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The Effectiveness of Brainstorming and Mind Mapping to Teach 

Writing Narrative Text for Students with Extrovert and Introvert 

Personalities 

 

Widya Yuliani ,  Dwi Anggani Linggar Bharati, Warsono 

 
 Universitas Negeri Semarang, Indonesia 

Article Info 

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Article History: 

Recived 12 March 

2019 

Accepted 29 July 

2019 

Published 23 

December 2019 

 

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Keywords: 

Brainstorming, mind 

mapping, writing, 

narrative text, 

students’ personalities 

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Abstract
 

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Teaching English in SMA is teaching and learning a foreign language as a 

part of national education. Moreover, modern teaching technique should be 

developed to encompass the reality. This study aimed to measuring the 

effectiveness of brainstorming and mind mapping to teach writing narrative 

text with extrovert and introvert personalities. This research used 2x2 

factorial experimental designs. The subjects were the students of class XI 

IPA 1 and XI IPA 2 of SMAN 2 Tegal. It was divided into two groups, they 

were extrovert and introvert personality. The instruments were used test, 

questionnaire, pre-test, and post-test. The finding of this research indicates 

that brainstorming technique was more effective than mind mapping 

technique to students with extrovert personality. While there was no 

significant difference between a student who was taught by using 

brainstorming technique and those taught by using mind mapping technique 

with introvert personality. It means that brainstorming technique is more 

effective to the students with extrovert personality, while mind mapping 

technique is effective to the students with introvert personality. Based on our 

findings, we conclude that both brainstorming technique and mind mapping 

technique can help and improve the students in writing skill for both 

students with extrovert and introvert personality. 

 

 

 

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INTRODUCTION 

 
As one of the language skills, writing is 

one of the skills of communication, which can 

help us to express our idea, feeling, and 

opinion in written language. Writing becomes 

a difficult subject especially for students 

because writing is the activity when someone 

expresses his/her idea, emotion, thought and 

transfers them into a piece of paper. Harmer 

(2004), the teaching of writing focused on the 

written product rather than on the writing 

process. In other words, the students tend to 

do what rather than the how of text 

construction.  

Besides, the passive students are having 

more difficulty in their writing. Most of the 

students experience the writers’ anxiety. They 

also feel nervous to express their opinions in 

writing. Thus, it can be concluded that 

students have a feeling of fear and little 

enthusiasm in writing class. The passive 

students prefer to remain silent. While, the 

active students often communicate with 

teachers and friends. Therefore, this can lead 

to two different personality types namely 

extrovert and introvert personalities. 

According to the standard competency 

in the syllabus of senior high school, the 

students are expected to be able to write 

various texts. Among the texts, the narrative 

text should be learned in Senior High School. 

A narrative text is usually used to introduce 

several stories and deliver them to readers.  

The researcher has read some similar 

studies related to brainstorming technique that 

have been conducted by Hermasari (2015), 

Sabarun (2015), Erlin (2015), Ernidawati 

(2017), and Abdelkarim (2018). The previous 

studies were conducted using only the 

brainstorming technique or compared with 

another technique. They conducted studies on 

speaking or writing ability. The result of the 

studies showed that brainstorming could 

improve the students’ ability.  

Rofi’i (2014), Rahmawati (2017), 

Anggrayani (2015), Muhib (2014), and Sari 

(2018) had conducted a study using mind 

mapping in different ways but with the same 

goal, that was to find out the effectiveness of 

mind mapping technique. Generally, the 

results of their research stated that by 

implementing mind mapping, the students 

were actively involved in the teaching- 

learning process.  

Then, the previous study was about 

students with extrovert and introvert 

personalities that was conducted by Akbar 

(2015), Valentine (2017), Mall-Amiri (2013), 

Priska (2016), Sri, et al (2017), Rahmawati 

and Nurmayasari (2014). The previous studies 

investigated significant differences among 

personality types in students’ achievement. 

Based on the result of the research, it was 

proved that the students with introvert 

personality have better results in the reading 

comprehension test than those with extrovert 

personality.  

Their previous studies could be used as 

practical guidance for our study, because it 

was relevant with our present study especially 

in terms of brainstorming, mind mapping, and 

students’ personality. However, this research 

was different from the previous studies above. 

This research focused on the interaction 

between techniques and students’ personality. 

