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penelitian dan pengabdian kepada masyarakat universitas bengkulu bengkulu, indonesia i vol. 6 no. 2: august 2021 issn: 2502-7816 (print) issn: 2503-524x (online) joall journal of applied linguistics and literature unib press universitas bengkulu, indonesia issn: 2502-7816 (print) issn: 2503-524x (online) ii joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 2 august 2021 table of contents the young learners’ perception towards english instructional practices using virtual platforms purwanti taman, sukma septian nasution, tommy hastomo, nur najibah sukmawati, laksmy ady kusumoriny ........................................................................................................... 181-193 attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and the government ratih laily nurjanah .................................................................................................................. 194-207 the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook for sixth-grade elementary school camalia fatih nida ..................................................................................................................... 208-227 the effect of vocabulary towards writing skill with reading skill as moderating effect paskalina widiastuti ratnaningsih, catharina clara ................................................................ 228-245 alan walker’s “lily” song lyrics to depict satanic tricks: a generic structure analysis as rhetoric idha nurhamidah, ssugeng purwanto, diyah fitri wulandari ................................................ 246-263 self assessment for higher language learners’ autonomy gita mutiara hati, wisma yunita, anggun citra sari dewi ................................................... 264-276 language style in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine irene anggita dennaya, barli bram........................................................................................... 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2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i1.10362 improving indonesian students’ rhetorical skills through suggestopedia suprapto1; rio kurniawan2 institut agama islam negeri curup1; universitas bengkulu2 corresponding email: suprapto22iain@gmail.com abstract this study aims to improve students’ rhetoric skills of a class at the indonesian education study program faculty of teacher traning and education university of bengkulu, in the academic year of 2018/2019. this research uses a qualitative approach with descriptive method to describe the conditions of rhetoric learning using the method sugestopedia for students from a class of indonesian education study program faculty of teacher training and education university of bengkulu, academic year 2018/2019 was employed. based of the research results in the first cycle there are advantages in the application of the suggestopedia method in learning speaking skill, namely; 1. the existence of student confidence and motivation in learning rhetoric. 2. by using the suggestopedia method, students can feel comfortable in learning, so that the imagination of students is more better. in the research conducted in the first cycle there are also deficiencies, namely the example of rhetoric given to students using simple aspects as that students tend to rhetoric based on the aspects used in the example of the rhetoric. the results of the data analysis of the second cycle of learning with the application of the suggestopedia method, obtained data; 37 students scored above 70 and mastery learning 92.5%. as the researcher stopped this class action research until the second cycle, because the research indicators had been reached. keywords: indonesian students, suggestopedia, rhetorical skills introduction rhetorical skills such as speaking in general became source for students because learning management is less attractive, effective, and efficient. this is directly proportional to the fact that there are still many students, especially students of indonesian education study program who have low rhetorical abilities. the low learning motivation of students in rhetoric suprapto, rio kurniawan 103 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 learning is reflected in the results of the assessment at the end of the lecture, only 63% of students are skilled in speaking. this problem arises because it is not only of students lack of ability and motivation to learn, but rather the learning situation that is lacking in a pleasant process. in this case the creativity of lecturers in speaking skills/rhetoric in managing learning has a very big influence in improving student learning outcomes. suggestopedia method is a strategy that has the main principle that is, suggestions that can affect the outcome of the learning situation, both positively and negatively, by occupying students comfortably, putting on background music in the classroom during lessons, increasing individual participation, using posters to member for big impressions while highlighting information. this method is interesting to apply because this has only emerged in the world of education and learning concepts that are in line with active and fun learning, so that later students feel comfortable and have high motivation to learn. theoretically, this study will examine the appropriate teaching methods to improve student rhetoric of a class form indonesian education faculty teacher training and education university of bengkulu, the academic year 2018/2019. practically, the authors expect the result of this study can given the information about teaching methods appropriate to the material of rhetoric, enhancing motivation at lessons of rhetoric and develop learning method in accordance with the language skills, especially speaking skill. methods participants the subjects of this study were a class of students in the department of indonesian language education study program consisting of 30 students. following lubis & siregar (2013), this study was conducted in two cycles namely cycle one and cycle two. it was conducted as an action research because it a substantive act to hold improvement. additionally, wallace (1998) stated that action research is different from other more conventional or traditional types of research in that it was much focused on individual or small-group professional practice and were not so concerned with making general statements. moreover, hewitt and little (2005) state that action research was a model of professional development that promotes collaborative inquiry, reflection, and dialogue. findings first cycle report: action planning initial activities in this study, researchers and partners made preparations, which included developing learning scenarios, preparing lesson plans, improving indonesian students’ rhetorical skills through suggestopedia journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol. 5(1), 2020 104 preparing material in accordance with the competencies being taught and preparing observation sheets. implementation of actions the first cycle of action was carried out on thursday, july 4, 2019 at 08.0010.30 for indonesian time. the implementation of these actions is carried out with the following activities: 1. the lecturer opens the lesson and continues with apperception. in apperception activities lecturers conduct activities in accordance with the steps of suggestopedia strategy, namely students are asked to close their eyes to provide comfort to students accompanied by music while giving suggestions with the aim that students have more motivation and confidence in learning. 2. ask questions about students experiences in public speaking. 3. linking student experience with the material to be studied. 4. explain the rules that must be maintained in rhetoric. 5. ask questions about students' understanding of rhetoric techniques. 6. students are given more reinforcement about rhetoric. 7. students speak/rhetoric the concept of speech by using appropriate word choices observation results at the time from activity of learning and teaching was going to take place, all students looked enthusiastic to take part in the learning that day. especially after the lecturer started playing music, it was seen that all students enjoyed the music. when the lecturers motivated them to music and positioned themselves in a pleasant situation, all students seemed enthusiastic about responding to the instructions. after the activity took place, it could be seen from the faces of the students that they had changed, from before they were not so happy to turn out to be like people who just got inspiration and new enthusiasm. one thing that became the spotlight of the writer were several students who shed tears. their reason was because the suggestions given by the lecturers touched the hearts of students. when the lecturer explained the learning material about techniques and good examples of rhetoric, all students seemed to really pay attention. after the lecturer explained that there were few of students who asked questions. the other students came to listen to questions from their friends. the lecturer gives the opportunity for students to answer questions from their friends. lecturers answer questions from students while providing reinforcement. suprapto, rio kurniawan 105 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 after the lecturer gave reinforcement about the learning materials that day, then the lecturer assigned students to make a speech concept in front of the public the theme "education, god/religion, solidarity and nature". when students speak/rhetoric. the next activity are the evaluation process, students are asked to speak in front of the class with a duration of 3 minutes each person. lecturer give an assessment of student performance. after the lesson was finished, the lecturer closed the learning activity on that day, all the student’s task had collected to be corrected. after the researcher corrected the results of the student's writing and evaluates the speaking performance of the students, there are a few things to know, namely: 1. there are still a distance between the theme and the substance of the explanation about the contents of the student's speech concept, so the impression of an idea is not well ordered. 2. the aspect of imagination that used was not perfect. reflection the first cycle action has been carried out, the results of speaking ability are known, namely mastery learning 57.5 % and only 2-3 people who score above 70. then, researchers discuss the acquisition of student grades and the results of the discussion decided the second action was needed (cycle ii). data on average scores and mastery learning can be seen below: a. the total number of students: 40 persons b. number of students who take the test: 40 persons. c. number of students who have completed study: 23 persons. d. mastery learning: percentage of mastery learning = ns x 100% n = number of students who score above 70 x 100%: number of students = 2 3 x 100% = 5 7 , 5 % 40 there are several findings from research in the form of strengths and weaknesses, namely: a. advantages i. there is student confidence and motivation in learning rhetoric. ii. using the suggestopedia method, students can feel comfortable in learning, as the imagination of student is more better . b. deficiency improving indonesian students’ rhetorical skills through suggestopedia journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol. 5(1), 2020 106 examples of rhetoric given to students use simple aspects so students tend to rhetoric based on aspects used in the example of the rhetoric. based on the results of discussions between researchers, then for the second cycle the rhetorical example was improved or replaced. the second cycle report 1. action planning cycle ii is a follow-up to cycle i using the suggestopedia method. this cycle is carried out as an effort to improve student abilities in speaking skill. before the second cycle of action is carried out, the researcher first prepares matters relating to the implementation of the action, which includes compiling a learning scenario, compiling a lesson plan, preparing an example of rhetoric, preparing material in accordance with the competencies being taught, preparing observation sheets. 2. action implementation the second cycle of action was carried out on thursday 18 july 2019 at 8:00 a.m. untill 10:30 p.m. for indonesian time. the implementation of these actions is carried out with the following activities: 1. the lecturer opens the lesson and continues with apperception. in apperception activities, lecturers carry out activities in accordance with the steps of the suggestopedia method such as the first cycle of action. 2. asking questions about students knowledge of the first cycle learning 3. linking student experience with the material to be studied 4. students in groups observe examples of rhetoric with the material to be studied 5. ask questions about that student understanding of the elements contained in the example of rhetoric. at this stage students and lecturer ask questions about each other of the words, style of language, and the pattern of rhetoric itself. 6. students are given reinforcement again about the elements that exist in the example of rhetoric 7. the speak/rhetoric of students concept of speech in accordance with the steps from the first cycle activities observation results of the second cycle students are feel happy like the implementation of the first act. when the lecturer gave instructions to enjoy music by positioning themselves in pleasant circumstances, all students seemed enthusiastic about responding to the instructions. students look focused on learning that day. suprapto, rio kurniawan 107 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 after the lecturer gave reinforcement about the learning material that day, then the lecturer assigned students to made a concept of speaking in public with the theme "education, religion/religion, solidarity and landscape". when students talked about the rhetoric concept, researchers looked around the work of students one by one and guide students at the same time. after the lesson finished, the lecturer closes the learning activity on that day, all student task was collected to be corrected. after the writer corrects and evaluates the appearance of students speaking in public, there were a number of things that need to be known, namely: 1. themes are interrelated with explanatory substance and ideas are neatly arranged. 2. the aspect of imagination used has improved reflection the second cycle action has been carried out, the results of rhetorical poetry of students have been known, namely as many as 37 students scored above 70 and mastery learning 92.5 %. in the second cycle there was an increase. mastery learning can be seen below: a. total number of students: 40 persons b. number of students taking the test: 40 persons c. number of students who have completed their studies: 37 persons d. mastery learning : 92.5 % percentage of mastery learning = ns x 100% n = number of students who score above 70 x 100%: number of students = 37 x 100% = 9 2 , 5 % 40 discussion the results of the first cycle of data analysis when learning speaking skills using suggestopedia methods, obtained data; as many as 23 students scored above 70 and mastery learning 57.5%. the results of the discussion of researchers, in the first cycle there are advantages in the application of suggestopedia methods in learning speaking skills, namely; 1. the existence of student confidence and motivation in learning rhetoric. 2. by using the suggestopedia method, students can feel comfortable in learning, as that the imagination of students were more better. in the research conducted in the first cycle there are also deficiencies, namely the example of rhetoric given to students using simple aspects so that students tend to rhetoric based on aspects used in the example of the rhetoric. improving indonesian students’ rhetorical skills through suggestopedia journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol. 5(1), 2020 108 the results of the data analysis of the second cycle of learning with the application of the suggestopedia method, obtained data; 37 students scored above 70 and mastery learning 92.5 %. so the researcher stopped this class action research until the second cycle, because the research indicators had been reached. conclusion and suggestion based on the results of research in the first cycle and second cycle, it can be concluded that: 1. student activities showed positive changes, were more interested and enthusiastic in learning speaking/rhetoric skills using the sugestopedia method. 2. suggestopedia method can improve speaking/rhetoric skills. this can be seen the value and completeness of student learning that has increased. based on the discussion of the results of the research and conclusions, the researcher conveys the following suggestions: 1. lecturers are expected to apply suggestopedia methods on learning speaking skills or rhetoric because they can improve student learning outcomes and student activity in learning. 2. students should be more active in public speaking and lecturers can help and guide students so that students are skilled in public speaking. 3. to support the results of this study, it is necessary to conduct a broader study of the application of the suggestopedia method. references hewitt, r, little, m. (2005). leading action research in schools. florida state university. lubis, a. a., & siregar, m. (2013). improving students’ achievement in speaking through the application of small group discussion method (sgd). transform journal of english language teaching and learning of fbs unimed, 2(4). https://jurnal.unimed.ac.id/2012/index.php/jelt/article/view/949/75 6 wallace, m. j. (1998). action research for language teachers. cambridge university press. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 94 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 5 no. 1, 2020 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i1.10046 confidence: before and after oral recitations jerald c. moneva1; audrey jane p. cuizon2 jagobiao national high school, philippines1,2 corresponding email: freezingfire1979@gmail.com abstract a belief in one’s capability to do and perform the task well is referred to as self-confidence. meanwhile, oral recitation is a form of speaking in front of other people to report information. hence, this study was conducted in jagobiao national high schoolsenior high school department. the researcher-made likert scale questionnaire was used to assess the students from the different strands, aimed to know the students’ confidence regarding their oral recitation performance and students’ confidence before and after they perform oral recitations. moreover, the quantitative data were analyzed through weighted mean and paired samples t-test. in which, the result shows improvement of students’ confidence after ten or more times of performing oral recitations due to their intensive oral participation. it means that when a student is highly confident then she or he is able to perform the oral participation efficiently. thus, it revealed that there is a significant difference between students’ confidence before and after oral recitations. in this study, suggestions were provided to students such as engaging in different activities that could enhance their confidence in all aspect and to the teachers and parents who need to help the students to perform well in school with self-confidence. keywords: oral recitation, self-confidence, senior high, students introduction self-confidence is a trust in one's self, abilities, and skills in order to do the tasks and achieve goals. there are lots of factors that influence the speaking activities and one of those is the affective factor in which it relates to the emotional aspect of an individual. it came from the word "affect" which means emotion. minghe & yuan (2013) state that there are two related aspects of affective factor and those are relational factors and individual confidence: before and after oral recitations 95 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 factors of learners wherein it includes motivation, anxiety, and selfconfidence. among all of these, self-confidence is the most influential factor in the progress of one’s speaking skills. in order to have an effective communication, they must develop their communication skills. one of the most effective ways to increase the student's communication skills is oral recitation. in which, oral recitation is an act of saying something aloud in public. it is also an act of student's reply to a question. in jagobiao national high school, the student’s performance on their oral recitation is poor. it is because some students felt uneasy and anxious when they are asked to do oral recitations. they are afraid to speak in front of the class. their communication skills are not yet fully developed because they cannot communicate very well. they tend to have low self-confidence. but since the teachers keep on giving a task and have it performed orally in front of the class, their self-confidence is boosting and increasing. for every individual, it is very important to be confident as it can help interact and communicate with other people without hesitations. being confident can seize moments and opportunities especially in a scholarly works and performances. on one hand, having too little confidence can be a hindrance of an individual from taking such opportunities in school, social life and beyond. students should develop their self-confidence through experiencing different activities and having a positive mindset. based on the results of salim (2015) through documentation and questionnaire, there is a positive correlation between the self-confidence and the students’ performance in the oral presentation as both variables influence each other. wherein, the students who have high self-confidence can communicate well and is able to conquer anxiety and negativity. meanwhile, students who have low self-confidence have a difficulty to speak in front of the class. al-hebaish (2012) finds out that the general sellconfidence affects the quality of oral performance in which the level of general self-confidence is a significant factor of a student’s academic achievement. according to jarvis (2014) there is a significant effect of selfconfidence in oral performance. thus, the main objective of the study is to know the students’ confidence before and after ten or more times of performing oral recitations and to know if there is a significant difference between students’ confidence before and after oral recitations of all senior high school students in jagobiao national high school. methods the data was collected from the population of all senior high school students of jagobiao national high school. the grade 11 has five strands which are jerald c. moneva; audrey jane p. cuizon journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 96 accounting and business management (abm) with 27 students, humanities and social sciences (humss) with 43 students, science technology engineering and mathematics (stem) with 35 students, general academic strand (gas) with 40 students, and technical vocational (tech-voc) with only 8 boys. for the grade 12, there are only three strands and that includes abm with 29 students, humss with 45 students and gas with 23 students. overall, there are 250 respondents. instruments a researcher-made likert scale questionnaire was used to find out the student’s confidence before and after ten or more items of oral recitations. the questionnaire has 10 statements referring to their confidence before and after oral recitations. the statements were rated through the five options which are extremely (5), very (4), moderately (3), slightly (2), and not at all (1). data analysis procedures the data acquired was analyzed through weighted mean and paired samples t-test through spss to find out if the level of students’ confidence has significant difference between the before and after oral recitations. findings table 1. students’ confidence before oral recitations indicators weighted mean interpretation 1. i am not shy to perform oral recitation in front of the class 2.76 moderately 2. i can speak very well in front of the class 2.44 slightly 3. i can do oral recitations with just few mistakes 2.46 slightly 4. i am very comfortable speaking in front of the class 2.37 slightly 5. i am able to do oral recitations better than my classmates 2.16 slightly 6. i believe i can answer the follow-up questions given. 2.46 slightly 7. i believe i can get an excellent performance on oral recitations 2.48 slightly 8. i am not afraid to raise my hand every time there is an oral recitation 2.49 slightly 9. i maintain good posture when i am doing oral recitations 2.56 slightly 10. i am not trembling every time i do oral recitations 2.35 slightly overall weighted mean 2.45 slightly confidence: before and after oral recitations 97 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 legend: 1.00-1.80 (not at all); 1.81-2.60 (slightly); 2.61-3.40 (moderately); 3.41-4.20 (very); 4.21-5.00 (extremely) the table above reveals that students were slightly confident before oral recitations with overall weighted mean which is 2.45. in terms of the indicators, the statement 1 which is “i am not shy to perform oral recitation in front of the class” was interpreted as moderately with weighted mean 2.76. it indicates that students have average feeling of shyness when they perform oral recitation in front of the class. cabe & selatan's (2012) study results showed that being shy is part of a person’s personality. the statement 9 which has 2.56 weighted mean, shows that students’ doesn’t really maintain good posture when they are doing oral recitations. the statement 8 “i am not afraid to raise my hand every time there is an oral recitation has weighted mean of 2.49 and was interpreted as slightly. it means that most students were afraid to raise their hands when there is an oral recitation. most probably, students were not really comfortable speaking in front of the class. they are trembling most of the time when they do oral recitations. this result is in line with al-hebaish's (2012) study which revealed that students who are not so confident were the ones who are uncomfortable and frightened. and lastly, with the lowest weighted mean of 2.16, it was shown that students were not so confident with their ability which it was stated that they are not able to do oral recitations better than their classmates do. salim (2015) indicated that students who have low selfconfidence have hard times to speak in front of other people. table 2. students’ confidence before oral recitations indicators weighted meaninterpretation 1. i am not shy to perform oral recitation in front of the class 3.17 moderately 2. i can speak very well in front of the class 3.00 moderately 3. i can do oral recitations with just few mistakes 4. i am very comfortable speaking in front of the 2.96 moderately class 5. i am able to do oral recitations better than my 3.04 moderately classmates 6. i believe i can answer the follow-up questions 2.69 moderately given. 7. i believe i can get an excellent performance on 3.02 moderately oral recitations 8. i am not afraid to raise my hand every time 2.95 moderately jerald c. moneva; audrey jane p. cuizon journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 98 there is an oral recitation 3.00 moderately 9. i maintain good posture when i am doing oral recitations 3.13 moderately 10. i am not trembling every time i do oral recitations 2.94 moderately overall weighted mean 2.99 moderately legend: 1.00-1.80 (not at all); 1.81-2.60 (slightly); 2.61-3.40 (moderately); 3.41-4.20 (very); 4.21-5.00 (extremely) the table 2 shows improvement in which, after ten or more times of performing oral recitations, students are moderately confident with overall weighted mean of 2.99 compared to before oral recitations, students’ confidence is just slightly high. at this point, students were moderately shy when they are to perform oral recitations, maintain good posture when doing oral recitations, and comfortable speaking in front of the class. this means that students’ were more confident after ten or more times performing oral recitations than their first attempt. this result is supported by martinez & villa (2017) result which showed that students are capable of speaking english after several times of exposure to a task. meanwhile, the study of (salim, 2015) revealed that students’ with high self-confidence were more assured in speaking up than those low confident learners. table 3.paired samples t-test of students’ confidence before and after oral recitation std. error mean n std. deviation mean before oral 24.518 245 7.481 .478 after oral 29.890 245 7.580 .484 the table 3 reveals the mean score of students’ confidence after ten or more times oral recitation (29.890) is much higher than students’ confidence before performing oral recitations which has only 24.518 mean score. it also shows that their standard deviation was about the same. confidence: before and after oral recitations 99 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 table 4. differences of students’ level of confidence before and after oral recitations paired differences t df sig. (2-tai led) mean std. deviatio n std. error mean 95% confidence interval of the difference lower upper beforeora l afteroral -5.371 7.306 .467 -6.291 -4.452 -11.50 7 244 .000 the paired samples t-test statistics was used to analyze the students’ confidence before and after oral recitations. this revealed that the sig. (2tailed) value is .000 in which is lesser than the alpha (0.05). the decision is reject ha. hence, there is a significant difference between students’ confidence before and after they perform oral recitations. in which, it means that self-confidence is one of the factors which greatly affect the performance of students on oral recitations. this finding is supported by (gürler, 2015) study in which he stated that there is a significant relationship between the students’ self-confidence and accomplishment on speaking. fook et al. (2011) revealed that students prefer to perform oral presentation in a teacher-student setting because it gave them less feeling of nervousness than presenting individually in front of other people. meanwhile, ri (2015) stated that students find hardships in stating their thoughts and ideas in front of other people. juhana (2012) stated that students’ are afraid to commit mistakes and afraid to be laughed at and judged by another person that is why they can’t perform oral recitations well. discussion the study revealed that the level of students’ self-confidence before the oral recitation is slightly high because they believe that they can’t perform oral recitations due to low self-confidence. jerald c. moneva; audrey jane p. cuizon journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(1), 2020 100 meanwhile, the level of students’ self-confidence after the oral recitation is moderately high because they are more confident in performing in front of their classmates and they have the belief and confidence that they can speak in front of the class well. it was presented that the level of self-confidence of the students before and after oral recitations has a significant difference. this means that there is an improvement on students’ oral performance after the oral recitation. conclusion and suggestions in this study, it implies there is a significant difference between the students’ confidence before and after ten or more times they do oral recitations. thus, students have much confidence when they are engage more on oral recitations. wherein, learners became more confident to speak in front of the class and do oral recitation after an intensive oral participation in the classroom. students have improvements in their oral presentation ability when they are more confident. meanwhile, students who have low selfconfidence tend to have low academic achievement in their oral recitation. this means that confidence influences the students’ performance on oral recitations. therefore, students should engage different activities that will help to boost their self-confidence. teachers should create effective and enjoyable teaching strategies in order to enhance the students’ self-confidence. parents should monitor their children’s weaknesses when it comes to oral recitation and try to find the best way to improve it. references al-hebaish, s. m. 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(2015). general self-confidence and its implication on students’ achievement in oral presentation. jeels (journal of english education and linguistics studies), 2(2), 34–48. https://doi.org/10.30762/jeels.v2i2.95 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 223 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 5 no. 2, 2020 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.11308 numbered heads together learning strategy for increasing freshmen students’ achievement in literature theory course fina hiasa1; emi agustina2 universitas bengkulu1,2 corresponding email: finahiasa@unib.ac.id abstract this study aims to find out how the implementation of the numbered heads together (nht) learning strategy in literature theory courses improve the quality of learning. the subject of this research is the first semester students of indonesian language education study program fkip unib who are taking literature theory courses. this study uses a descriptive method that produces a description of the extent of improving the quality of learning by using the numbered heads together (nht) learning strategy for students who become research samples. the application of the learning strategy in literature theory courses allows students to have active and meaningful involvement in learning activities both individually and in groups so that learning in literature theory courses becomes increasingly quality. data collection techniques were carried out through questionnaires conducted in two cycles it also used a test technique in the form of an oral test in both cycles. each cycle consists of four stages, namely (1) the planning stage (planning), (2) action (acting), (3) observation (observing), and (4) reflection (reflecting). in the first cycle the results obtained have not yet reached the required target. the required target is achieved in the second cycle. learning outcomes in the second cycle showed that 37.5% of students have successfully achieved the required minimum passing score. keywords: numbered heads together, literary theory introduction literary theory is a compulsory subject for a bachelor of indonesian language education study program (pbi) faculty of teacher training and education university of bengkulu which has a weight of 3 credits. this course is given in odd semester (i) with the general learning achievement of students being able to apply simple literary theories to various types of literary works (poetry, prose, and drama). through understanding literary theories, http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.11308 mailto:finahiasa@unib.ac.id fina hiasa; emi agustina 224 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 students are expected to have a basic foundation for advanced activities, namely analyzing literary works by applying literary theories that have been studied previously. the achievement of this course is how students can simply apply various literary theories in analyzing literary works. this achievement encourages students to explore various types of literary theories in order to apply them to literary works. the theoretical style reflected in the literature theory course minimizes the contribution of students as students in teaching and learning activities so that the tendency that occurs is learning to be oneway with a dominant focus on lecturers. the result is teaching and learning activities tend to be monotonous and memorized type. researchers have spread the initial questionnaire whose results indicate that the lack of motivation of students in studying literary theory. researchers hold discussions that produce reflections on the need for classroom action research by applying cooperative learning models that can maximize student learning outcomes. slavin (2005, p.4) suggests that cooperative learning refers to a variety of teaching methods in which students work in small groups to help one another in learning subject matter. in implementing cooperative learning there are five elements that must be carried out in order to get maximum results as stated by (lie, 2005), namely to achieve maximum results in cooperative learning, there are five elements of mutual learning models that must be applied, namely: (a) mutual positive dependence, (b) individual responsibility, (c) face to face, (d) communication between members, and (e) evaluation of group processes. one model of cooperative learning is numbered heads together (nht). nht type of cooperative learning is one type of cooperative learning that emphasizes specific structures that are designed to influence student interaction patterns and have a goal of increasing academic mastery. this type was developed by kagen (in ibrahim & nur, 2000) by involving students in studying the material included in a lesson and checking their understanding of the contents of the lesson. in addition, the cooperative learning model numbered heads together (nht) is a learning model that emphasizes student activities in searching, processing and reporting information from various sources which are finally presented to the class (rahayu, 2010). komalasari (2010, p.62) explains that nht is a learning model where each student is numbered and made into groups which then randomly the teacher calls a number from the student. furthermore hamdayama (2014, p.177) stated that there are some advantages in applying the nht learning model, namely a) to train students to be able to work together and respect the opinions of others b) to train students to become peer tutors, c) to foster a sense of togetherness, and d) to make students familiar with differences. number heads together learning strategy for increasing freshmen students’… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 225 in the implementation of nht there are several steps that are carried out as found by kagen (cited in tampubolon, 2014, p.94) namely a) students are divided into heterogeneous groups, and each student in each group gets a number b) educators give assignments to each group (for each the group is the same, but for each student it is not the same as the student number, and for each student the same number gets the same assignment.) c) the group discusses the correct answer and makes sure each group member can do it. d) educators call one of the student numbers to answer / report the results of their collaboration. e) responses from other friends, then the educator points to another number (there is a class discussion). f) individual quizzes and make progress scores for each student. g) conclude and announce the results of the quiz and give rewards. the cooperative learning model that is expected to improve the quality of literature theory lectures into something rational, cognitive, emotional, and affective for students is the numbered heads together (nht) learning model. based on the previous explanation, it can be concluded that the steps in nht learning are as follows (1) students are divided into groups. each student in each group gets a serial number, (2) the teacher gives an assignment and each group does it, (3) the group decides the answer that is considered the most correct and makes sure each group member knows this answer, (4) the teacher calls one of the student numbers with the number called reporting the results of their collaboration, (5) responses from other groups (6) the numbered head technique can also be continued to change the usual group composition and join with other students with the same number from other groups. the application of the numbered heads together (nht) learning model allows students to have active and meaningful involvement in learning activities both individually and in groups so that learning in literature theory courses becomes increasingly quality. research that is relevant to the research that researchers do is research conducted by pratiwi (2013) in her thesis entitled effectiveness of using numbered heads together to improve students' ability to understand text reading. the purpose of this study was to determine the effectiveness of the use of the nht (numbered heads together) method in understanding japanese reading texts in the shochukyu dokkai course. the conclusion obtained in this study is that the use of the numbered heads together (nht) method is effective in improving the ability of students to understand reading text in the shochukyu dokkai course. the difference between the research that the researcher will do with the above research is that this study will apply the nht learning model to literature theory courses with the aim to improve the quality of learning to make it more fun and meaningful. through the nht learning model students are asked in groups to present a final report in an interesting form. the final report is not just a paper as usual but is in the form fina hiasa; emi agustina 226 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 of a pocket book so that not only teamwork and communication skills are increasing, but also its creativity is developing. the application of the numbered heads together (nht) learning model enables students to have active and meaningful involvement in learning activities both individually and in groups so that learning in literature theory courses becomes more qualified. methods population and research samples the study population was all students of the indonesian language study program fkip unib 2019/2020 academic year. samples in this study were first semester students of class b indonesian language education study program fkip unib who were taking literature theory courses. instruments the research instrument is a tool used to collect research data. the instruments used were questionnaire sheets and pocket book assessment sheets and observation sheets when the nht was applied. in addition, the instruments in this study are also questions that will be answered by students to find out student understanding. data analysis procedures data analysis techniques used in this study were descriptive statistics, calculating frequency, and percentages presented with tables and graphs. categories in the data will be adjusted according to existing percentages. following is the formula that will be used in data processing. keterangan x = the value sought in percent €x = total student grades €xmaks = total score table 1. kategori penilaian (modifikasi nurgiyantoro, 1988:363) no percentage category 1 80% 100% very good 2 70% 79% good 3 60% 69% fair 4 45% 59% bad 5 0% 44% very bad 1. €x €xmaks x 100% x = number heads together learning strategy for increasing freshmen students’… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 227 findings based on research conducted in august to october 2019 towards 40 pbi students with the aim to improve the quality of learning in semester i students of class b ta 2019/2020 in literature theory using the numbered heads together (nht) learning model, the following results were obtained: table 2. acquisition of values for students cycle one and two value range alphabet description learning achievement target achievement of cycle value i achievement of cycle value ii 90-100 a very good 30% 10 25% 15 37,5% 80-89 b good 50% 20 50% 20 50% 70-79 c pretty good 20% 10 25% 5 12,5% 0-69 d not good 0% 0 0% 0 0% jumlah 100 40 100 40 100 from the table above it appears that the results of learning achievement in the first cycle are before the nht learning model is applied and the second cycle after the nht learning method is applied. from the table above it appears that an increase in learning outcomes in cycle ii is the cycle in which the application of the nht learning model is applied. next will be explained in detail the learning process that occurs in cycle i and cycle ii. this class action research plan will be carried out in two cycles, and each cycle consists of four stages, namely (1) planning, (2) acting, (3) observing, and (4) reflection (reflecting). cycle 1 after the material in the first cycle is complete, the lecturer gives an initial questionnaire to find out the student's initial knowledge of the literature theory courses. as a result, students' knowledge is still in the sufficient category which means it is not in accordance with the stated target. below is a bar diagram illustrating the student's initial knowledge of literature theory courses in cycle i. tabel 3. initial conditions of student knowledge of literature theory 0 5 10 15 20 25 initial conditions of student knowledge of literature fina hiasa; emi agustina 228 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 the bar chart above is the result of the questionnaire distribution conducted by the research team after learning in cycle i (before nht was implemented). the result is that of 40 students, only 20 people know what literary theory is, what is the function of literary theory, and what types of literary works. as many as 10 out of 40 students know various literary theories and how to apply literary theories to literary works. these results indicate that the initial knowledge of students after learning in the first cycle is still not in accordance with the targets to be achieved. the low percentage of students 'initial knowledge is also in line with the results of students' scores during the oral test in cycle i. oral tests are conducted after the implementation of group discussion learning with conventional models. based on the student achievement table above, it appears that the learning outcomes before the nht method has not been able to meet the expected performance targets in literature theory lectures. from 40 students there are 10 students (25%) who get an a. as many as 10 other students get the same percentage that is 25% for a grade c. the remaining 20 people (50%) get a b grade and for a d grade are 0 people (0 %). the target of learning achievement or completeness is a by 30%, b by 50%, c by 20%, and d 0%. learning outcomes in the first cycle using the conventional method shows that the achievement target has not been reached, therefore this study continues to the second cycle by applying the nht learning model with the expectation that learning outcomes increase. cycle 2 in the planning phase of the second cycle preparations for the learning tools needed during the teaching and learning process, include: (1) preparing literature theory courses, (2) preparing material in the form of power points, (3) preparing questionnaires and assessment sheets in the implementation of the model learning numbered heads together (nht) as a guide in research action. berikut adalah tabel lembar pedoman model pembelajaran kolaboratif tipe nht. table 4. the nht type collaborative learning guideline sheet for cycle ii * adapted from endah and eviliyanto (journal of education, vol. 15, no. 1, june 2017 stages learning process phase 1 determine the topic and organize students into groups 1. students join their groups. 2. every student has a certain number that melakat on themselves. 3. each group gets 1 topic to be discussed phase-2 the group has a discussion each group a. looking for information from various sources. b. compare and evaluate the relevance of sources. number heads together learning strategy for increasing freshmen students’… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 229 stages learning process c. explain, expand, and filter knowledge, and make information. d. formulate answers to questions. phase 3 the group prepares a final report and plans a presentation 1. determine the main ideas of existing friends. 2. explain, compare, evaluate findings. 3. relating findings to common problems. 4. decide on the most appropriate explanation to be presented and ensure each group member knows the results phase 4 the group made a presentation 1. the lecturer calls a certain number from the group discussing a particular topic. 2. other groups respond to the explanation 3. students with the same number from different groups join one group and exchange information about topics that have been mastered in the initial group. phase -5 evaluating 1. evaluate the ideas of research results. 2. evaluate knowledge. 3. combining all group findings. 4. demonstrate achievements as researchers and as group members. the results of the implementation of nht in the second cycle showed an increase in that of the 40 students there were 15 students (37.5%) who received an a. as many as 20 students with a b grade (50%). the rest is a c value of 5 people (12.5%) and a d value of 0 people (0%). these results exceed the achievement target which means that the application of nht in cycle ii in literature theory courses has improved learning outcomes. this is also in line with the increase in the final knowledge of students who have completed the final questionnaire illustrated through the diagram below. 0 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 final condition of student knowledge on literature theory material fina hiasa; emi agustina 230 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 the research team distributed questionnaires to find out the knowledge of students after the nht was applied, the results of which were 40 students, there were 35 people who knew what literary theory was, 32 what was the function of literary theory, and 30 people who knew what types of literary works. as many as 30 people from 28 students know various types of literary theories and how the application of literary theories to literary works. these results indicate that the final knowledge of students after learning in cycle ii (after the implementation of the nht) can be said to be increased. discussion the difference between the research that the researcher will do with the above research is that this study will apply the nht learning strategy to literature theory courses with the aim to improve the quality of learning to make it more fun and meaningful. through the nht learning model students are asked in groups to present a final report in an interesting form. the final report is not just a paper as usual but is in the form of a pocket book so that not only teamwork and communication skills are increasing, but also the power of creativity is developing. one such study with the research that the researchers conducted was a study by pratiwi (2013) in her thesis entitled effectiveness of using numbered heads together to improve students' ability to understand text reading. the results of the study show that the use of the numbered heads together (nht) method is effective in improving students' ability to understand reading texts in the shochukyu dokkai course. a very clear difference can be seen from the research subjects used, other than that previous research is more specific to one activity, namely reading activities. the research conducted by this researcher requires students to learn comprehensively so as to make students have active participation and roles in learning activities both individually and in groups that make learning activities in literature theory courses more qualified. based on research conducted in august to october 2019 of 40 pbi students with the aim to improve the quality of learning in semester i students of class b ta 2019/2020 on literature theory courses using the numbered heads together (nht) learning model, the result is that nht opinion can improve student learning outcomes. this achievement was achieved in cycle ii. the results of learning in the first cycle showed that of 40 students there were 10 students (25%) who got an a. as many as 10 other students got the same percentage of 25% for a grade c. the remaining 20 people (50%) got a grade b and for d values of 0 people (0%). the target of learning achievement or completeness is a by 30%, b by 50%, c by 20%, and d 0%. learning outcomes in the first cycle using the conventional method shows that the achievement target has not been reached, so this study continues to the second number heads together learning strategy for increasing freshmen students’… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 231 cycle by applying the nht learning model with the expectation that learning outcomes increase. learning outcomes in the second cycle showed that of 40 students there were 15 students (37.5%) who received an a. as many as 20 students with b (50%). the rest is a c value of 5 people (12.5%) and a d value of 0 people (0%). these results exceed the achievement target which means that the application of nht in cycle ii in literature theory courses has improved learning outcomes. the conclusion is the application of nht in literature theory courses in pbi unib students in semester i of class b ta 2019/2020 can improve learning outcomes. conclusion and suggestion from the results of the research that has been done, it can be concluded in the following. first, the application of the numbered heads together (nht) learning model for literature theory courses in pbi unib students in semester i of class b ta 2019/2020 can improve student learning outcomes. mastery learning can be obtained in cycle two of the two planned cycles. second, this improvement in learning outcomes shows that the numbered heads together (nht) model is considered an effective way to improve student learning outcomes. for further research, it is expected that in applying the numbered heads together (nht) learning model, it is expected that lecturers apply to different subjects. lecturers can use different learning models to be applied to literary theory courses and other literary courses. references hamdayama, j. 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(2014). penelitian tindakan kelas sebagai pengembangan profesi pendidik dan keilmuan. erlangga. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 87 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 1, 2021 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i1.12452 online instructional strategies for english language learning during covid-19 pandemic: a case from a creative teacher 1,2abdul halim; 2sunarti national dong hwa university, taiwan1; universitas muhammadiyah kalimantan timur, indonesia2 corresponding email: ah918@umkt.ac.id abstract this paper aimed at discussing online instructional strategies and learning quadrant for english language learning during covid-19 pandemic. therefore, the current paper reviews possible instructional strategies and learning quadrant used by a teacher in the teaching process from online platforms to ensure the educational goals are plausible to be achieved, although without having to attend classrooms regularly, especially during the covid-19 outbreak that happens during 2019-2020. employing qualitative design, the study involved one teacher and 34 students. the data were collected through observation and interviews with the participants. the data analysis involved data coding, data description and data assertion. the results showed that although the participants did not attend a physical classroom, the learning process with various approaches for learning and assessments were still possible to engage the students. keywords: covid-19, instructional strategies, language learning, online platform introduction learning in the 21st century has evolved in many aspects. not only has the paradigm of learning process changed, the instructions and delivery mode had also developed more advanced. aside from traditional classroom mode, which is fully provided in the classroom where teachers and students interact face-to-face, teachers have options to have other ways of lesson delivery such as flipped classroom and full online classroom. these options provide students a sift experience from the regular classroom. they can be arranged in a range of percentages for online learning from a very little to one hundred percent online. the internet has helped teachers in lesson delivery through elearning (moore et al., 2011). http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i1.12452 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i1.12452&domain=pdf abdul halim; sunarti 88 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 many, however, still view the internet as merely some tools to be used in the classroom. it affects their instruction and limited lesson delivery. in addition, the pandemic situation that happens in 2020 is a big issue that many schools are closed to avoid unwanted case because schools are highly potential for the spread of the virus. hence, many teachers are forced to teach through online platforms, and yet, the learning process they implemented was somehow following the traditional method. customarily, learning is the focus of the education process. when the students can construct their knowledge based on either through cognitive process or experience, they have already learned. in the present time, learning may occur not only in the classroom where the teacher and the students interact face-to-face for constructing knowledge, but it may also occur from a distance. under the umbrella term of distance education, distance learning has evolved with some different terms following the current development of technology, such as distance learning, online learning, e-learning, virtual learning, web-based learning, technology-mediated learning (conrad, 2006). a study by cohen & nachmias (2011) was conducted to trace the students' log in the learning practice through web mediated learning. it suggests that teachers can learn some aspects from the web-logs for pedagogical evaluation. this pointed out that there are some advantages that teachers can get in the process of learning through the web, namely immediate assessment, online exams, exercising, self-testing, tasks, and projects, as well as feedbacks (cohen & nachmias, 2011). these advantages can be used as a reference for a theoretical framework for online learning. the second study was aiming at exploring the impact of wiki-based international collaboration project on pre-service teachers' 1) cultural competencies, 2) the comfort using technology, including web 2.0 tools, to interact and collaborate with unknown colleagues, and 3) perceptions of ideas for using technology, including web 2.0 tools, in their future classrooms (ertmer et al., 2011). in the present study, the researcher would explore the sliced part with little exploration of how the teachers use their competence in the teaching approach, specifically their instructional strategies for their online delivery of the lessons. the third study was about the flipped classroom that took advantage of computer-assisted language learning (call). the study explored how the flipped classroom would benefit students' language acquisition since the flipped classroom was designed for the student to be the center of learning (bauer-ramazani et al., 2016). in the present study, the researcher tried to explore how the teacher can maximize the principles from the online stage of the flipped classroom, not only can the teacher use the initial stage as the concept delivery, but also the whole learning process as the government online instructional strategies for english language learning during covid-19 …. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 89 reinforces it through the ministry of education as the way of learning during the pandemic situation. the fourth study investigated how blended learning by using an elearning system would influence the students learning and the achievement of learning objectives. the results indicated that the students and the teacher would positively perceive the model of e-learning systems with innovative characteristics such as ease of use, logical and systematics, interactive, and appealing. it would lead to learning achievement (chaeruman et al., 2018). however, the classes involved in that study were characterized by blended learning that relies on both traditional face-to-face and virtual classes. in the present study, the setting was entirely virtual class. the present study, the researcher found a teacher in a public school in the capital province in central indonesia that is quite different and is worth for research exploration. therefore, the study aimed to explore what and how a teacher in a school handled the classroom amid covid 19 outbreak. then, it would have the contribution to fill the gap of the previous studies(bauerramazani et al., 2016; chaeruman et al., 2018; cohen & nachmias, 2011; ertmer et al., 2011) that it would use the framework of online learning for data analysis of the class that happened during the pandemic where all teachers and students were forced to learn at home with teacher’s facilitation through online platforms. it aimed to explore the teacher's pedagogical approach in lesson delivery in such a setting that it would be different from conventional blended learning or flipped classroom. the nature of the current study setting was also unique than of the fully online courses through mooc. methods participants by employing a qualitative research design, the study involved one female english teacher and 34 students whom 20 were females, and 14 were males. all participants, the teacher, and the students were informed that they were involved in the study. they were asked to read and to sign a research consent. the participants in this study were intentionally chosen by the researcher that they fulfil the criteria of uniqueness the initiated the study. where many of the classrooms during the process of online learning were found to be demanding and exhausting for the students, this teacher did direct her class in an interesting way that the researcher considered her “creativity” in conducting the classes worth studying. the creative ways she used to utilize some conventional online media can be investigated through some theoretical perspective. setting abdul halim; sunarti 90 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 the study took place in central indonesia. the researcher had access to a public high school in the capital of the province. the school was a typical school with the number of students around 600 – 800 students. the researcher and the teacher agreed to get a class of grade 10th to be involved in the study. the class was chosen based on the initial interview with the teacher. before the research took place, the researcher interviewed the teacher about the teaching process she was facing, the difficulties, and the teaching plans that she would do. the result showed that it had potential and worth for research. the research was conducted during the pandemic situation. the covid-19 disease started in late 2019 and continued to spread until in the middle of 2020 in the world. in indonesia, right after the president's instruction in the middle of march 2020, when some of the first the cases were confirmed in the country, the classes at school were called off for virus spread prevention, and since then, all education levels in indonesia were instructed to deliver their learning online. ‘study from home’ was imposed because the government did not want to risk the students at school. in such a setting, the learning process happened at home with the teacher's facilitation through online platforms. therefore, although all the conventional learning process at school stopped, it had to continue at home to ensure the curriculum's content materials were still delivered. procedures and data analysis the procedure started with the problem analysis found by the teacher and how the teacher solved the problems. the researcher was involved in the learning process as an external observer that the researcher did not have an active role in participating in the activity but present in the digital platforms. the reason for being an inactive external observer during the learning process was that the researcher expected his presence to be less obvious so that the threat for the hawthorne effect can be minimized. the teacher used various digital platforms such as youtube, google classroom, zoom, whatsapp, and google docs collaboration. the observation took place for two months. the teacher had the whatsapp group to handle the instruction to the students so she could tell the students what to do during the learning process and used other platforms to deliver the lesson or to assess the learning outcome. the researcher used field notes to record all the activities. the copy of students’ work on all platforms includes the documents from google classrooms, google forms, youtube links, whatsapp chats, and zoom records. these data were used to investigate the pedagogical approach used by the teacher to teach the students. in addition, the data were also used to determine the learning quadrant experienced by the students that has been designed by the teacher. the data from the semi-structured interview session online instructional strategies for english language learning during covid-19 …. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 91 was used to confirm the decision making from the teacher and the students' perception of what they had done during learning activities. findings the government of indonesia announced its policy to stay at home as the covid-19 was getting more severe in the country in the middle of march 2020. people were expected to work from home. it also affected the students at school where they should learn from home. the teacher was informed. she decided to look at the curriculum. a range of lessons for the semester has not been covered in the learning with the students. this would be the basis of her teaching in the future during work from home. initially, the teacher set up a whatsapp group for the students. the group functioned as the announcement board, or for feedback if the students had difficulties. it is beneficial since reciprocal communication could occur on the platform. also, the application supported sending documents such as word, excel, and powerpoint, photos, videos, internet links, etc. the researcher at the beginning joining the group hypothesized that the teacher would heavily rely on the whatsapp group, and the learning process would fall flat, and the students would only learn from home like normal where they only get some homework and submit their work once finished. however, it turned out that this whatsapp group was not the primary application used by the teacher, as she often instructed the students to learn from different resources. the following is the example of the learning process from observation note for chapter 8, ‘my idol’: the teacher told the students through whatsapp group for their learning for the week that they should have a gmail account. she gave the time for the students to create an account because it was necessary for their learning. she created a google doc with an open sharing account. therefore, every student would be able to access the file synchronously, real-time. all students were required to log in at the same time. on google docs, the teacher posted two pictures of two famous people from a different field. the teacher instructed the students to guess who they were. here, the students commented directly on the document. the lesson continued for vocabulary building. the teacher asked the students to work in pairs through the whatsapp voice call. they should work collaboratively to finish the task. they should work on their textbook and have a similar answer as a pair. once the time given for them finish, the students got back on google docs, and all pairs simultaneously posted the photographed of their answer. the teacher gave respond and feedback. abdul halim; sunarti 92 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 for pronunciation practice, the students were asked to type each word from the textbook and listen to the voice. they were requested to record their voice mentioning all the words and then added two sentences for their examples. the teacher gave the students 20 minutes to read a text about an indonesian singer and answer the questions. he told the students that they would have a zoom meeting that the students had previously installed on their phone to discuss their work results. they spent another 20 minutes discussing the correct answer for the student’s work. the class continued with some highlighted grammar explanation from the text. the students continued with google form designed by the teacher to assess the students learning on that day. at home, they were asked to make a presentation of a famous person profile on ms. powerpoints and have two-on-two presentation via zoom application with screen sharing with their peers and required to record their presentation. the videos were uploaded to youtube, and the link to the video was submitted to the teacher. the example above was one of the classes held by the teacher. in one meeting, she managed to have the class that was as interactive as possible. unlike the flipped classroom, where the students have pre-activity to learn the concepts and have more student-centred activities in the classroom, the instruction approach applied by the teacher used other platforms such as zoom, google docs, and youtube as the media for collaborative learning. discussion teacher’s instructional strategies the researcher found that the teacher used a variety of teaching strategies so that the teaching was not (borrowing the teacher's term) 'dull.' based on the observation, this technology-mediated learning also facilitated the students to construct their knowledge through facilitation. the teacher often initiated the learning through multiple and segmented tasks that the students could accomplish. it seemed that the scaffolding process was the basis of the learning implemented by the teacher. the principles used by the teacher in this study have confirmed the scaffolding techniques where the prepared lesson helped the students to access their prior knowledge and use them for further steps of learning (mehisto et al., 2008). in the learning process in the study, it was also still possible to have the collaborative learning strategies that previously may have been thought impossible for some teachers to implement. some might think that the learning process through online platforms was limited because interaction on online instructional strategies for english language learning during covid-19 …. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 93 the web was usually between teacher-students. however, the research participants in this study proved that the learning process could be done collaboratively through ma variety of online platforms. they could also learn both synchronously and asynchronously (chaeruman et al., 2018). chart 1. learning quadrant the chart above illustrates the learning quadrant. the students and teacher whose class was conducted held during the pandemic situation where students and teachers could not go to school were still able to get the most of the learning process. the observation in this study showed that the teacher could lead the learning process through three quadrants. in virtual synchronous, where the teaching and learning occurs at the same time (raharjo, 2020), teachers and students could have online meetings through some applications such as zoom, google meets, or even whatsapp for a smaller group. they could communicate with each other and applied some instructional approach that foster students' skills and simultaneously works on the students' interest so that the learning process could be smooth. collaborative asynchronous may also occur in the process of online learning. in the previous example, the teacher showed that homework tasks have the potential for collaborative learning that occurs anywhere. it means that the students have the independence to learn with their peers. hence, autonomous learning is fostered together with their peers. students could decide together with their peers for the learning process mediated by available online application. furthermore, self-paced asynchronous could also occur where students independently have access to learning anytime and anywhere. in this study, the teacher facilitated his students to learn online through uploaded materials on google classrooms, youtube for video materials, and ready-touse google form assessment with immediate feedback. it means that the students could do their learning freely. abdul halim; sunarti 94 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 not only the mode of lesson delivery did the teacher make the most for the students’ learning, but she also considered how the students learn. it was crucial because the learning process would have a greater effect to the students when they feel being cared for (gay, 2010). the teacher also has paid attention to the students’ learning style as it is essential to students learning development (mehisto et al., 2008). by paying attention to this factor, the students were observed to be more motivated. further, when the students were more motivated, the results were desirable (kyndt et al., 2011). assessing students in this study, the researcher also found the process of assessment that was conducted by the teacher. the evaluation process took place in the progress of learning, the formative test, and at the end of the learning process called the summative test (brown, 2003). the teacher ran the formative assessment during the learning process by giving them online exercise and directly scoring on the students' progress on the web. at the end of the course, an online test was given to the students for the final exam. the test consists of multiple-choice questions, short answer, and short essay questions to test their reading, listening and writing. some types of these tests would offer both teachers and students convenience as they could have immediate feedback, right after finishing the test (cohen & nachmias, 2011). meanwhile, speaking skill was assessed through a video call. the alternative assessment was another assessment done by the teacher as a supplementary to the tests. students were asked to collect the product of their works during the course to get an additional score. the types of work they should collect include videos, ppt slides, collaborative writing on google docs. this type of assessment was suitable too for the students because not only did they work on the task, the process of collecting information and prior knowledge used for the work was stimulated. the activity could help the students pass the zone proximal development (mehisto et al., 2008). some platforms, such as google docs, allowed the students to work collaboratively in real-time (halim et al., 2019). the students also showed that they could work together with a positive attitude. conclusion and suggestion the development of technology, especially the internet of things, has brought a significant shift in education. educators have the opportunity to enhance their teaching practices and the students' experience in learning. traditionally teacher and students learn in a face-to-face setting at the same place at the same time. however, the quadrant of learning offers more. they may learn in more diverse settings such as live synchronous, collaborative asynchronous, and self-paced asynchronous. in addition, online mediated learning also online instructional strategies for english language learning during covid-19 …. