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Textbook readability and ESL learners

DANIEL KASULE  University of Botswana

Abstract: !is paper reports activities (as part of a university course in 

language teacher education on teaching reading) in which primary school 

student teachers (all ESL in-service teacher trainees) explored their own 

skills of determining textbook readability using an online so"ware tool 

and a cloze test completed by two hundred and seventy-eight Grade Seven 

primary school pupils.5 Findings from the online tool were that the text was 

di#cult. !e cloze test con$rmed this when it showed that only eighteen 

pupils could read the text unassisted while the rest were frustrated by it. 

!e paper uses these $ndings to describe the challenges pupils face and 

how readability research is bene$cial to the reading development of ESL 

learners if reading of academic texts is approached from the principles of 

the interactive view of reading; of cognitive learning theory; and of second 

language acquisition theory. It is concluded that teachers’ awareness of rea-

dability issues is helpful for e%ective reading instruction during the critical 

formative years of school. 

Introduction 

An early de$nition of readability by Dale and Chall (1949) included the con-
cept of interest, but since textbooks are not read because they are interesting, 
readability will be understood simply as the ease or di#culty with which the 
textbook may be understood. Very appropriate for this paper is the view of 
reading as an interactive process between the reader, the text, and the writer, 
captured by Prins and Ulijn (1998:141) where they de$ne readability as the 
ability of the text to communicate the intention of the writer to the intended 
reader. An important observation is that each chapter in a textbook o%ers 
particular challenges. For purposes of classroom teaching therefore, textbook 
readability implies assessing readability chapter by chapter.

As a language teacher educator I am concerned about my student teachers’ 
awareness of the readability of the textbooks which they $nd recommended 
for use in the classes they teach. I therefore set out to bring this awareness to 
them, recognising that in many under-resourced classrooms, the textbook 

5  In the context of primary schools in Swaziland, the term Grade refers to primary school levels for 

children, whose ages range from seven to fourteen years.

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commands an elevated role in teaching and learning because it may be the 
only teaching resource on which the teachers’ explanation is based. Besides the 
disadvantage of implanting an unquestioning view of the printed word in chil-
dren, the situation places a heavy responsibility on the quality of the textbook 
itself in meeting appropriate criteria regarding the learner’s age, educational 
and cultural background, and linguistic pro$ciency. Textbook writers need to 
be guided by such requirements. !erefore, the teachers’ ability to determine 
readability levels of the textbook is crucial for e%ective teaching and learning. 

Measuring readability 

Measuring readability is a complex a%air due to the many factors involved. 
Gray and Leary, cited in DuBay (2004:18) identify four factors a%ecting read-
ability, namely: content (including propositions, organisation, coherence), 
style (including semantic and syntactic elements), design (including typog-
raphy, format, and illustrations), and structure (including chapters, headings 
and navigation). Other research reported by DuBay (2004) showed that the 
best predictors of textual di#culty were two aspects of style, namely: seman-
tic content (e.g. of vocabulary) and syntactic structure (e.g. sentence length). 
Syntactic structure can be determined using readability formulas which are 
strictly text-based. !e view of reading as an interactive process implies the 
existence of text-based, reader-based, and author-based factors regarding 
readability. Not all these factors are quanti$able; for example factors related 
to communicating meaning such as legibility of print, clarity and relevance of 
illustrations, and conceptual di#culty are non-quanti$able. As well as these, 
there are factors related strictly to the reader, seven of which Bensoussan 
(1991: 216) identi$ed, namely: faulty top-down processing; faulty bottom-up 
processing; linguistic pro$ciency; lack of motivation; over-motivation; famil-
iarity with the topic; and misleading or unfocused questions. !ese cannot be 
measured by readability formulas. Instead, more time-consuming tests such as 
cloze tests and comprehension tests are used. !erefore, a combination of for-
mulas (to measure text-based and author-based factors) and tests (to measure 
reader-based factors) provides a more reliable assessment of the readability of 
a given textual item.

