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ANALYSIS OF EFL STUDENTS’ DIFFICULTIES IN WRITING  

AND COMPLETING ENGLISH THESIS 

 

Tira Nur Fitria 

Institut Teknologi Bisnis AAS, Indonesia 

correspondence: tiranurfitria@gmail.com 

https://doi.org/10.24071/llt.v25i1.3607  

received 20 August 2021; accepted 17 May 2022 

 

Abstract 

 

The objective of this research is to know the EFL students’ difficulties in writing 

and finishing their thesis. This research employs descriptive qualitative research. 

From the result analysis of a questionnaire, there are internal and external factors 

of EFL students’ difficulties in writing and finishing a thesis. In internal factors 

are 1) difficulty in choosing the title of the English title, 2) feeling bored, 

pessimistic, bored/saturated, and doubtful with their abilities, 3) feeling fears or 

worries during the proposal seminar exam or thesis examination later, 4) having 

a health problem or down, 5) students’ disability in understanding the 

systematics of writing a thesis, 6) tending to use online translation tools, 7) 

having difficulty in using English grammar, choosing the right vocabulary, 

spelling, and punctuation correctly. The students’ difficulty in writing and 

completing a thesis shows that the most difficult parts are in chapter 4 

(result/findings and discussion). While external factors are 1) having 

communication problems with supervisors, for example, lecturers are difficul t to 

contact, reply to messages for a long time, or do not reply to messages. 2) 

having problems with supervising lecturers’ writing, for example, writings 

cannot be read clearly or be understood. 3) having difficulty in finding 

references on the internet, 4) there are no complete reference sources and no free 

access to digital libraries on campus, 5) technical problems on devices such as 

laptops/computers, 6) having cost or financial problems and personal problems 

during the process of working on and completing the thesis. 7) students’ 

surrounding environment is not/less conducive. But, have a part-time job, have a 

busy life with hobbies or personal pleasures, and have a busy life in 

organizations both on and off-campus. do not influence them in working on and 

completing the thesis. 

 

Keywords: EFL student, English thesis, thesis, writing 

 

Introduction 

A thesis is a student's final project. In writing this thesis, students take it 

through field research or library studies arranged by students according to their 

field of study. This thesis is written following the guidelines of each college, 

although the preparation of this thesis is the same, there must be differences at 

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least in each college. Graduate students place a high value on the ability to write a 

strong thesis statement. Students learn how to conduct research and present their 

results as a result of participating in the process (Wang & Yang, 2012). 

Compiling a thesis is very closely related to writing, of course, writing this 

thesis must get the final result of the existing problems or phenomena, thesis 

writing also cannot necessarily only write or convey ideas and thoughts, writing 

must also be accompanied by references to writing methods and studies - studies 

that have been carried out in previous studies. There is also a thesis writing called 

a supervisor, of course, this supervisor is in charge of directing students who write 

this thesis to be appropriate and correct, because the results of writing this thesis 

will be presented and their work tested, thus the role of the supervisor in writing is 

very important. If students are having difficulty writing, the supervisor should 

explore what might lie behind this (Shaw & Lawson, 2015). 

For final year students, the thesis writing period is the most challenging 

process. To complete a thesis, students need physical, mental, and often financial 

strength. Moreover, many steps need to be passed. Starting from the determination 

of the title and topic, the proposal seminar exam, data collection, to the trial or 

also called the comprehensive exam. In the final stage, students will present their 

research results in front of the examiner lecturer. This process is often feared by 

students. The reason is that students will be questioned with various questions to 

test the validity of the research. So it is not strange that students feel trepidation 

and fear. 

English has become the major international language for research and 

publication. Many of these difficulties involve learning to use language (Paquot, 

2014). As we know, there are four skills in English such as reading, listening, 

speaking, and writing. Writing is one of the most demanding tasks that students, 

academics, and researchers face (Rowena & Sarah, 2006). One of the obligations 

for every student in taking undergraduate education is to obtain a bachelor's 

degree in writing a final report (thesis).  

A complete thesis or dissertation is a major accomplishment of sustained 

concentration (Blair, 2016). Students majoring in English, of course, must write a 

thesis in English. Writing an English thesis is a difficult task particularly to 

writers for whom English is a second language (Paltridge & Starfield, 2007). 

Writing an English thesis is a mandatory task for students majoring in English, 

both English Education, and English Literature. Writing a thesis in English is not 

easy, considering that English requires a broad vocabulary and the ability to use 

grammar properly. Developing awareness of the rhetorical and linguistic 

conventions is also needed in writing a thesis in English (Bitchener, 2009). 

