Academic writing is a kind of writing important in academic field. Academic writing is a type of writing that is specifi- cally used for academic purposes (Yakhon- tova, 2003). Paper, journal article, thesis, and dissertation are examples of academic writings. They are developed in specific standards and refer to certain formats of writing. Academic writings are useful for academic fulfillment, academic develop- ment, and self-actualization in academic area (Rao, 2007). More specifically, academ- ic writing is important to understand students’ disciplines, support the students’ learning and establish the students’ career. In the process of academic writing, there are some requirements that students should fulfil. In academic writing, the students refer to theories and use logical thinking as requirements to come up with theoretical truth (Yakhontova, 2003). The Andi Wirantaka 34-45 ABSTRACT INTRODUCTION Paragraph Writing of Academic Texts in an EFL Context is currently a teacher in English Language Educa�on Department of Universitas Muhammadiyah Yogyakarta. He earned his Bachelor Degree from Universitas Negeri Yogyakarta (UNY) and Master Degree from Sanata Dharma University. He started his teaching experience in higher educa�on as English instructor in Language Training Center of Universitas Muhammadiyah Yogyakarta. His research interests are vocabulary teaching and learning, academic wri�ng, and instruc�onal develop- ment. This study aims to figure out EFL students’ experiences in developing paragraphs and difficulties in writing paragraphs of academic texts. This current study was qualitative research which employed interviews as the data collection method. The participants of the study were five students who were writing their research report as a requirement for their undergraduate degree. The study was conducted in one of private universities in Yogyakarta, Indonesia. The findings of the study showed that in developing paragraphs, the students did brainstorming, drafting, revis- ing, and editing. Moreover, related to the problems in writing paragraph, the students faced diffi- culties in English words and word choice, grammar, development of main idea, coherence and cohesiveness, effective sentence, and citation. Keywords: paragraph development, paragraph writing, academic text Volume 1, No. 2, July 2016 JOURNAL OF FOREIGN LANGUAGE TEACHING & LEARNING 35 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 theories provide the basis of what is believed to be the truth from the previous studies. It is then proven by providing facts from the data gathered and relating them with theories. Paragraphs are useful to deliver theories and findings to be discussed to achieve scientific truth. A good paragraph is essential in academic writing. A good paragraph is critical as it helps the readers to understand the content of the writing. Coherent para- graph results in sufficient development of main idea reflected by appropriate sup- porting sentences, which will help readers find the main idea and supporting details of the paragraph. Moreover, cohesion among paragraphs is also essential to build a bind among paragraphs. It shows the readers the unity of the paragraph. Knowledge of developing a paragraph is very important for students especially in academic writing. They need to make sure that the language used in developing the paragraph is correct, formal, systematic, and suitable with academic nature. More- over, sentences should be arranged in such a way so that it results in good comprehen- sion to the readers. Academic features such as citation and writing format are also important to be taken into consideration by the students to meet the academic require- ments. Although a paragraph only consists of one main idea, the development of a para- graph is sometimes difficult to achieve. Writers should consider some aspects of a paragraph to build them into a good para- graph. Vocabulary, grammar, sentence structure, cohesion, and coherence are among the aspects requiring attention in paragraph writing. The words used in paragraph should be correct and suitable to represent the idea. In addition, the para- graph should fulfill language rules in term of grammar. Moreover, authors have to make sure that each sentence is correctly constructed. The last, each sentence in a paragraph should be interconnected to other sentences and each paragraph should also connect to other paragraphs. In writing an academic text, EFL students should put more efforts than L1 students. In writing a paragraph, EFL students potentially face more challenges than first language (L1) learners (Hussen, 2015). Both of them may share similar diffi- culties related to the writing format and mechanic. However, students of English as foreign language face more difficulties in composing academic text than L1 students (Yakhontova, 2003). EFL students are likely to have more difficulties in terms of vocab- ulary, grammar, and sentence structure. The objective of this study is to investi- gate how students develop paragraphs and identify problems in writing paragraphs of academic texts. In EFL contexts, academic writing requires the students to use a foreign language, proper academic format and standard, and other paragraph writing requirements. Those requirements make EFL students have more challenges in academic writing than L1 students, and they potentially make academic writing more difficult to accomplish. LITERATURE REVIEW Writing There are some factors which influence successful writing. Kellogg (2001) argued that successful writing depends on the abil- ity