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FORMALISTIC READING ON TENSION AND THEME IN TWO POEMS: 
CHARLES TOMLINSON’S WINTER ENCOUNTERS AND ROBERT FROST’S 

THE VALLEY’S SINGING DAY 
Henrikus Joko Yulianto – Semarang State University 

 
Abstract 

 
A poetic text has its own aesthetic values through its form and language. This statement was 
proposed by a movement called Formalism and later was known as New Criticism. The movement 
assumed that the aesthetic qualities of a poem are revealed in its poetic devices such as imagery, 
meter, symbol, and the like. New Critics assumed that an interpretation of a poetic text in regard to 
the author or the historical background will bring about what they called as the Intentional and 
Affective Fallacies. Otherwise, a poetic text will convey a certain meaning through its own devices. 
New Critics assume that language devices of poetic works embody some paradoxes or discordant 
and contrary qualities. Not only focusing on ambiguity, irony, and paradox, the New Critics also find 
out a tension or a reconciliation of the conflicts through a close reading on the poetic devices of the 
works themselves. Meanwhile, a poetic work will also suggest a certain central idea or theme. In 
this case, a close reading of the two poems is meant to find similarities and differences of the 
tension and theme in both poems.  

 
Key Words:  Formalism, New Criticism, Tension, Ambiguity, Irony, Paradox, the Intentional and 

Affective Fallacies 

 
Introduction 

A literary movement that flourished in a 

certain period will set forth a particular 

perspective to literary genres such as Fiction 

but especially to poetic works. Romanticism 

as one remarkable movement in English 

Literature was especially famous for its poetic 

works of great poets such as William 

Wordsworth, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, John 

Keats, and many others. Wordsworth in his 

manifesto “Lyrical Ballads” written together 

with Coleridge, stated that “poetry was a 

spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings” or 

“emotions recollected in tranquility” (Tilak 

1999:15). As literary movement developed 

and moved forward in the following periods, 

the views on poetry also changed. Modernism 

as the movement that came after Victorian 

Period was also prominent in its views on 

poetry. One of the famous modern poets, T.S. 

Eliot in his writing Tradition and Individual 

Talent, proposed some arguments that were 

contrary to Wordsworth‟s views. Eliot argued 

that poetry was not a spontaneous overflow of 

powerful feelings recollected in tranquility, but 

it was “an escape from emotion and 

personality” (Baym & Gottesman, 1986: 

1827). These two different views on poetry 

show a tension between the two perspectives 

on the aesthetic values of poetry. 

In accordance with Wordsworth‟s notion 

on poetry, another British Romantic poet, 



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Samuel Taylor Coleridge stated that “poetry 

brings „the whole soul of man‟ into activity” 

(Daiches 1982:105). In his manifesto, 

Biographia Literaria, Coleridge discussed 

tension in poetry. As a work of literature, 

poetry is different from other works such as 

works of science in which the former proposes 

its object more on pleasure rather than truth 

and bases more on imagination rather than on 

fancy (Raine 1985:190-191, 195). Coleridge 

stated that a poet has tasks to reconcile the 

discordant qualities such as the general and 

the concrete, the idea and the image, the 

individual and the representative, and the like 

(Daiches 1982:104).  

Literature Review  

Reading and appreciating a literary work can 

start at the literary text itself. One method of 

approaching a work will also correspond with 

the emergence of the literary movements or 

schools of thought especially when the 

experts or say, literary critics agree on 

adopting the literary approach as a method or 

an approach to the work. The way or method 

that a critic uses in approaching and analyzing 

a literary work is called „criticism‟. Bressler 

defines „criticism‟ as “a disciplined activity that 

attempts to describe, study, analyze, justify, 

interpret, and evaluate a work of art” (1999:4). 

He further elucidated that literary critics may 

carry out their activities in two ways – 

theoretical criticism that deals with theories, 

principles, and tenets of the nature and value 

of art and practical criticism or applied 

criticism that adopts the theories and tenets of 

theoretical criticism to a particular work (1999: 

5). With these two criticisms, a critic can 

appreciate, analyze, and evaluate a literary 

work. 