Cooley & Lewkowicz (2011) state that writing a thesis is a unique experience. It 

is considerably more demanding linguistically than any writing they were 

expected to produce at the undergraduate level.  

(Bailey, 2011) states that writing good academic English is a demanding 

task. Thesis writing can be challenging for students and supervisors (Evans et al., 

2014). In this process, there are many things that students have to go through 

regarding non-academic problems as well as academics. Judging from non-

academic problems, to build confidence in writing a person's thesis must have a 

qualified self-assessment, support from family, and the writer's readiness to face 

the challenges and obstacles of writing a thesis. Building self-confidence is one of 



 

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the keys to student success in completing the final report. With a good sense of 

self-confidence, they should be ready to face the various challenges faced during 

the writing process. However, there are many reasons that need to be considered 

and very influential on student thesis writing. 

From an academic point of view, students who will write a thesis must also 

pay attention to selecting topics for research, planning realistic time, and 

understand the things related to the writing of scientific papers. Without it, 

students can't finish their studies on time. In this case, the thesis supervisor plays a 

very important role in completing the final report for college students. Not a few 

final-year students have problems with their supervisors. This shows that the 

mentor figure is very influential in determining student success complete the 

script. In other words, in addition to students' readiness, academic readiness. It 

also determines the success of students in completing the final research project. 

The obligation to write a thesis for all students of majors or programs on all 

paths Strata 1 (Bachelor) at public and private universities is an obligation. This 

provision is based on the consideration that students as prospective 

undergraduates (scientists) must be able to make scientific work as a form of 

scientific actualization somebody. This course is a compulsory subject that must 

be mastered by students with the intention that they have signs or guidelines to 

become part of the academic community. 

According to Emilia (2009), several aspects must be considered before 

conducting research, namely readiness to face challenges, building self-

confidence, and self-evaluation. This is part of the non-academic factor. While 

academic factors starting from topic selection to writing the final research report. 

Including the importance of the supervisor's role and students' understanding of 

research methods. 

Several previous studies have been conducted related to the students’ 

problems in writing final projects or theses. First, Sariyanto et al. (2015) state that 

the factor of basic knowledge of thesis, the factor of the process of consultation, 

the psychological factor, and the factor of economics. So, it can be stated that the 

lack of fundamental understanding of the thesis' major component element is the 

most significant contributor to students' problems in writing their thesis. Second, 

Swarni (2017) states that the majority of students had difficulties in five types of 

problems: writing the introduction chapter, writing the review of the literature 

chapter, writing the methodology chapter, writing the result chapter, and writing 

the conclusion chapter. Third, Tambengi (2017) states that several major factors 

that contributed to the students' difficulties in conducting thesis research, 

including difficulties in determining the topic of the thesis, insufficient knowledge 

in writing a thesis, anxiety when interacting with thesis advisors, limited access to 

interact with lecturers, limited access to the availability of books, and students' 

desire for friendship and expansion with their peers. Fourth, Yanto & Sulistiyo 

(2019) state that students encounter a variety of problems while writing their 

thesis papers. The absence of established guidance on how to write a thesis in 

English was cited as the primary reason. It was suggested by the lecturers to 

compose one. Fifth, Irwandi (2019) states that the difficulties encountered when 

writing a thesis were mostly due to internal and external variables. Within the first 

internal factor, 33 % of students reported having difficulty deciding on a thesis 

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reported having difficulty identifying appropriate theories, and 13 % reported 

having difficulty determining the methodology. The external element was cited by 

33 % of students, who said that the college's library offers a range of books that 

may assist them in writing their dissertation. In addition to the knowledge of 

students, there are external variables such as college facilities that assist students 

in writing a thesis that must be taken into consideration as well. Sixth, (Tiwari, 

2019) states that discovered that the main difficulties faced by students pursuing a 

Masters of Education (M. Ed.) in English at Tribhuvan University (T.U.) when 

writing their theses were disclosed. When preparing a thesis in English education, 

the supervisors' lack of assistance and the difficulty in choosing the right topic or 

area of study are two of the most difficult obstacles to overcome. 