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 95 offers the ease of assessment process. whether it is the formative and summative test or the alternative assessment, the process of assessing the students can be more varied and the scoring can be done more easily. as discussed by the researcher, the findings of the study revealed the learning through online platforms would not hinder the learning process as long as the pedagogical approach was being considered by the teacher considering the characteristics of students’ learning style and collaborative learning. such learning settings could be the solution for teachers and students to learn during the pandemic that happened in the world during 2020. it was also important to note that the teacher could still make the students get the most of the lesson by paying attention to teaching and learning principles. the teacher should pay attention to the mode of delivery that not only does it promote independence in learning, but the students' learning style, students' cultures, and student-centeredness should also be considered. the study somehow also has some limitations: the participants' setting was that they were from the province's capital. most of the activities could happen because both parties, the teacher and students, had the facilities and were technology literate. the study's findings might be different if it were carried out in a place where not all of the students have access to such technology and have limited access to the internet. the future researcher could make the findings of the current study for conducting more profound research in the future to see if teachers have positive attitudes towards the learning process, how it would influence their teaching beliefs, and whether it would influence the students’ achievement. some study on students’ psychological development and congruence with the learning setting through different platforms could also be explored. 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2abdul muth’im universitas lambung mangkurat, indonesia1,2 corresponding email: rizky.amelia@ulm.ac.id abstract exposure is one of the obvious obstacles in the process of teaching and learning english. to figure out one prospective exposure in students’ daily life, this study investigates the effect of newspapers as a medium in enhancing students’ english achievement, especially writing skill. the objective of this study is to find out whether students assigned to read english newspapers write better than those who are not. the subjects of the study were 85 english department students who were randomly assigned to an experimental group and a control group. a quasiexperimental design was employed in this study. for six executive weeks, before the students were asked to write, the students in the experimental group were assigned to read english newspapers, whereas then students in the control group were not. by using mann-whitney and one-way anova tests, the results of this study show insignificant results (0, 273; 0,194; and 0,179). as the high proficient students also could not take the newspapers for their learning benefits, affective and intrinsic factors such as awareness and willingness had to be considered. keywords: newspapers, writing achievement, proficiency levels introduction lecturers spend their time, thoughts, and energy for their classroom. they use various media and teaching strategies in teaching english especially where english is a foreign language. among many available media and teaching strategies, some of them have been studied for instance collaborative writing (siahaan, 2014), short writing (kurniawan, 2015), peer and self-directed feedback (amelia, 2016), and mobile assisted language learning (hadi & anggaira, 2017). in reality, the results are still students produce mediocre work despite the good implications from the previous studies that have been mentioned. simple problems such as unfinished sentence or simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences appear on english department http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i1.13305 rizky amelia; abdul muth’im 98 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 students’ thesis. in fact, the material of dependent and independent clauses is given at the beginning of writing course series. this material is the foundation for students in writing although teaching writing has always been challenging and difficult (mastura et al, 2020; erniyati, 2020). therefore, students are supposed to master the types of sentences when they are on the stage of writing their sarjana’s thesis as their latest stage to finish the study. one of the efforts to help students cope with this simple but prominent problem of the mastery of dependent and independent clauses is providing good input. the input of good writing is good reading. as writing was done from a set of rules and principles (sokolik in nunan, 2003), a good reading source is written following the correct rules and principles of writing. one of the lecturers’ tasks is then providing good reading sources. in countries where english plays a role as a foreign language, the english reading sources are limited. however, it is not impossible to find ones. concerning with the principles for teaching reading and writing skills, newspapers fits to be used. from the eight principles for teaching reading by brown and lee (2015), the use of newspapers in teaching reading covers four of them namely offering a reading on relevant, interesting, and motivating topics, balancing authenticity and readability in choosing text, encouraging the development of reading strategies and building ongoing assessment into the techniques. meanwhile, from nine principles for teaching writing, the use of newspapers in teaching writing covers the account for cultural/literacy background, connects reading and writing, provides as much authentic writing as possible, and provides conventions of writing. even though studies on the use of newspapers in teaching english are rarely found, some studies have been done by several researchers. tafida and dalhatu (2014) used newspapers to teach various levels of students and found that it improved their english achievement. mehta’s study (2010) also showed that the use of newspapers encourages and motivates students as well as sharpens students’ language skills (listening, speaking, reading, and writing). ahmed’s study in 2016 was conducted to 30 first year of masters’ students of dhaka university. it shows that the use of reading newspapers improves the students’ vocabulary and reading skills gradually. meanwhile, anil (2017) conducted a qualitative study using innovative teaching methods in a second language classroom in india. she used newspapers, media, movies, interpreting advertisements, and creating sandblot. it was found that the use of newspapers is a positive way for students to learn the language meaningfully. different from the previous studies, this study focuses on one innovative teaching method only that is the use of newspapers on students’ writing achievement across english proficiency levels namely low and high to provide clear contrast. this study newspapers effect on students’ writing achievement across english proficiency levels journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 99 offers an alternative for the setting where english is spoken as a foreign language to which the exposure is limited. in studying english itself, students’ proficiency varies widely. it is known by the term of english proficiency levels. among some standardized english proficiency tests, toefl-like or english proficiency test (ept) is chosen for this study since this test fits the academic needs. regardless the opinion that toefl did not provide any writing section, the multiple-choice test of structure and written expression section were still used to make statements about a student’s potential writing ability in an academic context (latief, 1991: 95-96; weir, 1993:14). in other words, it was included in the indirect measurement method. in addition, toefl is still believed to give a clear picture of how proficient is someone and is able to map the students’ proficiency in english. the students are classified based on their scores. the students’ scores are listed, and three levels (high, moderate, and low) are made based on the scores. this selection cannot be done by deciding which scores belong to what levels at the very beginning since there is the possibility of varieties results of their proficiency. for the illustration, it is possible that only five students are at the high level, ten students are at a moderate level, and thirteen students are at a low level. as a result, classifying them by their actual scores manually is chosen. the control and the experimental groups’ toefl scores in the high and low levels are tried to be a balance of not having a far difference. there is also a point to be considered in toefl that the students who are in the moderate level were not involved in the data analysis for the ease to see a clear contrast of the proficiency. in this study, besides maximizing the use of newspapers, english proficiency levels are taken into account as they form a point of difference. moreover, by involving 85 english department students, the objective of this study is to find out whether the students assigned to read english newspapers write better than those who are not, across proficiency levels. to present a clear picture of this study, the related literature review, method, findings, discussion, and conclusion are described in the next sections of this paper. method this study employed a quasi-experimental research. it is aimed to investigate the effect of newspapers on the students’ writing achievement. for six executive weeks, before the students were asked to write, the students in the experimental group were assigned to read english newspapers, whereas then students in the control group were not. the consideration of this treatment is that because newspapers play a role as the exposure in the process of teaching and learning english (noom-ura, 2013). rizky amelia; abdul muth’im 100 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 the effect is also observed from the english proficiency levels particularly the high and low levels. therefore, the research questions to be answered in this study are formulated as follows: 1. do students who were taught using newspapers have better writing achievement than those who were not taught using newspapers? 2. do students with high english proficiency level who were taught using newspapers have better writing achievement than those who were not taught using newspapers? 3. do students with low english proficiency level who were taught using newspapers have better writing achievement than those who were not taught using newspapers? research subjects and setting the research subjects of this study were the people who fit the conceptual definition for this study. they were the second semester students of english language education study program faculty of teacher training and education, universitas lambung mangkurat, banjarmasin, indonesia. the students took guided writing class. they were experimentally suitable, accessible, and available. they fit the criteria of being experimented to generalize the results under this study. instruments the data of this study was collected by using a writing test as the post-test. the writing test was developed to measure the students’ writing achievement. the students in both control and experimental groups were asked to write a paragraph based on the given topics. this writing test was classified in the direct measurement method, and it represents the students’ writing skill. the data from the students writing was obtained and analyzed as the post test data. this data was scored by two raters. the sheets that were used during the treatment were also functioned to see the progress that the students made during the learning. data collection since this study employed a quasi experimental study, these students were randomly assigned to an experimental group and a control group. the treatment was given for six executive weeks. in the experimental group, the students were assigned to read english newspapers. meanwhile, the students in the control group were not assigned to read english newspapers. in the experimental group, the lecturer provided as well as asked the students to buy the english newspapers (jakarta post). however, the newspapers were not limited in the printed ones only. the students can reach the online version on their smartphone. they could download and newspapers effect on students’ writing achievement across english proficiency levels journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 101 read it anywhere and anytime. about the title of the articles in the newspapers, the students could choose any topic they like. during the treatment, the newspapers were used to introduce all the sentence types. the students were asked to find the simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences by themselves. on the process, they were provided an evaluation sheet on every sentence type (appendix 1) to assist them in learning using newspapers. data analysis procedures in the data analysis, the researchers conducted a preliminary statistic by analyzing obtained data for fulfilling the statistical assumptions on the homogeneity and normality testing. then, to answer the first research question, the gathered data was analyzed by using the mann-whitney test since the data was not normally distributed. after that, the one-way anova test was used in analyzing the data to answer the second and third questions since the data was homogeneous and normally distributed. finally, the last step to analyze the data was making a decision of accepting or rejecting the null hypotheses. findings the results of the students’ english proficiency levels prior to the treatment of this study, the subjects’ toefl scores were recorded. the lowest score was obtained by the student in the experimental group (283), and the highest score was attained by the student in the control group (540). table 1 demonstrates the brief results of the students’ classification based on their english proficiency levels. table 1: the results of the toefl-like in the control and experimental groups n mean std. deviation minimum maximum control group 43 413 55.69872 313 540 experimental group 42 378 48.19013 283 523 valid n (listwise) 42 the results of the descriptive statistics of the toefl scores above were used to group the students in high and low proficient students in both groups. the same number of students was 10 for each small group. the moderate proficient students’ scores were not analyzed considering to see the contrast of these comparable groups. rizky amelia; abdul muth’im 102 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 the results of the control and the experimental groups’ post-test all students in control and experimental groups finished the posttest. the data in the experimental and control groups were homogeneous (0,323), but it was not normally distributed (0,014 and 0,282). therefore, mann-whitney test was used to analyze the data to answer the first research question. the obtained result was 0,237 showing the insignificant result. the complete results of the post-test can be seen in table 2. table 2: the results of the control and experimental groups post-test scores mann-whitney u 780,000 wilcoxon w 1726,000 z -1,096 asymp. sig. (2tailed) ,273 unlike the statistical assumption of the first research question, the data in both groups of the students with high english proficient ability was homogeneous (0,450) and normally distributed (0,437 and 0,999). since the data was homogeneous and normally distributed, the anova test was used. the result is sig 0,194 which is also insignificant. table 3: the results of the control and experimental groups post-test with high proficient students sum of squares df mean square f sig. between groups 118,080 1 118,080 1,781 ,194 within groups 1723,661 26 66,295 total 1841,741 27 then, in low proficient-ability students, the data was also homogeneous (0,287) and normally distributed (0,536 and 0,654). similar to the second analysis, by using the anova test, the result is 0,179 showing insignificant result. table 4: the results of the control and experimental groups post-test with low proficient students sum of squares df mean square f sig. between groups 162,723 1 162,723 1,909 ,179 within groups 2216,518 26 85,251 total 2379,241 27 newspapers effect on students’ writing achievement across english proficiency levels journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 103 discussion the presence of newspapers in education is not a novel idea. it was evident from the establishment of newspapers in education (nie) by newspaper publishers worldwide aiming to build literacy by providing educational materials to schools and colleges. nie itself was designed to help teachers teach children about newspapers, how they work, and how to use them. now, nie exists in more than 80 countries according to the research by the world association of newspapers and news publishers (wan-ifra). in addition, based on the previous studies results concerning the use of newspapers in the classroom, this present study fulfills the gaps as it is conducted in the writing skill and across english proficiency levels. the first research question was initially set, and the statistical analysis by using the mann-whitney test was carried out. the result of the first research question is surprising that it is insignificant. the results revealed there was no significant difference in the writing achievement in the students who are taught by using newspapers and those who are not taught by using newspapers. the result of this study is in contrast with francis and dhanavel (2016), tafida and dalhatu (2014), and lancouchova (2006) as they claim that newspapers are ideal teaching material. however, it is in line with barkova’s study (2011) that found the difficulties and pitfalls of using newspapers in the classroom. they are double-take headlines, false friends of an interpreter, new meanings, buzz words, and jargon. jirousova (2015) stated that the use of newspapers seems to be a challenge. even though it is a positive challenge for students, she also claimed that newspapers should be included in the lessons for students to succeed in english real life. in line with jirousova (2015), cornish (2004) suggested that students can even create web versions of their newspaper to broaden their audience. student-created newspapers are an excellent way to teach most writing skills and promote the classroom or school in the community. the commencement point of the second and third research questions of this study concerning the english proficiency levels also show insignificant results. previous studies on english proficiency levels are scarce. tafida and dalhatu (2014) investigated language learning activities using newspapers to teach esl students at elementary, intermediate, and advanced levels. they recommend that the english lessons should be activity-based, some features of newspapers in english language textbooks, functional libraries and regular supply of newspapers should be provided, and activities and materials should promote students’ participation. meanwhile, a study conducted by namata in 2010 was conducted in different types of schools. they are rural, urban and peri-urban areas. in his study, namata (2010) used newspapers as tools for literacy in uganda. the study was done https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/newspapers http://www.wan-ifra.org/newsliteracy rizky amelia; abdul muth’im 104 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 on how the nie program contributes to the improvement of primary education in uganda. this study recommends deliberate efforts to be made at home, school and policy levels to create a favorable environment for the nie program to succeed. thus, the insignificant results of this present study show that the high proficient students also could not take the newspapers for their learning benefits. possible explanation for these insignificant results is that more carefully research design on the use of newspapers in writing class is needed. the researchers of this study have provided the evaluation sheet for the ease of use during the learning. unfortunately, it is predicted that the students implement this in the classroom only. even though the students are accustomed to reading english newspapers, the jakarta post, in reading class, they solely do it as the demand of the lecturer. in other words, it is not based on their willingness. this predictive obstacle is related to students awareness to study english through reading and expose themselves with the sources of english. since the time allotment to study english is limited, it is expected that the students realize to learn independently. moreover, length of the time to conduct the study should also be taken into account. as this study was conducted in one semester, it is possible that longer time is needed. another possible limitation of this study is that in the other context, for instance, english as a second language or native language, the use of of newspapers in the classroom is possible to use due to the ease. the applicability of the use of newspapers in english as a foreign language (efl) classroom needs more research studies to support or against these insignificant results. then, in relation to english proficiency levels, it is possible that the high proficient students understand the lessons better than the low proficient students do, but it is not with the use of newspapers in the classroom. despite the insignificant results of this study, the use of newspapers in writing class facilitates students to enrich their knowledge, motivates them to read and discuss, and provide good examples of a correct set of rules and principles in writing. conclusion and suggestion this study with a three-fold purpose namely to investigate the effect of newspapers in writing achievement, to investigate the effect of newspapers in writing achievement of high proficient students, and to investigate the effect of newspapers in writing achievement of low proficient students showed insignificant results. recognizing the cchallenges of using newspapers in a writing class, this study provides implications on using newspapers in the field of efl education. this study plays a role to initiate further relevant studies on the use of newspapers in efl classroom by newspapers effect on students’ writing achievement across english proficiency levels journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 105 considering a careful design of the treatment, involving motivation as one of the variables, and conducting as a longitudinal study. references ahmed, r. 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(1993). communicative language testing. trowbridge: prentice hall. newspapers effect on students’ writing achievement across english proficiency levels journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 107 appendix 1 lesson plan objectives: the student will be able to: ❖ use background knowledge to complete the “k” column. ❖ write simple sentences s/he sees from the newspapers. ❖ produce her/his own simple sentences. ❖ discuss what s/he has learned. materials: newspapers kl handout: simple sentence whiteboard lcd whiteboard boardmarkers kl handout: simple sentence write three simple sentences that you found on the newspapers article. 1. 2. 3. theme: ____________________________________________________________________ _______ title: ____________________________________________________________________ _______ author: ___________________________________________page :___________________________ is the article long? __________________________________________________________________ read an article from the newspaper and copy three simple sentences from the article. 1. 2. 3. rizky amelia; abdul muth’im 108 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 write your opinion in one sentence about the article that you have read. what punctuations used in this article? do you find new vocabulary items from the article? if it is yes, write them down. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 213 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 5 no. 2, 2020 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.10268 visual and verbal signs in line messenger application: a semiotic study venice wijaya1; thyrhaya zein2 universitas sumatera utara1,2 corresponding email: venicewijaya@gmail.com abstract the use of stickers especially in line messenger application is very popular among teenagers, although misunderstanding is often occurred. the reason for choosing line stickers is that they are full-sized and expressive so that many users misunderstand in employing it. in addition, line provides a wide range of stickers, and that is very important for users to understand the meaning of each sticker to avoid misunderstanding. this study aims to identify visual and verbal signs contained in line messenger. employing a qualitative descriptive research design, the researchers analyzed visual and verbal signs of 20 stickers and texts taken from line messenger application. the stickers are the main data while the texts are employed to support the data. the data were then analyzed by using semiotic theory with a trichotomy model proposed by peirce. the results show that every sticker contains qualisign aspects. it is also shown that every sticker is replica, but refers to the law. every sticker must also share at least one similar characteristic or icon with the object they represent and the sticker used must base on the topic which occurred. the symbol is in the form of keyword, making it easier for the user to choose the sticker variations. rheme and dicent turn out that meaning can be derived from the elements that contained in the stickers. while rheme contain qualisign and icon only, dicent contains secondness aspects. arguments show that meaning can be derived from hypotheses, standards in society, or even the sign itself. keywords: visual, verbal, sign, semiotics, trichotomy introduction along with the growth of technologies, people can express their words easier. messages itself can also be created by nonverbal systems (code). in line application, people can express their words with stickers. this shows that a sticker has the power of words (wang, 2016). but at the same time it http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.10268 mailto:venicewijaya@gmail.com venice wijaya, thyrhaya zein 214 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 can also be ambiguous and misunderstand, this is why people must also learn about the meaning contained in stickers. line, a messenger application, was first invented by naver, korea, in 2000, which in 25th november 2013, it reached 300 million users. different from another messenger application, line is the only application which offers more than 10,000 stickers with various kinds of stickers. the variation of ‘line sticker’ provides the users with many kinds of emotion ‘sticker’ which also are considered as a form of writing included in the pictographic writing. pictographic writing itself is one of the kinds of writing which consist of picture signs (the evolution of writing, n.d.). picture sign is used to represent an object that they explained. semiotics is an ideal tool which served as guidance to analyze a specific set of signs (sticker), such as the discipline of studying and documenting signs, sign behavior, sign creation, and sign functions. this is why semiotics is used as a generic tool to imply the data. danesi (2016) defines a sign as any physical form that represent something other than itself in some specific context. peirce defines a sign as a representament with a mental interpretant or can also be called as “cognition of mind” (noth, 1991). there have been some previous studies related to this study. the first is from nilasari et al. (2018), which have the same data with this study. the difference is that this study only focuses on the full sized sticker, in which it contains gestures with its full sized body, and this gives much more information than the emoticon (small sized sticker). the writer also describes the elements contained in the visual signs. the second one is from saputro. our study used similar theory, but the difference is his study did not identify the elements in visual signs, but only discussed about the meaning of the visual signs through the relationship of the representamen, object and interpretant. aside of it, writer also use some other published articles as references, such as jessica & franzia's (2017). the similarity of their study with this study is in the data, in which both of them analyze a full sized sticker. the difference is this study used peirce’s theory of signs meanwhile their study used saussure’s theory, from franzia (2019) the similarity of her study and this study is laid on the data, in which both are full-sized sticker, and from napitupulu et al. (2018) the similarity of her study and this study is that both using a visual analysis study. meanwhile the difference is that this study employs peirce’s theory meanwhile her study use halliday’s theory. this study aims to identify visual and verbal signs contained in line messenger who might be useful for linguistic semiotic studies, visual communication design, and other readers whose discussion related to visual semiotic. it is also useful to develop the knowledge about the description and meanings contained in line sticker. visual and verbal signs in line messenger application: a semiotics study journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 215 methods this study employs qualitative descriptive research which concerns with qualitative phenomenon such as human behavior (kothari, 2004). the descriptive method means that the writer give a deep description related to the data. data source of this study is line messenger. the data of this study is visual (stickers) as the main data and verbal (texts) as supporting data. the method in collecting data is by documentation. the data is analyzed by using content-analysis technique. content analysis is a research technique to make a valid inferences from texts (or other meaningful matter) to the contexts of their use (krippendorff, 2004). in collecting data for this study, the writer chooses the documentation method from one of the popular digital messaging application, line messenger. after collecting the screenshots, the writer employs contentanalysis method. data analysis procedures after collecting the data, writer firstly does a unitizing. in this step, the writer groups or distinguishes part of the data, in which it consists of verbal and visual texts. then the writer sorts out the sticker. the next step is sampling. in this step, the writer limits the observation to make sure none of the sticker being analyzed twice. next, the writer does a coding. in this step, the writer thickens the phrase which supports the sticker to make differences in the relationship of verbal and visual in each data. afterwards, the writer reduces the data to the important or related parts. in this section, the writer cut down the data into only the main data. the next step is the most important step, inferring. this is the unique step which contained in the content analysis. in content analysis, this step is very important because it is used as evidence for the findings. this step is also called as analyzing step. in analyzing the data, the writer grouped the data based on the elements contained in the visual signs. in this step, the writer used the peirce’s classification of signs theory or the three trichotomies (jappy, 2013). the first trichotomy consists of the qualisign, sinsign, and legisign. the second trichotomy consists of the icon, index, and symbol. meanwhile the third trichotomy consists of rheme, dicent, and argument. after analyzing and get the findings, the next step is narrating. in this step, the writer gives a description about the findings to make it clearer for the reader. in content analysis, some steps can be repeated more than once if needed until the writer reached the certain goal, especially when the writer verify or recheck the analysis. venice wijaya, thyrhaya zein 216 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 findings based on the analysis of the first trichotomy, it is shown that every sticker has a qualisign aspects on it such as the colors, gestures, shape, etc; legisign, which is the law of the sticker based on the standard that exist in the society; and sinsign, in which every sticker is a replica, for they have been modified. it can be seen that stickers which is attached with words does not affected by the quality contained on it, such as the color and the size. color, shape, and other quality are very important for the stickers that give meanings by their acts. it can also be seen that by using the verbal text as supporting data, the meaning of the sticker becomes clearer, as it related to the topic of the conversation. based on the analysis of the second trichotomy, every sticker have an iconic aspects on it, in which every stickers must at least shares one similar characteristics with the real object that it represents, no matter it is the shape, the color, the acts, or any other aspects. but then, one sticker can also represent some meanings. this is why the supporting verbal (text) is needed, to emphasize the usage of the sticker. symbol itself is the key word of the sticker. based on the analysis of argument, it is shown that meaning can be derived from hypotheses, customs in society (law), or from the signs itself. in the other hand, rheme and dicent show that meaning can be derived if we know the characteristics of the stickers and relate it to the conversations occurred. discussion fig 1. screenshot chat of m and a fig2. screenshot chat of group 9b wowow visual and verbal signs in line messenger application: a semiotics study journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 217 the first screenshot above showed the conversation between ‘m’ and ‘a’ in which it consists of visual (sticker) as the main data and verbal (written texts) as the supporting data. next to it, the second screenshot, showed the conversation between ‘d’ and ‘el’ in the group chat, which also consists of visual (sticker) as the main data and verbal (written texts) as the supporting data. based on the stickers and written texts above, the elements of the sticker can be identified by using the three trichotomy theory as what can be seen below: first trichotomy the first trichotomy divided into three categories: qualisign, sinsign, and legisign. qualisign is the qualities components contained in the material sign, such as color, gestures, ecpression, etc. sinsign is a sign which is an actual existent thing or event. legisign is the law of sign. table: 1 first trichotomy analysis data qualisign sinsign legisign in this sticker, it can be seen that ‘brown’s’ hand is pointing on the blue-colored “ok” word. ok word sticker is used as the replica of the general ok word the “ok” word is commonly used in the society to show ‘agreement ’ “cepat, kalau bs” it can be proved by the written text in which user ‘m’ used it as reponse towards the request of user ‘a’. in this sticker, it can be seen that there are blue-colored tears running down through ‘moon’s’ face. it can also be seen that he’s showing a wide-opened mouth which is square-shaped and he also wrinkled his eyebrows and it can also be seen that the blue-colored rain is pouring on his wide-opened hand cry sticker is used as replica of the general sign of crying act tears is a commonly known in the society as the sign of ‘sadness’ “tiap hari ada mate” it can be proved by the written text in which user ‘d’ used it to react to the information given by user ‘e’ every sticker contained qualities that can affect or give meanings of the sticker. the quality can be the color, the expression, the gestures, etc. in some case, the meaning in the sticker is based on the quality contained in it, such as what is shown in the second data, in which the colors (tears and rain colors), gestures (kneeling and wide-opened hand under the rain), and also the facial expressions (wrinkled eyebrow and wide-opened mouth) showed the meaning of the sticker. but in some case, the quality didn’t affect the meaning, the example of the case can be seen above in which the ‘ok’ word has directly give the meaning of the sticker, the gestures of conny and the color of the word did not affect the meaning of the sticker. venice wijaya, thyrhaya zein 218 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 every sticker is also a replica, because they have been modified. it means that every sticker is a sinsign. but then, they still follow the general word or meaning which has been known in the society, by that, the society can understand the meaning of the sticker when the supporting word did not exist in the sticker. the example is the ‘ok’ word above is a modified type, from the color, the shape, the capitalization, etc. which is why it is a sinsign, but it also refers to a law, legisign, which is a general ok word. in the other hand, in the second sticker it can be said that not every gestures of crying is has to occur under the rain. so it can also be said that the sticker is the replica of the real crying act that it represent. but it still refers to the law, crying act. however, every sinsign always refers to a law; this is what called as legisign. a law means is the standardization or the meaning or perception which has been agreed in the society. the first example from the sticker above is the ‘ok’ word. this word has been known generally in the society to be the word used to show agreement to a request or a statement. the second example can be seen from the second data in which the legisign is the ‘sadness’ word. the act of crying as shown in the sticker has been well known in the society as the act to show the sadness of someone. second trichotomy the second trichotomy divided into icon, index, and symbol. icon is a sign that possess the character which gives it significant (meaning) no matter its object has or doesn’t has existence. index is a sign which would lose the character which make it a sign if its object were removed. symbol is a sign that would lost its character which causes it a sign if there were no interpretant (meaning) table: 2 second trichotomy analysis sticker icon index symbol the sticker besides is the icon of showing an ok or agreement in which people usually use ok word to show their agreement the ok sticker is used by user ‘m’ to show an agreement towards the request of user ‘a’ the symbol of this sticker is the ‘ok’ word the sticker besides is the icon of the crying acts in which it shares the same aspects with the real object, the tears, the pouring rain, and the kneeing feet, as if in the film where there’s someone crying under the rain while kneeing on his feet. the crying sticker beside is used by user ‘d’ to show his sad feelings towards math class and the answer from user ‘e’ the symbol of this sticker is the ‘cry’ word visual and verbal signs in line messenger application: a semiotics study journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 219 in icon, it can be seen that every sticker must have at least one similarity to the object or the meaning that they represent. the first example can be seen above in which the sticker share the same characteristic, ‘ok’ word. but then it also has another modifier, such as the color, the brown character, and the exclamation mark. meanwhile in the second example it can be seen that the similar characteristic shared by the sticker are the tears, and the kneeling gestures which is then emphasized by the pouring rain. the real act that the sticker represented also has such characteristics, in which people always shed tears when they cry. index is used to show the main reason why the sticker is used by the user and to whom the sticker is addressed to. it is like the reason why the sticker is used. the first example from the case above is the sticker is used by user ‘m’ for user ‘a’ to show that ‘m’ is agree with the request stated by ‘a’. based on that reason, there is the meaning for the existence of the sticker above. the other example from the second case above is the sticker is used by user ‘d’ to show his sad feelings after he heard the information given by ‘el’ that everyday have math. symbol acts as the key word of the sticker. the key word here means that when the user wanted to use the sticker, the user only have to type the keywords and the variations of stickers with the same key words appeared, and the user can choose which variation they wanted to use. the keyword of the first example has been clearly shown in the sticker which is the ‘ok’ word. meanwhile the keyword of the second sticker lay on the act of it, which is ‘cry’. third trichotomy the third trichonomy divided into: rheme, dicent, and argument. rheme is a sign of qualitative possibility understood as representing such a kind of possible object. dicent is when there’s a real relation between the representamen and the interpretant. argument is when the representamen and the interpretant have a general characteristic, or a law. venice wijaya, thyrhaya zein 220 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 table: 3 third trichotomy analyses data rheme dicent argument the sticker beside is rhematicindexialsinsign because the ‘ok’ word is the only object that affect the meaning of the sticker, in which it represent the general word for agreement. it is a replica because it can be repeated and it represent the general ok word the sticker beside is dicentindexiallegisign because the indicator in the sticker is only the ‘ok’ word and not the act, although there’s still a character ‘brown’ next to the word. the ok itself is a general word,in which it is related to the meaning of the sticker which is to state an agreement the sticker beside is a (deduction) argument symbolic legisign because in the society whenever we answer someone with an ‘ok’ word it means that we’re showing an agreement and this sticker contain the ‘ok’ word which represents the ‘ok’ word in generally the sticker beside is rhematic iconic qualisign because the blue-colored tears represent the sadness, in which the blue-colored tears is the quality contained in the sticker, which represents the sadness. it is a replica of the general crying act. the sticker beside is rhematic iconic qualisign because the blue-colored tears represent the sadness, in which the blue-colored tears is the quality contained in the sticker, which represents the sadness. it is a replica of the general crying act. from the first data, it can be seen that it is a rhematicindexialsinsign, because the ‘ok word which is attached on it has given the clear meaning of the sticker. meanwhile in the second data it can be seen that it is a rhematic iconic qualisign. this is because the meaning of the sticker is derived from the gestures, face expressions, and colors on the sticker. in dicent, it can be seen that the first sticker is included as dicent indexial legisign because the ‘ok’ word itself has given the meaning and is a law, no matter it is modified or not. meanwhile the second sticker didn’t have any dicent because the meaning is fully based on the quality contained in the sticker. in argument, the first sticker is included as deduction because the ‘ok’ word has justifies the meaning itself. in the other hand, the second sticker is included as abduction because the meaning of the sticker is based on the hypothesis of the characteristics contained in the sticker based on the theory, sign is divided into three trichotomies, the first trichotomy is based on the point of view of the representamen, the second trichotomy is based on the relationship between representamen and object, meanwhile the third trichotomy is based on the interpretant itself. visual and verbal signs in line messenger application: a semiotics study journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 221 the third trichotomy consist all aspects on the first and second trichotomy. the difference is dicent do not have the qualisign and iconic aspects because it is a secondness. dicent can be divided into (1) dicent indexial sinsign, (2) dicentindexiallegisign, and (3) dicent symbolic legisign. the sticker above is included as dicentindexiallegisign. it is an indexiallegisign because it is in the form of word, and the word is the one which needed to be focused on, because the gestures of the ‘brown’ character and the other aspects did not gives any help in describing the meaning of the sticker. and the ‘ok’ word is a general word to state an agreement. meanwhile rheme consist of every aspects included qualisign and iconic, because it laid on the firstness. rheme can be divided into (1) rhematic iconic qualisign, (2) rhematic iconic sinsign, (3) rhematic iconic legisign, (4) rhematicindexialsinsign, (5) rhematicindexiallegisign, and (6) rhematic symbolic legisign. the sticker above is included as rhematicindexialsinsign. it is a sinsign because the ‘ok’ word is a replica of the real word. this can be seen from the additional of color and the exclamation mark, also the ‘brown’ character next to it. in the other hand, there is only one type of argument, which is argument symbolic legisign. argument is always symbolic because it is described by using words and it is also legisign because it is based on the knowledge of the society or the law that exist in the society. conclusion and suggestion in some cases, the colors on the sticker do not affect the meaning contained on it. in the other hand, sticker with clear object which refers straightly to the meaning can still be affected by the colors of the object. other than that, actions in the sticker with word help to reinforce the meaning of the sticker. it is also shown that every sticker is a replica, because it has been modified. but then, all stickers still refer to the law, which makes it easier for the society to understand the usage of the sticker. every sticker must also have the least one similar characteristic with the object they. because when it comes to the meaning in the sticker, it is found that stickers with the same general meaning can be used as response towards different condition. to make user easier, there is a key word which can be typed and the variations of the sticker can be chosen. this key word is called as symbol. it is suggested that this research can be developed into a more specific explanation, such as the meaning of each colors, gestures, properties, etc. the writers hope that this research can be useful to everyone who read 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(2016). more than words? the effect of line character sticker use on intimacy in the mobile communication environment. social science computer review. https://doi.org/10.1177/0894439315590209 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 149 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 1, 2021 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i1.13602 a rhetorical analysis of comments and delivery strategy on ted talks ildi kurniawan universitas bengkulu, indonesia corresponding email: ildikurniawan@unib.ac.id abstract the purpose of this research is to describe the comments and its delivery strategy on the speech entitled “do schools kill creativity? by sir ken robinson on ted.com. the data of this research were 50 comments of the videos (2016-2020) which contained comments on speaker or talk style not relating to talk content. this research adopted the comment theory analysis by tsou, a. et.al (2014). coding process and content analysis was used to see delivery strategy by the speaker. the findings of the research showed that from the total of the comments, there were 38 comments on speaker delivery, then followed by comment on praise and criticism of speaker, 13 and 2 comments, respectively. there was no comment on both personal anecdote and other comments on the speaker. also, from the comments on speaker delivery, it was revealed that the comments on the quality of delivery were attractive, sincere, knowledgeable, fluent, accurate, effective, and efficient. finally, it was also found that both verbal and non-verbal delivery strategies were used very well by the speaker in his speech. keywords: rhetorical, comment, delivery, ted talk introduction when the researcher was searching one of the videos on ted.com, the researcher found an interesting video which gained its position as one of the top videos on the website. in the video, the audience looked like enjoying the event; they laughed, clapped their hands, and gave standing applause at the end. however, the speaker did not have any special slides like others; he just delivered a talk with some jokes. surprisingly, the video has been seen many times globally and recently has reached almost five thousand comments from viewers. then it raised questions why this video has so many comments and why people gave comments on it. this, as a matter of fact, caused me to find out this study, seeking the answer for my curiosity. http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i1.13602 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i1.13602&domain=pdf ildi kurniawan 150 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 in term of commenting on video, the comments are not only limited to expression of like and dislikes but also “care what other people think about what they have created” (rogers, 2017 p.6). rogers emphasizes that the comments could be a way for commenters to feel connected with the videos. meanwhile for both platforms and speakers, the comments can be medium to see how good they work on the videos, and to check how well the speakers when they deliver a speech, respectively. however, the problems are how delivery strategy can attract people giving comments and how audiences’ comments can measure speaker’s delivery strategy on the speech. previous studies such as tsou, a.et. al (2014) have examined on audience’s comments on ted talks video which were posted on ted.com and on youtube to see the differences between the comments from the two platforms and presenter characteristics. other studies both focus on classification of comments which are based some criteria that participants have posted (santiago, 2014) and how comments’ tools can pave the way for commenters to get closed with the speakers (rogers, 2017). on the other hand, porter (2019) emphasizes to retheorize a rhetorical theory of delivery for internet-based communications. however, a study on how a comment and a delivery strategy on the video interconnected on one speaker’s speech has less attention among scholars. certainly, there was a research concerning with analyzing audience, yet it was about relationship between writer-audience not speaker-audience relationship like in this study (park, 1986). moreover, some researchers, for examples, just did a rhetorical analysis on certain speech by famous figures (maguire, 2014; stewart, 2012; solmsen, 1938). another researcher, on the other hand, did a rhetorical analysis to see its significance to rhetoric and composition field (allen &flynn, 2016), meanwhile, the others just gave an explanation about digital rhetoric or analyze the visual rhetoric on digital writing scope (hocks, 2003) and visual rhetoric in advertisement (mcquarrie & mick, 1999).therefore, in this research, the researcher proposes two research questions namely: 1) what comments (not related to content) are depicted from the audience on the talk particularly on its delivery? 2) what types of delivery strategy are used by the speaker when delivering a speech on the talk? by identifying those research questions above, thus, the purpose of this case study is to describe the comments and its delivery strategy on the speech entitle “do schools kill creativity? by sir ken robinson on ted.com. methods the method of this research is a case study. a case study was used because this was suitable with the topic and it was in line with statement of creswell and poth (2018) who said, “in the case study, the investigator/researcher explorers a real-life, contemporary bounded system (a case) or multiple bounded systems (cases) over time, through detailed, in-depth data collection a rhetorical analysis of comments and delivery strategy on ted talks journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6 (1), 2021 151 involving multiple sources of information, and report a case description and case themes”. the type of case study applied here was intrinsic case study which tried to describe one of videos on ted.com which has attracted many people around the globe to watch and give a comment. the focus was on the case itself because the case presents an unusual or unique situation. then, the objective of this case study was to illustrate a unique case, a case that has unusual interest and of itself and needs to be described and detailed (creswell and poth, 2018). because the case has its uniqueness, therefore, the researcher described it in detail about the speaker of video in term of delivery strategy and comments from the viewers or participants available under the video on the website. in this research, the data were originally obtained from a video on www.ted.com entitled “do schools kill creativity? “by sir ken robinson. the reason to choose this video is because this one is the first place of the most popular talks of all times on ted website with more than sixty-four million views. also, this video has the highest comments from audiences (4899 comments) since it was firstly launched in 2006. the data of this research were comments from the audience on the video. however, due to time constraint, the researcher just collected 50 comments purposively from 2016-2020. the comments were taken if they were non-related on content and in english only. then, the video was also observed by filling out the observation lists which was aimed to see speaker’s delivery strategy while speaking. the data were stored on computer and had a special folder for the downloaded data and classify the comments from each participant with anonymous name of folders. data analysis procedures tsou, a. et.al (2014) categorizes the comments into eight types. type 1 is comment on speaker or talk style not relating to talk content; type 2 is comment on talk; type 3 is other interaction with previous commenter with no discussion of talk content; type 4 is meta comment about ted itself; type 5 is spam (irrelevant, marketing or promotional not related to talk) ; type 6 is selfpromotion (related to talk); type 7 is other (something in the comment that does not match any of the above categories) and type 8 is pointer (comment contains citation, hyperlink, book/article title or other pointer to external information). however, this research adopted the type 1 comment only. this model of content analysis was taken since it described fully about the way how to categorize the comments into subcategories which helped the researcher easily to identify the types of the comments which focus on delivery. table 1 shows the example of how to code the comments. table: 1 theme and its categories ildi kurniawan 152 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 theme categories code comment on speaker or talk style not relating to talk content personal anecdote (self-identification with speaker) 1a criticism of speaker (not the talk or message) 1b praise of speaker (not the talk or video) 1c comment on speaker demographics 1d other comment on speaker 1e comment on speaker delivery/style (with or without praise or criticism 1f table: 2 the coding processes audience number participants’ comments open code subcategories categories code 24 sir ken robinson's argument on how schools kill the creativity of its students is valid. schools are teaching kids that nothing less of perfect will do and that mistakes will destroy your future in getting an education or job. this stigma is toxic and incorrect, mistakes allow people to grow and develop their knowledge. education isn't just mathematics and english; education includes the fine arts and sports. studies on the brain have shown that people who participate in music, dance, band, sports, etc, are smarter and less stressed. however, a "core class" teacher who sees a student drawing or singing in their classroom would view it as a distraction, but if you place a kid in the fine “… robinson’s use of humor and rhetorical questions…” code ep, year of 2017) humor and rhetorical questions comment on speaker delivery 1f a rhetorical analysis of comments and delivery strategy on ted talks journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6 (1), 2021 153 arts their talent will be embraced and uplifted. robinson's use of humor and rhetorical questions proves that core classes are tearing down students and in turn killing their creativity. (code ep, year of 2017) to identify what types of delivery strategy imposed by the speakers in his speech, the researcher analyzed it by using the characteristics of two types of delivery strategy proposed by thomson and rucker (2002) who defined some features for each type of delivery. the features of verbal delivery are the speaker’s pace/speed that makes the speech understandable; the speaker’s volume makes the speech understandable; the speaker is relaxed and comfortable when speaking; and the speaker uses her/his voice expressively. meanwhile, the features of nonverbal delivery are the speaker’s behaviors (i.e., gestures) are smooth; the speaker’s eye contact adds to the speech effect; and the speaker uses his or her body expressively. from the features of delivery strategies above, the researcher adopted it into some indicators of delivery and made it into observation list to help identifying each characteristic of both verbal and nonverbal delivery. the example of observation sheet can be seen in the table 3 table: 3 observation sheet findings in this research, there were two questions which needed to answer. they were: 1. what comments (not related to content) are depicted from the audience on the talk particularly on its delivery? 2.what types of delivery strategy are used by the speaker when delivering a speech on the talk? what comments (not related to content) are depicted from the audience on the talk particularly on its delivery? video title delivery strategy reflective notes verbal nonverbal pace/speed volume voice gestures eye movement body movement ildi kurniawan 154 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 firstly, to answer the question 1, the overall comments which contained “nonrelated to content” were presented as follow. graph 1. overall result of comments on not related to content from the graph above, the number of comments on speaker delivery was the highest one, 38 comments from the total sample, followed by comment on praise of speaker and criticism of speaker with 13 and 2 comments, respectively. there was no comment on personal anecdote or other comment on speaker. also, it was found that there were three comments (see appendix audience no. 4, 13 and 20) which contained comments on both praise speaker and on speaker delivery. meanwhile, after analyzing the audiences’ comment on its delivery strategy, it was found that the speaker used these following delivery strategies on his speech: graph 2. comments on delivery strategies from the graph 2, the speaker mostly used humor on his delivery strategy with 24 comments on it, then followed by the language, story, and example with 5, 3 and 2 comments, respectively. besides, allusion and analysis were the least delivery strategy used by speakers with one comment for each. 0 2 1 3 0 3 8 p e r s o n a l a n e c d o t e c r i t i c i m s o f s p e a k e r p r a i s e o f s p e a k e r o t h e r c o m m e n t o n s p e a k e r c o m m e n t o n s p e a k e r d e l i v e r y 2 4 5 3 2 1 1 h u m o r l a n g u a g e s t o r y e x a m p l e a l l u s i o n a n a l y s i s a rhetorical analysis of comments and delivery strategy on ted talks journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6 (1), 2021 155 what types of delivery strategy are used by the speaker when delivering a speech on the talk? for the second question, “what types of delivery strategy are used by the speaker when delivering a speech on the talk?”. the result of the analysis based on the observation sheet provided for this question was presented in the table 4. table: 4 delivery strategy are used by the speaker from the table 4 above, it is clearly seen that the speaker used both verbal and nonverbal strategy while delivering his speech in front of his audience. overall, in verbal strategy, the speaker totally has used normal pace, nice volume and clear sound and appropriate gestures. however, in nonverbal strategy, speaker did not use body movement very well but eye movement. discussion from the previous results, it was found that there were two types of comments on speaker delivery given by audiences: the quality of the delivery and the delivery strategy used by speaker. the comments on the quality of the delivery included attractive, sincere, and knowledgeable, fluent, accurate, effective, and efficient. each of this category was taken from the statements or comments below: •attractive delivery this comment form audience no.2 who said “this is definitely both an interesting and informative speech! the speaker's way of delivering the presentation really attracts me! he is a real public speaker! (jd,2020). •sincere and knowledgeable delivery “follow that! sir ken robinson certainly knows how to make a speech…. it was delivered with sincerity.” (dp,2019) •fluent delivery video title delivery strategy reflective notes verbal nonverbal pace/speed volume voice gestures eye movement body movement do schools kill creativity? ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ x ildi kurniawan 156 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 “…robinson is able to fluently and eloquently deliver his speech with a balanced amount of comedy, gaining the audience's appeal in order to turn their attention to the issue of creativity...” (an,2017) •accurate and well delivery “sir ken robinson's point that schools are killing creativity is very accurate and well delivered...” (js,2017) •effective and efficient delivery “…his delivery is effective and efficient, leaving the audience with a call to actionfix the broken system.” (as,2016) also, from the comments, it is important for a public speaker to consider that a good delivery should contain those values and they are certainly found on sir ken robinson’s speech. meanwhile, after analyzing the audiences’ comment on its delivery strategy, it was found that the speaker used these following delivery strategies on his speech: •humor from the comments, it was found that the speaker mostly used humor when delivering his speech. some forms of humors described by audience could be in forms of comedy, irony, satire, sarcasm. here are some comments regarding the use of humor: “…sir ken robinson relies on his use of comedic humor to make the audience laugh and ponder on the thoughts he left in their heads. through the rhetorical questions and humor, he amplifies his idea that schools are based purely on core learning and are killing the creativity in children”. (ts,2016) “...the rhetoric device robinson continually uses throughout this ted talk is humor. his sarcastic remarks throughout the speech keep the audience focused on the overall message, which is people need to piece back together a school system that encourages creativity, rather than kill it. (es,2016) “…robinson does a wonderful job portraying that creativity should be a hierarchy to common core education through humor, irony and at points satire, as well as allusions…”. (cm,2016) in addition, according to the audience, the use of the humor in delivering a speech could be specifically the way to: a) gain the audience's appeal to turn their attention to the issue (an,2017); b) make speech fun to listen to and strengthens argument (af,2017); c) keep audience not only a rhetorical analysis of comments and delivery strategy on ted talks journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6 (1), 2021 157 entertained but thinking. (jm, 2016)”; d) keep audiences engaged. (al, 2016; ah,2016; dg,2016); e) make the speech flow more easily and to captivate the audience (df, 2016; ss,2016); f) make the audience laugh and ponder on the thoughts he left in their heads. (ts,2016); g) allow the audience to feel comfortable and connect easier to speaker (ja,2016); h) keep the audience focused on what to say. (lr,2016)); i) make speaker familiar with the audience (lm,2016). therefore, from that functions, it was clearly seen that the speakers successfully delivered his speech by giving some jokes or humors to get the audience’s attention and so the audience felt happy, comfortable, focused, and understood with the points delivered by the speaker. •language in this context, it was found that some audience considered that the speaker used language skill as the strategy of delivering speech such as the use of rhetorical question, simple and concise language, device of ethos. here are some examples of comments regarding this use. “…through the rhetorical questions and humor, he amplifies his idea that schools are based purely on core learning and are killing the creativity in children.”. (ts,2016). then. the use of this rhetorical question is quite important for a public speaker as cc, 2016 mentions that “…sir ken robinson most effectively uses rhetorical questions to support his argument…” cc,2016). “i would like to say that sir ken robinson is a great public speaker as he uses simple and concise language to present his ideas…” (mr,2020) “…the speaker uses the device of ethos by giving personal examples of his own son and sympathizing with the crowd…” (sr,2017) •story here, it was clearly seen that the audience stressed the importance of giving a story whether personal story or short story while delivering a speech since it could make listeners fun with speech and help listeners understand it. as mentioned by two audience below: “…his use of humor and personal experiences makes his speech fun to listen to and also strengthens his argument…” (af,2017) ildi kurniawan 158 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 “…robinson utilizes much pathos in his audience via funny short stories to engage his listeners, making it easier for them to connect with his argument...” (jd, 2016) •examples it was also important for speakers to support his or her arguments by giving some examples while they were giving his or her speech in public. these examples help audience understand the speech but bear in mind that the example should be valid and easy to understand by audience. below are ample of audience’s comment concerning this issue: “…sir ken robinson's humorous examples keep the audience captivated and hungry for more throughout his presentation and his large ...range of examples provide ample support for his claim that schools are indeed killing creativity.” (ss,2016). “…robinson does an excellent job of keeping the audience engaged with his use of humor, while still providing valid examples for analysis of his point...” (ah,2016) •allusion audience also saw an allusion or a reference as an important strategy for speaker while delivering speech. below were the comments from the audience regarding on this matter. (“…robinson does a wonderful job portraying that creativity should be a hierarchy to common core education through humor, irony and at points satire, as well as allusions. (cm,2016) •analysis in this context, the speaker talked a lot about one of social life matters that is education system. by analyzing it and try to connect it with social life, it could be an interesting topic for audience to listen. here was the example of audience’s comment on this issue. “…sir ken robinson gives a great blend of humor and an analysis of social relations to give an overview of education system…” (dk,2020) moreover, dealing with the delivery strategy are used by the speaker when delivering a speech on the talk, the researcher could summarize that both verbal and non-verbal delivery strategies were used successfully by the speaker in his speech to public. take for examples, in term of verbal delivery a rhetorical analysis of comments and delivery strategy on ted talks journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6 (1), 2021 159 such as pace or speed, the speaker spoke in normal pace, so it was easy to follow. further, the volume was nice that very word could be heard clearly including the voice or tone as well. with his british accents, the speech was totally unique and easy to understand. on the other hand, on non-verbal delivery strategy, especially body movement, the speaker did not move so much; mostly just standing in the center; no walking around. therefore, it felt like rather boring to watch because the speaker was mostly staying in the middle of the stage. however, for gestures and eyes contact, the speaker completely did a nice job. he used his hands and forefinger to express the ideas or to stress something important on his speech. eyes contact to the audience also contributes a lot on his speech. the speaker was considerably good at getting attention from the audience by looking at them proportionally. good lighting and zooming on the speaker’s face also definitely helped audience to get connected with the speaker. unfortunately, this speech was not equipped with a projector or slide displayed during this speech. however, this situation helped the audience not to get distracted. thus, they could focus on the speaker only. conclusion and suggestion from the result of the research above, there are some points that could be concluded. firstly, it was found that there were two types of comments on speaker delivery given by audiences: the quality of the delivery and the delivery strategy used by speaker. the comments on the quality of the delivery included attractive, sincere, knowledgeable, fluent, accurate, effective, and efficient. secondly, the speaker delivered the speech verbally and nonverbally with interesting jokes or humors. from the collected comments, almost all audience mentioned that the speech delivered by sir ken robinson was very humorous. this led to the success of the speaker in delivering his speech to public. a speech could be entertaining and full of meaning for audience. although the speech was not supported by any slides, the audience kept their attention connected with it. in short, delivery strategy is one of the main successful keys for anyone who wants to be a great speaker when speaking on the stage. limitations and steps for further research this research just covered 50 comments in the last four years (2016-2020) as sample, while the video itself has been published for many years ago (2006) and has almost 5000 comments globally. as a result, for the next researchers who are interested in doing the same thing, it is expected to include more comments from different periods. moreover, the language of the comments ildi kurniawan 160 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(1), 2021 analyzed in this research is limited only in english. therefore, looking at other comments written in other languages could be interesting facts to see. then, the video has been translated into many languages. therefore, knowing comments from diverse language would be beneficial for further researchers to consider. furthermore, it is highly recommended for the next researchers to consider working with other experts (speaking skill experts or information, communication, and technology experts) when analyzing the video. perhaps, the result of the analysis of the video will be great if the researcher can do that. references allen, i., & flynn, e. 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(2014). a community of curious souls: an analysis of commenting behavior on ted talks videos. plos one 9(4): e93609. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.009360 http://www.jstor.org/stable/43525493 https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.009360 432 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 7 no. 2, august 2022 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/20860 https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20860 the implementation of the integrated performance assessment (ipa) model to improve english students' speaking skills 1ildi kurniawan , 2syafrizal sabaruddin , 3azhar aziz lubis 1,2,3english department, faculty of teacher training and education, universitas bengkulu, indonesia 1jalan wr. supratman, kandang limun, muara bangkahulu, bengkulu 38371 article info abstract article history: received: march 02, 2022 revised: july 11, 2022 accepted: july 26, 2022 this study aims to analyze the extent to which the application of the ipa model could improve indonesian students’ speaking skill, especially speaking skills for discussion course. it was classroom action research in which the stages of its activities include planning, implementation, evaluation, and reflection. this research’s subjects were the third semester english department university of bengkulu. the researchers only took four cycles as the data of the research. qualitative and quantitative data were analyzed to find a valid conclusion. the results show that the application of the ipa model improved the basic skills of students’ speaking skills in class. it can be seen from the improvement in almost every cycle. the mean score in cycle 1 was 80, followed by 80.3 in cycle 2, but slightly decreased in cycle 3 with a mean score of 79.6 and got higher again in cycle 4 with a mean score of 82. internal and external factors also contribute to the students’ speaking skills. keywords: integrated assessment performance speaking for discussion conflict of interest: none funding information: faculty of teacher training and education, universitas bengkulu correspondence: ildi kurniawan, english department, faculty of teacher training and education, universitas bengkulu, indonesia. ildikurniawan@unib.ac.id, ©ildi kurniawan, syafrizal sabaruddin, azhar aziz lubis this is an open access article under the cc by-sa 4.0 international license. how to cite (apa style): kurniawan, i., sabaruddin, s., lubis, a.a. (2022). the implementation of integrated performance assessment (ipa) model to improve english students’ speaking skills. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 432-443. https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20860 english language teaching focusing on productive skills (speaking) requires an appropriate assessment model to apply to the course (british council, n.d.). it is because the assessment (authentic and meaningful tasks) should facilitate the learning activity which can encourage students to achieve their oral skills (kayi, 2006). however, to the best of the researchers' knowledge, english speaking classes in indonesia, have never used an https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/20860 https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20860 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v7i2.20860&domain=pdf https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/ https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20860 http://orcid.org/0000-0003-1007-1841 http://orcid.org/0000-0003-1007-1841 https://orcid.org/0000-0001-6113-8650 application of integrated performance assessment (ipa) model to…. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 433 assessment system which involve an integrated performance assessment (ipa). meanwhile, if we look at the purposes of assessment, this assessment model allows students to achieve their learning goals, including speaking skills. moreover, referring to the world-readiness standard for learning language by the american council on the teaching of foreign languages (actfl, n.d.), it seems clear that the role of assessment with ipa system affects the success of students in learning a foreign language such as english (davin, k., troyan, f., donato, r & hellman, a., 2011). however, once again, this system has never been piloted in speaking courses, especially in indonesian. speaking is one of the english language skills considered the most difficult to master by some foreign language learners (ulker, 2017; hosni, 2014; hamad & alnuzaili, 2022). some research on the causes of difficulty mastering this skill have been done by researchers (shen and chiu, 2019; asworo, 2019; holandyah, marzulina, erlina, harto, amalia, fridiyanto, & mukminin, 2022). the research summarized that vocabulary, pronunciation, grammar, understanding, fluency, mother tongue use, and preference on particular topics of conversation are the main obstacles foreign learners face when trying to speak in english. teachers have made some efforts to help students improve their speaking skills such as using story telling models (erfiani, 2017), using reciprocal teaching strategies (ahmad, 2014), using shadow teaching techniques (yahya, 2020), and using reciprocal teaching strategies (ahmad, 2014), using shadow teaching techniques (yahya, 2020), and using methods of teaching “everyone is teacher here” (elvionita, 2018). however, these attempts have not effectively addressed the problems of english-speaking skills. furthermore, what lim, ko, park & ihm (2022) investigate on teacher intervention in a discussion based on learning activities is probably very relevant information in helping students to have better speaking skills. to respond to this, the researcher would like to interfere with the learning activities by applying the ipa model in class. according to the center for advanced research on language acquisition (carla) university of minnesota (2019), ipa is defined as a classroom-based performance assessment model which is used to evaluate student's communication skills in the three modes of communication (interpretive, presentational, interpersonal). actfl develops this assessment model. using this model can help students solve their english speakingproblems. the reasons to use this are because firstly, students are given many opportunities to show how they use their language skills. secondly, students continue growing and learning something new since they are supported with a real-life task and a cultural topic evaluated in the three modes of ildi kurniawan, syafrizal sabaruddin, and azhar aziz lubis 434 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 communication: interpretive, interpersonal, and presentational (toward proficiency, 2020). finally, each element of the activity allows students to have other languages skills, for example, in the interpretive phase, the skills integrated in this step are listening, reading, and writing (carla: assessment of second language, n.d.). this model has been recognized as one of the most effective assessing methods for high thinking level because this emphasizes the application and demonstration of the ability to solve problems (kuo-hung, chao, et al., 2016). moreover, kuo-hung, chao, et al. emphasize that measuring students’ performance can allow them to study the concepts, complex event, and their structure”. also, the main strength of the implementation ipa model is feedback or reciprocity from lecturer to the performance of language skills of the students. providing feedback in the oral and written form allows the students to know their weaknesses that must be corrected in the future. below is the description of the ipa model. picture 1. the steps for ipa model (https://towardproficiency.com/) in the ipa model, there are three learning tasks that the students need to follow. they are interpretative, interpersonal, and presentational tasks. an interpretative task involves reading and listening tasks, and this step aims to explore students’ background knowledge about the topic being presented in class. the lecturer provides a learning topic either in the form of reading, listening or both. the topic itself should be authentic and refers to the target language. furthermore, dealing with the assessment, the lecturer assesses students’ initial understanding of the topic/material; on the other hand, students try to understand, interpret, and analyze what they see, hear, or feel regarding the presented topics. in general, this interpersonal assessment is related to the lecturer's assessment of activities between students with certain tasks that the lecturer has determined. in this activity, students interact, negotiate, share information, opinions, understanding, and feelings about the task. https://towardproficiency.com/ application of integrated performance assessment (ipa) model to…. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 435 in addition, the presentational assessment is an assessment of student performance either in the form of material presentation, describing something, written or spoken. from each of these assessments, the lecturer consults with students about what is going to be assessed and how much its worth, including providing input (feedback) from each assessment that has been done. students understand what must be achieved and know what must be done to be successful in learning. students get assessment criteria before they are assessed, and the lecturer must provide feedback on the results of assessments given individually or in a group. regarding the explanation above, researchers would like to present this assessment model in the speaking for discussion class because the purpose of this class is in line with one of the objectives of ipa which is to facilitate the students to have better communication skills. finally, the research aims illustrate the extent to which the application of the ipa model can improve students speaking skills in the speaking for discussion course. method the method used in this research was classroom action research. it consists of four cycles: planning, implementation, observation, and reflection. these cycles could be repeated if at the stage of reflection there is no improvement at all. to enter the next cycle, a revision is required at the planning stage. if this research’s success indicators are met, then there is no need for an advanced cycle; in other words, the research can be stopped. this study was planned to carry out one cycle in advance consisting of 4 meetings in 4 weeks. each stage in the cycle is described as follows: planning activities carried out in the planning stage were developing learning strategies, preparing learning implementation plans and preparing devices (such as media, materials and tools, and observation instruments), and preparing ipa sheet instruments (assessment sheets for interpretive, interpersonal, and presentational for each meeting, field note sheets, english tests, research schedules). the main researcher acted as a lecturer who taught the class, while research member acted as collaborators in implementing classroom action research. implementation at this stage, the researcher as a lecturer carried out learning that has been prepared in the learning implementation plan. the lecturer must have mastered the strategies that applied in learning and followed the signs that were prepared in the learning implementation plan. during the learning process, research members as collaborators helped the lecturer observe the ildi kurniawan, syafrizal sabaruddin, and azhar aziz lubis 436 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 continuity of learning (co-observer). one cycle was held for four meetings with 100 minutes for each meeting for four weeks. at the end of each meeting, students were asked to fill out a self-assessment sheet including feedback that the research team had prepared. at the end of the cycle, students were given a questionnaire to measure their level of speaking skills. observation the research member acted as collaborators, observing the continuity of learning. what was observed was not the teaching lecturer but the learning activity that was the focus of observation. collaborators as co-observers then recorded things that considered necessary during the learning process on the field note sheet. at this stage the data collection process had begun. reflection the reflection stage is the stage where researchers analyze the data that has been collected; observation sheets, self-assessment, ipa sheets, and a questionnaire. the data obtained are compared to the success indicators established at the planning stage. if the indicator of student success has not been achieved, then the researcher would be continued to the next cycle. on the other hand, if the study results have reached the indicator of success, then the research would be stopped or would not continue to the next cycle. the research setting was the speaking for discussion class in the english education study program, department of language and arts, university of bengkulu. the study was conducted from the third week of august to the fourth week of october 2021. the subject of this research was a third-semester students in the english language education program, department of language and arts education, university of bengkulu academic year 2021/2022. there were three classes in that course, but for this study, the class used was a class that researchers taught. the data were collected through an ipa sheet conducted by researchers at each meeting, and a field note sheet filled in by a co-observer of each meeting. there are four research instruments; ipa sheets, field notes, english tests and questionnaire. the data obtained from field notes and feedback were analyzed qualitatively. while the data obtained from integrated performance assessment and questionnaires were analyzed with a quantitative approach. the research could be successful if it had reached two indicators or criteria of success. the first indicator was that 75% of students had reached novice high level (grade a-) and 25% of the students fall into the very high (grade a) category. the second indicator was that the english-speaking skills test average grade reached the good category (grade b). findings application of integrated performance assessment (ipa) model to…. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 437 overall, the use of ipa has contributed to students’ achievement in speaking skills, especially in speaking for discussion class. furthermore, students ‘performance in the speaking skills was at a good level which can be seen from the average grade they had, which was (b+), meaning good. however, since this speaking for discussion class was advanced, the difficulty level was much higher than in the previous speaking classes. in this speaking for discussion class, students were not only required to have high ranges of vocabulary and pronunciation, but also fluency. however, some students faced some problems dealing with the components of speaking skills such as fluency, grammar and understanding; they still had lower score for each component. specifically, the findings are described in the following graphs to illustrate the extent to which the implementation of the ipa model could improve students’ skill in speaking for discussion class. firstly, the overall result of students speaking skill per cycle can be found below. graph 1. speaking score per cycle from the graph above, it is clearly seen that the students’ scores for speaking slightly increase from cycle 1 to cycle 2, but the score experiences a slight decrease in cycle 3 and gets higher back in cycle 4 with an average score of 82. it means students’ ability in speaking class is improved, compared to the beginning of the cycles. the high score, 82, is categorized as novice high meaning that the implementation of ipa can help students get better performance at the end of the cycle. 80 80,3 79,6 82 cycle 1 cycle 2 cycle 3 cycle 4 average of students speaking score for each cyle score ildi kurniawan, syafrizal sabaruddin, and azhar aziz lubis 438 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 graph 2. students’ abilities on speaking skill moreover, the graph 2 shows that most students have a good level of speaking with a total of 21 students. on the other hand, only 8 out of 39 students are categorized into a high level of speaking skill, followed by ten students who were at a novice level. in short, many students in the class have shown good speaking performance. graph 3. students’ mastery on speaking furthermore, in term of students’ mastery of speaking, it is clearly shown that fluency and grammar still became the main problem faced by students, only 21% and 26 % respectively. however, vocabulary and comprehension are also in between positions, while pronunciation (92%) shows that the students have good speaking skills. discussion 8 10 21 category students' level of ability on speaking skill very high novice high good 26% 69% 92% 46% 21% grammar vocabulary pronunciation comprehension fluency students mastery on speaking's components application of integrated performance assessment (ipa) model to…. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 439 from the findings, in general students make no considerably significant improvement from cycle to another. there are some parts that the students are good at speaking, such as they show good skills pronunciation and vocabulary mastery skill, but also there some points that they need to improve such as in term of fluency, rules and comprehension. however, in this part, there are three main points the researcher wants to discuss. firstly, the average score in cycle 3 decreases but then increases slightly in cycle 4. the possible explanation for this is that each week, they needed to study different topics of discussion. sometimes, the topics were new for them, and it caused to lack of any background knowledge about the contents. indeed, it would influence the final score of their speaking skills’ components such as understanding and fluency. another possible cause was the obligation of each student to give an opinion regarding the topics being discussed in class. perhaps, some students could give their opinions due to some reasons like they had to gather completed information before taking a group discussion which takes much time. also, the class needed students to have the ability to read the sources comprehensively and summarize them on their own as a source of information for them to take an active discussion. when the students study first (self-study) before actively participating in discussion, the learning is richer and the learning outcome is better (lim, ko, park & ihm, 2022). secondly, in general, the overall level of ability of students in speaking skills at a reasonable level. what makes this happen? are there any factors influence that matter? the assumption that led to the fact that the students could not achieve the highest level of speaking skill was due to several factors. first, the language skill level required in the class was much more complicated because they had to master all components of speaking skills such as grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation, understanding and fluency. based on the finding, the students must increase their capability in terms of fluency, grammar and understanding to perform successfully in speaking. it could not be denied that these three things are the main keys for them to get the most out of this speaking activity. however, it is understandable that the students in groups come from the same background. the power of group discussion for solving tasks can be a success if the member of the group is diverse or mixed (taro, et.all, 2021). in addition, the students' internal factors might affect their performance when speaking english. most students were still not confident enough to express their ideas on a particular topic that was being discussed since they lacked knowledge about the content of the topics. dealing with the topic of discussions, it is in line with the research done by holandyah, marzulina, erlina, harto,amalia, fridiyanto, & mukminin (2022) who states ildi kurniawan, syafrizal sabaruddin, and azhar aziz lubis 440 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 that the students face many various challenging which prevent them from having good speaking skill in english, one of them is the issue that the students look for interesting topics of conversation. therefore, if they find uninteresting topics for discussion, they probably want to get involved in the discussion. also, the fear of being embarrassed and afraid of being wrong with their abilities aggravates their internal condition. the embarrassment of appearing in public also contributes to their speaking performance; including they easily give up when making mistakes in terms of pronunciation or grammar. furthermore, there were also external factors that possibly affected the success of students in speaking for discussion activities, including internet connection, electronic devices used and time constraints they had. these three things were believed to be the main factors that contribute positively to the failure of students in achieving existing learning goals. the class was conducted online during the pandemic of covid-19 and most students studied at home with limited internet access. moreover, not all students had sophisticated smartphone and laptop to support their study. therefore, several things need to do by students when learning english, especially for speaking skill such as keep practicing a lot (arun & peruvalluthi, 2015), watching english tv shows or movies, listening to english songs or podcasts or other relevant apps to support english learning such as google voice to recognize english pronunciation. moreover, students need to focus on improving themselves in speaking english, trying to be more confident, and having dare to make mistakes in mastering speaking skill. futhermore, teachers or schools should provide well-organized english program to help students’ challenging speaking skills (holandyah, marzulina, erlina, harto, amalia, fridiyanto, & mukminin, 2022). lastly, dealing with students’ mastery of speaking components, why fluency and grammar become the main problem faced by students, meanwhile pronunciation is significantly improved for students in speaking skills based on the observation in class, fluency and grammar were becoming a significant matter for students due to some factors. in terms of fluency, for instance, it was hard for students to have excellent fluency if they had problems with vocabulary and grammar. it is undeniable that students who have good vocabulary and understand the rules as well tend to be fluent speakers. almost students stated that they had ideas to get involved actively in the discussion, but because it required them to use english, it was a great challenge for them to participate. on the other hand, mastering the rules only is not enough for students to become great speakers. they also need other components of speaking skills to be a perfect speaker. application of integrated performance assessment (ipa) model to…. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 441 the pronunciation part was interesting to talk about here, which some students felt great about. it could be assumed that they probably often heard the words on the internet, where many students liked to search for information, including finding how to pronounce particular a word correctly using many apps like google. however, from the questionnaire, they stated that their pronunciation improved because of their curiosity about how to pronounce the unfamiliar words they had during taking this course. from this, they felt that their pronunciation was getting improved after they studied the pronunciation by themselves in this course. conclusion from the findings and discussion described above, it can be concluded that implementing this ipa model can improve students’ speaking skills. in addition, there are also internal and external factors that play a role in determining the success of students in this speaking class. the 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issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.13776 attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and the government 1ratih laily nurjanah 1universitas ngudi waluyo corresponding email: ratih.laily@gmail.com abstract this study aims to analyze the presented attitude based on the choice of words in an editorial published by the guardian on november 5th, 2020 entitled “the guardian view on the new lockdown: fewer promises, better performance needed”. one of the most relevant discourses to be analyzed is editorial section of newspaper that is considered as the purest part of mass media reflected ideology, or in this case, political stance. this is a qualitative study using the method of systemic functional language framework with the specification of interpersonal meaning especially appraisal analysis with 22 appraising items taken from the editorial as the sources of data. the findings show that the guardian is more likely not standing on the same side as the government by giving more negative attitude than the positive ones in terms of affects, judgment, and appreciation. getting involved in attitude analysis as a part of sfl is considered important in elt process to help students use language appropriately started from small unit like word. keywords: attitude analysis, appraisal system, editorials, sfl introduction appraisal theory has been developed by martin & white (2005) based on the interpersonal systems of halliday. it works with negotiate attitude in discourse. appraisal as a framework under sfl discusses the ways the speakers form certain identities and how to put themselves in front of people they are having communication with. analyzing the language used by speakers provides the view on speaker’s belief, objectives, and relationship with the others (haristyanti, 2015) attitude as a part of appraisal system can be defined as judgment and appreciation to the human behavior, text, process or phenomenon affected by attitude. the resources can be categorized into 3; affect system (emotional expressions to human), judgment system (assessment from human to human), https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.13776 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i2.13776&domain=pdf mailto:ratih.laily@gmail.com https://orcid.org/0000-0003-4157-5540 ratih laily nurjanah 195 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 appreciation (evaluation of the valuable things). the 2 latter are defined based on the affect system as the center of the theory (li, 2016). affect is the center of the three subsystems of attitude concerning the stating of positive and negative feelings; happiness, sadness, anxiety, boredom. this system can be divided into; quality, process, and omment. affect as quality is related to the use of process clause in expressing emotions. affect as process is defined as the use of process clause to express feelings, especially mental and behavioral process. affect as comment is described as the modal adjunct to comment on the clause process. it covers how positive or negative emotions are shown through words. it includes dis/inclination, un/happiness, in/security, and dis/satisfaction. judgment covers the attitudes to behavior that we admire, criticize, or condemn. it can be divided into social esteem, and social sanction. social esteem deals with ‘normality’ (how unusual someone is), ‘capacity’ (how capable they are) and ‘tenacity’ (how resolute they are) while sanction deals with ‘veracity’ (how truthful someone is) and ‘propriety’ (how ethical someone is). all of them are indicated by positive or negative judgment. appreciation includes evaluations of semiotic and natural phenomena related to the ways in which they are valued or not in a given field. generally, it is categorized into positive or negative ‘reactions’ to things (do they catch our attention; do they please us?), the ‘composition’ (balance and complexity), and their ‘value’ (how innovative, authentic, timely). the appraisal system specifically points out the subjective ideology of the users by evaluating the vocabulary. polarity and explicitness are the important features of attitude. polarity is the feature to express the attitude of approval or disapproval through positive or negative attitude. explicitness works on the ways of evaluation whether it is explicit or implicit (dong & lin, 2018). attitude system can be found and analyzed easily in opinion since it is delivered based on someone’s perspectives on something or other opinion stated by someone else. this kind of expression is published in newspaper under the editorial columns. editorials are presented in different format because it is the only part of the newspaper showing organization of the paper. it also shows newspapers’ editorial opinion-leading role. it plays a role to provide opinion and push issues as independent parts of politics. (firmstone, 2015). editorials play important roles as stated by researchers including informing and shaping debate in public through 4 ways; 1) influencing readers, voters, or public opinions, 2) influencing internal news agendas and the scope of the newspaper, 3) influencing the agendas and scopes of other news media, 4) influencing politics or political agenda (firmstone, 2020). attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 196 therefore, editorials can be viewed as personal opinion or ideology related to a topic that is served in forms of an article or a column for society. by delivering an opinion on a topic, editorials are expected to be able to persuade readers or watchers to agree on an issue. the persuasion involves symbols to transmit the message with language full of cultural meaning. they can be presented in words like freedom, justice, and equality; nonverbal signs like the flag, star of david, or holy cross; and images that are instantly recognized. here, symbols are used as tools to persuade readers leading to change of attitude and build opinions (perloff, 2003). in this case, the tools used to deliver the message is the choice of words used in the editorial post analyzed from appraisal system point of view to conclude the attitude wanted to be shown by the publisher about the political issue especially on how government handles the covid-19 outbreak. the editorial staff of newspaper contributes to posing ideological arguments expected to influence readers through linguistic choices (awan & harun, 2015). the editorial column is a clear manifestation of the newspaper commitment to the society through participation in delivering opinions. the newspapers provide a place to exchange commitment and criticism and a common carrier of public expressions. editorials also provide leadership issues that is prominent to community (ugondo, 2018). sfl as a system can be reflected in elt where it focuses on understanding the social, linguistic processes and products of literacy. as explained by the seminal work on cohesion of halliday and hasan (1976) and martin and rose (2007), sfl has been greatly concerned with discourse. (perales-escudero et al., 2018). working with short texts to start can be very helpful for students. the texts can be taken from short stories or excerpts to help students gain understanding about the role of language within the text. it also forms stamina for linguistic analysis and encourages deep thinking as a foundation for critical analysis of long texts (schulze, 2015). in terms of written discourse, teaching grammar is simply the way to achieve the goal of communication through written text. since every aspect of a sentence plays important role in conveying meaning through grammar, it is very important for students to see grammar as a set of rules to be applied to make their text or written discourse meaningful. the process of teaching discourse is a long one because it is expected that teachers or lecturers build students’ understanding step by step by the scaffolding technique. the scaffolding processes in teaching phases of writing can be implemented in macro and micro levels (syarifah & gunawan, 2015). the result of this research showed that macro scaffoldings that are implemented in all of ratih laily nurjanah 197 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 teaching phases while the micro one happens in some stages of teaching, especially in building knowledge of the field and modelling. micro scaffolding can be implemented in joint construction of texts but not in independent text-construction. macro scaffoldings that are implemented can be seen from the teaching objectives delivered by teachers, the tasks given to students, and the classroom organized by teachers. the research question in this study is “what is the attitude shown by the editor of the guardian based on the choice of words?” this paper aims to analyze and describe the attitude stated in the editorial column based on the choice of words. this paper works on the editorial related to the government policy on national lockdown due to covid-19 outbreak. methods research design this study applies qualitative design study that aims to describe the use of words reflecting the affect, judgment, and appreciation to determine the stance of the guardian as one of the newspapers in london. object the text analyzed is the editorial column of the guardian posted on november 5th, 2020 entitled “the guardian view on the new lockdown: fewer promises, better performance needed” with 22 appraising items analyzed. data collection the sources of data in this study are sentences written in the editorial of the guardian. instruments the method used in this study is systemic functional language framework with the specification of interpersonal meaning especially appraisal analysis. appraisal theory is considered as an effective framework in terms of analyzing attitudes expressed and interpersonal meanings in various types of discourse such as literary works, news, legal, scientific and academic discourse.(wei et al., 2015) data analysis procedures first, the text of editorial was broken down into segments presented in table. second, the sentences were then observed to see if each of them contains word that indicates the affect, judgment, and appreciation as stated in literature reviews. attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 198 affect is analyzed based on positive or negative affect so are judgment and appreciation. after analyzed in terms of positivity or negativity, then each category of affect, judgment, and appreciation is analyzed based on each own category. findings table: 1 findings of attitude analysis no. appraising items attitude affect judgement appreciation 1 2 3 4 1 boris johnson is still suggesting it could all be over by christmas + inclination: desire 2 the public, as well as conservative mps, can be forgiven for scepticism. insecurity: disquiet 3 the government has made too many promises on coronavirus, and done too little, too late, too often. dissatisfaction: displeasure capacity: criticize reaction: impact 4 how high the daily death tolls rise, and how long they continue, will depend on whether the government and public use these four weeks wisely + composition: balance 5 the abrupt announcement by the chancellor…. insecurity: surprise propriety: condemn reaction: quality 6 extending the furlough scheme until march was a welcome but too tardy. + happiness: cheer + normality: admire + reaction: quality 7 extending the furlough scheme until march was a welcome but too tardy. dissatisfaction: ennui capacity: criticise reaction: quality 8 restrictions could yet be tightened: while keeping schools open has been a priority + normality: admire https://www.theguardian.com/politics/live/2020/nov/05/uk-coronavirus-live-uk-rishi-sunak-furlough-details-covid-latest-updates https://www.theguardian.com/politics/live/2020/nov/05/uk-coronavirus-live-uk-rishi-sunak-furlough-details-covid-latest-updates https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2020/nov/05/rishi-sunak-extends-covid-job-furlough-scheme-until-march-2021 https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2020/nov/05/rishi-sunak-extends-covid-job-furlough-scheme-until-march-2021 https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2020/nov/05/rishi-sunak-extends-covid-job-furlough-scheme-until-march-2021 https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2020/nov/05/rishi-sunak-extends-covid-job-furlough-scheme-until-march-2021 https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/nov/02/the-guardian-view-on-keeping-schools-open-not-an-open-and-shut-case https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/nov/02/the-guardian-view-on-keeping-schools-open-not-an-open-and-shut-case ratih laily nurjanah 199 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 no. appraising items attitude affect judgement appreciation 1 2 3 4 9 restrictions could yet be tightened: while keeping schools open has been a priorityfor good reasons. + happiness: cheer + propriety: praise + reaction: quality 10 ……..it may not be right if the picture becomes much worse. unhappiness: antipathy propriety: condemn reaction: quality 11 it may not be right if the picture becomes much worse. unhappiness: antipathy propriety: condemn composition: complexity 12 …………rules is unfair and ill-advised………. unhappiness: misery propriety: condemn reaction: quality 13 the government must take the rap……….. + inclination: desire 14 for ill-judged, short-lived and confusing policies and messages unhappiness: misery propriety: condemn reaction: quality 15 while people have a duty to act responsibly focusing on individual breaches is neither sensible nor helpful + capacity: admire 16 …….. focusing on individual breaches is neither sensible nor helpful unhappiness: misery tenacity: criticise valuation 17 the government must do a better job of communicating…… + inclination: desire 18 sir simon’s clear explanation at thursday’s press conference showed what could be done + normality: admire + reaction: impact 19 ……..has fuelled the sense that the government is more concerned about………. unhappiness: antipathy 20 for its own sake, and for the union’s, the government + inclination: https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/nov/02/the-guardian-view-on-keeping-schools-open-not-an-open-and-shut-case https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/nov/02/the-guardian-view-on-keeping-schools-open-not-an-open-and-shut-case attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 200 no. appraising items attitude affect judgement appreciation 1 2 3 4 must engage in real consultation with regional and national leaders. desire 21 they have profoundly negative effects on individuals, communities and the economy unhappiness: misery normality: criticise reaction: impact 22 . they may fear that what the prime minister called light at the end of the tunnel could be another train coming: a certain sense of hopelessness as well as weariness is evident. disinclination: fear propriety: condemn valuation affect (a component of attitude analysis) affect is defined as a set to express emotions. in this editorial, it is found that there are 18 affects used consisting of; 6 positive affects and 12 negative affects. in item number (1), the word suggesting is used to show the writer’s emotion related to the condition of national lockdown. suggesting reflects positive affect of inclination especially desire. in this case, it is the desire of the writer to show that someone wants it to happen. in item number (2), skepticism occurs to show public’s insecurity especially disquiet. this is a negative affect emphasizing public’s emotion towards the condition. in item number (3), too little, too late, too often shows the negative affect of dissatisfaction especially displeasure. those terms show how the government handles the situation that causes emotions to public. through these terms, the emotions of being dissatisfied are reflected and highlight the displeasure felt by public. in item number (5), abrupt can be viewed as insecurity especially surprise. this shows negative emotion to the word announcement. item number (6), welcome, shows positive affect of happiness. emotion of cheer is involved in this item to make the sentence show positive emotion. in number (7), tardy shows the writer emotion of feeling dissatisfied due to late response from the government. in number (9), good shows the emotion of happiness especially cheer to the government step of opening the school. ratih laily nurjanah 201 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 it may not be right (10) shows negative affect of emotion especially antipathy since the writer indicates his opinion about a phenomenon. related to number (10), number (11) worse shows also unhappiness affect especially antipathy. number (12) and (14) show similar affect of unhappiness/ misery because they show their affect or emotions towards things issued by the government. this is also found in number (16) and (21). number (13) must take positive affect of inclination/ desire since it shows what the writer wants the government to do. it gives personal suggestion on what should happen or be shown by the government. the affect is also shown in number (20). by saying “must”, the writer shows that he has something to tell to the government. it is used as tool to delivering their opinion. this shows positive affect since the opinion can be considered as the result of observation from writer. number (22) shows negative affect of fear. fear, hopelessness and weariness were chosen by the writer to depict that public starts worrying or being afraid of the consequences that may occur because of the steps taken by the prime minister. figure 2. the diagram of affect findings from the diagram, we can see that unhappiness occurs 7 times from 18 appraisal items analyzed in the editorial or in other words, it occupies 22% of the items. the least item is disinclination which only occupies 0.05% of the analysis results. judgment judgment aspect is related to the attitude given or shown towards behavior whether we admire or even condemn the behavior. in this editorial page, positive; 6; 33% negative; 12; 67% affects positive negative attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 202 there are some judgments shown, as expected, since it is important to see how the editor/ writer respond the government. in number (3), too little, too late, too often is a negative judgment towards the government’s capacity in handling the issue. it criticizes the ability of the government to handle the situation during the pandemic. abrupt in number (5) is used to show the reaction to the announcement from the government. it is a negative judgment of propriety falling to condemn category. on the other hand, welcome (6) is used to show positive judgment towards the extended furlough scheme. it is categorized into normality judgment of admire. but the word tardy (7) which is put in the same sentence of welcome (6) shows negative judgment towards the phenomenon by criticizing the government’s capability. again, positive judgment of normality in admire is shown in word priority. it is categorized to normality especially admire showing that the phenomenon is special. the positive judgment is also implied in number (9); good. it shows negative propriety of praise by stating that keeping the schools open is good for some reasons. in numbers (10), (11), (12), and (14) the same negative judgment of propriety is shown. the writer shows that he/she condemns the results coming from the things done by the government. after all negative judgment, a positive one of admire is shown in number (15). the writer gives positive judgment to the government’s capacity by being responsible. but again, negative judgment is shown in number (16) by criticizing the act of government to focus on individual breaches during the pandemic. the same judgment is also shown in number (21). the writer gives positive judgment towards sir simon’s explanation by calling it “clear”. this is a normality especially admire judgment. the condemn judgment, again, occurs in number (22) as a response to the statement from the government. ratih laily nurjanah 203 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 figure 2. the diagram of judgment findings from the diagram, we can conclude that the writer stated 43% negative propriety or 6 times in 14 appraisal items. it shows that he has negative judgment towards the government by showing that their policies are beyond reproach, in negative ways. appreciation (as a component of attitude analysis) it is analyzed related to the way things are valued or not in a given field by evaluating them in terms of semiotic and natural phenomena. negative reaction of impact in number (3) shows that the steps taken by the government does not please the writer or in other words, he is not happy with what has been done by the government. stating that the government and the public have similar responsibility (4) shows positive composition of balance showing that both parts can hang together. the word abrupt (5) is a negative reaction of impact showing that the writer, again, is not pleased with the announcement given. the positive reaction of quality is also shown with welcome (6) stating that the steps of extending the furlough scheme really pleases the writer. but the negative reaction of quality is shown with tardy though this one is in the same sentence as welcome. so, besides showing that he is pleased with the extension, he also shows that he is displeased. the positive reaction of quality is also shown in (9) where writer uses good to show that he is happy with the decisions taken by the government. negative reaction of quality in (10) describes that the condition happens nowadays grab writer’s attention. the complexity in composition of (11) describes that the writer assesses the condition or steps taken by the government are hard to follow. 7,00% 7,00% 21,00% 14,00% 43,00% 0,07% 0,00% 10,00% 20,00% 30,00% 40,00% 50,00% capacity propriety normality judgment positive negative attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 204 negative reaction of impact which means that the phenomenon grabs writer’s attention is stated in unfair, ill-advised referring to the rules from the government. the same appreciation is also given in (14) by giving negative evaluation to the policies and messages. negative valuation is given in (16) to answer the question “is it worthwhile?” and it seems that the phenomenon is not. the clear explanation from sir simon seems grabbing the writer so he gives positive reaction of impact towards it. but the negative word in (21) shows that the writer gives negative reaction of impact evaluation to the effects happen to individual. figure 2. the diagram of appreciation findings this diagram shows the mostly shown in the editorial is negative reaction with 50% occurrence. or, in other words it occurs 7 times in 14 appraisal items. discussion editorial section is considered as important part of a newspaper since it explicitly states the ideological stance of the news agency which is not stated in other part of the news (lihua, 2009). in this study, editorial section was chosen to assess the political stance of the guardian as one of the mass media in london reflected in their opinions related to how the government controls the pandemic in london. the editorial section may contain controversial opinions but it is assessed as the purest content indicating the stance taken by the media through persuasive and argumentative language. from this editorial, it is found that there are 12 negative affects. it means that the writer gives negative emotions towards what is happening in his environment nowadays especially to the policies issued by the government. most of the negative affect are related to unhappiness, especially, misery. the writer does not seem happy with the confusion or 21,00% 0% 7% 50% 14% 7% 0,00% 10,00% 20,00% 30,00% 40,00% 50,00% 60,00% reaction valuation category 3 appreciation positive negative ratih laily nurjanah 205 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 surprising steps taken by the government to handle the pandemic in his country. the majority of judgment in the editorial is the negative condemn. it shows that the writer gives negative responses to any issues or messages delivered by the government. very little positive judgment is found in the editorial showing that the writer does not see the policies in a good way. negative appreciation is delivered in the editorial by giving negative reaction showing that he evaluates the phenomena in negative ways. overall, the writer does not support the government agenda in handling the pandemic. however, the writer also gives some advice to the government in his editorial. in this study, it is implied from the editorial that the guardian is more likely does not stand on the same side as the government. editorial as a part of newspaper is expected to be able to give insight to students related to how to express their thoughts in form of writing. this supports the previous study of amelia & muth’im (2021) stating that newspaper is helpful in improving students’ ability in writing skill since they can learn the awareness in writing and some intrinsic factors from newspapers. understanding the attitude reflected in a text is considered important so students can get involved more in a discourse and think critically so later they can use the language started from the small unit, like word, appropriately. the analysis of words choice in this study is considered different from the research done by nasution & ayuningtias (2020) which analyzed the language use based on the sociolinguistic factors. this study analyzes the choice of words to determine the stance or like and dislikes towards things. this study is somewhat similar with a research by prasetyanti (2011) involving president soekarno speech which is analyzed based on attitude; affect, judgment and appreciations, there were 216 attitudes consisting of 107 affects, 61 judgment, and 48 appreciation. all the compound-complex sentences involve the use of attitude in it. the use of influence dominates the percentage of attitude. it is based on the reason that the speech was aimed to provoke and persuade people to stance a war against colonialism. but, soekarno, as the orator used negative affect in higher percentage than the negative judgment. this can also be seen in other attitudes. the results from this research can also be used as a model in terms of writing good text or speech by manipulating various lexico-grammatical for more detailed explanation. this thing, in the end, will improve the students’ ability to write by choosing the proper vocabulary (diction) as the realization of interpersonal meaning. second, the students will find that learning language does not mean they have to be able to be aware of the language use attitude analysis of “the guardian” editorial: lockdown policy and… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 206 only but they are expected to be able to analyze their own text while delivering speech or doing public speaking as an orator. language knowledge is prominent for the students to be able to produce good text. teaching students from the smallest unit like phoneme or words is considered helpful especially for efl students. involving scaffolding technique means lecturers need to guide the process of producing discourse. instead of asking students to produce a text directly, it is better for them to get explanation about what the goal of producing the text, how the text should be delivered, what aspects need to be involved or included in the text and who will be involved in the text (syarifah & gunawan, 2015). the similar scaffolding technique in introducing and teaching sfl was also proposed by schulze (2015) stating that it accelerates students’ literacy development. conclusion and suggestion from this editorial, we can conclude that delivering displeasure or dissatisfaction can be done by using various words. it is necessary to choose our words carefully since it can be used by readers or speakers to assess our stance or affect towards something, to see how we judge and how we evaluate. teaching this knowledge with accurate and proper techniques, such as scaffolding instructions, will help students create better both spoken and written texts. for further researches, the implication of teaching this appraisal system to support the english language teaching is considered needed to be observed. references amelia, r., & muth’im, a. 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(2015). an analysis of current research on the appraisal theory i. 3(5), 235–239. https://doi.org/10.13189/lls.2015.030506 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 109 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 5 no. 2, 2020 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.10753 feasibility test of english instructional materials for secretaries through moodle didik hariyadi raharjo akademi sekretari budi luhur corresponding email: didik.hariyadiraharjo@budiluhur.ac.id abstract this research aimed to investigate the feasibility of efs instructional material developed for astri budi luhur students. the research was designed as qualitative and quantitative (mixed) approach. the method used in this study was the delphi method, and the data were collected through questionnaires and interviews. quantitative data were analyzed based on eligibility categories while qualitative data were analyzed to draw conclusions. the feasibility of the product of this research was examined by two experts in english for specific purposes (esp) and instructional materials. the result showed that the instructional material was feasible with several improvements. product feasibility test in this research was carried out three times. each test was carried out after revising the draft of instructional materials based on input provided by the experts. in the last feasibility test, the experts gave a score of 3.7 for the syllabus and 3.7 for the developed instructional material, indicating that both the syllabus and efs instructional material developed were very feasible to be applied in efs learning in astri budi luhur jakarta. keywords: feasibility test, syllabus, instructional material, moodle introduction a secretary was someone who could be trusted to help and conduct administrative activities that support the managerial activities of the superiors or company operational activities (yatimah, 2009). for a secretary, english was very important to complete a variety of tasks because english was an international language. it was used for communication in many business activities in the world (salisna, harahap, & sofyan, 2019). for this reason the secretarial academy (astri) of budi luhur as one of the secretarial academies in jakarta made english as one of the main skills for all students. for this reason, the english courses in astri budi luhur had a large number; those were 5 courses with a total of 18 credits. however, the didik hariyadi raharjo 110 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 results of the english competency test conducted in the end of the student lecture in the last few years showed poor results and need to be improved, especially in speaking and writing skills. one of the causes of the lack of astri budi luhur students' english proficiency was the condition of instructional material available at astri budi luhur. mc.grath (2013) stated that instructional materials play an important role in a process and learning outcomes. one of the existing english instructional materials in astri budi luhur that was needed to be developed was english for secretary (efs). based on the preliminary observation of the existing efs instructional material in astri budi luhur, the researcher could conclude that it could be categorized as inappropriate to use in efs teaching learning process and it still needed to be developed if it was viewed from the perspective of: objectives and approaches; design and organization; language content; language skills and topics. the existing efs instructional material in astri budi luhur did not provide listening material and it was not equipped with a complete package of instructional material such as manuals for students and lecturers or other multimedia equipment. nurhamsih & syahrial (2018) stated that the textbook should be accompanied with other teaching learning media (workbook, cassettes, and cd) so that the materials can be as authentic as possible and very useful. meanwhile, martins, levis, & borges, (2016) stated that instructional materials were intended to meet the needs of learners. furthermore cunnigsworth (2000) showed that instructional materials should be in accordance with the needs of the learners and in accordance with the aims and objectives of the language learning program implemented. in line with previous opinions, beth (2019) defined instructional material as a spectrum that was used by teachers in the classroom to support certain learning objectives, as stated in the learning plan. instructional material referred to everything that was used by instructors or learners to facilitate learning (tomlinson, 2011); (richards & schmidt, 2010). therefore, by observing the results of the initial research above, the researcher could conclude that there was a gap between the ideal conditions of efs instructional material for secretarial academy students and the real conditions of existing efs instructional material in astri budi luhur. for this reason, researcher developed an efs instructional material based on a needs analysis that had been done in the previous research. the instructional material was developed in the form of fully online learning and delivered in synchronous learning. the instructional material was developed to improve 4 students' english skills in a secretarial context. this instructional material was used as the main instructional material in efs learning. this efs instructional material package consisted of syllabus and online instructional feasibility test of english instructional materials for… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 111 material. this online instructional material was developed through the moodle platform. the main objective of this research was to conduct a feasibility test of the syllabus and efs instructional material that have been developed. syllabus was a document that contains what needs to be learned (hutchinson & waters, 1988). syllabus was a specification of what will be taught in a language program and the sequence that must be taught (nunan, 2004). all syllabus assessments developed are based on the principles of syllabus preparation in iqf which include: basis of development; identity; course learning outcome; lesson learning outcome; evaluation indicator; theme; learning experience; evaluation material; material design; learning method; bibliography; evaluation; and time of achievement (nurwardani, et. al, 2016). as for the assessment of the feasibility of instructional material in this research was based on the concept of instructional material evaluation proposed by cunningsworth (2000) as could be seen in the table below: table 1: cunningsworth quick reference checklist for evaluation aims and approach  what are the aims of the english programme?  do the aims of the coursebook correspond closely with the aims of the teaching programme and with the needs of the learners? does the material fit your syllabus?  is the coursebook flexible? does it allow different teaching and learning styles?  etc. coursebook package  what components make up the total course package (students' books, teachers' books, workbooks, cassettes, etc)?  if it is a new course, are all components published and available? if it is not yet complete, will the next levels be ready when you need them?  how well do the different parts of the package relate to the whole? is there an overall guide to using the package? is there cross-referencing between the different parts?  etc. methodology  what approach/approaches to language learning are taken by the coursebook?  is this appropriate to the learning/teaching situation?  does it encourage an inductive or deductive approach to learning or a balance of both?  how does it approach the teaching of skills and communication?  etc. language content  to what extent is the content selected according to structure, functions, situations, topics, other?  is any one of the above predominant as the basis of selection of content? didik hariyadi raharjo 112 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020  how well does the coursebook balance the above factors in selecting content and to what extent is it successful in integrating the different approaches?  etc. skills  are all four skills adequately covered, bearing in mind your course aims and syllabus requirements?  is practice in all four skills included? if so, is it balanced?  if not, which skills are omitted, and why?  is there material for integrated skills work?  etc. teacher’s book  is there adequate guidance for the teachers who will be using the coursebook and its supporting materials?  do the writers set out and justify the basic premises and principies underlying the material?  are keys to exercises given?  etc. some researches and development of efs instructional material had been done before, but the researcher had not found one of the studies that were aimed to develop efs instructional material through moodle platform which focused on 4 english skills. almost all previous research was aimed to develop printed instructional material. some design and development research that used the moodle platform was usually only aimed to improve one of 4 english skills (listening, speaking, reading and writing). one example of researches about efs instructional material was conducted by (giri, artini, & padmadewi, 2018) with the title “developing research and development of english for specific purposes: specific reference of english for secretary”. the results of this research indicated that based on the results of observations, interviews, and questionnaires, the researchers developed instructional material consisting of 8 units. the feasibility of this instructional material was analyzed through a questionnaire by experts and students. the results of the feasibility test showed that the instructional material developed had a good quality and there was a little revision to be done. the developed efs instructional material also received a positive feedback from the students. however, the instructional material product produced was printed books and there was no information regarding the package of the product. methods this research approach could be categorized as qualitative and quantitative research (mixed method). mixed method was a research by combining two forms of research approaches, namely qualitative and quantitative (cresswell, plano-clark, gutmann, & hanson, 2003); (sugiyono, 2016). meanwhile, the subjects of this study were 2 experts consisting of 1 esp feasibility test of english instructional materials for… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 113 expert and 1 expert instructional material development. furthermore, the experts involved in the research can be seen in the table below: table 2: list of feasibility test experts no name expertise 1 prof. dr. endang fauziati, m.hum. expert in english instructional materials for specific purposes from muhammadiyah university of surakarta 2 prof. dr. joko nurkamto, m.pd. expert in developing online instructional materials through moodle from sebelas maret state university of surakarta meanwhile, the method used in this research was delphi method. the delphi method was aimed to obtain the agreement of experts who had high reliability values through a series of questionnaires accompanied by providing feedback on the agreement (mahajan, linstone, & turoff, 1976). the research instruments used in this research were questionnaires and interviews. the questionnaire given to the experts consisted of a syllabus questionnaire and efs instructional material feasibility questionnaires. meanwhile, interview was conducted to confirm the assessment of the experts given through the questionnaires. the feasibility questionnaire given to the experts was analyzed quantitatively. it used a likert scale. the following table was the categories of eligibility for syllabus and efs instructional material through moodle developed. table 3: feasibility test category average score category 1,00-1,75 not feasible 1,76-2,50 less feasible 2,51-3,25 feasible 3,26-4,00 very feasible the results of the interview were described, concluded and compared with the results of the questionnaire that has been obtained. after that, based on qualitative and quantitative data obtained, the researcher could conclude the feasibility of efs instructional material that has been developed. findings in this research, the researcher conducted 3 times the feasibility test on the developed efs instructional material. the due diligence involved 2 experts consisting of 1 esp expert and 1 expert on developing teaching online materials. the feasibility test was carried out on the syllabus and instructional materials that were developed in draft 1, 2 and 3. each draft was developed to improve upon the previous draft based on expert advice. as explained earlier, the instructional material developed was efs instructional material for astri budi luhur students. this instructional didik hariyadi raharjo 114 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 material was an online instructional material that was delivered in full online learning and synchronous learning. genova (2019) described elearning as a new environment in which both instructors and learners use it to interact with each other. whereas clark & mayer (2011) defined elearning as teaching delivered through digital equipment such as computers or mobile devices intended to support learning. synchronous learning was a learning process carried out by lecturers and learners at the same time so as to allow direct interaction in the learning process either through the internet or intranet. this instructional material was intended to develop 4 english skills (listening, speaking, reading and writing) in the context of secretarial work. this instructional material adopted inquiry learning methods to provide broader opportunities for students in the learning process. all learning plans in this instructional material were adjusted to iqf level 5 for diploma iii graduates. the following table was the result of the experts' evaluation of the efs syllabus draft 1 developed: table 4: feasibility test of efs syllabus draft 1 no dimension score average explanation expert 1 expert 2 1 basis of development 4 4 4 very feasible 2 identity 4 4 4 very feasible 3 course learning outcome 4 4 4 very feasible 4 lesson learning outcome 4 4 4 very feasible 5 evaluation indicator 3 3 3 feasible 6 theme 4 3 3,5 very feasible 7 learning experience 3 3 3 feasible 8 evaluation material 3 3 3 feasible 9 material design 3 4 3,5 very feasible 10 learning method 3 3 3 feasible 11 bibliography 4 4 4 very feasible 12 evaluation 3 4 3,5 very feasible 13 time of achievement 3 3 3 feasible average 3,5 very feasible based on expert judgment, it could be concluded that the efs syllabus draft 1 developed had a score of 3.5 and it showed that the syllabus was very suitable for use in the learning process. furthermore, based on the interview, the researcher had to change the syllabus in assessment indicators and the form of syllabus. furthermore, the expert's evaluation of the efs instructional material developed in draft 1 could be seen in the following table: feasibility test of english instructional materials for… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 115 table 5: feasibility test of instructional material draft 1 dimension indicators 1 2 average explanation aim and approach objectives 3 3 3 feasible student’s need 3 3 3,5 very feasible learning style 3 3 3 feasible design and organization course package 4 3 3,5 very feasible content organization 3 3 3 feasible content sequencing 3 3 3 feasible language content grammar 3 3 3 feasible vocabulary 3 3 3 feasible skills listening 3 4 3,5 very feasible speaking 3 4 3,5 very feasible reading 3 3 3 feasible writing 3 3 3 feasible topic interesting material 4 4 4 very feasible material variety 4 4 4 very feasible awareness and experience. 3 4 3,5 very feasible methodology suitability of approach 3 3 3 feasible suitability of techniques 4 4 4 very feasible average 3,25 feasible in the evaluation of instructional material this time, the experts gave a score of 3.25; it showed that the instructional material was feasible to be used in the efs learning process. based on interviews conducted, the researcher had to the entire instruction sentences in the exercises and evaluations and added a reference sub section to the efs instructional material website. after making various changes to the syllabus and instructional materials based on the experts' recommendations on the evaluation of instructional material draft 1, the researcher returned to conduct a feasibility test on the efs instructional material draft 2 that had been developed. the following table was the result of the assessment syllabus from the 2 experts: table 6: feasibility test of efs syllabus draft 2 no dimension score average explanation expert 1 expert 2 1 basis of development 4 4 4 very feasible 2 identity 4 4 4 very feasible 3 course learning outcome 4 4 4 very feasible 4 lesson learning outcome 4 4 4 very feasible 5 evaluation indicator 4 4 4 very feasible 6 theme 4 3 3,5 very feasible 7 learning experience 3 3 3 feasible 8 evaluation material 3 3 3 feasible 9 material design 3 4 3,5 very feasible 10 learning method 3 3 3 feasible didik hariyadi raharjo 116 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 no dimension score average explanation expert 1 expert 2 11 bibliography 4 4 4 very feasible 12 evaluation 3 4 3,5 very feasible 13 time of achievement 3 3 3 feasible average 3,5 very feasible in this assessment, the experts gave a score of 3.5 which means that the syllabus draft 2 was appropriate to be used in the efs learning process. furthermore, based on the results of interview the researcher could conclude that the syllabus was very good in quality and was suitable for use in efs learning. furthermore, the result of the experts' assessment of efs instructional material draft 2 could be seen in the following table: table 7: feasibility test of instructional material draft 2 dimension indicators 1 2 average explanation aim and approach objectives 3 3 3 feasible student’s need 3 3 3,5 very feasible learning style 3 3 3 feasible design and organization course package 4 4 4 very feasible content organization 3 3 3 feasible content sequencing 3 3 3 feasible language content grammar 3 3 3 feasible vocabulary 3 3 3 feasible skills listening 4 4 4 very feasible speaking 4 4 4 very feasible reading 4 4 4 feasible writing 4 4 4 feasible topic interesting material 4 4 4 very feasible material variety 4 4 4 very feasible awareness and experience. 