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PRISM (2022)  https://doi.org/10.24377/prism.ljmu.0402214  

 https://doi.org/10.24377/prism.ljmu.0402214      1 © 2022 PRISM, ISSN: 2514-5347 

 

‘Silence is the sentence’: adult learners’ experiences 
of a co-created curriculum constructed through free 

writing tasks 

Howard Scott1 Pete Bennett2  and Craig Hammond  

1 University of Wolverhampton, Faculty of Education, Wolverhampton, UK (Howard.Scott@wlv.ac.uk)    
2 University of Wolverhampton, Faculty of Education, Wolverhampton, UK (PeteB@wlv.ac.uk) 
3 Liverpool John Moores University, School of Education, Liverpool, UK (C.A.Hammond@ljmu.ac.uk)       

 

Received: 17/11/2021  

Accepted for publication: 20/04/2022  

Published: 04/10/2022  

Abstract  

This paper outlines the pedagogical approaches taken on a University Access course, teaching 
predominantly mature students on a 12-week ‘inclusion in education’ module. The methods 
aimed to validate and develop literacy and academic skills for students undertaking 
undergraduate courses. Practice on the programme of study, replicated over three years, is 
informed by transformative learning theories. We outline how our developing praxis situates 
students’ self-concepts in confronting past biographical experiences of education and 
empowers them to improved literacy and purpose. We further propose that such andragogical 
approaches to teaching and learning can potentially serve as a model for improved literacy 
practices in post-compulsory education in England – a curriculum and qualification regime in 
radical need of overhaul and replacement.  
 

Keywords: literacy; transformative andragogy; co-created curriculum; adult learning; agency  

 

1. Introduction 

Traditionally, literacy provision in England and 

Wales education is available through a limited set of 

routes that do not reflect well the literacy crises in the 

UK, that sees a reported 5 million functionally 

illiterate adults. As observed elsewhere (Scott, 2018; 

Hughes, 2018), English is a poor vehicle for literacy: 

’[t]he identity of English has been and is founded on 

premises and practices that are not viable … even 

though it may continue doggedly to make special 

claims for itself … English … works against the majority 

of its students’ (Peim 1994, 8). For younger students 

and particularly those ‘Not in Education, Employment 

or Training’ (NEET), Foundation Learning has been 

designed as an intervention for skills deficit focused 

largely on literacy and as an agenda of social inclusion 

(Smith and Wright, 2015); the type of literacy 

provision ‘designed to domesticate rather than 

liberate’ (Lavender & Tuckett 2020: 31).  

The UK literacy crisis threatens to get worse, even 

while successive Ministries scramble to emphasise 

traditional literacy and numeracy in school. At the 

expense of a rich, diverse curriculum (including Music 

and Arts), school pupils are in many cases directed to 

start the two-year Level 2 English GCSE courses a year 

earlier, thus investing heavily and arguably 

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unethically in an academic qualification to deliver 

improved levels of literacy alongside improved grade 

scores. The emphasis is entirely instrumentalist with 

employers needs shaping classroom provision, for 

instance with employers calling for more onus on ‘oral 

communication’ (Hall et al., 1999). It appears that 

teachers with subject specialisms in English are 

distrusted to teach and marginalised by others, such 

as curriculum designers and employer focus groups; 

as such ‘the object of activity is in satisfying the 

institutional and authoritarian outliers defining 

‘literacy’’ (Scott, 2018: 3). Literacy without creativity 

is banal and literacy that is taught in a functional and 

performative manner – to the test, to improve an 

institution’s scores, to help secure a job or one’s 

economic prosperity – is transactional, and lacks 

deeper integrity, as reported by the chair of HEPI: 

‘Creating art or appreciating artistic endeavour is 

seen as producing a nation with an enriched cultural 

and social life, and a possible route to personal 

fulfilment. But there is a flaw in the logic that says to 

count is to be economically productive, but to create 

is not.’ (Last 2017: 1).  

The GCSE is the supposed gold standard in literacy, 

though it is conflated with ‘English’ (as literature and 

language) and functions much more as an 

opportunity for assessment than a course of study. 