A group of critics called new critics began 

to assert their criticism toward the previous 

literary views on literary works especially 

those which were propounded by 

Romanticism and Victorianism. The different 

views on appreciating poetry will influence the 

ways to interpret the meaning of poetry in 

general. Some literary approaches have 

appreciated a poetic text as an artifact that 

reflects the poet‟s personality or a historical 

background in which the poem was written. 

The approaches also assumed that the poetic 

work embodies its own aesthetic qualities that 

one can not relate to other aspects outside the 

work. One of the movements and also 

criticisms focusing on the aesthetic intrinsic 

aspects of a poetic work is Formalism and 

later known as New Criticism.  

The word „formalism‟ was derived from 

„form‟ that refers to the shape and texture of a 

poetic text itself. Kennedy and Gioia call „form‟ 

as “the design of a thing as a whole the 



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configuration of all its parts” (2002:213). 

Guerin & Labor (1999:74) said that form has 

meant more than sentence patterns. It 

includes the relationship of stanzas in a poem, 

or the interplay of an octave and a sestet in a 

sonnet. Meanwhile, Holman & Harmon 

(1992:202) stated that „form‟ refers to “the 

organization of the elementary parts of a work 

of art in relation to its total effect.” They 

categorize „form‟ into some kinds, such as 

„verse form‟ that means the organization of 

rhythmic units; stanza form that refers to the 

organization of lines in groups (1992:202). 

Formalism as a literary movement and 

one approach or criticism is defined as “a 

criticism that emphasizes the form of the 

artwork, with „form‟ variously construed as 

generic form, type, verbal form, grammatical 

and syntactical form, rhetorical form or verse 

form” (Holman & Harmon, 1992 : 203). The 

movement began as a school in Russia 

around 1920 by members such as Viktor 

šklovskij, Roman Jakobson, Vladimir Propp, 

Boris Tomaševskij, and so on (1992:203). 

New Criticism was a literary movement that 

sustained the literary practices of Russian 

Formalism and flourished in America in the 

1930s by the critics such as John Crowe 

Ransom, Allen Tate, R.P. Blackmur, Robert 

Penn Warren, and Cleanth Brooks. The 

movement also prospered in England led by 

critics such as T.S. Eliot, I.A. Richards, and 

William Empson (1992:316-317). Holman & 

Harmon defined the term „New Criticism‟ as 

“the whole body of criticism that concentrates 

on the work of art as an object in itself; 

subjects the work to close analysis” 

(1992:317).  

They further said that the movement was 

primarily a protest against certain 

conventional and traditional ways of viewing 

life and art. The New Critics were formerly 

protesting against the New Humanism and 

they insisted that the morality and value of a 

work are present in intrinsic qualities of the 

work. Their concern was with image, symbol, 

and meaning (1992:317). Leitch (1988:26) 

quoted Cleanth Brooks‟ statement on 

characteristics of the New Criticism: 

First, New Criticism separates literary 
criticism from the study of sources, social 
backgrounds, history of ideas, politics, 
and social effects, seeking both to purify 
poetic criticism from such “extrinsic” 
concerns and to focus attention squarely 
on the “literary object” itself. Second, New 
Criticism explores the structure of a work, 
not the minds of authors or the reactions 
of readers. Third, New Criticism 
champions an “organic” theory of literature 
rather than a dualistic conception of form. 
 

Brooks gave some other characteristics of 

New Criticism as follows:  

FIRST, New Criticism separates literary 
criticism from the study of sources or 
extrinsic concerns such as social 



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backgrounds, history of ideas, etc. 
SECOND, New Criticism explores the 
structure of a work, not the minds of 
authors or the reactions of readers. THIRD, 
New Criticism focuses on the words of the 
text in relation to the full context of the 
work: each word contributes to a unique 
context and derives its precise meaning 
from its place in the poetic context. 
FOURTH, New Criticism practices close 
reading of individual works, 
examining/taking account of nuances of 
words, rhetorical figures, and shades of 
meaning of a work. FIFTH, New Criticism 
distinguished literature from both religion 
and morality because many of its 
adherents have definite religious views 
and seek no substitute for religion, 
morality, or literature (Leitch, 1988:26-27). 
 