3 4 3,5 very feasible methodology suitability of approach 3 3 3 feasible suitability of techniques 4 4 4 very feasible average 3,5 feasible in this assessment, the experts gave a score of 3.5 which meant that the instructional material was already very feasible to be used in the efs learning process. in the interview process, the experts also did not provide many comments about the instructional material. based on these findings in small group test conducted, the researcher developed the efs draft 3 instructional materials. for this reason, the researcher conducted a feasibility test by involving the experts. the results of the experts' assessment of the developed efs syllabus draft 3 can be seen in the following table: feasibility test of english instructional materials for… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 117 table 8: feasibility test of efs syllabus draft 3 no dimension score average explanation expert 1 expert 2 1 basis of development 4 4 4 very feasible 2 identity 4 4 4 very feasible 3 course learning outcome 4 4 4 very feasible 4 lesson learning outcome 4 4 4 very feasible 5 evaluation indicator 4 4 4 feasible 6 theme 4 3 3,5 very feasible 7 learning experience 4 3 3,5 feasible 8 evaluation material 4 3 3,5 feasible 9 material design 3 4 3,5 very feasible 10 learning method 4 4 4 feasible 11 bibliography 4 4 4 very feasible 12 evaluation 3 4 3,5 very feasible 13 time of achievement 4 3 3,5 feasible average 3.7 very feasible in this assessment, the experts gave a score of 3.7. it showed that the syllabus was very feasible to be used in the efs learning process. furthermore, during the interview process, the experts only commented that the syllabus was very appropriate to use. furthermore, the experts assessed the efs instructional material draft 3 that had been developed. the following table was the result of the assessment: table 9: feasibility test of instructional material draft 3 dimension indicators 1 2 average explanation aim and approach objectives 4 4 4 feasible student’s need 4 4 4 very feasible learning style 3 3 3 feasible design and organization course package 4 4 4 very feasible content organization 4 4 4 feasible content sequencing 4 4 4 feasible language content grammar 4 3 3,5 feasible vocabulary 3 3 3 feasible skills listening 3 4 3,5 very feasible speaking 4 4 4 very feasible reading 4 4 4 feasible writing 4 4 4 feasible topic interesting material 4 4 4 very feasible material variety 4 4 4 very feasible awareness and experience. very feasible methodology suitability of approach 4 4 4 feasible suitability of techniques 3 4 3,5 very feasible average 3.7 feasible didik hariyadi raharjo 118 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 based on quantitative data from the experts' assessment in the table above, the researcher could conclude that the design of the efs instructional material model through moodle draft 3 was very feasible to use. the same result was also obtained in the interview process that was carried out on efs draft 3 instructional material draft 3. discussion as explained earlier, the feasibility test of the developed efs instructional material was carried out 3 times. based on the first expert judgment, it could be concluded that the efs syllabus draft 1 developed had a score of 3.5. it showed that the syllabus was very suitable to be used in the learning process. furthermore, in the interview process, the experts gave a suggestion to change the form of assessment indicators of 4 english language skills used previously to analytic assessments form with descriptive indicators. it was aimed to provide clearer marking marks for the lecturer in the efs courses. liao & hsu (2014) found that analytical rubric on writing could increase the awareness of the structure, improve the organization of writing, and remind students for lexical use and grammar. meanwhile, quintero, guzmán, & guzmán, (2017) stated that by using the analytic assessment rubric, the assessors will pay more attention to the assessment criteria given. the second suggestion was about the form of syllabus used. in the efs syllabus draft 1, the researcher used the semester form syllabus and based on the advice of the experts, the researcher changed the syllabus form into meeting syllabus or in indonesian learning context was known as lesson plan (rpp). this was intended to provide wider space to explain the whole learning process so that the activities of lecturers and students could be clearly described in each phase of inquiry learning on efs instructional material. by using rpp the lecturer would get an overview of the learning process that would be carried out easily and systematically. in addition, lecturer could modify each learning process that was done so that it was not monotonous and boring. (al-tabany, 2014); (rusman, 2012). in the evaluation of instructional material draft 1, the experts gave a score of 3.25. it showed that the instructional material was feasible to be used in the efs learning process. based on the interview, the experts advised the researcher to change the entire instructional sentences in the exercises and evaluations by adjusting them to the assessment criteria contained in the assessment rubric. it was aimed to provide information to students about the assessment criteria used. the second change was to add a reference sub section to the efs instructional material website. while the third change was the addition of illustrations needed in efs instructional material developed. feasibility test of english instructional materials for… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 119 after making various changes to the syllabus and instructional materials based on the experts' recommendations on the evaluation of instructional material draft 1, the researcher returned to conduct a feasibility test on the efs instructional material draft 2 that had been developed. in the efs syllabus draft 2 assessment, the experts gave a score of 3.5. it showed that the syllabus draft 2 was appropriate to be used in the efs learning process. furthermore, based on the results of interview that had been conducted, the experts did not provide much comment about the syllabus and the experts only indicated that the syllabus was very good in quality and was suitable to use in efs learning. in the assessment of efs instructional material draft 3, the experts gave a score of 3.5 which meant that the instructional material was already very feasible to be used in the efs learning process. in the interview process, the experts also did not provide much comment about this instructional material. the experts also gave an indication that this instructional material was very feasible to be used in the efs learning process. after that, the researcher applied the efs syllabus and instructional material draft 2 in a small group test. based on the small group test, the researcher could conclude that some of the files in the efs instructional material were too large and the illustrative images needed to strengthen the students’ understanding about the materials contained in efs. in the assessment of efs syllabus draft 3, the experts gave a score of 3.7. it showed that the syllabus was very feasible to be used in the efs learning process. furthermore, during the interviewing process, the experts only commented that the syllabus was very appropriate to use. meanwhile based on the assessment of efs instructional material through moodle draft 3, it showed that it was very feasible to use. furthermore, the researcher conducted interviews with experts regarding the design of efs instructional material draft 3. in line with the results of interviews conducted it showed that the instructional material developed was very feasible to use. furthermore, the experts did not provide comments, suggestions or revisions to the draft 3 efs instructional material. based on all the qualitative and quantitative data above, the researcher can conclude that the efs instructional material through moodle that was developed was very feasible to be implemented for astri budi luhur students jakarta. it was in line with the results of the research conducted by wulandari (2015), that moodle instructional material was in accordance with the principles of computer assisted language learning (call) and the principle of 9 stages of learning delivered by gagne. didik hariyadi raharjo 120 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 conclusion and suggestion the conclusion of this research is that the condition of the existing of efs instructional material in astri budi luhur was not feasible because it is not equipped with listening material and guidebook for the students and lecturers. the vocabulary and grammar in this instructional material are inadequate for secretarial students. it only contains 3 english skills, (reading, speaking and writing). the efs instructional material has been validated by two experts, those are: esp expert and moodle expert. the result showed that the instructional material was feasible with several improvements. product feasibility test in this research was carried out 3 times. each test was carried out after revising the draft instructional material based on input provided by experts. in the last feasibility test the experts gave a score of 3.7 for the syllabus and 3.7 for the developed instructional material. these score indicated that both the syllabus and efs instructional material developed were very feasible to be applied in efs learning in astri budi luhur jakarta. based on the findings of this research, the researcher could provide several recommendations: 1. for syllabus and instructional material developers, they could explore the shortcomings of the developed 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(2009). sekretaris modern. jakarta: eska media journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 277 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 2, 2021 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.14549 language style in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine 1irene anggita dennaya , 2barli bram 1,2sanata dharma university corresponding email: barli@usd.ac.id abstract in advertising, one of the purposes of communication is to offer a particular product. advertisements display the advantages, features, and values of the products. this paper aimed to analyse the language styles used in online vogue magazine fashion advertisements. the data were collected by selecting ten advertisements collected from vogue magazine’s compilation entitled “the fall 2020 trends vogue edition editors are shopping this season” published on 18 september 2020. the researchers employed mixed methods to analyse the language styles used in the fashion advertisements based on nine types of language styles proposed by wells, burnett, and moriarty (1995). the results showed that there were three language styles found from ten online fashion advertisements in vogue magazine advertisements, namely the hard sell style (three times), soft sell style (three times), and mixed style or the combination of the hard sell and soft sell styles (four times). each advertisement style has its specific features and functions in fashion promotion. keywords: advertisement, language style, magazine, type of language introduction language is an essential aspect of humans in their life. because language is used to communicate with others, people use language as one way or become a communication tool (alsaawi, 2019; fromkin, david, & collins, 1999; wardhaugh, 2006). therefore, it is clear that human beings express their feelings, ideas, thoughts, and whatever exists in mind through language. according to halliday (1985), we live in what is called a ‘literate society’ where spoken and written language are used to communicate in society. spoken language is an utterance in the form of sounds, such as conversation, speech, discussion, radio, and television broadcast. furthermore, halliday (1985) stated that a written language is simply an alternative form of expression to speech, including magazines, newspapers, journals, books, and letters. to compare spoken and written language, halliday (1990, p.62) said https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.14549 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i2.14549&domain=pdf https://orcid.org/0000-0002-4755-1198 https://orcid.org/0000-0002-2102-9676 irene anggita dennaya, barli bram 278 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 that “relative to each other, written language is dense and spoken language is sparse”. for example, halliday (1990, p.62) exemplified the following written version, which is dense: “slavish imitation of models is nowhere implied”. afterward, the spoken version, which is sparse, was provided: “it is not implied anywhere that there are models which should be slavishly imitated” halliday (1990, p.62). in communicating feelings, ideas, or thoughts in the form of spoken or written language, people use their language styles. style refers to selecting the linguistic forms to convey social or artistic effects and acts as a set of instructions (chaika, 1982). an example of written language used by human beings is an advertisement. moreover, taylor (1986) stated that the functions of advertisements are to create consumers' goodwill, create consumer awareness and product differentiation, make sales, and reinforce existing behavior. based on asher (1994), advertising language is used to persuade people to buy a company's products. this means that business including the advertisers are expected to know what kinds of language styles which are appropriate to convince the consumers (atyaksheva, 2019; butt, mukerji, & shareef, 2017; christianto, 2020; ditaya, 2018; evans, phua, lim, & jun, 2017; machin, & van leeuwen, 2005; muthmainnah, 2016; noor, agustien, & rohani, 2017; peltoniemi, 2015; rozalina, 2020; wahyuningbyas, 2018). wells, burnett and moriarty (1995) argued that language in an advertisement has a creative concept to present a message to the reader or the audience. moreover, according to wells, burnett and moriarty (1995), there are nine styles of advertisement to formulate the messages, namely a hard sell, soft sell, lecture and drama, straightforward, the demonstration, the problem solution, the slice of life, the spokesperson, and comparison. a hard sell refers to the rational informational message designed to touch the mind and create a response based on logic (wells, burnett, & moriarty, 1995). also, it convinces the consumers to buy because the product is excellent, better, or best. a soft sell uses an emotional message, and it is designed around an image intended to create a response based on feeling and attitude (wells, burnett, & moriarty, 1995). a hard sell style is more persuasive than a soft sell. next is lecture and drama, which combines serious and structured instruction and a character's story in some situations (wells, burnett, & moriarty, 1995). straightforward means the advertiser conveys messages without using any gimmicks. the messages are more rational than emotional, and the demonstration style refers to how the messages are delivered, emphasizing the product's functions (wells, burnett, & moriarty, 1995). the problem solution is used for smoothly advertising a particular product. the slice of life places the audience in the position of overhearing where the problems are stated and resolved (wells, burnett, & moriarty, 1995). the spokesperson uses famous people to speak in promoting the products, and the last style is comparison which refers to the language style in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 279 way to compare a particular product to another (wells, burnett, & moriarty, 1995). some researchers have also conducted studies on language styles in advertisements. for example, putra and arman (2019, p.111) aimed “to describe the kinds of language style and how they are used in the advertisements and to find out the dominant language style used in marie claire magazine.” seven types of language style were identified: simile, metaphor, personification, alliteration, assonance, ellipsis, and hyperbole, and the most dominant language style, hyperbole, reaching 28 percent (putra, & arman, 2019). another study on advertisement language styles conducted by rahmawati (2019, p.52) showing that “in the advertisements of the new york times they can be divided into hard sell style, soft sell style, straightforward style, and comparison style.” more importantly, peltoniemi (2015) employed content analysis to investigate 400 advertisement appeals in hard copy magazines published in sweden and discovered three styles of advertisements, namely a hard sell, soft sell, and mixture of a hard sell and soft sell. based on the three previous studies mentioned above, which focused on figurative language, a newspaper, and printed magazines, the researchers decided to examine fashion advertisement language styles in online vogue magazine fashion advertisements. for this purpose, the following research question was formulated: what language styles are used in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine? method the researchers conducted a mixed-methods study (creswell, 2014) using document analysis and collected data from the online vogue magazine fashion advertisements (https://www.vogue.com/article/fall-fashion-trends-2020editor-picks). the researchers decided to use this method because the study aims to describe the data in the form of words or written texts. later, the data were described and calculated based on the research problem, namely, what language styles were used in online vogue magazine. to answer the research question “what language styles are used in online vogue magazine fashion advertisements,” the researchers adopted wells, burnett, and moriarty’s (1995) theory on nine types of language styles. to categorize the data more specifically, the researchers added a category called a mixed sell (a combination of a hard sell and a soft sell). the data were ten online advertisements collected from an online vogue magazine’s compilation entitled the fall 2020 trends vogue editors are shopping this season compiled by fass published on 18 september 2020 (https://www.vogue.com/article/fall-fashion-trends-2020-editor-picks). the advertisements were mainly about the fashion stuff to complete the fall https://www.vogue.com/article/fall-fashion-trends-2020-editor-picks irene anggita dennaya, barli bram 280 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 season’s look, as indicated from the article's compilation title. besides, the advertisements were written by people who loved fashion. after collecting the online vogue magazine data, the researchers took several steps to analyze the data. firstly, the researchers categorized the data based on the kinds of language styles based on the theory proposed by wells, burnett, and moriarty (1995). secondly, the researchers interpreted and described the data from each category. finally, the researchers drew conclusions based on the data analysis. findings the following are the results and discussion of ten fashion advertisements collected from the online vogue magazine’s compilation entitled “the fall 2020 trends vogue edition editors are shopping this season” compiled by fass and published online on 18 september 2020 (https://www.vogue.com/article/fall-fashion-trends-2020-editor-picks). table 1 presents the summaries of the results, and the discussion follows. table 1. advertisement distribution no. advertisement style note 1 backless loafers (by virginia smith) hard sell datum 1 2 maxidress (by chioma nnadi) mixed datum 2 3 skirt (by ella riley-adams) mixed datum 3 4 skirt (by madeline fass) soft sell datum 4 5 leather tote (by julie tong) soft sell datum 5 6 coat (by alexandra gurvitch) hard sell datum 6 7 boots (by elisee browchuk) hard sell datum 7 8 weejuns (by lauren valenti) mixed datum 8 9 print top (by sarah spellings) soft sell datum 9 10 denim trousers (by ciarra zatorski) mixed datum 10 as shown in table 1, three advertisements were categorized as a hard sell, three examples of soft sell, and four mixed (hard sell and soft sell). based on wells, burnett, and moriarty’s (1995) nine styles of advertisements, only two of them were identified in this study, namely the hard sell and soft sell. the mixed sell was added (the researchers’ proposed advertisement style). the other seven types, namely lecture and drama, straightforward, the demonstration, the problem solution, the slice of life, the spokesperson, and comparison, were non-existent or non-occurring in this study, which examined a small number of data, namely ten fashion advertisements. discussion below, the ten fashion advertisements were primarily analysed one by one based on the nine types of language style proposed by wells, burnett, and moriarty (1995). https://www.vogue.com/article/fall-fashion-trends-2020-editor-picks language style in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 281 datum 1. the first fashion advertisement was written by virginia smith, a fashion director. this advertisement, describing backless loafers, read as follows. “… however, as we move into fall and the possibility of returning to work, these givenchy loafers are the perfect transition—the appeal of a loafer with the comfort of a slide.” figure 1. “givenchy chain-embellished leather backless loafers” this advertisement highlighted the benefit of the product. moreover, that statement presented the benefit or feature of the product to persuade the readers to buy the product. therefore, this advertisement was classified into a hard-sell type since it focused on describing the product's main features without using promises and dreams but rational information about the comfortable slide. datum 2. the second fashion advertisement was written by chioma nnadi, a fashion news director. this advertisement talked about a maxidress product, which read as follows. “i’m a sucker for a maxi-length mesh dress, and ottolinger always covers theirs with really interesting prints. i’m looking forward to taking this really slinky look into the fall with an oversized trench coat and some chunky boots.” figure 2. “ottolinger tomato-print maxidress” this advertisement was classified as hard-sell style because it focused on explaining the features of the product. the advertisement highlighted the interesting finished prints of the product. on the other hand, the last statement, “finally, i’m ready to wrap my mind around wearing dresses again!” was classified as a soft-sell style since it included the writer’s feeling towards her experience wearing the product. for the reasons, this advertisement was irene anggita dennaya, barli bram 282 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 categorized as a mixed style advertisement because it consisted of two styles, namely a hard sell and a soft sell. datum 3. the third fashion advertisement was written by ella rileyadams, a senior beauty and living editor. this advertisement described a skirt, and it was classified into a mixed style since it focused on the soft sell style and hard sell style. thus, it was clearly explained in the opening of this advertisement as it was classified into a soft-sell style, “sandals for fall? definitely doable with a good pair of socks. my eva birkenstocks have been my most treasured possession since the pandemic started, so i’ll simply up the comfort as the weather chills by committing to a former footwear faux pas that’s been gaining steam since spring.” figure 3. “imitation of christ scoop-neck midi-length dress” this statement led the readers to have a particular feeling and attitude towards the product as it became the most treasured possession to the writer. in addition, a hard-sell style which focused on persuading the readers through rational information based on logic was clearly shown in the statements, “a good friend recently gifted me a pair of brother vellies cloud socks, which are available in a soothing array of colors. i’ll be cozying up with those, as well as a new pair of my favorite kapital smilie socks.” these statements explicitly provided the readers with how to style the sandals. for these reasons, this endorsement advertisement was categorized as a mixed style. datum 4. the fourth fashion advertisement was written by fass, who is a market director. this advertisement described a skirt, and it was classified into a soft-sell style. the reason why this advertisement had a soft-sell style was that it was clearly shown in the statements, “i love a suit and suit separates. after the plethora of skirt suits that came down the runways for fall, it’s only right i give the ladylike version of the tailored silhouette a try. i started to experiment and get comfortable with the idea of incorporating more skirts into my wardrobe earlier this year while we were still in the office, and i look forward to getting back into the groove again by wearing them for as many occasions as i can find this fall. plus a midiskirt will showcase my favorite fall loafers and knee-high boots quite well.” language style in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 283 figure 4. “peter do pleated cotton midiskirt” the writer tried to persuade the consumer to buy this product by sharing her feelings and experience in wearing the product and how her style looked in using the product. at the beginning of the advertisement, she included the word ‘love’ to emphasize her overall feeling towards the product. datum 5. the fifth fashion advertisement was written by julie tong, a commerce director. this advertisement described a leather tote, which read as follows. “the idea of fall trends this year feels a bit strange, but even so, i have found myself gravitating toward the same item i always do during the season—a new bag. this year my style inspiration comes from none other than katie holmes and her sidekick khaite tote bag. even though our team is not returning to the office quite yet, my obsession with work totes runs deep. khaite’s version is one i can’t resist, even if it’s something i can only carry to the local bodega for now.” figure 5. “khaite envelope pleat medium leather tote” it was clear that this advertisement was categorized as a soft sell style since it explained how the writer experienced using the product. she tried to persuade the readers by sharing her feelings when she used the product and touched the readers' feelings later. the statement made it clear that her feeling towards the product was related to her deep obsession with the tote bag. datum 6. the sixth fashion advertisement was written by alexandra gurvitch, an editor. this advertisement talked about a coat, and it was classified into a hard-sell style. “as the weather is getting cooler and our time at home is extending, i am transitioning into adding layers, specifically a trench coat to throw on for my infrequent outings. the burberry battersea trench is just long enough to perfectly hide my loungewear.” irene anggita dennaya, barli bram 284 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 figure 6. “burberry battersea garbandine trench coat” this advertisement presented the product's benefit or feature in the last sentence, highlighting how this coat could perfectly hide her loungewear. this style directly emphasized the tangible features, facilities, and benefits. moreover, she also included how she styled the coat. datum 7. the seventh fashion advertisement was written by elisee browchuk, who is an editor business coordinator. this advertisement explained the features of boots. thus, it was clear that this advertisement was categorized as a hard sell style. figure 7. “imitation of christ scoop-neck midi-length dress” “i’m gravitating toward pieces that feel groovy and timeless this season. fringed jackets, flared denim, and faux leather boots all fit the bill. i’ve been eyeing these stella mccartney platform booties, which look like they walked straight out of the that ’70s show set.” the advertisement provided rational and brief information on how the product's ingredients as expected to work on the lips. datum 8. fashion advertisement eight was written by lauren valentim, a senior beauty editor. the advertisement promoted weejuns product and read as follows: “as i rethink my style in this strange time, i find myself returning to the classics, and nothing gets me in the fall mood more than slipping on a pair of boyish penny loafers. the eternally chic weejuns are comfortable enough for daily sanity walks but stylish enough to help me feel—relatively—puttogether while grabbing a coffee.” language style in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 285 figure 8. “g.h. bass whitney easy weejuns” this advertisement was classified into a mixed style. the first and second sentences of the advertisement were included in a soft-sell style since they expressed the writer’s experience and feelings towards the products to touch the readers’ feelings and attitude and persuade them to buy the product. the last sentence focused on describing the benefits of the products to the readers: the comfortable and stylish look of the product -a hard sell. thus, this advertisement was categorized as a mixed style. datum 9. fashion advertisement nine was written by sarah spellings, who is a fashion news director. this advertisement described a print top product. it was evident from the advertisement that it was classified into a mixed style. the soft-sell style existed in the statements, “i’m not normally a bold print kind of gal, but i’ve been drawn to wavy, abstract, colorful prints lately. and, of course, the master of such prints is emilio pucci. this is my kind of goingout top—seriously i would wear this turtleneck to a club.” figure 9. “emilio pucci sheer abstract-print top” those statements presented how the writer felt and experienced using the product. she also employed a soft-sell style that refers to emotional messages to create responses based on feeling and attitude. moreover, she mentioned using the product at a club and described how to style it. in addition, the statement “but given the world today, i would wear it with wide-leg trousers for work, and a miniskirt, structured blazer long enough to cover said miniskirt, and tights for fun.” was categorized as a hard sell style since it presented the explicit information on how to style the look using the print top product. irene anggita dennaya, barli bram 286 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 datum 10. fashion advertisement ten was written by ciarra lorren zatorski, who is an assistant market director. it mainly explained the denim trousers and suede sneakers. this advertisement was classified into a soft-sell style. “if there is one thing a pandemic-era summer has taught me, it’s that i am a minimalist through and through, as monochromatic looks have carried me through the dog days of the season. crisp white shirts paired with denim shorts and sleek leather flip-flops (also white) have become my daily uniform, adding a bit of brightness to an otherwise dreary time. on the top of my list for fall are classic white pieces like denim trousers and suede sneakers, which will seamlessly transition into the colder months—or perhaps to hang onto the summer aesthetic i just can’t seem to shake off.” figure 10. “harrods le jean leona wide-leg jeans” and “veja rio branco leather-trimmed sneakers” this advertisement presented the writer’s feelings towards the product. for instance, the statement “or perhaps to hang onto the summer aesthetic i just can’t seem to shake off” meant that she could not get rid of the aesthetic of the summer. as shown in the findings and discussion, data 1, 6 and 7 belonged to the hard sell (backless loafers, coat and boots), data 4, 5 and 9 the soft sell (skirt, leather tote and print top) and data 2, 3, 8 and 10 the mixed sell (maxidress, skirt, weejuns and denim trousers). to some extent, the findings of this study were similar to fitriyah’s (2008, p.) investigation, which discovered that “the hard sell and soft sell were dominant in newsweek advertisements.” nevertheless, the results of the two studies also differed since fitriyah (2008) showed no mixed sell. in terms of the number of sell types but not the data quantity, the findings of this study and that of peltoniemi (2015) were the same, namely three categories: the hard sell, soft sell and mixture sell. peltoniemi (2015, p.66) stated that “among 400 advertisements 119 were soft-sell advertisements, 255 hard-sell advertisements and 26 mixture advertisements”. language style in fashion advertisements of online vogue magazine journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 287 conclusion and suggestion this mixed-methods study analysed the language styles used in online vogue magazine fashion advertisements and the results showed three language styles: a hard sell, soft sell, and mixed sell. three advertisements used a hardsell style, another three used a soft-sell style and four used a mixed advertisement style. the mixed style was often used since it provided the customer with complete information on a hard sell. it was 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(3rd ed.). englewood cliffs, nj: prentice-hall. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 149 mind mapping: a way to hone efl ninth graders’ writing skill at an islamic boarding school yelni erniyati1 institut agama islam negeri (iain) kerinci1 corresponding email: yelnierniyati@rocketmail.com abstract the purposes of this research were to reveal the teaching process by using mind-mapping technique, and the students‟ writing ability. this was classroom action research which took place at islamic boarding school al-munawwaroh bangko. the participants were ninth grade students that consisted of 23 female students in the class. this research was conducted in three cycles, and each cycle consisted of three meetings. in collecting the data, the researcher employed observation, field note, and tests. for the test, the researcher utilized writing test in the third meeting of every cycle; students were asked to write or compose the paragraph based on the given topic related to their mind map. the result showed that the teaching and learning process by using mind mapping was more interesting, and students were participated more active than before. they are enthusiastic in recalling and brainstorming the words related to the topic given. the data also indicated that there are enhancements of students‟ writing after they were taught using mind-mapping technique which could be seen from the improvements of students‟ score from the preliminary data to the final data. consequently, mind mapping technique is highly recommended in teaching and in improving students‟ writing. keywords: mind mapping, writing skill, efl ninth graders introduction based on syllabus of junior high school in school based curriculum, it is expected that the ninth grade students are able to express the meaning in short written functional text and simple essay in forms of procedure and report to interact with the surroundings. it means that after learning process of writing, the students can write procedure and report text. on the other hand, the fact revealed that writing is generally regarded as a difficult subject for the students. since writing is the productive skill in the written mode which is more complicated and seems to be the joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 5 no. 2, 2020 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.11139 mailto:yelnierniyati@rocketmail.com yelni erniyati 150 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 hardest of the skill, even for native speakers of a language, since it involves not just a graphic representation of speech, but the development and presentation of thoughts in a structured way (aydogan &akbarov, 2014). furthermore, the students of ninth grade in islamic boarding school al-munawwaroh bangko also had the difficulties of writing. the researcher thought that there are some problems, which caused the students‟ difficulties in writing. first, students have lack of motivation to write and it could be seen based on the observations that had been done by the researcher three times in ibsa (islamic boarding school al-munawwaroh). the researcher found that the students did not do the task given to them, when the teacher asked them to write. the students felt difficult to explore or to express their ideas in written from; they always came to the teacher‟s seat and asked the teacher what they wanted to write. they did not try to find it by themselves. they were also difficult to arrange the words become a meaningful sentence and arrange the sentences become a paragraph. they were also afraid of making mistake in using tenses and the correct grammar; for instance, when they were asked to write the announcement. finally, because of those effects, most of the student just copied the assignment of their friend or repeated the same ideas from the textbook. it means only a few students who had participation in writing class. the second problem was students have lack of vocabulary, and the last was the teaching strategy used by the teacher is a common way. based on the interview with english teachers; about the strategy in teaching that they used, the teachers said that they just use conventional strategy in teaching writing. the teachers just asked the students to write. the students‟ writing score proved the fact. based on the information obtained from the english teacher, 60% of the students from 35 students or about 21 students achieved low score under the criteria minimum score (kkm) of writing that has been established before, namely 70. based on the problems stated previously, it is necessary to solve those problems. the researcher is interested in using mind mapping to be a strategy in teaching. regarding the experts opinions, mind-mapping strategy is one of the effective strategies in teaching writing. a mind map is considered a diagram used to represent the relationship of words, ideas, tasks, or other items connected to and arranged around a central key word or idea (deshatty & mokashi, 2013). in addition, buzan notes that mind mapping is made up of words, colors, lines, and pictures. the main point of this strategy is putting one word in a center as the general idea from the writer‟s mind. this enables students to write down many words specifically from the he previous general word. it is thus an effective tool to aid in studying and organizing information as well as writing. it helps mind mapping: a way to hone efl ninth graders’ writing skill at an islamic… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 151 students to associate ideas, promote creative thinking, and establish meaningful connections among ideas (buzan, 2010). a mind map is a visual diagram used to record and organize information in a way that the brain finds captivating and easy to process. thoughts, ideas or facts are laid out around a central theme so that a person or in this case, the students can clearly „see‟ their flow across different levels. unlike linear methods for recording information, a mind map uses more lines, symbols, key words, color and images all according to simple, brainfriendly concepts rather than a written text (arulselvi, 2017). moreover, mind maps may be used as an effective technique in the process of learningteaching as a form of note taking which has significant differences from traditional note taking form (erdem, 2017). in writing process, as a graphic visual aid, mind maps demonstrate a writer‟s ideas towards a certain topic as well as how the ideas are connected to each other (sturm & rankinerickson) in (zhang, 2018). this strategy is considered helpful for students as it proved to activate students‟ writing performance as study done by alzyoud & al jamal, & baniabdelrahman (2017) who confirmed that the mind mapping strategy improved students' writing performance in test scores. this strategy is claimed to make the writing process as meaningful as possible where students can express their thoughts appropriately. mind mapping strategy is related to enabling students to think while using pictures and images demonstrated to them. then, the current study zhang (2018) who explored the effects of mind mapping at the pre-writing stage on efl writing revealed that explicit instruction of mind mapping could help chinese efl learners improve their argumentative writing performance, especially on contents and organization. in writing instruction, the mind maps can be used as a tool to help learners approach the topic from the meaning-focused perspective by associating it with their prior knowledge, thus it effectively lowers the cognitive requirement for foreign language learners. furthermore, the study done by (yunus & chien, 2016) revealed that majority of the students had positive perceptions of the use of mind mapping strategy in enhancing their writing skills. the students in this research perceive mind mapping technique as an effective strategy in helping them to write and as a result, the mind mapping technique seemed to be an effective tool to help students in planning and organizing their writing by encouraging students to gain a comprehensive understanding of the writing topics. it can be concluded that mind mapping can be implemented in teaching writing. thus, based on the usefulness of mind mapping, the researcher was interested in conducting research in teaching writing by using mind mapping at the ninth grade students of islamic boarding school al yelni erniyati 152 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 munawwaroh bangko. the objectives of this research were to describe the teaching process by using mind-mapping technique, to describe the students‟ writing skill taught by using mind-mapping technique. mind mapping is also recognized as a brainstorming technique that can be used by a cognitive tool by the teacher in arranging and organizing the information of a new topic that will be presented and studied to the students (hillar, 2012). it is a great tool for summarizing information and group events that are related to each other. in addition, mind mapping is the combination of colors, images and also the diagram that reveals the connections between the items of learned material hierarchically. in summary, he says that mind mapping is a teaching strategy that asks students to draw a diagram to be used to outline information represented by pictures and colors (eppler, 2006). related to some previous opinions, the researcher concluded that mind mapping is the teaching strategy that enables students to recall words as many as they can or to brainstorm their words. in addition, this strategy also enables the students to make the relation of ideas, and encourages them to group certain ideas together. making mind mapping is simple (buzan, 2005). the students could follow five following steps: first, use blank sheet unlined paper and some colored pens, and place sideways. next, draw a picture in the middle of the paper/ page about the main topic/subject. then, draw same thick curve, connected lines from the picture in the middle of the paper, one for each of the main ideas about the subject/topic. the central branch should represent the main sub topic. after that, give the name of these ideas by underlining and then, draw a little picture of each-to show as they are as key words, show their importance. finally, from each idea, draw others connected lines, spreading like the branches of the tree, and then add thoughts on each of these ideas. related to this theory, it can be concluded that the students will be easy to make mind mapping. uusen in westwood (2008) states that writing is a complex and demanding skill. writing is the way to express ideas in written form using letters, words, art or media, and it requires mental process in order to express the ideas. in addition, as weigle (2002) notes writing is as an activity that require a context to achieve a certain purpose and for intended audience. writing is also a cognitive activity. weigle discusses the complex cognitive process, or mental activities, involved in writing, the source of knowledge writers draw upon in writing and other factors that influence the writing process. in addition, sturn and koppenhaver in westwood (2008) inform that composing for writing includes the complex thinking that requires integrated multiple components such as the topic or theme, mind mapping: a way to hone efl ninth graders’ writing skill at an islamic… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 153 dictions, organization, aims, audience, clarity, sequence, cohesion and transcriptions. related to some experts‟ opinions above, it can be summarized that writing is a complex skill. there are many components that are needed and considered when the students or people write, because of that components, it make writing is regarded as the difficult skills to be learned by the students. based on the syllabus of junior high school in school based curriculum, especially at the ninth grade of the first semester, in writing, the students are expected to be able to express the meaning in short written functional text and simple essay in forms of procedure and report to interact with the surroundings. therefore, in this research, the researcher used mind mapping strategy in teaching writing in procedure text. knapp & watkins (2005) states procedural text is text that concerns with telling someone how to do something. similarly, yvonne, (1998) explains that procedures give the reader instruction about how to do or make something and the purpose of procedure is to tell how to do something. in summary, procedure text is a text that shows the reader how to do or to make something through the sequence of actions or steps. procedural text always begins with the goal of the text which is usually stated as heading(knapp & watkins, 2005). after this stage, a set of ingredients or the materials required to complete the test orderly. the text then provides a sequence of steps specifying how the goal is to be achieved; the illustrations or the diagrams to assess the reader with the test at hand may accompany the steps. similarly, (kistono, esti tri., & tupan, 2007) explain the features of procedure as the following: first, aim; the opening statement states what has to be done in order for the procedure to be successful. second, materials; this is a listing of all the materials needed to carry out the procedures effectively. the last, method; the method is presented in a series of steps or things to do. based on the explanation above, the summary that can be drawn is the procedure text generally consists of a goal, materials and the series of steps. methods participants of the study classroom action research (car) was employed in this research. the researcher chose classroom action research because the researcher wanted to make a change in the class and to solve the problems found. as (mac naughton & hughes, 2008) note that action research is a cyclical process of “think-do-think” to research and to create a change. they also state that action research begins with hope, dreams, and desires. it means that an action researcher hopes he/she can create a shift, dreams a better world and desires to make different. yelni erniyati 154 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 the researcher conducted this research in three cycles and there were three meetings for each cycle. as stated previously, the students had problem in writing and the teachers just used common way in teaching, so in this occasion, the researcher is interested to overcome the problems; the researcher as a teacher wanted to improve students‟ writing by applying mind mapping strategy in teaching. the research took place at ibsa bangko. the participants were the students of the ninth grade especially ninth grade a. there were 23 female students in this class. the researcher chose this class because between two classes of the ninth grade, this class has problems in writing. then, the object of the research was english teaching and learning process of writing subject. the material taught was procedure paragraph related to the syllabus at the school. instruments the researcher used observation, field note, and test. for qualitative data, the researcher used observation sheet (for teacher and students) and field note, while for collecting quantitative data, the instruments used was writing test. the researcher employed writing test in third meeting for each cycle; the researcher asked the students to write or compose the paragraph based on the given topic and related to their mind map. after the researcher got the data from observation sheet, field note, written test, and then the researcher analyzed the data. data analysis procedures the researcher got qualitative data from observation and field note. in analyzing qualitative data, there were five steps done by the researcher. it was adapted from (gay & airaisian, 2000). the researcher received the quantitative data from writing test. for writing test, the researcher used two scorers/ inter rater scorer to check students‟ writing result. students‟ paragraph will be analyzed to find students‟ ability in writing paragraph by using the scoring rubric that is adapted from (cohen, 1994). after calculating students‟ score, to determine their achievement, the score was compared to minimum score criteria (kkm) of writing, which was 70. based on that criterion, it could be concluded that if the students got the score between 0 until 69, it means that they were in incomplete criterion or they did not reach the kkm, but if they got the score between 70 until 100, it means that they were in complete criterion or they reached the kkm. findings the first cycle first cycle had been done on august 3rd for the first meeting, august 05th for the second meeting and the last meeting on august 08th.the result of the mind mapping: a way to hone efl ninth graders’ writing skill at an islamic… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 155 first cycle; observation and the test, revealed that students had difficulties in choosing appropriate words related to procedure text. they also had difficulties in using correct grammar; imperative sentences and action verbs used in procedure text, spelling and mechanic in writing. they ignored capital letter and punctuation usage in their paragraph writing. furthermore, related to their mind map, the students did not follow the steps in making mind map well. they wrote sentences in their mind map not the key words, they also did not use the colored pen or markers. it seemed they had not understood yet about how to make mind mapping. in addition, related to the questionnaire data, the result showed that the students have high response in using of mind mapping in teaching and learning writing. next, related to students score in writing test (the students who came to the class were 20 students); the data showed that the classical completeness average of students‟ score in writing test was 40%. the data showed that those average score were under the classical completeness criterion that was 70%. the data about the students‟ score in writing test, for more detail could be seen in the following table: table 1.students’ writing score criteria in the first cycle students’ score frequency criteria 0-69 8 incomplete 70-100 12 complete based on the findings of the cycle one, the researcher considered that it was necessary to revise the plan for the next cycle. the researcher decided to divide the students into several groups and add more explanation and example about the vocabularies related to the procedure text, add the explanation about imperative sentence and action verbs used. then, the researcher was suggested to add the explanation about mind map, and remind the students to bring their colored pen or markers. based on those phenomena, the researcher decided to conduct the cycle two the second cycle according to the result of cycle two, it was found that there were improvements of students‟ activeness in the class. they were more active than the first cycle. then, the students‟ response toward the use of mind mapping has improved too, from 55% students who have high response in cycle one become 57.14% in cycle one. furthermore, related to their mind map, the students had follow the rules in making the mind map, so their mind map in this cycle more colorful than the first cycle. next, related to students‟ score in writing test (the students who followed the test were 21 students); the data showed that the average completeness of students‟ score in writing test was 76.20%. the details information was presented in the following table: yelni erniyati 156 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 table.2 students‟ writing score criteria in the second cycle students’ score frequency criteria 0-69 5 incomplete 70-100 16 complete based on tabel 2, it could be concluded that those average score were above the classical completeness criterion that was 70%.it meant that there were improvements in the cycle one. however, the data also showed that there were 5 students who have problems in writing; organization, content, vocabulary, grammar and mechanic. the researcher decided to conduct cycle two that would use picture and areal object in applying mind-mapping technique in teaching the students. the third cycle in this cycle, the researcher used the pictures and a real object in applying mind mapping. there were 18 students came to the class and 4 students did not come. the students were asked to write a procedure text based on their own mind map. the researcher reminded them to pay attention to the vocabulary, grammar and mechanic used in their writing. the result of the third cycle revealed that students‟ average score in classical completeness was 77.78% with the total students who got the completeness criterion were 14 students from 18 students who had attended the class on the day. regarding to the writing aspects, the average score for each aspect was improved, although in this cycle, vocabulary and grammar aspects were lower than others aspects. the highest average was organization aspect and content aspect. it could be reported that students had understood about how to organize and state the idea clearly in their paragraph writing. the researcher found that there were improvements from the first, the second cycle and the third cycle. it could be seen from the result of observation, field note, and writing test. based on the completeness criterion maximum (70) and classical completeness criterion (70%), the scores that had been achieved in the first meeting until the third meeting of students‟ writing test, it were achieved those criteria scores compared with the students‟ preliminary data. although in third cycle there were four students, who were in incomplete criterion for writing test, but as a whole, their average score had achieved the completeness criterion that established before, and the researcher decided to finish the research. discussion regarding to the previous relevant research, this research has the same result although this research done in different school, class, subjects and materials. after conducting the classroom action research, the researcher found that there were enhancements of students‟ condition and achievement mind mapping: a way to hone efl ninth graders’ writing skill at an islamic… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 157 in writing compared with their condition and achievement before the researcher conducted the research. regarding all cycles that had been done, the first cycle was the difficult one, because in the first cycle the researcher tried to use mind mapping technique for the first time, and mind mapping technique was a new technique for the students and the teacher was also new for the students, so they have to adapt with those conditions. the researcher enhanced students’ writing using mind mapping after conducting the research, the researcher found that there were improvements of students‟ writing skill. before doing the research, she obtained the information and the data from the english teacher that the students have less vocabulary and it made them were difficult to explore their ideas in written form; 60% or around 15 students from 23 students got the score under the completeness criterion score that was 70. then, the researcher tried to solve the problems by applying mindmapping technique in teaching writing. the students were easy in getting the words when they were asked to make their own mind mapping related the topic given. moreover, regarding to students‟ writing skill, there were improvement too. in the first cycle, the students who were in incomplete criterion were eight students with the classical completeness percentage were 40%. additionally, based on the writing aspects, in this cycle, students have problems more in vocabulary and mechanics with the average score was 2.85 for both. moreover, the students got the highest average score in organization criterion, namely was 3.80. it could be concluded that the students have understood about how to organize their writing in procedure paragraph. then, at the second cycle, the students who were in complete criterion were 15 students with the classical completeness percentage 71.43%. related to writing aspects, in this cycle, students‟ vocabularies were improved; the students had improvement in choosing words. and the students had a problem in grammar aspect with the average score 3.05. in cycle two, students‟ average score in classical completeness was 77.78% with the total students who got the completeness criterion were 14 students from 18 students who had attended the class on the day. the average score for each aspect was improved, although in this cycle, vocabulary and grammar aspects were lower than others. the highest average was organization aspect and it was followed by content aspect. it could be reported that students had understood about how to organize and state the idea clearly in their paragraph writing. the improvement of students‟ writing from the first cycle to the second cycle was 31.43% and from the second cycle to the last cycle was 6.35%. those writing results proved that mind mapping technique could be used in teaching writing because mind mapping could assist students in yelni erniyati 158 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 organizing and generating more ideas. this result is also proved by al zyoud & al jamal, d. baniabdelrahman (2017) confirmed that the mind mapping strategy improved students' writing performance in test scores. this strategy is considered helpful for students as it proved to activate students‟ writing performance. this strategy is claimed to make the writing process as meaningful as possible where students can express their thoughts appropriately. in addition, finding from the present study by zhang (2018) explored the effects of mind mapping at the pre-writing stage on efl writing. the findings revealed that explicit instruction of mind mapping could help chinese efl learners improve their argumentative writing performance, especially on contents and organization. by corresponding to the findings of this research with those previous studies that have been done by some researchers, it can be concluded that mind map could be used in teaching and enhancing students‟ writing skill, and in this research especially at ninth grade of islamic boarding school al-munawwaroh bangko. the researcher changed classroom condition using mind mapping as stated in the previous background of this research, before the researcher conducted the research in the class, the students did not try to answer their exercise by themselves; they always come to the teacher‟s seat to get the answer. they forgot the words that had been taught to them, the teaching seemed monotonous because just the teacher who was active in the learning process. they felt boring so they kept silent when the teacher asked them. moreover, when they were asked to write; they just copied their friend assignment. then, after the researcher conducted the research, it was a changing in the classroom condition when the teaching and learning process happen. the students seemed interesting and motivating because the technique was something new for them although, for the first time the students still ashamed and awkward to the teacher, because the teacher is new also for them. students were more focus, active and enthusiastic in participating, recalling and brainstorming the words. they tried to answer the teacher‟s questions. this result was proved by the studies that have been done by some researchers. firstly, the study conducted by rafii (2017). the study was carried out with the objective to investigate the improvement in students‟ motivation in writing descriptive texts by using mind mapping technique. the study affirmed that the use of mind mapping technique not only developed writing skills but also increased the level of motivation in students. mind mapping: a way to hone efl ninth graders’ writing skill at an islamic… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 159 wangmo & chalermnirundorn (2018) also found that students were observed participating actively, responding promptly to the given questions and asking questions to clear their doubts. students exhibited the learning satisfaction in writing essays through mind mapping technique and they realized that writing could be easier and fun with mind mapping technique to guide them. therefore, mind-mapping technique had motivated them to perceive writing with positive attitude and enthusiasm. in conclusion, mind mapping technique could change the teaching and learning process condition. conclusion and suggestion some conclusions are drawn. first, teaching and learning process by using mind mapping was more interesting; the students gave more participation in the class in recalling the words. second, there are enhancements of students‟ writing after the teacher taught them by using mind-mapping technique. it can be seen from the improvements of students‟ score from the preliminary data before the researcher conducted until the third cycle done. according to the research results, there will be some suggestions for the following people: (1) teacher; the teacher can apply mind mapping technique in teaching writing, not only in procedure text but also to others materials. 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(2018). a contrastive study on the application of mind maps in argumentative writing instruction for efl learners. canadian center of science and education: english language teaching, 11(12). 120 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 7 no. 1, february 2022 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/19682 http://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19682 the transition of online into limited english learningteaching in the rural area context 1amira wahyu anditasari , 2siti kholija sitompul 12english department, faculty of letters, state university of malang, indonesia 12 jl. semarang no.5, sumbersari, kec. lowokwaru, kota malang, jawa timur 65145 article info abstract article history: received: dec 20, 2021 revised: jan 09, 2022 accepted: jan 17, 2022 the covid-19 pandemic has started to decrease, thus many schools in indonesia have switched their learning activity from online to limited offline learning teaching. this new learning policy from the government might lead to the betterment or instead create new learning issues. reflected from the online learning implementation, rural students suffer more compared to urban students. therefore, this study aimed at exploring rural students’ perceptions towards the transition of online into offline limited learning teaching. a survey study carried out in the state junior high school 3 purbatua, north sumatra, involving 49 students from level 7 to 9 grades. the students were provided with a close-ended questionnaire investigating their perceptions in terms of course content coverage, learning effectiveness, and learning interaction. this turned out that most students were less satisfied with the conductivity of limited offline teaching. students’ satisfaction in the limited offline teaching needs to be considered to have an effective teaching and learning atmosphere. this might be beneficial both to the government and teachers as a reflection to maintain a more appropriate limited offline teaching. the learning and teaching barriers in turn might serve as a reflection for teachers to design more effective teaching activities. keywords: limited offline teaching students’ perception rural students challenges conflict of interest: none funding information: none correspondence: amira wahyu anditasari, english department, faculty of letters, state university of malang, indonesia amira.wahyu.2002218@students.um.ac.id ©amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul this is an open access article under the cc by-sa 4.0 international license. how to cite (apa style): anditasari, a.w., sitompul, s.k. (2022). the transition of online into limited english learningteaching in the rural area context. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 104-118 https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19682 dilemmas will always occur in the teaching contexts mainly during the transition from online learning into a limited face-to-face meeting. in the context of fully conducted online learning, the situation causes a struggle for teachers and practitioners to find the best learning system due to its sudden changes. currently, teachers need to undergo a new teaching atmosphere with a short-limited time. all schools in indonesia must implement specific learning and teaching activities to avoid the spread of viruses based on the https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/19682 http://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19682 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v7i1.19682&domain=pdf https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/ https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19682 https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1661-0906 https://orcid.org/0000-0003-3600-4997 amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 121 joint decision letter of four ministries and the ministry of home affairs number 14 of 2021. of course, by this new policy, the government expects to provide an alternative after online learning brought barriers for teachers and students. at first, online learning brought a learning transition that is significantly challenging for teachers and students since they have to adapt to the learning teaching transition from direct to online. referring to unesco's statement, education systems worldwide have faced an unprecedented challenge since the spread of covid-19. octaberlina et al., (2020) confirmed that all the schools in indonesia changed their english teaching methods from det (direct english teaching) to the virtual one. moreover, endriyati et al., (2019) affirmed the different english teaching challenges faced by teachers who live in urban and rural areas in indonesia. almahasees et al., (2021) affirmed that the students have a chance to adapt to the new changes since they get guidance from the institutions. the students were pursued to interact using online platforms with teachers. however, it did not always run as expected. some previous studies have observed the rural teachers' challenges across different areas such as in (hossain, 2016). he confirmed that the english language achievement of teachers in rural areas was relatively poor compared to urban areas. the low performance was due to the lack of trained teachers, lack of good deals content, and ineffective course. it was asserted that teachers and students in rural areas suffer more than urban areas. most teachers in rural areas were not familiar with technology, had mastery problems with teaching methods, and were less trained (endriyati et al., 2019). besides, the challenges also go to the rural students, such as low mastery of vocabulary issues, less motivation, less participation, less parents' support, and less discipline. it was added that the barriers refer to the students' competence, mindset, and language (febriana et al., 2018). more importantly, rural students encountered internet connection issues (ariyanti, 2020). the rural area's students faced limited online learning accessibility, such as being thrown out from online learning platforms, and limited learning sources access. in the bottom line, students might not reach the appropriateness of online learning. meanwhile, the government and practitioners' ideal concept of online learning is accessible for different circumstances. despite its challenges, online learning provides two opportunities for both teachers and students. dhawan (2020) affirmed that students get advantages during online learning since it offers flexibility, accessibility, and affordability of learning policies. moreover, it provides students to learn at their own pace and at anytime and anywhere. he added that online learning is accessible and potentially reaches urban and some rural areas where they the transition of online into limited english learning-teaching in the rural area context 122 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 get equal opportunities with different conditions of online learning. the conditions refer to it support, human resources, and learning atmospheres. other conditions in online learning to facilitate students' needs in learning consist of technical conditions, teachers' technical skills, teaching styles, and students' involvement in learning (coman et al., 2020). furthermore, mastery of teaching becomes a necessary condition toward online learning (endriyati et al., 2019). teachers are expected to implement various teaching methods and techniques to present adequate online teaching. thus, it is essential to engage students during the learning process by providing content development beyond the curriculum needs (kebritchi et al., 2017). however, nowadays online learning has started to end since the covid-19 crisis has started to subside. many schools in indonesia, particularly in rural areas, have already started limited offline teaching, yet it leads to new challenges. teachers need to consider the way to succeed in limited offline learning-teaching; one way is to ensure students' comprehension in a pressed time. on the other hand, within the given time, teachers are also responsible for transferring knowledge within enhancing the students' communication, collaboration, and creativity, developing students' learning experience, and focusing on the process and the practices of learning (kim et al., 2019). in addition, the teachers should encourage students’ thinking and interaction, lead discussions, and provide practices and feedback for students (mart, 2011). he added that students’ self-learning and motivation are vital to succeed in limited offline teaching-learning. at the same time, the rural teachers’ quality is less adequate to fulfill the students’ needs in the limited offline learning. it was evidenced that the english teacher in smpn 3 purbatua encountered issues related to limited offline learning teaching in term of course content delivery and students’ learning motivation. the limited offline learning teaching condition was totally different as it was felt by the students in smpn 3 purbatua. they already felt comfortable with online learning since they have experienced it for almost two years. the students were less motivated and engaged because they were compelled to suit the new learning condition again. thus, it is urgent for teachers to design the course content, students’ activity, and students’ tasks with the limited time to obtain the same learning opportunities they had in full offline learning. the teacher might introduce students to the course syllabus, list of assignments, learning timeline on the beginning of the class according to singh et al., (2021), as those will help students to prepare their readiness, learning style, and motivation during the limited offline teaching-learning. it was evidenced that in-person offline learning increases students’ motivation, builds the social relationship among students, and improves amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 123 students’ encouragement during the learning activity. this will help the teacher to design the appropriate teaching methodology (kemp & grieve, 2014). in addition, offline learning provides advantages, such as, real time interaction, providing real feedback for students in the classroom, and students’ involvement (paul & jefferson, 2019). through the existence of learning conditions, students might consider that offline learning-teaching is meaningful compared to online learning. furthermore, it is also essential for teachers to provide students’ selflearning which helps them explore information, revise tasks, and discuss tasks. this way can also help students to fulfill the learning competencies. on the other hand, sieberer-nagler (2015) proposed to ensure an adequate classroom atmosphere which refers to the students’ involvement, attention, and understanding during the class. the successful learning teaching activity is not merely based on teachers but also students. therefore, this current study is urged to hear the students’ voices toward the conductivity of offline limited learning-teaching. the students’ perceptions will be an input for the teachers to improve their teaching quality and also the students’ satisfaction towards the offline limited learning-teaching (mahendra, 2020). perception refers to individuals' voice, sense, behavior, and experience towards a particular issue. it results from an experience process that leads to interpretation (taman et al., 2021). thus, perception in this study is used to understand individuals' experiences towards limited offline learning teaching since every individual has a different sense and view. furthermore, students' perceptions of limited offline learning-teaching indicate their reactions after getting involved in the limited classroom. therefore, the appropriateness of offline limited learning teaching can be evaluated through perceptions. the researchers perceive that limited offline learning teaching will lead to new issues for students. therefore, it is urgently needed to investigate a further perception about this new learning situation. the perceptions later can be a suggestion for the betterment of teaching that can evaluate both government and practitioners. the perceptions are narrowed into four aspects: course content coverage (1), learning-teaching effectiveness (2), students' engagement (3), and students' interaction (4). the researchers think these four aspects are crucial to be investigated because having one aspect is insufficient. considering the background of the study, the formulated research question is “what are the students’ perceptions towards the limited offline english learning-teaching?” investigating students’ perceptions related to a particular issue will depend on varied situations such as the students’ conditions, school conditions, learning teaching conditions, and geographic conditions. therefore, in this present study, the problem was limited as follows; the the transition of online into limited english learning-teaching in the rural area context 124 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 perception only regards to junior high school students in rural areas, specifically in smpn 3 purbatua. besides, the perception was only related to learning teaching of english in the school. method this study was survey research aiming at exploring the students' perceptions of limited offline learning-teaching. a survey is a research method to describe opinions, behaviors, perceptions, preferences, and attitudes of individuals who are taken from a large or small population (latief, 2019). in this study, the survey research was carried out at a small school level and was conducted by the researchers themselves. the respondents of this study were three classes of different levels (grade 7, grade 8, and grade 9) at smpn 3 purbatua, north tapanuli regency. the total students consist of 49 students; grade 7 consists of 15 students; grade 8 consists of 16 students; grade 9 consists of 18 students. the school, smpn 3purbatua, was selected as the rural school because it is located out of the town and lacks of educational amenities. instruments the instrument of this study was a paper-based questionnaire (appendix 1). the questions were designed in a closed-ended version. the questionnaire consisted of 11 questions. the questions were divided into course content coverage and learning-teaching effectiveness, students' engagement, and students' satisfaction in the limited offline learning-teaching situation. the questions employed a likert scale. the scales consisted of 4 scales from strongly agree to strongly disagree; 4 for "strongly agree," 3 for "agree," 2 for "disagree," and 1 for "strongly disagree," which was adapted from (afrilyasanti et al., 2017). colman et al., (1997) confirmed that the "odd number" is used to avoid neutral answers from the respondents. in addition, the blueprint of the questions was also designed into a table 1. table 1. blueprint of the questionnaire aspects variables questions students’ profile name class course content coverage leaning materials one question learning teaching effectiveness the delivery of the course content two questions teaching activities two questions students’ interaction limited offline-learning teaching interaction three questions students’ satisfaction limited offline-learning teaching interaction three questions amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 125 table 1 shows the description of the questionnaires. it consisted of 4 aspects followed by the variables within it. the blueprint was used as a guidance to develop the questionnaire. data analysis procedures the data collection was collected through questionnaires that were directly distributed to the students in the school. this technique was applied to this present study because it ensured students' understanding to fill the printed questionnaires and was feasible for the researchers to access the school's location. in this study, there were two techniques in analyzing the data. the first technique was identifying the sheets one by one and classifying the answers based on the scales. after that, the data was analyzed by using statistical techniques. this step aimed at finding the average score (means), the middle point score distribution (median), the most dominant point (modes), the average score of the mean (standard deviation), and the final proportion of the group in the population (percentage). findings this survey study investigated the students' perceptions of offline limited learning-teaching in smpn 3 purbatua. this section is intended to present the study results according to the research question. the distribution of the students' levels is distributed in table 2. table 2. the distribution of students’ characteristics by classes class the number of students percentage (%) grade 7 15 30% grade 8 16 32.6% grade 9 18 38.7% table 2 shows that most of the students who responded in this study were grade 9 as 18 people (36.7%), and the remaining students were grade 7 and 8 with a total of 31 people. then, the results of the questionnaire are shown in table 3. table 3. the results from the questionnaire questions mean median modus strongly agree agree disagree strongly disagree 1. although limited offline meeting is conducted, english course content was 2.7755 10204 3 3 8.16% 63.26 % 31.6% 0% the transition of online into limited english learning-teaching in the rural area context 126 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 questions mean median modus strongly agree agree disagree strongly disagree well covered and delivered 2. full offline teaching activities are as effective as complete limited teaching activities. 2.6734 69388 3 3 8.16% 57.14 % 28.57% 6.12% 3. limited teaching activities are more effective than online teaching activities. 2.7755 10204 3 3 20.40% 44.89 % 22.44% 10.20% 4. the teacher hurries the teachings of the course 2.7755 10204 3 3 12.24% 50.10 % 30.61% 2.04% 5. the teachings of the course were understand able 3.0612 2449 3 3 30.61% 53.06 % 8.16% 8.16% 6. i am always interactive, although limited offline meeting is conducted 2.6938 77551 3 3 6.12% 63.26 % 24.48% 6.12% 7. learninginteraction in the offline meetings is more fun compared to online learning 3.0816 32653 3 3 32.65% 42.85 % 24.48% 0% 8. not many students actively participate in the limited offline meeting 2.7346 93878 3 2 18.36% 36.73 % 44.89% 0% 9. i am happy and convenient with the atmosphere of 2.3469 38776 2 2 2.04% 36.73 % 48.97% 8.16% amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 127 questions mean median modus strongly agree agree disagree strongly disagree the limited offline meeting 10. i am satisfied with the teachings of course contents of limited offline meetings situated 2.6122 44898 3 3 16.32% 40.81 % 30.61% 12.24% 11. i am satisfied with the interaction and teacher's feedback of limited offline meetings situated 2.6530 61224 3 3 6.12% 53.06 % 40.81% 0% the result of the survey is shown in table 3. overall, the rural students from smpn3 purbatua agreed that they enjoyed the limited offline learningteaching. starting from the english course content, most students (63.26%) asserted that the english materials were well delivered and covered. meanwhile, some of the students had opposing views on the course-content coverage and delivery, with a percentage of disagreement (31.6%). considering the learning effectiveness, 57.14% of students claimed that limited offline teaching was effective as a full teaching class, whereas 28.57% of students admitted the less effective limited learning-teaching. likewise, the students (20.4%) absolutely agree with the limited offline learning compared to online learning, and only a few (10.2%) had contrastive opinions. even if the students (50.10%) felt the teacher hurried the learning materials, all were understandable (53.06%). as claimed by 63.26% of students, they actively participated during the limited situation, and only 24.48% of students were not interactive in the classroom. they (42.85 %) considered learning interaction in a limited offline meeting more fun than online learning. moreover, the atmosphere of limited teaching was convenient, but it was only claimed by fewer respondents (36.73%). in contrast, the students (48.97%) admitted that they were inconvenient and not excited with the limited offline teaching. relating to the students' satisfactions, most students confirmed that they were satisfied with the teaching course contents and the learning interactions in the limited offline learning teaching, 40.81 % and 53.06%, respectively. however, it was undeniable that the rest of the students were not pleased with the teaching the transition of online into limited english learning-teaching in the rural area context 128 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 course contents and the learning interactions within the limited offline learning-teaching. discussion based on the research findings, it was found that the english teachers covered and delivered the learning materials quite well. paul & jefferson (2019) affirmed that offline learning encourages students to respond to the teachers’ explanation, to find for clarification of the learning materials, and to make inquiries for the materials that have not been understood. singh et al., (2021) highlighted that the presence of teacher affects the students’ understanding toward course preparation and course understanding. the content delivery aspect became a reflection for teachers to appropriately apply the teaching method during the offline class. the students' condition during offline class is also a consideration in designing the suitable learning materials. more importantly, the learning instructions were clearly explained to the students. as a result, the clear instructions minimized the misconception and misunderstanding of the learning materials (paul & jefferson, 2019). regarding learning effectiveness, setyawan et al., (2020) argued that offline learning achieved more effectiveness than online learning. likewise, it was proved by the present study that most students in rural areas declared the effectiveness of limited teaching rather than online teaching. the effectiveness was achieved through the students’ interaction during the offline class. it was proven by kemp & grieve (2014) that the offline learning teaching triggered students’ motivation, students’ relationship between teachers and other students, and enhanced students’ involvement during the learning teaching. in addition, offline learning provides advantages, such as, real time interaction, providing real feedback for students in the classroom, and students’ involvement (paul & jefferson, 2019). pertinent to the students' interaction, this study revealed good interaction between students and teachers during limited offline learningteaching. usually, students and teachers have direct interaction during offline learning. they can discuss, exchange, and share ideas without barriers (taman et al., 2021). besides, offline learning eager to decrease students’ laziness and loneliness while learning (sim et al., 2020). however, offline learning does not always guarantee a more comfortable situation, because the teacher is the one who demonstrates the class to be active. all things considered; it was assumed that offline learning provides students with a more engaged atmosphere in the classroom. students are freer to interact with teachers and students without any limitation. in general, most rural students from smpn 3 purbatua perceived some positive views about limited offline learning teaching in terms of course content, learning effectiveness, students' interaction, and students' amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 129 satisfaction. these findings were supported by previous studies (martin & bolliger, 2018; p. singh et al., 2021). in relation to the students’ interaction, the offline learning teaching incorporates genuine engagement between teacher and students, in which fostering the feeling of social interactions during class activities (martin & bolliger, 2018). it was assumed that offline learning increases the students’ interaction with their classmates because they can directly communicate what they have progressed in learning to their peers and teachers. considering the students' satisfaction in offline learning, a study conducted by p. singh et al., (2021) revealed that students were more focused and did not feel bored in offline learning compared to online learning. a part from this, they also witnessed the effectiveness of content delivery in offline learning, since it was directly conducted and guided by the teachers. furthermore, another study conducted by damayanti & rachmah (2020) confirmed the effectiveness of offline learning. the students thought that offline learning was effective to them that the effectiveness refer to students’ understanding, students’ interaction with teachers, students’ attendance, students’ concentration. based on the discussed previous studies, the researchers believed that offline limited learning teaching promotes a better learning atmosphere in terms of; content coverage, learning effectiveness, classroom interactions, and students’ satisfaction. the existence of offline limited learning teaching removes the learning barriers that students experienced online. the students are less worried about internet connections, course understanding, learning anxiety, and adaptation of learning style, therefore, the learning outcomes can be better achieved. in the bottom line, the positive behavior toward offline limited learning teaching is evidently experienced by the rural students. conclusion based on the results of the study, it can be concluded that most rural students in smpn3 purbatua perceived positively the transition of online into limited offline learning-teaching. they confirmed the better of limited offline learning than online in terms of course content coverage, learning effectiveness, student interaction, and satisfaction. the adapted learning teaching conditions promote the betterment of the students’ learning outcomes, as they comprehend the materials easily. respectively, the satisfaction of offline limited learning teaching was also perceived by the students in smpn 3 purbatua. however, there was a note that the learning barrier lead the students to feel inconvenient and less excited due to the pressed learning time. the result of this study can be used as the government’s reflection of maintaining the appropriateness of limited offline learning teaching. through the transition of online into limited english learning-teaching in the rural area context 130 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 the reflection, the government should provide teacher training to adapt to the changing learning situation. the training will facilitate the teacher to cope with the issue they found during the limited offline learning teaching; course content delivery and classroom interaction. if the rural english teachers maximize their pedagogy competence, in 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(2021). the young learners’ perception towards english instructional practices using virtual platforms. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 6(2), 181–193. https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.15369 the authors amira wahyu anditasari is master’s students of state university of malang majoring in english language education. she programed the same major in english educational study program from state university of malang as well. siti kholija sitompul is master’s students of state university of malang majoring in english language education. she applied for an english education study program for her undergraduate degree from state university of medan. amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 133 appendix 1 kuesioner kepuasan terhadap pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas (questionnaire toward the implementation of offline limited learning teaching) •nama (name) : •kelas (class) : statements (pernyataan) 4 sangat setuju (strongly agree) 3 setuju (agree) 2 tidak setuju (disagree) 1 sangat tidak setuju (strongly disagree) 1. selama pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas, semua materi pelajaran bahasa inggris tercover dan tersampaikan dengan baik. (although limited offline meeting is conducted, english course content was well covered and delivered) tujuan (aim): kuesioner berikut bertujuan untuk mengetahui persepsi siswa selama pemberlakuan pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas. (this questionnaire aimed to investigate students’ perceptions related to the implementation of offline limited learning teaching). petujuk (instruction): isilah kuesioner berikut dengan memberi tanda centang (√) pada salah satu kolom yang tepat. (fill the questionnaire by putting a thick (√) to one of the appropriate columns). 4= sangat setuju (strongly agree) 3= setuju (agree) 2= tidak setuju (disagree) 1= sangat tidak setuju (strongly disagree) the transition of online into limited english learning-teaching in the rural area context 134 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 statements (pernyataan) 4 sangat setuju (strongly agree) 3 setuju (agree) 2 tidak setuju (disagree) 1 sangat tidak setuju (strongly disagree) 2. pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas sama efektifnya dengan pembelajaran tatap muka penuh. (limited offline teaching activities are as effective as complete limited teaching activities) 3. pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas lebih efektif daripada pembelajaran online. (limited teaching activities are more effective than online teaching activities) 4. guru menyampaikan materi dengan tergesa-gesa. (the teacher hurries the teachings of the course) 5. pengajaran/penyampaian materi bisa dipahami. (the teachings of the course were understandable) 6. saya selalu terlibat aktif selama pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas. (i am always interactive, although limited offline meeting is conducted) 7. pembelajaran tatap muka lebih menyenangkan dibandingkan pembelajaran online. (learning-interaction in the offline meetings is more fun compared to online learning) 8. tidak banyak siswa yang terlibat aktif dalam pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas. (not many students actively participate in the limited offline meeting) amira wahyu anditasari & siti kholija sitompul joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 135 statements (pernyataan) 4 sangat setuju (strongly agree) 3 setuju (agree) 2 tidak setuju (disagree) 1 sangat tidak setuju (strongly disagree) 9. saya merasa senang dan nyaman dengan suasana pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas. (i am happy and convenient with the atmosphere of the limited offline meeting) 10. saya merasa puas dengan penyampaian materi selama pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas. (i am satisfied with the teachings of course contents of limited offline meetings situated 11. saya merasa puas dengan interkasi dan masukan yang diberikan guru selama pembelajaran tatap muka terbatas. (i am satisfied with the interaction and teacher's feedback of limited offline meetings situated) 276 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 7 no. 1, february 2022 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/19735 http://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.20044 feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way 1rahmadsyah rangkuti , 2siti hafifah 1,2english department, faculty of cultural sciences, universitas sumatera utara, indonesia 1,2jalan universitas no 19, kampus usu, padang bulan, medan, sumatera utara, 20155 article info abstract article history: received: jan 13, 2022 revised: feb 11, 2022 accepted: feb 16, 2022 this study is intended to find out the exact meaning of the lyrics at different levels of language, and phonetic devices, as well as to reveal how these stylistic devices work on lady gaga’s born this way (lgbtqa+). this study employed qualitative content analysis. the source of the data was the song born this way by lady gaga and the data were the linguistics aspects of the song, which are the words, phrases, clauses and sentences, as well as the discourse unit of the song. it was found that the song aims to speak to as many perspectives as possible, through different races, sexualities, and gender expressions, through the language uses that are represented in the song. by then, this song has completely succeeded to not only raising up feminist voice, but also, most likely, if there was no song with all the impact and events, understanding about gender and equality would not develop as it is today. the song strongly emphasizes the equality notion by accepting who we are as we are all born this way. the choices of word, phrase, clause and sentence as well as the discourse unit credit about self-liberation, and loving every part of oneself, no matter what race, belief, or sexuality one is on. this also proves that this song is not solely an lgbtqa+ community anthem, instead, it is a song for all kind of self-acceptance. keywords: feminist stylistics lady gaga self-liberation. conflict of interest: none funding information: type here correspondence: rahmadsyah rangkuti, english department, faculty of cultural sciences, university of north sumatera, indonesia. syahkuti@gmail.com ©rahmadsyah rangkuti & siti hafifah this is an open access article under the cc by-sa 4.0 international license. how to cite (apa style): rangkuti, r., hafifah, s. (2022). feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 276-290. https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.20044 stylistics, as a branch of linguistics, simply defined as “the (linguistic) study of style, is rarely undertaken for its own sake, simply as an exercise in describing what use is made of language” (leech and short, 2007). carter and simpson made a distinction between two kinds of stylistics: linguistic stylistics and literary stylistics (mills, 2005). presumably, both literary and linguistic stylistics have something to say about the relation of language to literature. linguistic stylistics foregrounds the linguistic over the literary, and https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/19735 http://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.20044 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v7i1.20044&domain=pdf https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/ https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.20044 https://orcid.org/0000-0003-4419-8648 https://orcid.org/0000-0002-8382-5993 feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 277 does not merely see the application of linguistic practices in terms of their function in an analytical ‘tool kit’. carter and simpson (2005:4) stated: linguistic stylistics is the purest form of stylistics, in that its practitioners attempt to derive from the study of style and language refinement of models for the analysis of language and thus to contribute to the development of linguistic theory (carter and simpson, 2005; rameez et al., 2014). thus, both forms of stylistic analysis draw on a range of linguistic models, from noam chomsky’s generative grammar and michael halliday’s systemic linguistics to john searle’s speech acts and malcolm coulthard’s discourse analysis (mills, 2005:3), depending on their objectives in undertaking analysis. leech and short (2007) then provided a clearer definition: ...in general, literary stylistics has, implicitly or explicitly, the goal of explaining the relation between language and artistic function. the motivating questions are not so much what as why and how. from the linguist’s angle, it is ‘why does the author here choose this form of expression?’ from the literary critic’s viewpoint, it is ‘how is such-and-such an aesthetic effect achieved through language?’ (leech and short, 2007). feminist stylistics is a bridge that links two disciplines, literary criticism and linguistics and it is mainly concerned with the analysis of how feminist ideology is expressed through the choices of language (mills, 2005; shah et al., 2014). as a feminist linguist, she has gained recognition for her notable works, feminist stylistics (2005). she was given a clearer definition of feminist stylistics as “a form of politically motivated stylistics whose aim is to develop an awareness of the way gender is handled in texts” (mills, 2005). thus, feminist stylistics uses a feminist approach in examining texts. however, feminists are concerned not only to analyze texts but to change social relations through that analysis and other forms of action (mills, 2005; arikan, 2016). this is the field of the study where feminism and linguistics are involved. the feminist analysis aims to draw attention to and change the way that gender is represented, since it is clear that a great many of these representational practices are not in the interests of either women or men. these definitions give predominance for style in the study of stylistics and limit the concept of stylistics to the study of literature. this enables stylistics to embrace different aims and approaches in studying texts, including a feminist perspective. feminist stylistics introduces readers to a range of issues and skills in the analysis of texts from a feminist perspective. it is concerned not only to describe sexism in a text, but also to analyze the way that point of view, agency, metaphor, or transitivity are unexpectedly closely related to matters of gender, to discover whether women’s writing practices can be described, and so on (mills, 2005). the feminist stylistic approach of sara millers differs from other general stylistics since the latter focuses only on the rahmadsyah rangkuti & siti hafifah 278 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 linguistic unit of texts, whereas the former has broader scopes including the text itself, author, readers, publisher, and other social aspects. "born this way" is a song written by steffani j. germanotta, or whom internationally known as lady gaga. she explained that this song is her freedom song. it was debuted in the top five spots of every major music chart worldwide, including the billboard 200. in the united states, the record sold more than one million copies in its first week—the highest first week album sales in five years; an estimated 440,000 copies were sold on amazon in two days of its first week for 99 cents. according to the international federation of the phonographic industry (ifpi), it was the third global best-selling album of 2011. at the time of its release, the title track was the fastest-selling single in itunes history. the song was a huge success upon release, charting atop the billboard hot 100 for 6 straight weeks (as the 1000th no. 1 song). this hit was very controversial as there are many indications of movement that are raised or highlighted in the song discourse; it was known as not only a feminist anthem, but also highlight the lgbtqa+ community, or as the sign of the rise of the new world order. society under liberal and secular backgrounds or in developed countries see this as a means of voice to be heard. an article on billboard in 2019 claimed that it was a song that defined the decade; it gave a big voice to people who could only whisper at that time. the message of relentless activism through self-actualization permeates the track -the song’s bridge in particular aims to speak to as many perspectives as possible, as the star listed through different races, sexualities, and gender expressions. in return, even if this track turned out to be a mega-hit, it was a very big controversy to some parts of the world at that time, especially during 2011. for instance, it was banned in lebanon for it seems offensive to christianity as well as in malaysia and for its references to homosexuality and it seems offensive to a country with a majority of moslem. this track was considered as a negative connotation to conservative countries. these controversial events brought this song to continue to rise that it is considered to be the peak moment of gaga. most likely, if there was no song with all the impact and events, understanding about gender and equality would not develop as it is today. some scholars have analyzed lady gaga’s discourse, such as entailment (malewa & arman, 2018), theme and stylistic levels (hawa, 2019), and morphological analysis (aprianti & parmawati, 2020). however, there hasn’t been found any researcher who come up with particular feminist stylistics research of lady gaga’s song born this way and discussing about its controversiality and therefore examine its language use. this study, thus, explores feminist stylistics analysis of lgbtqa+ through feminist stylistics theory by sara mills to study language use in the song, especially to explore the varieties of stylistic devices used in the verses feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 279 to convey the exact meaning of the lyrics at different levels of language, and phonetic devices, as well as to reveal how these stylistic devices work in the lyrics. the study focuses on the linguistics aspects; words, phrases, clauses, sentence, as well as discourse unit. it is also expected to help interpret their contextual meanings and messages concerning social life when the song was released. methods the source of the data of this study was born this way song that was written by steffani j. germanotta or lady gaga. precisely, the data that are highlighted in the lyrics that were analyzed by the researcher are the word and phrase, clause and sentence, as well as the discourse unit. the analysis focuses on gender bias that can be seen in the use of individual words or lexical items. mills (2005) referred to sexism in language as the basis for examining word choice. according to mills, word analysis could only be understood and done by first studying the general and theoretical aspects of sexism and then examining the specific types of sexist language use. she described sexist language as something that alienates both women and men, and a hindrance to effective communication and social interactions. as mills stated by examining examples of usage such as the sex-specific pronoun use, the misuse of generics, address terms, and the negative descriptions of females in a variety of text, it is hoped to show that language use could present and perpetuate a particular view of women. (mills, 2005) this study also explores the varieties of stylistic devices used in the verses such as the phonetic devices in the discourse to reveal how these stylistic devices mingle with each other to work in the lyrics, as well as the transitivity choices and modality used and found in the discourses in order to find out the feminist stylistics of lgbtqa+. findings word and phrase units in lgbtqa+ the gender-specific pronoun here used here is rooting from he as the initial phase, then she. the pronoun ‘he’ was used to referring to the creator or god, as it is arbitrarily accepted to be referred to as he or him. using the pronoun to represent god is arbitrarily agreed in general but she did not capitalize it. she then strengthens the ‘him’ the prior word with another phrase ‘capital h-i-m’, preceded by the conjunction ‘or’ – functions to show parallel fact – that refers to something of almighty bigger power; god. it also functions to narrow down the possibility of the reference of the pronoun. the ‘capital hi-m’ or god is mentioned early in the initial part of the song as in fact every existence has been created by god as he who has created the universe, the living things and mankind. lady gaga in the song then kept on using the rahmadsyah rangkuti & siti hafifah 280 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 pronoun in the pre-chorus as well as in the chorus repetitively with god as reference (see the analysis scheme as shown in the figure 1. figure 1. scheme of analysis of the word/pronoun 'he' the word ‘she’ was used to refer to her mother, as lady gaga specifically mention her ‘mama’ or mother. the title of the song itself is born this way which points out that the interrelation of which to mother is very close. the word ‘mama’ itself is an informal calling of mother and is spoken in nearly every part of the world. this can also function to show intimacy and to raise stronger bond between the writer and her fans or general music listeners out there. lady gaga puts the word in the beginning of the the prechorus to then is replaced by the pronoun ‘she’ (see figure 2.) figure 2. word/pronoun 'she' however, we can see that there are the most dominant words that are non-gender-specific used to refer to any gender, not only specific to female or male. the function of the initial pronoun ‘he’ than ‘she’ functions to visualize the nature of existence and the cruciality of god and mother. the pronoun i, you, as well as we here are used to refer to everyone – the subject to whom lady gaga is encouraging and non-gender specific. the pronoun i is initially used to metaphorically strengthen the message of prioritizing oneself first more important than anything and to show the process of accepting oneself. lady gaga put them in the chorus part then set it repetitively, as shown below: the pronoun i in the chorus set • i’m beautiful in my way • i’m on the right track • baby, i was born this way the pronoun i in the pre-chorus set • i was born to survive • i was born to be brave feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 281 the pronoun ‘you’ is then used to refer to the plural amount of people. it is put after the sentence with the subject i. it is also used as a reference to the word ‘your’ and ‘yourself’. you itself refer to i but in another form to make variation in the song (as shown in figure 3). figure 3. scheme of analysis of the word/subject you the pronoun ‘we’ here is also used to refer not only to i, you, he, and she, but to anyone as in the sentence below: “we are all born superstars” next, the nouns found in the song, e.g. paws, superstars, lipstick, boudoir, lover, head, way, track, baby, a queen, prudence, friends, truth, and sin are the things everyone essentially has. it is also valid for the usage of the adjective beautiful as well as perfect here refer to not only for women but also men as well as to refer to the very core of the meaning which is of a very high standard, excellent, or pleasing the senses or mind aesthetically, and everyone has the right to be one in each own way. by this, it can be can be seen that this song may start with gender-specific development, but then, it attempted to shift or develop the meanings of the above nouns which were likely to be feminine toned to non-gender specific oriented. the discourse is rhymed to have the sound pronounced /ar/ in the end, to strengthen the existence of the sentence there's nothing wrong with loving who you are by the attempt of putting the sentence we are all born superstars, even if it is ended with sound “z” /superstarz/, and french codemixing in the glass of her boudoir, even if the sound “r” pronounces different to the french “r” sound /ar/ and the connotation of which is associated with husband-wife and it did not match to the relation of mother-daughter, and rahmadsyah rangkuti & siti hafifah 282 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 the sentence so hold your head up girl and you'll go far /far/,in which they were all mentioned by her mother (as marked blue shown in figure 4. figure 4. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “ar” or “r” the discourse is rhymed to have the sound pronounced diphthong “ei” in the end, to strengthen the existence of the sentence i was born this way by putting the sentence listen to me when i say, and i'm beautiful in my way (as marked blue shown in figure 5) figure 5. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “ei” it is also rhymed to have the sound pronounced “eik” to emphasize the sentence 'cause god makes no mistake which is strongly supported by the sentence i'm on the right track, which denotes self-acceptance and gradually develop a basis of self-confidence (as marked blue shown in figure 6. figure 6. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “eik” the discourse is rhymed to have the sound pronounced “et” in the end, to strengthen the existence of the sentence don't hide yourself in regret by putting the sentence just love yourself and you're set (as marked blue shown in figure 7). figure 7. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “et” the sentence oh there ain't no other way denotes that there is no other option to turn back to another way or to hold back oneself and that means the confidence in oneself had already stayed in a persistent stage. after passing through the stage of accepting oneself, the next stage in self-acceptance is to strengthen bonds with the environment, especially with feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 283 friends. the discourse is rhymed to have the sound pronounced “enz” in the end, to strengthen the existence of the sentence, and love your friends by putting the sentence give yourself prudence to can together accepting one's truth (as marked blue shown in figure 8). figure 8. the rhyme with scheme of sound “enz” the discourse is rhymed to have the sound pronounced “uth” in the end, to strengthen the existence of the sentence i must be myself, respect my youth by the accompaniment of the sentence so we can rejoice your truth (as marked blue shown in figure 9). figure 9. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “uth” the discourse is rhymed to have the sound pronounced “in” and “ent” which is heard pretty similar in the end, to strengthen the existence of the sentence don't be a drag, just be a queen. it is broken down by the sentence whether you're broke or evergreen, a metaphorical comparison evergreen semantically means a plant having foliage that persists and remains green throughout the year. no wonder if sometimes evergreens is associated with the symbolism of immortality as well as freshness because they retain their leaves throughout the winter. in business, evergreen is a term to indicate a profitable market-leading business that are designed to remain unsold and independent for a long, long time. meanwhile, broke means having completely run out of money and about to be separated into pieces as a result of a blow, shock, or strain. unlike evergreen, broke is a characteristic of being crashed and ruined, not fresh and eternal nor profitable. it is the antonym of the word evergreen. the comparison of words denotes the endurance of people in terms of bullying, whether they can stand still or crashed and ruined psychologically, and they do not only stand for the term of one’s wealth condition (as marked blue shown in figure 10). figure 10. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “in” then, as a reference to the race, skin color; black, white, beige, chola descent as well as directly addressing kinds of race; lebanese, orient are used. she refers to races issues above not to show how contradictive races are, but rahmadsyah rangkuti & siti hafifah 284 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 to show diversity and uniqueness to support the main idea of the song, that god created humans were all born unique and, in their way, (as marked blue shown in figure 11). figure 11. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “ent” the discourse is rhymed to have the sound pronounced “iz” in the end, to strengthen the existence of the sentence whether life's disabilities by the attempt of putting the sentence left you outcast, bullied, or teased, even if it is ended with sound “zd” /tizd/, which means whether or not one’s life is not perfect and is made fun of due to their certain condition (as marked blue shown in figure 12). figure 12. scheme of analysis of the rhyme with sound “iz” sentences unit of lgbtqa+ referring to the list of transitivity choices based on halliday’s systemic functional grammar, the text, the most dominant transitivity choices chosen is the relational process – intensive attributive, then the material process – action process – intention process, then the mental process – internalized. the function of using the relational process – intensive attributive is that the process construes that an entity has some quality attribute which everyone has equal right to be or to have; everyone was born their own way and thus is beautiful in their own way. meanwhile, the function of using the material process is that within which there are two further choices, between ‘material action intention’ and ‘material action supervention’: with material action intention, there is a clear will to do something, but with supervention there is an attempt to capture for analysis those verbal processes where things are not done intentionally (mills, 2005). by the study, it can be seen that it means that god made the mankinds perfect and has made no mistakes, and with the chosen transitivity we can clearly see that the writer understands that god has clear will and undeniable strong power in doing so. then, the function of the mental process used there is to show that the writer embraces her own self and there is nothing wrong about it (see the brief in figure 13) feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 285 figure 13. the list of transitivity choices of the song born this way the writer is then able to speak up of it and encourage other people using modality (just as shown in figure 14). figure 14. the list of modality found in the song born this way referring to the list of transitivity choices made from the text, the most type of modality used in the text is the modulation – imperative– high value (obligation), then the modulation – imperative– high value (required/determined). the writer encourages people using expression of command in high scale to embrace their own selves as it is important. we can see the writer herself is struggling with herself to do so after accepting herself mentally. by then, she has the power to encourage other people, in this case, the listeners as well as her fans, and many other people. discourse unit of born this way referring to the text, the breakdown and the bridge part is the peak of the song. the notion of loving and embracing our own selves would be so much easier if there are no stereotypes, stigma, nor social standards that society has created. fragmentation does occur not only to female but also to male due to toxic masculinity issue. one of the techniques of describing people become done in terms of their bodies in fragmented parts, e.g., their skin color, their sexual preference, and other human anatomical parts and due to this as one of the reasons why embracing oneself is so hard to do (just as shown in figure 15). rahmadsyah rangkuti & siti hafifah 286 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 figure 15. the peak part of the song born this way discussion according to the study above, it can be said that the song aims to speak to as many perspectives as possible, through different races, sexualities, and gender expressions, through the language uses that are represented in the song, which will be broken down one by one below. first, based on the analysis in terms of words and phrases above, it can be seen that the pattern for the development of this song moves from rooting to specific gender, especially from the pronoun he to she, then to non-gender specific. the pronoun he is placed first and is found in the early parts of the song owing to the fact that based on studies above, the pronoun refers to the creator or the almighty or the god, which has so much power that is able to create the universe and everything within, including mankinds. then, the pronoun she is found after the word he is placed. the word she itself refers to mother, who is someone close, especially to gaga, the songwriter. based on the study above, it can be seen that gaga considers her mother or a mother in general as someone who is very capable of understanding and wholeheartedly accepting her own child more than others. then, based on the study above as well, even though a mother is someone who has tried hard to give birth to a human, the pronoun will still be mentioned after the word he owing to the fact that a mother only gives birth, whereas god created mankinds as well as mother. pronoun i plays a lot in this song. pronoun i actually refers to lady gaga herself as a songwriter. nonetheless, based on the study above, the pronoun i itself also functions to represent people as if they feel the meaning of this song using a first perspective and can experience being the actor or main character of this song. in addition, based on the study above, pronoun selection can function to make the song sound more intimate, especially from gaga to the song listeners, as evidenced by the pronouns found other than i, namely we, then you. the nouns found in the song that has been highlighted in the above study refer to not only for women but also men as well as to refer to the very core of the meaning which is of a very high standard, excellent, or pleasing the senses or mind aesthetically, and everyone has the right to be one in each own way. feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 287 from a linguist perspective, it has been argued that pronouns changes more slowly than other words because they belong to the so called ‘function words’ or ‘closed words classes’ (milles, 2013; paterson, 2014). function words are used to organize the grammatical structure in a sentence and their meaning is only derived from how they are used in context (chung and pennebaker, 2007; milles, 2013). pronouns are organized in a grammatical system, thus adding a new word challenges the whole system (paterson, 2014), which is not the case when nouns or verbs are added to a dictionary, or when feminine forms of professional roles are added to masculine forms. (gustafsson sendén et al., 2015), stylisticians doing transitivity analyses formulate their tools from halliday's (1971) framework. mills (1994) used burton's (1982) framework which is considered the first of its kind in feminist stylistics. burton's (1982) processes include three types; material, mental and relational. material processes are "elements which are actions which can be observed in the real world and which have consequences". these can be either material action intention (mai henceforth), in which "there is a clear will to do something", or material action supervention (mas), in which "there is an attempt to capture for analysis those verbal processes where things are not done intentionally". mental internalised (mi) and mental externalised (me) processes, on the other hand, are those containing elements "which take place largely in the mind", while relational processes include elements "which simply relate two elements together" (mills, 1995, p. 142). (al-nakeeb & mufleh, 2018). by this, it can be seen that this song may start with gender specific development, although the female and male bodies are almost equally fragmented, they are depicted differently (saif al-nakeeb, 2018), but then, the song born this way shifts or develops the meanings from nouns which were likely to be feminine-toned to non-gender specific oriented. then, although the pronoun he can be found at the end of the song, it no longer functions as gender specific, but as a repetition which emphasizes the meaning that god has created mankinds the best as possible human being and there is nothing that is unacceptable. furthermore, the phonetic elements contained in the songs, based on the above studies, can be seen that they are designed and found rhyme which serves to emphasize some important morphological elements such as the phrase born this way and the words superstar that led to self-love, selfembrace, and self-freedom. adult attachment security has been linked to the ability to regulate one’s emotions and seek support in fear-provoking, challenging, and conflictual situations (kobak & duemmler, 1994; lopez & brennan, 2000; mikulincer & florian, 1998; simpson & rholes, 1994), which are precisely the types of situations that characterize the lgb identity rahmadsyah rangkuti & siti hafifah 288 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 development process (mohr, 1999). this process also presents challenging situations (e.g., seeking information about sexual orientation, participating in one’s first lgb event, introducing a romantic partner to one’s family of origin) as well as conflictual situations (e.g., conflict with one’s romantic partner or parents regarding public disclosure of sexual orientation) (mohr et al., 2017). but then, the song shifts by bringing not only self-attachment to particular community such as lgbt, but as well as bringing feminism movement then equality. then, based on the study of the sentence’s unit section, the sentences in the song can be seen from the transitivity choices and modality contained in the song lyrics. transitivity analysis can provide comprehensive linguistic evidence for the readers regarding “who/what does what to whom/what?” thus, to arrive at a better understanding of the characters in a literary text (zahoor & janjua, 2016). transitivity choices which are the relational process intensive attributive, then the material process action process intention process, then the mental process – internalized, refer to the message that god made the mankinds perfect and has made no mistakes, and also can be seen that the writer understands the fact that god has clear will and undeniable strong power in doing so, then to show that the writer embraces her own self and there is nothing wrong about it. the message is supported by modality the modulation imperative– high value (obligation), then the modulation imperative– high value (required / determined) which refers to the writer encourages people using an expression of command in high scale to embrace their own selves as it is important. finally, based on the study above, it is also found that the highlighted peak in this song which is also the key to the most major reasons that give rise to stigma and stereotypes that appear in public circles found through the technique of describing people become done in terms of their bodies in fragmented parts, e.g. their skin color, their sexual preference, and other human anatomical parts and due to this as one of the reasons why embracing oneself is so hard to do. by then, this song has completely succeeded to not only raising up feminist voice, but also, most likely, if there was no song with all the impact and events, understanding about gender and equality would not develop as it is today. the song is strongly emphasizing the equality notion by accepting who we are as we are all born this way. the choices of word, phrase, clause and sentence as well as the discourse unit credit about self-liberation, and loving every part of oneself, no matter what race, belief, or sexuality one is on. this also proves that this song is not solely an lgbtqa+ community anthem, instead, it is a song for all kind of self-acceptance. feminist stylistic analysis and lgbtqa+ representation in lady gaga’s born this way joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 289 conclusion based on the analysis, it can be concluded that the song aims to speak to as many perspectives as possible, through different races, sexualities, and gender expressions, through the language uses that are represented in the song. by then, this song has completely succeeded in not only raising up a feminist voice but also, most likely, if there was no song with all the impact and events, understanding about gender and equality would not develop as it is today. the song is strongly emphasizing the equality notion by accepting who we are as we are all born this way. the choices of word, phrase, clause, and sentence as well as the discourse unit credit about self-liberation, and loving every part of oneself, no matter what race, belief, or sexuality one is on. this also proves that this song is not solely an lgbtqa+ community anthem, instead, it is a song for all kind of self-acceptance. references al-nakeeb, o. a. m. s., & mufleh, b. a. h. 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(2016). character construction in tributive songs: transitivity analysis of the song “i am malala”. trames journal of the humanities and social sciences, 20(1985), 201–213. https://doi.org/10.3176/tr.2016.2.05 the authors rahmadsyah rangkuti is a senior lecturer at english department, faculty of cultural sciences, universitas sumatera utara. he obtained his ph.d. from aligarh muslim university, india in the field of linguistics. he can be contacted at syahkuti@gmail.com. siti hafifah is an alumnus of english department, faculty of cultural sciences, universitas sumatera utara. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 215 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 7 no. 1, february 2022 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/19867 http://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19867 efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? 1yelni erniyati , 2pristian hadi putra 1english education study program, institut agama islam negeri (iain) kerinci, indonesia 1 jalan kapten muradi, kecamatan pesisir bukit kota sungai penuh 37112 2islamic education study program, institut agama islam negeri (iain) kerinci, indonesia 2 jalan kapten muradi, kecamatan pesisir bukit kota sungai penuh 37112 article info abstract article history: received: dec 31, 2021 revised: feb 16, 2022 accepted: 21 feb, 2022 this study aimed to determine the students' motivation of nonenglish department—intrinsic and extrinsic—in learning english. it was carried out at the second-grade students of the quran science and interpretation study program (iat) academic year 2020/2021. this study employed descriptive-survey research. there were 34 students becoming the participants of this study. the researchers employed the questionnaire, which consisted of twelve statements to get the data about students’ motivation. it was divided to nine statements about intrinsic motivation and three statements for extrinsic motivation. the data obtained revealed that for intrinsic motivations level, the students were at a high level of motivation with a total mean score of 4. 09 and for extrinsic motivation, the total mean score was 3.97, and it showed that students were also at high level of motivation. thus, it can be summarized that the students have both intrinsic and extrinsic motivation in studying english although they were non-english department students. moreover, the students’ intrinsic motivation in learning english was higher than extrinsic motivation. it can be said that the students were able to control themselves to learn english, even though there was not much external motivation from lecturers or others. regarding the result of this research, future researchers are expected to conduct depth research related to this topic. moreover, the english lecturers who teach the students from the non-english department who are motivated should have good techniques and methods in teaching them, in the order they can achieve their goals in learning english. keywords: motivation learning english non-english department conflict of interest: none funding information: none correspondence: yelni erniyati, english education study program, faculty of teacher training and education, institut agama islam negeri (iain) kerinci, indonesia. yelnierniyati1@gmail.com ©yelni erniyati & pristian hadi saputra this is an open access article under the cc by-sa 4.0 international license. how to cite (apa style): erniyati, y., & saputra, p.h. (2022). efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them?joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 215-231. https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19867 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v7i1.19867&domain=pdf https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/19867 http://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19867 mailto:yelnierniyati1@gmail.com https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/ https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.19867 https://orcid.org/0000-0001-5212-8098 https://orcid.org/0000-0001-5466-0029 yelni erniyati & pristian hadi putra 216joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 nowadays, in indonesia, english is also seen as a very essential learning, and the government has recognized this by including it in the subjects to be studied. government of indonesia has stated in law of national educations system of indonesia number 20-article 37 paragraphs one of 2003 that english is the only foreign language that students must learn from junior high school until university level. moreover, the government’s policy on higher education is a regulation made by the national standard agency of education on standard of content. based on the standard of content of 2010, the curriculum of higher education must contain several general and expertise subjects to develop the graduate competences. taking general subjects is compulsory for every higher education student. the general subjects comprise religion, civic education, indonesian language, english, and statistics or mathematics. these five general subjects weigh 10 credits, 2 credits for each. regarding to this policy, the higher education students must have competences to gain nation competitiveness, and they have to learn english because english is included in compulsory subject. state islamic university of kerinci as one of universities in indonesia had applied this policy. therefore, the college students who are non–english department are required to be able to communicate in english during their studies. to achieve this goal, all students must follow english as one of the general teaching basic subjects known as a general compulsory subject. many college students had barriers in mastering english especially the students in non-english department; learning english could be a challenge for them. based on preliminary interviews conducted by the researchers to the english lecturers who taught the students non-english department, it was found that the students had different competence levels of mastering english and different levels of motivation. as it is known, to succeed in learning, motivation is the key. in such situations, motivation provides humans with the resources they need to survive. motivation in education has an impact on how students learn and behave concerning a subject. the key to learning is motivation (brown, 2003). students' academic effort and achievement are heavily influenced by their motivation. "it seems reasonable to conclude that the motivation which students bring to class is the most important single factor impacting their achievement," writes (harmer, 2001).underlining the importance of examining efl learners' motivation, he states that motivation is one of the cornerstones to language acquisition success. maintaining a high level of motivation, while learning a language is one of the most effective strategies to ensure that the process goes smoothly (zulfikar et al., 2019). motivation, according to alrabai (2014), is one component that, when paired with other factors, determines a learner's performance in foreign language learning. (al efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 217 khairy, 2013) and (al-qahtani, 2013), who found that differences in motivation were responsible for variances in accomplishment, backed this up. understanding learners' motivation allows us to rethink our models of learners and learning. it entails a significant shift in how we think about ourselves, as well as what we know about ourselves based on our abilities to access natural learning and motivation to study (alrabai, 2014). motivation can be both positive and negative in response to a specific event, altering how people respond. when faced with learning challenges, students who are governed by instructors, administrators, and parents, for example, may lack the internal desire and give up quickly. giving students more autonomy and freedom of choice, on the other hand, results in greater willingness to establish internal drives, create objectives, and persevere in tough learning tasks. students' motivation is simply related to their desire to participate in learning. thus, learners' motivation plays a crucial part in learning english. many people believe that motivation is one of the most important determinants of success in learning a second or foreign language, as it influences the level of active, personal involvement in l2 learning (oxford, r., & shearin, 1994). students who had strong motivation would find the easiness of study even though the materials were difficult to be learned. on the other hand, the students who had low motivation would get bored and find difficulties in learning although the materials were so easy. corresponding to this opinion, gardner (1985) as cited in (loganathan & khan, 2016) stated that l2 motivation comes in a variety of forms. when a person is motivated, he or she participates in or engages in relevant activities, completes his or her task, and achieves his or her goal. it means that if a student were motivated; extrinsic or intrinsic ones, he/ she would do their activities especially learning activities excitedly. intrinsic motivation comes from within the learner (javid et.al, 2012). a student who is intrinsically driven is engaged in studying since it is something he enjoys doing. furthermore, intrinsically motivated learners are more likely to succeed since they are more concerned with learning duties for the sake of learning rather than credentials or work opportunities (extrinsic). intrinsic motivation, on the other hand, refers to a desire to engage in a rewarding and long-lasting activity (aldosari, 2014). when learners are intrinsically driven to fulfill learning goals, motivation influences foreign language performance (akhtar & iqbal, 2017). the intrinsic motivation is usually higher when students are internally motivated to study (loganathan & khan, 2016). students who are intrinsically driven have a strong desire to succeed and put in more effort than extrinsically motivated students (abdelrahim & humaida, 2012). extrinsically motivated learners, on the other hand, study for the sake of receiving a reward, such as an academic credential or a good job, (dhaif yelni erniyati & pristian hadi putra 218joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 allah, 2005). when a student wants a measurable goal, he is extrinsically driven. however, according to al-mahrooqi & denman (2014), many behaviors are both internally and extrinsically motivated. students study hard because they are both enthralled by learning and comprehending a particular phenomenon (for example, a foreign language) and eager to succeed in the language course's exams (al-mahrooqi, r & denman, 2014). according to aldosari (2014), extrinsic rewards and other external events that people perceive as driving their behavior will reduce intrinsic drive. if they are informational and positive, they will satisfy the want for competence and efficacy and so enhance intrinsic drive (aldosari, 2014). motivation is a complicated concept with numerous theories and models. to comprehend the connected motivation, it is necessary to investigate the cause of human behavior and the changes it undergoes. because the scope of research in this field is so broad, any research endeavor must have a strong emphasis. student motivation is defined in the context of student motivation research as a collection of theory-based constructs such as interests, ambitions, self-efficacy, and qualities that form student motivation and influence academic outcomes motivation. recognizing the significance of motivation in promoting l2 learning, many kinds of research have been conducted in this field, each offering unique perspectives on motivation and its use in the classroom. other researchers used many motivational ideas for l2 to examine the motivation of taiwanese university students to study english. this study (lai, 2013)used a survey research method, with 267 undergraduate science and technology majors taking part. the majority of them learn english for travel, instrumental, and integrative objectives, according to the results of this poll. furthermore, most participants are motivated to learn english because it is their desired objective. according to this study, external pressure and the l2 self-factor of motivation have little effect on their desire to learn english. regardless of whether he questioned "day" or "night" school students, there was no noticeable difference in their eagerness to learn. attracting the learners' attention and directing their energy into learning is the most important aspect of motivation in addition, alizadeh, (2016) did another study in which he looked into the impact of motivation on english language learning. through a review of some of the most significant research in the field, this study looked at the function of motivation in language learning. he discovered that learners' motivation fluctuates based on the circumstances in which they are learning a language. furthermore, motivation plays an important influence in the development of language abilities. motivation is a crucial aspect of learning a foreign language, and it is influenced by a variety of factors. some efl teachers overlook motivation when encouraging their students to study more. efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 219 teachers can play an important role in encouraging students to acquire a second or foreign language. as efl teachers, we should teach our students how to be motivated. teachers should assist their students in finding inspiration in unexpected places and researching their motivational processes so that they can take advantage of them. loganathan et al (2016) investigated the impact of motivating factors and gender differences on learning english as a second language, with a focus on engineering students from rural areas. the findings demonstrated a considerable positive association between the desire to study english and the attitude toward learning english. the relationship between motivational intensity and attitude toward learning english was determined to be moderate. when comparing male and female students, there was a considerable positive link between integrative and instrumental orientation (loganathan & khan, 2016). based on prior research, it can be determined that motivation is one of the most important qualities that students should possess to attain their learning objectives, which include learning english. in line with the arguments, the researchers were interested to conduct research about the students’ motivation in learning english, especially for non-english department students. this research was conducted at nonenglish department of state institute for islamic studies (iain) kerinci. for those students, english was a compulsory subject that should be taken in order to fulfill their requirements to finish the study, and it was written in the curriculum of department. thus, learning english will be something hard and more challenging for them rather than others subjects. furthermore, this research also attempted to find out how well the students' english learning motivation is. due to the gap described in the previous paragraphs, therefore, the research question of this study was as follows: “how are the intrinsic and extrinsic motivations of non-english department students?” method this study was a descriptive survey study. "surveys gather data at a certain point in time intending to characterize the nature of current conditions, identifying standards against which existing conditions can be evaluated, or determining the correlations that exist between specific events," (cohen et al., 2000). related to this opinion, the researchers wanted to describe or figure out the existing condition of the students in terms of their motivation in learning english. the researchers used questionnaires to obtain the data, as cohen (cohen et al., 2000) stated that descriptive survey research gathering data from a large of people through self–report using questionnaires or interviews. this research was carried out at the state institute for islamic studies (iain) kerinci. the aim was to find the data about students' motivation, yelni erniyati & pristian hadi putra 220joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 whether they have intrinsic motivation or intrinsic motivation in learning english. the populations of this research were non-english department students and focused on the second-grade students of the quran science and interpretation study program (iat). there were 34 students chosen to be the participants. the researchers used questionnaire as the instrument of this research. the researchers adapted william and burden's questionnaire (dornyei, 2001). it consisted of twelve statements that revealed intrinsic and extrinsic motivation. for more detail, the statements presented in the following table: table 1. intrinsic motivations statement no intrinsic motivation strongly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree 1 i like english 2 i enjoy the english class 3 i want to be able to communicate in english 4 i think learning english is easy 5 i`d like to use the english that i have learned 6 i think speaking in english is important nowadays 7 i think speaking in english will help me to find a job 8 i`m nervous when i answer or igiven a presentation in english class 9 i am somehow always anxious about english class meanwhile, for extrinsic motivation statements presented in the following table: table 2. extrinsic motivations statements no extrinsic motivation strongly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree 10 my parents consider english is very important to learn 11 i`m studying english because it ‘s a compulsory subject in the university efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 221 no extrinsic motivation strongly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree 12 i get worried when i`m doing worse than my classmates in english class in collecting the data, the researchers administered the questionnaire to the students. the students should fill the respondent identity first and asked them to choose the categories provided related to the statements based on their condition in learning english. their responses on the questionnaire were classified into intrinsic and extrinsic motivation. after the questionnaire distributed to the students, the researchers calculated the score of the questionnaire. the researchers followed the likert scale as seen in table 3. table 3. the score of questionnaire optional scores strongly agree agree 5 4 neutral 3 disagree 2 strongly disagree 1 having gotten the score of each statement, the researchers got the data about the total students in choosing each category provided for each statement, and then the researcher calculated the mean score by using the formula: m = ∑x n where: m : mean score ∑x : the sum of all the score n : total number of participant after got the mean score, the researchers categorized the score based on the likert scale to know the level of student's learning motivation. the interpretation of mean could be seen in table.4below: table 4. standard of mean mean of range interpretation 3.685.00 2.343.67 high degree of motivation a moderate degree of motivation 1.00-2.33 low degree of motivation yelni erniyati & pristian hadi putra 222joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 findings in this session, the researchers describe the students' motivation found in this research, whether they have intrinsic or extrinsic motivation in learning english. the researchers also describe the level of motivation that the students have in learning english. the data were collected from 34 participants who had filled the questionnaire about motivation in learning english. the questionnaire used was adopted from william and buren's. it consisted of twelve statements divided into intrinsic and extrinsic motivation. the questionnaire used was close-ended in the form of a likert scale intrinsic motivation of non-english department students there were 34 students participated in filling the questionnaire. in more detail, the data about students' questionnaire result in intrinsic motivation are presented in table 5 as follows: table 5. intrinsic motivations statements result of non-english students no intrinsic motivation strongly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree 1 i like english 23 10 1 0 0 2 i enjoy the english class 17 16 1 0 0 3 i want to be able to communicate in english 26 7 1 0 0 4 i think learning english is easy 3 13 11 7 0 5 i`d like to use the english that i have learned 15 10 9 0 0 6 i think speaking in english is important nowadays 18 15 1 0 0 7 i think speaking in english will help me to find a job 12 16 5 1 0 8 i`m nervous when i answer or i give a presentation in english class 8 14 10 2 0 9 i am somehow always anxious about english class 2 10 11 9 2 the table above revealed that they have good intrinsic motivation for studying english because the students who liked english strongly were more than the students who felt neutral. in addition, the student who did not like english was zero. it showed the students have good intrinsic motivation in learning english, although they were nonenglish department students. in line with this data, when a person is prompted, he or she has reasons for enticing inside the relevant sports, expends effort, endures inside the efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 223 sports, attends to the obligations, exhibits the desire to reap the goal, loves the activities, and so on (gardner, 2006). furthermore, the data also showed that 26 students who want to be able to communicate in english are considered very good intrinsic motivation. interestingly, the data also informed that the students like to use english that they have learned, the students agreed that speaking english is important nowadays, and will help them in finding a job later. it means that, most of the students have realized english was a foreign language that is used as an international language for all people in the world and they have known the utility of english as a foreign language for them. the students also agreed that they were always anxious about english class, but the students who are not anxious and feel neutral about english class; although they came from non-english department students; were higher that the students who agree. a negative attitude appears when they answer or give a presentation in english class; the students felt nervous. the data about students’ percentage in choosing the statements related to intrinsic motivation could be seen in the following graph. after getting the data for each statement, the researchers calculated the mean score of those statements to figure out their corresponding motivation level. the data were presented in table 6 as follows: table 6. intrinsic motivations level results of non-english students no intrinsic motivation mean rating of motivation level 0 10 20 30 40 50 60 70 80 90 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 s tu d e n ts ' p e rc e n ta g e number of statement graph 1. percentage of intrinsic motivation statement result strongly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree yelni erniyati & pristian hadi putra 224joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 1 i like english 4.65 high 2 i enjoy the english class 4.47 high 3 i want to be able to communicate in english 4.73 high 4 i think learning english is easy 3.35 moderate 5 i`d like to use the english that i have learned 4.18 high 6 i think speaking in english is important nowadays 4.50 high 7 i think speaking in english will help me to find a job 4.15 high 8 i`m nervous when i answer or i give a presentation in english class 3.82 high 9 i am somehow always anxious about english class 2.97 moderate total 4.09 high table 6 revealed the data of the questionnaire related to students' intrinsic level of motivation in learning english. the total mean score of 4.09 informed that the students have high intrinsic motivation. in detail, from nine statements regarding intrinsic motivation, seven statements showed that the students have a high level of intrinsic motivation in learning english. for statements no. 1, (i like english) the mean score was 4.65, statement no.2 (i enjoy the english class) was 4.47 and statement no.3 (i want to be able to communicate in english) had a mean score of 4.73. those statements proved that the students were at a high level of motivation in learning english. they began the learning by feeling like the english, enjoying the class, and then their goal was to be able to communicate by using english. the other statements revealed the students have high intrinsic motivations; namely i`d like to use the english that i have learned (4.18), i think speaking in english is important nowadays (4.50), and will help me to find a job (4.15), i`m nervous when i answer or i give a presentation in english class (3.82). related to statements no.6 and 7, the students thought that english is important, and they can use it as a tool in finding a job for the future. they had known that becoming fluent in english is essential in finding a job nowadays. regarding other intrinsic motivation statements, two statements proved the students had a moderate level of motivation in learning english; statement no 4 (i think learning english is easy) and no 9 (i am somehow always anxious about english class). both statements proved that learning english is quite difficult for them, so it influenced their motivation in learning, especially in learning english. overall, related to students' intrinsic motivation, the students have a high degree level of intrinsic motivation. it was proved by the total mean score of intrinsic motivation statements which was about 4.09. extrinsic motivation of non-english department students in line with extrinsic motivation statements, the data confirmed eight students (23.53 %) are strongly agree that their parents consider english is very efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 225 important to learn. there are 13 students (38.24 %) agreed that their parents consider english is very important to learn, and there was only one student (2.94%) who felt that his/her parents did not consider english is very important to learn. to sum up, the result of choosing this statement corresponded with the previous statements talking about intrinsic motivations, such as i like english, i enjoy the english class, and i think speaking english is important nowadays. the students got support from the outside of themselves; from their parents who had known the importance of english. it could be drawn that they had extrinsic motivation in learning english. in the tenth statement, “i am studying english because it is a compulsory subject in the university", 7 students (20.59 %) answered they strongly agreed to study english because it is a compulsory subject in the university. then, 12 students or 35.29 % of them answered they agreed about the statement, and there were 7 students (20.59 %) who disagreed to study english because it is a compulsory subject in the university. eventually, for the last statement of the questionnaire, 15 or (44.12 %) participants agreed they feel worried when doing worse than their classmates in english class. meanwhile, the student who disagreed was one person (2.94%). table 7. extrinsic motivations statements results of non-english students no extrinsic motivation strongly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree 10 my parents consider english is very important to learn 8 13 12 1 0 11 i`m studying english because it‘s a compulsory subject in the university 7 12 8 7 0 12 i get worried when i`m doing worse than my classmates in english class 9 15 8 1 1 yelni erniyati & pristian hadi putra 226joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 having gotten the result of student's answers for each statement, the researchers also calculated the mean score of each statement of extrinsic motivation, and got the data revealed in table8 as follows: table 8. extrinsic motivations level results for non-english students no extrinsic motivation mean rating of motivation level 10 my parents consider english is very important to learn 3.74 high 11 i`m studying english because it ‘s a compulsory subject in the university 3.56 moderate 12 i get worried when i`m doing worse than my classmates in english class 3.88 high total 3.73 high the data about extrinsic motivation in table8 showed that the students also had a high level of extrinsic motivation. the statements "my parents consider english is very important to learn and i get worried when i’m doing worse than my classmates in english class,” revealed that level. the mean score of both statements were about 3.74 and 3.88 and for the statement "i`m studying english because it’s a compulsory subject in the university”, the students showed a moderate level of motivation which the mean score was 3.56. in general, the data about students' extrinsic motivation were in a high degree level of motivation (mean 3.73). 0 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 45 50 10 11 12 s tu d e n ts ' p e rc e n ta g e number of statements graph 2. percentage of extrinsic motivation statement strongly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 227 discussion the data gotten revealed that the students are motivated in learning english. the students have both intrinsic and extrinsic motivation although they were non-english department students. they enjoy learning english because they have the pleasure or desire to study english. the students are motivated because of personal goals, interest, self-confidence and their self-efficacy. this finding were agreed upon the previous research conducted by budiana & djuwari, (2018); the result showed that there are two types of motivations owned by the students in learning english; intrinsic and intrinsic motivation. almahrooqi & denman, (2014) also found that instrumental motivation is dominant among participants, while examples of both intrinsic and extrinsic motivation are almost equally apparent. moreover, the research conducted by daif-allah & aljumah, ( 2020) also supported finding of this research that the university students are highly motivated to learning english, therefore, it suggest that motivation is an important factors that shapes learners' idea about foreign language learning. however, this finding is different from previous research finding in terms of motivation result specifically. this research revealed that the students’ intrinsic motivation is higher than students’ extrinsic motivation in learning english. the data of this research informed that the students like english and want to be able to speak english. implicitly, the data showed that they have a goal and self-confidence to learn english although they thought that english is not easy, and they were nervous when answer or give presentation in english class. meanwhile, javid et.al, ( 2012) reported that the participants of their study exhibited higher extrinsic motivational orientations with fairly high intrinsic orientations, because the students got more support from the outside. it was also supported by lai, (2013) who did the research and found that that the majority of the participants studied english for travel, instrumental and integrative orientations. this research has limitation in the depth topics and the participants included in the research. first, related to the results, it was limited on kinds of motivation that students have in learning english; it differ with the research did by alizadeh, (2016); he looked into the impact of motivation on english language learning. through a review of some of the most significant research in the field, this study looked at the function of motivation in language learning. he discovered that learners' motivation fluctuates based on the circumstances in which they are learning a language and plays an important influence in the development of language abilities. additionally, loganathan & khan, (2016) investigated the impact of motivating factors and gender differences on learning english as a second language, with a focus on engineering students from rural areas. the findings demonstrated a considerable positive association between the desire to study english and the yelni erniyati & pristian hadi putra 228joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 attitude toward learning english. the relationship between motivational intensity and attitude toward learning english was determined to be moderate. when comparing male and female students, there was a considerable positive link between integrative and instrumental orientation. regarding to the second limitation was about the participant included in this research, namely 34 students from the quran science and interpretation study program (iat). it also differ with the research conducted by lai, (2013) who examine the motivation of 267 taiwanese university students of undergraduate science and technology majors to study english. he found that most participants are motivated to learn english because it is their desired objective. according to this study, external pressure and the l2 self-factor of motivation have little effect on their desire to learn english. fortunately, besides the limitation stated, the finding of this research support the curriculum of higher education mentioned previously; that student should have competences to gain nation competitiveness. in order to achieve the goal of learning, the students should be motivated; either intrinsic or extrinsic side, because the key of succeed learning is motivation (brown, 2003). the students, who are motivated, have a favorable attitude toward school and view it as pleasant. students who had strong motivation would find the easiness of study even though the materials were difficult to be learnt. on the other hand, the students who had low motivation would get bored and find difficulties in learning although the materials were so easy. thus, learners' motivation plays a crucial part in learning english. in other words, the participants of this research who non-english department students should be motivated to learn english in order to succeed in learning english. conclusion after conducting the research, the researchers got the data that students of the quran science and interpretation study program (iat) have both intrinsic and extrinsic motivation in learning english. the data showed that the students have a high level of both motivations. for intrinsic motivations level, the students were at a high level with a total mean score of 4.09, and for extrinsic motivation, the total mean score was 3.97, and it showed a high level of motivation. thus, the students' intrinsic motivation in learning english was 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(2019). an exploration of english students ' attitude towards english learning. 