Teachers who are familiar with a topic can determine the suitability of written 
material for their pupils. However, Johnson (2000:2) claims that teachers usu-
ally under-estimate the di#culty of the text by up to 8 years and adds that the 
more familiar the subject teacher is with the topic, the less likely s/he probably 
is to see the problem from the pupils’ point of view. !erefore, it is recom-
mended that readability be objectively determined using formula and cloze 
tests (Agnihotri and Khanna 1992, Johnson 2000). It is estimated that there 

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are over two hundred formulas (DuBay 2004). !ese are free, online computer 
so"ware tools, activated by simply cut-and-paste techniques and they calculate 
various readability measurements, using formulas which go by di%erent names 
such as Coleman Liau index, Flesh Kincaid Grade Level, Automated Readabil-
ity Index (ARI), and SMOG (Anonymous 2007, a). !e calculations indicate 
the number of years of education that a person needs to have completed to 
be able to understand the text easily on the $rst reading. !ey also indicate 
sentences considered complicated due to the number of words and the syllables 
in them. !e estimated readability by age, called ‘reading age’, means a reader 
of that age could just cope with the text (Johnson 2000).

Cloze tests, on the other hand, are based on the theory that readers are able to 
$ll in the missing words as their reading skills improve. Cloze tests are becom-
ing the object of intensive research with over a thousand studies reported 
(DuBay, 2004:22). !e word cloze is derived from the word ‘closure’, a term 
associated with Gestalt psychologists, who maintain that human behaviour is 
motivated by the need for wholeness or completeness. Teachers do better to 
regard reading as a meaning-making activity, a principle on which cloze tests 
are grounded. Unfortunately, when meaning fails, reading becomes frustrating. 
From the theory of second language acquisition (SLA) we learn that indi-
viduals bene$t from input and interaction. During reading, individual readers 
interact with input in the form of print. Research on L2 oral skill development 
(Ellis 1984:86) shows that in classroom settings, SLA bene$ts both from input 
and teacher interaction. Ellis adds that it is the interaction itself that aids 
acquisition. Classroom reading that merely stops at recognising the printed 
words (input) leaves many classroom readers frustrated. !is teacher-student 
interaction provides what Krashen (1985: 2004) refers to as acquisition-rich, 
comprehensible input, which is slightly above the child’s present level of com-
petence; is interesting; is received in su#cient quantity from the text and the 
teacher; and is produced in a low anxiety environment. 

Krashen’s (1985) a%ective $lter hypothesis informs us that language learners 
block o% input if the atmosphere is $lled with anxiety, uncertainty, threats, and 
is not motivating. So Krashen’s a%ective $lter hypothesis cautions that it is not 
just the quantity of reading alone, but also how much of it is comprehensible 
(Krashen, 1985); or, according to Ellis (1986), how much of it is convertible 
into intake. Additionally, how o"en pupils are assigned texts to read may 
indicate very little in terms of their reading-skill development. For instance, 
are pupils interacting with new ideas and formulating questions (interactive 
processing), or are they merely responding automatically to what the text is 
throwing at them (bottom-up processing)? A balance of these two processes 
bene$ts their reading-skill development.

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Additionally, teachers are the most knowledgeable people about the norms of 
linguistic competences of the children they teach. !ese norms assist in assess-
ing the di#culties children would meet based on sentence analyses. Because 
the norms are known to them they form a psycholinguistic theory that informs 
the teacher about what the individual readers in the class can be expected to 
understand in a text. With this knowledge, planning to minimise the textual 
di#culties is possible. 