Seventh, Lestari (2020) revealed that the students had difficulty drafting 

their theses. According to an organized approach, the students' problems in 

writing a thesis are linked to their English proficiency, their time management, 

their research technique, their mindset, and their writing skills, students' 

plagiarism, students' personalities, the large number of monitored students and 

advisor workload, and problems in students' motivation were all found to be the 

least difficult to deal with. As a result of their poor and restricted English ability, 

they face the greatest number of problems while writing their thesis. Both have 

risen to the top of the list of reasons why they are unable to properly build their 

writing thesis. Eighth, Rahmah (2020) states that the students tended to view 

thesis writing as a tough task. The results revealed that there were significant 

findings in that there were (47,6 %) who had problems in the component that dealt 

with structure and content. Then there were the pupils who had difficulty with 

language-related components (52,4 % of the students). The students' impression of 

a difficulty in writing thesis papers was mostly based on the language component 

rather than the structure/content component, to summarize. According to the 

results of the interview, the primary reason was cognitive difficulties. They had 

trouble putting their thoughts into words in their thesis statement. The second 

issue was linguistic difficulties. Because they lacked vocabulary and grammatical 

knowledge, they found it challenging to construct proper sentences. The third 

category included psychological difficulties. It demonstrated that students were 

concerned about making errors while writing their thesis. The last reason was a 

scarcity of material resources. There were just a few printed and online materials 

to choose from. Ninth, Puspita (2021) revealed a statistically significant 

conclusion (1) that 82 % of students, or 40 students, had problems with 

personality characteristics. There are 83 % of students, or 41 students, who have 

difficulty with sociocultural (2) issues. (3) There are 86 % of pupils, or 42 

students, who have difficulty with linguistic considerations. Based on the three 

criteria, it can be determined that the linguistic component is the source of the 

most difficult for English students. The results show that the first element is a 

person's personality. They expressed a lack of confidence in their ability to choose 

a thesis subject and write a thorough literature review. Another component is 

sociocultural variables, which are addressed in depth in the culture department of 

the university's knowledge of the structure for thesis writing and how it should be 

written. There were some difficulties in translating phrases from the source to the 

drafting of the thesis. Tenth, Fauziah et al. (2021) state that students encounter a 

wide range of problems both academically and non-academically. Approximately 



 

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81.8 % of students have problems in the academic sector, with 18.2 % 

experiencing difficulties in other areas. Academic problems are caused by 

difficulty in adapting research subjects to the present circumstances, writer's 

block, a lack of knowledge of research techniques, and a lack of familiarity with 

academic writing styles, among other things. Student problems in non-academic 

areas are mostly caused by a lack of personal preparation.  

Several previous studies above discuss the students’ problems in writing an 

English thesis at one university or higher institution. The focus is similar to this 

research, but this research chooses the different subjects of ELF students in 

various universities and higher institutions in Indonesia. The researcher will 

explain the research related to the difficulties of EFL students’ writing English 

thesis, because there may be many students in universities or higher institutions in 

Indonesia who have difficulty in writing in completing their theses. Therefore, the 

objective of this research is to know the EFL students’ difficulties in writing and 

finishing their thesis. 

 

Research Method 

This research employs descriptive qualitative research. Hennink et al. (2020) 

state that qualitative research does not seek to measure issues, extrapolate findings 

or make level statements. Instead, qualitative research is to gain a detailed 

contextualized understanding of the phenomenon studied. In this research, the 

research focuses on the phenomenon of the English major students in writing and 

finishing their thesis in the study. 

This research uses a questionnaire to collect the data. A questionnaire is a 

method of collecting data from individuals using writing (Kara, 2018). This 

questionnaire used Closed-ended questions. It is also called fixed-alternative 

questions related to the response alternatives are pre-specified by the researcher 

(Profetto-McGrath et al., 2010). The questionnaire uses an online form by using 

Google Form. The question is related to external and internal factors influencing 

the English major students in writing and finishing their thesis. The subject of this 

research involves 40 English major students in various universities and higher 

institutions in Indonesia which still doing a thesis. They are from IAIN Kediri, 

UIN Raden Mas Said Surakarta, IAIN SAS Bangka Belitung, IAIN Cirebon, 

Universitas Muhammadiyah Surakarta, IAIN Palangka Raya, IAIN Bukittinggi, 

UIN Sayyid Ali Rahmatullah Tulungagung, Universitas Warmadewa Bali, 

Universitas Samudra Aceh, Universitas Bandung, IAIN Salatiga, Universitas 

Nahdlatul Ulama, Universitas Mulawarman Samarinda, Universitas Perjuangan 

Tasikmalaya, UIN Sunan Gunung Djati Bandung, UIN KHAS Jember, 

Universitas Siliwangi Tasikmalaya, Universitas Islam Nahdlatul Ulama Jepara, 

Universitas Muhammadiyah Kendari, Universitas Borneo Tarakan, Universitas 

Negeri Semarang, UIN STS Jambi, Universitas Indonesia, IAIN 

Padangsidimpuan, Universitas Tadulako Palu, Universitas Tridinanti Palembang, 

Universitas Nusa Cendana Kupang, Universitas Muhammadiyah Surakarta, UIN 

Bengkulu, Universitas Sebelas Maret Surakarta and Universitas Islam Lamongan. 

