genre and endeavor them to ponder over 

eternal topics and themes, including the local colorism, gender equality, imperialism, patriotism, 

humanitarianism, cosmopolitanism, shared future of people all over the world etc. Besides, it also 

converts the translation instruction to retrospect over the methods particularly designed for northeast 

novels. In addition, it also echoes the requirement of constructing cross multi-discipline teaching 

faculty against new arts background, which in this particular case requires the teachers and instructors 

not only to master English language teaching and translation strategies, but also Chinese contemporary 

literature knowledge and acquisition of the comparative literature of the east and west given genres, 

characterization, narratives, thematic analyses, western literary thoughts, approaches, theories, etc. 

Luckily, some Chinese teachers graduating with a literature-discipline master’s or even doctorate 

degree have acquired these capabilities and knowledge, but we cannot deny or ignore a certain number 

of teachers possessing either sole linguistics knowledge or translation theoretical knowledge who 

always find it hard to penetrate the rooted characteristics of literary texts. A series of necessary training 

like updating learning, training, workshops etc., are needed in addition to the values previously 

mentioned. Also, besides the intimately incorporated literary theories, either information or knowledge 

of other disciplines interwoven into the literary texts is still to be explored and mastered such as politics, 

sociology, economy, geography, economics, medicine, etc., which proposes the challenges and 

opportunities for teachers specialized into translation. Further, translatology itself is also a subject 

constituted by a systematic subjects and contents that need to be explored and investigated.  



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5. Conclusion 

As the main battlefield in the east of the world’s anti-racist war, China contributes a lot to the final victory 

of justice, and we should not only remember but also share our stories with the whole world. To sum up, 

this paper focuses on the literary characteristics of Village in August and explored its featured “banditry”, 

unique revolutionary, humanitarian spirit, exotic writing, etc. In Evan King’s translation of the book, he 

adopts a free translation approach, resulting in several changes and cultural deviations from the original 

text. His translation loses partial characteristics of Xiao Jun, Northeast China, and even China, and it is 

sometimes against the author’s intention and historical facts. Chinese translators in the new era should 

insist on the principle of faithfulness to the original text and historical facts. When translating Chinese 

culture, we should take the strategy of foreignisation and domestication at the same time, and with a 

slight emphasis on the latter one to achieve better acceptance by readers. When it comes to local culture, 

we should apply various means to compensate for the default depending on the situation, and keep 

fidelity to the author in the translation of the novel’s literary characteristics. Our current translation 

practice should not only facilitate the understanding of foreign readers but also maximize the 

dissemination of Chinese culture, promoting Chinese works to more countries and building a strong 

cultural nation with flexible communication strategies. In translation teaching, we also need more 

qualified teachers to cultivate students who can become comprehensive translators in the future. 

 

Acknowledgment 

After months of efforts, I eventually completed my first academic paper. Here, I would like to take this 

opportunity to extend my special sincere thanks to the people who help me in completing it eventually: 

I would like to extend my special gratitude towards Doc Supervisor Cui Dan for her professional and 

patient guidance since I started up with this research project. Without her academic advice and persistent 

encouragement, the final version would not come out; I also would like to thank my senior, Chen Jiyijie 

for his valuable suggestions for the composition and revising and other peer students for their 

encouragement; finally, I am obliged to my family for being by my side and supporting me 

whole-heartedly during this difficult time. In a nutshell, I will cherish this experience of essay writing 

forever and continue with the translation study and practice. 

 

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Note(s) 

Note 1. This paper is the periodical outcome of Project on “Translation Research and Practice on the 

National Revolutionary Writer Xiao Jun’s Village in August” sponsored by Jilin International Studies 

University (Project No. JWXSKY2022B089); of Project on “A Study of the Geographical Writing and 

Overseas Introduction and Translation of ‘Northeast Writers Group’ from the Perspective of 

Nationalities and Regions”; of Project on “The Anxiety and Transcendence of John Keats’s Individual 

Identity Construction” sponsored by National Social Science Foundation of China (21FWWB015); of 

Project on “A Study of the Construction of John Keats’s National Identity” sponsored by the fellowship 



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of China Postdoctoral Science Foundation (No: 2021M700496); of Project on “A Study of English 

Major Course System Construction with Value Shaping Based on ‘Global Village’ as the Foreign 

Language Lab” sponsored by the Academy of Foreign Language Teaching Attached to the Institute of 

Higher Education of China (No: 21WYJYZD08); of Project on “A Study of Routes Applied to 

Cultivate the Inter-cultural Competence of English Major Students” (No: GJJX20201130); of Project 

on “The Establishment and Practice of Vista Mode of Development and Transformation of 

English-major Teaching Faculty’s Proficiency under New Arts Prospect” sponsored by Chinese Private 

Higher Education Association(CANFZG22417); of Project on “The Construction and Practice of Mode 

of Development and Transformation of Foreign Language Teaching Faculty’s Proficiency in 

International Studies of Universities under Multiple-Discipline Background” sponsored by Jilin Higher 

Education Association (No: JGJX2022D316);“A Study of John Keats’s National Identity Writing and 

Forging Chinese National Community Consciousness” sponsored by Education Department of Jilin 

Province. 