of the writer to retrieve and apply rele- vant procedures, schemas, facts and episodes through working memory. Writ- ing requires the writers to follow certain 36 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 rules and procedures to meet the standard of good writing composition. In addition, writing also requires them to consider how the ideas are elaborated and connected one another. In an EFL context, writing benefits students in some ways. Rao (2007) men- tioned the importance of writing in EFL context as it motivates students to organize ideas, analyze, criticize and develop the ability to summarize. In addition, it strengthens students’ ability in reflecting, thinking, and learning the language. Writ- ing specifically helps the students produce the language by developing and connect- ing the ideas in writing product. They may analyze, criticize and summarize the topic or theme being discussed. Since writing is a productive skill, it makes students to be creative and critical in composing the language. Academic Writing Academic writing simply means writing for academic purposes. Academic writing, more specifically undergraduate thesis, is a writing work done by the students in their study accomplishment process. In Indone- sia, it is the requirement for the undergrad- uate degree. The students usually get the preparation class for academic writing. It will help them learn about academic writ- ing and how to make it. Writing an academic text is not a simple matter, especially for L2 students. Many L2 students find it hard to write their academ- ic writing into a proper form (Hussen, 2015). Hussenstated that more problems occur because of their lack of familiarity with the conventions and expectations of academic writing in English medium universities. Moreover, Al-Khasawneh (2010) stated that courses where students learn academic writing do not successfully prepare students to write academic writ- ing. Paragraph Development It is essential for students to understand a paragraph before they actually write it. Oshima and Hogue (2006) stated that para- graph is basic unit of organization in writ- ing group-related sentences which consists of two kinds of sentences: a topic sentence and supportive statements. The number of the supporting sentences of a paragraph is not fixed but they should be sufficient to develop main idea clearly. Owl (2009) clari- fied a paragraph as a group of closely-relat- ed sentences which deal with and develop one idea. Paragraph has been written to help the readers obtain the piece of information of the writing. Paragraph helps the readers comprehend the information within the main idea and relate it to the other para- graphs. Mayers (2006) stated that there are three important parts of a paragraph. The first part is introduction. It contains a topic sentence which outlines the main idea of a paragraph to which the rest of the para- graph should be focused. A topic sentence usually occurs in the beginning of the para- graph but it sometimes occurs in other positions such as in the middle or at the end of the paragraph. The second part is the body. It contains supporting sentences which develop the main idea by giving examples, details, and explanations. The third part is conclusion. It occurs at the end of the paragraph. It emphasizes the point of the paragraph to be emphasized by the readers. It usually has the sense of finality. 37 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 There are elements of a paragraph that determine the quality of the paragraph. Paragraph should have three main elements to be achieved i.e. unity, coher- ence and adequate development (Nunan in Khairy, 2013). The first is unity. It is about oneness of the idea. To have a unity, a para- graph should be developed by only one main idea. The main idea is then developed by sufficient supporting details from at least two or more sentences. A main idea is used to control unity of the paragraph by its topic sentence. In addition, supporting details are used to develop the topic sentence by giving more explanation to it. They have to be sufficient enough to devel- op the topic sentence in order to give the readers good comprehension of the para- graph. The second element is coherence. It is the connection among sentences within the paragraph. Coherence can be achieved by having transitional words and phrases, pronoun reference, repeated key terms and parallelism. Boardman and Frydenberg (2002) stated that there are many ways to make paragraph coherence. One of the ways is to use linking words. Coordinating conjunctions, subordinating conjunctions, prepositions, and transitions are common types of linking words. They are useful to link sentences to one another. Adequate development is the last element of a paragraph to be achieved. A paragraph should be fully developed and it doesn’t leave any significant questions to the readers. An author can ensure the ade- quate development of the paragraph by providing right level of supporting details, choosing right kind of evidence, and having the right pattern of development. Writing a paragraph is the beginning of the writing process which has some proce- dures to follow. There are some procedures of paragraph writing proposed by Hussen (2015)i.e. brainstorming, planning, draft- ing, revising, and editing. Brainstorming. Brainstorming is the initial step of paragraph writing. It is idea-collecting technique which functions as the organizer of thinking and idea collec- tor. It is included as pre-writing activity. Oshima and Hogue (2006) suggested that the more time