This research uses their step analysis to analyze the data, they are reducing 

data, displaying data, and concluding descriptively (Hays & Singh, 2011). This 

reduction stage is carried out to select whether the data is relevant or not with the 

final goal. After that, the stage of presenting qualitative data can be in the form of 



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narrative text in the form of a table. Through the presentation of the data, the data 

will be organized and arranged in a relationship pattern, so that it will be easier to 

understand. At the conclusion stage, it aims to find the meaning of the data 

collected to conclude answers to existing problems. 

 

Findings and Discussion 

Findings 

The objective of this research is to know the EFL students’ difficulties in 

writing and finishing their thesis. In this research, there are several findings 

related to the research seen from the questionnaire result, as follows: 
 

Table 1. Internal Factors of Students’ Difficulties in Writing and Finishing Thesis 

No Statements Responses 

Yes No 

1.  Having difficulty in choosing the title of thesis in 
English major 

31 (77.5 %) 9 (22.5 %) 

2.  Feeling not sure (pessimistic) about the title of 
the thesis research that has been taken 

29 (72.5 %) 11 (27.5 %) 

3.  Feeling bored/saturated while working on and 
completing the thesis 

36 (90 %) 4 (10 %) 

4.  Feeling doubtful/pessimistic about the abilities 
when working on and completing a thesis 

36 (90 %) 4 (10 %) 

5.  Having fears or worries during the proposal 
seminar exam or thesis examination later 

37 (92.5 %) 3 (7.5 %) 

6.  Having a health problem or problem while 
working on and completing the thesis 

31 (77.5 %) 9 (22.5 %) 

7.  There is no support from parents or family in 
working on and completing the thesis 

34 (85 %) 6 (15 %) 

8.  There is no support from peers/classmates or 
close friends in working on and completing the 

thesis 

30 (75 %) 10 (25 %) 

9.  Do not understand the systematics of writing the 
thesis well according to the guidebook well 

23 (57.5 %) 17 (42.5 %) 

10.  Tending to write sentences or paragraphs in 
Indonesian first and then translate into English 

with a translator application when working on a 

thesis 

33 (82.5 %) 7 (17.5 %) 

11.  Having difficulty in writing sentences or 
paragraphs according to English grammar 

correctly 

37 (92.5 %) 3 (7.5 %) 

12.  Having difficulty choosing the right vocabulary 
or spelling in writing an English thesis correctly 

33 (82.5 %) 7 (17.5 %) 

13.  Having difficulty using punctuation in writing 
the thesis correctly 

27 (67.5 %) 13 (32.5 %) 

 

The table above shows that several internal factors of students’ difficulties in 

writing and finishing a thesis. The first statement, “Having difficulty in choosing 

the title of Thesis majoring in English”. There are 31 students (77.5 %) who 

state “Yes” and 9 students (22.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 77.5 % of students 

have difficulty in choosing their title of thesis majoring in English. In the 2nd 



 

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statement “Feeling not sure (pessimistic) about the title of the thesis research 

that has been taken”. There are 29 students (72.5 %) who state “Yes” and 11 

students (27.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 72.5 % of students feel are not sure 

(pessimistic) about the title of the thesis research that has been taken. In the 3 rd 

statement “Feeling bored/saturated while working on and completing the thesis”. 

There are 36 students (90 %) who state “Yes” and 4 students (10 %) states “No”. 

It shows that 90 % of students feeling bored/saturated while working on and 

completing the thesis. In the 4th statement, “Feeling doubtful/pessimistic about 

the abilities when working on and completing a thesis”. There are 36 students 

(90 %) who state “Yes” and 4 students (10 %) states “No”. It shows that 90 % of 

students feel doubtful/pessimistic about their abilities when working on and 

completing a thesis. In the 5th statement, “Having fears or worries during the 

proposal seminar exam or thesis examination later”. There are 37 students (92.5 

%) who state “Yes” and 3 students (7.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 92.5 % of 

students feel fears or worries during the proposal seminar exam or thesis 

examination later. In the 6th statement, “Having a health problem or problem 

while working on and completing the thesis”. There are 31 students (77.5 %) 

who state “Yes” and 9 students (22.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 77.5 % of 

students have a health problem or problem while working on and completing the 

thesis. 