2(1), 1–12. the authors yelni erniyati is a lecturer at undergraduate of english education study program, faculty of teacher training and education, iain kerinci. her research interests on english language teaching, linguistics and literature. pristian hadi putra is a lecturer at undergraduate of islamic education study program, faculty of teacher training and education iain kerinci. his research interests on education. efl students’ motivation on learning english: what can we learn from them? joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 231 appendix 1 questionnaire of motivation respondent identity name : nim : department : choose one of the options that related to your condition! no statements stron gly agree agree neutral disagree strongly disagree 1 2 3 i like english i enjoy the english class i want to be able to communicate in english 4 i think learning english is easy 5 i`d like to use the english that i have learned 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 i think speaking in english is important nowadays i think speaking in english will help me to find a job i`m nervous when i answer or i give a presentation in english class i am somehow always anxious about english class my parents consider english is very important to learn i`m studying english because it’s a compulsory subject in the university i get worried when i am doing worse than my classmates in english class. journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 321 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 2, 2021 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.14671 causative construction in asahan malay language: morphological causative analysis 1muhammad yusuf , 2mulyadi 1,2universitas sumatera utara corresponding email: yusuf_my@usu.ac.id abstract this study attempts to describe morphological causative in asahan malay language (aml). this research employed qualitative approach. this study followed the steps of data collection and data analysis. the data of this research were obtained through field linguistics method which covered direct elicitation, recording, and elicitation checking. the classified data were clarified with the native speakers of this language to improve the reliability of the data. from the analysis, it can be concluded that morphological causative construction in aml implies that the meaning of cause and effect. it is indicated by the use of suffix –kan and i. in addition, causative markers of –kan and –i in aml can be attached to verbs, adjectives, nouns, and numerals. keywords: causative, morphological, asahan malay language, suffix introduction causative construction (henceforth cc) can be found in any languages around the world. it is defined as an expression containing an event caused by someone's actions or because something happened (goddard, 1998). other expert argue that it is an expression in which an event (the caused event) is depicted as taking place because someone does something or because something happens, that is, if x hadn’t happened, y wouldn’t have happened (imoh, 2014). the types of cc that each language has are different from each other. some languages have all the three types of causative construction (lexical causative, morphological causative and analytic causative) and some languages have only two types ofcausative construction; lexical causative and analytical causative (zuindra & mulyadi, 2020). in most cases, causativity has the meaning “to cause or to make somebody do something” or to cause something to become something different” (mutaka, 2000). he specifies that when it is added to intransitive verbs, the causative suffix adds a subject which functions as agent, whereas, https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.14671 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i2.14671&domain=pdf https://orcid.org/0000-0003-0772-4565 https://orcid.org/0000-0001-8930-1325 muhammad yusuf, mulyadi 322 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 the inherent subject is displaced and functions as the object. comrie (1989) states that every causative situation involves two components of a situation or event, cause and effect, it is in line with shibatani (1976) and goddard (1998) who argue that causative is a situation occurs on two interconnected events, one showing the cause and the other declaring the effect. whereas, dixon (1994) considers that causative is a transitive process, this is quite reasonable that causative markers can convert intransitive to transitive. causative construction is divided into three namely lexical, analytical, and morphological causative. analytical causatives are syntactic constructions with separate verbs such as make. morphological causatives are created by processes such as affixation. lexical causatives are words like kill, send, and feed etc (imoh, 2014; shibatani, 1976). it is expressed by means of aproductive suffix are referred to as morphological causatives (hasan, 2011).the example is presented below. suratman nggodoke wedang kanggo dayohe. ‘suratman boiled drinking water for hisguest.’ (zuindra & mulyadi, 2020) lexical causatives refer to morphologically irregular, nonproductive causative forms. they are typically manifested in languages as a class of transitive verbs refer to as causative transitive verbs, such as cut, destroy, open, melt, boil, etc. in english (hasan, 2011). the difference in valence of non-causative verbs includes intransitive verbs, transitive verbs, and di-transitive verbs. the relation between causative construction and non -causative construction is explained through the hierarchy of grammatical relations of the subject> direct object> indirect object> oblique object (junaidi & mulyadi, 2019). in the hierarchy of grammatical relations, it is explained that causee occupies the highest position, namely the left position which is the position of the causative argument that has not been filled. generally, causativity in several languages in the world occurs on three basic clauses, namely the intransitive basic clause, the monotransitive basic clause, and the transitive basic clause (comrie, 1989). in each part, the different relation shifting occurs after experiencing acausative process. in this case, relation is the relationship between verbs and arguments that are respectively interdependent in the structure of the clause. the causativity event was described by comrie (1989) and purwiati (2012)as follows: causative construction in asahan malay language: morphological causative analysis journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 323 table 1. alteration of valence of non-causative basic verbs to causative verbs (zuindra & mulyadi, 2020) type of clause non-causative basic verbs causative verb intransitive subj subj ol monotransitive subj ol subj ol otl ditransitive subj ol otl subj ol otl obl causative construction describes a micro or event consisting of (1) the event of cause that causes an event and (2) the event that occurs or the result happens caused by the action of cause (comrie, 1985; shibatani, 1976).causer is someone or something that makes someone or something do an action. as suggested by larson (1984:199) “causer is the thing which instigates the event rather than actually doing it”. in the lexical causative there are the term called causer; agent of cause and causee; agent of effect. other experts define that causer is the agent of the external situation. languages that have all the three types of constructions generally belong to agglutinative language type because this type of language has affixes that can be attached to a verb that function to increase or decrease the valence of the verb. meanwhile, a language that has only two types of causative construction is a type of language known as isolating because the language in general does not have an affix that functions to increase or decrease the valence of the verb. the research related to causative construction has been done by many researchers around the world. hasan (2011) attempts to see causative construction in kokborok language used in bangladesh. the most remarkable aspect of the causative constructions in kok-borok is that in double causatives which shows the language kokborok’s unique features if we compare this language with the other south-asian tibeto-burman languages. the findings of mixed causatives show that both periphrastic and morphological devices have been employed in kok-borok to convey the meaning of causative constructions. in relation to sub-ethnic languages in indonesia, hemmings (2013) illustrates causative construction based on the patterns of –i and –aké muhammad yusuf, mulyadi 324 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 from a dialect of javanese, spoken in malang, east java. mayani (2005) explores the use of causative construction in madurese. she argues that based on morphosyntactic parameter, it has three facets of causative construction namely analytical, morphological, and lexical. then, she also concludes that in madurese, morphological causative tends to be direct, on the other hand, analytical causative tends to be indirect. nazara, sudipa, artawa, & satyawati (2019) in their research explore causative construction in nias language. they conclude that some causatives are formed by attaching prefix {fe-} or its allomorph {f-} to an intransitive verb. some are formed by morpholexical operation involving suffix {-ö} and an adjective or suffix {-gö} and a precategorial. both morpholexical operations involving prefix and those involving suffix and the base introduce direct causers. some causatives are formed by attaching confix {fa-...-ö} to a transitive verb as the base. bahasa melayu asahan or asahan malay language (aml) is a dialect which is commonly used by speakers in asahan and tanjungbalai region. the study related to this language is important due to some facts as stated by mulyadi (2010). some of the reasons are the native speakers of this language tend to use bahasa indonesia in their daily activities; there is also a pressure from other languages such as batak toba language, minangkabau language, javanese that causes variation in aml. those reasons make the study of causative construction in aml become urgent. considering the previous studies, therefore, this study attempts to see morphological causative in asahan malay language. this research is expected to be beneficial in broadening the horizon of malay language studies specifically in morphosyntactic area. methods this study used qualitative approach. the data in this study were in the form of sentences. this research includes data collection and data analysis. the research begins with the process of capturing data from asahan malay language (aml), collecting, identifying and classifying. the data of this research were obtained through field linguistics method which covers direct elicitation, recording, and elicitation checking. the data that have been classified were analyzed with the appropriate steps. the classified and analyzed data were clarified with the native speakers of this language (mr. asw, mrs. al, ms. aa, dan ms. ana) whether the utterances are exist and commonly used in aml in order to improve the reliability of the data. then, the analysis was also checked by the experts in morphosyntactic analysis from department of linguistics of universitas sumatera utara. findings morphological causative causative construction in asahan malay language: morphological causative analysis journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 325 morphological causative formation generally implies combining morphemes forming a morphological unit within which the idea of causation is expressed or implied (comrie, 1985; imoh, 2014). the example of morphological causative in aml is presented in the following examples: dio masuk-kan adik-nyo ke sakolah jalan sudirman-tu. (1) he enroll-caus younger brother-poss prept he school at sudirman st dem. ‘he enrolled his brother to the school at sudirman st.’ ipul bongak-i cewek-nyo semalam tentang pesta itu (2) name lie-caus girlfriend-poss yesterday about party det ‘ipul lied to his girlfriend about the party’ in example (1) and (2), the suffix –kan is added to the verb ‘masuk’ ‘enroll’ and ‘bongak’ ‘lie’ in order to form causativity. the base forms are the verb ‘masuk’ ‘enroll’, and ‘bongak’ ‘lie’ which are not causative, but after the process of affixation, the sentence is regarded as causative. derived from noun dio parkara –kan tanah itu keuwak-nyo. (3) he problem-caus land that to uncle poss ‘he problematizes that land to his uncle’ dio-men-duit-kan samuonyo samo kawan-nyo (4) he pref-money-caus everythingto friend-poss ‘he monetizes everything to his friend’ uwak-tu me-ludah-i muko bini-nyo (5) man-det pref-saliva-caus face wife-poss ‘that man spits his wife’s face on’ encet mang-gulo-i teh-tu banyakbonar (6) name pref-sugar-caus tea-dem much so ‘encet sweetens the tea so much’ sentence (3) (4), (5), and (6) are examples of the causative processes derived from nouns based on morphological parameters. in aml, the base duit ‘money’, ludah ‘saliva’, and gulo ‘sugar’ are not containing causative meaning, but after the process of affixation by adding suffix –i, the sentences contain causative constructions. derived from numeral cewek-nyo man-duo-kan-nyo (7) girf-poss pref-two-caus-poss ‘she cheats on him’ amat ma-nyatu-kan duo kaluargo di kampong-tu (8) name pref-one-caus two family prep village-dem muhammad yusuf, mulyadi 326 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 ‘amat unites two families in that village’ sentence (7), and (8) are examples of the causative processes derived from numeral duo ‘two’ and tigo ‘three’ based on morphological parameters. after being add by affixation –i the construction becomes causative. derived from adjective minah mam-bodoh-i joma. (9) name pref-stupid-caus name ‘minah tricks joma’ angkot ma-nyusah-kan hidupomak-nyo. (10) name pref-difficult-caus life mother-poss ‘angkot troubles his mother’s life’ sentence (9), and (10) are examples of the causative processes derived from adjectives bodoh ‘stupid’ and susah ‘susah’ based on morphological parameters. it has derivational process. the word ‘bodoh’ becomes causative after being given by affixation –i to form causative construction. discussion every language owns a different grammatical construction from one another in expressing causative construction (junaidi & mulyadi, 2019). a morphological causative as one of types of causatives means the predicate (which hitherto was non-causative) undergoes some derivational process in order to express causativity, there being no separately expressed predicate of causation (comrie, 1985; cổn, 2020). this type is signed by the use of morphological marker. azizah, artawa, indrawati, & satyawati (2020) state that a causative structure happens when its predicate is filled with verbs that are formed from morphological processes in such a way to produce causative verbs that have morphological characteristics. the causing event and the caused event are encoded in a single verbal complex via causative morphology (anyanwu, 2012). in addition, the causing event and the caused events (effect) are two main components of events (cổn, 2020; sudtedi, 2020) that is semantically biclausal, but semantically monoclausal (baratashvili, 2019). in the example (1) and (2), it can be seen that there is suffix –kan attached to the predicate masuk (enroll). suffix –kan is the sign of morphological causative (afriani, 2016; hadi, 2008). in sentence (1), causative –kan was attached to di-transitive verb ‘masuk’ ‘enroll’ so that the causing event is clearly expressed by regular morphological process. it is also relevant to the statement by baratashvili (2019) that the process of affixation as a result of morphological process affects the process of causativity which is then called as morphological causative. in standard indonesian, the critical role of the the causative construction in asahan malay language: morphological causative analysis journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 327 suffix -kan is to convert an intransitive or (rarely) a monotransitive verb to a causative verb even though it seems to possesses some other functions such as benefactive applicative (yanti, mckinnon, cole, & hermon, 2021). in example (2), causative marker –kan was attached to noun. it is also in line with other studies done by azizah et al. (2020) that this process possibly include internal changes such as consonant repetition, reduplication, vocal extension and the like, or various affixations. in aml, besides suffix –kan, suffif –i is one of other marker of affixation to form morphological causative. the suffix –i is the marker of causative. in sentence (3), the subject ipul is the agent and there is the addition of argument structure with increasing valency level of the intransitive verb ‘lie’. the effect of adding causative affixes -i was the addition of arguments that function as cause. in example (1), there is also an increasing valency level of intransitive verb. the causative markers of–kan and –i in aml can be attached to verbs, adjectives, nouns, and numerals in order to form causative verbs. in other languages such as in madurese, causative verb is commonly marked by prefix main the form of adjective (salsabila & subiyanto, 2020). conclusion and suggestion from the analysis, it can be concluded that morphological causative construction in aml implies that the meaning of cause and effect. it is indicated by the use of suffix –kan and -i. in addition, causative markers of– kan and –i in aml can be attached to verbs, adjectives, nouns, and numerals. since this study is limited to the analysis of morphological causative construction, further researchers are suggested to explore analytical and peripheral causative. in addition, further researcher can also conduct further studies related to aml such as passive construction, relative clause construction, etc. acknowledgements the writers would like to direct their appreciativeness to mr. asw, mrs. al, ms. aa, dan ms. ana for their help in accomplishing this article. references afriani, s. h. 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(2020). morphological and analytical causative construction in deli javanese dialect. language literacy: journal of linguistics, literature and language teaching, 4(1), 121–132. 290 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 2, 2021 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.16102 an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis abstracts written in two languages 1zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah , 2budi hermawan , 3dian dia-an muniroh 1,2,3universitas pendidikan indonesia corresponding email: zalindasf@upi.edu abstract an abstract is a brief overview of a research paper. indonesian undergraduate students are often required to submit their thesis abstracts in indonesian and english. various studies related to rhetorical move and translation techniques of abstracts have been done previously, but not many analyzed undergraduate students’ thesis abstracts across languages. therefore, this study aims to analyze the move-step of the abstracts, and to see translation techniques in different abstract moves. this study used 60 undergraduate thesis abstracts from english language and literature and indonesian language literature study programs as the data. as the framework for the data analysis, this study employed hyland’s (2000) five-move model and molina & albir’s (2002) translation techniques. the findings show that despite writing in different languages, both indonesian and english abstracts were realized with similar rhetorical moves and steps. move 3 and 4 were found in all of the abstracts, while move 5 was only realized in small numbers across languages. in relation to translation techniques, it is found that literal translation is used more frequently than other translation techniques. this study recommends a more extensive study that involves more data from different fields to expand the existing knowledge relating to rhetorical move and translation techniques in the academic field, especially in undergraduate students’ abstracts. keywords: abstracts, rhetorical move, steps, translation techniques, undergraduate introduction an abstract serves as one of the most important elements of a research paper. it represents the content of a paper in a more condensed way and helps readers gain a preview of information in a quick and comprehensive way (cross & oppenheim, 2006; koltay, 2010; kurniawan et al., 2019). in addition, https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.16102 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i2.16102&domain=pdf mailto:zalindasf@upi.edu https://orcid.org/0000-0001-5468-3925 https://orcid.org/0000-0002-7192-6439 https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1679-1516 zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 291 an abstract acts as an outline to help the readers understand its full content (koltay, 2010). in short, an abstract is a concise text that helps the reader to get the gist of the content and know what to expect by serving the main points of a paper. due to its functions, an abstract is most likely to be read first by the reader to determine whether a paper is worth reading or not. however, certain characteristics should be present in an abstract in order for it to be functional: brevity, exhaustivity, accuracy, density, clarity, and content (cross & oppenheim, 2006). abstracts are often arranged in a rhetorical pattern relevant to its discipline and due to its diversity, writing an abstract targeted for publication in a journal becomes a challenge (kurniawan et al., 2019). in a more general sense, bhatia (1993) suggested that an abstract contains information on four aspects of a research paper: what was done in the research, how the research was done, what was found in the research, and what was concluded from the research. from those questions, bhatia (1993) developed four moves: introducing purpose, describing methodology, summarizing results, and presenting conclusions. based on his research using a corpus consisting of 800 abstracts, hyland (2000) further developed bhatia’s four categories of moves into a five-move model. the five-model consists of introduction, purpose, method, product, and conclusion. the understanding of move through move analysis helps to raise comprehension of standard moves realization in an abstract (kurniawan et al., 2019). in order to achieve international publication, a research paper must be written in english. if it is not written in english, the source text (st) must be translated into english. for a similar reason, undergraduate thesis abstracts written in indonesian must be written in english. writing abstracts in english can be a challenge for students who are not used to writing in english. this can be understood as english is not the first language of most indonesian students. students may resort to translating their abstracts word-to-word, or even use an online translation engine such as google translate. past studies had concluded that online translation engines were unable to produce perfectly translated texts and a considerable amount of grammatical revisions were needed (groves & mundt, 2015; sukmawati et al., 2021). bassnett (2014) stated that translating is a common activity as an impact of a rapid increase of access to media all over the world. translation is defined as the process of transferring a text from its source language to a target language. in an academic context, translation holds an important role in the process of knowledge transfer. if an academic text is not properly translated, the process of knowledge transfer may not be done properly. poor translation quality may not only change the structure of the translated abstract, but also omit some parts and decrease the overall functionality of the abstract. other than that, poor translation quality could possibly hinder the paper from being an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis… 292 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 published. consequently, the paper will not be discovered and read by a wide range of audience as well. therefore, it is highly important to write and translate an abstract well. in relation to translation, translation techniques have been proposed by researchers in this field. translation techniques refer to the instrument of textual analysis that allows one to understand how translation works (molina & albir, 2002). many experts have proposed various translation techniques— nida’s (1964) techniques of adjustment and newmark’s (1988) procedures, to name a few. however, the techniques proposed by those experts seem to differentiate method, strategy, and technique whereas according to hurtado (1996, as cited in molina & albir, 2002), those three terms refer to similar activities. thus, molina and albir proposed their own approach to translation techniques that were derived from existing methods, strategies, and techniques. the classification of techniques include adaptation, amplification, borrowing, calque, compensation, description, discursive creation, established equivalent, generalization, linguistic amplification, linguistic compression, literal translation, modulation, particularization, reduction, substitution, transposition, and variation. with its variety, this technique is expected to be able to distinguish between translation method, strategy, and technique. many researchers have conducted studies in the past about moves in research abstracts using hyland's (2000) five-move theory. chalak & norouzi's (2013) study that analyzed the rhetorical moves in american and iranian abstracts revealed that move 2 (purpose), move 3 (method), and move 4 (result) were considered obligatory while the rest were optional moves. in a similar context, darabad (2016) conducted an analysis of rhetorical moves in research article abstracts across disciplines. the study found that introduction is the move that was found the least, while purpose and product moves were found the most in all of the examined abstracts. rashidi & meihami's (2018) study that investigated abstracts of articles published in scientometrics showed that method and product were the moves that appeared the most, while the move that appeared least was conclusion. amnuai (2019) conducted a similar research with ra from thai and international accounting journals. the study finds that purpose and product were used the most frequently. from those studies, it is shown that move 4 (product or result) is a move that occurred the most frequently in the abstracts. in the field of translation, there are several studies that used molina & albir's (2002) translation techniques to identify translation techniques in various texts. for instance, anwar et al. (2020) employed the framework to analyze translation techniques in aladdin’s movie script. the findings of their study showed that linguistic compression was used the most prominently at zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 293 56.52%, while other techniques occurred less frequently (10% and below). kuswahono (2020) used the technique to identify translation techniques of a novel. his study revealed that six techniques were employed. pure borrowing is the most frequently used technique with 188 occurrences, followed by transposition with 23 occurrences. not only literature texts, the translation techniques have been used for example to analyze religious texts as well, such as a translation technique analysis of quranic metaphor or kinayah by al farisi (2020). the result showed that the application of literal translation presented the primary meaning of the kinayah verses accurately while amplification presents the secondary meaning transparently with target language as the orientation. another type of religious text that went through an analysis using molina & albir's (2002) translation techniques is religious tourism brochure (sodiq et al., 2020). the result revealed that pure borrowing is the technique that was identified the most with 41% frequency, followed by pure borrowing-established equivalent with 17% frequency. while the results of these previous studies differ, it shows a similarity where there is a noticeable gap between the translation technique that occurred the most and the rest. as can be seen from the existing previous studies, analysis of the rhetorical pattern of undergraduate abstracts is still quite scarce. analysis of translation techniques of undergraduate level abstract is not something that has been explored a lot as well. therefore, this study aimed to identify and analyze the rhetorical moves and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis abstracts across indonesian and english languages using hyland's (2000) five-move model and molina and albir’s (2002) translation techniques. this article will attempt to answer the following questions: 1. how is the rhetorical organization of the abstracts written in english and translated into indonesian and vice versa illustrated in thesis abstracts and its translated version? 2. what are translation techniques employed to translate the thesis abstracts written in english and translated into indonesian and vice versa? methods this is a qualitative study that analyzes undergraduate students’ abstracts. this study intended to identify rhetorical moves and translation techniques that were used by undergraduate students in writing their thesis research abstract across languages. subject to fulfill the aim of the study, the abstracts that were taken as data must be written in two languages. the abstracts were extracted from the theses of undergraduate english language and literature and indonesian language an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis… 294 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 and literature students. the study programs were chosen because english language and literature students were required to write their thesis abstract in english first, while indonesian language and literature students wrote their thesis abstract in indonesian first. the data consists of a corpus of 60 abstracts—30 abstracts in its source language and 30 abstracts in its target language. 30 abstracts were taken from english language and literature undergraduate theses with 15 written in english and 15 translated to indonesian, and 30 abstracts were taken from indonesian language and literature thesis with 15 written in indonesian and 15 written in english. data collection first, the researchers determined the subject field of the data that would be analyzed. second, the researchers accessed universitas pendidikan indonesia’s online repository website. third, the theses abstracts were checked starting from the most recently published. if it was written in english and indonesian, the abstracts were chosen. fourth, the abstracts were copied and compiled according to its study program and language into a file with docx format. the title, author name, and year of publication were written on top of the abstract. data analysis procedures two analyses were done to reach the aim of this study. there are move analysis and translation technique analysis. move analysis employed hyland (2000)’s five-move as the framework (see table 1). the data analysis procedure consisted of several steps. table 1. hyland’s (2000) five-move analysis guide move step description introduction (i) s1 arguing for topic significance s2 making topic generalization s3 defining key term(s) s4 identifying gap purpose (p) stating the research purpose method (m) s1 describing the participants/data sources s2 describing the instrument(s) s3 describing the procedure and context purpose (pr) describing the main results conclusion (c) s1 deducing conclusion s2 evaluating the significance of the research s3 stating limitation s4 presenting recommendation or implication zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 295 note. adopted from “disciplinary discourse: social interactions in academic writing” by k hyland. 2002, university of michigan press. copyright 2019 by university of michigan. the sentences were broken down into sentences as the unit of analysis, both for the move analysis and translation techniques analysis. to analyze the rhetorical moves, the sentences were then put into tables and then labeled according to its move and step category. for the rhetorical move analysis, both abstracts written in the source language (sl) and the target language (tl) are analyzed to see whether there are moves and steps that are omitted or not. the occurrence of each move and step were then counted using tally marks and processed in excel to see the percentage of the occurrence. table 3 shows the result of the calculation. molina & albir's (2002) translation techniques (see table 2) were used as the theoretical framework to analyze the translation techniques. the analysis steps were as follows. first, the sentences of the abstracts written in source language (sl) and target language (tl) were put next to each other in a table, which is made for the analysis process. the authors paid attention to the sentence structure and overall translation to determine which translation technique is used. the translation techniques identified were written in a column. after all of the sentences were analyzed, the analysis result was crosschecked by researcher 2 and researcher 3 for accuracy. similarly, the occurrence of translation techniques were also counted using tally marks first before processed in excel to see the percentage. the result is presented in table 4. table 2. molina and albir’s (2002) classification of translation techniques translation technique description adaptation replacement of a source text’s cultural element to a suitable cultural element in the target text amplification introduction of details that are not formulated in the source text borrowing use of a word or expression from another language calque literal translation of a foreign word or phrase compensation introduction of a source text element of information or stylistic effect in another place in the target text description replacement of a term or expression with a description of its term or function an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis… 296 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 translation technique description discursive creation establishment of a temporary equivalence that is unpredictable and out of context established equivalent use of a term or expression that is recognized (in dictionaries or language in use) as the equivalent generalization use of a more general or neutral term linguistic amplification addition of linguistic elements linguistic compression synthetization of linguistic elements in the target text literal translation translation of a word or an expression for word modulation change of the point of view or focus in relation to the source text particularization use of a more precise term reduction suppression of information from the source text in the target text substitution change of linguistic elements for paralinguistic elements. transposition change of grammatical category variation change of linguistic or paralinguistic elements that affect the aspects of linguistic variation. note. adopted from “translation techniques revisited: a dynamic and functionalist approach” by l. molina, a. albir. 2002, meta, 47(4), p. 498. copyright 2002 by les presses de l’université de montréal. findings this section intends to address the research questions: (1) how is the rhetorical organization of the abstracts written in english and translated into indonesian and vice versa illustrated in thesis abstracts and its translated version? and (2) what are translation techniques employed to translate the thesis abstracts written in english and translated into indonesian and vice versa? the analysis result of the rhetorical move realized and translation techniques identified in abstracts across languages are discussed respectively. move and steps this section intends to present the moves and steps identified in the abstracts. in this context, salience is defined as the number of abstracts that featured the move or step (kurniawan et al., 2019). following kanoksilapatham's (2005) criteria, the moves and the steps would be considered as optional if the occurrence is less than 66% in the data, conventional if it is between 66-99% of the data, and obligatory if the occurrence reaches 100% in the data. the table zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 297 below presents the salience of the moves and steps (in percent) identified in the abstracts across languages in percentage. table 3. occurrence of move and step in abstracts across languages (in percentage) movestep english indonesian f (%), n = 15 f (%), n = 15 english (st) indonesian (tt) indonesian (st) english (tt) move 1 67 73 87 73 step 1 20 13 33 60 step 2 40 67 67 53 step 3 13 20 20 13 step 4 13 13 7 0 move 2 93 100 73 80 move 3 100 100 100 100 step 1 13 13 60 60 step 2 7 0 27 33 step 3 100 100 100 100 move 4 100 100 100 100 move 5 47 27 7 13 step 1 27 20 0 0 step 2 27 13 7 13 step 3 0 0 0 0 step 4 0 1 0 0 table 3 shows the percentage of each move and steps in the abstracts of its respective languages and the translations. the analysis revealed that all moves are manifested in the abstracts in different portions. move 3 is the only move that appeared in all abstracts of both english and indonesian language groups, with step 3 being the dominant step with 100% occurrence across all groups. move 4 appeared in almost every abstracts within the language groups. move 5 is the move that is used the least with less than 30% salience in all of the language groups. move 1 — introduction this move is used to establish the context of a paper and motivates the research or discussion. in both english language and literature abstracts and indonesian language and literature abstracts, there is a slight change in the occurrence of move 1 in the st and tt. in the st of english language and literature abstracts, the occurrence of move 1 increased from 67% to 73% while in indonesian language and literature abstracts, it decreased from 87% to 73%. this move is considered as conventional in the abstracts across languages. an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis… 298 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 move 2 — purpose move 2 is used to indicate the purpose, thesis or hypothesis, or the intention of the study. this move is used a lot in the st of english language and literature abstracts, with 93% occurrence. the number increased to 100% in the tt. this move is used less in the indonesian language and literature abstracts. the occurrence differs in the st and tt research abstracts as well. move 3 — method move 3 has 100% occurrence in english literature and indonesian literature research abstracts, both in the st and tt. therefore, this move is regarded as obligatory in the data across languages. this move is used to provide information on research design, procedure, approach, data, etc. move 4 — product move 4 stated main findings of a research. this move occurs in all of the english and indonesian data, thus regarding this move as obligatory. this move and move 3 – method, are the only moves that appear consistently throughout the data. move 5 — conclusion this move draws the conclusion and offers inferences and implications of a study. overall, this move appeared the least in comparison to other moves with the occurrence of under 50% in both english and indonesian st abstracts and its translations. like most of the other moves, the occurrence of move 5 was not constantly the same in the st abstract and tt abstract in both of the language groups. regarding the steps, it can be seen that step 3 from move 3 is the most prominent step as it occurred in all of the abstracts. interestingly, there is a noticeable gap between the salience of step 1 move 3 and step 2 move 3 in the english language group and indonesian language group. steps of move 1 there is a significant rise in step 1 of indonesian language and literature abstracts. in the st abstracts, it only occurred 33%. however, the occurrence of step 1 increased to 60% in the tt abstracts. step 1 is used to argue for topic significance. the occurrence of other steps in this move also differs, but only by a slight margin. steps of move 3 the step that was employed the most was step 3 which describes the procedure and context. this step has a consistent 100% occurrence, thus implying that it is an obligatory step. the other steps do not appear as zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 299 frequently. sometimes, step 1—describing participants and data sources and step 2—describing instruments were employed as embedded steps. step 2 is the only step in which salience is not consistent in the sl abstract and tl abstract. steps of move 5 steps of move 5 are the ones that were the scarcest among the abstracts that were analyzed. only step 1, deducing conclusion, and step 2, evaluating the significance of the study, were identified. step 1 was only found in the english language group abstracts with the percentage of 27% in the st and 20% in the tt. translation techniques this section illustrates the findings in relation to the translation techniques that were found in the abstracts. table 4. occurrences of translation techniques in abstracts across languages (in percentage) translation technique english indonesian f (%), n = 15 f (%), n = 15 adaptation 7 7 amplification 20 0 borrowing 73 67 calque 73 7 compensation 40 7 discursive creation 0 7 established equivalent 20 13 generalization 20 0 literal translation 100 100 modulation 13 13 reduction 27 13 transposition 27 13 table 4 displays the percentage of translation techniques employed in english language and literature abstracts and indonesian language and literature abstracts. from the table, it is visible that literal translation is the technique that is employed by both language groups with 100% occurrences. literal translation is a technique of translating a source text into the target text word-for-word. this technique may be regarded as one of the easiest techniques to employ as it translates a passage word by word in a direct and literal way. this technique may cause the abstract writers to disregard grammatical rules and thus, make a translation mistake in their abstract. the an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis… 300 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 translated sentence or passage may also feel unnatural to read if it is translated using this method. st: thus, this study investigates the representation of disney’s white and non-white women in brave (2012) and moana (2016) produced by walt disney studios in the 21st century. tt: oleh karena itu, studi ini menginvestigasi reprsentasi perempuan kulit putih dan non kulit putih dalam film brave (2012) dan moana (2016) yang diproduksi walt disney studios di abad ke-21. (abstract 2, english language and literature) the second most used translation technique in both language groups is borrowing, with 73% occurring in the english language group and 67% occurring in the indonesian language group. in theory, the borrowing technique uses a word or expression from a source language without any changes (pure borrowing) or changing the spelling to fit the spelling rules. in the abstracts of the english group, the authors employed pure borrowing to present a theoretical framework, findings, and conclusion. st: two concepts, which are family projection process and nuclear family emotional process, are the triggers of child abuse. tt: dua konsep, yaitu family projection process dan nuclear family emotional process, adalah pemicu kekerasan pada anak. (abstract 3, english language and literature) in the abstracts of indonesian groups, however, this technique is often used to adapt titles of works used as the data source. this is done to keep the originality of the title. the technique is also applied to indonesian terms that have no english equivalent. another way this technique is used is to mention institutions and places. similar to the english students, indonesian students also employ pure borrowing to translate the abstracts. st: sumber datanya adalah novel elang menoreh (perjalanan purwa kala) karya wiwien wintarto yang diterbitkan pada tahun 2018, 357 halaman. tt: the data source for this study was wiwien wintarto's novel entitled elang menoreh (perjalanan purwa kala), published in 2018, 357 pages. (abstract 2, indonesian language and literature) zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 301 another translation technique, calque, is also the second mostly used translation technique in the english language group. on the other hand, this translation technique only occurred 7% in the indonesian language group. this technique translates a word or phrase literally, either lexically or structurally (molina and albir, 2002). this technique is different to literal translation that translates a text word for word. in both language groups, this technique is employed to translate a cultural term or theoretical framework. a huge occurrence gap of this translation technique seems quite noticeable. presumably, this is because the technique was commonly used to translate a term or theoretical framework from a source text to a target text. the researchers assumed that in the indonesian abstracts, the writers used the theories adapted from english books, so they did the calque translation process in writing their abstracts, not when they translate their abstract to english. sl: salah satu tradisi lisan tersebut adalah salawek dulang. tl: one of the oral tradition is salawek tray. (abstract 14, indonesian language and literature) it is also worth noting that there are many sentences that are translated using more than one translation technique. discussion the findings above demonstrate the occurrence of the move-step and various translation techniques that were employed by undergraduate students in writing their research abstracts. although the occurrence of the moves and steps in each data group may differ, it can be said that move 3 – method and move 4 – product are considered as obligatory moves regardless of the languages. this may mean that undergraduate students have the tendency to put emphasis on the methodology of the research and the findings of their research in their undergraduate thesis abstracts. meanwhile, move 1 and 2 are considered conventional in abstracts regardless of the language, occurring in around 66-99% of the abstracts. the only move that is regarded as optional across data groups is move 5 as it is realized in less than 66% of the abstracts. this means that most of the abstracts did not state any conclusion and thus, are written in an incomplete structure. moreover, regardless of the language, undergraduate students tend to not state the conclusion inferred from their study in their abstracts. it is possibly caused by the requirement of an abstract to be short and concise, and the students prioritize other moves to be realized. the findings are in line with rashidi & meihami's (2018), who analyzed scientometrics journal articles and discovered that method (move 3) and results (move 4) were provided the most frequently, while the information that was given the least in the abstracts was conclusion (move 5). furthermore, the results of this research show similar patterns with those an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis… 302 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 presented by juanda & kurniawan (2020) and putri et al. (2021). however, darabad's (2016) darabad's (2016) study revealed that in three different disciplines (applied linguistics, applied mathematics, and applied chemistry), the least frequently occurring move was move 1 – introduction. regarding the steps, not all of the steps from all moves are realized. step 1, 3, and 4 of move 1 are all considered as optional step as those steps occur in less than 66% of the abstracts. on the other hand, step 2 of move 1 is considered as conventional in the indonesian abstracts of the english data (67%) and indonesian data (67%). however, it is still considered as optional in the english abstracts of both data groups, occurring in 40% of the abstracts in the english data and 53% in the abstracts of the indonesian data. this shows that undergraduate students of the language study programs tend to realize move 1 to state the generalization of the research topics. the difference in the occurrences of step 2 show that translation technique may have influenced the slight change in the occurrences, either by reducing or adding the information in the abstract. regarding steps of move 3, step 3 of move 3 has the highest occurrence in the data across languages, occurring in 100% of the abstracts and is regarded as obligatory. on the other hand, step 1 and 2 are both considered conventional with generally low occurrence in the abstracts of the english data, and moderate occurrences in the indonesian data. this is presumably because the students felt the need to mention the theoretical framework in their abstract, as it is a part that determines how the research will be conducted. by mentioning it in the beginning, the readers can get a gist of how the research was conducted. on the other hand, the steps of move 5 are all realized in low occurrences and are considered as optional, while step 3 is not realized at all in the data. this finding is in line with several past studies that analyzed step realization in students’ abstracts (juanda & kurniawan, 2020; putri et al., 2021). however, pratiwi et al.'s (2021) findings in rhetorical move analysis of humanities and hard sciences’ undergraduate thesis abstracts showed that step 3 of move 3 is realized in a fairly low percentages. this shows that a further analysis with larger data may be needed to see a clearer pattern of undergraduate students’ tendencies in realizing the steps in their abstracts. the results regarding the rhetorical moves and steps show that undergraduate students tend to emphasize the methodology and product of the research in their abstracts. on the other hand, the conclusions drawn from their research were not commonly addressed in the study. the realization of moves and steps were realized in the same proportions regardless of language. it may imply that language difference in writing the abstracts did not influence the tendency of moves and steps realization in undergraduate thesis abstracts. zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 303 as mentioned previously, literal translation is the translation technique that is used in translating almost all of the moves in the abstracts. the technique is found in 100% of the abstracts, while many of the other translation techniques were employed as an embedded translation technique. borrowing is the second-highest translation technique that occurred, but it is notable that there was a wide gap of occurrence between literal translation and the rest of the translation techniques, borrowing included. a prominent gap can also be seen in the occurrence of some translation techniques in abstracts of each data group, such as calque (73% in english to 7% in indonesian) and compensation (40% in english to 7% in indonesian). furthermore, the analysis also found that most of the sentences were translated with one technique, while a small number were translated with two and three translation techniques at most. the translation technique with highest occurrence found in this study differs from the result of previous research (anwar et al., 2020; kuswahono, 2020; sodiq et al., 2020). studies by those researchers stated that the translation technique that occurred the most in the texts they analyzed were linguistic compression (anwar et al., 2020), which was not identified at all in the analyzed abstracts of this research, and pure borrowing (kuswahono, 2020; sodiq et al., 2020). on the other hand, al farisi's (2020) findings shows a similarity to this study’s. his research found that literal translation was used the most. this may be influenced by the type of the text that is analyzed; anwar and kushwahono analyzed literary texts. translator of fictional texts may adjust the translation by using translation techniques that may help the translator gain a translation that fits the culture of the target language while still keeping the meaning. on the other hand, the findings of al farisi's (2020) analysis which involved a formal text, showed a similarity to this study, implying that translator of formal texts may want to keep the translation as close to the target text as possible, thus employing literal translation to translate the texts. the results imply that literal translation is the easiest translation technique to employ as it translates a sentence only word by word. while easy, this translation technique is prone to make a sentence come off as awkward and unnatural because the translator may not pay attention to the sentence structure of the target language. translation techniques such as reduction or amplification, which are identified in some of the abstracts, may influence the difference in some of the moves and steps occurrence. borrowing, the second most-used translation technique, is most commonly used to transfer terms from the source text to the target text. this may imply that undergraduate students tend to take terms from the source text and place them in the target text rather than translating it to the target language. these results were shown in both english and indonesian data, meaning the an analysis of rhetorical move and translation techniques in undergraduate thesis… 304 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 majority of the abstracts are translated using similar techniques regardless of language differences. it is worth noting that there are many sentences that are translated with more than one translation technique, but most of them include literal translation. this caused the high occurrence gap between literal translation and borrowing. it should be taken into consideration that the results of the present work are only concerned with undergraduate thesis abstracts of students in the english and indonesian language field, and do not intend to generalize the quality of abstracts written by undergraduate students of other study programs. it is also worth noting that the year of the abstracts’ publication was not considered during the data collection process due to the limited availability of the abstracts in universitas pendidikan indonesia’s online repository. therefore, the findings of this research only show the rhetorical moves and translation techniques used in a small group of undergraduate students, and may not reflect the quality of undergraduate thesis abstracts as a whole. the result of the present study is expected to contribute to the existing literature related to academic writing, specifically for undergraduate students’ thesis abstracts in english and indonesian language study programs. conclusion and suggestion this study aimed to identify move, steps, and translation techniques that were employed by students from two study programs in writing and translating their abstracts. the findings showed that all five moves and the related steps were employed in different portions, but the english data and indonesian data showed similarities in realizing rhetorical moves and steps in their abstracts. regarding the translation techniques, 12 were identified: adaptation, amplification, borrowing, calque, compensation discursive creation, established equivalent, generalization, literal translation, modulation, reduction, and transposition. the translation techniques may have changed the sentence structures and may have impacted the number of move and steps realized, which can be seen by the different occurrence percentage in st abstracts and tt abstracts. based on the findings, this study concludes that move 1, move 2, move 3, and move 4 are obligatory regardless of the language, and that literal translation is the technique that was used the most. this implies that regardless of the language, undergraduate students tend to write their abstracts in a similar structure and translate them in a similar way as well. this study recommends for researchers to conduct a similar research involving data sets obtained from different fields to see whether the rhetorical moves are realized similarly or not, to further enrich the existing knowledge related to this topic. furthermore, a more in-depth analysis regarding zalinda salsabilla firdausyiah, budi hermawan, dian dia-an muniroh journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 305 translation techniques in academic fields is recommended to conduct as well. additionally, this study also suggests for universities to guide students in writing and translating abstracts in order to achieve a good abstract and translation. acknowledgements this study was a part of a bigger research and was supported by indonesian university of education's research and community service unit. the authors would like to express appreciation for all the support provided. references al farisi, m. 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(2021). evaluating the quality of the indonesia-english translation of research abstracts written by the students of harapan bangsa university. english education journal, 11(1), 79–96. https://doi.org/10.15294/eej.v11i1.40857 362 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 7 no. 2, august 2022 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/20773 https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20773 turn-taking in conversation uttered by madurese community in jember 1bambang wibisono , 2akhmad haryono 1,2master of linguistics department, faculty of cultural sciences, universitas jember, indonesia jalan kalimantan no. 37, kampus tegalboto, jember, east java article info abstract article history: received: feb 22, 2022 revised: may 05, 2022 accepted: july 22, 2022 turn-taking in conversation is unique in the madurese ethnic culture. this study aims to describe the turn-taking in conversation that applies to the madurese community in jember. to achieve this goal, a qualitative approach was used. data were obtained through participatory observation with record and note techniques, then analyzed descriptive qualitative. the results showed that there were at least two speech shift patterns demonstrated by the madurese community in jember, namely, informal verbal communication and formal verbal communication. in informal verbal communication, two patterns were found, namely: (1) overlapping turn-taking in conversation patterns, and (2) turn-taking in conversation patterns without overlapping speech. in formal communication, the turntaking pattern is always shown without overlapping speech. interrupting people's speech in situations of formal verbal communication is considered to violate prevailing rules and is subject to negative stigma from society. the results of this study will have implications for the implementation of the use of honorifics in communication in tapal kuda area involving speech participants from different social statuses, roles, positions, and ages. keywords: madurese ethnic politeness speech turn taking conflict of interest: none funding information: lp2m universitas jember correspondence: akhmad haryono, master of linguistics department, faculty cultural sciences, universitas jember, indonesia. aharyono.sastra@unej.ac.id ©bambang wibisono & akhmad haryono this is an open access article under the cc by-sa 4.0 international license. how to cite (apa style): wibisono, b., & haryono, a. (2022). turn-taking in conversation uttered by madurese community in jember. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 345-361. https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20773 one important aspect of politeness in conversation is the fulfilment of the rules for turn-taking. violation of the rule of turn-taking in conversation can cause cracks or disharmony of the relationship between speaker and speech partner. conversely, polite turn-taking in conversation in communication can make them feel comfortable because they feel respected and appreciated. besides, the communication should run in a proper way and etiquette, so that a good relationship can be built in both speakers (lindayana, arifuddin, and mandala 2018). https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/20773 https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20773 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v7i2.20773&domain=pdf https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/ https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i2.20773 https://orcid.org/0000-0001-6719-6499 https://orcid.org/0000-0003-4391-8252 turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 363 in relation to turn-taking in conversation, saville-troike (2003) explains that in conversations, speakers and speech partners change roles in turn. sometimes, they play a role as listeners and sometimes as speakers. this in turn switching of roles by speakers and speech partners is what is called as turn-taking in conversation. in this connection, teluma (2019) argues that in a conversation, conversation participants play the role of either as speakers or as listeners in turn-taking in conversation. furthermore, ibrahim (1994); barron et al., (2017) and haryono (2015) explain that turn-taking in conversation is the switching of role played by speech participants in conversation, namely from speaker to listener or vice versa. brown et al. (2013); yule (1996) call the speech turn as the process of changing roles between speaker and listener in a conversation. based on the opinions of these experts, it can be summarized that speech turn taking is a speech change from one speech participant to another speech participant based on differences in social status, role, position and age of each speech participant. this theory is chosen because it fits the topic discussed in this study. in a conversation, participants must know and obey the rules that they can share roles such as who gets a turn to speak, who gets a turn to listen, and they switch roles, so that the conversation can run well. turn-taking in conversation should be available because people have different cultural context which essentially effects their way of communication. in this context, the need for cross-cultural understanding is significant because communicator and communicant should make a correct interpretation and react properly during communication (ratnasari, 2019). arum (2015) states that in order the conversations run successfully, there are several rules that need to be considered, namely, the speakers should not use their turn to speak for too long and their utterances can be completed without interruption. at the end of a speaking turn, the other speakers must take the speaking turn, so that there is no prolonged pause or silence. ethics, procedures, or rules of turn-taking in conversation in various cultures differ from one culture to another. for example, among white people in america from the middle class there is a rule of "without gaps in speech, but without overlapping events" in turn-taking in conversation. if there are two or more people involved in a speech, and some of them are speaking at the same time (unintentionally), one of them quickly gives the other a chance, so that speech does not overlap. conversely, if there is a jam for just a few seconds, the speech participants become so uncomfortable, then someone will start talking about unimportant things just to fill the gap. if the gap is too long, they will immediately leave each other. the procedure for turn-taking in conversation among middle-class white people in the united states is different from the procedure for turntaking in conversation that applies to people in antiguan village (fang 2012). bambang wibisono & akhmad haryono 364 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 the inhabitants of antiguan used to do their speaking activities at the same time. speech overlaps are often done on purpose. for the people in antiguan village, overlaps and gaps are considered normal occurrences and are part of the conversation. this is different from what happened to the american indian community. it is the custom of some groups of american indians to wait a few minutes of silence before answering a question or taking a speech turn. waiting for a few minutes of silence before taking a turn to speak is one of the most common ways to converse or communicate. if in speaking the speakers violate these procedures, they are considered to be violating the rules of modesty in speech. they are considered not knowing politeness to speak. this procedure is similar to the one that applies to javanese families in mataraman area (alamin et al. 2020). in many javanese families who live in the area or who are still steeped in mataraman traditions, children who are involved in conversations with their parents should not simply interrupt their parents' speech without permission or order of their parents. they have the habit of waiting for a few moments of silence before taking their turn to speak. they wait until the parents finished saying something. when the children have the opportunity because there is a gap time, they usually start with the words "nyuwun sewu” (excuse me). according to saville-troike (2003), the turn-taking in conversation pattern in english telephone conversations follows the sequence as illustrated below. the sound of the telephone is a call, and the first person to speak is the recipient of the phone, even though the caller knows that the recipient of the phone has picked up the phone, the caller will not start speaking. many people do not pick up the receiver while the phone is ringing because they feel that the pickup while it is still ringing is an interruption to the call. even rude callers generally wait until the person on the call answers or says something before the conversation begins. if the recipient of the telephone does not say something the caller does not continue the conversation. the caller will not continue the conversation if she does not get an appropriate response from the party receiving the call (saville-troike 2003); (haryono 2018). the order is considered as the rule or ethics of speaking over the telephone, and if there are people who do not follow these rules it is considered as not knowing the norms or ethics of telephoning. thus, there are procedures for turn-taking in conversation, although they differ from one community group to another. in essence, in certain speech communities, certain turn-taking ethics usually apply because turntaking in conversation is an important aspect of politeness in speaking or language (sumarsono, partana 2002); (haryono and wibisono 2018). it is important because it determines the fluency of communication. the harmony of the relationship between speaker and speech partner are maintained if each turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 365 speech participant does not always embarrass each other. for this reason, both speakers and speech partners have the same obligation to keep-face. when communicating, speakers and speech partners must comply with cultural norms, not just convey the ideas they think. language procedures must be in accordance with the cultural elements that exist in the community where they live, and a language is used in communication. if a person speaks by neglecting norms, especially cultural norms, he or she will get negative values, for example being accused of being arrogant, arrogant, uncivilized, unwilling to respect and unwilling to respect (halawa, gani, and r 2019). turn-taking produced by the madurese pendalungan community in jember is discussed in the article on the results of this study. the madurese pendalungan refers to the madurese who have lived in jember for a long time, and breed in this area, as well as carry out cultural acculturation with members of other ethnic groups. the everyday language of the madurese pendalungan community is generally madurese, mixed with javanese and indonesian. if the madurese on the island of madura still use the madurese language the variety of enjâ'-iyâ (ei), engghi-enten (ee), èngghi-bhunten (è-b), and bhâsa alos (bal), the madurese pendalungan community in the tapal kuda area (jember, lumajang, probolinggo, bondowoso, and situbondo) rarely use the madurese language, the variety of bhâsa alos (bal). the madurese language used is the madurese variety (e-i), (e-e), and (è-b). they still identify themselves as madurese, but they no longer feel they have an excessive emotional attachment to “madura island”. those who still have ties are usually immigrants who were not born in jember (wibisono and haryono 2016). so far, the researchers have not found similar research. however, there are several studies that have similarities with this study, including: sukarno (2015) conducting a research on politeness strategies in responding to compliments in javanese. this study aims to determine the politeness strategies applied in responding to the compliments of the javanese in jember. the technique of data collection is done by recording and taking notes. the results showed that responding to praise in javanese can be achieved in five strategies: (1) disagree and condescending, (2) disagree and ask questions, (3) accept and reject, (4) accept and give explanation, and (5) accept only, or accept an offer. haryono (2018) conducted research on communication among kiais of nahdlatul ulama in the madurese ethnic group. this study aims to describe the communication patterns among kiais (venerated teachers of islam) of nahdlatul ulama (nu) in the madurese ethnic group (numme) and account for the factors affecting those patterns of communication. the data were collected through participatory and non-participatory observations, interviews, note-taking, and recording. the result of the study shows that bambang wibisono & akhmad haryono 366 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 giving an honor to the teacher in the nu tradition is an obligation and a tradition that is still maintained. haryono and wibisono (2018) conducted research on the use of speech level in socio cultural perspective of tapal kuda madurese ethnic society. this research aims at describing the speech level use in socio cultural perspective of madurese ethnic society in tapal kuda regions. the method used to reach the research aims is a qualitative method with an ethnographic approach. the data were collected through participatory and non-participatory observations, interviews, note-taking, and recording. the result of this research shows that the use of bm with e-e, ng-e, and è-b variation in the perspective of madurese ethnic in tapal kuda is as the politeness implementation form and formal relationship among speech participants, whereas variation of bm e-i (ngoko: javanese) in family is used to keep intimacy and closed relationship between parents and children in order not to be too formal. sofyan et al. (2022)conducted research on the analysis of conversational implicature between students and teachers at alazhar islamic boarding school. this study aims to uncover and describe the meanings and types of conversational implicatures contained in the conversations of teachers and students at the salafiyah syafi'iyah al-azhar islamic boarding school. this study uses data analysis. data were collected using selection, description and verification techniques. data were analyzed using qualitative descriptive which is based on siswantoro's theory. the results of this study indicate that there are four types of conversation implicatures, namely general conversation implicatures, scaled implicatures, special conversation implicatures, and conventional implicatures. based on the research above, viewed from the topic and the theory the previous studies and the current study are the same that they both discuss honorific topics and use the theory of politeness by leech (2014). though they have the same topic, specifically the current study is different from the previous ones that it examines turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember. therefore, this study has a large space to be researched. based on the explanation above, the research problem can be formulated "how is the turn-taking in conversation politeness used by the madurese ethnic community in jember?" this study aimed to describe turn-taking in conversation in madurese community in jember. we expected that the results of this study could deliver and bring any significance in the enrichment of turn-taking in conversation analysis in local community context in indonesia. the uniqueness of this study was that diversity of cultures in pandalungan regions which showed distinctive model of way of speaking and structure of sentences in it. therefore, we issued this study for the purpose. method turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 367 this study was using descriptive qualitative. the discussion of the problem was described in the form of an empirical descriptive explanation without any statistical measurement. the researcher chose the madurese ethnic community in jember as a sample in this study because jember is an area of most of the madurese ethnic group that has a unique culture in the middle of a multicultural community in the tapal kuda area. the research data were collected by observation. in observation, sometimes the researcher was directly involved in speaking with the speech partner who acted as the research informant, and sometimes the researcher acts as an observer. while speaking, the researcher made observations, recorded the informants' conversations, and recorded important things, such as speaker’s profile, speech partners, speech situations, conversations, the place and time of the speech. researchers could play an active role as speech partners involved in the conversation, because researchers were jemberese and can communicate with research informants. the collected data were then transcribed in the form of written data. data transcription follows the writing procedure according to the general guidelines for improved madurese spelling (2005). the glotal stop (?) consonant was described with a sign ('), for example, in the word kadhibi' (...self), ka'emma'an ('to anywhere else) and ka'adâ (first), not transcribed as *kadhibiq or *kadhbik, *kaqemmaqan or *kakemmakan and *kadâq or *kaadâk. furthermore, the data were successfully transcribed, reduced and classified according to the research objectives, with the help of analysis diagrams. the theory used as the basis for data analysis is the theory of turn-taking in conversation in socio-pragmatics (saville-troike 2003); (leech 2014). the data analysis results were presented informally, using ordinary words, not mathematical symbols. the technique of presenting the results of data analysis used descriptive descriptions. findings based on the results, it can be described that there are at least two patterns of turn-taking in conversation demonstrated by the madura pendalungan community in jember, namely the turn-taking in conversation pattern when communicating verbally in formal or informal situations and when communicating formally or informally. formal situations, for example when speakers and speech partners speak at meetings, teaching and learning activities in islamic borsinf school, namely reciting the koran or reading "dhiba" in prayer rooms, mosques, and others. an example of official oral communication carried out by the madura pendalungan community in jember is when they perform abhâk-rembhâk (confer). as for informal situations, for example, when communication occurs informally, for example, when bargaining for goods in the market, when greeting each other, and bambang wibisono & akhmad haryono 368 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 chatting then, for example, when tor-catoran (casual conversation) and asapa'an (greetings). the two-turn-taking in conversation patterns can be described as follows. turn-taking in conversation patterns in an informal conversation the turn-taking in conversation happens when the madura pendalungan community in jember performs tor-catoran (unofficial oral communication). the pattern was without gaps in speech, and occasionally overlapping speech events occurred. if there were two or more people involved in a speech, and some of them were speaking at the same time (intentionally or unintentionally), this is considered something normal. speech overlaps usually occurred in turn-taking in conversation. if there was a gap for just a few seconds, the speech participants become so uncomfortable, then someone started talking about unimportant things just to fill gaps. if the gap was too long, they immediately left each other. this was shown in the following torcatoran excerpt. context: tor-catoran between mrs. sulastri (a) and mr. saturi (father) (b), at mr. saturi's house. at that time mr. saturi was sick and slept on the bed. the conversation took place approximately at 16.30 wib (western indonesian time). conversation: b: … nyaor abhêjhêng. ottang abhêjhêng ko’. […paying for prayer. i have a prayer debt] a: massa’ bisa é saor otang abhêjhêng réya pa’. mon passa bisa éssaor. samangkin bhêi ta’ bisa. mon passa é gêntè’èn. mon abhêjhêng ta’ bisa. ta’ bisa ésaor pa’. mon sholatta ta’ bisa sênéka (speaker: mrs. sulastri raises her hands to demonstrate one of the prayer movements performed by a sick person, who cannot stand, but can only sit, and asks mr. saturi to pray as demonstrated by mrs. sulastri). [the prayer debt cannot be paid, sir. if fasting can be owed. i can't even now. if fasting is replaced. if prayer cannot be replaced. can't get paid. if the prayer cannot stand, pray while sitting. just sit down, then takbir allohuakbar. this is it]. from the quotation of the speech, it is known that mr. saturi has not finished speaking, but mrs. sulastri has taken over the role of speaker. as a speech partner, bu sulastri did not wait for pak saturi's speech to finish first, then mrs. sulastri took over the turn. however, along with mr. saturi said, turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 369 "abhêjhêng ko". bu sulastri has started her speech, “massa’ bisa é saor otang abhêjhêng réya pa’…. from the data quotation, it is known that the turn-taking in conversation pattern was without gaps or without pauses and speech overlaps occurred. the speaker had not finished speaking, the