!e study context

One contextual problem is that many developing countries are facing an ever-
increasing school population. In Swaziland, where this study was conducted, 
there is a noble goal to “increase access to the lower levels of the education sys-
tem by making basic education free and compulsory” (UNDP and Swaziland 
Human Development Forum, 2001:108). According to the Central Statistics 
O#ce (2005), there are 555 primary schools with an enrolment of 22,1956 
pupils (up from 21,8352 in 2004). !e same source also puts the teacher-pupil 
ratio at 1:33 at primary school. It is however common to $nd classes with ratios 
much higher than this $gure. Working in crowded classrooms casts doubt on 
the e%ectiveness of reading instruction. In an environment where textbooks 
are centrally chosen on a one-suits-all basis, the textbook becomes a potential 
source of reading problems for particular children. Needless to say, the text-
book may not be available in su#cient numbers for every child to have a copy 
and/or may be too old and overused between several generations of users, 
rendering its physical state uninspiring.

!ere is therefore a need to explore ways of developing e%ective reader-author-
text interaction in the classroom. However, working with academic texts that 
are written in a language in which one is not competent, as is the case in ESL 
classrooms, is not easy. Nor can young readers readily make easy use of their 
home languages as resources for understanding and arguing, because these 
languages are not used in school, and are thus not developed for use in aca-
demic discourse. So students cannot turn to these languages as support for 
their processing of concepts conveyed in the unfamiliar language of the text 
book. And the teachers’ explanation, which is based on information derived 
from the textbook, is conveyed in the same unfamiliar language that they are 
struggling with. Under these circumstances, disentangling the nature of read-
ing problems for the purposes of reading instruction can be a complex task. 
Studies that are grounded in the interactive view of reading (Greene 2001, 
Prins and Ulijn 1998, Dean et. al 2006, Cutting and Scarborough 2006, Ben-
soussan 1998, Singhal 1998) indicate that in addition to learner-based factors 
(such as the learners’ linguistic pro$ciency), problems also arise from the text 

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itself. For example, Deane et al (2006) reviewed several studies that showed 
that across school levels, texts shi" from being primarily narrative to being 
expository in nature and use increasingly sophisticated vocabulary, and more 
complex syntactic patterns. !erefore, in addition to learner-based factors, 
understanding text-level di#culties can help predict the chances of success-
ful interaction between reader, writer and text. With regard to textbooks, 
children’s linguistic pro$ciency may either refer to the ordinary language 
contained in the text which the children have not yet fully mastered; or to the 
technical language used across the entire textbook which changes from one 
topic to another; or to both of these. 

All the above insights were helpful in combining the use of online so"ware 
tools and the cloze test so as to allow a cognitive assessment of the readers, 
their application of interactive text processing, and their knowledge of English 
sentence structure for purposes of reading a text that they were encountering 
for the $rst time. It was hoped that in this way the studen teachers would see 
the problem from the learners’ point of view.

!e study design

Seven student teachers undertook the study in two steps: Step one involved 
the use of online so"ware computer tools to assess the readability of a retyped 
version of a text extracted from the chapter ‘Weather and Climate’ in Science 
Grade Seven Pupils’ Book, Primary Course for Swaziland. Step two involved 
the student teachers using the same text as in step one to conduct a cloze test 
on pupils at a school of their choice during the university’s mid-term break. 
For step one, the retyped version of the selected passage of 246 words was cut-
and-pasted on-line as instructed on the website http://www.online-utility.org/
English/readability, and processed by the so"ware to give readability scores 
in terms of di#cult level; the number of years of education needed for one to 
understand it easily on the $rst reading; and the sentences judged to be com-
plicated and requiring improvement.

For step two, to test whether the pupils had the ability to make sense of the 
text without resorting to recall, the student teachers developed a cloze test 
following ideas from Burns et al (1988) and Taylor cited in DuBay (2004: 27). 
!e test was prepared as follows: the $rst sentence was le" intact but therea"er, 
every $"h word was deleted. !e study was conducted during February. At this 
time of the year, Grade Seven classes would not yet have covered the selected 
chapter - the test would have been invalid if they had as their answers might 
be based on recall rather than on a $rst reading. Pre-testing at nearby schools 

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indicated that pupils would need more than an hour to complete the test. !e 
pre-test also gave an idea of the kinds of answers to expect. 