writers spend on pre-writing activity, the more successful their writings will be. Brainstorming can be in the form of list, free writing and mind mapping (Zemach& Rumisek, 2005). Brainstorming enables writers to gather any possible ideas for the paragraph which are then sorted and organized. Planning. Planning as the second step is done after the writer finishes brainstorm- ing. Planning is when the writers outline their ideas and bring them into note form. Planning is the procedure after brainstorm- ing is done to select relevant ideas to be developed into paragraph (Zemach & Rumisek, 2005). Planning is useful to orga- nize and classify the ideas gathered in brainstorming. Planning helps the writers to establish paragraph unity that will give the readers introductory idea about the main topic of the paragraph (Cumming, 2006). It is useful to put the ideas into right order and build the connection between the ideas. Drafting. Drafting is the third step in writing a paragraph. Drafting is the process of writing when the writers write down their ideas on paper focusing on the con- tent, and not mechanism (Hussen, 2015).When writing the first draft, students should discover further ideas to be added to the paragraph (Cumming, 38 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 2006). It is very hard to have good para- graph in the first writing. There is always draft developed as the first writing. Draft- ing is the initial product of paragraph in which writers can put or add more ideas or even omit some irrelevant ideas. The emphasis of the drafting process is the con- tent so that students do not need to revise the paragraph related to vocabulary and grammar used. Revising. The fourth step of paragraph writing is revising. Cumming (2006) point- ed out that revising is considered as the heart of writing process, the means by which idea emerge and evolve and mean- ings are clarified. Revising means students examine whether ideas are well built and arranged. In this step, students take a closer look on how the sequences of ideas are presented. They should activate their logic to determine how the paragraph is devel- oped. Editing. The step when students check and correct the paragraph as the final version is called editing. It can be viewed as the process of correcting the sentence struc- ture, word choice, spelling, punctuation, grammar, capitalization in apiece of writ- ing (Hussen,2015). It is the step in which students pay attention to details of the paragraph. The development of ideas is not the concern in this step. It is done after revising process. Since academic writing requires system- atic development of the arrangements, steps to develop the writing should be care- fully done by the author. Having different procedures may result in inconsistency and redundancy. Paragraph Writing Problems Academic writing in EFL context is still challenging for many students. The issue is that it requires students to refer to academ- ic writing system and use second language (L2). Hailemariam’s study (2011) found that L2 writers have several problems in writing such as vocabulary selections, punctuation error, generating idea, orga- nizing problems, spelling errors and appro- priate grammar usage. In writing an academic text, EFL students potentially face some problems. Related to the influencing factor of academ- ic writing problems, Hailemariam (2011) stated that the possible causes of students’ problems in EFL paragraph writing are inadequate exposure of target language, lack of practice, problem in writing appre- hension, lack of appropriate feedback, lack of vocabulary, and carelessness. Another study by Abdulkareem (2013) toward Arab students in Universiti Teknologi Malaysia found that the difficul- ties in developing paragraph include vocabulary, spelling, structure of sentenc- es, and idea development. Vocabulary is the most problems faced by the students in developing paragraph followed by spell- ing, structure of sentences, and idea devel- opment. The last study by Thananart (2000) examined errors in comparison and con- trast paragraphs written by EFL university students at Chulalongkorn University. The study found that problems in writing para- graph included grammatical structure, transition signals, verb forms, word choice, and spelling. METHODOLOGY This study is descriptive qualitative research which specifically examined the mentioned, “What I feel about my partici- pation in this EDP was like a soul recre- ation”. This finding is in line with Lee’s (2007) statement about degree of comforting in participating the EDP. According to what he found, “more students seemed to feel uncomfortable at the beginning, but they got used to performing after a few times” (p. 37). This is what the teachers actually experienced. When they admitted that they could not act in the play, it was just a matter of time. It was obvious that all of them at first possessed uncomfortable feeling, yet, when they had done practices, they were in tune with their roles and finally they could enjoy it. What teachers like about their partici- pation in EDP. From the interview tran- scription, it was shown that the teachers found their participation in the EDP as gaining new experiences since it was com- pletely different from their daily routines, which is teaching. It was said by Mrs. Putri, “What I like from this is because I gain new experiences which I don’t get it as a teach- er.” While the other teacher stated that she liked the way she had to create chemistry with the other role. “When we talk about acting, I enjoy my part when I have