In conclusion, from the discussion 

above, it can be seen that brainstorming and 

mind mapping techniques that should be 

implemented by the teacher in the teaching 

and learning process can influence the 

students’ learning outcomes. Thus, in this 

study, the researchers tried to conduct the 

research about brainstorming and mind 

mapping techniques especially to teach writing 

narrative text with extrovert and introvert 

personalities. 

 

METHOD 

 

This research was used 2X2 factorial 

design with pre-test and post-test. There were 

45 students of the eleventh grade students of 

SMAN 2 Tegal. Two classes were chosen as 

experimental group 1 and 2, while the third 

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This study was used numerical data and 

analyzed using numerical comparisons and 

statistical packages for social science (SPSS). 

The quantitative data in this study were taken 

from try out, pre-test, post-test, and 

questionnaire sheet. Those test were 

conducted in the form of writing test. The 

experimental group 1 and 2 had the similar 

test. The pre-test was used to measure 

students’ writing before the treatment and the 

post-test was used to measure students’ writing 

after the treatment. The questionnaire was 

used in this research based on Eysenck 

Personality Inventory (EPI). Thus, the 

researcher could classify the students into 

extrovert and introvert personality. 

After collecting the data, the researcher 

analyzed the students’ result of pre-test and 

post-test by using t-test was used to test the 

result of teaching writing narrative text by 

using brainstorming and mind mapping 

techniques to students with extrovert and 

introvert personalities. While, ANOVA test 

was used to check the relationship between 

variables which differ from one another. 

 

RESULTS AND DISCUSSION 

 

The purpose of the research was to 

know the effectiveness of brainstorming 

technique compared with mind mapping 

technique in teaching writing narrative text to 

the students with extrovert and introvert 

personalities of eleventh grade students of 

SMAN 2 Tegal. In this study, there were two 

different groups namely first experimental 

group, i.e. XI IPA 1, conducted with 

brainstorming technique and the second 

experimental group, i.e. XI IPA 2, conducted 

with mind mapping technique. This section 

presents the discussion of the whole results of 

the study. The statistical analysis was used to 

answer research questions and hypothesis test.  

Before conducting the study, there were 

two tryouts initiated to describe the validity 

and reliability of the test. Both participation 

questionnaire and writing test were conducted 

in the try out. The result shows that all of 

items in the questionnaire were reliable. 

However, some of those items were invalid. 

Thus, the invalid items were dismissed. 

Meanwhile, the result of the writing test try 

out was valid and reliable. 

After dividing the class into two groups, 

experiment class one and experiment class 

two, the students got the pre-test. In here the 

pre-test was used to determine whether the 

writing ability of both classes was same. The 

students also should answer the questionnaire 

in order to know their learning style. After 

getting the pre-test, the students got the 

treatment. Experiment class one got the 

treatment by using brainstorming technique 

and experiment class two got the treatment by 

using mind mapping technique. After the 

treatment had been given to the students, the 

researcher gave post-test. 

Then, the normality was conducted to 

know whether the data is distributed normally 

or not. The normality test was used One-

Sample Kolmogorov-Smirnov Test by SPSS. 

The result showed that the significance values 

of the pre-test score were higher than 0.05 

(0.649, 0.595, 0.149, 0.935 > 0.05). It means 

that the data in pre-test was distributed 

normally. So, the null hypothesis was 

accepted. Therefore, it can be concluded that 

pre-test data of both experimental groups have 

a normal distribution. 

Meanwhile, the result of the normality 

test of the post-test showed that the significant 

values of the post-test score was higher than 

0.05 (0.1000, 0.987, 0.377, 0.840 > 0.05). It 

means that the data in post-test was distributed 

normally. So, the null hypothesis was 

accepted. Therefore, it can be concluded that 

post-test data of both experimental groups 

have a normal distribution. 

Then, the homogeneity test was used in 

order to know whether the data is 

homogeneous or not. It was as important as 

normality test because it showed the 

similarities of the writing skill between 

students of experiment class one and those of 

experiment class two. If the data was not 

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because it means that the groups do not have 

the same skill in writing a text. In here, the 

homogeneity test was measured by using 

statistical analysis called Levene Test of 

Homogeneity of Variance. 