By applying „close reading‟ approach in a 

poetic analysis, one can find the diverse 

nuances of a poetic text as revealed in its 

elements. Tension as one aspect that New 

Critics focus on, means the resolution of 

opposites and especially concerns with its 

components, irony and paradox (Guerin & 

Labor 1999:90). The component is also called 

„ambiguity‟ (Bressler 1999:44). The poem‟s 

meaning, therefore, is derived from the 

oscillating tensions and conflicts that come to 

the surface through poetic diction. The 

meaning of a poem does not reside in what 

the poet wants to say by his poem because 

this assumption will bring what New Critics call 

„the Intentional Fallacy‟. In the same manner, 

the meaning is not found in the effects of the 

poem to the readers because this assumption 

will bring „the Affective Fallacy.‟ The meaning 

of a poem is found in the elements of the 

poem (Belsey 1990:16-18). 

This brief paper deals with a formalistic 

reading on two modern poems: Charles 

Tomlinson‟s Winter Encounters (WE) and 

Robert Frost‟s The Valley’s Singing Day 

(VSD). The first one is a modern British poet 

while the second one is a modern American 

poet. The two poems tell about seasons. The 

former describes some scenes in winter while 

the latter recounts a scene in the past of a 

rainy day. In Tomlinson‟s poem, the images 

reveal pairing elements such as house and 

hollow; village and valley-side; roof and cloud, 

and some others. Meanwhile, in Frost‟s poem, 

one can find ambiguity in denotative and 

connotative meaning of the imageries such as 

valley‟s singing day and some others related 

to the title.  

Discussion 

Before discussing the tension and theme of 

the two works, let‟s read the poems: 

WINTER ENCOUNTER 
by Charles Tomlinson 
 
House and hollow; village and valley-side: 



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   The ceaseless pairings; the interchange 
In which the properties are constant 
   Resumes its winter starkness. The hedges‟ barbs 
Are bared. Lengthened shadows 
   Intersecting, the fields, seen parceled smaller 
As if by hedgerow within hedgerow. Meshed 
   Into neighborhood by such shifting ties, 
The house reposes, squarely upon its acre 
  Yet with softened angles, the responsive stone 
Changeful beneath the changing light: 
  There is a riding-forth, a voyage impending  
In this ruffled air, where all moves 
  Towards encounter. Inanimate or human, 
The distinction fails in these brisk exchanges –  
  Say, merely that the roof greets the cloud, 
Or by the wall, sheltering its knot of talkers,  
  Encounter enacts itself in the conversation 
On customary subjects, where the mind 
  May lean at ease, weighing the prospect  
Of another‟s presence. Rain 
  And the probability of rain, tares 
And their progress through a field of wheat – 
  These, though of moment in themselves, 
Serve rather to articulate the sense 
  That having met, one meets with more 
Than the words can witness. One feels behind 
  Into the intensity that bodies through them 
Calmness within the wind, the warmth in cold. 
 

 
The Valley‟s Singing Day 
by Robert Frost 
 
The sound of the closing outside door was all. 
You made no sound in the grass with your footfall, 
As far as you went from the door, which was not far; 
But you had awakened under the morning star 
The first-song bird that awakened all the rest 
He could have slept but a moment move at best 
Already determined dawn began to lay 
In place across a cloud the slender ray 
For prying beneath and forcing the lids of sight, 
And loosing the pent-up music of over-night. 
But dawn was not to begin their „pearly-pearly‟ 
(By which they mean the rain is pearls so early, 
Before it changes to diamonds in the sun), 



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Neither was song that day to be self-begun. 
You had begun it, and if there needed proof – 
I was asleep still under the dripping roof, 
My window curtain hung over to sill to wet; 
But I should awake to confirm your story yet; 
I should be willing to say and help you say 
That once you had opened the valley‟s singing day. 

 
Firstly, let‟s talk about ambiguity. The term 

„ambiguity‟ is defined as “the state of having 

more than one meaning, with resultant 

uncertainty as to the intended significance of 

the statement” (Holman & Harmon, 1992:14). 