During pre-testing, one problem reported by the student teachers was that 
pupils felt very threatened, $rst by the test itself, and secondly by the pres-
ence of the stranger in their classroom. To minimise this e%ect (a) the regular 
teacher administered the test in the absence of the student teachers, and (b) 
the pupils were told that any answer was right as long as it made sense.

Each of the seven student teachers administered the test at one Grade Seven 
class at a school of their choice. !e result of this random choice was one 
urban, and six rural schools were used. Altogether, 278 pupils wrote the cloze 
test.

Pupils were directed to $ll in the missing word. Pupils were not told the source 
of the text nor were they told that only the same word that the author had used 
would be marked as correct. Individual pupil performance was then graded 
as a percentage. !e lower the score, the more di#cult the text was for that 
individual. Based on performance in the test, readability of the text for each 
pupil was then given as being at one of three levels (DuBay 2004:27):

50-60%   = independent (unassisted reading) level

35-50%   = instructional (assisted reading) level, and

Below 35% = frustration level

Expectations

Our initial expectation was that the cloze test would get the children to engage 
individually and directly with the author’s language, without any interac-
tion with anyone else, such as with each other or with their teacher. Because 
textbooks may not suit all readers alike, we expected that di%erences in per-
formance on the cloze test would result from this factor. Our other expectation 
was that the reading of textbooks was a problematic activity for many children 
(Burns et al 1988, Johnson 2000). Grade Seven is a particularly signi$cant 
period in the life of school-going children in Swaziland: it is preparation for 
entry to secondary school where harder texts await. It is also at these higher 
Grade levels that teachers more o"en assign students to read texts on their 
own. Texts at these levels more frequently use technical and specialised vocab-
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be more pronounced in non-urban primary schools since performance in 
national examinations o"en portrays urban schools as being advantaged. 

Findings and discussion

!e Flesch Reading Ease (Flesch RE) online so"ware tool uses an index of zero 
to a hundred. !e closer the score is to a hundred, the easier the content; the 
closer the score to zero, the more di#cult. !e report for the text gave a Flesch 
RE index of 65.76. According to the Flesch Reading Ease Table, at 65.76 the 
text is standard, has an average sentence length of seventeen words and con-
tains 147 syllables per 100 words, and is suited to readers who have completed 
the seventh or eighth Grade, based on US standards (Anonymous 2007, b). 
!is $nding shows that the text is slightly above the level it is intended for use 
in Swaziland. We thought that this might not necessarily be a bad thing as it 
o%ered a slight challenge to the targeted readers.

!e number of years of formal education that were required so as to under-
stand the text on $rst reading varied according to the formula: 9.89 on the 
Gunning Fog Index; 9.35 on Coleman Liau Index; 7.30 on the Flesh Kincaid 
Grade level; 7.00 on the ARI; and 10.11 on the SMOG index. Again, which-
ever index was used, the text was predicted to be challenging at the Grade 
Seven level in Swaziland schools, for which it was intended. Both $ndings 
can serve to challenge common assumptions among teachers that a textbook 
recommended for use by the Ministry of Education automatically matches 
the abilities of the children in the classroom and therefore requires no guided 
instruction. 

At Grade seven pupils should begin to appreciate that muddle is more likely in 
a long sentence than in a short one no matter whether one is reading or writ-
ing it. Most writing instructors recommend $"een to twenty (15 – 20) words 
per sentence for this level of readers. !e so"ware tool reported an average 
of seventeen (17) words per sentence according to the Flesch Reading Ease 
Table (Anonymous 2007, b). !is text is therefore within the recommended 
sentence length.

Our subjecting this text to analysis by the online tool might appear ill-con-
ceived as the tool was intended for use in a completely di%erent context. 
However, since the analysis involved purely mathematical calculations of 
sentence length, syllables per sentence and number of sentences in the text, it 
is justi$ed. !e tool analysed syntactical features that have been con$rmed in 
several studies (DuBay 2004, Deane et al. 2006, Bensoussan 1998, Prins and 
Ulijn 1998, Greene 2001) as factors in readability. 

