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The Students’ Ability in Writing Descriptive Text Through Outdoor

Activity at Palopo Cokroaminoto University

Juwita Crestiani M

 christianiputriroro01@gmail.com

Palopo Cokroaminoto University, Indonesia

Received : 4 February 2018; Accepted : 20 April 2019

URL : http://ejournal.iainpalopo.ac.id/index.php/ideas

Abstract

This research deals with the students’ ability in writing descriptive text through outdoor learning

activity  at  the  sixth  semester  of  English  language  education  study  program  of  Palopo

Cokroaminoto  University.  The  population  of  this  research  is  the  sixth  semester  students  of

English  language  education  study  program  in  Palopo  Cokroaminoto  University.  The  total

number  of  population  was  100  students.  The  researcher applied  the  purposive  sampling

technique and there is 30 students as sample.  Writing test  is the instrument  of this research.

Based  on  the  findings  and  discussion  in  the  previous  chapter,  the  researcher  concludes  the

students’ ability in writing descriptive text through outdoor learning activity is good. It can be

proven by the students’ mean score is 78 and it is categorized good.

Keywords: students’ ability, descriptive text, outdoor learning activity.

Introduction

English has been using all over the world and also it is used as the medium of
communication  to  convey  information.  Therefore,  it  makes  people  especially  for
Indonesian learners have to learn and master English.

However, learn English is not easy and there are four skills in English that has to
be mastered by student. Besides speaking, listening and reading, writing becomes the
most important skill because through writing, the student can share the ideas, opinion to
the others and has a lot of time to think about what they want convey through writing.

By writing, the students can produce good writing because they have a lot of

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time to think and acquire ideas but in fact mastering writing especially finding idea is
not  easy  and  need  to  think  hardly.  Harmer  in  Imran  (2011:10)  defines  writing  is  a
productive skill which involves though and emotion. It is a medium of communication.
Writing  cannot  be  mastered  at  one  but  it  needs  practice.  The  practice  may  include
imitating or copying words and sentences from the giving ideas or expressing free ideas
based on the writers’ knowledge, experience and point of view.

Meanwhile, Lindblom in Imran (2011:10) states that writing as a way of learning
to focus our mind on important matters and learning about them. By writing activity, a
person can find the solution of difficult problem, master the fact and even by writing a
person can also communicate through the way that is impossible.

In addition, Byrne in Hisasmaria (2012:11) states that writing is an activity to
produce a sequence of sentence arranged in a particular order and linked together in
certain  ways.  When  people  write,  they  use  graphic  symbols,  which  are  letters  or
combinations  of  letters  that  relate  to  the  sounds  they  make  when  they  speak.
Furthermore, he states that writing involves the encoding of message. Writing can be
defined as  communicative act, a way of sharing observation, information, though, or
ideas with ourselves and others.

A lot of problem make students cannot master writing. They still confuse and
also  lack  of  interest  and  motivation  in  writing,  so  they  difficult  acquire  ideas  and
produce good writing. So, they are still very low in writing. According to Donovan in
Karim (2013:24) there are some characteristics of good writing, they are: Clarity and
focus: in good writing, everything makes sense and reader does not get lost or have to
read passages to figure out what is going on. Focused writing sticks with the plot or core
idea without running off on too many tangents. Organization: a well-organized piece of
writing  is  not  only  clear;  it  is  presented  in  a  way  that  is  logical  and  aesthetically
pleasing.  Language  (word  choice):  we  writers  can  never  underestimate  or  fail  to
appreciate our most valuable tools-words. Good writing includes smart word choices
and well-crafted sentences. Grammar and style: many writers would wish this one away,
but for a piece of writing to be considered good (let alone great), it has to follow the
rules of grammar (and break those rules only when there is a good reason). Credibility
or believability: nothing says bad writing like getting the facts wrong or misrepresenting
oneself.  In  fiction,  the  story  must  be  believable  (even  if  it’s  impossible),  and  in
nonfiction, accurate research can make or break a writer.

The low students’ ability in writing caused by the method or strategy that make
them bored and there is no good preparation in teaching so the condition and situation
cannot create good atmosphere in the class. It is a result of observation that has been
done  at  Palopo  Cokroaminoto  University  when  the  researcher  was  doing  teaching
process in their class. Therefore, it should be find out a good way to solve this problem.

Beside  solve  the  problem,  a  teacher  should  attention  the  writing  process.
According to Bouden in Karim (2013:25) before you write a single word you must: set

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your objective, assess your readership, decide what information you will need, prepare
your skeletal framework, test and revise your skeletal framework.