Meanwhile, the term „tension‟ was formerly 

introduced by Allen Tate. This latter word 

means “the integral unity that results from the 

successful resolution of the conflicts of 

abstraction and concreteness, of general and 

particular, of denotation and connotation” 

(1992:473). Other components, irony and 

paradox are defined as follows – “irony is a 

broad term referring to the recognition of a 

reality different from appearance” (Holman & 

Harmon, 1992:254). Meanwhile, Culler 

asserted a corresponding notion that irony 

would depend on the referentiality of the text. 

(1985:156). He classified irony into some 

types such as – situational or dramatic irony 

and verbal irony. The former presupposes two 

orders in contrast with one another and this 

type is usually found in fictional or dramatic 

works; whereas, the latter means “a set of 

expectations which enable the reader to 

sense the incongruity of an apparent level of 

vraisemblance at which the literal meaning of 

a sentence could be interpreted and to 

construct an alternative ironic reading which 

accords with the vraisemblance which he is in 

the process of constructing for the text 

(1985:154-155). The term vraisemblance 

means the mask which conceals the text‟s 

own laws and also its relation to other texts 

(1985:139). „Paradox‟ is another component 

of tension. Brooks once stated that „the 

language of poetry is the language of 

paradox‟ (Culler 1985:162). Holman & 

Harmon define „paradox‟ as “a statement that 

although seemingly contradictory or absurd 

may actually be well founded or true” 

(1992:342). Brooks assumed that a poetic 

discourse is ambiguous and ironical especially 

in its modes of qualification. The following 

discussion focuses on a comparison and 

contrast of the aspects in the two poems. 

 

Tension in Winter Encounters and the 

Valley’s Singing Day 

Winter Encounters (WE) and The Valley’s 

Singing Day (VSD) both describe natural 

sceneries in a different season. The former 



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presents an ordering of two objects while the 

latter depicts one single object, that must be 

rain the poet calls „singing day‟. Both poems 

embody ambiguity including irony and 

paradox in their own form and language. The 

tension would be a reconciliation of the 

discordant qualities of the poetic devices. In a 

word, the ambiguity and tension of the two 

poems may be compared and contrasted in 

view of their devices such as form, imagery 

(denotation and connotation), and figures of 

speech. 

WE has a unique form, consisting of 29 

lines written in a free verse and the lines are 

arranged in a one-to-one indented line 

showing the conflict of the qualities. The form 

of the poem represents „encounters‟ or 

meeting of some objects as the title says. 

Meanwhile, VSD has 20 lines, written in a 

pastoral form. WE begins with a descriptive 

ordering of two objects – “house and hollow; 

village and valley-side; the ceaseless 

pairings” (lines 1-2); whereas, VSD begins its 

lines with a rather narrative mode, which tells 

about the sound of rain – “the sound of the 

closing outside door was all” (line 1). The 

similarity of the two poems is that both are not 

written in a certain stanzaic pattern. In terms 

of meter, WE has alternating metrical pattern 

between trochaic and iambic pentameter: 

 
House and hollow; village and valley-side: 
The ceaseless pairings; the interchange  

 

while in VSD, the meter has iambic and anapestic pentameter patterns, as in lines 1 – 2: 

The sound of the closing outside door was all 
You made no sound in the grass with your footfall 

 

The metrical patterns of the two poems show 

a paradox – discordant qualities between 

iambic – trochaic; and anapestic – 

iambic/trochaic. The rhyme scheme of WE 

does not present a regular rhythmic sound; 

whereas, VSD does have a rhythmic sound, 

patterned in a certain rhyme scheme – a a, b 

b, c c, d d, e e, etc. The different rhyme 

scheme in WE is appropriate to the 

atmosphere of the poem in which various 

objects are described in encounters with each 

other in a linear and somewhat 

straightforward movement so that it does not 

need any harmonious sounds of its rhyme 

scheme. Besides, all the events of the 

encounters are described in the present. 