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!e tool also listed the following $ve sentences which it suggested needed 
rewriting in order to improve readability of the text: 

Coastal regions near oceans and large lakes may have di%erent cli-
mates than other regions at the same latitude and altitude. 

LATITUDE: Regions at low latitudes near the equator have hot cli-
mates because the sun’s rays shine more directly there. 

It can be freezing, with snow at the top of a high mountain, even on 
a mountain located in a hot part of the earth. 

However, the average weather over a large region is usually quite 
similar from year to year. 

Swaziland residents are familiar with weather and climate di%erences 
at di%erent altitudes. 

!ese $ve were among the longest sentences in the text. !ey also contain 
several words with more than two syllables. !e $ve were therefore assumed 
to cause di#culty. For purposes of classroom teaching, this $nding implies 
that teachers would do better to regard sentence length and word length in a 
text as potential causes of di#culty. (Harrison cited in Agnihotri and Khanna 
(1992:284) informs us that the longer a word is, the more likely it is to be rare.)

Table One, below, reports, class by class, on the performance of the 278 Grade 
Seven pupils on the cloze test. It is notable that class sizes were above the norm 
of 1:33 given by Swaziland’s Central Statistics O#ce (2005). As O’Sullivan 
(2006) observed, overall teacher-pupil ratios are not an accurate re*ection of 
actual class-size as they are obtained by dividing the number of teachers in a 
school by the number of pupils, without considering the common practice of 
subject teaching, for example. Unlike class teaching, subject teaching, which 
is common in upper primary and secondary school, increases the number of 
teachers in a school thereby making the teacher-pupil ratio appear lower than 
it actually is in certain subject speci$c classes. As noted earlier, a large class 
impacts negatively on the e%ective teaching of reading.

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Table 1: Number of children by category of readability

Level Class 

A 

N = 47

Class  

B 

N = 52

Class  

C 

N = 20

Class  

D 

N = 31

Class 

E 

N = 46

Class 

F 

N = 47

Class 

G 

N= 35

Independent 
(Unassisted 
reading)

18 0 1 0 0 0 0

Instructional 
(Assisted 
reading)

3 2 0 0 0 0 0

Frustration 26 50 19 31 46 47 35

In Class A, the only urban sample, eighteen children in this class could read 
the text unassisted, three could use it when assisted, and twenty-six would be 
frustrated by it. Although this does not give a normal curve, it ful$lled our 
expectation that a recommended textbook suits individual children in a class 
di%erently. Results for the other six samples from far-*ung places (classes B, 
C, D, E, F, and G) consistently show the entire class reading the text at frustra-
tion level. !is $nding underscores the need for classroom teachers to accept 
that readability is an issue. !e right response is not to reject the particular 
textbook but, rather, to approach the teaching of reading more systematically, 
as we shall show later, a"er identifying the challenges the children faced in 
the cloze test. 

Answers supplied by the children to the forty-seven gaps in the cloze test 
were analysed for patterns emerging. !e patterns found to be prevalent are 
summed up and discussed below.

Disregard for text structure, semantic and syntactic clues, and misuse 
of collocation 

!e text comprised $ve short paragraphs under the heading ‘Weather and 
Climate’. !e two opening paragraphs introduced the topic. !e last three para-
graphs followed the sub-headings ‘Altitude’, ‘Latitude’, and ‘Bodies of Water’, 
respectively. !e authors had intended, no doubt, that the subtitles should 
serve as lead-ins to paragraph topics and hence to serve as an aid to readers’ 
comprehension. For purposes of our study, we therefore expected the sub-
headings to provide clear clues to the missing word. However, as the results 
show, this did not prove to be the case. 