This is reinforced by the 2011 policy recommendation 

from Professor Alison Wolf’s review of Vocational 

Education that school-leavers entering the post-

compulsory FE and vocational sector are compelled to 

re-sit the English (and Maths) schools qualification if 

they have not secured a “decent” ‘C’ standard pass in 

school. The resits policy has not been effective – if 

success is determined by students meeting the 

required C (or ‘4’) grade at the second or third 

attempt, the policy can often be seen to compound 

existing failure (Hughes, 2018). In our experiences as 

FE teachers, 16 year old school leavers are 

demoralised and discouraged by the resit experience, 

with some FE students obliged to re-sit it until the age 

of 19 while undertaking demanding vocational 

courses.  

Where results are determined by the terminal 

assessment of a rigid written exam, claims to address 

the traditional components: speaking, listening, 

reading, and writing, largely consist of studying 

archaic English texts, with a fixation on the 

memorisation of classroom-based grammar. Such 

approaches have little cultural relevance to many 

students and, worse still, remain the single, prime 

option for adults returning to college, who are often 

surprised to discover that education has been in stasis 

since leaving school.  

One slight variation is the option of Functional 

Skills, a slightly more flexible post-compulsory Level 2 

equivalent, with varied entry points and assessments 

by exam and graded work. Functional Skills tends to 

be less regarded, has no formal parity to the GCSE and 

is often not recognised as accredited literacy for 

Higher Education access. This effectively creates a 

two-tiered system of literacy across the lines of 

vocational and academic routes (Duckworth and 

Smith, 2019) that has been said to denigrate the 

dignity of students (Scott, 2018). The impact of this 

extends beyond students:  situating literacy within 

such a narrow framework has a negative impact on 

teaching, and the recruitment and retention of newly 

qualified teaching staff; often, they find little agency 

to teach the subject with enthusiasm and passion, as 

it is stultified by curriculum constraints. The message 

that achievement in ‘English’ is framed on either 

‘success’ or ‘failure’ leads us to draw the conclusion 

that improper policy and the poorly imagined design 

of literacy for schools is, for too many students, 

disenfranchising. 

Wolf’s recommendations that led to the resit policy 

intended, rightly, to arrest a perceived decline in 

literacy standards; though the language of incline and 

decline keeps us shackled to the literacy ladder that 

Lynn Tett (2013) problematised. Therefore, it would 

appear that the teaching of ‘English’ as a disciplinary 

subject in schools is an ineffective vehicle for driving 

up literacy standards; furthermore, the GCSE 

framework is an ill-fitting system, especially within FE 

where students expect a different experience to that 

of school – which was often disciplinarian and 

negative (Anderson and Peart, 2015; Smith and 

Wright, 2015).  

It is against this ‘literacy landscape’ that we, as 

teaching staff at a widening participation University 

situated in the Midlands, lead our module for adult 

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to validate students’ capacities for intellectual 

development at the beginning, not at the end, of their 

academic careers’ in order to ensure that they feel 

worthy and valued (Rendón, 1992: 63), underscores 

the ethos of our short course. As Lavender and 

Tuckett also state, traditionally, ‘[d]ifficulties with 

literacy [are] seen as a feature of personal aptitude’ 

(2020: 33). We recognise that our students are 

inquisitive, enthusiastic, and eager to learn and 

perceive any deficit as being about confidence. What 

they tend to share across the teaching the course is 

analogous with many others returning to classrooms 

as mature students: a sense of being alienated from 

educational environments; and a desire to reclaim 

their dignity in and through learning. Understanding 

this, alongside Freire’s perspective of liberation as 

‘transforming actions’ and his concept of 

‘conscientization’, gives us a sound basis for method.  

‘Conscientization’ is cited as similar to agency – being 

able to act upon the world and reality and to 

transform one’s life. This – we feel – contextualises 

and orientates the educational philosophy of the 

course and our approach to teaching.    