to get to know other people to build chemistry so that there is a connection among us”, Mrs. Shinta uttered. In the same vein, Mrs. Delima supported her statement by saying that she loved the togetherness in partici- pating in the EDP. This finding supports Sandi’s (2017) recent research, who mentioned that partic- ipation in English drama could build togetherness. In addition, she also revealed in her research that participating in the EDP means gaining new experiences. It was also shown during the interaction with the participants that they were enthusiastic in attending the rehearsals. Even though one of the participants’ house was located far from the city and it took nearly one hour to get to the rehearsal’s venue, every time she arrived, she looked excited meeting the other members of the cast. Another research conducted by Lee (2007) also revealed that the different setting in the drama has created a relaxing environment. This can be described from a teacher’s daily routines at school. They are planning, teaching, and evaluating. In addition, all of these activities demand the teachers to be the so-called director in the classroom. However, when they participated in the EDP, they rehearsed, danced, and performed on a stage, which give them a real different setting. What teachers dislike about their par- ticipation in EDP. Not only did teachers enjoy the participation in the EDP, they also experienced negative feelings especially about the other members being undisci- plined. This was strongly mentioned by all of the participants that they did not like it when the other actors or actresses did not turn up in the rehearsal. “I am sorry to say that I don’t feel comfortable if the others are not disciplined”, said Mrs. Shinta. In line with her, Mrs. Delima also stated that, “when they actually had confirmed to attend the rehearsal, but it turned out they cancelled last minute, it really bothered me”. Meanwhile, Mrs. Putri expressed her dislike by stating that, “it indeed needs a sacrifice especially in time management”. Discipline problem was also revealed by Lee (2007) in his research, however, the problem was not related to time manage- ment, but it was on the students being undisciplined during the preparation time. 39 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 scope of paragraph development of academic writing. It covered how students develop paragraphs and identified prob- lems occurred in the process of paragraph writing. The participants of the study were five students of English Education Depart- ment in a private university in Yogyakarta, Indonesia. The participants were writing their undergraduate thesis as a require- ment for their undergraduate degree. It is in the form of a research-based report. The study used interview as data collection method. Five participants were chosen as research participants, and it was sufficient for researcher to do interviews when addi- tional interviews or participants did not result in identification of new concepts or data were saturated (Creswell, 2012). FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION Based on the data taken from the inter- view to students, there are some findings related to how the students develop para- graphs. The findings showed that they did brainstorming, drafting, revising, and edit- ing in the process of writing paragraphs. Brainstorming As the first step in paragraph develop- ment procedure, brainstorming is essential to collect the ideas. There was only one student did brainstorming. The purpose was to gather idea as much as possible. However, the other students begin the paragraph development by composing main idea and it is followed by supporting sentences. “I usually write what I think to be rele- vant for my paragraph. Sometimes it works to develop the idea. It can be anything. It is just like random thought” (P1.1). Brainstorming is essential as it allows writers to have numerous ideas for the paragraph. Hussen (2015) stated that if writers do not do the brainstorming, the ideas in the paragraph are not rich and sometimes insufficient. Drafting The third step is drafting. The main focus of the drafting is the content of the paragraph. All five students did drafting in their paragraph development. They wrote the paragraph based on the main idea by giving supporting sentences. They directly did this by writing on the computer. “My first draft is written in my computer. For me it is easier than to do this on a piece of paper”(P1.2). “What I always do is I write the main idea and supporting sentences on the computer. It is easier for me to do it directly from the computer”(P2.1). “I usually make my first draft in the com- puter. I just write whatever I want to write”(P3.1). Drafting is initial writing product writ- ten by students as their first writing. The study found that it became the first proce- dure of paragraph writing. Revising Revising is the fourth step after drafting is done. The emphasis of the revising is about the content of the paragraph. In this phase, the findings found that two students did this procedure. They did revising by checking whether the writing is well writ- ten in terms of idea development and giving correction to the idea 40 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 development. “Soon after I finished the draft, I reread the sentences to make sure that the para- graph makes sense”(P1.3). “Sometimes what I write is not good. There is usually confusion about the idea devel- opment. That is why I often make revision to the idea development” (P2.2). The finding showed that two