In the 7th statement, “There is no support from parents or family in 

working on and completing the thesis”. There are 34 students (85 %) who state 

“Yes” and 6 students (15 %) states “No”. It shows that 85 % of students are 

supported by their parents or family in working on and completing the thesis. In 

the 8th statement, “There is no support from peers/classmates or close friends in 

working on and completing the thesis”. There are 30 students (75 %) who state 

“Yes” and 10 students (25 %) states “No”. It shows that 75 % of students are 

supported by peers/classmates or close friends in working on and completing the 

thesis. 

In the 9th statement, “Do not understand the systematics of writing the 

thesis well according to the guidebook well”. There are 23 students (57.5 %) 

who state “Yes” and 17 students (42.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 57.5 % of 

students do not understand the systematics of writing the thesis well according 

to the guidebook. In the 10th statement, “Do not understand the systematics of 

writing the thesis well according to the guidebook well”. There are 23 students 

(57.5 %) who state “Yes” and 17 students (42.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 

57.5 % of students. In the 10th statement, “Tending to write sentences or 

paragraphs in Indonesian first and then translate into English with a translation 

application when working on a thesis”. There are 33 students (82.5 %) who state 

“Yes” and 17 students (17.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 82.5 % of students 

tend to write sentences or paragraphs in Indonesian first and then translate into 

English with a translation application when working on a thesis. In the 11 th 

statement, “Having difficulty in writing sentences or paragraphs according to 

English grammar correctly”. There are 37 students (92.5 %) who state “Yes” 

and 3students (7.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 92.5 % of students have 

difficulty in writing sentences or paragraphs according to English grammar 

correctly. In the 12th statement, “Having difficulty choosing the right vocabulary 

or spelling in writing an English thesis correctly”. There are 33 students (82.5 



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%) who state “Yes” and 17 students (17.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 82.5 % 

of students. In the 13th statement, “Having difficulty using punctuation in 

writing the thesis correctly”. There are 26 students (67.5 %) who state “Yes” 

and 13 students (32.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 67.5 % of students have 

difficulty using punctuation in writing the thesis correctly. Related to the 

students’ difficulty in writing and completing a thesis, there are also difficult 

parts in thesis faced by students, as follow: 
 

 
Chart 1. Several Difficult Parts in Thesis Faced by Students 

 

Based on the chart above which IS taken from Google Form responses, it 

shows there are main parts in thesis writing. For example, Chapter 1 is the 

introduction or background of the study, Chapter 2 is theoretical review or 

literature review, Chapter 3 is Research method or research methodology, Chapter 

4 is Results/Findings and Discussion, Chapter 5 is a conclusion, and references or 

bibliography. The chart above shows that 40 students choose only one even more 

than one difficult part of a thesis. As we can see, there are 20 students (50 %) who 

choose “Chapter 1” and 20 students (50 %) who choose “Chapter 3”, 19 students 

(47.5 %) who choose “Chapter 2”, 24 students (60 %) who choose “Chapter 4”, 8 

students (20 %) who choose “Chapter 5”, and 5 students (12.5 %) who choose 

“References/Bibliography”. It shows that the most difficult parts are in chapter 4 

then followed by Chapter 1 and Chapter 3. While the last difficult parts are in 

Conclusion and “Reference/Bibliography”. 

 
Table 2. External Factors of Students’ Difficulties in Writing and Finishing Thesis 

No Statements Responses 

Yes No 

1.  Having communication problems with 
supervisors, for example, lecturers are difficult 

to contact, lecturers reply to messages in a long 

time or do not reply to messages 

27 (67.5 %) 13 (32.5 %) 

2.  Having problems with supervising lecturers, for 
example, lecturers' writings/scribbles on thesis 

sheets cannot or cannot be read clearly, as well 

as writings/scribbles that cannot or cannot be 

understood. 

22 (55 %) 18 (45 %) 

3.  Difficulty finding references related to thesis 
titles taken on the internet, for example, similar 

research/thesis, books, or related research 

journals 

33 (82.5 %) 7 (17.5 %) 



 

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4.  In the campus library, there is no complete 
reference sources, either books or research 

journals, or scientific works (final project or 

thesis)  

30 (75 %) 10 (25 %) 

5.  In campuss library, there is no access to digital 
libraries (digital-library)  

23 (57.5 %) 17 (42.5 %) 

6.  Having technical problems on devices such as 
laptops/computers when working on and 

completing Thesis 

30 (75 %) 10 (25 %) 

7.  Having a cost or financial problems during the 
process of working on and completing the thesis 

25 (62.5 5) 15 (37.5 %) 