2. Pedagogical approach to Access to HE 

The students involved in this course participate in 

a preliminary 12-week ‘inclusive education’ module 

prior to their involvement on an undergraduate 

course. The ‘inclusive education’ module runs once a 

week for 3 hours, with an hour in the afternoon 

following a morning session. Numbers are high and 

increase year on year; its first iteration in 2018, was 

attended by 35 students, and this increased in 2021-

2022 to 80. The pedagogical approach – now in its 

fourth year of implementation – has remained the 

same in focus and manner, and is outlined below.  

We start from the perspective that the outcomes 

(‘learning objectives’) of the course are not significant 

and this emancipates teachers and students alike. 

There are formal outcomes, which are outlined below 

– learners will: 

• Demonstrate an understanding of current 

debates in the field of inclusive education and 

practice 

• Relate concepts and theories of inclusion to 

current educational practice 

• Reflect on your understanding of inclusion 

and educational practice effectively in a given 

format 

Importantly, we avoid being bound by these 

outcomes; the module description reinforces this by 

inviting students to explore their own beliefs and 

values towards meaningful lifelong learning. We also 

underpin the course by a set of implied and 

aspirational objectives: we want to celebrate “who” 

the students are (rather than who they are “not”), 

and what the students have to offer as opposed to 

what they may lack. We prefer students to view 

learning as a series of encounters and episodes, 

rather than a set of targets measured by assessment. 

Holistically, we aim to create a community of writers 

and a formal sense of belonging within HE to equip 

adult students with the potential to re-evaluate their 

educational biographies. We also carry some 

assumptions: 

a) Our students arrive with rich life 

experiences, but perspectives of 

education that may not be generally 

positive. 

b) Some of the negative experiences they 

have encountered are due to their not 

being recognised for who they are. Their 

accents, backgrounds, contributions are 

unvalued, discredited and ignored and 

they feel peripheral to inclusion. 

c) Their expectations of education can be 

diminished from the beginning.  

d) As mature students, they may be 

intimidated by formal education, 

teachers, classrooms and particularly 

the writing process.  

e) They need to feel that they belong.  

Our aims are to eliminate their apprehensions by 

enculturating confidence and participation, to 

denounce the fetishisation of grading written work, 

while creating a scaffolded support mechanism 

through free writing that confronts and celebrates 

whomsoever our students are becoming. We manage 

this through the teaching of content – general social, 

psychological, and educational theory – in order that 

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The course comprises two main teachers, with 

Graduate Teaching Assistants supporting, who also 

lead on sessions. We make a rough plan of what to 

cover as content, which has tended to be based on 

educational theorists who might be classed as ‘critical 

pedagogues’, including Ivan Illich, though the course 

has also extended to academics, cultural figures and 

commentators from Gilles Deleuze, Basil Bernstein, 

Albert Bandura, Ken Robinson, and bell hooks.  

As we sought to set a context for thinking and a 

basis for writing, most of these theorists were, 

initially, introduced to give the programme a working 

structure; conceptual links were established 

iteratively and collaboratively from week to week. 

However, as  we continued to develop the 

programme, by the second year of delivery we started 

to see the content as largely superfluous; and by the 

third year, we started to use the authors and theorists 

to give shape to a deterritorialisation of ‘inclusivity’. 

By “drawing in” the students themselves, we started 

to locate biographic reference points that spoke more 

closely to them. As a culturally diverse group, the 

incorporation of bell hooks, W. E. B. Du Bois, and 

more local theorists, academics, and cultural figures 

such as Professor Stuart Hall, Gary Thomas, Rob 

Smith, Kris Kristofferson, Morrissey, Jim Showell, Liz 

Berry, etc.  

As a result, each session now tends to be delivered 

through the following routine: two hours of content, 

followed by a one-hour lunchbreak, and then a final 

hour dedicated to a free-writing reflection activity. 