students revised their writing in terms of idea devel- opment. One student did revising because of his intention to have a good paragraph. He wanted to have a good paragraph; therefore, he reread what he had written. Another student did revising because of her awareness that her writing ability was not good. Hence, she frequently did revi- sion to her writing. Editing The next step is editing. It is the phase where the students edited their sentence structure, word choice, spelling, punctua- tion, grammar, and capitalization. All five students did this in their paragraph devel- opment. They did it by themselves, by looking up in the dictionary, asking friends, or hiring a proofreader to help them in editing. The study also found that it was the main concern of their paragraph development. “Editing is very important. I usually check the grammar by myself. Sometimes, I also ask my friend to check the sentence struc- ture. It is always useful to have second person to read the paragraph”(P1.4). “I am a reckless person. Actually, I know the correct form but I always write some- thing wrong in my paragraph. It can be about grammar, punctuation and spelling. Sometimes I ask my friends to revise them or I use grammar checker in the comput- er”(P2.2). “I am a very bad writer. I do not have a good ability in writing. I need someone to edit my paragraph. I always make gram- matical mistakes”(P3.2). “Honestly I am not good at writing. But I know that grammar is important. I check my writing if it has grammatical mistakes. Even though I already checked the gram- mar, my supervisor still finds many gram- matical mistakes in my writing” (P4.2). “Well, my concern is on the grammar. I work a lot on the grammar. I always check my grammar”(P5.2). Editing is among the last steps in writing a paragraph. The interview uncovered infor- mation that editing was the most frequent- ly used procedure that the writers chose. Moreover, it was found that students felt inferior about their ability to do editing by the fact that only few of them did self-cor- rection. Even though few students did self-correction, it failed as there were still many grammatical mistakes in their writ- ing after they did editing. Beside self-cor- rection, other students used other sources, such as grammar checker, friends, and proofreader that helped them in editing the paragraphs. To sum up, the findings showed that in developing paragraphs the students did brainstorming, drafting, revising, and edit- ing. Related to brainstorming as one of pre-activities in writing done by students, Oshima and Hogue (2006) suggested that the more time writers spend on pre-writing activity, the more successful their writings will be. It implies that brainstorming helps the students make good paragraphs and be successful in writing. Plan ly?’, ‘How is the stress in this word?’, and even though the Javanese accent appeared, at least other people understood”, said Mrs. Putri. In addition, Mrs. Shinta stated that in the recording, there was a consider- ation on where to give the stress on certain words; therefore, it was not just about pro- nouncing the words, but also about making the words meaningful. In the same vein, Mrs. Delima uttered, “I think intonation is necessary, in this EDP, I got to apply it naturally since it supports how we use the language”. In the EDP, the participants agreed that they are encouraged to pronounce the English words correctly since it was record- ed and was going to be played in public. This is in line with what Chukueggu (2012) proposed about the benefits of drama using a term “authentic language use: through the use of drama, students engage in authentic language use. It becomes a means of practicing real-life language in the class- room. Drama puts a language into context and gives the students experience in real life situations” (p. 3). In short, the teachers who act in the EDP are practicing to use the English language in a real context such as the implementation of pronouncing the English words using the correct intonation and stress. Participating in the EDP helped me practice communication skills. When taking part in the English Drama Perfor- mance, it seemed that teachers sharpened their communication skills. Not only the content in communication, but teachers also practice how to communicate with other casts as well as the audience. Mrs. Putri strongly emphasized that, “to me, communication is more than only applying to the language, how I communicate the language to the interlocutor and audience is important to make them understand.” This finding supports Lee (2007), who stated that participating in an English drama facilitates communication and collaboration skills development. This find- ing is also in line with the claim of Kempe and Holroyd (2003) about drama as an effective method to assist participants to become practical communicator. It was true that when performing on the stage, actors and actresses are not just acting, yet it is more like conveying message. To do so, it requires an effective communication skill. Participating in the EDP helped me ease reading. From the interview, it was shown that when the teacher participated in English Drama Performance, their English skill, especially reading skill is maintained. “Frankly speaking, I am 100% convinced that after participating in the EDP, reading English stories, poems, and song lyrics seemed easier”, Mrs. Putri uttered. This finding was in line with the state- ment of Dodson (2000), who argued that by getting participants to read the script, it means studying the literature as well as