8.  Having personal problems during the process of 
working on and completing the thesis 

27 (67.5 %) 13 (32.5 %) 

9.  The surrounding environment is not / less 
conducive when working on and completing the 

thesis 

21 (52.5 %) 19 (47.5 %) 

10.  Having a part-time job while working on and 
completing the thesis 

13 (32.5 5) 27 (67.5 %) 

11.  Having a busy life with hobbies or personal 
pleasures 

15 (37.5 %) 25 (62.5 %) 

12.  Having a busy life in organizations both on and 
off-campus 

6 (15 %) 34 (85 %) 

 

The table above shows that several external factors of students’ difficulties 

in writing and finishing a thesis. The 1st statement, “Having communication 

problems with supervisors, for example, lecturers are difficult to contact, 

lecturers reply to old messages in a long time or do not reply to messages”. 

There are 27 students (67.5 %) who state “Yes” and 13 students (32.5 %) states 

“No”. It shows that 67.5 % of students have communication problems with 

supervisors, for example, lecturers are difficult to contact, lecturers reply to old 

messages for a long time, or do not reply to messages. The 2nd statement, 

“Having problems with supervising lecturers, for example, lecturers' 

writings/scribbles on thesis sheets cannot or cannot be read clearly, as well as 

writings/scribbles that cannot or cannot be understood.”. There are 22 students 

(55 %) who state “Yes” and 18 students (45 %) states “No”. It shows that 55 % 

of students have problems with supervising lecturers, for example, lecturers' 

writings/scribbles on thesis sheets cannot be read clearly, as well as 

writings/scribbles that cannot or cannot be understood. 

The 3rd statement, “Difficulty finding references related to thesis titles 

taken on the internet, for example, similar research/thesis, books, or related 

research journals”. There are 33 students (82.5 %) who state “Yes” and 7 

students (17.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 82.5 % of students have difficulty in 

finding references related to thesis titles taken on the internet, for example, 

similar research/thesis, books, or related research journals.  The 4th statement, 

“In the campus library, there are no complete reference sources, either books or 

research journals, or scientific works (final project or thesis)”. There are 30 

students (75 %) who state “Yes” and 10 students (25 %) states “No”. It shows 

that 75 % of students that in their campus, there are no complete reference 

sources, either books or research journals, or scientific works (final project or 

thesis). The 5th statement, “In the campus library, there is no access to digital 



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libraries (digital-library)”. There are 235 students (57.5 %) who state “Yes” and 

17 students (42.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 57.5 % of students that in their 

campus, there is no access to digital libraries (digital-library). 

The 6th statement, “Having technical problems on devices such as 

laptops/computers when working on and completing thesis”. There are 30 

students (75 %) who state “Yes” and 10 students (25 %) states “No”. It shows 

that 75 % of students have technical problems on devices such as 

laptops/computers when working on and completing a thesis. The 7th statement, 

“Having a cost or financial problems during the process of working on and 

completing the thesis”. There are 25 students (65.5 %) who state “Yes” and 15 

students (37.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 62.5 % of students have  cost or 

financial problems during the process of working on and completing the thesis. 

The 8th statement, “Having personal problems during the process of working on 

and completing the thesis”. There are 27 students (67.5 %) who state “Yes” and 

13 students (32.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 67.5 % of students have personal 

problems during the process of working on and completing the thesis. The 9th 

statement, “The surrounding environment is not / less conducive when working 

on and completing the thesis”. There are 21 students (52.5 %) who state “Yes” 

and 19 students (47.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 52.5 % of students state that 

their surrounding environment is not/less conducive when working on and 

completing the thesis surrounding environment is not/less conducive when 

working on and completing the thesis. 

The 10th statement, “Having a part-time job while working on and 

completing the thesis”. There are 13 students (32.5 %) who state “Yes” and 27 

students (67.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 67.5 % of students do have  a part-

time job while working on and completing the thesis. The 11th statement, 

“Having a busy life with hobbies or personal pleasures”. There are 15 students 

(37.5 %) who state “Yes” and 25 students (62.5 %) states “No”. It shows that 

62.5 % of students do have a busy life with hobbies or personal pleasures. The 

12th statement, “Having a busy life in organizations both on and off-campus”. 

There are 6 students (15 %) who state “Yes” and 34 students (85 %) states “No”. 

It shows that 85 % of students do have a busy life in organizations both on and 

off-campus. 