The final part is explained as voluntary, an 

opportunity to synthesise the day’s content and 

discussions, a space to enable students to process the 

day’s content. However, rather than encourage the 

students to integrate the cascaded knowledge, we 

invite them to negotiate meaning-making, by drawing 

on and incorporating their own ‘previous 

experiences’. As this is a free-writing exercise, we set 

no expectations or demands for them to explain or 

demonstrate a technical understanding of concepts 

or theories; but rather, to reflect on an – indeed any 

– aspect of the material that has chimed with them, 

and to write about this in an honest and personalised 

way. The main thing, we stress, is to write freely, as 

part of a low-stakes approach, freed from the 

traditional academic concerns of theoretical content, 

grammar, and other bases for judging and grading 

written work. We aim to inculcate a sense of dialogue 

and support with each student; so, when we return 

the work to the students, we offer only positive 

feedback and praise, along with the building of 

further questions (and memos).  

3. Research design & ethics 

As part of this section, we include samples 

extracted from the students writings – both as 

primary data, to address and include the students’ 

sense of self, and becoming writers, and also to 

illustrate the academic content of the curriculum, and 

how this is complemented by personal meaning-

making through the free-writing exercises.  

Given the personal nature of the largely 

autobiographical material, we ensured ethical 

principles and processes were met. We explained to 

the students, on a weekly basis, that the free-writing 

exercise was fulfilling the following pedagogic 

purposes: to develop inclusion, confidence, and a 

sense of self as writer. We ensured that participating 

students were comfortable with us using the samples 

of their writing. As part of securing their consent, we 

explained that we wished to use aspects of their 

writing, to illustrate how the module is constructed, 

and how it operates as part of a paper for a formal 

journal submission. We approached all individuals 

whose writing contributions would be used in this 

paper retrospectively at the course end to gain 

consent for inclusion here. We ensured anonymity by 

randomly allocating pseudonyms, which were then 

applied to the sampled quotes, to mitigate against 

potential harm resulting from personal disclosures. 

There may be considered a question of plagiarism 

regarding the citation of the samples used, but we 

consider the extracts to be akin to vignettes to 

highlight the students (as research participants) views 

(Kara, 2015).  

Ethical approval was secured from the university, 

through an application to the ethics committee; as 

part of this, we explained our intention to use 

student’s personal writing extracts, as a way to 

highlight the construction, operation and outputs 

generated by our particular course.  We acknowledge 

that using student contributions for the purposes of 

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following Watson’s work (2011), we achieved 

consensus by sharing drafts of the paper with the 

students, and entering in dialogue with them, to 

ensure that their thoughts and views were accurately 

represented.     

4. Discussion 

Mezirow (1978) outlined how certain trigger 

events precipitate a challenge to existing mental 

models and schemata for meaning making. In learning 

contexts, these can be induced by the introduction of 

new information that initiates critical reflection. 

Mezirow labels these ‘disorientating dilemmas’ and 

suggests they can become the prompts for 

transformative experiences, where decisions, 

memories and responses are internalised into 

potentially new processes or ways of seeing, doing 

and being. These disorientating dilemmas have much 

in common with ‘threshold concepts’ (Meyer and 

Land, 2005), where a shift occurs in ontological 

position and changes in perspective accompany 

transition points in the learning journey. Meyer and 

Land argue that significant changes in perspective are 

probably irreversible; therefore, the traversing of 

threshold phases can be complex and emotional, but 

also empowering.1 Barriers can be interpersonal or 

intrapersonal and may be situational (circumstantial, 

e.g., domestic obligations for the student) or 

institutional (e.g., organisational practices around 

learning institutions, limited tutorial support, pastoral 

care, lack of facilities). We might also add that there 

may be cultural barriers, such as alienation from a 

curriculum that lacks significance or relevance; here, 

arguments relating to ‘decolonising the curriculum’, 

which signify the importance of providing not only a 

diverse curriculum, but also promoting culturally 

situated knowledge, can be important.   

Rancière, who remains a significant reference point 

throughout the module, might see the model of the 

threshold concept as a way of writing poiesis, i.e., an 

approach that brings something new into being that 

 
1 Meyer and Land note that, ‘there are ‘conceptual 
gateways’ or ‘portals’ that lead to a previously inaccessible, 
and initially perhaps ‘troublesome’, way of thinking about 
something. A new way of understanding, interpreting, or 
viewing something may thus emerge – a transformed 
internal view of subject matter, subject landscape, or even 

did not previously exist.  This, in turn, can produce a 

dissensus – the disruption of consensus – of the ‘the 

idea of the proper’, which traditionally surrounds and 

defines the academic work that students produce. 