The result of homogeneity test of pre-

test for students with extrovert and introvert 

personalities showed that the significance 

score (Sig) was 0.366. Meanwhile, the result of 

homogeneity test of post-test for students with 

extrovert and introvert personalities showed 

that the significance score (Sig) was 0.291. 

Each of it was higher than level of significance 

(α) = 0.05. As the result, H0 was accepted. 

Therefore, the data of the pre-test and post-test 

for students with extrovert and introvert 

personalities in both experimental groups were 

homogenous. 

To answering the research questions this 

part to be discussed the hypothesis test. The 

explanations were as follows. 

 

Teaching Writing Using Brainstorming to 

Students with Extrovert Personality 

The results showed that there was a 

significant difference between students writing 

skill in pre-test and post-test. The mean score 

of pre-test (69.50) was lower than the mean 

score of post-test (75.00). It means that the 

students with extrovert personality have the 

high score and showed improvement. It was 

also supported by t-value. T-value was higher 

than t-table. It showed that 0.014 < 0.05. 

Therefore, Ho was rejected and Ha was 

accepted. It means that using brainstorming 

technique was effective to enhance writing 

skills of students to extrovert personality. 

Extrovert personality is someone’s 

personality that is more sociable to others. 

They have many friends and want to be happy 

and like to go to the parties. The people who 

have the extrovert personality are sensation-

seekers and risk-takers. They like jokes, 

energetic, and more active. Someone who is 

extraverted, he hypothesized, has good, strong 

inhibition (Eysenck, 1947). 

The results gave a sign that 

brainstorming gives positive effect to students’ 

writing narrative text because it provides many 

opportunities for students to work with others 

and more active in class. It was in line with 

Jung (1971) argued that extraverts are open, 

sociable, and socially assertive, oriented 

toward other people and the external world. 

Thus, it would be better for students to study 

in group because they enjoy social activities 

such as being around and working with others. 

 

Teaching Writing Using Brainstorming to 

Students with Introvert Personality 

The mean score of pre-test result of 

students with introvert personality who were 

taught by brainstorming was 64.58. While, the 

post-test mean score result for this group 

showed that there was also significant 

improvement. It means that brainstorming was 

also effective to teach writing narrative text for 

students with introvert personality. It was also 

supported by t-value result. It can be seen that 

the significant value was 0.000. It showed that 

0.000 < 0.05. Therefore, Ho was rejected and 

Ha was accepted. 

As stated also by Jung (1971) who said 

that introverts are withdrawn and often shy, 

and they tend to focus on themselves, on their 

own thoughts and feelings. They did not like 

being in crowded situation because they need 

to concentrate well. It seems that they need 

full concentration because they were easily 

distracting especially from the noisy. 

Moreover, the students who had this 

personality prefer to learnt individually and 

independently. 

 

Teaching Writing Using Mind Mapping to 

Students with Extrovert Personality 

Based on the statistical analysis result, 

students with extrovert personality perform 

different result on their post-test compared to 

their pre-test. The mean score of post-test 

result of students with extrovert personality 

who were taught by mind mapping was better 

than the pre-test mean score. Moreover based 

on table 4.17 showed that using mind mapping 

technique was effective to enhance writing 

skills of students with extrovert personality.  



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As stated by Buzan (2007), a mind map 

was the easiest way to put information into 

your brain and to take information out of your 

brain. Therefore, the students enjoy to write a 

text and they develop their ideas freely. In 

addition, Buzan in Tee (2014) argued that 

mind mapping was an efficient system of 

notetaking that makes revision a fun thing to 

do for students.  

 

Teaching Writing Using Mind Mapping to 

Students with Introvert Personality 

Students mean score before and after 

treatment showed significant difference based 

on the statistical analysis. Their post-test 

(73.29) was better than pre-test (65.00). It was 

also supported by t-value result. It can be seen 

that the significant value is 0.001. Therefore, 

Ha was accepted and Ho was rejected. 

According to Buzan in Ernidawati 

(2017), mind mapping was a graphic 

representation of ideas (usually generated via 

brainstorming session). It showed the ideas 

which were generated around a central theme 

and how they are interlinked. It was a tool 

primarily used for stimulating thought.  