reading it out loud. Baldwin and Fleming (as cited in Lee, 2007) believed that through text engagement, participants in EDP can enrich the critical awareness of the literacy concept. Participating in the EDP helped me improve my vocabulary. Taking part in the English Drama Performance means dealing with the script reading. In the script of the EDP, there were several songs that were translated from Indonesian to English. From the interview result, the teachers con- firmed that through their participation in the EDP, they could 41 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 ning is essential in the writing process as it helps the writers to establish paragraph unity that will give the readers introducto- ry idea about the main topic of the para- graph (Cumming, 2006). As the findings found that the students did not do any planning, their writings will potentially lack paragraph unity. Drafting is the pro- cess of paragraph writing when the writers write down their ideas on paper focusing on the content, and not mechanism (Hus- sen, 2015). All students did drafting in their paragraph writing process. Cumming (2006) suggested that students should add further ideas while making draft. More- over, Cumming also pointed out that revis- ing, as the next step, is considered the heart of writing process, the means by which ideas emerge and evolve, and meanings are clarified. Two students did revising in writ- ing paragraphs. Revising is very important, especially to improve the idea develop- ment in paragraph writing. Mustaque (2014) stated that it is often found that students may have good knowledge about vocabulary and grammatical aspects (e.g. using the right tenses, collocation, and prepositions) but face problems in writing coherently and re-structuring ideas after evaluating them. The last finding was that the students did editing in developing the paragraph. The purpose of editing process is to check whether the paragraphs already contain good grammar, sentence structure, etc. The next findings are related to the prob- lems experienced by the students in writing the paragraph. From the data taken from the interview, the researcher found that there were some problems occurred. English Words And Word Choice Students were unable to express some ideas because they did not know the equiv- alent words in English. Moreover, they were difficult to find appropriate words to express their idea. They stated that it was because of limited vocabulary. “It is always hard for me to express my idea in English. I need to always look up a dictionary to find correct words” (P1.5). “My supervisor often gives me feedback about correct word choice in my writing” (P2.3). “It is easier to write in Bahasa Indonesia than English. In writing a paragraph I have difficulties to express ideas in English” (P5.3). The finding is in line with other studies (Afrin, 2016; Haider, 2012; Rabab’ah, 2003) which found that the students are unable to express the ideas appropriately in their writings due to their limited vocabulary. They cannot find appropriate and neces- sary vocabulary to express the ideas. Fareed, Ashraf, and Bilal (2016) also stated that sufficient vocabulary is essential and enable learners to produce language, particularly in writing. In EFL context, vocabulary is essential, especially in academic writing as the students need to express their ideas not in their native language. Grammar Specifically, the problems related to grammar were about sentence structure (syntax), tenses, morphology, and punctua- tion. Four students mentioned problems of incorrect grammar, poor sentence struc- ture, and also a lot of punctuation mistakes. They occurred because of poor grammar knowledge. Most of them stated that they did not have good grammar knowledge. 42 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 “Grammar is so complicated. I make a lot of mistakes” (P3.3). “From the feedback that I get I know that I have problem with tense and punctuation” (P4.3). “Beside vocabulary, grammar is my other weakness. No wonder if I still have prob- lems related to grammar” (P1.6). “My supervisor said that I must improve my grammar knowledge as there are many grammatical mistakes in my undergradu- ate thesis during the supervision”(P5.4). Grammar still becomes one of the main problems in academic writing (Connell, 2000; Thananart, 2000). Ideas will not be effectively conveyed through writing if it contains a lot of grammatical mistakes. The finding is in line with the study by Fareed, Ashraf, and Bilal(2016) which found that grammar is one of the main problems in writing. They suggested that the writers should equip themselves good grammar knowledge to write academic texts. Development Of The Main Idea It was very often for the students that they were stuck in writing if they had no idea on how to develop the paragraph. Three students uncovered that they found it difficult to develop the main idea. The cause was they did not read much. In addi- tion, they said that they were not creative enough to develop the idea. “The hardest part in writing a paragraph was to start writing. I started writing my first paragraph after I thought for a long time” (P2.6). “Writing needs creativity and critical think- ing which I am not really good at” (P4.5). “I made many pauses in writing the para- graph. I was stuck on the development of the idea” (P3.4). Fareed, Ashraf, and Bilal (2016) suggest- ed that brainstorming and planning help writers to develop and manage the ideas for the paragraph. In pre-writing, brain- storming is beneficial to stimulate writers to list any