According  to  Hormazabal  in  Imran  (2011:13)  argues  that  writing  process
represents a shift in emphasis in teaching writing from the product of writing activities
(the finished text) to ways in which text can be developed: from concern with questions
such as ‘what have you written?’ ‘What grade is it worth?’ to ‘how will you write it?’
‘how can it be improved?’. In addition, according to Widodo in Imran (2011:13) points
out a series of activities in writing. They are pre-writing, drafting, responding, revising
and editing, assessing, and post-writing. 

From the  case  above,  it needs  a trick  to  make them interest and can  produce
good  writing.  Outdoor  strategy  is  one  of  strategy  that  was  offered  by  lecturer  to
overcome  these  problems  faced  by  the  students  at  the  sixth  semester  of  English
language education study program.

Outdoor Learning is a broad term that includes: outdoor play in the early years,
school grounds projects, environmental education, recreational and adventure activities,
personal and social development programmers, expeditions, team building, leadership
training, management development, education. Not only does Outdoor Learning happen
in the natural environments where participants can see, hear, touch, and smell the real
thing.

Vera  (2012:18)  Teaching  the  students  in  outdoor  classroom  has  important
meaning  very  wide.  In  fact,  this  is  not  available  in  the  classroom.  Activity  to  learn
outside the classroom to inspire students teaching and learning process.

After the students were learned by this strategy, the researcher is interested to
know the students’ ability. Thus, the researcher conducted this research which entittled
The Students’ Ability in Writing Descriptive Text through Outdoor Activity at Palopo
Cokroaminoto  University. Descriptive  paragraph  is  paragraph  which  expresses  or
describes  place,  thing  and  person  in  such  vivid  detail  that  the  readers  can  easily
visualize  the  described  place,  thing  and  person,  or  can  feel  that  they  involve  in  the
experience ( Hermawan in the web).

The  objective  of  the  research  is  to  find  out  the  students’ ability  in  writing
persuasive text through outdoor activity at Palopo Cokroaminoto University.

Method
This research applied quantitative method. It aimed to know the students ability in

writing  descriptive  text  through  outdoor  learning  strategy.  The  total  number  of
population was 100 students of the sixth semester of English education study program.
Purposive  sampling  technique  is  used  in  this  research  because  the  sample  was  the
students  who  had  joined  in  outdoor  learning  activity.  Therefore,  the  total  number  of
sample was 30 students. Writing test is the instrument of this research.

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Results 

The result of this study are elaborated and discussed based on the data collected
through writing test.

The result of students’ writing on the table 1 above shows that there are 1 student
acquired score 70, there are 8 students acquired score 75. There are 9 students acquired
score 76, there are 5 students acquired 80, there are 2 students acquired 85 and there are
2 students acquired 90. So, the mean score of the students’ result in writing is 78. It
means  that  the  students’ ability  in  writing  descriptive  text  through  outdoor  learning
activity.

The researcher gave more motivation to the students in order to be active in learning
process and did not get bored during learning process. The motivation  could stimulate
and influence the students to study hard. 

Besides  that,  the  researcher  gave more  explanation  about  writing  and  giving
guidance  to  the  students  about  how  to  produce  a  good  composition  through  outdoor
learning activity. 

The researcher also gave more chance to students in order to they could write easily
in a good composition because they wrote composition by using longer times. While the
researcher  gave  assignment  to  students,  the  researcher  always  observed  students’
activity. The researcher also gave chance to students to give comments or question.

Through  outdoor  learning  activity,  students  did  not  difficult  to  understand  the
material  and  find  idea  because  it  can  make  students  easier  to  receive  the  material.
Outdoor learning activity also makes them enjoyable in learning.

Besides that, the students’ participation in learning writing through outdoor learning
activity  had  good  response.  It  can  be  seen  by  the  students’  spirit  and  motivation  in
learning  and  feedback  from  the  students  about  the  material.  So,  students  active  in
learning process.

Outdoor learning activity also could help the students better able to get ideas, retain,
remember, recall important information and made connection one idea with the other
ideas. 

Based on the previous before, the students’ ability in writing descriptive text through
outdoor learning activity is good. It can be proven by the students’ mean score is 78 and
it is categorized good.

Conclusion

Based  on  the  findings  and  discussion  in  the  previous  chapter,  the  researcher
concludes  the  students’  ability  in  writing  persuasive  text  through  outdoor  learning
activity is good. It can be proven by the students’ mean score is 78 and it is categorized
good.

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