Otherwise, in VSD, the rhyme scheme has the 

similar ending sound because the poem is a 

recount of past events so that the lines of the 

poem are more harmoniously rhyme schemed 



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than the lines of WE. Moreover, VSD tells 

about „singing day‟ in which the imageries 

mostly appeal to auditory sense so that the 

lines in the poem should produce harmonious 

sound effects especially in its ending lines.  

In terms of form and meter, the two 

poems show some similarities and 

differences. However, the conflicting elements 

of the two poems have been reconciled in 

view of the subjects the poems deal with. WE 

tells about encounters in winter in which 

things of different qualities meet in such a 

mutually shifting relation – “meshed into 

neighborhood by such shifting ties” (lines 7-8); 

therefore, the form and meter of the poem 

should figure out the encounter of discordant 

qualities of objects. Likewise, VSD recounts a 

sense of gratitude of a rainy season that took 

place „three days ago‟. The poem is like a 

chant that thanks for the coming of the rainy 

season so that the form and meter of the 

poem has to express a melodious and chant-

like song. 

Ambiguity, irony, and paradox also 

appear in imageries of the two poems. These 

can be apprehended especially in the conflict 

between denotative and connotative meaning 

of the imageries. In view of denotative 

meaning, WE presents imageries that appeal 

to visual sense such as „house‟ and „hollow‟, 

„village‟ and „valley-side‟; whereas, VSD 

expounds imageries that appeal to auditory 

sense such as „sound‟, „footfall‟, „valley‟s 

singing day‟ as well as to visual and tactile 

sense, as in „dripping roof‟, „dawn‟, „pearly-

pearly‟, „diamonds‟. The titles of the two 

poems suggest ambiguity and paradox. The 

encounters in WE can mean encounters 

among people but the preliminary lines of the 

poem present imageries of inanimate objects, 

though in the following lines, human is also 

included, such as „inanimate and human‟ and 

„a knot of talkers‟. In the same way, the 

valley‟s singing day in VSD is also ambiguous 

since the title can mean a day for singing 

songs in the valley. By reading the lines, one 

can find out one possible argument that the 

singing day here refers to the coming of a 

rainy season. Another ambiguity of the poem 

is shown in the first line that says – “the sound 

of the closing outside door was all” but then 

the second line says otherwise – “you made 

no sound in the grass with your footfall.” It 

means that there is an incongruity between 

the former presence of sound and the latter 

absence of sound. The word „footfall‟ itself 

means „the sound of a footstep‟ but line 2 

distorts the presence of the sound by saying 

„making no sound with footfall‟. The line 

actually means that the poet heard the 

footstep in the grass but probably the sound 

was soft and almost inaudible as if there was 



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no sound. The third and fourth lines also show 

a paradox between the lines „as far as you 

went from the door‟ that means „far‟ and 

„which was not far‟ that means „near‟. Again 

there is an incongruity between what is meant 

by the images „far and near‟.  

In the same manner, imageries in WE 

do not only suggest a literal or denotative 

meaning as the images say. The words 

„house‟ and „hollow‟; „village‟ and „valley-side‟ 

do not only refer to the physical house and 

hollow but they represent people, man and 

woman.  The oscillation between the two 

imageries is that „house‟ is a manufactured 

object while „hollow‟ is a natural one. 

Afterwards, the poem says that all, either 

animals or human has moved towards 

encounters (lines 13-14). However, the 

conflict of the two objects has come to a 

reconciliation that is shown by the vanishing 

discordance between the two  –  

The distinction fails in these brisk exchanges – 
  Say, merely, that the roof greets the cloud 
Or by the wall, sheltering its knot of talkers 
  Encounter enacts itself in the conversation (lines 15-18) 

 

The reconciliation of the conflict is reached in the encounter of the two qualities – the harmony of 

different aspects: 

  These, though of moment in themselves, 
Serve rather to articulate the sense 
  That having met, one meets with more 
Than the words can witness. One feels behind 
   Into the intensity that bodies through them  
  Calmness within the wind, the warmth in cold. 