Rancière sees this as a necessary method of equality 

in the face of ‘hierarchical distributions where 

everyone's speech is determined in terms of their 

proper place and their activity in terms of its proper 

function, without remainder’ (Corcoran in Rancière 

2010: 4). Our commitment then, as Rancière suggests, 

is to oblige our students to realize their capacity to 

create, as it were, ‘a circle of power homologous to 

the circle of powerlessness that ties the student to 

the explicator of the old method’ (Rancière 1991: 15).  

We are aware that we have the privilege of 

autonomy to teach the way that we wish, in 

conjunction with this, we have the luxury of fairly 

small groups, which supports an educational 

approach that sets out to confront barriers and 

obstacles in the negotiation of transformative 

threshold experiences. In this sense, Rancière could 

be describing our own students when he notes, ‘[t]he 

circle of powerlessness is always already there: it is 

the very workings of the social world’, and that the 

circle of power, ‘can only take effect by being made 

public’. He concludes that this can only appear as an 

absurdity, a response that we have also experienced 

from our own students, as a result of inviting them to 

write in this way. Initially, students are invariably non-

plussed, taken aback, even faintly amused. However, 

this is quickly overtaken by a sense of nervous 

purpose once it is clear that ‘discourses organized 

with the goal of being right’ have been disabled and a 

method of equality has been instituted in which group 

members ‘find the right sentences to make 

themselves understood by others.’ (Rancière 1991: 

44).  

Week by week, we start to ritualise the free-writing 

process, so that students become accustomed to its 

style and outputs. Students submit their work, but as 

we have stated, we only provide positive feedback in 

world view … they may be transformative (occasioning a 
significant shift in the perception of a subject), irreversible 
(unlikely to be forgotten, or unlearned only through 
considerable effort), and integrative (exposing the 
previously hidden interrelatedness of something).’ (2005: 
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order to create a dialogic exchange with our 

comments, questions, and ideas. Quotes from 

previous free-writing pieces tend to reappear and 

feature as part of subsequent writing sessions; as a 

form of co-created curriculum, this helps to weld or 

connect related theoretical content as part of the 

unfolding narrative thread.  

The writing and our feedback is not intended to 

incorporate or emplace the role of the teacher, and 

importantly, it is in no sense a form of graded 

assessment. Rather it constitutes a vital part of each 

session and fosters an ongoing sense of progress 

within and across the course, (reimagined as a 

collective of writers in transit). It demonstrates the 

value of all manner of things (e.g., thoughtfulness, 

ideas, communication, one another, the collective), 

and anchors pretty much everything else we do in 

relation to the thoughtful opinions of others – and 

this includes ourselves. It is a rare opportunity in life 

to be free to write, and to write freely, without 

judgment or cost (especially for students); as such, we 

are always surprised by the levels of passion and 

innovation that manifest, once the students are 

afforded the chance – and accept the invitation to – 

write creatively, with openness and honesty. It is so 

important to recall here, that our students often have 

memories of difficult formative experiences, in one 

typical instance, Chris disclosed: “I am someone who 

now knows I am someone who can do anything if I put 

my mind to it, regardless of what I have done in the 

past, work or education.” As such, we recognise that 

we host and convene a platform for transformation. 

We cherish this and note that the experience is 

enlivening and liberating for ourselves as teachers in 

the HE environment. Our students’ free writing 

expressions show how their confidence increases in 

preparation for study on a formal degree course: 

“Today I am happy. I am proud … I am breaking the 

mould.” (Jade) 

Most students write willingly and easily, some need 

prompts, which we keep light to start with, for 

example: ‘what did you learn today?’, which evokes 

stunning responses that confirm to us that ‘content’, 

while important, is only a trigger or platform for 

people to learn about their own self-efficacy:  

“Today I learnt I can be who I want to be. 