speaker had taken over the speech. if presented in diagrammatic form, the turn-taking in conversation pattern was shown below. turn-taking in conversation pattern (1): speaker a: speaker b: the turn-taking in conversation pattern as seen in the tor-catoran is often demonstrated by members of the madurese pendalungan community in jember in speaking, especially if the conversational actors are siblings, and the conversations are carried out between and by fellow family members, and the relationship between the conversational actors is highly closed. apart from this pattern, there are other variants of turn-taking in conversation patterns demonstrated by the madurese pendalungan community in jember. this is shown in the following data excerpt. context: tor-catoran between ibu sulastri (a) and bu rochibah (b), and bu sutini (c) took place at around 19.00 wib, when mrs. sulastri was visiting bu rochibah's house. the atmosphere of the tor-catoran is relaxed, taking place when they are eating together. conversation: b: marè abhêjêng bê’ên? [have you finished praying?] a: marè. marè abhêjêng êngko’. [yes. i have finished praying] c: êngko’ marè. marè abhêjêng êngko’. [i have finished. i have finished praying] from the data quotation, it is known that it was mrs. rochibah (b) who started the speech. after mrs. rochibah's speech was finished, mrs. sulastri (a) spoke, and after mrs. sulastri's speech was finished, mrs. sutini (c) spoke. as a speech partner, mrs. sulastri waited for mrs. rochibah's speech to finish first, then mrs. sulastri took over the turn of speech. likewise, mrs. sutini did. after mrs. sulastri's speech was finished, mrs. sutini just spoke. in this pattern the speech participants wait for each other until the speaker's speech was finished, then the speaker answered the question or took his turn to speak. bambang wibisono & akhmad haryono 370 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 waiting until the speaker has finished speaking is one of the procedures that is also commonly practiced by the madurese community in jember in speaking or communicating. this type of turn-taking in conversation pattern was carried out especially if the conversational actors were not siblings, and the conversations were not carried out between and by fellow family members, and the relationship between the conversational actors was relatively lacking or not familiar. if presented in diagrammatic form, the speech shift pattern was shown in the following image below. turn-taking in conversation pattern (2): speaker a: speaker b: speaker c: speech turn taking pattern in an official conversation turn-taking in conversation when the madurese pendalungan community in jember conducted official oral communication, the pattern was that there were little gaps in speech, and no overlapping events occurred. if there were two or more people involved in the speech, and some of them are speaking at the same time (intentionally or unintentionally), immediately apologized and invite the previous speaker to continue his speech, because this was considered something unusual. speech overlaps were not common in turntaking in conversation. if there was a gap for a few seconds, the speech participants still waited for the speaker to continue his speech until it was finished. this could be seen in the following abhâk-rembhâk oral communication. abhâk-rembhâk (discussion) is a type of oral communication commonly carried out by the madurese pendalungan community in jember with the following characteristics: it occurred in a certain place, took a place in an atmosphere of official communication, the topic of the speech was planned in advance and could not change, closed speech participants (not everyone can become speech participants), the length of the conversation was relatively longer than tor-catoran and smoke, and the purpose of communication was to discuss and solve problems. the transcription of the speech in the abhâkrembhâk program, among others, was as follows. context: abhâk-rembhâk takes place among chief (a), secretary (b), treasurer (c), and member (d) of ḍibâ’ organisation. topic of abhâk-rembhâk was organizational consolidation, taking place at home where the social gathering of ḍibâ’ reading. turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 371 conversation: b: kalaban asokkor ḍâ’ pangèran, sè ka’ḍimma kalabân nikmad-dhâ, panjhennengngan sadhâjâ bisa akompol. sè ka’ ḍimma ḍibâ’ sè bân arè satto sakalèyan. samangkèn ghilirânna pa’ salè. è ḍâlem memperingati kalahiranna nabbhi muhammad shallallahu alaihi wasallam. kalabân pangarep adhâddhiyâghi amal saèngghâ ngaollè syafa’at. parlo èkaonèngè acara panèka acara tahtim, èngghi panèka ḍibâ’ sè terakhir. ḍâri kaulâ cokop. kaulâ masra’aghi ḍâ’ katowa mungkin bâḍâ sè parlo èsampè’aghiyâ. [thank god for his blessings so that we can all gather in the diba' event once every saturday. today it is pak saleh's turn, in order to commemorate the birth of prophet muhammad saw. hopefully this activity becomes a charity so that we get intercession. it should be noted that the event this time is a tahtim event, the last diba' event. next, i will submit it to the chairman if there is something to be conveyed]. a: assalamualaikum warahmatullahi wabarakatuh. [may the peace, mercy, and blessings of allah be with you] d: walaikum salam... [ and unto you peace..] a: bismillahirrahmanirahim, alhamdulillahirabbil’alamin, wasshalaatu wassalamu ‘ala ‘asrofil anbiya walmursalin walhamdulillhirabbil’alamin. para bapa’ èbhu malar moghâ sè maos tor sè mèyarsa’aghi ngaollè safa’at. amin. atas nama katowa mator sakalangkong ḍâ’ sadhâjâ peserta sè hadir. parlo èkaonèngè kompolan ḍibâ’ samangkèn malem terakhir. mènggu sè bhâkal ḍâteng molaè ḍâri aḍâ’ polè. ḍâ’ na’-kana’ manabi sè ngèrènga, ngèrèng manabi pèra’ sè acaca’a jhâ’ ngèrèng sakalè. sè aḍibâ’ ghi padisiplin. manabi acaca’a ghi pamarè ḍibâ’. è ḍâlemmanna pelaksana’anna ḍibâ’. baca’an ḍibâ’ bâḍâ sè tasalèp. bâḍâ se korang. ghi ngèrèng ajhâr. heri, bakri. [in the name of allah, the most beneficent, the most merciful . praise be to allah, the lord of the universe, the salutations and peace upon you o messenger of allah. ladies and gentlemen who read and listen hopefully get intercession. on behalf of the chairman, i would like to thank all the participants who attended. please note that today's diba' meeting is the last night. next week, it will start all over again. to the children who are coming, but for those who just want to talk, bambang wibisono & akhmad haryono 372 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 it is better not to come at all. those who participate in diba' should be disciplined. if you want to talk, preferably after being read '. in the implementation of diba', some reading is exceeded. there is something missing. heri, bakri. let's all study.] c: arèsanna nèka èteptebbhâghiyâ samangkèn napa ḍâgghi’ân? [will the amount of this arisan be determined now or later?] d: sapolo èbuwân (simultaneously) [the amount of the arisan (fee for regular social gathering like a lottery club) is ten thousand rupiah.] c: ghi peserta saroju’ ca’na rèng madhurâna pon asaor mano’ jhâ’ sapolo èbuwân. arèsanna nèka èteptebbhâghiyâ sapolo èbu ropèya, ekkassa lèma èbuwan. parlo èkaonèngè nèka è ḍâlem ḍibâ’ nèka ta’ kèngèng ècampor. dhâddhi saompama kaulâ kalabân wadi. dhâddhi ta’ ollè èpakompol, tako’ èkasokanè bân sè laèn. parlo èkaèmodhi, mon bâḍâ rèng seppona kalabân potrana ta’ kèngèng èpakompol. manabi taḍâ’ tambullâ ta’ anapa. dhâddhi ta’ èkaberrâ’, dhâddhi ta’ sampè’ èso’on. sè parlo nèka kompolla. mengenai ghilirânnèpon, insya allah ghellâ’ katowa pon adhâbu pon mator jhâ’ nèka èpaprèiyâ ḍu kalè. bâḍâ sè èso’on heri dhâddhi tarètan bakdi la-ngalaè. dhâddhi ḍu kalè èpaprèiyâ. ka satengnga bulân agghi’. kèrana saka’ḍinto bhâi. mungkin bâḍâ sè èsampè’aghiyâ; usulan ponapa partanya’an? [okay! participants have agreed. already answered together that the fee is ten thousand. the arisan is set at ten thousand rupiah, while the cash is five thousand. please note that this diba' (between children and parents) should not be carried out together. so, if i (father) and wadi (son) are members, the implementation of the diba' should not be combined. even if there is no treat, it's okay. so don't be a burden. the important thing is togetherness. regarding the turn, god willing, the chairman has already said that the implementation of diba' will be closed twice. the next implementation is asked by heri. so brother bakdi gives in. closed twice. starting again half a month from now. just like that. maybe anyone has any suggestions or questions?] the turn-taking in conversation pattern in the abhâk-rembhâk data quotation, if simplified, can be described as follows. the speech begins with b, is continued by a, and d responds to it sequentially and alternately, without any activity to interrupt the speech of the other speech participants. b: ... kaulâ masra’aghi ḍâ’ katowa... turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 373 a: assalamualaikum.... d: walaikum salam... from this description it is known that the turn-taking in conversation pattern when the madurese pendalungan community in jember conducts official oral communication, the pattern is that there is little pause or gap in speech, carried out sequentially in a linear fashion, and there are no overlapping events of speech. the pattern description is as follows. turn-taking in conversation pattern (3): speaker b: speaker a: speaker d: turn-taking in conversation and cultural intervention in it the transfer of speech in a conversation is not officially regulated. the change of role from a speaker to a listener and occurs naturally according to unwritten norms agreed upon by the participants of the conversation. in an adult conversation, participants usually know when to speak and when to stop talking and allow other people (his partner) to speak. if this convention is violated, there will be "sanctions" from other conversation participants. people who violate these rules are considered impolite, monopolize the conversation, want to win themselves, or even be branded as a braggart (trahutami 2012). the pattern of communication between people symbolizes how the exchange of knowledge about culture (ali, kazemian, and mahar 2015); (saepullah 2021) (szkudlarek et al. 2020). in intercultural communication, communication is seen as a process in which a person (the communicator) conveys stimuli (usually symbols in the form of words) to change the behaviour of others (bambaeeroo and shokrpour 2017). communication involves all procedures through which one person's mind can influence another. intercultural communication is the process of exchanging thoughts and meanings between people of different cultures (bin-tahir, bugis, and tasiana 2017). when communication occurs between people of different nationalities, racial groups, or language communities. intercultural communication basically examines how culture affects communication activities. community members live in a system that is already mechanical, rigid, and social relations are determined based on the interests of each community's interests. in general, modern society has a higher level of education than transitional societies so that they have broader knowledge and a more rational mindset than all previous stages of people's lives, although bambang wibisono & akhmad haryono 374 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 sometimes formal education is not enough to bring people to that level of knowledge and mindset. turn-taking in conversation becomes a language instrument in the process of interpersonal communication with different cultural backgrounds. culture and communication have a reciprocal relationship. culture affects communication, and communication affects culture. language is one of the cultures used as a means of communication between members of the community in the form of sound symbols produced by human speech. the purpose of language is to convey the intent or will to the interlocutor (seken 2011). in the process of intercultural communication, symbols and language receive attention to be known. emphasis on nonverbal messages on verbal messages can complement and colour messages, so that they are easily interpreted by the messenger to the recipient of the message through symbolized messages such as language, images, colours, gestures, and artifacts. misunderstanding in interpreting messages often occurs, because the messenger (communicator) does not understand the cultural background of the recipient of the message (the communicant) or is wrong in using the channel or place where the message passes (budiyasa 2018). the findings of this study have similarities with the previous studies that both reveal the concept of politeness. as for what distinguishes it from previous research, previous research revealed the use of honorifics seen from the use of speech level and the factors behind it, while the research specifically resulted in the finding that it is very important to obey the turn-taking of speech as a form of implementation of the use of honorifics in the jember and surrounding areas based on factors of differences in age, role, position, and social status in society. the results of this study are expected to be a reference in increasing insight into speech forms and speech transfer in a multi-lingual society, so that a form of understanding between communicators can be realized. thus, it can affect the achievement of communication goals between the two parties. conclusion from the research analysis, it can be concluded that the turn-taking in conversation is culturally specific. in connection with the turn-taking in conversation pattern that applies to the madurese pendalungan community in jember, at least, there are two patterns of turn-taking in conversation that are demonstrated: (1) the speech trun-taking pattern when communicating verbally informally or informally (asapa'an/greeting and tor-catoran) and (2) patterns when communicating in a formal or official manner (abhâk-rembhâk). when greeting each other (bm: asapa'an) and having a casual conversation (bm: tor-catoran), two patterns apply, namely: (1) a pattern without gaps, and turn-taking in conversation politeness in madurese community in jember joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(2), 2022 375 overlapping speeches, and (2) a pattern without gaps, without overlapping speech. when the abhâk-rembhâk (discussion) event, the pattern is that there is little gap, and there is no overlapping event of speech. if there are two or more people involved in the speech, and some of them are speaking at the same time (intentionally or unintentionally), immediately apologize and invite the previous speaker to continue his speech. this was since such an incident was considered something unusual. this turn-taking in conversation pattern is important to know, especially to be understood by outsiders of jember, as a matter of consideration when conversing with jember madurese. based on the findings of this study, it can be recommended that the application of speech turn transfer is very important to be fulfilled so that communication can run well without misunderstandings. acknowledgments we would like to express our deepest appreciation to rector of university of jember and the head of institute the research and community service of university of jember who have provided this research group grant to produce an output of this scientific manuscript. furthermore, we would also like to acknowledge with much appreciation the dean of faculty of cultural sciences, and the head of master of linguistics department, who have 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(1996). pragmatics. 1st ed. hongkong: hongkong: oxford university press. the authors prof. dr. bambang wibisono, m.pd., was born in blitar, 09 april 1960. in 2005 he earned a doctorate in language education with a focus on language behavior studies with an ethnographic communication approach. from 1985 until now he has been a lecturer at the faculty of cultural sciences, university of jember. his research interests include language research. to develop his professionalism, he has written several articles published in accredited national journals international journals, and several books with isbn. prof. dr. akhmad haryono, m.pd. was born in jember. in 2013 he got his phd of humanities focused on sociolinguistics study and communication ethnography. from 1998 up to now he has been a lecturer at faculty of cultural science, university of jember. his research interest includes social humanities, especially on the study of language and ethnic culture. he obtained the title of professor in sociolinguistics (ethnography of communication). journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 208 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 2, 2021 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.13667 the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook for sixth-grade elementary school 1camalia fatih nida 1universitas airlangga corresponding email: camalia94@gmail.com abstract this study attempts to explain the materials of the thematic english textbook entitled “grow with english” for sixth grade by reflecting the sla principles. therefore, it could be useful as a preliminary step before conducting a textbook evaluation. this article used a qualitative research method with the focus of content analysis. the writer derived the results by responding to the materials analysis proposed by littlejohn (2011) regarding three main questions (1) what is the learner expected to do?, (2) who with? and (3) with what content?. each question depicted certain criteria that elaborate the elements of those three questions to outline coursebook materials. moreover, to complete the analytical of textbook task-based analysis, the writer used the concept of ten sla principles as suggested by ellis (2005). the results showed that gamebased tasks and consciousness-raising tasks are effective in supporting l2 acquisition since they derived both explicit and implicit knowledge. this study is limited on the scope that only focuses on a preliminary stage before conducting an in-use evaluation. the findings of this study could be a consideration and reference for efl teachers, creators of english coursebook materials, and english coursebook policymakers, especially in indonesia to put more attention on the importance of sla principles in the textbook’s materials that can support students’ l2 acquisition. keywords: sla principles, english textbook analysis, efl, materials analysis introduction a textbook or a coursebook is designed to guide language learners to enhance their communicative and linguistics competence (sheldon, 1987). numerous aspects of materials in a textbook have long been regarded as the pillar of https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.13667 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i2.13667&domain=pdf https://orcid.org/0000-0002-3145-8204 camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 209 language pedagogy (tomlinson, 2012). the language teaching process requires textbooks to give cohesion by providing direction and to support the practice of task-based activities for students (mares, 2003). furthermore, cunningsworth (1995) defined that textbooks can form an effective and quick language learning process. from those significances and functions of textbooks, this study urges to analyse the materials of english textbooks for elementary schools, specifically sixth graders as in this stage, the students need to prepare for the next level of english learning in secondary school. in this paper, the term used is “analysis” instead of “evaluation”. what it means by analysis is that it more concerns to look for what is there (littlejohn, 2011) than evaluation which emphasizes discover whether one is seeking and if it is there, then put a value on it (mcgrath, 2002). in the indonesian context, the pedagogical system is dynamic. the national curriculum has been formed to be the current curriculum or k-13 (kurikulum 2013). english language teaching (elt) is still unconfirmed to be a compulsory lesson at elementary school levels; however, many elementary schools in indonesia have implemented elt as a local subject. hence, it is necessary to know how materials depicted in english textbooks for sixthgrade students could conclude six years of l2 learning. this stage of analysis can be a preliminary step before doing a materials evaluation. according to that, this study tried to reveal some suitable methods in the textbook to provide an effective l2 learning process for students and teachers. derived from nikolov & djigunović (2006), the curriculum of primary efl education needs sla practices to be constructed to support both affective and cognitive developments. furthermore, sla practices were crucial to assist motivation on learning a language over six years in primary schools (nakata, 2009). this study aimed to arrange the outlines of the english textbook "grow with english" for sixth grade by using sla principles and to reveal how the english textbook content reflected second language acquisition principles. this textbook was published by a local publisher named penerbit erlangga and written by mukarto, sujatmiko, josephine s.m, and widya kiswara. "grow with english" is an english textbook for sixth-grade elementary students and has been used in several schools in indonesia. the writer particularly chose this book because the publisher, penerbit erlangga, is a trusted publisher that has been chosen by education authorities as a supplementary book for teachers and students. moreover, this brand consecutively achieved the top brand in the category of education books (detik.com, 2021). furthermore, aydawati (2005) stated that local coursebooks in indonesia are too focus on reading; it neglects demands in the listening section and discourses of native-like speaking. the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 210 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 second language acquisition can be used to give insights regarding some strengths and weaknesses as the development of language learning materials (cook, 1998). it was noted from (ellis, 1997) that sla principles were presented to define and criticize materials design features by analyzing materials that can be categorized “in harmony with how learners learn”. later, ellis (2005) suggested ten principles of sla to help researchers sort out the needs of the l2 learning process. those principles paid attention to instruction’s role to guide learners in l2 acquisition from the task-centered study. principle 1 encompassed the instruction's necessity to confirm learners' development in the proper repertoire (fluency) and competency-based on grammatical rules. principle 2 emphasized the meaning-focused needs be applied in the learning process. principle 3 represented the importance of focus-on-form. principle 4 related to the equal importance of implicit (acquisition) and explicit (learning) knowledge of l2 development in the l2 learning process. principle 5 reckoned the learners' built-in syllabus which derived from krashen that task-based approach was not trying to adopt linguistic content in the lessons assures that learners are ready to obtain certain target features and centralize explicit knowledge instead of implicit knowledge. principle 6 referred to extensive l2 input that is necessary to gain effective learning. meanwhile, principle 7 took an account of the importance of output. principle 8 related to l2 proficiency that intertwines with interaction in the learning process for l2 learners. principle 9 ensured that individuals are different when acquiring l2; thus, the motivation and capability of learners may require different learning styles which are beyond most teachers' ability. finally, principles 10 considered that the assessment aspect is crucial to measure l2 proficiency freely or in a controlled way. materials analysis in english textbooks in language teaching becomes the framework for this research. three questions proposed by (littlejohn, 2011) are the tools to break down the materials. to identify each element in the materials, littlejohn divided them into tasks analysis: what is the learner expected to do? who with and with what content?. furthermore, littlejohn explained that those three questions were suitable and comprehensible for analysing language acquisition since they would break down the constituent of the tasks to reveal which tasks matched learners’ language input. in addition, the three main aspects mentioned earlier could construct the concept about how tasks were able to process which way to go for learners and teachers, with whom the participation in the classroom concerning learners must work, and about what content the learners had to concentrate on. even though studies focused on english textbooks had previously been conducted (dang & seals, 2018; ko, 2014; mukundan et al., 2011), the majority of their purposes were mainly to evaluate the content. mukundan et al., (2011) explained the evaluation of textbook with the purpose to help students camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 211 and efl teachers in malaysia to get positive change. it evaluated the textbook to be more reliable and practical by using a checklist. moreover, the evaluation process in the english textbooks had been done by dang & seals (2018). they evaluated the textbook concerning sociolinguistics aspects in vietnam such as teaching methods, bilingualism, intercultural communication, and variations of language in the textbooks which had been proposed by vietnam’s ministry of education. in addition, ko (2014) investigated the design of english textbooks and suggested that it could be a more modern design to suit communicative grammar learning. ko criticized the textbooks did not reflect communicative language teaching principles. meanwhile, in indonesia, some studies about english textbook evaluation had been done by focusing on efl textbook evaluation of high school english textbooks (ayu & indrawati, 2019). they tried to find out the task distribution and its correlation with the objectives of curriculum 13 of the book. as a result, there were some points that did not match the claim. another article about english textbook evaluation had been done by (anshar et al., 2014). the article tried to depict reflective evaluation with more emphasis on vocabulary teaching and learning as a language aspect of buku sekolah elektronik (bse) or english electronic books for junior high school which published by indonesian government. the study revealed that from several aspects including the criteria of english textbooks in terms of physical appearance and content of the textbooks, anshar mentioned that both textbooks (english electronic books (bse) ‘textbook (t1)’ and ‘textbook 2 (t2)’) needed some improvements on how to design the activities and to add some proper supporting aids for the teacher. the research notion of english textbooks designed accordingly to sla principles is still limited. hence, this study offers a perspective in analysing materials of english textbooks in elementary school by using sla principles especially for l2 learners in the early stage. this analysis was a preliminary step before conducting the evaluation. therefore, this study came up with the research question: (1) to what extent does the thematic english course "grow with english" for sixth-grade elementary students apply the sla principles? (2) what kind of tasks do sla principles reflect? methods subject this research used the english textbook for sixth graders namely "grow with english" published by erlangga publisher in 2017. this book was confirmed to be essential since most public elementary schools in indonesia applied this book as a supplementary book. this study used a qualitative research method that focused on content analysis. bogdan (2003) stated that descriptive is in qualitative research in which the data are taken from documents, audio or the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 212 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 video recordings, transcripts, pictures, words, etc. because this paper dealt with materials analysis, it derived the descriptive qualitative research design. this study adopted the framework of three ‘level’ analyses from littlejohn (2011). regarding that, level 2 mentioned three questions to break down the materials analysis which illustrated a deeper level of analysis of what the users required to gain what the importance of materials' aspects is. at this level, it was needed to carry deductions of what exactly teacher and student needed to do. the three questions such as what is the learner expected to do? who with? and with what content? were used to divide the materials into the elements of the tasks. the purpose was to create an exact meaning of what a 'task' is. meanwhile, level 1 explained an objective description of what is there, this level outlined subjective selections of materials' objective facts e.g. description statements, materials' physical aspects, and instructional sections of the main steps. the general summary of level 1 and level 2 was in level 3. it carried materials' underlying principles and concluded the roles designed for teachers and students. data analysis procedures the writer selected one chapter of the materials in the textbook, the chosen unit was “unit 1” with a theme named “i had a great holiday”. since the chapters in the textbook consisted similar set of materials, the writer chose any chapter randomly as a sample that represented the whole contents of the textbook. first, the writer separated a set of book’s contents with the tasks per chapter following from littlejohn (2011). in many cases, a set of tasks may coordinate into one numbering. for example: “read the text and answer the following questions”. it was found that there were 13 tasks in chapter 1. then, the 13 tasks were put into tables and analysed using a task analysis schedule derived from littlejohn (2011). second, the writer used three main questions from littlejohn to identify where the boundaries of the task occurred and to acknowledge the process, participation, and content of the task materials. next, the writer managed to use features to elaborate the three questions with the purpose to reveal the best method in language learning that was reflected in the perspective of sla principles proposed by ellis (2005). it was natural that materials’ designers had an assumption about teachers’ and students’ roles in the classroom that reflected in the textbook, consequently, the writer used sla principles to know thoroughly which certain task activity that could help teachers and students to achieve effective language learning process. findings camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 213 the data were analysed using materials analysis proposed by littlejohn (2011) related to three main questions for analysing the tasks. the first question was what is the learner expected to do?. this question was concerned with the process of learning which emphasized the focus on the detail of what actually the learners expected to do from the tasks given. this question consisted of three branches such as turn-take, focus, and mental operation. turn-take covered the class activities, what students’ role in the classroom discourse that they were expected to get; it could be they were expected to initiate language, to respond or they did not need to do any actions, for instance: listening to teacher’s explanation. focus related to form of tasks; whether students were asked to do practice, to do comprehension exercises, or to make some reports. the next section was a mental operation, it required mental process when doing the tasks. for example, in the tasks’ description, students were demanded to follow sequences of tasks in the details of materials; it could be making some repetition, reproducing sounds, interpreting the meaning of language, writing a text, and so on. the second question suggested by littlejohn (2011) was who with?. this section referred to with whom the students work, and if they are in pairs, groups, or individuals. finally, the last question was with what content? the nature of content related to input to be covered in the tasks and obtained output in what learners expected to do. input for learners could be written or spoken tasks, pictures, sequences, stories, and so on. the expected output for learners could be giving respond, filling the blank, answering questions, matching items, circling the pictures, singing a song, and so on. in the content, it looked for the nature and source of the materials. nature meant that whether the tasks include grammar explanations about vocabularies or the use of certain expressions. source related to the beginning of how the tasks presented. it could be from the text or dialog in the materials, from teachers’ presentation, or from students’ presentation from their research. english coursebook "grow with english" consists of six units and 12 to 13 tasks per unit and in short, there are 72 tasks identified. although each unit has a different theme, the pattern and formula of task activities and descriptions are similar. therefore, the writer chose one unit randomly to investigate thoroughly using tasks analysis schedule as presented in table 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5. unit 1 was chosen with the theme "i had a great holiday". task activities that reflected sla principles were identified with plus (+) sign, minus (-) sign when it was otherwise, and cross (x) sign when none of them presented. the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 214 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 table 1: turn-take tasks analysis of “grow with english” by penerbit erlangga using task analysis schedule derived from littlejohn (2011) task number 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 (1) what is the learner expected to do? a. turn-take a. initiate language ▪ e.g., write a text according to lessons that are taught, make questions, text, or list. x x x x + x x + x + x x x b. produce response (scripted) ▪ e.g., answering direct questions, comprehend questions, drills + x x + x x + x + x x x c. not required action or no direct interactive activity ▪ e.g., read, listen to the explanation x x x x x x x x x x x total value +1 -2 0 0 +2 -1 0 +2 0 +2 0 0 0 table 1 presents one of three questions proposed by littlejohn "what is the learner expected to do?". in the turn-take section, almost all coursebook content did not push students to initiate l2 by their own words, except task 5 (produce dialog) and task 10 (game-based tasks). in game-based tasks and practice dialog, students were asked to produce l2 expressions from pictures shown. the rest of the unit 1 task activity merely followed directions and produce a scripted response. therefore, (x) signs are shown frequently. instructions were needed to provide opportunities for learners to initiate language without neglecting meaning-based and focus on form as depicted in sla principles from an early age. camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 215 in the elements of produce response, almost all task activities present a good approach to trigger students' attention to understand the context of the tasks. meanwhile, one activity in task number 2 that only conducted mechanical drills which had a probability that the input of l2 learning did not affect the process; it is indicated by minus (-) sign. in contrast with task number 2, tasks number 8 and 10 emphasized pushing students' ability to gain knowledge from the content materials such as practicing dialog, walking around, and asking friends about their holiday. no required action sessions are depicted in the coursebook several times. however, each task activity consisted of two performances, for example, listen and do, and listen and talk. when the task description consisted of two points, it was considered that action was required. furthermore, task-based analysis in focus sessions is presented in table 2. table 2. focus tasks analysis of “grow with english” by penerbit erlangga using task analysis schedule derived from littlejohn (2011) task number 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 b. focus a. language system ▪ e.g. practice patterns or forms of language (adjectives, expressions, etc.) x + + x + + + x x + + x + b. meaning ▪ e.g. tasks comprehension + + + x + x + x x x + + + c. meaning/form relationship/system ▪ e.g. activity includes consciousness learning; fill the blanks x + + x x x + + x + + + + total value +1 +2 +3 0 +2 0 +3 +1 0 +2 +3 +2 +3 table 2 shows the analysis of meaning-centred materials, it indicates whether a certain type of task activity reflects sla principles or not. the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 216 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 regarding learners' benefit when doing the tasks, the results indicated that most tasks triggered learners' attention which affected their motivation to enhance l2 performance. in language practice elements, there were 8 areas that are considered can enhance students' l2 comprehension because they included an activity where students could get involved to practice language patterns and forms. other forms of meaning comprehensions were depicted in tasks in which learning activity adopted consciousness-raising performances such as fill in the blanks, match correct answers, and so on. align with sla principles that emphasized meaning-based, the result of this section of schedule task analysis was proper enough to support learners' learning process. table 3. mental operation tasks analysis of “grow with english” by penerbit erlangga using task analysis schedule derived from littlejohn (2011) task number 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 c. mental operation a. express own ideas x x x x x x x + x x x x x b. mechanical drills ▪ e.g. repeating what is heard, listening practice x x x + x x x x x c. meaningful drills ▪ e.g. answering relatable questions (unscripted) x + + + x x x + x + + x x d. hypothesize ▪ e.g. guess the meaning x x + x + x + x + + + + + e. apply general knowledge ▪ e.g. select the correct version; true/false x + + x + x + x x + + + + total value 0 +1 +3 0 +1 1 +2 +3 +1 +3 +3 +2 +2 mental operation related to learners' mentality when processing l2 information. most mental operation aspects had been delivered clearly. there camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 217 were four elements that could sort out learners' needs such as expressing own ideas, conducting mechanical and meaningful drills, and applying general knowledge. it was necessary to apply those four aspects to increase students' ability in performing l2, but apparently in the coursebook, there was one thing which was left out and not being able to be applied to express students’ idea. meanwhile, this aspect was crucial to practice l2 comprehension. students needed to produce language and express ideas so that teachers could measure the output of l2 learning. furthermore, mechanical drills deduced input because it only focused on repetition without knowing the meaning of expressions or sentences which reflect sla principles; hence minus (-) signs are shown. other aspects such as meaningful drills, hypothesizing and applying for general knowledge supported l2 learning in task activities. table 4. participant involved task analysis task number 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 (2) who with? a. learners work individually x x + x x x + x + + + + + b. learners pair/group work x x x x + x x x x x x x x c. teacher to students ▪ e.g. teacher performs question and answer sections + + x + x + + + + + + + + total value +1 +1 +1 +1 +1 +1 +2 +1 +2 +2 +2 +2 +2 regarding participants in the learning process, the second question proposed by littlejohn had been used to outline with whom the l2 learners conduct the l2 learning process. table 4 presents the result of task analysis concerning the participant structure. in the coursebook, it had been found that most of the time, learners worked individually, and the teacher instructed students to do task activities. although these activities could be beneficial for l2 learners, they did not maximize the learning process. pair and group activities had been neglected frequently unless for one particular activity in task number 5 where the students were asked to perform dialog and asked one another about their holiday. pair and group work activities had a high potential for interaction and negotiation of meaning in the l2 learning process. accordingly, pair and group work activities would be better for the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 218 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 engaging l2 learners to exchange ideas and enhance materials comprehension when english coursebooks are more focused on pair or group work in task activity. it is in line with what suggested by ellis about sla principles which related to the importance of interaction in learning process to boost l2 proficiency. table 5. content materials task analysis task number 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 (3) with what content? a. form (a) learner’s input ▪ e.g., visual (pictures, game), written (coherent text), aural (listening sessions) + + + + + + + + + + + + + (b) learners expected output ▪ e.g., match items, tick the correct answer, true/false, fill in the blanks, read connected sentences + + + + x + + + + + b. source (a) dialog/text materials + + + + + + + + + + + + + (b) learners ▪ e.g., doing presentation x x x x x x x x x x x x x (c) teacher ▪ e.g., facilitate tasks instruction + + + + + + + + + + + + + c. nature (a) non-fiction x x x x x x x x x x x x x camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 219 task number 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 (b) fiction x x (c) game/chant x x x x x x x + x x x (d) song x x x x x x x + x x x x x total value +2 +3 +3 +1 +3 +2 +3 +4 +3 +5 +3 +3 +3 table 5 presents content analysis which more emphasized input and output for learners in the l2 learning process. a complete task facility was a pervasive input to learn l2. overall, the task in each unit consisted of activities that could help students absorb the content of the materials. however, the expected output was lower than the input. the expected output was limited due to the type of required output in the controlled and dictated tasks. learners' l2 acquisition would get maximum output if extensive input facilitated learners to perform l2 practice more flexibly. the nature element presented that everything still in control except the fiction aspect that had a probability to deduce sla principles, coursebooks should involve more task activities about learners’ personal experience (non-fiction) to enhance their l2 learning motivation. summary of result analysis table 6. final result analysis from task analysis sheet task number 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 (1) what is the learner expected to do? +2 +1 +6 0 +5 -2 +5 +6 +1 +7 +6 +4 +5 (2) who with? +1 +1 +1 +1 +1 +1 +2 +1 +2 +2 +2 +2 +2 (3) with what content? +2 +3 +3 +1 +3 +2 +3 +4 +3 +5 +3 +3 +3 total value 5 5 10 2 9 1 10 11 6 14 11 9 10 table 7. sample of content presented in the textbook task number instruction and task description materials 1 look and answer. 1. whose family is it? 2. where are they? 3. what are the girls wearing? the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 220 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 task number instruction and task description materials (teacher points out the picture of dana’s family and asks students to answer questions) 4. what is the man holding? 2 read aloud. (teacher asks students to read aloud to the text after they listen to the recording about the text and focus to students’ pronunciation) a. it was fun. i had a fun holiday. b. it was tiring. i had a tiring holiday. c. it was great. i had a great holiday. d. it was boring. i had a boring holiday. 3 listen and draw lines. (teacher points out the pictures and asks students to read the first sentence. after that, the students listen to the recording and match the pictures with the sentences) 1. (a picture of a kid who is smiling) 2. (a picture of a kid who is tired) 3. (a picture of a kid who is smiling) a. it was awesome. b. it was great. c. it was tiring. 4 say a chant. (teacher guides students to repeat a chant) really? it was great! really? yes, it was. it was tiring. really? yes, it was. it was fun! really? yes, it was. it was boring. really? yes, it was. 5 listen and talk. (teacher gives instructions and asks students to practice the dialog. after that, students are asked to walk around the class and ask friends to make dialog about their holiday. the theme of the dialog can vary) nurul: hi, seta. how was your holiday? seta: it was awesome. how was your holiday, nurul? was it great? nurul: not really. i had a tiring holiday. a. boring b. tiring c. great camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 221 task number instruction and task description materials d. fun 6 listen and do. (make a chant about the expressions) a. scrub the floor. b. climb a tree. c. dust the sofa. d. wash the car. 7 listen and tick (√) (teacher plays the recording and asks students to tick the correct choice that relates to the questions) 1. how was seta’s last holiday? a. (a picture of seta is dancing) b. (a picture of seta is boring) c. (a picture of seta is ill) 2. how was rafa’s family’s holiday? a. (a picture of rafa’s family is doing exercise) b. (a picture of rafa’s family is watching tv) c. (a picture of rafa’s family is on a trip by car) 8 sing a song. (first, teacher asks students to sing a song together. then, teacher asks about students’ holiday one by one, the students should answer and initiate language using rhymes of the song) last holiday (sung to the tune of ‘here we go ‘round the mulberry bush’) i travelled around and i played football. last holiday, last holiday i climbed a tree and i learned to swim. my holiday was fun. i stayed at home and i cleaned my house. last holiday, last holiday i washed the car and i scrubbed the floor. my holiday was tiring 9 listen and write. (teacher plays the recording and gives instructions for students to answer the questions) 1. what is the boy’s name? 2. how many toy cars did dana give tigor? 3. when did dana go to malang? 4. how did she visit there? 5. what did she visit there? the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 222 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 task number instruction and task description materials 10 play a game. (teacher invites students to do a board game. then, teacher explains the rules and points out each picture. students do rock-scissor-paper and proceed the game) start > picture 1 (a boy is cleaning a chair) > picture 2 (a family is going to the trip by car) > picture 3 (instruction to move 4 steps forward)… 11 read and draw lines. (teacher explains the task and asks students to match the sentences above as a cause and sentences below as an effect) 1. i forgot my umbrella. 2. there were so many visitors. 3. it was raining hard. 4. made was not well. 5. seta was not careful. 6. meilin did not have breakfast. 7. we did not get train tickets. a. we stayed home and watched tv. b. he did not go to school. c. the museum was very crowded. d. she had a stomachache. e. we travelled by car. f. i got wet. g. he hurt his finger. 12 read and write ‘yes’ or ‘no’ (teacher gives instructions about the tasks and does example for the notices with yes/no answers. then, students can do the rest of the tasks) notice 1 batu transport museum opening hours: ticket counters: 11.00 am – 7.30 pm visiting hours: 12.00 – 8.00 pm notice 2 monday – thursday 10.00 – 18.00 friday 11.00 18.00 saturday – sunday 10.00 – 18.00 last admission 17.15 closed: december 24 to 26 yes or no 1. the transport museum is in batu. camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 223 task number instruction and task description materials 2. the ticket counters open at 12.00. 3. you may enter the museum after 17.15. 13 read and write. (teacher asks students to read the text. then, teacher gives example to complete sentences number 1. students may do the rest of the tasks) a. car b. went c. tickets last holiday my friend and i (1) …. to malang. we wanted to go by train but we did not get the (2) ….. so, we travelled by (3) …… overall result analysis shown in table 6 informed the certain pattern to signify task-based analysis with sla principles approach. task number 10 had the highest value to direct student attention in performing the l2 learning process. task number 10 was game-based learning that consisted of both explicit and implicit learning. it indicated that not only students could have fun during the acquisition process, but they also conducted explicit learning. for example, they would remember certain expressions related to adjectives lessons they attempted to acquire in the previous lessons. moreover, the total values are even for task number 3 (choose the correct expressions), 5 (produce dialog), 7 (choose the correct answer), 8 (sing a song that urges them to initiate language in this activity based on their own experience), 11 (choose the correct answer), 12 (true/false) and 13 (fill in the blank). it means several types of tasks are proper enough to support students' l2 learning process. besides, task number 6 that asked students to make a chant session had the lowest score in this analysis. for sixth-grade elementary students, this kind of task lacks in absorbing students’ comprehension because the materials might wash over them and have a high potential to be forgotten afterward. it would be better if they initiated to make a short presentation or explanation with their own words or ideas. discussions the result analysis has shown the actual need for developing the content of the english coursebook which encompasses sla principles. several factors have already been highlighted. to be specific, extra attention to extensive input is necessary to enhance expected output in l2 learning. the result was the perspective of sla principles of materials analysis on a thematic english textbook… 224 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 supported with the analysis of the findings of guilloteaux (2013) regarding the importance of extensive input (interaction) in materials of english textbooks applied in korean middle schools that could affect the output. hence, an extended output is needed. guilloteaux’s research found that three out of five sampled english coursebooks were suitable with sla principles. moreover, related to the result of this study that game-based task gained high score in analysis to the reflection of sla principles, the previous study which had done by harsono (2015) mentioned that materials should draw attention and attract students to feel ease to learn more, so the tasks could push students to achieve self-investment in learning l2. the relationship between sla and l2 pedagogy has always been a growing area of the language learning process. align with the variable of this research study which emphasized the roles of teachers, nassaji (2012) researched the same topic by distributing a questionnaire to hundreds of esl and efl teachers. the findings showed that most of them believed sla criteria are beneficial to improve l2 teaching. however, teacher training experience was as important as the aspect of sla knowledge in the research. furthermore, nassaji outlined several crucial points related to the teachers and sla relationship because teachers had to give some insights about their expectations to gain sla research and some topics to be investigated. moreover, this study related to richards (2006)’s study focused on the impact of sla research on materials development. richards emphasized the importance of interaction and meaningful communication to be facilitated in l2 learning with the purpose to reach effective classroom learning so that learners could negotiate the meaning, extend the knowledge of the language, initiate language, and so on. furthermore, four skills (listening, reading, writing, and speaking) were needed to be presented properly and provide what the learners needed in the english coursebook. analysing efl materials means that it is necessary to understand the needs of teachers and students in the l2 learning process. however, adapting teaching materials, particularly from the textbook, did not always work well. in the classroom, teachers could create their materials to gain the competence for students who wanted to achieve (harsono, 2015). speculation that could be made if the textbook did not suitable for learning criteria was that teachers could develop materials by matching the students’ needs (pinter, 2017). a difficult text could be simplified by the teachers to be in line with the students’ competency in class. limitations of this study were shown in the sample of this study which was one english coursebook “grow with english” for sixth grade elementary camalia fatih nida journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 225 students. the result of this study still could not be generalized, yet it could be a reference to conduct similar research with the purpose to develop the content of the english coursebook. the analysis and result of this study were a prior stage in evaluation procedures to determine the extent of whether certain coursebooks were proper enough to support l2 students in the learning process. conclusion and suggestion the findings of materials analysis can be summed up by analysing the criteria of second language acquisition with the content of the sample coursebook. the writer perceived these certain types of tasks such as game-based tasks and consciousness-raising tasks were proper for language learning and enhance students’ motivation to be engaged with l2 since they were the closest to the aspects of sla principles. it was aligned with the purpose of task-based analysis that was a 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(2012). materials development for language learning and teaching. in language teaching. https://doi.org/10.1017/s0261444811000528 joall (journal of applied linguistics andliterature) vol. 5 no. 2, 2020 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.11554 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 255 utilizing sentani folktales to teach speaking for children of communal agents in jayapura regency, papua wigati yektiningtyas1, juwita purnamasari br.ginting2 department of language and art, english teaching program, faculty of teacher training and education, universitas cenderawasih, jayapura1; communal agents teacher2 corresponding email: wigati_y@yahoo.com abstract folktale is one of sentani people’s cultural heritages that is rarely told anymore. as social products that teach knowledge, history and moral values, folktales have to be preserved. in jayapura regency, there are some communal agents for children that have various programs and one of them is teaching english. to keep motivating them learning, it needs more interesting and challenging materials. from the research on revitalization of sentani language for children through folktales in jayapura regency in 2017-2018, it was found that children like to listen and read sentani folktales. accordingly, this paper aims at utilizing folktales to teach english for children focusing on speaking in some children communal agents in jayapura regency by exploring two main questions, i.e. (1) why teaching speaking using sentani folktales and (2) how to teach speaking using sentani folktales. this is a qualitativedescriptive study utilizing data of folktales that were obtained via observation, interview, and fgd from some informants, namely tribal chiefs and sentani elders in east, central, and west sentani in 2017. this writing adopts theory of literature and language teaching (lazar, 2002) and vigotsky’s scaffolding learning (omrod, 2020). this study concludes that (1) children are more active and enthusiastic to speak in english, (2) children are able to learn their ancestor’s heritages, (3) it is an alternative way of both revitalizing sentani folktales and disseminating the socio-cultural values embedded in them. keywords: folktales, sentani, speaking, revitalization introduction in the past, sentani folktales, i.e. legends, myths, fables, and fairy tales were passed down from parents and grandparents to children and grandchildren to teach about history, life strategies, philosophy, socio-culture, and morals. http://dx.doi.org/10.33369/joall.v5i2.11554 mailto:wigati_y@yahoo.com wigati yektiningtyas; juwita purnamasari br.ginting 256 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 according to an ondofolo (the highest tribal chief) of waena, ramses ohee (2017, personal communication/pers.com.), at least there are four types of folktales in sentani, i.e. (1) taboo – sacred tales that exclusively circulated among ondofolos, (2) folktales that circulated among tribal chiefs, (3) folktales that circulated among adults of certain tribes, and (4) general folktales that commonly circulated (cf. danandaja, 2002). except general folktales that can be heard by common people, other three types of tales cannot be heard even accidently by other people or tribes. for example, if somebody from common people on purpose accidently heard a taboo tale, s/he would be cursed. in sentani expression, s/he got a pelo (mystical curse) in the form of bad luck, sickness, or even death. in the same line, children were not allowed to hear adult tales (cornelis modouw, 2013-pers.com; izak puhili, 2017-pers.com.). korina ongge and luni nere (2018-pers.com.) said that parents and grandparents, usually mother and grandmother told fables or fairytales during their spare time at day time or at night as bedtime stories. after telling tales, they gave the tales’ moral lessons too. for example, from a fable entitled “the sparrow and the cassowary” that told about an arrogant, tricky, and cruel cassowary who liked to bother other little and weak birds, finally was defeated by a little sparrow (yektiningtyas-modouw, 2018). from this fable, children were taught about heroism, bravery, sacrifice and truth. children were also reminded not to be like cassowary that was always cruel and suppressed weak creatures. from a legend entitled “the journey of heram people to sentani lake”, children were taught about the history of sentani origins, namely their journey from east sepik, png, heroism, persistence, leadership, and cooperation. from a legend entitled “the origin of lake sentani”, children were taught about respect to supreme beings (gods/goddesses), to other people, and to nature as well as the importance of loyalty, patience, and honesty (yektiningtyas-modouw, 2017). in short, in the past, folktales were used by sentani people to spread moral values. this is also in line with the ideas of arumsari, et.al. (2018), santyaningtyas and noor (2016) and court and rosenta (2007) about the pedagogical functions of telling folktales (cf. danandjaja, 2002; finnegan, 1996). unfortunately, nowadays tradition of folktales telling is not found anymore. since sentani people live in a big town jayapura as the capital of papua province, they are influenced by modernity, technology and heterogeneous people that indirectly or directly distracted their traditional life. they are getting global. similarly, this phenomenon was also strengthened by ozlem(2018), yektiningtyas and modouw (2017), and kashima, et.al (2011) who said that globalization change the tradition and social habits. nowadays children are more interested in watching tv, playing gadgets instead of hanging around with friends playing traditional games, playing hide and seek, or simply utilizing sentani folktales to teach speaking for children of communal… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 257 fishing in the lake or the river. since the parents do not tell them folktales, then they only know folktales from other places told by their teachers who come from outside of sentani or papua. thus, they acknowledge more folktales like “bawang merah dan bawang putih” from central jawa, “the origin of tangkuban perahu mountain” from west jawa, “malin kundang” from west sumatra, “legend of lake toba” from north sumatera, “toar and lumimuut” from north sulawesi or even “snow white” and “cinderella” from abroad. this phenomenon cannot be ignored. as a social product that reflects history, philosophy, mythology, and identity of sentani people (cf. swingwood, 1972), sentani folktales need to be introduced, revitalized, and socialized to young generation. otherwise, sentani folktales will extinct and sentani young generation will lose their heritages, cultural roots, and identities. interestingly, even though sentani children did not acknowledge their folktales very well, a previous research on the revitalization of sentani language for children by using folktales in 2017 2018 found that sentani children were enthusiastic to hear their local folktales. this is actually the main milestone of the study. it is true that compared to other folktales from outside of papua, sentani folktales are not very popular for sentani children. thus the initiation of using them in teaching-learning process will motivate them to know and learn more about their ancestor’s cultural heritages and the socio-cultural values implied in them. this strategy is an alternative way to preserve sentani folktales as well. hopefully, from the process of learning, the children will know their ancestor’s history, knowledge, life principles, local wisdom, and socioculture. this will trigger them to learn more folktales or other sentani folklore. this is how the preservation simply starts from. sentani children’s life is not very different from other children in other places of papua. they have good gross motor skill that makes them very active physically. they cannot remain sitting or staying at home for a long time (modouw, 2015). they are also very close to nature. on the one end, their being active is very good since they tend to try and do new things. on the other end, if they are not well guided they may be trapped in doing negative things. some of them are involved in “children criminals”. from observation done in 2017-2018in waena and its surrounding and supported by children watcher and activist, sara mebri-noya and sari tumbal (2018 – pers.com.), there are many children in the age of 6-14 years old who are involved in stealing and inhaling aica aibon glue. they have to be saved. gathering them in a communal agent may be used as an alternative way out. these children need scaffolding learning, i.e. learning aid (vigotsky in omrod, 2020; santrok, 2009) to positively make use of their spare time and manage their energy. as social creatures, by having them in a communal agent, they will learn from other children or their teachers. there are some wigati yektiningtyas; juwita purnamasari br.ginting 258 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 communal agents for children in jayapura regency that have various programs, i.e. sports, arts, and language learning, especially english. seeing the facts that sentani children like folkltales, some communal agents utilize sentani folktales as alternative materials to teach english, especially speaking. this is also highlighted by (nhung, 2016 and lwin, 2015), that folktales have potentials to learn languages. speaking has been the most essential skill from other skills of english (bahadorfar, 2014). having the ability of speaking english has been required in most aspects in our life nowadays such as economy, tourism, education, health, and others. as stated by brown and yule in bahadorfar (2014) that children will be judged in their real-life situation through their english speaking ability. they will show good impression when they can speak english fluently. thus, it is important for teachers to equip children in having this ability. actually, it is good to teach english for children since young learner, so they can get the opportunity to compete globally, obtain better education and job. unfortunately, in the newest curriculum, english is not a compulsory subject for elementary school (ahmad, 2014). now it is a local content or elective subject. this condition causes a lack of children english environment to practice their english at schools while in fact sentani children like to talk but their english-speaking skill is still low. it is because they still deal with some speaking problems. for instance, a lack of vocabulary mastery, confidence, opportunity to speak english, and the crucial one is the english environment. hence, communal agents can play a vital role in enhancing their speaking skill by providing a place for them to practice their english more and to obtain english knowledge. this paper specifically discusses the benefits of utilizing folktales in learning speaking for children in communal agents. the authors focus on three communal agents, i.e. waena (established in 2015), asei island (established in 2014) and kampung harapan (established in 2019). speaking skill is prioritized due to the facts that sentani children are very active and like to talk. besides, as tourist destination, children as the continuation of sentani generation -have to be trained to communicate to tourists, especially as tour guides and souvenirs sellers (bark paintings and carvings). in short, this paper focuses at exploring (1) why teaching speaking using sentani folktales and (2) how to teach speaking using sentani folktales. hopefully, by having these strategies, sentani children are able to speak english, use their time positively as well as acknowledge and proud of their ancestor’s cultural heritage. methods this writing is a development of a multiyear research entitled “the revitalization of sentani language for children by using folktales” funded utilizing sentani folktales to teach speaking for children of communal… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 259 by the ministry of research, technology and higher education of republic of indonesia in 2017-2018. data of folktales were collected from some informants, namely tribal chiefs and sentani elders in east (waena and asei island), central (ifale and hobong), and west sentani (doyo baru and kwadeware) in 2017 via observation and interview. the folktales obtained that were told in papuan malay and sometimes inserted with some sentani terminologies and words were then rewritten in indonesian. the results were then discussed with the tribal chiefs before they were converted into “children folktales”—tales that used simpler language that could easily be followed by children and finally translated into english. to avoid some taboos and myths that cannot be publically circulated, this writing only focuses on two fables, i.e. “ebi and kandei” and “the sparrow and the cassowary” as well as two legends “the origin of abepura town’s name” and “the journey of heram people to sentani lake”. focus group discussion (fgd) was attended by tribal chiefs, sentani elders, sentani linguists, representatives of english teachers, representative children from communal agents was conducted to check the folktales accuracy and the translation, the folktales used in english teaching-learning process, and the folktales’ socio-cultural background. there are some reasons of choosing three communal agents in waena, asei island, and kampung harapan. firstly, english is given in these three communal agents. secondly, since there are foreign tourists come to asei island to buy sentani souvenirs: bark paintings (malo) and carving, english is needed to help them (children and parents) in communicating with tourists. bark painters from asei island, namely marthen ohee, agus ongge, and corry ohee (2018pers.com.) said that due to the language limitation, they cannot explain various things to tourists. it has been frustrating time for them to communicate to the tourists while there are lots of tradition, arts, and history that can be shown off in the island. this writing adopts theory of lazar (2002) on the benefits of using literature in learning language and vigotsky’s theory on scaffolding learning (in omrod, 2020) that strengthens about the possibilities of children to learn more by having challenging materials. findings why teaching speaking using sentani folktales? speaking has been a vital skill in learning english especially for young learners. having good communication skill since earlier age, can be a good thing for them in social life. it is also in line with k 13 and 21st century skills which include communication ability that every child should have. in teaching speaking to young learners, folktales can be utilized as a learning media. firstly, it is because children do not need to think hard and feel alienated from the folktales since the setting of the folktales is around them. wigati yektiningtyas; juwita purnamasari br.ginting 260 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 they feel like they own the story. some children, to name some, i.e. caroline ongge (10 years), daniel ohee (11 years), sarah pepuho (13 years), and gevan ongge (13 years) (pers.com, 2019) said that hearing sentani folktales was like hearing and feeling about themselves: their life, their land, their sky, their air, their lake, their river, their forest, their fauna, their flora, and their traditional objects, like canoes and houses. lazar (2002) describes the children’s feeling as “emotional ties” between them and the folktales they have heard (cf. dixit, 2017). in this time, sentani folktales were employed in teaching speaking to sentani children at the age of 10-14. secondly, speaking skill is chosen in this learning, as it was previously stated, due to the fact that sentani children are active and like to talk (cf. modouw, 2013). they are not happy to be silent in class. thirdly, it is also noteworthy that since sentani’s consonant and vowels of sentani language have similar sounds as in english, the children are happy and easy to pronounce some english words. compared to sentani children who only speak indonesian, sentani children who speak both indonesian and sentani are easier to pronounce some words like “sparrow” [spærow], “cassowary” [kæsə’werie], because there is an /æ/ sound in sentani and “remember” [rimembər], and“tribe“[traib] because there is an [ i ] sound in sentani and “jungle” [ˈdʒʌŋɡ(ə)l] since there is an /ə/ sound in sentani as well. similarly, sentani children are helped in pronouncing some english words like “that” [ðæt] and“dancing clothes” [ˈdɑːnsɪŋkləʊðz], since there is a /ð/sound in sentani, “north”[nɔː(r)θ] since there is a /θ/ sound in sentani too (hartzler, 1992; cowan, 1965). the implementation of sentani folktales in teaching speaking the authors as the teachers in communal agents as well utilized two fables and two legends to teach speaking for children in two different levels. they are lower level (10-12 years old) and higher level (13-14 years old). hence, there were two different activities applied. the authors only focused on vocabulary building and producing simple sentences for the lower level while for the higher level, they offered more challenging activities. lower level of group (vocabulary building) firstly, some questions were addressed to the children about folktales they know. some of them mentioned several titles such as “ebi and kandei”, “the cassowary and the sparrow”, “cinderella”, “bawang merah bawang putih”, “the legend of toba lake” and other titles that they might find on tv or on their school text books. this activity was done to guide the students to the lesson. the teachers told the students that there were some stories happened around their place in sentani lake such as “ebi and kandei” and “the cassowary and the sparrow” as they said. we then asked utilizing sentani folktales to teach speaking for children of communal… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 261 the students about what they can find around sentani lake. next, the students were instructed to write things they can see around there. most of them could not write them in english so they were allowed to write the things in indonesian. the students wrote the words enthusiastically. it was proved by the total of words they could write. the teachers said that on that day, they would learn about some words they had written. we then took a legend entitled “the journey of heram people to sentani lake”. some students started to show their enthusiasm when they heard the title. it was because the words “heram” and “sentani lake” sounded familiar with them. in other words, the children had emotional ties with the story as it was also concluded by dixit, et. al. (2017) and lwin (2015) in their studies on the use of folktales in language learning. it is a good approach to attract children’s attention. media should attract the students’ attention to make the teaching and learning process more interesting (oroujlou, 2012). before come into the text, we did vocabulary building to equip the students in comprehending the story in english language. thus, the students have got prior knowledge before going to a higher-level material (lisa, 2019; arumsari, et.al. 2019). there were 10 flashcards taken from the story of “the journey of heram people to sentani lake” provided (picture 2-3). they were put in a monster box the authors brought (picture 1). flashcards were used because children around their age or in level of elementary most use their sense of sight. hence, pictures could be helpful for them in visualizing new words (lisa, 2019). firstly, the monster box was introduced to the children using tpr method. the authors would chant the same sentences for two or three times while doing some body movements. repetition of the same phrases for many times will lead the learners to master the language (kartikasari, 2012). it is in line with larson-freeman in kartikasari “language learning is a picture 3: lake (flashcard/ www.google.com/ danau_sentani) picture 2: body painting (flashcard/pers.doc) picture 1: monster box (flashcard/pers.doc) wigati yektiningtyas; juwita purnamasari br.ginting 262 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 process of habit formation. the more often something repeated, the stronger the habit and the greater learning. learning a foreign language is the same as the acquisition of the native language” (cf. vigotsky in omrod 2020). as asher said in putri (2016), in tpr the children can listen, watch, and imitate the teacher for several times. these steps can be beneficial for the children to give them much time to be more ready before speaking. “it’s a monster box, rah rah, monster box rah rah, monster box rah rah”. seeing the teachers did this, the children started to smile and laugh. to engage them, they were asked to chant together. “what’s in the box? knock knock. what’s in the box? knock knock”. from this activity, the students kept showing their enthusiasm. all of the students followed to chant and imitate the teachers’ movement. since children have greater energy than adult, learning activity which involves body movements will be a fun activity to do to spend their energy. then, one child was asked to the middle and took a flashcard from the box. s/he was helped to lift off the lid of the box by one of the teachers. as the child reached his/her hand in, the teacher pretended the monster box was trying to eat his/her hand. the children started to laugh. then, the child tried to take the card again and gave it to her. next, she looked at the card with enthusiasm and asked the children if they would like to see. then the teachers had the class chant together. “let me see, please. let me see, please. let me see, please”. she revealed the flashcard and introduced the new word using tpr. “it’s a lake, woooooof. it’s a lake, wooof. it’s a lake, wooooof”. then she placed the flashcard (picture 3) in front of her and had the whole children chant again “what’s in the box?” and others. the class was noisy. they finished all the vocabularies. as they finished the ten flashcards, the teachers did more repetition. they asked the children to help them put the flashcards in to the box. their friendly monster box pretended to be starving. hence, they needed to feed it. a flashcard was chosen by the teachers and had the children chant together. “where is the lake? where is the lake? where is the lake?” after that, a child was pointed to come to the front and found the flashcard. one of the teachers asked the student one more time “where is the lake?”