 
An imagery in line 12, „a riding-forth, a voyage 

that is impending in the ruffled air‟ appeals to 

sense of movement (kinesthetic). The image 

is like a motion that drives all things to move 

towards encounter (line 14). The energy, 

therefore, is a tension that reconciles the 

discordant qualities in a more agreeable and 

congenial encounter – “Encounter enacts 

itself in the conversation on customary 

subjects” (lines 18-19). 

Another imagery in WE that is also found 

in VSD is „rain‟ (lines 21-22). This image in 

both poems is something that people in the 

two poems is waiting for. In WE, „rain‟ is 

considered as a kind of guest that his coming 

is expected; whereas, „rain‟ in VSD becomes

the main object that people are describing and 

also appreciating. The image „rain‟ appeals to 

visual as well as tactile and kinesthetic 

senses. In WE, „rain‟ has been presented in 



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contrary to another image, „tares‟ (line 22) that 

means „weed resembling corn‟. Just as „rain‟ 

that keeps moving, the „tares‟ are also 

described to be in progress through a field of 

wheat (lines 23-24). In VSD, „rain‟ comes as 

the noisy sound outside the house. Rain is 

compared to pearls and diamonds (lines 11 & 

13). The pearls suggest „soft rain‟ while the 

diamonds represent „hard rain‟. If the tension 

in WE is reached by the reconciliation of the 

two discordant objects into one, the tension in 

VSD appears in the narrator‟s acceptance of 

the falling rain as the beginning of a rainy 

season – 

  

I should be willing to say and help you say 
That once you had opened the valley‟s singing day (lines 19-20) 

 

In summary, the imageries in the two 

poems reveal irony and paradox. The paradox 

appears in the conflict between denotative 

and connotative meaning. However, the 

conflicts are reconciled in the tension between 

the two aspects. WE reaches the 

reconciliation in the incorporation of one 

quality into another; whereas, VSD proposes 

an acceptance of the beginning of a rainy 

season. It means that the way of reconciling 

the discordant qualities of imageries of the 

two poems is different from each other. 

Nevertheless, the result of the reconciliation is 

similar in which the two poems resolve the 

conflict with some encounters.  

In regard to figures of speech, both 

poems use metaphor and personification. 

Through these figures of speech, ambiguity, 

irony, and paradox are also revealed. In WE, 

metaphors appear in the pairing – „house‟ & 

„hollow‟; „village‟ & „valley-side‟, „the ceaseless 

pairings‟. The next images are „hedges barbs‟; 

„lengthened shadows‟‟ „a riding-forth‟, „ruffled 

air‟; „knot of talkers‟; „customary subjects‟; „a 

field of wheat‟. The ambiguity and paradox of 

these metaphors relate to denotative and 

connotative meaning. Metaphor is a figure of 

speech that compares one thing to another 

thing. In this case, the imageries are 

metaphorical phrases that have connotative 

meaning and they refer to other things that the 

words may suggest. Thus, „house‟ and 

„hollow‟ may refer to man and woman; 

„hedges barbs‟ are metaphors that mean 

discordant qualities; „ruffled air‟ means snowy 

weather; „knot of talkers‟ means a group of 

people; etc. In VSD, a metaphorical 

expression appears firstly in the title, „the 

Valley‟s Singing Day‟ that refers to a rainy 

season in the valley. 

The following imageries also figure out 

metaphorical expressions – „sound‟ that refers 



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to the rain; „door‟ referring to „house‟ 

(synecdoche); „morning star‟ is the sun; „the 

slender ray‟ is a „dim sunlight‟; „the lids of 

sight‟ refers to „fog‟; „pent-up music of 

overnight‟ refers to „all-night rain‟; the rain is 

compared to pearls and diamonds; „dripping 

roof‟ means „a leaking roof‟. The conflict 

appears on the one hand in the narrator‟s 

complaint about the rain that has made his 

window curtain soaked wet because his roof 

was dripping, but on the other hand, he has to 

wake up and proclaim his gratitude for the 

rainy season. Just as in WE, ambiguity and 

paradox appear in the conflict between 

denotative and connotative meaning of the 

imageries. 