 

Discussion 

A thesis is a final project for students to get a bachelor's degree in their 

studies. Every student at various universities or higher institutions must do this 

thesis according to the topic of their respective scientific fields. Well, for students 

who are majoring in English, whether it's for literature or education, of course, the 

thesis taken must use English. Likewise, for students who work abroad, of course, 

they must write a thesis in English. Of course, it is recognized that compiling a 

thesis using English is not easy, especially if it is difficult to do the thesis itself 

even though it is in Indonesian. After conducting a study that included the 

distribution of questionnaires, the researcher discovered that there are several 

factors both internal and external that contribute to students' difficulties in writing 

and completing their thesis. 

In this research, are several internal factors of EFL students’ difficulties in 

writing and finishing a thesis. They are: 1) 77.5 % of students have difficulty in 



 

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choosing their title of thesis majoring in English. 2) 72.5 % of students feel are 

not sure (pessimistic) about the title of the thesis research that has been taken. 3) 

90 % of students feeling bored/saturated while working on and completing the 

thesis. 4) 90 % of students feel doubtful/pessimistic about their abilities when 

working on and completing a thesis. 5) 92.5 % of students feel fears or worries 

during the proposal seminar exam or thesis examination later. 6) 77.5 % of 

students have a health problem or are down while working on and completing 

the thesis. 7) 85 % of students are supported by their parents or family in 

working on and completing the thesis. 8) 75 % of students are supported by 

peers/classmates or close friends in working on and completing the thesis. 9) 

57.5 % of students do not understand the systematics of writing the thesis well 

according to the guidebook. 10) 82.5 % of students tend to write sentences or 

paragraphs in Indonesian first and then translate into English with a translation 

application when working on a thesis. 11) 92.5 % of students have difficulty in 

writing sentences or paragraphs according to English grammar correctly. 12) 

82.5 % of students have difficulty choosing the right vocabulary or spelling in 

writing an English thesis correctly. 13)  67.5 % of students have difficulty using 

punctuation in writing the thesis correctly. Related to the students’ difficulty in 

writing and completing a thesis, there are also difficult parts in the thesis faced 

by students. There are 20 students (50 %) who choose “Chapter 1” and 20 

students (50 %) who choose “Chapter 3”, 19 students (47.5 %) who choose 

“Chapter 2”, 24 students (60 %) who choose “Chapter 4”, 8 students (20 %) who 

choose “Chapter 5”, and 5 students (12.5 %) who choose 

“References/Bibliography”. It shows that the most difficult parts are in chapter 4 

then followed by Chapter 1 and Chapter 3. While the last difficult parts are in 

Conclusion and “Reference/Bibliography”. 

There are also several external factors of students’ difficulties in writing and 

finishing a thesis. They are: 1) 67.5 % of students have communication problems 

with supervisors, for example, lecturers are difficult to contact, lecturers reply to 

old messages for a long time, or do not reply to messages. 2) 55 % of students 

have problems with supervising lecturers, for example, lecturers' 

writings/scribbles on thesis sheets cannot be read clearly, as well as 

writings/scribbles that cannot or cannot be understood.  3) 82.5 % of students 

have difficulty in finding references related to thesis titles taken on the internet, 

for example, similar research/thesis, books, or related research journals.  4) 75 % 

of students that in their campus, there are no complete reference sources, either 

books or research journals, or scientific works (final project or thesis). 5) 57.5 % 

of students that in their campus, there is no access to digital libraries (digital-

library). 6) 75 % of students have technical problems on devices such as 

laptops/computers when working on and completing a thesis.  7) 62.5 % of 

students have cost or financial problems during the process of working on and 

completing the thesis. 8) 67.5 % of students have personal problems during the 

process of working on and completing the thesis. 9) 52.5 % of students state that 

their surrounding environment is not/less conducive when working on and 

completing the thesis surrounding environment is not/less conducive when 

working on and completing the thesis. 10) 67.5 % of students state that have a 

part-time job does not influence them in working on and completing the thesis. 

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pleasures does not influence them in working on and completing the thesis. 12) 

85 % of students state that having a busy life in organizations both on and off-

campus does not influence them in working on and completing the thesis. 

Writing an English thesis has become a task that must be done in the course 

of study for students who take majors related to the English language, both 

literature, and education. Writing a thesis in English will certainly be more 

difficult when compared to a thesis written in Indonesian. The process of 

conveying ideas into English sentences requires good and correct grammar skills. 

The revision process also takes longer because errors can occur not only in the 

content of the thesis (methods, instruments, etc.) but also in terms of grammar 

(grammar/tenses). 