It was line with Davis in Vitulli and 

Giles (2016) argued that mind mapping is a 

unique representational strategy, which 

appears to have particular educational 

benefits, since pictures and structured 

diagrams are more comprehensible than just 

words and a clearer way to illustrate 

understanding of complex topics. It was hoped 

that mind mapping strategy can be 

implemented in teaching and learning writing 

by the students especially with introvert 

personality and the teacher. 

 

Teaching Writing Using Brainstorming and 

Mind Mapping to Students with Extrovert 

Personality 

The results showed that there were 

significant improvement by using 

brainstorming and mind mapping to students 

with extrovert personality. The mean score of 

brainstorming (75.00) was higher than the 

mean score of mind mapping (66.53) to 

students with extrovert personality. This result 

was also supported by t-value. Where t-value 

(0.008) was less than 0.05. Therefore, Ho was 

rejected and Ha was accepted. It means that 

brainstorming technique was more effective 

than mind mapping technique to use in 

teaching writing to the students with extrovert 

personality. 

It was line with Muhib’s (2014) 

argument that everybody-writes teachnique 

was more effective than mind mapping 

technique for teaching writing. However, this 

study compared by using brainstorming and 

mind mapping techniques. The result was also 

the same. Brainstorming was more effective 

than mind mapping technique to teach writing 

narrative text with extrovert personality. 

The result represents that brainstorming 

gives meaningful contribution for generating 

ideas, increasing creative efficacy, or finding 

solutions to problems in individual or group 

method (Wilson, 2013). 

 

Teaching Writing Using Brainstorming and 

Mind Mapping to Students with Introvert 

Personality 

The result showed that there was no 

significant difference between students who 

were taught by using brainstorming technique 

and those taught by using mind mapping 

technique to students with introvert 

personality. It can be seen from the significant 

value (0.823) in table 4.24 was more than 0.05 

which means there was no significant 

difference. 

Jung in Schultz and Schultz (2009), 

everyone has the capacity for both attitudes, 

but only one becomes dominant in the 

personality. In addition, Jalili and Amiri 

(2015) argued that introverts prefer spacious 

interactions with fewer people. Introversion 

personality characteristics were focus on 

themselves, stolid, less in communication, 

passive, like being alone, and independent. 

Therefore, to teach introversion learners, the 

teacher was recommended to give them the 

task individually because they usually do not 

really like work in group.  



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The Interaction Effect among Techniques, 

Students’ Personality, and Writing Skill 

 

This part discusses about the interaction 

among the techniques, students’ personality, 

and writing skill. From the calculation, the 

significant value (0.45) was higher than 0.05. 

It means that there was no interaction among 

brainstorming and mind mapping techniques, 

students’ personality, and writing skill. The 

finding of this research indicates brainstorming 

technique was more effective to teach the 

students with extrovert personality, while 

mind mapping technique was effective to teach 

the students with introvert personality. 

Furthermore, Alavinia and Hassanlou 

(2014) who conducted the research which is 

similar to the researcher were found that there 

was no significant correlation between 

extroversion/introversion and their essay 

writing performance. Since students’ 

personality was not permanent or changeable. 

Personality is too complex and changeable in 

different situation and with different people 

(Schultz and Schultz, 2009). In addition 

Harmer (2001) argued that one of the 

disadvantages of writing is getting students to 

concentrate and it takes time. In order to clear 

the finding of the mean score, here were the 

lines. 

 

Picture 1. The Mean Score of Post-test to 

Students with Extrovert Personality 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Picture 2. The Mean Score of Post-test to 

Students with Introvert Personality 

 

CONCLUSION  

 

Based on our findings, we conclude that 

both brainstorming and mind mapping 

techniques can help and improve the students 

in writing skill for both students with extrovert 

and introvert personalities. However, there 

were some weaknesses from both techniques. 

It can seen that brainstorming technique was 

more effective than mind mapping technique 

to students with extrovert personality, while 

mind mapping technique was more effective to 

students with introvert personality than 

brainstorming technique. Thus, brainstorming 

technique was effective to be implemented 

with extrovert personality because students 

enjoy working with others. This technique 

should be done in group. While, mind 

mapping technique was easy implemented 

with introvert personality because they prefer 

to learn individually. They did not like 

crowded situation bacause they need full 

concentration. It is hoped that the students 

and the teacher can use those techniques in 

teaching and learning process.  

 

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