The second figure of speech, 

personification appears in some lines in both 

poems. This figure of speech gives human 

attributes to inanimate objects. In WE, the 

lines such as „the house reposes‟ (line 9) uses 

personification. The verb „repose‟ is used for 

people. The verb means „to lay to rest‟. 

Another line, „the roof greets the cloud‟ (line 

16), the verb „greet‟ is also used for people. 

Meanwhile, in VSD, most of the lines use 

personification in which the verbs used for 

people are addressed for inanimate object, 

the rain – 

You made no sound in the grass with your footfall (line 2) 
As far as you went from the door, (line 3) 
But you had awakened (line 4) 
That once you had opened (line 20) 

 
Metaphor and personification in the two 

poems create ambiguity and paradox between 

the denotative and connotative meaning. 

However, one can decipher the meaning of 

the figures of speech to achieve the 

reconciliation of the ambiguity by finding out 

the relation between the words as denotation 

and their possible nuances in figurative 

expressions.  

Theme in Winter Encounters and the 

Valley’s Singing Day 

Before discussing the theme of the two 

poems, let‟s firstly find out what the term 

„theme‟ means. Holman & Harmon define 

„theme‟ as a central idea. They further state 

that in literary works such as poetry, fiction, 

and drama – theme is “the abstract concept 

that is made concrete through representation 

in person, action, and image” (1992:475). 

Looking back at the previous discussion 

on the intrinsic elements of the two poems, 

the writer made a statement on the theme of 

the two poems. One of the possible central 

ideas of WE is “the need for everyone to live 

in a good relation with his fellows and 

surroundings regardless of any difference in 



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social background and other aspects.” 

Another possible corresponding statement is 

that “there is no other meaningful thing in life 

but being with others.” The statement can be 

deciphered in the elements such as form, 

imagery, and figures of speech. This 

statement is already suggested by the title of 

the poem „winter encounters‟ that means the 

meeting of one with others and also with their 

surroundings. In the following lines, the idea 

on the meaning of the encounter is also 

asserted – 

  
There is a riding-forth, a voyage impending  
In this ruffled air, where all moves 
  Towards encounter. Inanimate or human 
The distinction fails in these brisk exchanges – 
  Say, merely, that the roof greets the cloud 
Or by the wall, sheltering its knot of talkers 
  Encounter enacts itself in the conversation 
On customary subjects, (lines 12-19) 

 
The image „riding-forth‟ means a kind of 

motion that moves either human or inanimate 

beings to encounter with one another. The 

image „ruffled air‟ as a metaphor refers to 

„snowy weather‟. In the same manner, the 

image signifies a busy or hectic atmosphere, 

the setting where human and inanimate 

beings have encountered. Thus, the 

encounter is like a reconciliation of the 

discordant qualities in congenial and 

neighborly terms, as stated in the following 

lines – 

  

   Encounter enacts itself in the conversation 
On customary subjects, where the mind 
   May lean at ease, weighing the prospect  
Of another‟s presence, rain (lines 18-21) 

 
The last line of the quotation above shows the 

highest point of tension where the encounter 

of discordant aspects has brought forth 

reconciliation and an expectation of some 

prosperity.  

The last lines of the poem assert the idea on 

the need for encountering in favor of 

reconciliation of the different qualities – 

  That having met, one meets with more 
Them the words can witness. One feels behind  
  Into the intensity that bodies through them 
Calmness within the wind, the warmth in cold (lines 26 – 29). 



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On the contrary, the theme of VSD is 

somewhat different from the one in WE. 

Though both poems tell about an experience 

in some seasons, the imageries of the two are 

somewhat different. In WE, the idea on the 

meaning of man‟s recollection with his 

surroundings is expressed through the 

encounter of objects of different qualities. In 

VSD, the similar idea is expressed in the 

narrator‟s appreciation of the coming of the 

rainy season. Thus, one possible statement of 

the latter poem‟s theme is “one should nourish 

an awareness of carrying out his duty while 

being persevering and enthusiastic about 

seizing delightful moments in his life.”  The 

metaphor „valley‟s singing day‟ or „a rainy day‟ 

means a blessing or success that everybody 

wishes to achieve.  