Today I evolved.” (Kemisha)  

Lianne shows how the writing gives this 

opportunity for self-actualisation and reification – a 

transformative sense of becoming, which is 

supported through a scaffolded language and by a 

collective commitment to making the curriculum.  The 

contributions of student voices alongside our own 

and those of other theorists are never forced.  The 

whole endeavour is an exercise in inclusion played out 

in real time and subject to the normal standards of 

scholarly interaction. The student community enacts 

the curriculum with trust, and this is more than repaid 

at every level, “Language growth is the real thing that 

improves communication” (Beth). 

The writing invites expression: it never asks, ‘Do 

you understand’, preferring ‘What have you got to say 

(for yourself)?’ It endeavours to situate writing as 

creation, answering Deleuze’s call for a ritualistic 

“resistance to the present”. The writing time, which 

comes with a guarantee of readers, creates a reliable 

weekly ritual, among other things a haven from what 

Barthes calls the “whole disorder” of speech and its 

devouring momentum.  As one of our students deftly 

put it: “What I write; this is me” (Chevelle). 

The ideas allow us to actively realise our ambitions 

for a pedagogy that escapes notions of mastery and 

embraces an equality which is method, not 

aspiration. Although this module is not a writing 

course, by creating opportunities for free-writing in a 

non-judgemental, inclusive environment we create 

an expressive space for writing that becomes routine 

and reduces anxieties around formal literacy. 

However, this is not principally about deficits of any 

kind and in a short time it is not about deficits at all.  

As work is produced and showcased, an energy for 

the possible is generated, akin to ‘the power you give 

yourself by assuming the other person can hear you’ 

(Rancière 2016: 71).  It is in this way, rather than 

through a focus on ‘training’ undergraduate skills, 

that we address the principle of providing a 

foundation for further study.  We are in the business 

of developing a community of writers who are firstly 

asked to step up as subjects of their own stories. This 

subjectivization as Rancière describes it, ‘firstly occurs 

in the sense of taking the floor and speaking’ and this 

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in the classroom and on the page, but this really is 

only the beginning. Through the convergence of 

student writings, the module content is borne proper, 

as a testing ground for new experiences and language 

emerges; in academic terms, this is a transition from 

mutism to speech. This is Rancière’s description, as he 

insists that this transition ‘is made using words that 

aren't yours, that already exist, the subversive act 

being the appropriation of those words.’  

This model of appropriation fits our experience 

exactly and reinforces our claim to have established 

this as a method for developing student writers.  We 

start explicitly to fuse a vocabulary and theory into 

the writing to work in line with the formal course 

objectives (i.e., prepare students for HE) but only on 

their own terms. Again, as Rancière explains ‘what 

counts is the appropriation of speech that allows you 

to tell your personal experience differently, to 

subjectify daily experience and phrase it in a language 

that is no longer the language of everyday life or of 

work’. Rancière indeed identifies several forms of 

appropriation, as we have, including the rhetorical 

speech associated with membership of an academic 

community and ‘poetic speech through which 

experience can be re-described’ (Rancière 2016: 71). 

After one session, a student returned to explain 

that she had left the morning session, gone to lunch 

and sat alone writing a poem on her mobile, which 

she wanted to share with us, (but was unsure whether 

it was suitable as a ‘formal’ piece of work). Composed 

in couplets, it beautifully captured the day’s 

discussions on the multiple roles and responsibilities 

that make inclusive education challenging: 

“This morning I woke up as a mother, 

And as the day progressed I turned into another” 

(Mursal) 

After getting Charlene’s permission to share this, 

we had further examples of writing submitted as 

poetry: 

“I am loud.  I am quiet.  I am outspoken.  I am free. 

When I write; this is me. What I write; this is me.” 

(Bria) 

These declarations strike us sometimes as 

suppressed expressions given vent for catharsis. At 

other moments, the writing, shown here through 

poetry, is a reclamation of personal voice, dialect and 

sociolect given performance in the educational 

environment.  Thus, through the appropriation of the 

borrowed language and structures of poetry comes a 

new appreciation of silence and sound:  

“Umma proud aunty da luv to sing, 

I play wit ma nieces n nephews out unda the tree. 