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We also expected that semantic and syntactic clues implied by the context 
would enable gap-$lling. However, our analysis of the quality of answers pro-
vided by children in the cloze test indicated a complete disregard for syntactic 
and semantic clues. !e randomly selected sample answer below is representa-
tive of this kind of problem:

Regions at low (33) is near the equator have (34) di"erent climates 
because the sun’s (35) became shine more directly there. (36) Big 
Bend polar regions the sun (37) and low in the sky, (38) 12.00 at 
noon in the (39) evening time. Such regions have (40) hot tempera-
tures most of the (41) highveld.

!is child refers to ‘Big Bend’ which is a name of a town in Swaziland, and to 
‘highveld’ which is a geographical region in Swaziland. !e child (and there 
were many others) is using the geographical context of Swaziland alone and is 
refusing to abandon it, even when the paragraph, in its reference to ‘the equa-
tor’ and the ‘polar regions’, clearly demands a global context. Ignoring those 
semantic clues creates the problems. !e child is not guided by signposts of 
sentence structure, such as when one has the ‘the sun’s (something)’, the child 
supplies a verb. Readability issues at the semantic and syntactic levels relate to a 
reader’s ability/inability to use the signposts e%ectively to negotiate possibilities 
and thus aid comprehension. When this fails, the text is read at frustration level 
as the results of this study show. Pointing out these features of the text could 
reduce the frustration arising from miscomprehension. Deane et al (2006:260) 
rightly observed that the reading process involves combining “information 
from successive sentences to understand the global communication of the text”. 

Di#culties arising from text miscomprehension may also be attributed to 
vocabulary in the text. !e following technical vocabulary contributed to the 
di#culty: altitude, latitude, weather, climate, bodies of water, and polar regions. 
Because children would be required to master and recall these words as part 
of the content of the chapter, classroom activities would undoubtedly be more 
rigorous with more time on the task for this to happen than by glancing over 
them in their textbook. We also expected certain ordinary words in the text 
to have contributed to the di#culty for a Grade Seven pupil such as: factors, 
determines, residents, and continually. 

As con$rmed earlier by the online tool, sentence length increased progres-
sively to give readers greatly expanded syntactic structures. With regard to the 
cloze test, such sentence expansion sometimes resulted in more blank spaces 
to $ll within a single sentence and so, collocation and awareness of sentence 
structure would be important clues in this regard. For ESL children, reading 
a text becomes di#cult because their familiarity with collocations in English 

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and the many variations in the structure of the English sentence is limited. In 
this study the answers provided by the children tended to indicate a formulaic, 
rather than an analytical, approach to English syntax; for example, when the 
subjects saw ‘latitude and _?? presence of ’ 33.5% (93 out of the total 278) of 
children immediately $lled the gap with ‘longitude’. Yet the correct answer was 
the simple word ‘the’. 

Equally confounding, ‘the sun’s rays shine’ arguably a familiar collocation, 
proved di#cult for the children to predict. Out of the total two hundred and 
seventy eight (278) answers, only twenty one (21) were correct (7.6 per cent of 
the total) largely from class A, the one urban school in the study. !e frequent 
answer of choice was ‘the sun’s is shine’; and in one class, all forty-seven (47) 
children settled for this answer. Rather a very odd choice of answer! Although 
possible alternative collocations (such as ‘the sun’s light’, ‘the sun’s position’, ‘the 
sun’s energy’ and ‘the sun’s heat’) were wrong in the context of this study, they 
were given by only twenty three (23) children out of a total two hundred and 
seventy eight (278). !is number is too small for us not to make the claim that 
children’s approach to English syntax is formulaic at times, and at other times 
unpredictable, but certainly not analytical. It appears the subjects were easily 
misled when they relied on a more familiar formulaic utterance, namely: ‘the 
sun is shining’ frequently used to describe the day’s weather and ignored the 
main clue in the text which is the apostrophe a"er the word ‘sun’.