. she guided the child to the correct flashcard. the child then tapped the card and said “here is the lake. here is the lake. here is the lake” after getting a model from the teacher. they picked up the flashcard and fed it to the monster box. they did the same thing until the flashcard had been fed to the monster box. in this activity, children also showed their confidence in chanting and acting out them. the children were split into 3 groups. in 21st century education, there are several skills integrated. they are knowledge, psychomotor, affective, and information, communication, and technology skill. collaboration is one of 21st century skills in knowledge that every child should have. there are 4 utilizing sentani folktales to teach speaking for children of communal… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 263 skills in 21st century skills of knowledge and they have been integrated in k13. they are critical thinking, creativity, communication, and collaboration. as greenstein said in rendhana that collaboration skill, on the one hand, is children’s capability to work together, respect diversity in a team, and train children in taking a decision to reach the group’s goal. on the other hand, collaboration is also a good opportunity for children to learn from their friends: to imitate the correct ones or to avoid the same mistakes. vigotsky in omrod (2020) calls that as a scaffolding where students can learn from both friends and teachers. then, 10 flashcards contained of pictures and words taken from 3 different sentani folktales namely “the origin of abepura’s name”, “ebi and kandei”, and “the sparrow and the cassowary” were given to each group. the students were asked to match the pictures with the correct words in group. the teachers did mobilization to check the children’s work. then, one member from each group was asked to be the leader. the leader acted out as a teacher to lead the member of their group to review the vocabulary they got as they did together before. the teachers moved from one group to other groups to observe the children’s activity. at the end of the meeting, the children got feedback about the lesson. they were excited about the lesson. they still chant after the class ended. it proves that repetition can help children to make the language to be their habit. accordingly, in teaching speaking teacher should give more opportunity to the students to more watch, more listen, and more imitate. it is because learning a foreign language is as the same as when they acquired their mother tongue (putri, 2016). to make sure that all the children get the same vocabularies, the teachers employed think pair share method on the following meeting. each group visited others groups. the leader of each group stayed in the group. the members of each group were spread to other groups to collect the vocabularies from other groups. after that, all members went back to their groups and shared the new vocabularies they got from other groups. next, the children and the teachers played guessing words. they got an example about the game from the teachers. they had to give some clues and others should guess the words. “it can fly. it is from papua” then the students shouted “bird of paradise”. the children did this in turn using the vocabularies they learned. they only gave simple sentence or they could use gestures if they got stuck. wigati yektiningtyas; juwita purnamasari br.ginting 264 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 higher level of students higher level children were for children at the age of 13-14 (picture 6). in this group, more challenging activities were given. firstly, they were split into 4 groups. each group contained of 4 children. then, each group got a different worksheet and flashcards. they got different stories and different vocabularies. to build their vocabulary, the children had to match the 10 flashcards given with their english words. they might consult the meaning to dictionary in order to check the meaning. they got 5 minutes to complete activity 1. most of the children looked enthusiasm when they saw the pictures of tribal chief, bird of paradise, body painting (picture 2), and some more words. it made them excited to check the meaning of the words they could find in their surroundings. it can be assumed that teaching vocabulary of the things around the children’s environment will be interesting for them. it is because the children will find it easier to illustrate the words. the teachers visited each group to check their work. then, the children were asked to present the vocabularies they got to their friends. the teachers taught them how to open and close their presentation. “to open and to close your presentation, you may use this template: good afternoon every one. thanks for the chance that is given to us. in this time, we are going to present ten vocabularies we got from the story of “the sparrow and the cassowary” (the title of your story). so, without further ado, let’s get started. present your flashcards. to end your presentation, you may say “okay, we think that is all about our presentation. thank you”. all children should speak. consequently, the children had to divide their presentation part for each of them. it was to give everyone time to practice and build their confidence to speak in front of people. they showed the flashcards they got to their friends and pronounced each word. in this activity, the children still made several mistakes in pronouncing some words because those were new vocabularies for most of them. the teachers picture 5: children and teachers are doing brainstorming discussing about folktales (pers.doc) picture 6: higher level of children (pers.doc) picture 4: lower level of children (pers. doc.) utilizing sentani folktales to teach speaking for children of communal… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 265 corrected their pronunciation at the end of all presentations. they said the words and the children repeated them. this is in line with vigotsky’s theory on scaffolding learning (omrod, 2020; van de pol, 2015). it is interesting to see how students learned quickly from the teachers and also from their friends’ presentation. they imitated their friends’ correct pronunciation and avoid doing the same mistakes. for the next activity, the students were instructed to see their stories. next, they were asked to do several questions in the worksheet given. think pair square share (tpss) method was employed in this activity. a group consisted of four children. they were given same stories with several questions. firstly, each child had to do all the questions alone. it was done to build students’ critical thinking. in this step, some children found difficulties in answering the questions since they had limited english knowledge and they did not have friends to share with. after 15 minutes, the teachers instructed them to discuss their answers with their pair. they might find different answers here since they might have different point of view. in this step, the class started to be noisy. they discussed their answer with a pair. they were also warned to use english as much as they could. some children who were still hard to answer the questions in the previous step seemed to be more excited here. they got enrichment from their pair in answering the question. then, the children were asked to share their answers with their two other friends in the same team. discussion utilizing folktales to teach speaking due to the fact that as the future generation of sentani people, children do not recognize their own folktales. ramses ohee (waena tribal chief) and enos deda (ayapo tribal chief), and origenes monim (the head of hobong customary school) (2019-personal communication) said that sentani children need to (re)learn their ancestor’s cultural heritages, including folktales. their worries are also strengthened by some parents and teachers (2019-pers.com) who complained that their children and students prefer to read or listen to folktales from outside of sentani. ironically, some of sentani children also said they never have opportunities to hear sentani folktales both from their parents and teachers (pers.com-2019). as the future generation of sentani people who will continue the tradition, identity, and cultural heritages, sentani children need help to find their whole life and identity. similarly, this is also in line with shehada (2020) and folley (1986) that pointed out the importance of understanding cultural heritages and identity for children as the continuation of a certain generation. wigati yektiningtyas; juwita purnamasari br.ginting 266 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 by utilizing two fables and two legends to teach speaking for children in two different levels, i.e. lower level (10-12 years old) and higher level (1314 years old), it can be seen the interesting class atmosphere. vocabulary building and producing simple sentences for the lower level encouraged the children to find new vacabularies and create various simple sentences. while challenging activities given to higher, i.e. presenting ideas in front small and bigger groups by answering guided questions made them to develop their confidence. children started to show their confidence in sharing their ideas. it was because they obtained more knowledge from their previous pair. after discussing their answers, they made conclusion for the story based on the guiding questions given. in these activities, students were asked to speak actively. they spoke in a smaller group with their pair and went to a larger group with two other friends in the same team. it is believed that this model can help the students to build their confidence in speaking (rufiana, 2017). this model of teaching strategy is good for children. they are trained to speak in a smaller group. thus, when they are asked to speak in a larger group, they can be more confident since they have got insight or prior knowledge from the previous discussion in a smaller group. finally, all the teams were asked to present about the story they got in front of the class. they had to divide their time of speaking, so everyone in the team spoke. children showed their confidence in presenting the story. sentani children are active. it was proved by their enthusiasm in imitating the teacher’s pronunciation and action. most of them have good pronunciation. it is because sentani language has some identical sounds as english. they did not find it hard in pronouncing ‘th’ sound as in the word “traditional clothes” or the “schwa” sound as in the words “bird of paradise and island”. although most of sentani children are not using sentani language actively (origenes monim, 2019-pers.com), they get exposure about the language from their parents who still speak the language. utilizing folktales in learning english has many benefits. for instance, when they learned words such as “tribal chief”, “arrow”, “bow”, and “bird of paradise” they could simply imagine the real things since they can find it in their environment. furthermore, the children could easily relate the words as “body paintings”, “dancing clothes”, “traditional feast”, and “lake” to their daily life when they had traditional feast around sentani lake and they can find dancer with dancing clothes and body paintings (cf. lazar’s theory on emotional ties between the learners and the folktales). this study also underlines that vocabularies building from folktales of “their own” before going into the story helps the children much in comprehending the story. this kind of contextual learning is strongly strengthened by k-13. learning speaking by using folktales do not only help the children in learning utilizing sentani folktales to teach speaking for children of communal… journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 5(2), 2020 267 speaking but also enhance their knowledge about their own identity and their ancestor’s cultural heritages (yektiningtyas and modouw, 2017). conclusion and suggestion sentani people are lucky to be blessed with various cultural heritages that unfortunately are not recognized by young people. by utilizing folktales as english learning materials in some communal agents in jayapura regency, it implies two things, i.e. teaching language and socializing sentani folktales and some socio-cultural embedded. as learning materials, it is found that (1) children are enthusiastic in following the lesson when the material comes from their surroundings such as sentani folktales, (2) folktales can be used in teaching speaking skill, (3) building up children’s vocabulary needs to do before instructing children to speak or to do more complicated activities, (4) total physical response (tpr) can be a good method in teaching speaking for young learners while for higher level of children, a challenging activity can be given. thus, think pair square share (tpss) is good to apply in equipping children in addressing the challenge such as speaking in a larger group confidently. from those all activities, children can also get some scaffolding by learning from other friends or teacher to improve their vocabularies and language proficiency. as media of socializing sentani folktales, it is concluded that (1) children find their identity and love their ancestor’s cultural heritages, (2) they become agents who are enthusiastic to disseminate their tales to their friends, (3) moral values from the folktales can be taken for guiding the children in running their social life. bringing folktales to a classroom can be an alternative both in teaching language and culture. however, a teacher should ensure that the content of the folktales is suitable with the children. moreover, in applying a teaching method, children’s english proficiency, age, needs, and the total of the children in a classroom need to be considered. all in all, using sentani folktales in teaching-learning process enhances both 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(2017). the importance of rewriting papuan folktales for children. proceeding of 4th lsc: children’s literature in southeast asia. https://doi.org/10.24071/llt.2017.200105 34 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 7 no. 1, february 2022 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/16516 https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.16516 overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from english into indonesian 1nadia khumairo ma’shumah , 2sajarwa 1graduate school of linguistics, universitas gadjah mada, indonesia 1jl. nusantara 1, bulaksumur yogyakarta 55281, indonesia 2associate professor in linguistics, universitas gadjah mada, indonesia 2jl. nusantara 1, bulaksumur yogyakarta 55281, indonesia article info abstract article history: received: june 29, 2021 revised: sept 27, 2021 accepted: oct 05, 2021 this study aimed at investigating the untranslatable cultural terms found in the novel from english into indonesian since not all cultural terms in source text can be fully transferred into target text as well as the translator’s decision to overcome the problem of untranslatability since english and indonesian have very different cultural concepts. this study was a datadriven study by using the secret garden’s novel written by burnett (1911/2019) as the source text (st) and its indonesian translation by kusumawardani (2020) (under the same title) as the target text (tt). the data were analyzed by using descriptive-mix-comparative methods that combined the theory of newmark’s (1988) cultural terms categorization and newmark’s (1988) translation procedures. as a result, to overcome the problem of cultural untranslatability, the translator frequently employs transference, naturalization, and notes procedures. from in-depth analysis, transference by retaining the sl’s cultures in the tl is used to avoid mistranslation because the lacks a formally corresponding feature. naturalization is used by adapting the sl culturalspecific words to the tl's normal pronunciation and morphology because there are designation similarities in both the sl and the tl. meanwhile, notes in the form of in-text annotations and footnotes were used to strengthen the translator's role by highlighting her in the translation results. nevertheless, notes are commonly used in conjunction with naturalization to reduce strangeness, as leaving too many untranslatable cultural references weakens the translation result. keywords: cultural terms cultural untranslatability translation procedures conflict of interest: none funding information: none correspondence: nadia khumairo ma’shumah, graduate school of linguistics, universitas gadjah mada, indonesia. nadia.khumairo@mail.ugm.ac.id ©nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa this is an open access article under the cc by-sa 4.0 international license. how to cite (apa style): ma’shumah, n.k., & sajarwa. (2022). overcoming the problem of untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from english into indonesian. joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 34-50. https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.16516 https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/article/view/16516 https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.16516 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v7i1.16516&domain=pdf mailto:nadia.khumairo@mail.ugm.ac.id https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/ https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v7i1.16 https://orcid.org/0000-0003-0722-1001 https://orcid.org/0000-0002-4862-2664 overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from… joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 35 the problems of language disparities between the source language and the target language challenge the translator's proficiency to overcome such barriers by transferring the cultural terms in appropriate meanings since every language has its own culture (ariyaratne & gunathilaka, 2019; baker, 2018; cragie & pattison, 2017; ukpong, 2017; newmark, 1988). the evidence that translating is not merely a process of language transfer but also involves a transfer from one culture to another then impacted in the difficulty of finding the closest equivalent (culler, 1976; rosita, 2017). for this reason, translators are always possessed in a dilemmatic position when dealing with such predicaments as there are no two languages that are sufficiently similar to represent the same social reality (sapir, 1949). the world in which different societies exist is a distinct world which means that language is bound up with culture in complex ways. furthermore, no language can exist unless it is immersed in a cultural context, and no culture can exist unless it has the structure of natural language as its center (sapir and whorf in bassnett, 2002), implying that language and culture cannot be separated because it expresses cultural reality. as a consequence, cultural terms are co-constructed and transformed through language. as the presence of culture has a significant impact on language, translation contributes to the formation of foreign and domestic cultures by respecting cultural differences in cross-cultural communication. since cultural identity is becoming increasingly important in the translation process, some experts such as newmark (1988) and grit (1997) in diaz-cintas & remael (2014), have proposed some ways to detect and identify specificcultural identity. when grit (1997) in diaz-cintas & remael (2014) classified cultural-bound terms into geographical references, ethnographical references, and socio-political references; newmark (1988), as the former, formulated cultural terms by adapting nida’s theory which consists of ecology; material culture (artifacts), social culture; organizations, customs, activities, procedures; as well as gestures and habits; were useful when dealing with cultural terms identification. however, culture is heterogeneous. due to the lack of sl culture in the tl culture, the translation of cultural terms became complicated and the issue of “untranslatability” arose (ariyaratne & gunathilaka, 2019). this situation is difficult and forces translators to find appropriate solutions to produce acceptable translations. relying on catford (1965) who states that “untranslatability occurs when it is impossible to incorporate functionally relevant features of the situation into the contextual meaning of the target language text”, an audience design (by determining or designing who the prospective readers of the translation are and what is the purpose of translating the text in question), the selection of methods and techniques, appropriate decision making (by involving nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa 36 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 intelligence, sensitivity, intuition)) and translator’s general knowledge is needed during the process of translation (hoed in machali, 2009). in this case, baker (2018) declared firmly that the most possible that can be done to deal with untranslatable cultural terms is to suggest some strategies to reach equivalence in some contexts. because of that, the outcome of the translation process, particularly when dealing with untranslatable cultural terms, is always centered on the translator's role, how the translators adapt or modify the translation, although there is no single translation that is considered to be "the only correct or best translation." (nord, 2015). hence, the translation procedures were taken into account as the process of translation is directly involved in the form of interaction and inter-cultural confrontation (bachmann & medick, 1977; bassnett, 2002; sajarwa, 2017; saule & aisulu, 2014). therefore, this problem becomes interesting to investigate from the standpoint of translation. some pieces of literature have been carried out relating to the problems of untranslatability in translation. from the intercultural perspective, wang & sunihan (2014) investigate the untranslatability of english and chinese. they conclude that proper translation strategies reduce the possibility of meaning loss during translation and convert untranslatability into translatability. in another context, pahlavani et al. (2014) investigate the translatability and untranslatability of collocations in ernest hemingway’s novels. they suggest that literal translation and functional equivalence are the most frequent strategy used by translators. moreover, differently, susanti & novalinda (2017) who conducted a study about the problem of untranslatability in the translation of harry potter and the sorcerer’s stone’s novel by using chesterman’s (2012) theory discovered that the translator tends to use the loan word or loan word plus explanation strategy to deal with the problem of untranslatability. all of the underlying studies have concluded that the term "untranslatability" in this context does not imply that it cannot be translated. the most essential point is that they all have been suggested for using translation strategies to overcome the problem of untranslatability as their ultimate conclusion. from the theories and research results mentioned, this study was emphasizing the importance of translation from existing (english) source text into indonesian and was investigating the translator’s decisions as the solution to cope with the problem of cultural untranslatability. departing from the afore-mentioned studies, this study is still testing whether certain strategies are effective in overcoming the problem of untranslatability by focusing on culture. unlike previous studies, newmark (1988) proposed translation procedures were used and tested in this study as an instrument to examine translator decisions. as cultural terms significantly appear and become essential in literary works such as novels, this research focused on the overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from… joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 37 issue of cultural untranslatability in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden from english into indonesian. the secret garden was written by frances hodgson burnett (a british novelist and playwright) in 1910. it was published as a novel in 1911 and is regarded as one of the most popular works of children's literature of all time (see www.amazon.com). through her masterpiece, burnett tells the story of a girl named mary lennox who was born to a wealthy british family in india. ironically, her parents sent them to an ayah to bring her far away. nevertheless, she relocates from india to misselthwaite manor to live with a new family soon after a cholera disease kills her ayah and all her servants. after living from one place to another place, mary’s adventure story begins when she found a key to the strangest house. with the help of robin and her friends, she gained access to a secret garden with many plants and friendly animals. given that burnett's the secret garden had two distinct settings (india and misselthwaite manor (yorkshire)), cultural diversities in the novel and its translation were examined from both cultural and translation perspectives: this study aimed at investigating (1) the untranslatable cultural terms found in the translation of burnett's the secret garden from english into indonesian; as well as (2) the translator's decision to overcome cultural untranslatability. this study is expected to shed new light on translation research by establishing a link between language and culture. method data sources the translation of foreign books into indonesian has revealed the progress of the indonesian book publishing industries. the free flow of information allows for the exchange of information, knowledge, and culture in global relations. as a result of the widespread translation of textbooks and other semi-literary materials, a type of 'translationese' has emerged in many parts of the world (nida & taber, 1982), and research into it has spread globally. following the trend, this study used english literary work since british publishers own a large international market share (clark & phillips, 2019). this study used a canon english novel entitled the secret garden written by francess hodgson burnett (1911) (consisting of 27 chapters with 343 pages) published in 2019 (second print) by pt. gramedia pustaka utama as the source text and its indonesian translation under the same title by airien kusumawardani (consisting of 27 chapters with 312 pages) published in 2020 by pt. elex media komputindo as the target text. the selection of the novel and its translated version as data sources were based on two main reasons. first, the secret garden written by burnett is a kind of fiction and children's literature novel containing many distinctive word choices. using the setting http://www.amazon.com/ nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa 38 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 of india and yorkshire, london; makes the secret garden rich in cultural terms. so that, the involvement of several different cultures, makes the secret garden is challenging to be translated into indonesian. secondly, in regards to the translator competencies, airien kusumawardani has been a translator since 2010, specializing in fiction books. she has authored several translated fiction books that have been published by well-known indonesian publishers. in this case, the translator's background and knowledge are thought to influence the word choices produced in the translated text. (baker, 2018). data collection techniques this research employed observation and documentation techniques, as well as a content analysis method focusing on words and phrases containing cultural terms and their indonesian translations. more than just a counting process, content analysis was chosen to connect the analysis's findings to the context of the discourse or the environment in which they were created. besides, it also offers a systematic and objective method for drawing valid conclusions from verbal and written data. (downe-wambolt in bengtsson, 2016). the overall data in this study were taken and collected by applying some steps, such as (1) reading all chapters and pages thoroughly; (2) comparing and contrasting the source text (st) and the target text (tt) by using comparative method; (3) taking some notes using note-taking method; (4) classifying the data based on cultural terms classifications (newmark, 1988); (5) reducing the data and specifying the data on cultural untranslatability terms; (6) looking up and double-checking the definitions of each cultural term on oxford learner’s dictionary (see www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com), kbbi (kamus besar bahasa indonesia) online (see https://kbbi.kemdikbud.go.id/) and other relevant and credible websites; (8) segregating the data based on translation procedures proposed by newmark (1988) and formulating the procedures which be used by the translator to deal with the problems of cultural untranslatability; (9) encoding the data into the data sheets; and last (10) counting the occurrences and frequencies of the data by using descriptive statistics. data analysis procedures this study was data-driven research. it means that the data were interpreted based on the emerging data. this study applied quantitative and qualitative (mixed) data to explore and obtain a depth of understanding (teddlie & tashakkori, 2003). this study analyzed data using several steps, including (1) "padan translational" methods conducted by sudaryanto (1993) and mastoyo (2007) with the indonesian language as a determining element; (2) descriptive http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/ https://kbbi.kemdikbud.go.id/ overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from… joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 39 methods to describe the findings in st and tt; (3) comparative methods to compare the findings in st and tt; and (4) interpretative methods to reveal the purpose and facts contained based on the research objectives by checking the acceptability using semantic feature analysis. data validation to achieve credibility, dependability, transferability, and conformability in this study, triangulation techniques were employed by utilizing something outside the data to verify the data findings (moleong, 2001) and also to make the data more accurate by using different methods and techniques (denzin, 1970). this study applied theoretical triangulation and methodological triangulation. theoretical triangulation was conducted by implying multiple theories from books, papers, journals, and the internet in analyzing and interpreting the data. methodological triangulation was carried out by combining qualitative and quantitative research in the form of numbers, as well as their interpretation based on the results. in this study, triangulation tends to complement each other. findings these findings showed the problems of cultural untranslatability (cu) found in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian as well as the translation procedures for overcoming cultural untranslatability. the untranslatability of cultural terms categorization in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian from the depth analysis, the results showed that there were 4 types of untranslatable cultural terms and 9 categories found in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian. the results were presented qualitatively in table 1. table 1. percentages of untranslatable cultural terms and their categories found in the novel numb. cultural types categories occurrences and frequencies 1. ecology flora silver bell, cockle shell, marigold, heather, gorse, broom, blackberry, heather-bell, collie, crocus, snowdrop, daffodil, jonquil, narcissus, purple flag, laurel, larkspur, mignonette, holly, poppy, daffydowndilly, lilies of the valley, canterbury, iris, primrose, aquilegia, columbine, shrubbery, lilac, rhododendron, delphinium, campanula, pink, pansy, 109 (15.03%) nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa 40 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 numb. cultural types categories occurrences and frequencies foxglove, rock-cress, hedgerow, currant, forget-me-not fauna skylark, robin, missel 164 (22.62%) 2. material culture food(-s) muffin, crumpet 4 (0.55%) place(-s) bungalow, fyord 9 (1.24%) cloth(-es) stocking, bonnet 6 (0.83%) currency(-ies) shilling, penny, pence, sovereign, crown 15 (2.07%) 3. social culture song(s) riquet à la houppe, mary quite contrary 2 (0.28%) social status(-es) ayah, mem sahib, missie sahib, sahib, mester, colonel, captain, ma’am, sir, dr., mr., mrs., miss 411 (56.69%) 4. social organization, political and administrative religious term(-s) doxology 5 (0.69%) total 725 (100.00%) derives from a total of 725 data of cultural untranslatability terms, the most frequent untranslatable cultural term is social culture relating to social status, followed by fauna and flora as part of ecological terms, currencies, places, clothes, foods, religious terms, and songs. by seeing the results, it can be inferred that since every region have their endemics or peculiarities, they belong to cultural-specific items which need special considerations. translation procedures as translator's decisions in translating burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian this study found that there are three translation procedures used by the translator as translator's decisions to deal with the situation when the target language lacks of equivalent concept and suitable expression in translating burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian. the findings are shown in table 2 below. table 2. translation procedures used by the translator to overcome cultural untranslatability no translation procedures occurrences and frequencies 1. transference 565 (77.93%) 2. naturalization 152 (20.97%) overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from… joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 41 no translation procedures occurrences and frequencies 3. notes 7 (0.97%) 4. mistranslation as a translation error 1 (0.14%) total 725 (100.00%) from the table above, the most frequent translation procedure applied in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden from english into indonesian is transference which occurs 565 times (77.93%) of the total translation procedures, followed by naturalization which occurs 152 times (20.97%) and notes which occurs 7 times (0.97%). through the analysis, it can be seen that there is 1 (a single) data (0.14) that belongs to mistranslation as the efforts made by the translator to achieve equivalence are not always appropriate and suitable to be used in the target language. these findings serve as a reference for concluding the translator’s decision to overcome the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from english into indonesian. discussion the entire collection of the data has been analyzed by exploring cultural untranslatability categorization and translation procedures as translator's decisions in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian. based on the analysis on burnett’s the secret garden and its translation into indonesian as the data, the findings showed that the translator intends to use (1) ‘transference’ (which is also known as emprunt or loan word or transcription) by directly transferring the sl word to the tl text; (2) ‘naturalization’ by adapting the sl word to the normal pronunciation and the normal morphology (word-forms) of the tl; and (3) ‘notes’ by inserting additional information besides the terms and at the bottom of the page. from the findings, notes in the form of in-text annotations and footnotes were applied by the translator. the translation of specific-social cultures to deal with the issue of untranslatability, the translator used some of the strategies proposed by newmark (1988), as social cultures became the most prominent cultural untranslatability in both texts. the following examples are of untranslatable social culture found in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian. (1) st: ...when mary was born, she handed her over to the care of an ayah. (sg, 1911/2019: 7) tt: ...ketika mary lahir, ibunya menyerahkan mary untuk diurus seorang ayah1. 1sebutan untuk pengasuh atau pelayan perempuan di india yang berdarah asli india. (sg, 2020: 2) nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa 42 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 in excerpt (1) the translator decided to use notes in the form of footnotes as additional information for the readers since the author or writer tends to use loan words in the source text. here, the translator indicates that retaining the source cultural term was important. it proves that the translator wants her presence will be visible in her literary work. by the presence of notes for the term “ayah” in excerpt (1), it became effective in guiding the target readers and ensuring the readers' full understanding of the foreign words that appear in the source text by providing a clear interpretation. (2) st: colonel mcgrew said he nearly jumped out of his skin when he opened the door and found her standing by herself in the middle of the room. (sg, 1911/2019: 18) tt: kolonel mcgrew bilang dia hampir terkejut setengah mati ketika membuka pintu dan menemukan mary berdiri sendirian di tengah ruangan. (sg, 2020: 13) since social class shapes relational realities (carey & markus, 2017), translating cultural terms relating to social stratification becomes difficult and tricky. as a result, the translator must connect the sl's social class to the tl's social class. in excerpt (2), as an example case, the translator tends to use naturalization since the term “kolonel” also can be found in indonesian terms with the same referent as sl [+man, +army officer high rank]. (3) st: she had just remembered a french fairy story she had once read called “riquet à la houppe”. (sg, 1911/2019: 24) tt: dia baru saja mengingat cerita dongeng prancis yang pernah dibacanya berjudul riquet à la houppe. (sg, 2020: 18) “riquet à la houppe” or “ricky with the tuft” is well-known as a french literary fairy tale. it was written by charles perrault as part of his 1697’s anthology entitled histoires ou contes du temps passé (fairy tales from past times with morals or mother goose tales). in this case, the translator in excerpt (3) decided to retain the original title with transferred bodily into tl by the use of loan words in the source text. the translator tends to follow the author’s decision because if “riquet à la houppe” is translated into indonesian the nuance of french will be lost. this proves that the translator tends to use translation as a medium to introduce sl cultures to tl readers. (bachmann & medick, 1977; saule & aisulu, 2014). the translation of specific-ecological terms as proposed by newmark (1988), many countries have 'local' words. consequently, they will be more or less lexical items in the tl and may be overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from… joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 43 subject to naturalization because they were hard to be translated into the tl. nonetheless, these findings demonstrated the polar opposite of the previous theory. these findings found that in addition to using naturalization, the translator intensively used transference and notes as procedures in translating the secret garden into indonesian. the excerpts below are examples of untranslatable ecological terms found in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian. (4) st: nor it isn't fields nor mountains, it's just miles and miles and miles of wildland that nothing grows on but heather and gorse and broom... (sg, 1911/2019: 30) tt: ini juga bukan padang rumput ataupun pegunungan, hanya tanah liar seluas bermil-mil di mana tidak ada apa pun yang tumbuh selain semak berbunga heather3, gorse4, dan broom5. 3semak berbunga ungu-merah muda, sesekali putih, yang termasuk ke dalam tanaman yang berdaun dan berbunga hampir sepanjang tahun dan lebah yang mengisap sarinya dapat menghasilkan madu heather yang bercita rasa kuat dengan tekstur seperti agar-agar. 4salah satu jenis tanaman yang menghasilkan bunga berwarna kuning, termasuk tanaman hijau abadi yaitu yang selalu berdaun hijau apapun musimnya. 5semak berbunga kuning yang dapat tumbuh hingga sekitar 1-3 meter, bisa tumbuh di tanah kering atau berpasir dan mampu bertahan sampai suhu sekitar -25 derajat celcius. (sg, 2020: 23) in excerpt (4), the translator decided to use transference to emphasize the actual setting of the place (which was in the western context) as footnotes are linked to the cultural burden of a community, such as meals and food, clothes and accessories, beliefs and customs (herrero, 2005) which can help to promote a better understanding of the source culture (luo & zhang, 2018). through the use of notes in the form of footnotes in excerpt (4), the translator can fill a gap in the target readers' understanding of the source-language culture. (5) st: but the robin seemed to be quite satisfied and chirped and whistled back at her. (sg, 1911/2019: 59) tt: tetapi burung robin itu terlihat cukup puas dan dia bercicit serta bersiul membalas mary. (sg, 2020: 49) as an endemic species of north american thrush, the robin is one of the most well-known songbirds in the eastern united states. cited from www.britannica.com, early colonial settlers named it “robin” because its breast color resembled a smaller thrush. therefore, based on the analysis of excerpt (5), naturalization was applied by the translator since indonesian has http://www.britannica.com/ nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa 44 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 the same reference as english in terms of the robin. in this case, indonesian people called “robin” as “burung robin” with the same references by retaining its original name. the translation of specific-material culture a plenitude of references to contemporary social institutions and conventions poses challenges to all translators (lópez, 2018). for this reason, the translation of cultural terms needs to be based on a mastery of information about them. the examples of untranslatable material culture found in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian can be seen below. (6) st: it was true that there was no one in the bungalow but herself and the little rustling snake. (sg, 1911/2019: 14) tt: memang benar, tidak ada seorang pun di bungalo itu kecuali mary dan si ular kecil yang bergemerisik. (sg, 2020: 9) newmark (1988) mentioned that many language communities in the world have a typical and specific house that remains untranslated since it was strongly bounded with national identity. a simple search from the internet showed that the word “bungalow” comes from the hindi word bangla in 1676 and according to oxford learner’s dictionary, bungalow resembles “a house built all on one level, without stairs”. when associated with the indonesian context, the word “bungalo” is naturalized. relating to this, kbbi defines bungalo as “rumah peristirahatan di luar kota (di daerah pegunungan atau di pantai), ada yang dibangun secara permanen, ada juga yang tidak”. based on the analysis, naturalization is used by the translator in excerpt (6) because the source language has a designation similarity in the target language. (7) st: it was an agreeable idea, easily carried out, and when the white the cloth was spread upon the grass, with hot tea and buttered toast and crumpets... (sg, 1911/2019: 253) tt: gagasan itu cukup menyenangkan, mudah dijalankan, dan ketika taplak putih dihamparkan di atas rumput, dengan sajian teh panas, roti panggang dan crumpet beroles mentega,... (sg, 2020: 229) food terms are subjected to the most diverse range of translation procedures because they are the most sensitive and important expression of national culture (newmark, 1988). because of that, in excerpt (7), “crumpet” cannot be translated into indonesian because it is not lexicalized in the target language. it means that indonesian has no reference to “crumpet”. cited from oxford learner’s dictionary (see www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com), a "crumpet" is defined as a small flat round cake with small holes in the top that is eaten hot with butter. crumpet is categorized as a traditional british teatime http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/ overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from… joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 45 treat that originated in the 17th century which was well-known as thin pancakes made from flour, milk, and egg base. however, today’s version, likely developed in the victorian era, bakers modified crumpets by adding yeast and then baking powder to the recipe (see www.britannica.com). here, the translator transfers the sl to the tl by using transference procedures in excerpt (8) as there is no suitable word to transfer “crumpet” into the target text. (8) st: she wore a very purple dress, a black silk mantle with jet fringe on it and a black bonnet with purple velvet flowers which stuck up and trembled when she moved her head. (sg, 1911/2019: 19) tt : dia memakai gaun ungu terang, mantel sutra hitam berhiaskan rumbai hitam gelap, dan topi bonnet hitam dengan bunga-bunga beledu ungu yang mencuat dan bergetar saat dia menggerakkan kepalanya. (sg, 2020: 14) newmark (1988) proposed that clothing as a cultural term can be adequately explained for tl readers if the generic name or classifier is added. bonnet was not fluent in indonesian. as "bonnet" is strongly associated with british culture and cannot be lexicalized in the target language, the translator used the transference procedure on the excerpt (8). the word "bonnet," defined as "a hat tied with strings under the chin, worn by babies and, particularly in the past, by women," was retained in the target text. looking back in time, the bonnet was worn by elite women in informal contexts from the eighteenth century. however, since the nineteenth century, bonnet became the dominant and general term used for female hats. (9) st: he smiled at their friendly grins and took a golden sovereign from his pocket and gave it to "our 'lizabeth ellen" who was the oldest. (sg, 1911/2019: 334) tt: lelaki itu tersenyum melihat senyum ramah mereka lalu mengeluarkan koin sovereign14 emas dari sakunya dan memberikannya kepada ‘lizabeth ellen, yang merupakan anak tertua. 14nama koin emas britania raya, dengan nilai nominal satu poundsterling dan sudah berhenti dicetak ketika james i dinobatkan sebagai raja inggris dan skotlandia pada tahun 1603. (sg, 2020: 305) in excerpt (9), “sovereign” as a great british currency cannot be translated into indonesian due to its strong connection with national identity along with its history. besides, currencies are bound by international conventions, so, in the case of excerpt (9), the translator used transference procedures and decided to bring the word "sovereign" into the indonesian translation. it is given by a footnote to help and guide the readers to connect http://www.britannica.com/ nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa 46 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 with its meaning in an attempt to serve acceptable translation for the target readers. the footnotes in this case also help to make the reference clear to the readers. the translation of specific-social organization, political and administrative in religious language, the proselytizing of christianity’s activities is reflected in manifold translation (newmark, 1988). therefore, the translators focus on the appropriateness of translating religious languages. the following examples are the examples of untranslatable social organization, political and administrative, found in the translation of burnett’s the secret garden into indonesian. (10) st: tha' might sing th' doxology. (sg, 1911/2019: 313) tt: kau bisa menyanyikan doksologi10. 10himne pendek yang digunakan di berbagai kebaktian kristen, sering dinyanyikan pada akhir kebaktian. (sg, 2020: 285) according to firth in bassnett (2002), meaning is a complex of various types of relationships between the component concepts of a situational context. thus, since translating religious terms is very sensitive and complicated, in excerpt (10) the translator chooses to use a footnote to maintain its sl meaning. at a glance, the dictionary defines doxology as an expression of praise to god, particularly a short hymn that was sung as part of a christian worship service. as doxology is often added at the end of canticles, psalms, and hymns, notwithstanding, the themes expressed in doxologies are scriptural. for its long history, the term “doxology” should not be translated because of its sensitivity. (11) st: but colin was of an exploring mind and he knew nothing about the doxology. (sg, 1911/2019: 313) tt: tetapi pikiran colin sedang menjelajah dan dia tidak tahu apa pun tentang doksologi. (sg, 2020: 285) in contrast to excerpt (10), the translator chooses naturalization in excerpt (11) because the reader is assumed to know or have general knowledge of the meaning of the sl. this was proven by the presence of the note procedure, which was already provided by the translator in the preceding sentence (as in excerpt (10)). according to the analysis, the use of naturalization reduces the strangeness of the source's cultural term by completely avoiding the use of loans or foreign words. overcoming the problem of cultural untranslatability in burnett’s the secret garden from… joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 47 mistranslation in translating culture-specific terms from the data findings, this study also found mistranslation in the translator’s decision. (12) st: mistress mary, quite contrary, how does your garden grow? with silver bells, cockle shells, and marigolds all in a row. (sg, 1911/2019: 16) tt: nona mary, si pembangkang, bagaimana tamanmu kau tata? dengan bunga silver bell dan cockle shell, dan marigold semuanya berbaris. (sg, 2020: 11) “mistress mary, quite contrary” in excerpt (12) is a verse from mother goose’s english traditional nursery song that is widely popular with all its controversies. eventually, the interpretation of the songs was still debatable until now. nevertheless, although the phrase ‘quite contrary’ is difficult to translate because it relates to a song, it cannot simply be translated into “si pembangkang” in indonesian. as a result, translating "quite contrary" into "si pembangkang" was not appropriate because the meaning of "miss mary, quite contrary" was still debated by experts due to the conspiracy theory. they believed that the song "mistress mary, quite contrary" had religious and historical significance. this discovery proved that rather than using literal translation procedures, transference, naturalization, and notes can be preserved to avoid translation errors or mistranslation. conclusion the problem of untranslatability challenges the translators. thus, cultural terms found in the data are less translatable since the tl mostly has no formally corresponding feature. when the aforementioned study found that the loan word or loan word plus explanation strategy can be used to deal with the problem of untranslatability (susanti & novalinda, 2017), this study underlined that transference, naturalization, and notes were applied by the translator relying on newmark’s (1988) translation procedures. the research findings also showed that these three translation procedures are quite effective to overcome the problem of cultural untranslatability, such as specific social culture, ecological terms, material culture, and social organization, political and administrative; and to avoid translation errors. the use of notes as one of the translator’s decisions tended to make her visible in the tt, whereas the use of transference already demonstrates that the more serious and knowledgeable the readership, the more important transference is, not only in terms of cultural and institutional terms, but also of titles, addresses, and words used in a specific sense (newmark, 1988). the study's findings concluded that every strategy, procedure, and method offer a nadia khumairo ma’shumah & sajarwa 48 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature), 7(1), 2022 solution to translation difficulties, one of which is retaining words from the source text into the target text via transference, naturalization, and notes. nonetheless, this investigation was limited to the exploration of cultural terms in the novel as well as the issue of untranslatability in the novel's translation. considering that the problems of untranslatability are very broad due to language differences, the study of untranslatability opens a large field in translation studies along with the development of languages around the world, particularly when it is associated with the dominance of patronage (such as publisher and editor). for the next researchers, it is expected that future researchers will use other material objects and discourses as data, such as film subtitles, surtitles, non-fictional works, speeches, textbooks, and so on when researching the same focus. furthermore, it was necessary to investigate the impact of transference, naturalization, and notes to the target readers on their accuracy, readability, and acceptability. acknowledgments we would like to express our heartfelt appreciation to the editor and/or anonymous reviewers who provided feedback on our piece of writing. references ariyaratne, m., & gunathilaka, i. 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(2014). an analysis of untranslatability between english and chinese from intercultural perspective. english language teaching, 7(4). https://doi.org/10.5539/elt.v7n4p119 the author nadia khumairo ma’shumah is a graduate school of linguistics student majoring in translation studies at universitas gadjah mada indonesia, funded by the bpi-lpdp for a domestic scholarship. she is currently active and focused on various translation research to dissect interesting things in linguistics and translation areas, as linguistics and translation are like gold mines that never stop being scrutinized and investigated. sajarwa is an associate professor of linguistics at universitas gadjah mada's graduate school of linguistics and french study program. as a senior lecturer and academic, he is currently focused on sharing and dedicating his knowledge by teaching linguistics and translation, as well as conducting various researches in those fields of study. https://doi.org/https:/doi.org/10.1016/j.sbspro.2014.05.300 https://doi.org/10.1515/hssr-2017-0006 https://doi.org/10.5539/elt.v7n4p119 330 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 joall (journal of applied linguistics and literature) vol. 6 no. 2, 2021 issn (print): 2502-7816; issn (online): 2503-524x available online at https://ejournal.unib.ac.id/index.php/joall/index doi: https://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.15372 translation ideology of french novels into indonesian in colonial and postcolonial period 1sajarwa 1universitas gadjah mada, indonesia corresponding email: sajarwa@ugm.ac.id abstract this study analyzes the differences in the expression of meaning of the colonial and postcolonial french novels and the ideology of translating french novels into indonesian during the colonial and postcolonial periods. this study uses data from french novels and their translations into indonesian during the colonial and postcolonial periods. the data were analyzed by using descriptive-qualitative-comparative method. the results of this study show that text message expression during colonial period is indirect due to at that time the society was under the rule of the dutch colonialists or subaltern. in post-colonial period, the community social situation changed, people were no longer afraid to express their thoughts or they were more open so that the delivery of meaning is direct. colonial period novels have two types of foreignization ideology, namely self-names translation and setting translation, while post-colonial period novels have three types, namely self-names translation, title translation, and setting translation. the novels domestication ideology during colonial period occurred in translation of pronouns on and the translation of kinship calls, while in post-colonial period novels it occurred in pronouns on translation, kinship calls translation, and self-names translation. the different ideology in the two novels is self-names translation. keywords: translation, ideology, colonial, post-colonial introduction the dutch colonial power had an impact on literature development in the dutch east indies until the early period of indonesian independence. the colonial is related to the nature of colonialism which is the historical moment behind a nation. colonialism has destroyed the foundations of life and culture of the colonial society, which can take the form of language imposition, slavery, cultural imitation and substitution and displacement of population. the influence of colonialism had an impact on the post-colonial period. gilbert and tompkins (in allen & soemanto, 2004: 207) argue that posthttps://doi.org/10.33369/joall.v6i2.15372 https://crossmark.crossref.org/dialog/?doi=10.33369/joall.v6i2.15372&domain=pdf https://orcid.org/0000-0002-4862-2664 sajarwa journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 331 colonialism refers to practices related to ‘social hierarchy, power structures and colonialism discourse.’ the emergence of post-colonialism has become the main intellectual discourse, particularly in former colonial countries, including indonesia. now post-colonial theory has been widely developed. it is used as a reading strategy that can be expected to reveal new meaning of power relations, west-east concepts, and orientalism. meanwhile, ratna (2008: 81-2) suggests five main post-colonial definitions, namely (1) paying attention to analyze the colonial era, (2) having a close relationship with nationalism, (3) fighting for a small narrative, gathering power from below, at the same time learning from the past to the future, (4) raising awareness that colonialism is not solely physical, but also psychological, and (5) not merely a theory, but an awareness that a lot of great work must be done, such as fighting against imperialism, orientalism, racism, and various other forms of hegemony. the influence of colonial language towards colonized languages, the way of expressing post-coloniality in indonesian literary texts, and the methods used by ex-colonial writers in decolonizing (national awareness) of the language of the great colonization, are very clear (faruk, 2007). meanwhile, the problem of identity related to the problem of hybridity is the problem of national identity that changes due to the cultural influence of the colonial nation, including mimicry (imitating) colonial culture by colonized and subaltern nations (marginalized people or colonized people). intellectual discourse concerning colonial and post-colonial issues also penetrates the field of translation. bassnett (2002) suggests that post-colonial translation not only reveals text messages but also the culture of the source text. currently, many post-colonial studies have been carried out. the following are some of the previous post-colonial studies. shohat (2004) examines the post-colonial translation and post-zionism in palestine. his studies revolve around the characteristics of post-colonial and post-zionism, hybridity, and subaltern groups of palestinians from israel and america. nurhadi, et al (2013) discuss forms of post-coloniality in tempo magazine. there are several forms of post-coloniality in a number of tempo magazine literature review articles regarding: (1) stories from the east, (2) colonialism, (3) reviews of western literature (including its translation in indonesian), and (4) literary works that specifically discuss post-colonialism. rakhman (2014) discusses the ambivalence of nationalism from a post-colonial perspective. it is argued that nationalism is no single, but it can exist in various forms, for example fascism xenophobia, liberative emancipatory, and others, depending on who interprets it. in addition, nationalism is associated with race so that there are certain races who feel more nationalist or as nationalist, by positioning “people outside them” or “race outside them” as non-nationalist parties. olivia and salim (2020) discuss mimicry in wiji thukul’s poem “hari translation ideology of french novels into indonesian in colonial and post-colonial period 332 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 itu aku akan bersiul-siul” (that day i will whistle) applying bhabha’s theory that in a post-colonial society there would be a process of mimicry and mockery. wiji thukul played the word “heartbreaking” by adding the word “bitter” which means very sad. this mimicry act is regarded as a form of mockery against the colonialist (new order). for those who do not have power, the forms of mimicry and mockery in poetry are tools to stop the domination of power. from the post-colonial study above, it can be seen that there are very few post-colonial studies on translation. this paper is a continuation of the colonial-postcolonial relationship research in the field of translation. when a person translates a text, he is transferring not only the message but also the culture. the process of transferring source language text messages is influenced by the translator culture. this is reflected in the way he understands, views, and expresses the message through the language used. the transfer of messages in the translation process is always marked by cultural differences in the source language and target language (hoed, 2006). this difference directly places the translator in a dilemma. on the one hand, he must translate the source language text messages into the target language accurately. on the other hand, and in many cases, he has to find an equivalent which is not necessarily appropriate in the target language. according to venuti (1995) there are two types of translation ideology, namely domestication and foreignization. domestication refers to translations that are more inclined to the target culture and language. on the other hand, foreignization leads to translations that are more inclined to the source culture and language. venuti argues that ideology is influenced by socio-cultural culture of the society in which translation are published and disseminated. therefore, ideology is something that has been planned from the beginning and choosen based on certain goals. the translation during the post-colonial period is more of a cultural transfer. during the post-colonial period there are many choices of cultural elements that can be used to transfer to readers (bassnett, 2002). the results of translation can be oriented to the source language or it can also be the target language. in other words, the translator has a choice of translation ideology, namely foreignization ideology (oriented to the source language) and domestication ideology (oriented to the target language). the actual translation does not only transfer the message from source language to target language, but also realizes it. occasionally, the translator’s ideology enters when he processes a translation product. the ideology includes the concept of ‘right’ and ‘wrong’ a translation product that is produced. the concept of ‘right’ and ‘wrong’ is influenced by several factors, one of which is culture. since translation is seen as part of sociocultural activities, therefore translation works are part of a society culture. ideology can be interpreted as a view or truth held by a person or society. sajarwa journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 333 barthes (in hoed, 2006) says that ideology is a myth that has been established in a community or society. the ideology adopted by a person will direct his actions in accordance with the principles of truth that he adheres to. likewise in translation, the ideology held by the translator regarding good translation will direct every action he takes in the translation process. venuti (1995) suggests that there are two types of translation ideology, namely foreignization and domestication. foreignization ideology is oriented towards the culture of the source language. translators who adhere to foreignization ideology try to maintain what is foreign and unfamiliar to the target language readers but common to the source language. for them, a good translation is one that maintains the style and cultural taste of the source language. meanwhile, domestication ideology is oriented to the rules, norms, and culture of the target language. therefore, translators need to know why a text is translated and what the function of the translated text is because every text produced must have a specific purpose. with domestication ideology, it is hoped that a translated work will not feel like a translation but like a new work produced by the target language itself. the problems of research can be formulated (i) how to express the meaning of french colonial and postcolonial novels and, (ii) how is the ideology of translating colonial and postcolonial novels in french into indonesian. this study analyzes the differences in the expression of meaning and ideology in the translation of french novels into indonesian during the colonial and postcolonial periods. the analysis focuses on the differences in the expression of meaning and ideology in the translation of colonial and postcolonial novels using data from each of the two novels. the results of this study will enrich knowledge about translation studies and are expected to inspire other researchers to continue research on the translation of colonial and postcolonial novels. methods this study uses data from two french language novels during the colonial period with their translation into indonesian and two french novels during the post-colonial period with their translation into indonesian. the novels are as follows, the postcolonial novel (1) sans famille by hector malot (1878) translated into sebatang kara by abdoel moeis (1923), publisher of balai pustaka drukkerij volklectuur-weltevreden; (2) moliere's l'avare was translated into indonesian by si bachil balai pustaka in 1936; postcolonial novels (1) madame bovary by gustave flaubert (1972) published by gallimard translated by mrs. bovary by winarsih arifin (1990) published by pt dunia pustaka jaya, (2) syngue sabour: pierre de patience by atiq rahimi (2008) published by pol paristranslated stone of patience by feybe i mokoginto (2016). translation ideology of french novels into indonesian in colonial and post-colonial period 334 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 this research applies descriptive-qualitative method. descriptive qualitative method research aims to produce descriptive data in the form of written or spoken words from people and observable behavior. according to creswell (2011) a qualitative research approach is research that explores information from objects/participants widely by asking questions that are general in nature, data collection is realized through the translation of the text subjectively. meanwhile, according to moleong (2007:6) that qualitative research is a method used to understand phenomena about what is experienced or observed by research subjects holistically, and is described in the form of words and language, in a special natural context. descriptivequalitative method was applied to observe and interpret the different ways of expressing the meaning of colonial and postcolonial novels. for this reason, the direct element cuting (bul, bagi unsur langsung) technique is applied (sudaryanto, 1993), which divides discourse based on its constituent elements. with the bul technique, the elements that reveal the meaning of narrative discourse will be known. in addition, this research also applies a comparative method. comparative method is used to compare the differences in the ways of expressing the colonial and postcolonial novels as well as the ideology of translation of french novels and indonesian novels. the data of this research are the narrative discourse of two french novels and two indonesian translation novels during the colonial and postcolonial periods. the stages of data collection are as follows (i) reading french and indonesian novels, (ii) identifying french and indonesian narrative discourse data based on how to express meaning, (iii) identifying french and indonesian narrative discourse data based on the ideology of translation, and (iv) recording all data of both languages. the stages of data analysis are as follows, (i) classifying and comparing data based on the meaning of the two groups of colonial and postcolonial novels, (ii) classifying and comparing data based on the ideology of translation of the two groups of french and indonesian novels in the colonial and postcolonial periods, and (iv) interpreting the results of the comparison of the expression of the meaning and ideology of the translation findings how to reveal the meaning of colonial and post-colonial novels table 1. table of manner of meaning expression no. manner of meaning expression colonial period novel post-colonial period novel 1. directness meanings are expressed indirectly. meanings are expressed in long sentences. meanings are expressed directly. meanings are expressed in short sentences. 2. politeness polite words. harsh words. sajarwa journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 335 (1) disant cela, il me la mit dans la main: puis, comme je voulais me défendre d`accepter un si beau cadeau, il ajouta tristement: tu comprends que je n’ai pas besoin de savoir l’heure ici; le temps n`est que trop long; je mourrais à le compter. adieu, mon petit rémi; embrasse-moi encore un coup; tu es un brave garçon, souviens-toi qu`il faut l’être toujours. (sf 1878: 363) sesudah berkata demikian, maka ditunjukannya arloji itu kepada saya. demi bapak saya menolak pemberian itu, maka bapak peter berkata dengan sedih hatinya: di sini tidak perlu bapak mempunyai arloji, karena tidak ada gunanya. kalau bapak melihat-lihat waktu pula di sini, tentulah akan semangkin lama rasanya waktu itu. bawalah barang yang tidak berharga ini, remi, akan jadi tanda peringatan. marilah kemari bapak peluk akan dikau, karena sebentar lagi kita mesti bercerai. (sb 1923: 26) after saying this, he showed me the watch. for the sake of my father's refuse because it is of no use. if you look at the time here as well, it will certainly feel al of the gift, then mr. peter said sadly: here you do not need to have a watch, like that time will be longer. bringing this worthless thing, remi, will serve as a warning sign. come here, father, hug you, because soon we will have to separate during the colonial period the message expression is indirect, for example, to express the meaning of ‘will hug’ is expressed by the statement adieu, mon petit rémi; embrasse-moi encore un coup; tu es un brave garçon with translation ‘marilah kemari bapak peluk akan dikau’ (come here, i hug you) and to express the meaning of ‘for remi to receive a watch from his father’ expressed in the sentence tu comprends que je n'ai pas besoin de savoir l'heure ici; le temps n`est que trop long; je mourrais translated le compter with translation ’di sini tidak perlu bapak mempunyai arloji, karena tidak ada gunanya. kalau bapak melihat-lihat waktu pula di sini, tentulah akan semangkin lama rasanya waktu itu. bawalah barang yang tidak berharga ini, remi, akan jadi tanda peringatan’ (here i don’t need to have a watch, because it’s useless. if i had a look at the time here, you would have felt as long as it would have been. take this worthless item, remi, it will be a warning sign), and the sentence form is long. in addition, the word divorced is used to express the meaning of “separation”. at that time (in 1928) it seemed that the word separation had not been used to express the meaning of “separation” which is different from “divorce”. meanwhile, in post-colonial novel, meanings are expressed directly as it can be seen in example (2) below, contrariée, elle jette son voile à terre et, lasse translation ideology of french novels into indonesian in colonial and post-colonial period 336 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 ‘kesal, dilemparkannya kerudungnya ke lantai’ (annoyed, she threw her hood on the floor). (2) contrariée, elle jette son voile à terre et, lasse, se laisse choir sur le matelas occupé jadis par le corps de son homme. « mes filles, je les laisse dans les mains d’allah ! » en récitant un verset du coran, elle tente de se convaincre du pouvoir de dieu pour protéger ses filles. (ss 2008: 101) kesal, dilemparkannya kerudungnya ke lantai dan, lelah, dibiarkannya dirinya terjatuh ke atas kasur yang sebelumnya ditempati suaminya. “anakanakku, kuserahkan mereka ke dalam tangan allah!” sambil mengutip sebuah ayat alquran, ia mencoba meyakinkan dirinya akan kekuasaan tuhan untuk melindungi anak-anaknya. (bk 2016: 100) (annoyed, she threw her scarf on the floor and, tired, allowed herself to fall onto the mattress that had previously been occupied by her husband. “my children, i lay them into the hands of allah!” while quoting a verse from the koran, she tried to convince herself of god’s power to protect her children). in addition, in post-colonial novels, many harsh words are found, for example je vends ma chair pour donner du plaisir aux hommes ‘kujual tubuhku untuk memuaskan para lelaki’ (i sell my body to satisfy men) in data (3) below and even harsher on data (4) sot ! disait-il , petit sot, vraiment! ‘tolol!’ katanya. ‘tolol benar kamu’ (stupid!” he said. “you really are stupid.”) such harsh expressions are not found in colonial period novels. (3) je vends ma chair pour donner du plaisir aux hommes ! l’homme, sursautant de rage, éructe : « allah, al rahman ! al-mu’min !protège-moi ! contre qui ? » (ss 2008: 23) “kujual tubuhku untuk memuaskan para lelaki!” sang lelaki, terkejut marah, melontarkan: “allah, al-rahman! al-mu’min! lindungilah aku!” “dari siapa?” (bk 2016: 26) (“i sold my body to satisfy the men!” the man, shocked with anger, said: “allah, al-rahman! al-mu’min! protect me!” “of whom?”). sajarwa journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 337 (4) sot ! disait-il , petit sot, vraiment ! sot en trois letters ! grand-chose, après tout, qu’un e phlébotomie ! et un gaillard qui n’a peur de rien ! une espèce d’écureuil, tel que vous le voyez, qui monte locher des noix à des hauteurs vertigineuses. (mb 1972: 179) “tolol!” katanya. “tolol benar kamu. tolol dengan lima huruf. apalah flebotomia itu! tak apa-apa, bukan? lelaki segagah kamu yang tak takut apaapa! coba lihat dia sekarang. biasanya seperti bajing yang suka naik pohon kelapa memetik buahnya sampai ketinggian yang menggamangkan. (nb 1990: 152-3). (“stupid!” he said. “you’re really stupid. five-letter moron. what is phlebotomy! it's all right, isn’t it? a man as brave as you who is not afraid of anything! take a look at him now. usually like a squirrel who likes to climb a coconut tree picking its fruit to an astonishing height). foreignization and domestication ideology ideology is translation orientation. translation results may lead to source language (foreignization) and target language (domestication). table 2. table of translation ideology no. translation ideology type colonial and post-colonial period translation ideology subtype orientation 1. foreignization colonial period post-colonial period self-names setting self-names title names setting translation results are oriented to source language 2. domestication colonial period post-colonial period pronoun on kinship calls self-names pronoun on kinship calls translation results are oriented to target language self-name as the form of foreignism ideology self-names translation results that aim to source language. this can be seen both in colonial novel translation, namely remi in example (5) and postcolonial one, namely vendredi in example (6) below. (5) on me fit entrer dans un paloir où il n`y avait ni grilles ni barreaux, comme je croyais, et bientôt après le père arriva, sans être chargé de translation ideology of french novels into indonesian in colonial and post-colonial period 338 journal of applied linguistics and literature, vol 6(2), 2021 chaînes.