ideas in their mind. Planning, then, is used by the writers to select and manage the ideas to be developed into a paragraph. Coherence And Cohesiveness Students knew that coherence and cohe- siveness were important in a paragraph. However, three students stated that coher- ence and cohesiveness were still difficult to achieve. It was probably because they did not do brainstorming and planning. They directly did drafting. It made them difficult to control the supporting sentences and they focused only in supporting the main ideas. Moreover, it also made the connec- tion among paragraphs insufficient. “To make a good paragraph is not easy. My supervisor suggested me to check whether each sentence is correlated and each paragraph has correlation. That is my weakness” (P2.5). “It is relatively new for me that I need to make paragraph cohesive and coherent beside the grammar”(P3.5). “It is somehow hard for me to make good sentences which contribute to the main idea” (P5.7). 43 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.2 No. 2, July 2016 Pineteh’s (2013) study also found that coherence and cohesion are problems in academic writing. Too often for the writers to have more than one main idea in a para- graph or the paragraph is not sufficiently developed through its supporting details. Coherence is important to bind the main idea to its supporting details (Ahmed, 2010). Fareed, Ashraf, and Bilal (2016) sug- gested that writers can improve the coher- ence and cohesiveness through planning and systematic paragraph. Moreover, the writers should make use cohesive devices to connect the paragraphs. Furthermore, Bakalis (2003) suggested that writers should consider the connection among paragraph in a text to get the paragraph cohesion. Ineffective Sentence Two students stated a problem about ineffective sentence. Ineffective sentence made one paragraph have more than one main idea. Moreover, it also made the students write too many irrelevant sentenc- es in a paragraph. It was because they directly wrote what they were thinking while writing the sentences. They did not plan and have systematic steps or outline of the sentences within a paragraph. “As I directly wrote my paragraph in my laptop, too often I forget to ensure that the sentences I wrote were effective” (P1.7) “I wrote too many things. Some of them were useless because they were not rele- vant” (P5.6). Ineffective sentences result in redundan- cy. Boardman and Frydenberg (2002) sug- gested that the sentences should be effec- tive to achieve coherence. The sentences should not be too many but should be suffi- cient to support the main idea. Citation As it was an academic writing, citation was one of features in the paragraph writ- ing. Two students found it difficult to do proper citation from the theories. It was because they did not really know about how to do the right citation. Furthermore, they did not know well about the current academic writing format i.e. American Psy- chology Association(APA)format. “APA is the format of my undergraduate thesis. It is another thing that we should learn and I am not good at it” (P.4.4). “I thought I only need to write my under- graduate thesis like another paper. In fact I should consider the format ,i.e. APA, and it is difficult” (P5.5). Al-Khasawneh (2010) suggested that students can learn how to make academic writing through courses which equip them with the ability to do proper writing and also citation. It can be done by joining pre-requisite class such as educational research which prepare them to conduct research and make academic writing. Based on the findings, the problems faced by students in writing paragraphs are related to words, word choice, grammar, development of main idea, coherence, cohesiveness, effective sentence, and cita- tion. The problems of word and word choice, grammar, and the development of main idea are similar to Hailemariam’s study (2011) as it found that some of L2 writers’ problems in writing were vocabu- lary selections, generating idea, and appro 44 Journal of Foreign Language Teaching & Learning Vol.1 No. 2, July 2016 priate grammar usage. It is also in line with other studies (Abdulkareem, 2013; Ahmed, 2010) which found that vocabulary and idea development are problems in academ- ic writing. The other problems were prob- lems related to coherence, cohesiveness, and effective sentence. Boardman and Frydenberg (2002) stated that coherence and cohesiveness are useful to bind the supporting sentences to explain the main ideas as well as to connect one paragraph to other paragraphs. One of the ways to achieve them is by using effective sentences containing conjunctions, cohesive devices and transitional markers. The last problem was related to citation. Citation is very important in academic writing as it sup- ports findings or statements with theories. When the students faced problem related to citation, it was caused by lack of knowl- edge to make a good citation. CONCLUSION The current research is limited to identi- fy how the students develop paragraphs and what difficulties experienced by the students in writing paragraph of academic text. The findings showed that in develop- ing paragraphs, the students did brain- storming, drafting, revising, and edit- ing.Among all four steps done by the students in developing paragraph, drafting and editing were the most frequent steps done by the students as all of them directly wrote the paragraph and edited the content of the paragraph whereas two of them included brainstorming and revising. 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