You see, wen we outside anything is possible 

We dance, we sing, we run, our imagination runs 

wild 

‘Sing for meh tantie’ day would say 

‘Ahyah lawd try go play’ wat else I mus say.” 

(Nikeva) 

The ritual of writing as a form of membership 

evokes a ‘Community of Equals’, (Rancière) – a 

company of the recognised, who are also 

emancipated by their own actions.  The parallels are 

striking as Rancière also predicates his model on a 

society who would ‘repudiate the division between 

those who know and those who don’t, between those 

who possess or don’t possess the property of 

intelligence’. It is also an active community who 

‘would only know minds in action: people who do, 

who speak about what they are doing, and who thus 

transform all their works into ways of demonstrating 

the humanity that is in them as in everyone’ (Rancière 

1991: 71). 

“I believe we need to be educated in society about 

life skills, different backgrounds and situations of 

others, learning how other people live.” (Greg). 

As stated earlier, our students’ experiences of 

formal education have often been problematic or 

disrupted – sometimes by domestic circumstances, 

learning difficulties, exclusion, or numerous other 

factors. We are confronted with a need to teach 

something (anything) to satisfy all demands, but we 

recognise that this is a particularly unique context 

where we have immense freedom to map the module 

as we see fit. Writing is critical to that, for as Boyd 

(2008) has pronounced ‘young people write 

themselves into being’. The question is whether this 

writing is to be acknowledged, encouraged, or even 

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nor allowed us to say our multiplicity. That would 

have been improper speech.’ (Irigaray 1992: 207). In 

this context we insist on their freedom to write as 

themselves without judgment and they all have much 

to say.  

As was also stated earlier, we teach theories 

apropos of inclusive education, but are insistent that 

content is less important than context, for instance 

how such theory is embodied into the lifeworld of 

students. An example is given of teaching Bernstein’s 

Restricted and Elaborate codes from linguistics; in the 

classroom, this theory was explained in its terms of its 

applicability to education, and the resulting 

conversations were encapsulated personally in the 

free writing exercise by Karielle: 

“Language has always been a barrier for me.  

Coming from a working class Black Country family, I 

have been raised with a limited and common 

vocabulary” (Karielle) 

And Isra shared an example of how idiolect is 

important for inclusion: 

“Each child has many ways of language, and this is 

what makes them so unique, an important 

individual.” (Isra) 

We explained in subsequent sessions how 

Bernstein’s ideas are considered quite dated and 

elitist today to show how theory evolves. This 

explanation drew the above quote from Isra’s free 

writing product to show how personal language is a 

hallmark of identity. After we had explored 

Bernstein’s theories we gave a simple prompt, ‘who 

are you today?’ which resulted in a beautiful 

evocation of our course in the words of a student that 

we feel really captures the essence of this course and 

its endeavours. 

“Who Am I today? 

Smile, yah beautiful people would say, 

Kind words comes out of my mouth 

I’ve grown and feel so empowered about myself 

Who to think da I go University rite now: ah just 

laugh at maself. 

I’m the rose that grew outta concrete.” 

circumstances. 

5. Conclusion 

As stated earlier, ‘free-writing’ as an expressive 

practice is lamentably absent from formal education 

as it is from other contexts in life. We posit that the 

tired, drab, and unimaginative landscape for literacy 

in post-compulsory education – one framed entirely 

around personal deficit models, instrumentalism, and 

the transaction of students development for 

vocational prospects demeans the affordances that 

personally arise from the practices we have outlined. 

One only needs to look at the final words from ‘Who 

am I today’ and considers how such eloquence and 

craft would be received on a formal GCSE course to 

see that the ‘English’ that is being delivered bears no 

resemblance to a living language. If that freedom is 

stifled, silence is the sentence – and that is not 

something we should entertain as a possibility or 

objective. The subjective must be emancipated.    

 

  



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