Regarding writing an English thesis, several things might be noticed by 

students during the writing and completing a thesis, including opening a 

dictionary and grammar book. The dictionary is the most important element in 

compiling an English thesis, especially for students who use Indonesian languages 

in daily life. Besides, no matter how much vocabulary students have, the 

dictionary must still be available at their hand. This is most likely certain 

sentences have a word structure that is too complicated or there are certain words 

that students do not know the meaning of it. Students also are strongly 

discouraged from using pocket dictionaries because practical and lightweight 

dictionaries only serve to help us in doing thesis while we are on the move, while 

major dictionaries such as Longman or Cambridge are still a must-have. To 

launch our final project or thesis, students can have a complete grammar book to 

help them determine the right grammar for our English thesis later. 

Literature sources that come from English books are also very important to 

have to make it easier for students to find the main idea. Everything needs a 

struggle, maybe on campus, students already have a complete library to support 

their success in compiling an English thesis. However, if it is not enough or still 

not enough, but students can also visit another campus. In addition, in choosing 

book literature, students must be careful because not all English books are 

following the theme of their thesis. So, before deciding to choose a book for 

writing an English thesis, students should know the direction of their thesis in 

outline to make it easier for them to find suitable book sources. After all the tools 

students have, such as books and dictionaries, all students have to do is write 

down the important points in the book that they feel are in line with the thesis 

topic they will discuss. In noting important points in compiling an English thesis, 

it takes precision and accuracy about which book contents are appropriate and not 

following the theme of their scientific work. So that, the important points students 

take are right, they must master the flow of thought from the author of the books. 

After writing and compiling an English thesis up to several pages, students should 

edit it first before going to consult with their supervisors. Students can avoid 

writing while editing because it will be ineffective and take up a lot of their time. 

The editing process that is done after finishing writing a few pages makes the 

editing process shorter and more effective because they do not have to flip 

through sentences every time we finish writing. What students need to do during 

the editing process is to edit the content starting from writing the correct words. 

Students’ sharpness in thinking by paying attention to the quotations with the 

descriptions they make, the suitability of the content, and the systematic and 



 

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appropriate relationship of meaning between sentences. After that, students can 

proceed to English grammar. In editing this grammar, students must have 

sufficient knowledge of grammar in English and have good grammar books.  

In the process of compiling an English thesis, it is not uncommon to feel 

lazy or boring with writing activities, looking for books, lecturers who are 

difficult to find, demands from lecturers who are too detailed even though they are 

best for you, difficulties in finding books sources, etc. Students do not leave 

worship, always try to pray and be patient to find their best way to graduate 

college later. No matter how good students are in compiling an English thesis, if it 

is not balanced with a good understanding, it will make them have difficulty in 

presenting the proposal seminar and thesis examination later. Even the examining 

lecturers may suspect that the thesis is not their works. Whether it is the result of 

plagiarism or presenting someone else's thesis. A good understanding of the thesis 

that students have compiled is the key to their success through this trial 

procession. Apart from being supported by a quality thesis, understanding content, 

etc., students also need non-technical factors to strengthen their health, stamina, 

eliminate nervousness to make them successful later. This may seem simple but 

has the potential to make them pass the examination well, such as not forgetting to 

eat before the trial, preparing mentally by praying, and support from family and 

friends. All aspects support students’ success in compiling an English thesis. 

 

Conclusion  

Writing an English thesis has become a task that must be done in the course 

of study for students who take majors related to the English language, both 

education, and literature. Writing a thesis in English will certainly be more 

difficult when compared to a thesis written in Indonesian. There are several 

internal factors of EFL students’ difficulties in writing and finishing a thesis. In 

internal factors are difficulty in choosing the title of the thesis, feel are not sure 

(pessimistic), bored/saturated, doubtful/pessimistic, fears or worries, having a 

health problem or down while working on and completing the thesis. Other 

factors are students' ability in understanding the systematics of writing the 

thesis, tending to use translation tools, have difficulty in grammar, have 

difficulty choosing the right vocabulary, spelling, and punctuation in writing the 

thesis correctly. The most difficult parts are in chapter 4. While external factors 

are having communication problems with supervisors and supervisors’ writing, 

have difficulty in finding references related to thesis titles in the internet, there 

are no complete reference sources and no free access to digital libraries on 

campus, having technical problems on devices such as laptops/computer, have 

cost or financial problems, personal problems, surrounding environment is 

not/less conducive. While having a part-time job, have a busy life with hobbies 

or personal pleasures, and have a busy life in organizations both on and off-

campus. do not influence them in working on and completing the thesis. The 

preparation stage in writing a thesis using English is very important because, 

without careful preparation, students will have difficulty later. 

 

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