In some ways, the idea is also suggested 

in WE where people also expect the coming 

of rain – “weighing the prospect of another‟s 

presence. Rain and the probability of rain, 

tares” (lines 20-22). In VSD, the image „rain‟ is 

described as pearls in the beginning of a day 

(dawn or daybreak/line 11) and as diamonds 

in the afternoon (line 13). The „rain‟ is a 

metaphor of „singing day‟ and the image 

refers to moments of delight and joy that 

people wish. The idea on „perseverance‟ and 

„awareness of one‟s duty‟ is revealed in the 

lines – 

I was asleep still under the dripping roof, 
My window curtain hung over the sill to wet; 
But I still awake to confirm your story yet; 
I should be willing to say and help you say (lines 16-19). 

 
In this case, the awareness of one‟s duty 

and willingness to do oneself a favor 

correspond with his gratitude to the nature for 

showering the rain to the valley. The tension 

between disenchantment as stated in lines 

16-17 and the awareness of one‟s duty as 

expressed in lines 18-19 shows an irony and 

paradox of the poem. The reconciliation of the 

conflict is by an agreement and appreciation 

of the narrator for showing his gratitude for the 

rainy day. This reconciliation is almost similar 

to the one in WE in which the two discordant 

qualities fuse into one – „calmness in the 

wind, warmth in cold.‟ In a word, the two 

poems convey an idea about one‟s wishes for 

delightful moments in his companionship with 

his surroundings.  

Conclusion  

After reading the two poems in terms of 

formalistic approach, the writer concludes that 

tension and theme in the two poems are 

relatively similar. The two poems show 



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similarity and difference in form, imagery, and 

figure of speech. In topic, both poems tell 

about seasons. The difference is that WE 

describe a hectic encounter during winter, 

while VSD recounts a past scene of the 

coming of a rainy day. In form, they are 

similar. Both are not written in certain stanzaic 

pattern. But they are also different. WE has 29 

lines while VSD has 20 lines. The former is 

written in one-to-one indented line showing an 

encounter of one and another object and 

indicating an irony and paradox of the 

discordant qualities. The latter is written in a 

pastoral poem. In rhyme scheme, the poems 

are also different. Since WE is written in the 

present, it does not present a certain rhyme 

scheme, while VSD is in the past and is has a 

rhyme scheme. 

 In imagery, the poems are similar in 

certain ways. First, both poems use certain 

imageries such as „valley‟ and „rain‟. The 

image „rain‟ is the one object that makes a 

central idea of the two poems. One imagery in 

WE, „a riding-forth‟ seems to correspond with 

one image in VSD, „a slender ray‟. These two 

images appeal to sense of kinesthetic and 

mean a kind of flux or motion that in the 

former poem, it moves all towards encounter 

and in the latter one, it evaporates humid 

things and renews a day. Another difference 

is that WE presents imageries that appeal to 

visual and tactile senses; whereas, VSD has 

imageries that appeal to visual and auditory 

senses. In figures of speech, WE uses 

metaphors while VSD presents 

personification. The metaphors in WE 

especially those that relate to the tension and 

theme of the poem are expressed in the last 

line – “calmness within the wind, warmth in 

cold.” These metaphors embody a 

paradoxical but also a harmonious relation of 

the discordant qualities. Personification in 

VSD relate to the giving of human attributes to 

the rain, as the valley‟s singing day.  

In summary, the tension in the two poems 

is expressed in the components - ambiguity, 

irony, and paradox and they are revealed in 

the form, imagery, and figures of speech of 

the poems. In WE, the ambiguity has been 

resolved in a reconciliation of the discordant 

qualities, while in VSD the reconciliation is 

achieved by the narrator‟s joyful and grateful 

expression for the rainy day. The theme of the 

two poems can also be deciphered in these 

elements. The similarity of the possible central 

idea of the two poems is that man should 

nourish a sense of compatibility with his 

fellows and his surroundings to make his life 

worth living. In a word, the two poems share a 

great idea about the importance of socializing 

with each other regardless of any background. 

The poems assert that the need for 



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intermingling with each other is for 

maintaining a convenient and compatible 

living.  

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