!e nature of the challenges

!e challenges of the cloze test on the children were enormous, recalling that 
the cloze test was an unexpected one and on a topic that the children had not 
yet covered. As the results show, a large majority were not pro$cient read-
ers. And because pro$cient reading is not an event but a process, classroom 
instruction needs to plan it as a series of events that reinforce each other. Grabe 
(1992:50-3) o%ers the view that successful reading is composed of sub-skills. 
In our e%ort to understand reading-skill development we shall use Grabe’s 
six component sub-skills of reading as a framework to analyse and tabulate 
the demands. On the basis of these sub-skills, classroom instruction can be 
planned for reading many other academic texts.

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Table 2: !e demands on the children’s reading skills

Grabe’s reading sub-skill Demand from the cloze test

!e perceptual automatic 
recognition skill

Pro$ciency in bottom-up processing 
of printed words (Cutting and 
Scarborough 2006:278) relating to a 
topic which was new to the children.

Linguistic skills Pro$ciency in analysing the semantic 
and syntactic relationship between 
the words (Cutting and Scarborough 
2006:278) including the missing one.

Knowledge and skills of discourse 
structure and organization 

Pro$ciency in recognising the use 
of titles, subtitles, cohesive devices, 
linking isolated bits of information 
(Greene 2001:83) on local weather so 
as to understand the global concept 
‘climate’ 

Knowledge of the world Pro$ciency in top-down processing 
(Cutting and Scarborough 2006:278), 
without the teacher’s help, to bring 
meaning to the decoded words 

Synthetic and critical evaluation 
skills 

Pro$ciency in linking the content of 
the text to ‘science’ as shown in the 
primary school curriculum

Metalinguistic knowledge and 
skills

Pro$ciency in making inferences 
using contextual clues 

!e children in this study who were frustrated by the cloze test would have 
performed better had they developed pro$ciency in bottom-up and top-down 
processing (sub-skills 1 and 4). !is is possible if they develop linguistic ana-
lytical skills (sub-skill 2) so they can e%ectively use the semantic and syntactic 
clues available in order to understand local weather before they understand 
global climate (sub-skill 4). Finally, they need to be able to infer that places 
where the sun’s rays shine obliquely are cold (sub-skill 6) and so on.

!is did not happen because the children had not had a pre-reading activity 
that stimulated using these sub-skills. We can conclude that textbook reading 
demands active involvement of readers for it to be successful. !e demands 
listed in Table 2 above can form the objective of a classroom reading lesson 
of this text. For example, the teacher and the class identifying the function of 
the words in a long sentence taken from the text can respond to demands of 

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skill 2, 3, 4, and 6. !is makes teaching reading a skills-building activity that 
can be applied on a variety of texts they read in class.

Recommendations

It is not practically possible to conduct readability assessments for each chapter 
in a textbook before teaching it. Even the online so"ware tools require retyping 
or scanning the text before it can be cut-and-pasted on the webpage. However, 
the $ndings of this study imply that determining readability is bene$cial to 
teaching and learning, as the teacher gets a clearer view of learners’ di#culties 
with the text. Our recommendation therefore is that since classroom teachers 
are the best available assessors of any mismatch between the linguistic com-
petencies demanded by the text and the resources available to their learners, 
action research into the readability of school textbooks, particularly in science, 
would inform their decisions regarding the appropriateness and sequencing 
of textual content. Recognising this need means providing these teachers with 
skills with which to e#ciently determine textbook readability.

Conclusion

One of the limitations of this study was that it was too narrow in scope and 
focus, since the readability of a given textbook varies from one chapter to the 
next. We can therefore not generalise the $ndings. Secondly, tools are yet to be 
developed that speci$cally assess readability of texts intended for use in Eng-
lish as a Second Language (ESL) classrooms where learners’ linguistic norms 
are diverse. Such assessment would not merely be desirable for purposes of 
rejecting and accepting certain textbooks, but for sensitising teachers to the 
di#culties embedded in the text in use. It is hoped that the seven participant 
teachers in this study have been sensitized to the need to assess the readability 
of the textbook they are currently using and to view textbooks as sources of 
potential reading di#culties. 

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